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Fate's Decision
10-20-2005, 01:46 AM
In a time before the clone wars, there was a planet that does not still exist in the star wars galaxy. This legend planet Niaj Qad, was fairly dirtlike, but was hard as rock. Within it, one of the first jedi councils, one where young jedi would learn the art of the force, was rumored to exist.

Rumors are not always a good thing, for the Civic Empire got wind of this, and decided that if an army of "jedi" with as much power as told was created, they would overthrow their rule on the galaxy. The best way to solve this was to prevent it from happening.

So the Empire sent down a large army of their most brutal troops to destroy the Jedi Keep. As the council realized that enemies had surrounded the entire keep (nearly a mile of enemy lines), they had instructed all young jedi in training to report to the main back upper hideout. This was the most secure area in the keep, and the Civic troops would not be able to find it without first killing all the senior jedi. If the hideout fell, all hope of a full future jedi council was lost.

Commander Eptima, a General in the Civic Empire was transporting a large cargo (approx. 800, including weapons and vehicles) to one of the Civic Bases on Naboo, when he was given new orders to deploy the troops on Niaj Qad and join up with the other posted army to attack the Keep. Eptima was secretly astonished by the Civic Empire's treachery, and came to agreement with the onboard soldiers that they would instead become traitors and attack the Civic's already posted army (actually, one disagreed, bet he's dead now:)) Commander Eptima plotted the flight vehicles to attack head on, and the ground units to be deployed along a canyon to the east of the plain where the battle would be taking place. Now, you can play.


-Civic Army-
NA-AT: kind of like a tank only it fires large, devestating electrical balls and slot launch, rather than a cannon.
AO-OT: long hovering vehicle with large outer skull, much like a battering ram, two small cannons on either side
Speeder Bike: (less modernized)
RIG fighters: flat disk-like starfighters
Grand Starfighters: outmatches the RIG fighters by speed and firepower, long and curved
Piercers: (see #8)

-Eptima's Army-
TIT-AT: much like an IT-TE, main cannons shoot combustion missles
Civic Hovercraft: transportation only, holds up to 15 troops
Civic Starfighter: the trusters come in front on both sides, like pinchers, and the blasters are in between, much faster than the RIG fighters
Orbital Destroyer: big, floating boxes that fire Orbital Blasts on transmission, kept at a safe distance

-Jedi Council-
Defence Cannon: take the appearance of a Geonosian cannon but shoot small bombs that explode on contact
Router Bombs: giant vehicle bombs that the jedi drive out to the enemy vehicles and eject 3 seconds before detonation
Window Launchers: standard anti-aircraft missle launchers that are positioned under the overhangs of the keep, designed to lock onto enemy aircraft with a salvo that splits up to attack the enemy at all angles, unfortunately, the Jedi found that they were low on missles and began to shoot only one at a time
Jedi Starfighter: (less modernized)

10-20-2005, 01:53 PM
Character Info.

Name: Zion Romantix
Age: 21
Faction: Jedi
Class: Jedi Knight
Equipment: One Blue Lightsaber, Basic Jedi robe, One mine, Binoculars
Strengths: sword skills, Force powers, speed
Weakness: Piloting skills

Renegade Angel
10-20-2005, 03:49 PM
Name: Gus Kenobi
Age: 28
Faction: Jedi Council
Class: Jedi Master
Equipment: One Green saber, Black Jedi Master Robes
Strengths: Acroabtic Lightsaber Combat, Force Powers, Will, Stealth
Weakness: Blaster Skills, Piloting Airborne crafts, Explosives
Bio: After the battle for sector 64, and the epic saga of the evil Phantom, Gus and Kaitlyn, his girlfreind, decided to leave the Rebels and go to the place where they were needed: The Jedi Council. After many years of harsh training, Gus officialy became a Jedi Master.... But alas, he left in search of his parents. He wondered the galaxy for many years. He finally found them, on the most unexpected place... The destroyed ruins of Exar Kun's tomb. They were dead. It looked like they had died just recently. He was angry, but his darkness deep within him controlled his emotions.(See the Phantom RPGs) He left in search of Kailtny, but he could not find her. Finally, he gave up and went back to the jedi.

