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S1DC
10-03-2001, 11:47 PM
<font size=1>I have changed this first post in an attempt to see if anyone really pays any attention to these first few pages.</font>


Nope.
-Reddy

Redwing
10-04-2001, 03:19 AM
*The light Jedi Dan-Re Seyah exits the speeder taxi that has ferried him here. "Here" being an out-of-the-way, warring no-mans-land between two opposing villages. However he is not here tointerfere in the fight. He is here to fight...*

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At last we will reveal ourselves to the Jedi.
At last we will have revenge.

Jared
10-04-2001, 06:51 AM
Dark master Ogken Rahi'shi's TIE phantom decends to the planet, with only one thing in mind, Winning. He lands the fighter in a small clearing. He gets out, checks his gear, and begins walking towards the forest.

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Wraith 5
10-05-2001, 01:59 PM
*An old battered Z-95 Headhunter landed on a pad near the village in the west....*

*A young man steps out of the fighter.
He looks scarred. As if all his life, he was fighting against evil.*

*He was here to look for a couple of dark Jedi. The ones HE thought were responsible for the death of his parents. He also was looking for the Jedi Master Dan-Re Sevah. It is told he was going here to fight. He has an offer for him. he hopes he will take it.*

*He walks to a nearby bar and enters.........*

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S1DC
10-06-2001, 02:09 PM
The clash of primitive swords and outdated laser weaponry blazes accross the war-torn landscape below him. Men scream in agaony as they suffer and die, during a small scuffle off the edge of the main battle between two opposing allied teams. Krea smiles. With one swift movement he drops down into the fray and ignites his saber. A man screams as his arm falls off, and another has no chance to scream when his head is removed from his shoulders. Krea works swiftly, moving with lightning speed through the ranks of men, furious with anger for thier arogance and high with the pleasue of the kill. Only moments after he dropped into thier little world of terror, all the men are dead. Krea stand in the center of the carnage, and smiles. He is ready to fight... he begins searching for his freind, Ogken, who he has taken under his wing after a near deadly fight in which Ogken lost his hand. Krea thinks to himself, this should prove interesting...

Redwing
10-10-2001, 04:39 AM
*Dan-Re melts into the forests like a ghost in the night. He opens his senses and lets the living Force flow through him. He reaches out with invisible senses looking for any sign to help him locate his foes. And sure enough, not a mile away, in the mix of a dozen human emotions of fright, rage, and grief, the dark side burns like a black fire. Dan-Re's eyes snap open.*

Son of the Sith, I have you now...

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At last we will reveal ourselves to the Jedi.
At last we will have revenge.

[This message has been edited by Redwing (edited October 12, 2001).]

Jared
10-11-2001, 09:36 PM
Ogken senses something behind him. He ten realizes how slow he is walking and begins to run. But suddenly he senses someone behind him. He stops, and turns igniting his 2 bladed saber. An evil grin spreads across his face.

[This message has been edited by TK-421 (edited November 24, 2001).]

Wraith 5
10-13-2001, 10:50 PM
*When he walks in to the bar, everybody stares at him. He feels around in the FORCE. He sences a some negative waves of a couple of these people. A few know him....recognize him. But there are also a lot of friendly faces in here.
He walks up to the bar and orders a drink.*

Hi there. Can i have one of those pink thingies?

*The bar-man gives him the drink and says.*

What brings you here, young Jedi? The battle?
Yes they do. But im also looking for another Jedi. But i was wondering if any of you have a transport for me wich i could hire or buy?

*The bar guy offeres him an old speeder.*

Ill take it. How much??......

S1DC
10-18-2001, 07:23 PM
Krea looks down upon the small city to the northeast. This is where Ogken was last seen... Krea tires of waiting. He gathers all his strength, and fires a huge lightning bolt into the air. Ogken will notice that...

Redwing
10-19-2001, 11:30 PM
*as Dan-Re heads through the forest towards the dark power he sensed earlier, he comes into a clearing. The clearing holds a strangely elegant-looking tri-winged TIE fighter. Lettering on the side proclaims it as a Phantom class. The dark side swirls as if in currents around it; and Dan-Re an sense a trail of dark power leading from it into the woods like the proverbial trail of bread crumbs. He rushes off along the path and almost immediately comes upon its creator. He ignites his saber and rushes at the enemy, who turns to fight him. Pure adrenaline runs through the fighters as, without words, they parry, stab and slash at each other, neither one giving or losing ground. No words are spoken, for the enrgies flowing through them into the Force speak for themselves. However, their fight is cut short when a brilliant flash of lightning flares to the east, distracting both the fighters. The dark warrior pauses, looks at Dan-Re, and speaks three words: "We'll meet again." Before Dan-Re can react, the dark one blurs and dissappears in a wave of dark energy. As the dark force dissipates, Dan-Re can almost hear a voice whisper, "Soon."*

[This message has been edited by Redwing (edited November 24, 2001).]

S1DC
11-14-2001, 12:00 AM
uhhhh... post. someone. forget the whole order thing, lets just post.

Wraith 5
11-19-2001, 06:32 PM
*The speeder rushes trhrew the forrest.*

*He feels a presence of a dark creature. he feels close.. but not close enough for him to confront. *

*I must find this Jedi Master first.*

S1DC
11-20-2001, 07:10 PM
TmRek watches as the speeder flys by. He moves his eyes from the monocular he took from one of the dead bodies he left at a small camp a few ticks back. Krea turns around as hears hears the sounds of a familiar person... Ogken. Perhaps he has finaly decided to show up. If only, Kreaa thinks to himself, he would stop humming that hidious madleorian Hymn.


[This message has been edited by S1DC (edited November 20, 2001).]

Wraith 5
11-23-2001, 04:09 PM
*The young JEDI stops after 5 hours of flying threw the forrest.*

It is time for some training.

*takes out a the practice sphere and activates it. he takes out his saber and waits for the sphere to attack him.
after a minute of scilence, the sphere suddenly attacks with 3 shots from different places.... and at the last moment the young JEDI activates his saber and reflects the shots with high speed. the sphere starts to circle him and continues to fire upon him. Every shot is reflected by the orange bladed light saber.

For over a half hour he keeps the sphere on the highest setting and after 45 minutes the sphere stops. the timer has ended.

with almost no sweat on his forhead he deactivates his lihgtsaber and puts the sphere back in the speeder.*

now a little rest and some meditation should prepare me for my next practice

*he sets himself against a tree and closes his eyes*

S1DC
11-24-2001, 12:52 AM
he still uses that retched thing! thinks krea. Krea reaches down and taps on the young jedi shoulder. The jedi jumps to life and reaches to activate his blade... which is not there. He looks at krea in horror.

Krea speaks.

"Find your friend. prepare to fight."

Krea knocks the jedi unconscious, and walks away.

Redwing
11-25-2001, 09:29 PM
*Dan-Re comes upon the young Jedi Din just as he awakens*

[D:] Another Jedi....here? *taps the young man's shoulder* Hello, may I assist you?

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And the castle rose above the clouds.

RSN CLAN
|Rank: Trainee|
Wins: 2
Losses: 0

Wraith 5
11-25-2001, 10:07 PM
*looks dazed at the JEDI master*

MASTER!!

i have bin looking for you!!
but this DARK JEDI suprised me when i rested.
he is good in hiding himself in the force.

Master Seyah.. My name is Corzip Din.

i have something to tell you.
A couple of years ago... my parents were killed by 2 dark Jedi. I was away to visit mu Uncle. I believe you know him. His name is Mika-Log Din, he said you 2 had the same Master. He also told me you could help me find and fight the Dark Jedi that killed my parents. I believe you know them.... you seem full of the knoledge of them... and i was hoping you could help me defeat them.

