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Evil Dark Jedi
11-08-2004, 09:47 PM
Ok here is a copy paste job of the rules:

Story:
This war is 50 years after the formation the New Republic. The sith are going to take over the Jedi Academy on Yavin IV. Here is the story so far:

The sith have a large army of 50'000 and the Jedi have an equal army of 50'000. The sith are going to land their army on Yavin IV and destroy the Jedi academy. The Jedi are sleeping and are caught unaware.Only 20'000 jedi are at the academy.

Rules:

You can be a Jedi or Sith and have a single,dual or staff lightsaber. You need to include force powers,jedi ranking,lightsaber colour(s),name,age. Both sides can have light and dark powers.

Format:

Name:
Age:
Alignment:
Ranking:
Lightsaber:
Force Powers:

((There you go Redwing. :)))


Zoric was fighting a sith knight. Zoric swung at the leg of the knight which hit cutting the leg off the sith. Zoric stabbed down and killed the sith..

Redwing
11-08-2004, 10:36 PM
((You might want to repost rules, etc (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=132021&perpage=40&pagenumber=1) from the previous thread. :)))

Revan Solo
11-09-2004, 04:57 AM
Revan take a stick lying on the ground. Carefully he went towards the sith.

DarthTDe
11-09-2004, 07:08 AM
Name:Jadyn Randell
Age:24
Alignment:Sith knight
Saber:2 staff-sabers and an original one,all red
Force powers:grip,lightning,speed,jump,throw,the ability to throw
a staff-saber,push,pull,and heal.

Jadyn saw a Jedi coming toward him with a stick,he took out one of his saber staffs and sliced the stick in half "you want to challenge me?"he then force pushed the Jedi to the ground,and
gave him his other staff-saber "then fight me"he then pulled his
other saber from his belt and started to ut down on him

Jaden Malip
11-09-2004, 08:48 AM
Name: Malachi Korr (it was Jaden, and is gonna be the same person, but it got too confusing. DarthTDe: As in I'm in a happy mood you can have it now
Age: 25
Alignment: Jedi
Ranking: Jedi Knight
Lightsaber: 2, green and blue
Force Powers: heal, jump, push, protect, grip, sense

IC: Malachi finally found Zoric. "Who was that you fought earlier. It must have some kinda cyborg... thing. And a powerful one at that."

Revan Solo
11-09-2004, 08:49 AM
Funnily enough, I had no fear when the sith pulled out his saber and cut my stick. Even so he was pulling me on the earth I was laughing.
But I wasn't crazy in this moment, I only was lucky cause I saw a jiggered steel girder hanging at the wall. That was my chance!
I took it with the force let it fall onto the sith standing over me and pushed myself aside last moment.
The sith was distract for pain but he wasn't injured dangerous.

LukeKatarn
11-09-2004, 10:32 AM
My sabers grew red, blood red. I was leaveing the unger ground base, I was now very very close to my peak. My force was stronger, but I knew it woudl never be able to grow to its full strength. My sabers turned off, I then jumped up and creeped along the ceiling. I was above Zoric and Malachi, I suddenly jumped down and said "More then a cyborg, a suber Cyborg." I drew my two double blades sabers, and fought each Jedi with each double blade. I then used Force Storm, and it went storming to both of them.

Jaden Malip
11-09-2004, 10:54 AM
OOC: What's Force Storm???

IC: "Woah!" cried Malachi, igniting his sabers and trying relentlessly to block the incoming attacks.

primalunderdog
11-09-2004, 01:57 PM
Originally posted by Jaden Malip
OOC: What's Force Storm???


It's in KOTOR where you can use lightning exept it is in a 360 degrees

Jaden Malip
11-09-2004, 02:23 PM
Originally posted by primalunderdog
It's in KOTOR where you can use lightning exept it is in a 360 degrees

Oh yeah, don't know how I forgot that one???? I haven't played that in AGES!!!

DarthTDe
11-09-2004, 04:04 PM
((you can have Jaden,mine is Jadyn))

I saw a steel girder coming toward me and it fell on me,but...I then cut it in half and got up.There was a huge gash on my leg but I walked toward him and said"your attempts to destroy me are for not"

LukeKatarn
11-09-2004, 06:35 PM
"You are a fool, Malachi. Don't be surprised, I know all powerful Jedi's names." My arms went beserk, I then surpriseingley folded out my two other arms and split my sabrs in two, fighting with 4 sabers yet again."