10-20-2005, 04:04 PM
(Hey Rennegade this is set before the Clone wars so our whole phantom stuff hasn't happened yet, heck our guys havnt even been born)

Zion looked through his binoculars. He could see the aproaching army coming at them with great pace. He looked down at the Jedi soldiers.
"Ready the cannons" He heard a voice yell
Zion watched as some Jedi manned router bombs. That job was suicide. Even if you managed to eject you had to fight of a hoard of enemies. Even if you were a jedi you would have little chance of surviving. Zion saw a young boy refusing to get into one. He was being threatened with execution on the grounds of being a traitor when Zion said
"I will go in his place"
They looked up and him
"yes, me"
They shurgged and threw the boy to the side. The boy looked terrified. Zion picked him up and patted him on the soldier. Zion got in. He was not good at driving these things but he could fight his way back. Zion drove out. He could see the first hoard of enemys. He drove off. He dodged fire and and men. He got to the heart of the formation and ejected....he flew through the air and the bomb went off. The explosion killed quite a few of the soldiers. Zion backed away, he was in anger of being surrounded. He dodged fire and ran. He cut at people along the way. He did not aim to kill but aimed to disarm or scare. One man he stabbed in the shoulder. The man had not realied it, but his armour slipped off. someone struck at him but he cut their hand. Zion skidded. He had heard a voice. He saw a young jedi about to be taken out by a large man with an electro staff. Zion ran and jumped. He blocked the man's attack and threw him backwards. Zion and the boy were surrounded. Zion pulled him to his feet and handed him a lightsaber. The boy ignited it and stared around. Zion shouted out
"If the best fighter can beat me, he can kill us both. If not you will let us reaturn to our base"
A murmour errupted and then a man stepped forwards. He was huge. He had a club in one hand and looked vicous.
"I will fight you....and kill you"
he moved fowards bringing the club up as he did he struck at Zion who dodged. Zion sliced at the club. The club broke into two. The man stumbled and zion seized his chance. He jumped and stabbed the man in the shoulder.The man stood for a few seconds then fell. Zion looked around. He grabbed the boys soldier and led him out of the circle. An angry muttering followed them then someone yelled
Zion broke into a run back to the base....

Renegade Angel
10-20-2005, 06:45 PM
Oops. didn't notice that.... ****....

Fate's Decision
10-20-2005, 07:19 PM
Zion saw a young boy refusing to get into one. He was being threatened with execution on the grounds of being a traitor

Probably not, all young adepts (or as many as they could find) were in the MUH. Unless he was a whiny 16 year old (against jedi custom), I doubt they would force him to commit suicide. It's your role though, and it does make it more interresting when you swap out for the dangerous job.

Name: Dyce Fondoa
Faction: Civic Rebels
Rank: tactition, seize control
Equipment: spread blaster, heat dagger, radio-output switch, Civic garb symbolizing high rank
Specialties: sieges, holding areas, sneaking, hacking
Weaknesses: 1 on 1 combat

Renegade Angel
10-20-2005, 08:18 PM
(( AHA! I know a Fire Emblem fan when I see one! ))

Fate's Decision
10-20-2005, 08:46 PM
Dyce watched through the framescreen in his TIT-AT. He couldn't believe what he was about to do, yet he knew he had to do it. What had come over the emperor? Why would he do this? Usually the emperor wanted to maintain peace in the galaxy, and he was positive that the Empire knew that the jedi council would help acomlish this. The emperor himself said he was looking forward to this new army of good. Had the Jedi Council betrayed the Empire? Were they about to sacrifice themselves when actually the jedi were the evil ones?

After a long time they saw nothing but the dull Niaj Qav canyon walls, until eventually the walls got shorter and more fertile. They were approaching the base of the canyon, where the real deal was about to begin. Dyce made a quick systems check and pulled out in front of a few TIT-ATs. He heard Eptima's voice through lots of static.
"Dyce report." "Systems online." and the same old routine. Dyce gave the ground troops orders to move out, and the vehicles to get into position. As they neared the base of the canyon, Dyce saw two large shapes appear on the targeting screen, and Dyce zoomed in.
He told his radio phone "It looks like they left a few vehicles to guard the canyon's mouth. They don't want anybody escaping. This is too weird..."
VT-459: "Target report, NA-ATs. Modified, their transmission system is on.'
Dyce: "'k, TITs out first. Remember your positions on the field. Move out!"

