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epikon
11-17-2003, 07:15 PM
My first Map for JA its a duel/power duel

http://www.boomspeed.com/0sid0/sithgarden.JPG


Download Link
http://www.edgefiles.com/files/10790.html

Go easy as its my first map :D

The Truthful Liar
11-17-2003, 07:21 PM
Looks good for a first map, although I'm having trouble seeing where a player could fight without being obstructed by so many models, especially in the center. The lanterns on fire seem redundant unless the maps environment was darker, who made the models? Some advice for your next map; if you end up with a boxed in area like this I suggest adding something to the surroundings to get that full egyptian feel, towers or pyramids outside/around the walls perhaps. Also, could you please resize your image?

Zappa_0
11-19-2003, 11:49 PM
It looks great, but as TTR said it needs to be darker. Think of a dead look, dark sky, dead trees, the shrines kinda rusted, ect. Anyway you did do a good job on the map.