If you will.... ill be your apprentice. and you can complete my training.

Will you please help me???

Redwing
11-25-2001, 10:15 PM
*looks incredulously at Din* Corzip Din? Well, you've picked a spectacularly bad time to ask me this...but I do know Mika...and he mentioned you a few times...but I'm on a mission right now, to destroy two dangerous dark Jedi who have come to this planet for some unknown purpose. I need to stop them before they can cause any more damage. If you go with me, I can't guarantee your survival.

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And the castle rose above the clouds.

RSN CLAN
|Rank: Trainee|
Wins: 2
Losses: 0

Wraith 5
11-25-2001, 10:24 PM
Dont worry about me.... well.... no dont!!
ill take care of myself better than i did... i just need to focus....

ill do my best not to get in your way.
i promise..... im not afraid!!!

Redwing
11-25-2001, 10:30 PM
[Yoda voice]You will be. You will be.[/Yoda voice]


j/k, couldn't resist http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/biggrin.gif http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/biggrin.gif

Wraith 5
11-26-2001, 03:23 PM
http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/biggrin.gif http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/tongue.gif LOL!!! http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/wink.gif http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/biggrin.gif http://www.roguesquadron.net/forums/tongue.gif

Redwing
12-02-2001, 11:43 PM
Okay, S1, repost your previous post, and I'll repost mine.

S1DC
12-03-2001, 12:48 AM
augh


they disapeared.


Krea looks out over the city to the northwest. that young jedi... he is somehow connected to those two peasents. Those blasted peasents who were the only people to have laid eyes on my countanace krea thinks. he must not find out why i must kill him... krea begins pacing. I need to find the city of Talch D'tRech. i must continue my search. Krea pulls out an old yellowed map from his cloak. on it, in the northwest and southeast corners, are marks for the two cities. But there is a third city marked, with an anceint sith symbol. The symbol of darkness.

Krea matches his position on the map with the star alignments above him, turns to the south, and turns again a few degrees... he begins to walk.


Ogken must show himself soon. i am growing tired of his attempts to impress me by hiding his force. krea stops and looks towards the north. He feels ogken is about 4 miles behind him. he also knows that Ogken feels him as well. Krea wonders why Ogken is choosing this strange tactic... or if something is really going on.

S1DC
12-03-2001, 12:59 AM
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Wraith 8
12-04-2001, 04:45 PM
So what do you say oh Jedi Master????
will you let me stay with you or must i go my own way???

Ill try to do my best!! (i know what your answer will be red lol)

Redwing
12-05-2001, 12:08 AM
(not my fault the post dissapeared. X_X )

N E WAYZ

[D:] If you join me, I can't guarantee your survival. I have come here to destroy two powerful dark Jedi, who have come to this planet with some dark purpose in mind. Are you sure about this?

Wraith 8
12-05-2001, 12:36 PM
I wont be in your way.... ill help you.... i want these guys to pay for what they have done to me.... they should be brought to justice... i will help you....

S1DC
12-05-2001, 04:20 PM
Krea T'mRek glances down at his map again. Something is wrong...

This planet is old thinks Krea. Very old... the tectonic plates have shifted so much since this map was made that it no longer matches up with the stars correctly. Krea pulls out a small black book from his cloak and examines it. He looks up into the night sky and stares... for 30 minutes. He carfully notes all the stars positions of the hemisphere he can see, than begins making a new map. Based on the rate of movement of this plate... perhaps he can fix the map. And accomplish his goal.

Krea levitates into a large ion cloud 2 miles above the city... and begins to work. Even if one of the Jedi find me Krea thinks they will be unable to use thier weapons in this cloud. and thier perception will be limited to how well they can navigate the force. The young one will be no problem- Krea pauses, - but the other may prove... difficult. Krea removes a small communicator he removed from one of the soldiers dead bodies, and enters Ogkens frequency. He levitates the communicator beside him, and continues his work.

Redwing
12-07-2001, 04:23 AM
Dan-Re feels a buzz against his garments. He looks down, and sees of all things, a small communicator unit, stuck to his boot by the magnetic pull of one of his buckles. He reaches down to pick it up.

S1DC
12-07-2001, 07:35 AM
Krea: You have a comm.

Dan Re: And you have some trouble.

Krea: Make it so.

Wraith 8
12-07-2001, 07:15 PM
I feel a disturbans in the force....... but it is gone now...... it apeared very quickly and it disapeared almost directly.

I have a bad feeling about this...... i sence there could be big trouble here.

S1DC
12-07-2001, 11:44 PM
[thats your que, red]

Redwing
12-08-2001, 02:38 AM
*cynically, @ Corzip* That's one way of putting it.

*into the comlink* So the games begin again, "Dark Master"? Let me ask you something: Why here? Why now? This backwater planet seems a step down from the grandiose arenas that saw the battles of our ancestors in times long past. Although, perhaps that's what the Sith have always done best: Hide.

S1DC
12-08-2001, 12:06 PM
let me remind you, jedi, that i was the one who sent you the message to some here.


and i am no ordinary sith. I have no need to hide from anyone.


You would be wise to continue your search for me. I have work to do, so please try your hardest to sneak up on me. I don't want this to be boring to you, Jedi.

Wraith 8
12-08-2001, 01:05 PM
*grabs the comlink out of Dan-re's hands and shouts*

Corzip:
Why did you do it you Sith Spawn!! Why did you murder my family hah!! what did they ever did to you??!!

Krea:
Ah the little Jedi. You should be carefu........

Corzip:
No!!! You should be carefull Krea!! You better watch for me! i am more powerfull then you can EVER imagine!! Im gobnna get you one day!! and when i do, you are gonna be SO sorry to have messed with me!!

*Corzip throws the comlink in the air. stops it with the force. opens his hand. and makes a fist. Just before the comlink is destroyed Krea said: Your hate has made you powerfull. and the comlink explodes in to a million peaces*

Redwing
12-08-2001, 01:10 PM
*looks at Corzip* All of you are alike. All of you...so easily turned. *face flushes with memory* I don't have time for this. *with a thought, he raises into the air and flies off above the trees, searching fot the slightest sign of dark side energy*

S1DC
12-08-2001, 01:16 PM
Krea laughs. The fool. He thinks his anger will help him. all it will do for him in reality is make him more suseptable to my power... for darkness always grasps darkness.


Krea senses Dan Re is near.

Redwing
12-08-2001, 01:36 PM
After not five minutes, Dan-Re sights an oddly large ion cloud. Searching the Force, he feels a twinge of dark side energy, a signature left by someone trying to hide their power but having too much of it to hide it completely. Dan-Re sways in midair, riding on currents of the Force towards the ion cloud.

S1DC
12-08-2001, 01:57 PM
finaly krea thinks.

Krea, without stopping his work, begins speaking to Dan Re telepathicly.

It is time for us to do what we came here for, Darren TueReche.

As abruptly as he began speaking, Krea disapears. All sign of him is gone...



Inside Kreas Lair, the large monoliths on the walls are symbols of power. Each one represents a soul defeated by Krea T'mRek. Many creatures have stood to the challenge, not one has succeeded. The power that Krea T'mRek weilds is deadly, evil. he has never lost to a foe. Yet one monolith stands blank amongst the rest.