The third co came out of the side turret, and brought along a couple of time bombs. He slowly snuck behind the giant tank and set the bombs one at a time. He ran back to the TIT-AT and got back in. The TIs advanced and one of the NA-ATs turned in their direction.
"Exellent, the reinforcements. I'll inform General Rasco on your arrival."
"No, let us set into our directed positions first." Dyce quickly interjected. The voice hesitated, then the three NA-ATs moved out of the way.

As Dyce moved into position, he saw a huge explosion, and about fifty feet of space had been wiped out everything in it's perimises. It had destroyed 2 AO-OTs and a speeder bike rack. Soon more explosions, Dyce recognized them as router bombs.
As soon as Dyce got out of the way, the time bombs went off, causing both NA-ATs to go up in flames. However, one of the NA-ATs was still functional despite it's massive damage.
"The reinforcements are traitors! We're being attacked!"
Dyce shot a missle at the already near-destroyed vehice.
"Damn. That wasn't supposed to happen."

Then something he dreaded happened. A huge cargo ship sent down several large vehicles. They had machine guns on either side, and were incredibly fast. 'Piercers' as the Empire called them. The enemies would be dead before they would have a chance to strike back.
"Watch out guys," said Dyce. "This is gonna be a hell of a fight."

10-20-2005, 08:52 PM
I'm really sorry to interupt but,

'k, TITs out first.

Fate's Decision
10-21-2005, 10:55 PM

10-22-2005, 02:47 AM
((MachineCult? Please don't spam. :p

Moving on.))

Renegade Angel
10-22-2005, 09:50 AM
Name: Matt Kenobi
Faction: Jedi Council
Rank: Jedi Master
Equipment: Duel Purple Lightsabers, Grey Jedi Master Robes
Specialties: Lightsaber Combat, Stealth, Vitality (Health)
Weaknesses: Piloting Airborne Vehicles, Force Powers, Healing

Matt arose from the cold, hard floor and looked around. The room was dark, but he had heard something move arounbd while he was meditating. He felt the prescense of Sith. He activated his Force Camoflauge and ignited his lightsaber. He deactivated the saber's blade and crept around, looking for whatever he had heard. He turned to see a bright red light filling the room. An Assassin. It jumped around, confusing Gus. It finally landed behind him and Gus dodged the blow to his head. he jumped up and landed behind the assassin, hitting it hard with his purple blades. The assassin fell over and coughed up some blood. He moved the body outside the chamber and he walked down the landing of his room. He opened a metal door and walked into the Council Chambers, looking around, he saw Jedi of all species congragating.

Fate's Decision
10-26-2005, 12:01 AM
you play with Gus a lot don't you?

Renegade Angel
10-26-2005, 09:05 AM
Yep, I use him for fics and RPGs. I first made him up when I was RPing on some other forums way beack when. His original name was Agustus Chesterhills. He was a mage.

Fate's Decision
10-26-2005, 10:01 AM
Ok, because you kinda lost "Matt" back there.

Fate's Decision
10-26-2005, 10:34 AM
Dyce knew that they would not last long like this.
"New orders. Target and destroy the piercers!" The group of TIs split up to make themselves less of a target. The piercers were also on the move, some swerving around to the back of the TIs, some closing in gaps on the battlefield where other tanks had fallen. Dyce remembered that these enemies were no mare different than themselves. Why had they chosen to do this? He looked out at the cold battlefield. Their ex-allies looked the same, yet they were so different. He also noticed that more than the original Civic Empire was out there. He saw several soldiers from all kinds of different places, many looked to be barbarians. Had the Empire lost all honor?

Dyce's transfiction was interrupted by the sound of machine guns hitting the armor of his tank. He tried to lock onto the piercer but it kept circling him, attacking his back if given the chance. Dyce did a complex menouver and swerved onto his side, the piercer smashing into the think armor at the bottom of the TI. There were more Piercers than he thought.

The firmiliar drum insignia could be heard on Dyce's speaker. The ground infantry troops were getting closer, they had to make it safe for them. Dyce shot down two piercers tailing a TI.
"Incoming TA-ATs," Reported VI-687. A small bomb smashed into a TI right in front on Dyce.
"Take down the TAs, ignore the remaining piercers if possible." A piercer destroyed two TIs next to Dyce, and hit him several times. "Wait, reverse that order." More TA-AT bombs. "Just shoot anything that's shooting at you!"

"Ground infantry is nearing the canyon base," reported a troop.

