Vikinor
03-04-2005, 08:38 PM
This is a story that is like a LOTR/Norse mythology mix. I made it while I was bored in school so if it sucks (which it does) I already know. I am just putting this on here to see if I should even put an effort into continuing the story.
Chapter 1
The three vikings trudged along in the snow. They did not ask to do the task that was appointed to them, but they could not refuse what the Elder of the village said. Some Norse Orcs had ben attacking their village recently and pillaging all their treasures. They had to go to the Orc encampment and kill every Orc they could find. Such a task was appointed to only the strongest and bravest of all the warriors in the village. And the Elder was not wrong in his decision of picking the three best warriors of the village. He appointed Ragnar, Sven and Ulf. They were the toughest vikings in the whole region so if they could not handle this task then no one else would be able to either.
Well I already continued the story. Here is the rest.
Continue of Chapter 1
Ragnar was the strongest of the three. He was appointed as the leader of the group. He was a muscular man with brown hair and brown eyes. He resembled the englishmen because he had no beard. His father had been a Viking Beserker and that inspired him to become a great warrior. From the time that he was 7 he had always went to the warriors hall to talk to the warriors of the village and also learn certain fighting techniques from them.
Sven was the next warrior. He and Ragnar had often competed in duels to see who was stronger. Sven often lost and had reminders of those losses from some meager scars on his arm. Sven had blonde hair and blue eyes. He had a short beard and often teased Ragnar of being womanish because he did not have one. He had crafted weapons and armour in his fathers blacksmith shop since he was 9 and had learned to master just about all of the weapons he crafted.
Ulf was the weakest of the three only because he practiced archery more than swordcraft. He had red hair and green eyes. He had ben told that he looked like the god Thor so he had a long beard and always carried a giant war hammer so he could look as close to Thor as he could. He had ben inspired to practice archery because of a battle where he had almost lost his life. Trolls were attacking his village and they had destroyed his home. He ran outside and then was surrounded by five of them with giant axes. He had no escape, but just as he was about to be chopped by one of the trolls an arrow whizzed over his head and hit the Troll right between the eyes. He had lost his entire family on that day which he remembered well because it was the day he turned 10 and since then the viking who shot the arrow and saved his life had adopted him and tought him the ways of archery.
Chapter 1
The three vikings trudged along in the snow. They did not ask to do the task that was appointed to them, but they could not refuse what the Elder of the village said. Some Norse Orcs had ben attacking their village recently and pillaging all their treasures. They had to go to the Orc encampment and kill every Orc they could find. Such a task was appointed to only the strongest and bravest of all the warriors in the village. And the Elder was not wrong in his decision of picking the three best warriors of the village. He appointed Ragnar, Sven and Ulf. They were the toughest vikings in the whole region so if they could not handle this task then no one else would be able to either.
Well I already continued the story. Here is the rest.
Continue of Chapter 1
Ragnar was the strongest of the three. He was appointed as the leader of the group. He was a muscular man with brown hair and brown eyes. He resembled the englishmen because he had no beard. His father had been a Viking Beserker and that inspired him to become a great warrior. From the time that he was 7 he had always went to the warriors hall to talk to the warriors of the village and also learn certain fighting techniques from them.
Sven was the next warrior. He and Ragnar had often competed in duels to see who was stronger. Sven often lost and had reminders of those losses from some meager scars on his arm. Sven had blonde hair and blue eyes. He had a short beard and often teased Ragnar of being womanish because he did not have one. He had crafted weapons and armour in his fathers blacksmith shop since he was 9 and had learned to master just about all of the weapons he crafted.
Ulf was the weakest of the three only because he practiced archery more than swordcraft. He had red hair and green eyes. He had ben told that he looked like the god Thor so he had a long beard and always carried a giant war hammer so he could look as close to Thor as he could. He had ben inspired to practice archery because of a battle where he had almost lost his life. Trolls were attacking his village and they had destroyed his home. He ran outside and then was surrounded by five of them with giant axes. He had no escape, but just as he was about to be chopped by one of the trolls an arrow whizzed over his head and hit the Troll right between the eyes. He had lost his entire family on that day which he remembered well because it was the day he turned 10 and since then the viking who shot the arrow and saved his life had adopted him and tought him the ways of archery.