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GothiX
09-27-2003, 09:49 AM
That's all there is to it, actually.. a map. A JA duel map, to be exact.

Screenie 1 (http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/12829.jpg)
Screenie 2 (http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/12847.jpg)

Comments? Questions? Suggestions?

GothiX
09-28-2003, 08:10 AM
Not that much replies yet..:(

But well, here (http://www.massassi.net/ec/images/12860.jpg) is a new screenie..

The Truthful Liar
09-29-2003, 10:22 PM
Nice, I like the gothic feel.

Gignatz
09-30-2003, 04:54 PM
Looks like you got some pretty interesting shadows. I like the lighting.

You could do with mounting your pics on a black background: the white background stops eyes from seeing dark stuff.

I think your brushwork looks competent enough (i like the look of the central column-spirally thing) but the lanterns and the gratework are too un-angular - everything is too straight and 90-degree. The brushes seem too regular-six-sided for me - maybe try tapering them and stuff. You could maybe make the lanterns more talon-like instead of nearly-regular-lantern-like (although i appreciate u r using the flame-light to nice effect only lighting up inside surfaces). Hope this is more constructive (it's meant to be) than negative.

Anyway...good stuff!

GothiX
09-30-2003, 05:57 PM
The white background is Massassi default, and for some better shots on another background, go to Blood_Asp's Editor's Corner on Massassi (http://www.massassi.net/ec/view.php3?user_id=5390&type=i&DateToView=09/29/2003). He took some great shots of it for me during beta.

And I'll certainly take your comments into consideration, in fact, I'm pleased to hear those things, I can actually improve upon it now.

But I must say, most of it is kept simplistic because, well, it doesn't need that much detailed brushes (to me), it's merely the mood I try to achieve with it. I will improve it though, don't worry.