11-03-2005, 10:34 PM
Name:Bac Rueben
Faction:Civic Army
Rank:16th Battion Commander
Equipment:16th Battalion Specialty Blaster Rifle(16th Battolion Specialty was modified to penetrate certain metal and lazers, such as lightsabers), concussion grenades, thermal detonators, Blaster pistol, and holographic display key(to open doors we don't have a key to. Only works on some doors).
Strengths:stragetic positioning, hand-hand combat, squadron combat, and assassination.
Weaknesses:piloting, mechanics, and mercy for victims.

11-03-2005, 10:59 PM
Bac Rueben was amazed at the way the exallies at reacted. Why would anyone betray the Empire? Bac Rueben snuck out of the fighting to fight the real enemies, the Jedi. They were still firing down on us and me and my squad decided to end it. We all threw thermal detonators and concussion grenades to destroy the defense cannons. The explosions destroyed a lot of them and scattered most of the jedi. The jedi that remained to fight soon felt the sting of our specialty blasters. We then headed toward the keep.

Jedi Atomic
11-06-2005, 08:02 PM
Name: Scur Jal' Daan
Faction: Jedi Council
Rank: Jedi Consular II
Equipment: Blue Jedi Consular robes
Weapon: Dual Lightsabers; Silver/Orange
Specialties: Force Precognition, Force Heal, Piloting, 1-on-1 Fighting
Weaknesses: Close together fighting

"We need to evacuate the younger jedis if we plan on having a jedi council left!" Scur exclaimed to the Jedi Chancellor. "If we do they will shoot the escape pods leaving the Area. So we need to destroy all artillery and starfighters blockading us." the Chancellor replied.
"What about the underground passage to the secret hangar miles awa..."
"The path was crushed when the Civic Fleet landed all their ships." the Chancellor said interrupting Scur. Scur thought for a second. "Well then, I'll take a group of Jedi out the back exit and find the artillery." Scur commanded as he walked out the room, before the Chancellor could add something.

(((Hey Fate, I was wondering if you could add some anti-aircraft weapon placements for the list on your beginning post maybe some around the top of the Jedi Temple? Or can there be some anti-aircraft placements without adding anything to the top of your list of vehicles?)))

11-11-2005, 06:00 PM
Bac Rueben finally made it to the keep with his battalion. He made one final look back at the battle ensuing behind them. He shook his head. The battle shouldn't of happened this way. They should've destroyed the jedi easily. He then joined his troops in planting charges on the keep's walls.

11-11-2005, 10:48 PM
Name: zaran
Age: unknown
Faction: jedi
Class: jedi master
Equipment: lightsaber
Strengths: agility, ability to calm down instantly and focus.
Weakness: has an injured leg (wich slows him down from time to time)

zaran charged at a near by soldier cutting him down. he dodged some fire. a near by jedi fell dead before he hit the ground. his old wound started acting up agian, slowing his movements. his enemies saw their chance and opened fire thinking a wounded jedi is not a threat. big mistake. he easily blocked their shots. the pain in his lag has subsided. he jumped and cut down the 2 soldiers.

he and his jedi were about to go and help some stuggling jedi when he noticed, a commander planting charges. he ordered his friend to take half the jedi and help those out him and his 6 jedi were going to go and stop the new threat.

Jedi Atomic
11-12-2005, 08:02 PM
Scur gathered some willing jedi, and headed to the back exit. When the door opened droids were pointing their blaster rifles at the jedi. The jedi look at each other then jump and ignite their lightsaberswiping some of the droids out. The remaining droids started firing and were cut in half or through the neck.

The Jedi group continued around a hill of rocks and soon noticed the artillery in the rear of the army, guarded by half of the droid army. Scur decided to wait to see if they would eventually move.

11-14-2005, 10:05 PM
Bac Rueben looked up and noticed jedi heading towards him. " Open fire!" he commanded and the whole battalion got up and fired at the oncoming jedi.

Jedi Atomic
11-15-2005, 08:10 AM
Suddenly droids noticed them in hiding and started firing on them. Scur Stood up and started reflecting the blasts back at the droids. As he sarted toward the droids his companions followed. Soon, Scur got close enough to a droid and sliced it in two. He walked slowly destroying every droid close enough to him.

One jedi fell once they made it to their dstination, but they were to get there unnoticed. Now Scur decided to run along the artillery cutting the engines. "Run along the artillery and cut them to pieces!" Scur yelled as he started cutting the power to the artillery. Another Jedi fell but plenty were left, so the remaining went back the way they came from, slicing through the droids that were in the way.