Evil Dark Jedi
11-10-2004, 02:51 AM
Zoric blocked Htel's attacks. "You may have for sabers but I can get them off you easily" said Zoric as he jumped over Htel and cut two of his arms off. Zoric then cut the sabers in half. "Now we are even once again my enemy."

((This would be a great movie))

Revan Solo
11-10-2004, 07:07 AM
What now? I had to play for time. That was my only possibility.
With a force jump I got on a higher landing stage in the hangar. The sith wasn't in a hurry. He enjoyed his crowed over me.
I waited, he waited.- - -
I looked for another weapon. Yes, there in the corner! I saw a dead jedi lying in a corner, his saber beside him. I ran towards the jedi and took the saber.
Activating it, I waited for the sith guy.

Rebel Comm.
11-10-2004, 08:47 AM
Name: Ardanor Starstrider
Age: 32
Alignment: Jedi
Ranking: Jedi Knight
Lightsaber: Standard Lightsaber, Green
Force Powers: Push, Pull, Absorb, and Protect

Ardanor swung his lightsaber into a sith slicing him in half then got locked sabers with another and swung his up blinding him then he stabbed another as he lunged. He was getting tired he then sent another into a wall. Then the blind one fell of the edge of the building ledge he was on. "begginers," he sighed. He then sensed a sith behind him, he blocked the saber but his was swept out of his hand, then he was knocked onto the edge of the ledge....

Jaden Malip
11-10-2004, 09:13 AM
((I don't care, I've always thought Malachi is an awesome name))

"Face it Sith," said Jaden "You cannot beat the light. It always smothers the darkness." With that, Jaden picked up the cyborg with the force and was considering the best way to destroy him...

LukeKatarn
11-10-2004, 12:10 PM
My arms lieing on the ground leaped up in the air and grabbed Jaden on the shoulders, they began to choke him. "HAHAHAHAHA! Light is nothing agenst ME!" I then focus attacks with my feat at Zoric.

Godzilla Master
11-10-2004, 12:19 PM
(Are we starting over or continuing because it looks like some guys moved a bit)

LukeKatarn
11-10-2004, 12:22 PM
((I think we are continueing, this IS after all part two, not restart.))

RebelScum!
11-10-2004, 12:24 PM
I saw more jedi until i was surrounded by Sith. I Jumped away form them but five masters jumped infront of me. THey charged...THe sith knights ran off to find more people like me to kill. I still had five masters to worry about...I tried force speeding away but they jsut ran as fast as me....I was in serious trouble.

Evil Dark Jedi
11-10-2004, 01:23 PM
((We are continuing))

Zoric jumped over Htel ad then jumped up. He watched Htel fighting another jedi..

Jaden Malip
11-10-2004, 01:44 PM
Malachi tried punching Htel in the chest, but heard a loud clang and a crunch as he hit a solid metal chest plate and got two broken knuckles. As soon as his fist hit the metal he gave into his anger and released a blast of lightning, freeing him from the Cyborgs grasp. Malachi stood up after being thrown backwards from the shot of dark energy and raised his arms slightly, his palms facing forwards. His lightsabers flew into his hands and ignited.

Godzilla Master
11-10-2004, 03:46 PM
Name: Xeno Xillian
Age: 28
Side: Jedi
Ranking: Jedi Knight
Powers: Jump, Lighting, Push, Heal, Saber throw and Mind control.

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Xeno uses force push to push Jadyn to the ground then Xeno pulls out his lightsaber again.

DarthTDe
11-10-2004, 06:10 PM
"I say to you again,get ready to die!"I raced to him and cut down,and again and again,until he pushed me down.When he did,I was waiting for him.Igot up,and cut one of his left-hand fingers off.

Revan Solo
11-11-2004, 08:10 AM
I defensed myself as good as possible. But I noticed early that he was stronger than me.
I got tired.
Suddenly there was a chance for him to beat me. I was amazed but I could turn over, so that he only cuted my finger. I had no time to care about it cause it got dangerous for me.

DarthTDe
11-11-2004, 02:04 PM
"foolish Jedi,you will die like the others...prepare"I jumped high in the sky,ready to slice down...