Redwing
12-08-2001, 02:07 PM
*Dan-Re stares at the ion cloud, in which Krea seems to have vanished. He dives into the cloud, wondering where he went but sensing no Force signature from him at all, and unable to sense any sign of him at all for that matter due probably to the ion cloud. Dan-Re considers his options. He could search the entire cloud, which would take hours and probably let him get away anyway. He swears aloud as he prepares to do he knows not what...and suddenly, he senses something else. On the ground. Dan-Re smiles and, using the Force, expands his voice so Krea cannot help but hear him.*

So once again, the little Sith runs and hides? Leaving your buddy lost and all alone. In fact, I can sense him right now. I suppose you expect me to believe you've teleported. But I know better. To hide the amount of Force energy you have would use up far too much of it for you to be able to fight me at your full strength. So I can only conclude that you're trying to get me off this little planet. Well, I'll tell you what I'm going to do: I'm going to find your imbecilic friend Ogken Rahi'shi', and destroy him. Then I'll find the mysterious source of dark energy I keep sensing here, and destroy that too. And if you don't want to come out and fight me, then what you can do...is watch.

*smiling, Dan-Re flips and dives towards the trees below, hot on the path of Rahi'shi'*

S1DC
12-08-2001, 02:49 PM
As Dan Re falls towards the planet, Krea is also falling. After all, you cannot levitate without force, and Kreas is surpressed. While Dan Re babbled on, Krea fell, arms crossed. Krea then bursts back into the full power of the dark force, and sets in place. Dan Re must have felt that. But it is too late for him to react... he he heading right for Krea!

Krea throws his lightcross at Dan Re, fully ignited. Just as Dan Re was about to cry out, the cross stopped. Danre stopped. He felt the heat of the cross on his face, as he thought rapidly and confused. the cross de-activated, and felw back to Krea.


We have no need to fight now. Come, follow me.

Krea turned and floated toward the ground.

Dan Re shrugged. Might as well.

The two Jedi, in stark contrast to each other, walk side by side toward a destination only Krea knows. Krea does not slow or speak. Dan Re can feel the dark force growing stedily stronger...

Redwing
12-08-2001, 03:09 PM
So, the city of the dark side. I never thought it was real.

A voice seems to speak from the past....

Tell me, Dan-Re, do you fear the darkness?

No.

You should.

Wraith 8
12-08-2001, 07:17 PM
*Corzip feels the power rising. he feels that the 2 Jedi are gonna fight soon*

*Sigh!!* Im giving in to the hate. i shouldnt do this.
*uses the force to let him feel better* ok.. what can i do to make this better. wait.... i can find this other Dark jedi.
*Lets the force flow threw the trees. trew the animals. threw nature. his strenght grows. grows. he sences threw the force that Rahi'shi' is to the north. he stands up gets his things out of the speeder. and packs them well in to his backpack.
He takes out his belt and hangs his lightsaber at his side.
the blaster cases at his belt are empty.*

To think i was the best with those thing back on Dantooine.

*He opens a compartment and takes out 2 blasters. he puts them into the cases. than he lets the force glide threw the forest again. He reaches an animal with his thoughts.*

Hello my friend. can you bring me to a town nearby??
you can... thank you my friend.

*the Xallsarget is native creature who is just as large as a Tauntaun.. only a smooth skin. the beast runs to Corzip and arives in 3 minutes after he called it. He steps on the animal and lets the force flow in the creature. They ride off into the dark forrest.

S1DC
12-09-2001, 10:22 AM
Dan Re: its been FOUR hours. Where exactly are we heading?

Krea: ...

Dan Re: Damnit, i want to know where we are going and how much further i have to walk through-

Dan Re stopped. A surge of dark energy flowed through him... it made him feel nausiated. Its was more power than he had ever felt...


Krea TmRek felt his entire body begin to pulse. All his veins coursed with a new power; but only the first jump of 3 he will encounter as he passes the 3 outer energy rings of the city. Each ring holds back less and less Dark Force until you get inside, where the force is strong enough to crush anyone, even Dark Jedi. But Krea is an exception among millions. This city is more to him than just power.

If Dan Re can make it through this first barrier- Krea thinks, -and the next, by the time we enter the third barier one of a few things might happen. Either he will fall to the force and be crushed. Or he is who the scrolls say he is...


Krea: Darren TueReche, we must continue. Try to keep your Jedi feelings at bay.


Dan Re: how does he know my name was...

Jared
12-09-2001, 12:25 PM
Ogken continues walking casualy through the forest, taking his time. The weak Jedi Knights could wait a little longer,for they were already dead to him. He hears a sound of leaves being crushed as he walked around. He was not paying attention to the animals around him, for most kept their distance. Except for one. A huge, lizard-like creature leaped in front of him and lunged for him. Startled, Ogken drops his comlink. The creature steps on it, breaking it to peices. Okgen screams in rage. "THEY WILL ALL DIE!!!!!" He releases a huge dark energy wave, incinerating everything for a mile all around. The lizard creature is a smoking heap of charred flesh. The forest is leveled. He says to himself, " Now, to find another comlink." He heads for the noises of a village. Anxious to avoid all other inturuptions, he feels all around him for about 20 feet above, ahead behind, etc. He starts walking, all the animals around him being turned to ashes,even the insects being incinerated, leaving him nothing to worry about. He walks faster. A few minutes later he enters a village. He ignites his saber.....

Redwing
12-09-2001, 02:38 PM
What does he know about me? I've haven't gone by that name since...

Keep my Jedi feelings at bay?

Fear the darkness, Dan-Re.

No! I am not afraid.

Fear it! Run from it while you can!

NOOO!!!!!!! I AM NOT AFRAID!!!!
I AM NOT AFRAID!!!!

S1DC
12-09-2001, 03:36 PM
Krea felt it. Ogken finaly woke up from his inseceant slumber.

Perhaps he will finaly do something useful and kill that neglegant light-sider.

Krea knows that Ogken does not posses the power or knowledge to enter the city. He must spend his time dealing with Corzip, or he will dye trying to penetrate the barriers of the city. only the Dark Jedi completely devoid of all feeling, all emotion, can enter the city. Ogken is too... angry.


Krea continues on, and soon passes the 2nd barrier. he see s Dan Re out of the corner of his eye. He is walking the same as before. amazing, Krea thinks, He rally is the one in the scrolls. Krea smiles under his mask. He can feel the dark force around him begin to thin, just a little. so little that only a select few would be able to notice it. But he senses it... and that dark energy is being obsorbed by Dan Re.

Wraith 8
12-10-2001, 02:11 PM
*Corzip feels the death of animal and he sees the smoke above the treetops. *

Ogken is awake. Pitty. i would have liked to see him at ease. Oh well.

*The Xallsarget runs on without evem being tired or getting tired. Corzip lets the force flow threw the animal. he feels the strength of the animal flow in to his own. He is getting more powerfull by every living creature around him. he feels the tree-animals run threw the trees and they seem to say: 'here young jedi. take this. use our strenght, our gifts to help you defeat the evil.'*

Thank you my friends. i will defeat the evil. and rescue you all.

*The Xallsarget moves on without a sound.*

Jared
12-11-2001, 01:40 PM
He slashes right and left, cutting everyone down. Heads roll. He is overwelmed by the sheer giddiness he got from murdering the innocent beings. He kills their livestock, their mates, their childeren, no one escaped the fury of his blades. he kept this up for 15 minutes. He then stood in the center of the town. He deignited his lightstaff. He smiled. He had found another comlink amidst the killing spree, and he popped it open and activated it. He called his transport, the Imperial landing craft "EvengerII" and told the pilots and crew to loot what was left of the city. "LEAVE NOTHING," he said. "I still need to pay off that stupid imperial commander for him lending me his money to get this shuttle."

*20 minutes later*
"now, LEAVE ME!!"
I have a weak Jedi Knight to turn to the dark side......"
I could use a new padawan since my other died trying to kill me."
He laughs loudly.......then begins to run towards what he decided was probably Corzip Din.