Once out of harms way, the jedi settled down before going across the battlefield again.

11-15-2005, 10:09 AM
realizing that he had been spotted he used the force to bring a table over to them to work as a shield. and he continued forward

11-16-2005, 10:30 PM
Bac Rueben stopped his fire and threw thermal detonators under the table to try to hit the cunning jedi. He then continued firing at the other 5.

11-16-2005, 11:02 PM
seeing the thermal grenade, zaran used the force to throw the grenade. unfortunatly his leg started acting up and caused him to lose focus. the grenade didnt fly far enough. the explosion knocked zaran of his feet. see that he was now exposed he quickly blocked a few shots before running to the table.

it was then that he had an idea. he used the force to pick up some objects and hurl them at the enemy. crushing 9 of them. he then saw his chance and lept up from the table with lightning speed.

11-17-2005, 09:25 AM
Zion managed to reach the walls of the fortress before his fellow jedi. The young man was cut down by a large man holding duel blaster rifles. Zion turned and blocked a few shots. He then jumped up onto the wall which was a mistake. Mines had been planted around the wall and the large grunt had just stepped on one. The wall along with Zion was flung into the air. Zion landed heavily on a rock. He felt his ribs crack. He managed to stand up holding his side. His lightsaber was gone, he quickly looked around. He grabbed a torch bracket from the wall and threw it at a solider who fell back with the force of the throw. Zion was completly defenceless. He stood in the middle of the court yard. He focused. He picked up the remeains of the wall and threw them at the approaching soldiers using the force. He stumbled backwards and tripped. He backed towards a door. A Jedi opened it from the inside and looked at Zion.
"Help....me" He gasped
The jedi looked terrified. He shook his head and tried to close the door.
Zion grabbed the door before it slammed shut and gasped...
"please! help! Give me a weapon!"
The jedi kicked him away and slammed the door. Zion was stunned. He rolled over. He was face to face with a man with a pike. The man rammed it into Zion's chest. He gasped and spluttered. His vision turned red. His body filled with anger and hatred. The Jedi had turned on him his anger and frustration caused him to yell...his yell went on for what seemed like an eternity. He opened his eyes. He stood up his blood soaked robes billowed in a non existant breeze. He held out his hand and a lightsaber appeared there. he ignited it. The red blade glowed. He turned to the opposing army. He showed no mercy he cut them down like animals. When most of the soliders in the keep were dead he turned to the door and stabbed his saber through it....this would be his revenge....

11-17-2005, 07:01 PM
Bac Rueben saw the jedi spring forward and he pulled out his 16th Battlion Specialty. He ordered his troops to do the same. Then he blasted at the oncoming jedi.

11-17-2005, 08:58 PM
one of the jedi that had been following zaran saw a unused grenade on the floor. and threw it into the middle of the group of enemy soldiers. then he did a force jump into the middle and started to hack away at them. 2 other jedi had made it to the enemy also. they were too distracted by the master jedi attacking them. and he was putting up quite a fight. he ducked behind a small wall and used hios force to hurl the table that he had been using for ckver at the enemy.

(your move. one of us is going to have to die soon we will have to decide me or you)

Jedi Atomic
11-18-2005, 05:21 PM
Scur started towards the back exit and started towards the group that noticed the Jedi running across the field. They fired at the jedi and Scur deflected the shots hitting some of the men with their own shots. After the group retreated and died the Jedi ran to the back of the Keep and entered.

Once he entered he heard blasters going off and lighsabers buzzing. So his group continued into the Keep towards the sounds. Once he passed through a doorway he seen explosions and lightsabers buzzing wildy, with some blaster fire. Scur watched while his group ran in front guarding him. Scur walked up to the main Council room where the chancellor was watching the battle below him outside. "I destroyed the Artillery, Now what?" Scur questioned after the chancellor turned around.
"You must send a squadron of Jedi Starfighters to end the blockade." The Chancellor motioned to a guard to take Scur to the hangar. As Scur followed the guard the chancellor noted, "I will have a squadron ready for you when you get there." He turned around and started watching the battle again.

Scur entered the hangar where the guard stopped and motioned Scur in. the guard started back towards the Council room. Scur walked in and noticed dozens of Jedi Starfighters, lined up ready to take off. Seconds after walking in a man walked up and pointed at a blue Jedi Starfighter in the middle of the hangar. Scur walked up to the Starfighter and examined it and the ones around him. He realized his was the only one blue, as the others were orange, red, yellow, and one other green, which was the next in command. Scur grabbed his helet ands jumped into his Jedi starfighter, ready to launch.