Godzilla Master
11-11-2004, 06:57 PM
As he did that Xeno shot out cutting Jadyn's Left foot toes "An eye for an eye I say".

Revan Solo
11-12-2004, 04:48 AM
The sith jumped high in the air. I was amazed but my saber was aimed at him and he jumped into it. He was penetrated.
I didn't know if he was dead, so I let him where he was and run to a ship.

LukeKatarn
11-12-2004, 04:29 PM
"EAT THIS JEDI!" I raise my arm and aim it toward Malachi. My arm slowly closes, and Malachi starts floating and his neck hurts. IT WAS FORCE GRIP I WAS USEING ON HIM!

Evil Dark Jedi
11-12-2004, 06:25 PM
Zoric looked back again and saw Htel choking Malachi. Zoric turns around and runs at Htel sabers out straight...

LukeKatarn
11-12-2004, 06:31 PM
Senseing it but barley, I dodge out of the way, or so I thought. My left hip was gone, and I was on the ground. My arms were back, but there was no hope for my hip. Not when there were two jedi around and my sabers were ruined. I escaped to my underground lab. There they fixed me up, and the sabers became ONE WITH MY ARMS! There were now 4 double bladed sabers, one on the bottem of each hand. And they could fold up into my arms. I was ready, ready for anything.

DarthTDe
11-12-2004, 10:10 PM
"AAAAAARGH!"I yelled.I fell to the ground,in pain.seconds later I used heal and ran to their ship and made it to the cargo hold before they took off.I made it to the front of the ship,killing every jedi along the way,and finally met the jedi((Xeno and Revan)).I took out my sabers and started to do battle with them at the same time.Minutes later,I threw Xeno out of the ship,and as I did,i yelled down,"An apple for a leg,as we Sith say""I see we're evenly matched..."

Revan Solo
11-13-2004, 02:27 AM
[( Who is Xeno?)]
I activated my lightsaber.
"You are on the dark side. It is not too late to turn around and choose the light side of the force. You are not strong enough to resist against the light!!"

DarthTDe
11-13-2004, 06:54 AM
"You're right"I kneeled down.But then I jumped up and sliced Revan's arm.

Redwing
11-13-2004, 12:00 PM
((Originally posted by Revan Solo
[( Who is Xeno?)]

Godzilla Master's character, I believe. :)))

darth_nemisis
11-13-2004, 12:06 PM
Name: Darth Nemisis
Age: 29
Alignment: Sith
Ranking: Knight
Lightsaber: Two red lightsabers that can conjoin into a double blade.
Force Powers: Basic, Force Lightning, Force Choke, Force Crush, Drain Life.

darth_nemisis

Godzilla Master
11-13-2004, 03:31 PM
Xeno grabbed the ledge of the ship and jumped back in the ship. Xeno then assisted Reven by kicking Jadyn to the ground and then slashed his shoulder. "Need some help jedi" Xeno said to Revan.

LukeKatarn
11-13-2004, 05:05 PM
As a cyborg combined with Durges DNA, I could run fast too, faster then teir 3 speed, that was my only other power better then teir 3. Running and running I reappear at the bays, I activate my sabers and prepare myself to battle more Jedi.

Jaden Malip
11-14-2004, 03:02 AM
Malachi saw Htel racing at unbelievable speeds towards the Jedi he had freed himself from. "COWARD!!! COME BACK AND FINISH WHAT WAS STARTED!!!!!"

Revan Solo
11-14-2004, 04:40 AM
"Stupid Sith!" I turned around myself and spiked his body. He was dead and I was tired and had lost my arm!

DarthTDe
11-14-2004, 08:40 AM
((Revan,was that me that you killed?):mad:

LukeKatarn
11-14-2004, 10:47 AM
"COWARD!? Why am I a coward? I almost died, I had to escape. You stupid Jedi do it more often too! Now wher were we?" My sabers fold out of my arms and I attack.

Jaden Malip
11-14-2004, 11:41 AM
"You should have take death while you had the chance" said Malachi. He leapt forward with a sabers going left and right, one over the other.

LukeKatarn
11-14-2004, 11:58 AM
"You're a fool. You put all your power in an attack, no speed. It is good to sacrafaice speed for power, but not all of it." I easily move out of the way.