Wraith 8
12-11-2001, 02:13 PM
*Corzip feels the deaths of the people and feels the hurting. he feels terrible about those people... but he lets the force flow threw him and he lets the force calm him down.*

You cant do anything for those people now. they are dead. but i can do some other thing. ok my friend i feel him coming to me. i have an idea.

*they run off in another direction*

S1DC
12-11-2001, 09:45 PM
Krea is walking. Fast. Almost a run. But hes not trying to... the power surging in him is enhancing his every ablity.

Dan Re seems to be... speeding up. Krea is not surprised. just like it said in the scrolls... he is next.


In the universe, Krea T'mRek is legend. He has been around for 2000 years, but only by rumor. He is said to have killed many being, both dark and light. Nothing has withstood him, and he has only become more powerful. Some say it is the drive of power that keeps him going... some say he is the pure manifestation of the Dark Side. In every dimension he has been in, Krea has taken on the ways of the people. In this dimension he is a Dark Jedi with immense power. but has he always been one? no one is sure... But that is only a small peice of the story.


Krea's custom TIE Interceptor is his latest version of inter-dimension travel. With a custom built IDRG, Krea can jump from dimension to dimension. He has previously had other ways to jump, but in the last few years, he has aquired his Interceptor. Though only a few people know it, Krea has been jumping dimensions for far longer than 2000 years. He has been searching for the Darkness that calls him, from dimension to dimension. He has been on his journey for far longer than the 2000 years he has spent in this dimension...


After a long time searching, Krea has come closer than ever to finding to next peice of the puzzle. Here, in this city, he may just find the link to the next dimension where he will continue his jorney.


The scrolls say that Krea is destinef to find pure darkness one day. but they also say he will find this darkness while standing next to another... who will find pure light at the same time. Before this can happen, however, the one from the Light Side must fall to the darkness, and the Dark Side one succumb to the light.



krea looks over at Dan Re. Is it really him...

Redwing
12-12-2001, 05:31 AM
Dan-Re is unconsciously walking faster as more and more power absorbs itself into him. Although he is completely silent, a battle is taking place inside of him; a battle of nameless, conflicting voices.

The darkness is closing in. Cannot you feel it?

His mother's dying words...Stay in the light, Darren. Stay in the light....

Beware the dark...its call is powerful...but it can only lead to death...

Stay in the light.

Suddenly, a new voice, startlingly harsh:

Do not fear the darkness! Embrace it! It will make you powerful...and power is what you want...what you NEED...

His father speaks in his memory. You Jedi wish to put everything in its little place, black and white, light and dark. But we all know that the world comes in shades of grey.

The mysterious warnings of Jedi old as time...Run from the darkness, TueReche.

Fear the future. Fear what it holds for you.

Stay in the light.

You are destined for many things...great things. But, Darren, great things are not neccessarily...good things....

His own voice speaks from his memory. [If only I had the power...to change...to right every misdeed...to heal every wound...to avenge the wronged...

"Beware the dark side."

Dan-Re moves forward as quickly as Krea, an unconscious urging taking hold of him.

Wraith 8
12-12-2001, 02:22 PM
*On the other side of the town an amnimal enters. With a Young Jedi on his back.*

Well my friend .. i can still use my powers to hide myself. heh..

*He gets of the animal and pulls his gear off. he sets his packs sown in a nearby house.he checks his guns. and he pulls his thermal detonators out of its protective bags. hangs them on his belt.*

Now go my friend.. thank you fro every thing.
Now i see that the shuttle has not yet left the village. lets pay a visite to them shall we.

*Corzip walks threw the dead town. and gets around a corner to find the Imperial landing craft still there with the Imps still packing theyre stuff. He walks in to the open sight of the imps.*

Hey guys!!! what are you doing? That doesnt belong to you all ... you know!

*The Imps see him. 2 stormtroopers draw theyre blasters without asking questions. in one quick move, Corzip activates his lightsaber and deflects the blasts. he takes one hand of the saber and draws one of his blatsers and with well put shots he lays down the stormies. This all happens in a split second. the other Imps just watch with open mouths. A group of 8 Stormies come running down the ramp. Corzip deactivates his saber and gets his other blaster in to his hands and rapidly starts firing at the stormies while evading evry shot they fire. While firing he also fires at the shuttle and the other crew that is standing outside. after getting everybody outside the shuttle.. he puts his blasters away and picks up 2 thermal detonators. he throws them up the ramp and they explode with great magnitude. a few more people walk down the ramp. Corzip re-activates his saber and lashes out at the people coming down the ramp. after that he walks up the ramp and looks at the destroyed inside cargo hall. he takes another detonator and throws it in to the cockpit.
it blows up.*

Well... that is that... he is not going anywhere. haha. lets look for him outside.

*He walks down the ramp and into the open field. and there he is. Ogken is standing there. and he doesnt seem very happy.*

S1DC
12-12-2001, 03:22 PM
for the umpteenth time, NO BLASTERS!

but i suppose if you don;t use them against main chars, is ok.


Just be careful wraith.

Wraith 8
12-12-2001, 06:08 PM
well.. i know Saber... but you your self threw half the rules you made up out of the window.. so i thought... if he haves a problem he will tell.... and like i do not know that blasters cant kill a Jedi... ofcourse i will not use it against OGKen...... im not THAT stupid :D.
Buts supose that Jared doesnt show up anymore.... can i make my own story up for him... and i promise i wont make it a short one.

S1DC
12-12-2001, 08:15 PM
Which rules did i throw out?

besides the order thing.

Redwing
12-14-2001, 09:27 PM
IT DOESN'T FRIKKIN MATTER -_-

Back in story:

The deaths occurring a few miles away reverbate in the Force through Dan-Re's mind, but Dan-Re does not feel the disturbances. He is to engaged in the turmoil in his mind.

Wraith 8
12-17-2001, 03:00 PM
So Ogken, You dont seem very happy you know. Did i do something to upset you?? I only stopped evil people from stealing stuff. Is that wrong? You know you should realy talk more. it would help you get over your anger moments.

*Ogken just stood there with his angry looking eyes. *

well.. not realy the talking one in your family are you?

Jared
12-18-2001, 12:09 PM
*Ogken smiles* Young fool. They are expendable. I have hundreds. As for the shuttle? he waves his hand. The burning shuttle disapears and in its place, a shuttle taking off. Corzip looks up. His thermal detonater is in the air, unexploded. Ogken heaves it into the forest with the force.
You are an angry young man....yes...yes...I can feel you rage...It seems as if you will be turned to the dark side with ease. But I think I would rather kill you! Consider yourself dead young, jedi. *Ignites lightstaff and lunges for Corzip* startled, Corzip trips. Ogken jumps over him and laughs. You are pathetic....you lack training. But I will give you a chance to live. Kill Dan-re, and I will let you live. If not; I'm wasting my time and I might as well cut you to peices. So whats it going to be?

You have 20 seconds to decide.

Wraith 8
12-18-2001, 02:24 PM
*Corzip kicks his foot against Ogken chest and kicks him off him. Corzip stands up and lets the force flow threw him.... he unbuckels his belt with the blaster cases and lets it fall to the ground. he clips all his weapons off him besides his Lightsaber. he holds it in his hand without activating it.*

And why do you think i will betray a fellow Jedi?? why do i not just fight you and kill you where you stand??