Fate's Decision
11-18-2005, 10:59 PM
Dyce frantically checked all of his communication lines. None of them were designed to reach contact with the GIs at such a far range, the atmosphere of Niaj Qad made it impossible. Several NA-ATs neared the front of the canyon, where the traitor message was transmitted. Dyce checked his final, most trusted communications line. Nothing but a faint blue light and a soft buzz. He slammed on his monitor in frustration.

Through the camera on his monitor, he saw a thick haze just above the NA-ATs. Putting off too much exaust? Just then the haze exploded. Gredades! A Civic starfighter zoomed just over his head, landing a few accurate shots at a few AO-OTs. Eptima was here! Now there was a good chance in the Gis' survival. They had just filled in the gap in his gut, and with his morale boosted, began to charge through enemy lines, a few exited TIs mimicing his moves.

As he entered under the shadow of the huge keep, he saw some amazing jedi in action. Though most of the lightsabers were on the ground where their dead owners had fallen, several were dancing in sync with the shots of the Empire's blasters. One perticularly skilled jedi master was using a lightsaber in each hand, with three floating around under the influence of the legendary "force". Dyce was bewildered. He ejected his electronic key and exited out of the cockpit, drawing his blaster, the TI pilots in his stead. He immediately began to gun down Empire GIs, just to make sure the jedi knew he was on good terms with them. He didn't want to try to get in range to negotiate, so he let his blaster do the work. They were convinced. Some were astonished. In their current situation, Dyce didn't blame them.

Fate's Decision
11-18-2005, 11:14 PM
(by the way, at this point in time, the only droids that are any useful in battle are stationary worker droids)

11-20-2005, 12:52 PM
Zion tore through the doors. The jedi who ahd kicked him away was gone. Zion's red blade lit up the whole room.The jedi would pay.
Zion strode through the room. nothing of use was here. He entered the hanger where dozens of Jedi star fighters were. Some people turned to him surprised
"What the?"
The Jedi had no chance to even comprehend what they were facing
Zion force chocked the man and through him onto a Jedi star fighter. He noticed a blue one....the commande? Zion used the force to throw a jedi star fighter towards a group of Jedi running in his direction. He laughed
A jedi withdrew his saber and tried to attack. Zion dodged the mans efforts. Zion sliced the mans arm off and force pushed him into the wall where he sat bleeding and moaning. Zion smiled then looked around
"Foolish Jedi" he said as more come towards him
He screamed and the force and pitch of his scream made the jedi fall back. He had to destroy this hanger and make sure no one got out

11-20-2005, 06:16 PM
Bac Rueben saw he had no choice. He was either going to have to run or die. He thought for a while and came up with a good plan. Bac Rueben grabbed the charge detonator and ran with only his most dedicated troops. Was he was out of the way, he pushed the button on the detonator.

Jedi Atomic
11-20-2005, 08:03 PM
Scur noticed a jedi break through the doors and start killing the other Jedi. "There is much anger and frustration in this one. I shall reason with him, later." Scur murmured to himself.

"Men, ignore the jedi fool before he slices a wing off. Go!" Scur yelled into the com-links before the jedi had a chance of getting out of their Jedi intercepters/starfighters. Scur's and several other intercepters started hovering and they launched out of the hangar. Soon followed were the others that were commanded to stay and follow to ignore the angered Jedi.

Soon enough other starfighter resistance tried stopping the jedi but didn't work, being blown up by Scur or another Jedi. When Scur and his group escaped the atmosphere many Civic Capitol Ships were blocading the the planet.

The Civic Capitol Ship commander heard of the Intercepters coming into the blocade area and ordered the fire on the Intercepters. Only one or two Jedi intercepters were destroyed by the time Scur and group made it onto a Capitol Ship.

"Land safely!" Scur announced onto the com-links, "We need to get out quickly and easily." As Scur landed his intercepter he opened the cockpit window and jumped out lightsaber igniting, slicing a marine's gun arm, while waiting for Scur to get out. The man screamed and fell to the ground, as Scur blocked and swung his lightsaber at other marines.