Jaden Malip
11-14-2004, 12:11 PM
Malachi turned round, slashing with one saber while throwing the other guiding it with the force. It did no damage and returned. Malachi took up a defensive stance, waiting for the attack.

LukeKatarn
11-14-2004, 04:34 PM
I jumped on the ceiling, waiting for an attack. I purpousely deattach one of my hands and it goes creeping down. It starts to clib up Malachi's body, it gets on the neck and sabers activate!


OOC: Better escape Jaden. :)

Redwing
11-14-2004, 07:42 PM
((Originally posted by DarthTDe
((Revan,was that me that you killed?):mad:

I hope not...seems like godmoding...although this RP is already pretty insane XD))

Revan Solo
11-15-2004, 03:58 AM
Originally posted by DarthTDe
((Revan,was that me that you killed?):mad: ( My character thought so, you can say that your guy is alive!)

Mak Corran
11-15-2004, 05:16 AM
Mak flipped over a siths head, but all he got for it was a nasty wound down his leg. Many Sith and Jedi alike were collapsing onto the floor beside him. Mak stabbed the sith in the chest and the sith joined the rest of his friends. He saw that a group of jedi, including master Zoric were standing over a pile of dead bodies and Mak ran over to meet them.

LukeKatarn
11-15-2004, 05:17 AM
Originally posted by Revan Solo
"Stupid Sith!" I turned around myself and spiked his body. He was dead and I was tired and had lost my arm! You said he was dead, not you thought that he was dead.

Revan Solo
11-15-2004, 10:12 AM
Originally posted by LukeKatarn
You said he was dead, not you thought that he was dead. Yes! Cause if my character is sure that he is dead, I cannot write that he thought that only! :o

Jaden Malip
11-15-2004, 10:32 AM
Malachi felt a creeping on his neck, and turned to see a hand. With a saber. He let out a cry, and unleashed a devestating lightning blast, magnetising the hand and rendering it useless. The saber also temporarily shorted out, as well as his own. "This can't be good."

DarthTDe
11-15-2004, 01:43 PM
I got up,bleeding,and struk Revan with amazing force,rendering him useless,I also spat on him and put the ship down in a dive and jumped out of it.I turned and watched the fireworks.

Evil Dark Jedi
11-15-2004, 08:11 PM
Originally posted by Redwing
((

...although this RP is already pretty insane XD))

((Hope that is a joke. :D))

Zoric ran with Malachi but tripped when they reached the place where Htel was. Zoric got up and saw Malachi's and Htel's sabers short out. Zoric ran in and tossed Malachi one of his sabers. "Lets do this" said Zoric.

DarthTDe
11-16-2004, 06:45 PM
I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!

Evil Dark Jedi
11-16-2004, 09:13 PM
((I forgot what are you Darth? A sith or jedi or neutral?))

Revan Solo
11-17-2004, 06:11 AM
I stand up. The ship was standing on the earth and this sith wasn't here any more. I get out and saw the sith fighting against another jedi. I must help him. With one arm!

Jaden Malip
11-17-2004, 07:51 AM
Originally posted by DarthTDe
I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!

Well that kinda very god modeing.

DarthTDe
11-17-2004, 12:19 PM
Originally posted by Evil Dark Jedi
((I forgot what are you Darth? A sith or jedi or neutral?))

I'm a sith.Sorry Jaden Malip:D

Jaden Malip
11-17-2004, 01:24 PM
((How about you just join in the battle, instead of destroying everyone? :D )

Redwing
11-17-2004, 06:11 PM
Originally posted by DarthTDe
I healed myself and ran towards Zoric,Malachi,and Htel and started fightin,it didn't take long to cut down Malachi,and Htel,but Zoric was a battle!

((NO GODMODING. :p

No, not even in a thread which involves nothing but fighting :D))

Evil Dark Jedi
11-18-2004, 12:43 AM
Originally posted by Redwing
((NO GODMODING. :p

No, not even in a thread which involves nothing but fighting :D))


((True but the very beginning had a story and now it is just a huge fight. :D Oh and Darth Htel is a cyborg and very tough and Malachi is very tough aswell. So is my char is you said. They are all pretty strong.))