*he reviews his last sentence. "oh no!" he thinks. "im truly filled with hate. im realy on the verge of breaking down to the darkside.
What did Master Yoda say about this. the dark side is easier.
I have to be aware of my feelings... are my feelings right when i kill him. when i kill him... do i kill him out of revenge or out of pretection for other people? better watch myself"
he looks up at Ogken. he takes the defencive position. and drops his light saber.
he falls to his knees.*

Master Ogken. im sorry to have troubled you. i will do as you demand of me!

S1DC
12-19-2001, 08:28 PM
uh, well, Krea T'mRek wil wait to post until this battle is resolved.

One of you two let me know when you plan on winning, losing, or retreating.

S1DC
12-30-2001, 08:33 AM
POST!!!!! POST POST POST!

Wraith 8
12-31-2001, 07:07 AM
OK.... ive told TK he had untill 12 noon his time today. and he has not posted. ill give him a half hour. if not. i kill him in the RPG... sorry but it has been since 18 December and we got to move on!!

I HAVE SPOKEN

-Wraith 9-
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Wraith 8
01-08-2002, 04:55 PM
*Ogken Laughs at the Young Jedi.*

Ogken:
You fool. I knew you couldnt handle me.

*Ogken walks up to the boy.
Ogken gets close and then Corzip lets the force flow threw him and grabs the Lightsaber and activates it and lashes out at Ogken. unfortunatly Ogken anticipated the Jedi's move and activated his Lightsaber just in time to reflect the blow of it.*

Ogken:
HAHAHAHAHA! You think you can get me?? HAHAHAHA!

Corzip:
Yes! I do think i can get you. It is just that you are to selfish and to sure of yourself that you can not see your own mistakes!

*Corzip drops to his knee and Ogken lashes at the Lightsaber. In the same time Corzip draws his vibroblade knife and sticks it in the leg of Ogken. Ogken doesnt say a word or screams at all. But he does step back.*

Ogken:
That was not funny.

*Ogken gets madder and madder. Corzip feels the dark energy flow around him. But Corzip draws more energy from the nature around him and begins his wirlwind of the light side of the force.
Ogken steps a bit back. He did not expect such a power was in the young man.
Corzip looks to the sky and closes his eyes. he stretches out his arms. The wind takes up incredible power.
Than corzip drops the vibroblade. and lowers his arms and takes his head to face the ground. the wind stills. Suddenly he looks up with his eyes and activates his Lightsaber.*

Corzip:
Prepare to fight!

*Ogken smiles. he re-activates his Lightsaber. and waves Corzip over. and direct he enables both blades on his saber.
Corzip runs over with great speed and lashes out at Ogken. He anticipated every move but not THAT quick. Corzip keeps pounding at him and he gets more and more power from the flora and fauna around him and he grows stronger by the minute.
he lashes out at the saber, and while doing that he lets his saber grow a couple of inches almost slicing threw Ogkens nose. He evades the next lash. but the next one is hard and the other ones are getting harder and harder to evade and block.*

*after a few minutes of pounding at each other they break of the attack. Ogken looks a bit tired. But Corzip looks unbeatable.*

Ogken:
How do you do that?

Corzip:
You asumed to much. and you thought i was a push over. i trained all my live for the day against the Sith. Did you realy think i haddend improved over the years??

*Corzip closes his eyes and attacks again without even opening his eyes. Ogken evades and lashes out and hits a bit of Corzips left arm. The flesh burns closed. But corzip doesnt notice it. he lashes out and kicks Ogken in the stumake. Ogken jumps back and lookes where Corzip should be. Then Corzip lands behind him stretch his saber out at Ogken in the middle of his gest.
Ogken looks at Corzip at drops to his knees. Ogken smiles at him.*

Ogken:
It was still a pleasure of killing your parents! HAHAHAHAHA!

*Corzip lashes out and cuts of Ogkens head. It roles away. and his body explodes in a wave of dark energy.
Corzip covers his eyes. *

Corzip:
Well ....... that...... wasnt....... so......... bad......!

*Corzip drops to his knees. Totaly tired. he has no energy left in his body. Yet he stands up and walks away.*

Jared
01-12-2002, 03:25 PM
*Ogken smiles.* well, that was easier than I expected. That young jedi has true powers. He almost convinced me that he would be easily turned to the dark side. But it apears it will be harder than I thought. There will be another time, Corzip. *He waves his hand*. The exploded parts of his body waver and disapear. "but for now, I must report to Krea." he ignites the shuttles's engine's and flys off.




ps: nice try wraith but i let u kill me on purpose :D was it fun?

S1DC
01-12-2002, 03:44 PM
Krea stands with dan re at the face of a huge stone arc. byond this arc is the last force barrier lies. beyond this is the truth. Krea looks at Dan Re... he is perfectly calm. But in his calmness, he has changed. He is no longer the pure jedi of when this journey began. He has been infected. this is the last step.



Not far behind them, the remaining force of Ogken flows toward the city. In this form he is no more than a spectator. At least until Krea supplies a new dark host. Unfortunatly Ogken requires peice of his previous host to dwell in a new one, and the new host must be young. no older than 20 cycles. Before the change can be made, he must show Krea where he was killed. And his prefered host...



Krea motions for Dan Re to begin walking again. as the two head towards the barrier, Krwa utters the only words he has spoken since this began- "Take it in stride. This is only the begining."
They both pause, look into the arc, as Dan re reaches out towards the barrier he connot see... but he can dread.

Redwing
01-12-2002, 04:49 PM
*Dan-Re barely hears Krea. He is perfectly calm outwardly, and the voices in his head are being smothered as Force energy flows through him. He feels raw power flow through him, more intense than ever before. He steps towards the barrier...*

Wraith 8
01-13-2002, 08:32 AM
*Corzip walks threw the village..... and feels the presence of Ogken... he turns arround and sees the shuttle take off....*

That darn Sith.... when will they finnaly be extinct??

*he walks on.... he finds the animal he was riding here.. he gets his stuff together and gets on the animal and rides of... he uses a bit of his power to regenerate his power and the rest to conseile him in the force.. so that he cannot be detected.
He dissapears into the dark forrest.*

S1DC
01-15-2002, 07:39 AM
i assume when you say regenerate his power with his power, you mean Corzip regenerates the animal, not himself.


and its "conceal". heh heh heh...

Wraith 8
01-15-2002, 08:08 AM
yes i did mean that Saber :D :D
and sorry about that conseal.... my english is not that good :D :D

S1DC
01-18-2002, 10:57 PM
Krea and Dan Re pass through the barrier at the same time.

AT first, there is no change... then suddenly

FLASH

A white light ignites the air

Krea T'mRek levitates, reaches out his limbs violently into an x, and screams a deep, gut wrenching cry.

Dan Re is also hurled into the air, and is subjected to the same effect, only his cry is that of horror, not of power, like Kreas...


Krea fells it. The power. Its so immense... he is now ten times stronger than he was before. He has reached the next level.

Dan Re falls to the ground next to Krea like a rag doll. He is silent... then gets up onto one knee. Dan Re looks up at Krea and...


Krea throws his head back- IT IS BEGUN!

Redwing
01-19-2002, 08:32 PM
Dan-Re stares up at Krea. Sheer power runs like an electric current through them, around them, and between them. Krea's face is transformed with ecstasy. Dan-Re, however, is filled with horror at the immensity of the dark power. He has an urge to yell at Krea You fool! You'll be destroyed! Stop now before it's too late! But as the words enter his mouth, something else in his mind stops him. Why do I care? I want him to be destroyed! The filthy murderer! My wish for him is for him to suffer the most painful death imaginable!! I hate him! I HATE HIM!!!

The insistent voice in his mind goes completely unheeded...

Beware the dark side

Wraith 8
01-21-2002, 01:13 PM
(euh.. totaly other thing..... why cant i just kill TK-421.... he is never around... and the moment i kill him.. he is back to say he cant be killed.... i think that is weak....)