"All marines to hangar 10-2, repeat hangar 10-2!" the speaker blared and echoed throughout the hangar. Scur grabbed a blaster from a marine and started blasting marines with it while blocking incoming shots with the lightsaber in the other hand as he made his way to the bridge, followed by his jedi partners.

11-21-2005, 10:30 AM
(you evil person!!!!!!!!!!!! killin ur men! lol ill right more when i get home.)

Fate's Decision
11-21-2005, 10:35 AM
Dyce smiled to himself. If they did fail, it would still be a tremendous victory. He saw the shadow of civic starfighters and RIG fighters hatch in and out while he stealthily stayed unnoticed along the wall of the keep. Then his group was thrown off the wall by a sputter of force. The Empire was getting deeper into the keep. There would be little or no way out for them if action was not taken. Another explosion was even closer. Dyce then saw several Civic troops run clear out of the archway. "Off the wall!" Dyce's order were barely carried out as rubble flew over their heads. A Civic commanding officer ran out at a high dash. Dyce recognized him as Bac Rueben, an old mate of his from the same training camp. Dyce had seen him in action, and was not prepared to confront his old friend...yet.

Dyce's fleet moved quickly among the rubble, avoiding being seen by the army. "All right, lets move along the inner rim. We have to get rid of any and all obsticles blocking the jedi's escape path. Spead out!"

11-21-2005, 11:05 AM
Zion screamed as the Jedi star fighters left
Zion looked around. there was a jedi star fighter left. He didn't like flying but he had embraced a life of darkness it didn't matter now. He got in and put on the helmet that was in the cockpit. He pressed the ignition and flew out of the hanger he turned the ship around and started firing missiles at the ground troopers. He laughed and felw into space. Once out there he surveyed the battle. He decided to offer help to the ones fighting the jedi. He raced towards the capitol ship and docked in the hanger. He noticed other jedi star fighters. He smiled. He got out his lightsaber and sliced their controls. They wern't going anywhere. Zion dimmed the lights of the hanger and walked to the bridge slowly.

Im after you Jedi Atomic muahahahahahaha :evil3:

Jedi Atomic
11-21-2005, 06:03 PM
Luckily the astromech units were unnoticed and started fixing the controls in the starfighters, as soon as the Dark Jedi left the hangar.


Scur blocking and shooting the blaster as he made his way to the bridge. Soon he came to a door and all troopers were dead, so he unignited his saber and pressed the button. the door slowly opened and Scur noticed the rifles aimed at him. Scur ignited his saber and waited for the door to open all the way. Once the door was opened all the way, the blasting started and Scur and jedi partners started blocking while Scur blocked and shot his blaster.
Soon the Admiral of the Capitol Ship was the only one left standing, besides the other jedi with Scur. "Don't kill me. Please." with an assasin pistol behind his back the admiral tried convincing Scur not to kill him.
"Well... " Scur said without unigniting his saber. Soon the man thought he had Scur of guard and took a shot at Scur who was paying attention and blocked the shot as he fired his blaster at the admiral who fell to the ground in major pain since Scur guided the shot through the man's heart, with the force.

Scur ordered the others to plant bombs next to the control panel as he watched thinking that was to easy.

11-21-2005, 11:13 PM
Bac Rueben was relieved yet disappointed to lose nearly all of his men. But it was either a few or all. So he walked back to the rubble to find nething left. They first thing he saw when he got back was a tower, Still standing, but in critical condition.

Fate's Decision
11-22-2005, 12:32 AM
Dyce had 4 following cover troops as he entered the inner rim. He looked around for any sign of the crimson of the new civic garb. Dyce was glad he was not yet up to date, or he could have had his head sliced off by the powerful jedi lightsabers.

The earth slowly began to vibrate and a low pitch rising higher and higher, a large door of some kind being opened. Dyce instinctively ducked and quick movement behind him caught his eye. Several starfighters of an incredible model were erupting from the keep, most were already damaged. Apparently they had barely enough time to escape before some kind of civic fleet tore them apart. Lasers flared and another starfighter zoomed into Dyce's field of sight. It immediately began to gun down it's fellow replicas. He quickly analyzed that the civic fleet were now docking the ships to pursue the Jedi. But no more emerged. Maybe they ran out of ships? Back on their feet Dyce's group began to survey the walls and possible escape routs for the Jedi. No easy solutions. He had no idea how to get any more sufficient exits with portable artillery.