LukeKatarn
11-18-2004, 10:47 AM
((Yeah and Htel is a Sith, WHY THE CRAP WERE YOU ATTACKING ME!? And not only is Htel a cyborg, he's a Cyborg combined with Durges DNA. he is also a cheif master of the sith but was though to die, but that wasn't Htel, that was Therk, after supposedly dieing he switched around his name and last name and put them backwards and got Htel Kreht. So let's continue, and BTW even if one of my sabers burns out I still have three more double bladed sabers:p )) "Get out of here. This is no place for you." i said to whatever Darth's char is (forgot the name). "And to you Malachi, what's up with the lightning? And I have THREE MORE DOUBLE BLADED SABERS!" ((And to Revan Yes! Cause if my character is sure that he is dead, I cannot write that he thought that only! You can't be sure he's dead because he isn't dead. And you didn't say you were sure he was dead you said he WAS dead. Yo ushould edit it to you think he's dead because you can't be sure he's dead when he isn't.))

Jaden Malip
11-18-2004, 11:03 AM
"You want to know about the lightning?" Malachi said. He sensed a padawan coming to help, so he turned around and filled the learners body with electricity. "I am no longer a Jedi. But neither am I Sith. I'll use the force how I want to use the force. However, I'll team up with this Jedi. To destroy you."

LukeKatarn
11-18-2004, 11:09 AM
"And why do you hate me? You join with Jedi when you don't when you are nuetural, HA! You make me laugh," 3 remaining sabers go to full strength and I jump in the air and attack.

Jaden Malip
11-18-2004, 11:19 AM
"You took the strike against my former self, and I hold grudges." Malachi charged up his sabers and blocked the incoming attacks before jumping backwards onto a ledge. "Being neutral lets my mind stay clear. Unlike the Sith or Jedi, I work things out for myself, decide what to do. Not live in an silent, ongoing war.

Evil Dark Jedi
11-18-2004, 12:29 PM
Zoric watched the fight. "Why Jaden? You are a true Jedi. A true Jedi" said Zoric as he jumped up behind Htel and used his saber to stab right into the back of Htel...

LukeKatarn
11-19-2004, 07:05 AM
The saber hit metal in a clank, but in broke through and I fell down. Head first. "You jedi will pay, and Malachi I only fought you former self because your former self was a Jedi. So you have no reason to hold grudges, it was your own fault."

Jaden Malip
11-19-2004, 09:11 AM
"I was Jedi, but I was forced into it. My parents were relieved to be rid of me when I was discovered. I was raised fully at the temple, my home. Even the masters said I had anger problems but my master saw through that. The Force potential. Ignored the brash feelings of revenge and saw into my mind.

The Jedi, however, held me back. Weakening me. I have the right to be angry. To strike back and weaken them. But not yet. The Sith must first die. Then, the Jedi. Zoric, join me."

LukeKatarn
11-19-2004, 09:17 AM
"You're a fool. A complete fool." My sensors go down and my eyes shut. i was alive, but bareley. Only the Sith technicians could save me, and they'd need to get a much stronger metal.

Jaden Malip
11-19-2004, 12:41 PM
Malachi ran back to battle, empowered with the force and knowing that the ultra-cyborg would be back. And before then the Sith had to be destroyed before he could leave. Alone.

Two Sith came running towards him and soon dropped to the floor as there necks got sliced. He turned, and saw a Sith Lord gripping a Jedi and laughing maliciously only paying attention to his actions. His arm was gone, then the other arm and both legs. The Lord was a helpless torso. The Padawan tried to thank Malachi, but was knocked out as the boot of the renegade connected with his jaw. Malachi couldn't help but smile as he slaughtered a group of cowering Sith Apprentices.

Evil Dark Jedi
11-19-2004, 09:44 PM
Zoric followed Malachi and saw him slaughtering sith. 'I will not help you" said Zoric as he jumped at Malachi. Zoric ignited his saber and cut Malachi's saber arm off..

Jaden Malip
11-20-2004, 11:51 AM
"You b*****d!" Malachi lifted Zoric into the air with the Force and threw him across the ice. He started healing himself, but the arm would never grow back. He called his sabers too him and ran to where the Jedi had landed single man snubfighters. He found an A-wing in good condition, it had had several upgrades in the shields. Malachi looked back, his anger flaring. "I will get my revenge." He flew to Coruscant, and found hospital, specialising in bionics. His saber ignited and was less than an inch away from the main doctor. "Give me a new arm."