S1DC
01-23-2002, 04:55 PM
Kill him. We don't care.


Sorry, Dan-re, Krea is no where near dead. ehehhehe... time for some BUTT KICKING. I'll post my reply in a bit.

Redwing
01-24-2002, 12:52 AM
OOS: Duh, I know that :p I'm leading up to...well you know.

BTW you're not supposed to be controlling my chara, and you're getting really close to that...:p

Wraith 8
01-27-2002, 09:05 AM
*Corzip got to rest very well. his powers were almost to full already. Well since that cowardly Sith got away. he must go and search for the other one.
The animal he was riding wasnt tired yet.. but it was afraid. very afraid. he must hurry.
He ate something. he rested something and got on with his concentration.*

S1DC
01-31-2002, 02:25 PM
Red, your gonna die soon. YOU NEED TO POST MORE OFTEN.

anyway, to my post:


Silence. Nothing moves. Krea is standing beside Dan Re.

hes different Krea thinks.

He now knows more about the dark side than he ever
imagined possible... so much, that the temptation will be
unbearable. Even for him...

Suddenly, A blue flash bursts forth, and Krea ignites his staff. Then the full cross. With his Light cross, he lunges towards Dan Re.

Let us see if the transformation has occoured. If it has, then he should try much more desperatly to do some damage. he will be much stronger... and ruthless.

krea smiles under his mask.

Redwing
02-01-2002, 03:38 AM
What?!?! I was waiting for YOU to post!!! :p

anyway back in story:

Dan-Re's saber flashes toward Krea's lightcross, deftly blocking the blades. He moves now with completely inhuman speed, and despite only weilding a single blade, Krea has trouble blocking his first lunges. As Krea's attention is occupied with the saber blade, Dan-Re thrusts forth his other hand and an enormous surge of invisible energy rips from his fingertips and smashes directly into Krea Tm'Rek. The intensity of the attack catches Krea off guard for once and he is sent flying backwards...

S1DC
02-01-2002, 07:47 PM
oops, sorry. i meant TK, not you, red.


Krea laughs to himself. he is stronger. I suppose i should show him some real dark power

Krea stops dead in the air and hovers. Dan Re lunges with deadly speed, theheat of the blade breaks upon kreas face and-

Dan Re stops. His limbs shoot out in all directions and he feels himself being ripped apart.

Lets make sure he knows whos in charge.

Dan Re merely glaces at Krea.

"Ok" he says.

Krea puts him down.

How do you feel?

Redwing
02-01-2002, 08:04 PM
Like I want to tear you limb from limb and watch your blood rain down and drench the ground. But something's stopping me.

S1DC
02-01-2002, 08:50 PM
Its done.

Let us go.


Krea disapears.

Dan Re knows what to do.

Redwing
02-02-2002, 07:07 PM
Dan Re stares malevolently off into space as if looking at something far off. Dark emotions surge through him, and light and dark fight each other for supremacy inside of him.

Then he simply shrugs and dissapears.

S1DC
02-03-2002, 09:41 AM
The one Grey warrior and the one Black warrior stand side by side in a cantina, located in the lower of the two towns.

Dan Re aproaches an old man coverd in chains...


(take it away, Red! Have some fun with this post.)

Wraith 8
02-04-2002, 09:01 AM
*Corzip feels as new. His powers are back and the Force is with him more than ever. It almost feels like with every fight he grows stronger in the force. but he must be carefull of the dark side. it is near. he can feel it.

he goes on into the woods. he feels great powers ahead of him. He must go there and help Dan re. he made a mistake when he got angry the last time. but he wont this time. He was almost there.*

Redwing
02-06-2002, 04:22 AM
Dan Re approaches the man.

"Hello, Father."

The old man can barely move, but at Dan Re's word's he attempts to lift his head up and struggles to speak.

"S...son....I...warned....y...you...."

Dan Re stares at him. "Light to dark and dark to light. 'Your Jedi mother will be the death of us all' you said. "

His father might have winced, but it was lost in the wrinkles and twists of old age. "Y...your fr...iend....he...will...be...the..."

Dan Re: "Friend? He is not my friend!"

His father slumps further down. "The proph...ecy ...dark...to...light...and light....to....dark... he...does...not know it, does not...feel it...but he will...will..."

Dan Re: What are you saying?

His father: "Krea...Tm'Rek..."

*Dan Re looks at Krea expectantly...*

S1DC
02-06-2002, 02:58 PM
Krea looks back at Dan Re, and then says something to the old man in a foreign language. The man's eyes widen, and then close. He then looks up at Dan Re;

The Old Man speaks with stark contrast to his original stutterd words... almost as if he has tapped into some pool of strength. Of course, both of the warriors know it is not the OFrce he has tapped into.

"This entity which stands beside you knows not pain, nor remorse. His dark power will become an influenece upon you if you are not careful. Until he is also gre-"

The old man stops.

Dan Re steps closer and reaches for the mans hand, concernd, when his dark awareness shifts in...

Wraith 8
02-10-2002, 09:58 AM
*Corzip comes to a city. a big city. but there were only 2 lifeforms big enough to be the two people he was looking for. But the city feels very dark... the dark side is with this city. He gets off the animal. he sends it away. gets his Saber in his hand and walks on into the city.*

Redwing
02-13-2002, 03:50 AM
OOS: Before I reply, I want to know: In what time period is this story set?

S1DC
02-15-2002, 12:34 PM
this is all new galaxy, not old. very recent.

Wraith 8
02-20-2002, 03:56 PM
*Corzip walked threw the city. and he felt the dark side all around him. and then it him. this is the mistic city of the Sith. that is why these sith guys chose this planet to fight.
he was wlking toward a sort of temple. and then heard voices. he ran to hide. and then he saw the Lambda Class shuttle of Ogken. what a fool he was for not feeling them here. But he must admid that these dark forces were deluding his own force. he sneaked up yo the nearest crewman.*

S1DC
02-20-2002, 07:54 PM
nice try, bud. but no can do.


The sith city is far to evil for you to walk through, did i not just get done explaining that it nearly killed Dan Re?


And how did you get there, anyways.

Perhaps you should wait outside. Your char would never make it past the first force barrier.

Wraith 8
02-21-2002, 06:06 AM
oh...... ok....
well i went with the feelings of the force. and i felt the darkside.
But ok... ill just wait.

Redwing
02-23-2002, 03:30 AM
((Originally posted by S1DC
this is all new galaxy, not old. very recent.

New EU-wise, or what? What time perio...oh, whatever, I don't even remember why I wanted to know that :p

btw I'm not sure what you mean by "dark awareness" so I'll just guess...))

Dan-Re jerks his hand away from the man's.

Father! The dark side is in you...

The man smiled darkly. I am the Avatar...whatever transpires, I will survive...as I have survived...no matter which side is stronger...why do you think I married your mother? Silly girl...she was my connection to the Jedi, and when Lord Vader had her killed, I---

Dan-Re slaps the old man in the face. The old man does not seem to feel it, but simply grins. You can take out your anger on me all you wish...but this shell is no longer truly mine...I only exist here to give it life. The spirits speak through me, they control me...both dark and light. They both want you...but the dark side has you already. Your companion and you are here for a purpose. The Force is unbalancing, Dan-Re. It will not remain so for long.

Dan-Re looks at him incredulously. "What are you talking about?" he says aloud. The old man smiled again and pointed to the wall behind Dan-Re...

S1DC
02-23-2002, 05:55 PM
Krea is already turned in the direction the man is pointing.

On the far wall, nothing seems out of the ordinary. After a few moments, however, Krea begins to see a small darkness forming. Almost as if the shadows are expanding. Slowly, the wall is engulfed by darkness. Krea turns quickly to his left, towards Dan Re. The entire room has gone dark. In fact, it seems as though everything has disapeared except for Dan Re, himself, and the Old Man.

The old man grins. Suddenly, he throws back his head and screams, as he splits into hundreds of peices.

Obiously not in the real world anymore, krea recognizes this dark realm. This is the Dark Side. Not a place, but an entity. They are inside the force. But also in a realm.


The peices of the old man form into hundreds of black humanoid shapes, which glow a deep red. They fly towards Krea and Dan Re with incredible speed.


The Dark Side is beging to balance out the imbalance... and to do so, it must destroy one of the two Dark beings. Both immensly powerful. There is not room for two of them. Or the Dark Side may fail...


Krea ignites his cross and flys into action, begining the battle. Considering the lack of gravity or friction, this battle will push the two warriors to their limits...

EEEEERRRRRAAAAAGHHHHHHH!!!!!!! Krea screams out his battle cry more feirce than ever before.

Redwing
02-24-2002, 12:12 AM
Dan Re spins his sabers with incomprehensible speed, slicing the shapes into fragments as fast as they could come at him. Gravity and friction were no more in this place...without the Force, Dan Re and Krea would have been completely immobile. The dark creatures kept coming and coming, in seemingly unlimited numbers. Just when the two were about to be overwhelmed, everything just...

...stopped. Krea's lightcross was frozen in the act of dissecting about ten of the dark creatures at once. Dan Re was frozen in an impossible acrobatic act. Nothing at all moved, down to the creature's red eyes.

Then two forms appeared. One blindingly light, and one impossibly dark, both exceedingly painful to look at. But neither of the warriors were able to move.

A voice came from nowhere: Dark has taken the light. The first prophecy has been fulfilled. It is time for the second.

The two beings disappeared and reappeared behind Krea and Dan Re, one behind each.

S1DC
02-24-2002, 08:23 PM
Krea cannot move buts knows which of thw two is behind him. It is the light.

With a cry of defiance, Krea struggles against his own will as the light begins to penetrate him...

Redwing
02-26-2002, 10:42 PM
Silence. Blackness. Nothingness.

But something was creeping in. Something powerful. Something dark.

He observed it in his mind's eye. Contemplated it. Then...embraced it.

A thousand screams in the dark, but Dan Re did not hear them. He felt nothing but power. Power he had never dreamed existed.

He threw back his head and began to laugh, and the last spark of light in him vanished.

Wraith 8
02-27-2002, 05:32 PM
((OOC: ok ill try my last post again))

*Corzip arrived at a giant Force barrier. he couldn't see it... but he sure felt it. he couldnt croos that... he hadnt enough power to cross it. maybe he could go around it. he walked on for what he felt was the barrier. Than he heard a shuttle coming close. he hide and looked from a distance.*

S1DC
02-28-2002, 04:25 PM
(hey red, lets let the other two guys do some fighitng for a bit. our half of the story is taking this RP up)

Redwing
03-02-2002, 05:07 AM
((Good point, let's leave it hanging there for us right now. I'll bug Jared, er, TK, er, prodigy to post :rolleyess))

Jared
03-06-2002, 03:51 PM
*The shuttle lands by the force barrier*
A squad of stormtroopers run out, blasters ready, followed by a single trooper. The trooper waves his hand at the squad and tells them to leave. The walk back into the ship and ignite the engines, speeding off out of the atmosphere. The trooper yells out, "Come out corzip, i know you are here!" he reaches into his bagpack and pulls out a small cylinder. The saber ignites with a flash of light. "Come out Corzip!" Lets finish this!!

(I can posses a life form with no force abilities, but I need Krea to posses a force able body)

Redwing
03-07-2002, 01:01 AM
((OOS

*cough*god character*cough*

:rolleyess :p))

Wraith 8
03-07-2002, 06:38 AM
((OOS: agrees with RED. you are a god creature. it is not fair.
*childish respons* than i cant be killed either */childish respons*))

Jared
03-08-2002, 06:06 PM
gimme a break. Just post your reply wraith.

Wraith 8
03-15-2002, 11:22 AM
*Corzip walks out of the bushes. he looks at Ogken.
he looks at Corzip with contempt.
he looks at him as if he was a push over.
Corzip smiles by that thought. but he soon looked serious. he let the force flow threw him. he feels his power growing again.*

'Damn i wish i had my second lightsaber with me'. he thinks*

S1DC
03-15-2002, 04:19 PM
Hey, TK can come back. Hes not as strong, not by far, by he can still fight some. Next time you die though, TK, your DEAD.

just testing this code.

Wraith 8
03-15-2002, 04:57 PM
*Corzip was surounded by a light orange aura. you could just feel the power he was giving off. He walked up untill 4 meters of Ogken. Corzip had his eyes closed and his head down on his chest.
Then he opened his eyes and turned it so he just could see Ogken.
Corzip was feeling nervous. that last fight took a lot of him. but he had plenty of time to recharge his powers. he felt ok.*

So Ogken. you refuse to die hah? if you were just a normal man, i would knock you out and take you to the authority.

Redwing
03-22-2002, 01:27 AM
((OOS: Ummm, HELLO, Jared, POST))

Wraith 8
03-22-2002, 03:35 AM
((OOS: well he last asked me not to kill him yet :D.... but... i almost cant resist))

S1DC
03-23-2002, 11:31 AM
If he does not post today... kill him.

Wraith 8
03-23-2002, 12:48 PM
*Ogken is very quiet. He looks at Corzip. Corzip feels that Ogkens powers are increasing. but Corzip still feels that his own powers are well matched against Ogkens.*

*Ogken steps closer to Corzip and looks him staright in the eyes.*

Ogken:
Well Young Corzip. How you have grown.

Corzip:
The more better i hope. and the only thing that will grow on you are the flowers on your grave.

*Corzip wanted to swing at Ogken, but at the last moment he decided not to.'A jedi uses his powers for defence and protection. Never for Attack'.*

S1DC
03-27-2002, 05:45 PM
POST PEOPLE! POST!

Redwing
04-04-2002, 06:35 AM
((OOS: Umm, Jared (aka prodigy) might not be able to reply for a...while. So he might need to be disabled, perhaps? Or something.))

Wraith 8
04-04-2002, 08:07 AM
((OOC: well ill kill him monday for me.... sunday for you... cause im gone for the weekend))

S1DC
04-06-2002, 02:30 PM
Krea should just use his dark force abilities and burst Ogkens head from his rather painful postion (hes been stuck in this damn force-entity being zapped for ALMOST 3 WEEKS NOW.)

Wraith 8
04-08-2002, 07:39 AM
*At that moment the attck came from OgkenHe swinged his double lightsaber at Corzip and he was just able to evade or he would have mist his head.
Corzip slahed back at him. and the fight has started.*

Wraith 8
04-08-2002, 12:29 PM
((OOC: it has been one month since Jareds last post...))

*Corzip slashed back at Ogken to keep him away. but the young jedi had some trouble to keep the speed of the Sith under control.*

You know for a dead man, you move pretty quick

*Ogken only smiled while he kept fighting CorZip.
Corzip tried to make a slash at Ogken, but the Sith kept pounding on him so that Corzip had no way to make an attack.*

S1DC
04-08-2002, 12:37 PM
Meanwhile, back in the Force:

Krea feels... but not the same as before. He remembers his dark nature... he can feel it. But he cannot use it. he feels weak... he feels as if his mind is reaching out all arond him, wanting to learn...