Evil Dark Jedi
11-20-2004, 12:07 PM
"Damn Malachi is nuetral now" said Zoric. He went to the hanger and got a ship. He then flew it to Courascant(sp?). Zoric knew he was there cause he could feel his presence...

Jaden Malip
11-20-2004, 01:23 PM
((So, where exactly did the arm get cut off?))

Evil Dark Jedi
11-20-2004, 02:43 PM
((From the shoulder down.))

Jaden Malip
11-20-2004, 03:07 PM
The doctors knocked out Malachi with anesthetic, and started operating. The operation was barely finished, and the bio-arm had been attatched when Malachi's eyes snapped open. He sat up and said, "He's coming. The Force does not lie." Malachi started to leave the building, when the doctor grabbed his shoulder. "It's not finished! It needs the skin coverings!" Malachi's answer was a punch in the nose to the man, who dropped to the floor, face covered in blood. Malachi looked at the arm. The same build of his similar arm, but silver. There were blood stains on the fingers where he had hit the man, but they would leave. He pushed the arm forwards, and a blast of the force came out of it, not as strong as before. That would be impossible, the arm was gone. The cowering doctor flew against the opposite wall. "Keep the change" Malachi said to the man as he left the hospital.

LukeKatarn
11-20-2004, 04:08 PM
Most of the Jedi had gone, the Sith techs came and started working on me. They knew they had to get a stronger alloy, I fell apwart to easily. They took me in a ship and set me on a table, where I would remain until the yfound the metal.

Mak Corran
11-22-2004, 09:57 AM
No Malachi, you can't do this! You used to be my friend remember? You can't slaughter people ruthlessly, even if they are sith!

Mak Corran
11-22-2004, 09:59 AM
Malachi didnt seem to hear him but as soon as he saw Mak he came rushing at him with alot and that's ALOT of speed and strength

Jaden Malip
11-25-2004, 02:37 AM
Originally posted by Mak Corran
Malachi didnt seem to hear him but as soon as he saw Mak he came rushing at him with alot and that's ALOT of speed and strength
:S You do know I'm on Coruscant, right?

Redwing
11-25-2004, 08:52 AM
Originally posted by Mak Corran
Malachi didnt seem to hear him but as soon as he saw Mak he came rushing at him with alot and that's ALOT of speed and strength

((Don't double post...use the edit button ;)))

Mak Corran
11-25-2004, 12:23 PM
(Yeah Mak flew away from the battle cause he was injured and needed to speak with the council too)

Jaden Malip
11-25-2004, 12:36 PM
((Ah, that makes sense :p))

Malachi stopped infront of Mak, "What are you doing here. I have no quarrel with you."

DarthTDe
11-26-2004, 07:06 PM
((Where are we,and what's going on!?!?I was knocked out for a long time!!!))

Revan Solo
11-27-2004, 01:06 AM
Originally posted by LukeKatarn
((Yeah and Htel is a Sith, WHY THE CRAP WERE YOU ATTACKING ME!? And not only is Htel a cyborg, he's a Cyborg combined with Durges DNA. he is also a cheif master of the sith but was though to die, but that wasn't Htel, that was Therk, after supposedly dieing he switched around his name and last name and put them backwards and got Htel Kreht. So let's continue, and BTW even if one of my sabers burns out I still have three more double bladed sabers:p )) "Get out of here. This is no place for you." i said to whatever Darth's char is (forgot the name). "And to you Malachi, what's up with the lightning? And I have THREE MORE DOUBLE BLADED SABERS!" ((And to Revan You can't be sure he's dead because he isn't dead. And you didn't say you were sure he was dead you said he WAS dead. Yo ushould edit it to you think he's dead because you can't be sure he's dead when he isn't.)) (( Come on! Is it the world's destiny?;) ))

Revan Solo
11-27-2004, 01:12 AM
My arm hurts me. I schould better get a new arm, I thought. But where?
I let this sith running his way. I couldn't do anything against him with this pain.
I walked carefully towards a jedi star destroyer standing on the start place. I was lucky cause he wasn't captured by some sith. Then I got straightly to the medic station, hoping that someone could helps me!

DarthTDe
11-27-2004, 07:56 AM
((Revan,you might wanta delete those))

I suddenly was forced up by a very sudden explosion.I started running toward the rumble to find bodies everywhere."OH,CRAP!!!
" I yelled...they were the sith drop-fleet ship."I can't ssist the sith anymore" I said *neutrality* ((I am now a rogue Jedi,I've been
planning this))

Revan Solo
11-28-2004, 12:58 AM
((I deleted it :) ))
I was scared when I saw this sith who had cut off my arm running with some other jedis. I wanted to warn them but I was in the ship and they were outside.
I was surprised when he begans to talk with them, he must be a jedi suddenly!

DarthTDe
11-28-2004, 10:54 AM
I saw the Jedi that i cut the arm off of,I walked to him and gave him his arm,"you might want this"I threw it at him,"the medical facility is over there"I pointed North."bye!"I yelled as I ran off to the opposte direction and killed some sith and Jedi on my way.

Revan Solo
11-29-2004, 09:34 AM
((sorry, you killed jedi?))
This guy was a funny one! My arm! My great arm, and he threw it!

darkoak
11-30-2004, 05:03 PM
I spawn camp by the check point in a speeder waiting for any Jedi or Sith that might be around.

DarthTDe
12-01-2004, 02:24 PM
((darkoak,this isn't Battlefront:D ))


I ran forward,watching Jedi cut down thousands of Sith.Then I ran into a Jedi they called Zoric,"I have seen you Jedi battle,and I wish to join your noble cause.will you except me?"

Revan Solo
12-02-2004, 07:08 AM
After I got my arm repaired, I leaved the star ship where the medic center was.
Then I saw a guy waiting in a speeder. I walked towards him!

Jaden Malip
12-02-2004, 11:47 AM
Coruscant was quiet. Malachi had ignored the call of the Force saying that the Jedi were coming for him. He was here. They were elsewhere. And here was in ruins. Everybody, either trying to helpful, happy, or trying to keep their feeble lifestyle going with mountains of credits. This place needed a new ruler, he thought to himself.

He quickly found out the mob that was controlling this part. Nobody knew their real names, but everybody knew that they were organised crime. Nothing happened without their knowledge. They knew he would be here. Malachi suddenly got a rush of adrenilin and turned round, igniting his sabers and rolled out of the way of a sniper shot. An assassin.

Evil Dark Jedi
12-03-2004, 01:47 AM
"I dont know" said Zoric as he killed a sith with his saber. "Can you be trusted?"

DarthTDe
12-03-2004, 02:01 PM
"yes,if I would say so."

Evil Dark Jedi
12-05-2004, 01:28 AM
"Good. Now help the jedi defeat the sith" said Zoric as he killed a sith. Zoric then jumped over a sith and stabbed the soth in the back...

DarthTDe
12-05-2004, 12:56 PM
"I got it!"I yelled as I jumped,killing 2 Sith,"It feels good,now I can finally LEGALLY kill my master"I said.I ran on through the battlefield,and met my old master,"Zhor!Zhor..." "What?"he asked."DIE!!"I said as I swung my lightsaber,delivering a killing diagonal blow,"AAAAARGH!!!"he yelled.

Evil Dark Jedi
12-05-2004, 08:22 PM
Zoric watched as the former sith attacked all the sith. He is using the side of jedi kill the sith thought Zoric to himself. Zoric went ff to kill another sith...

DarthTDe
12-07-2004, 01:29 PM
I kept on runninh through the battlefield,killing all my former friends.

Jaden Malip
12-07-2004, 02:08 PM
Malachi moved his way to where the shot had come from, the force guiding him. Soon he was behind the sniper. Malachi fired a blast of lightning at the man and he flew off the edge of the building, but was held in place above the gap by Malachi choking him.

"Why are you hunting me?" Malachi asked, his voice tinted with the Force as to get a real answer from the man.

"Th..They know yo..you're here..." the man gasped "they contro...control this place....you're a th..th..threat."

"Where are they?" Malachi demanded throwing the man onto the building top, igniting his sabers. The assassin coughed and pointed to his right, towards a large warehouse. Malachi walked a few steps forward, and the man charged from behind him. Malachi slow backflipped over the man, landing with his hands clasped on his shoulders, feet digging into the nerves in the killers back. Malachi rolled backwards, kicking when he was ready and then watched the man fly off the building, and down towards the unseen ground of Coruscant. The fallen Jedi looked again at the warehouse, a plan already forming in his mind. "I have a bad feeling about this."