NO! I ALREADY KNOW ALL OF THIS! MY KNOWLEDGE IS THIS FAR ALREADY!

Wait, i am not trying to learn... i am trying to help!

I AM GIVING OFF LIGHT FORCE! DAMNIT, NO!

krea feels out of control of his force... his selfish Dark force cannt break through, it does not share with the other entities.

Krea feels fear for the first time ever... when he gazes towards Dan Re.

Redwing
04-09-2002, 04:42 AM
Dan Re has transformed. He exudes pure evil. Hidden in his heart, he has always wanted power---power to do anything, to change anything, to make everything right, or so he told himself. Now his secret powerlust was fulifilled, beyond his wildest dreams. And now, he didn't care anymore about those foolish ideals of his...he didn't need them! He had ultimate power! ULTIMATE POWER! Why had he ever cared about those stupid souls in the first place? They were puny fools! Now he would rule them all! Or better yet, destroy them! Oh, the delight of this new power! The universe was HIS!!

The dark nature expanded with the surge of dark power. Dan Re felt even more delight as his dark awareness told him that Krea's power was being sapped away. He looks in Krea's direction with utter contemptuousness. What a weak little fool! Was he even worth the gesture of Dan Re squashing him like a bug? He stared at Krea's face and relished the fear he sensed there under his opponent's mask. A sneer played over his now twisted features as he contemplated the former dark master struggling on the ground with some invisible force in his mind. What a puny insect! And here Dan Re was finally in possession of the ultimate power in the universe! With his supposed greatest opponent groveling on the floor in fear! FEAR! He threw his head back and laughed, and laughed some more as his new dark powers continued to surge upwards.

Something in his mind tried to tell him that while the force Krea was struggling with was filling him anew with light power as dark power drained from him. But who cared. Krea could have all the pathetic light power he wanted. Dan Re would still just crush him like an ant when he felt the need.

Behind the two warriors, the light being and the dark being stepped back to observe their work.

[edit: For inaccuracies---what S1DC said]

S1DC
04-09-2002, 09:03 PM
Krea will not loose.

This is not what he wants.

He begins to fight the force... but realizes something.

Being of good force does not mean he cannot be evil.., have evil in him. Light Force is not controling, like Dark Force is. His temperment comes back... despite his nagging feeling that he must save something and do good. He feels less angry... and his control grows. instead of his normal straight, evil face under his mask... he smiles. he can win.


(REDWING: Krea wears a mask. you can;t see my face. change your post to say he sensed my fear or something... not saw it on my face.)

Redwing
04-09-2002, 11:11 PM
Dan Re is only disturbed for a fleeting second when Krea abruptly ceases his struggle and straightens. Darkness filled him to the brim, and he laughed. So this is what ultimate power tastes like.

S1DC
04-09-2002, 11:17 PM
HAHAHH! YOU CAN TASTE YOUR POWER! HAHAHHA!!! Woo, thank God Krea keeps those comments to himself... HAHHA!

Redwing
04-09-2002, 11:59 PM
LOL

Haven't you ever heard that expression? :p

This is fun...I love playing a maniacal character :D

Wraith 8
04-10-2002, 07:05 AM
*Ogken was still hammering Corzip with the blows. suddenly Corzip stepped aside quickly and put his foot out. The sith tripped over the foor and rolled away. But Corzip didnt swing at him.
Ogken looked at him with suprise. Corzip just had a chance to kill Ogken.....but he didnt. The sith smiled and attcked again.
Corzip again side slipped and this time kicked the sith with high force away from him. Then Corzip stretched out his hands and deactivated his saber. he closed his eyes and started to scream out loud. His scream got loader and loader and Ogken covered his ears..... A huge Force storm started to rise from the sky and the scream of Corzip was heard over the entire planet.
The storm was increasing in intensity and it got hard to look threw it. A lot of dust arissen from the ground and was whirling in it. Ogken felt that withing the eye of the storm, Corzip was growing in power.
And he kept growing in power.....*

S1DC
04-10-2002, 08:06 PM
krea sneazes and the storm blows away.


hah, just kidding...

Redwing
04-11-2002, 01:52 AM
Dan Re feels the Force storm forming back on the planet. Well well, it's that idiot who wanted me to *laugh* train him. What was his name? Forzip? Corzip? I think now is as good a time as any to give him the "training" he asked for! Dan Re laughs and rises into the air, exiting the Force along with Krea, who was apparently waiting to see what his next move would be. Don't worry...I'll take care of you next, oh Mighty Krea. An evil grin crosses his face. He levitates up over the walls of the Temple, looking in the direction of the Force storm forming in the distance.

Wraith 8
04-11-2002, 07:10 AM
*Ogken stands at the dge of the storm covering his eyes. And suddenly out of the storm, Corzip strides forward and attacks the sith. The sith blocks the blow of Corzip but The kick in his gut he didnt.. Corzip rushed over to the place Ogken fell too... Corzip slashed at him with his saber but Ogken reflected the blow again and a Duel started between the two. it was a spectecular sight to see. Corzip worked at The sit with amazing strenght and he got the sith in tough situations. as Corzip went on he slashed at the Sith and cut off his hand where the lightsaber is in. Ogken screams but the screaming soon stops... cause Corzip wasnt finished and cut of the arme and slashed threw his body and finaly the head. Corzip stopped, breathing heavely.The smoking body of Ogken fell to the ground. It was over. Ogken was no more. finnaly one of the sith who killed his parents is dead. only one more to go. The storm stopped and disapearde without a trace. Corzip felt strange.... no relief of some kind... he also felt something else... something was coming.
He ran into the woods*

S1DC
04-16-2002, 09:33 AM
i will post in a bit guys...

Wraith 8
04-18-2002, 12:07 PM
*Corzip ran deepm into the forest. he stopped for a moment and feld with the force ... he feld Dan Re.... but he feld different... somehow ... and Krea.... also strange.... he didnt want to be here when the arrived.. let them see what he had don to Ogken.*

Wraith 8
04-29-2002, 07:55 AM
As Corzip Ran he came along his stuff. he swiftly picked them up and ran on. when he reached the speeder he bought he jumped in and rode off in the direction of the town he landed in.

Wraith 8
05-07-2002, 07:04 AM
*Corzip rode on... and came along the places where he had encountered the other sith and Dan Re before*

S1DC
05-13-2002, 10:13 PM
i'm back, i'm back. I'll be posting here again soon. seems like we keep losing one player and the whole thing stops, eh?

Redwing
05-13-2002, 11:15 PM
Umm, hello...I can't make my move until you make yours, since your right next to me :p

Wraith 8
06-13-2002, 07:22 AM
*Corzip reached the town where he set his fighter down. he went into teh bar and asked if someone would buy his speeder.
Corzip had no money what so ever on him.
some one offered a 1000 credits for it.
Corzip accepted and went to his Z-95.

He got aboard and took off. he headed for space. and once there... he quickly went into hyperspace.

Corzip was on his way to a new adventure*


((OOC: This story ends here. for Corzip that is. Redwing and S1DC can saty around if they want to :D.
Corzip story continues in Another new hope. (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=43657)))

Redwing
06-14-2002, 06:31 AM
The sun rose above the planet's horizon as Corzip entered hyperspace far above it. The sun's rays climbed the trees, the mountains, and finally, illuminated the Sith temple...and two new statues standing inside it, trapped within the Force barrier.

One statue was pure white. One was the deepest black. The ultimate balance of the Force, forever immortalized in stone.

The statues bore the visages of Krea Tm'Rek and Dan-Re Seyah.

Wraith 8
06-14-2002, 07:16 AM
---===THE END!===---