OOC: I am actually gonna go somewhere with this that should link the characters again :P

Evil Dark Jedi
12-07-2004, 08:26 PM
As Zoric dueled with a sith he saw a dropship coming down. It was a jedi dropship. Zoric then noticed that it had been almost a year since the war had started. Zoric saw the dropship land and jedi charged out. They were swarming the sith. Though the jedi were dieing as ther came out...

Cyborgninja
12-08-2004, 07:02 AM
(x-wing lands on the battle field and out comes......


Name-Matt
age-21
weapon-two blue lightsaber
rank- jedi weapon master
bio-a jedi master sent from the conicul to help zoric and his cause


I am here to help the one they call zoric(kills a sith)

DarthTDe
12-08-2004, 03:01 PM
I hopped to Matt,"he's over...hold on a second"I jumped to my left and killed about three Sith,and hopped back,"there!"I pointed to my left.I Tier three jumped over him and killed more Sith.

Evil Dark Jedi
12-09-2004, 12:37 PM
Zoric saw a x-wing land. Out of it came a jedi. The jedi seemed very skilled with a lightsaber. Zoric meanwhile was battling a sith master. The master swung at Zoric's leg. Zoric jumped over the sith and stabbed his sabers into the sith's back. The sith died. Zoric then went to battle another sith..

Jaden Malip
12-09-2004, 01:29 PM
Malachi found his to the outside of the warehouse. It was locked down tight. There were ventilation ducts on the roof, but that was around 200 feet up. Nobody he knew, not even some of the greatest Jedi Masters could jump up there.

Malachi looked around, and found another warehouse not so far from it. He looked up, and judged the distances. The second was smaller, but if he did this right...

Malachi ran towards the smaller building and jumped. He ran several large steps up it before forcing himself to fly into the air. He caught the ledge at the roof and swung his way up. Malachi walked to the other edge of the roof, and turned round facing his target. He used his Force Speed and ran then jumped towards the other building. His torso crashed into the side of the warehouse but he managed to get a hand on the roof. He got his breath back and clambered up.

With a hiss in the cold night Malachi ignited his sabers, and cut open the air vent. He silently jumped down and looked inside. There was nobody to be seen so he finished the drop. As soon as he had landed alarm bell rang in his head, and he rolled to the left as dozens of bright red laser fired into the ground right where he was. This was going to be more difficult than first anticipated.

Cyborgninja
12-09-2004, 06:52 PM
Originally posted by Evil Dark Jedi
Zoric saw a x-wing land. Out of it came a jedi. The jedi seemed very skilled with a lightsaber. Zoric meanwhile was battling a sith master. The master swung at Zoric's leg. Zoric jumped over the sith and stabbed his sabers into the sith's back. The sith died. Zoric then went to battle another sith..


(kills more sith) Zoric all u okay the council was senseing disturbes and heard your call

Evil Dark Jedi
12-15-2004, 12:04 AM
"Yes we are ok. The sith are retreating. At last we may be able to stay here on Rhen Var and establish a new Jedi Academy" said Zoric to Matt.

Cyborgninja
12-15-2004, 11:18 AM
Excellent We shall start a new aceamdey

Evil Dark Jedi
12-15-2004, 07:55 PM
Zoric went into the Republic Senate chamber and said "The sith are retreating. We are going to establish a new academy here on Rhen Var."

Sabre_Fett
12-16-2004, 01:32 PM
Name:Visper
Age:14
Alignment:Sith
Ranking:Knight
Lightsaber:Single, Red
Force Powers:Lightning Crush Grip Life Drain

Bio: Visper A young Jedi Knight Very strong for his age The youngest to become a Knight Then turned to the dark side...
Now he is the one of the dark lords Most trusted Sith. But the dark lord isint sure to raise him to master yet... He is currentle training students on korriban.


*In the academy on korriban*

Students feed into your anger that what gives you your dark po-

*large explosion and jedis storm in*

*Visper and all of the sith masters start fighting the jedis then visper runs to his ship traveling to the dark lords ship giving him the news*

DarthTDe
12-30-2004, 08:29 PM
I ran to my ship and found three Sith planting bombs.,"hey!what're you doing!?"I ran atthem and dispatched them easily,"well,that was easy"I said,but suddenly,my ship blew up,and I was killed in the wreckage.(I will return)