"Let's see if we can get into the keep's chronospheric controls. You all have engineer training, correct?" All nodded. "Great..." Dyce looked back out at the field just to make sure he was making a correct choice. He then dashed into the keep, his garb trailing behind him. They eventually reached a narrow hallway where filled with enemy troops. They were firing on a few jedi trapped and leaft to fight their way out. Dyce wipped out his spread blaster, charged, and fired. Layers of crimson armor fell before him. The few remaining troops were taken into open fire among his "engineers". They brushed past the bewildered Jedi, searching for a luminated control center of some sort. The vision soon was set before him, the troops removed the end grip of their guns to reveal many hacking tools. Dyce watched them go through tons of programs, most of them were already into correct function be previous engineers. "Report, sir," said the nearest of the four. "The Jedi are guarding the main upper hideout where the younger jedi are being safeguarded. We have to find a way to lead them out without getting them all killed." Dyce nodded at every word. He thought for about a minute. "Not going to happen. Probably why they didn't rush them out in the first place. They're defenceless! The only way out of this one is...to destroy the entire Civic Army." "But sir that's-" "Now that Eptima's here I will do anything in my power to stop them. And that should be enough."

Jedi Atomic
11-22-2005, 08:04 AM
Scur walked out of the brdige and into the hallway. Nothing was in the hallway so they quickly headed down the hallway.Once he made it to the hallway, Scur sensed something, strong in the force, beyond the hangar door.
He decided to wait and see who.

Fate's Decision
11-22-2005, 07:59 PM
Dyce wandered the halls of the Jedi Keep. He was looking for anything that needed dealing with, could allow the Jedi to escape, or a safe way out for himself so he could return to the battlefield. He didn't have to use his spread blaster much, the jedi had made sure that no Civic Imperial who got in the keep would stay there. Dyce finally reached the starfighter dock, but all that he saw was torn wings, overheated thrusters and tons more unidentified parts. The cieling was identical to the previous floor, so maybe there was another dock above him. The only doors that lead up to there were locked with metal lapbars. Dyce flipped out his heat knife and began to gradually melt each bar. He then kicked the door as hard as he could and it began to cave in. It took him a while, but finally he managed to break down the door. He hurried upstairs and picked out the best-conditioned of the 3 starfighters. He went through a brief systems check, opened the takeoff gate, booted up the thusters and took off. He shot a few rounds at the opposing army, and remembered the GIs. Just as he was about to go beyond the canyon and look for them, the first commanding officer of Eptima's army stepped out from behind the plateau. No enemies around. Dyce grinned. They were prepared for an assault, the turn of the battle could be at hand.

Before he could react, he was thrown forward and he saw red on all monitors. He had been hit by a plasma beam, one that only matched that of a grand starfighter. He felt it getting hotter, he was hit badly. The engines were gone. He was going down, beyond the monitor screen was the soil of Niaj Qad...his doom. He frantically looked around for a parachute exit located in all of the civic starfighters. There was none. Appearently, the Jedi used the force to help them land safely. But Dyce was not a Jedi. Right before the fighter crashed Dyce thrusted himself out of the cockpit. Then the flames reached the combustable parts and the starfighter exploded, rocketing him even higher into the air. He fell for what seemed like an hour, and then he landed on his back. It was like being electricuted at high voltage. Dyce stuggled to stay conscious. He was lying out on the edge of the battlefield, his troops on the other side. Falling unconscious was like dying, he would be killed eventually. He began to stand, but then shook uncontrolably and fell over onto the ground. The sky turned darker until he was unconscious entirely.

11-22-2005, 11:47 PM
Bac Rueben saw starfighters crash land nearby. He went over to see if they still lived and found his old bud, Dyce. Bac couldn't believe it. Dyce was respected by nearly the whole army only to stab it in the back. Bac pulled out his gun and almost fired, but he suddenly felt pity for the shaking body on the ground. When he was sure he was unconscious, he ordered his troops to take him and set him on the ground outside the battlefield. A few of his troops picked him up and ran him off. When his troops returned, They went back to the keep.

11-23-2005, 02:58 AM
(im going to make this all dramatic and corney)

The lights in the hallway were Scur stood flickered and died. There was only one left, a dmily lit flickering light by the door. The door slid open and a man all in black entered. The part of his face not covered by his black hood was almost hidden by shadow but the lighting kepy flickering over his cold dark face. His eyes glared at Scur he withdrew his lightsaber and ignited it
"Jedi..." he whispered
"...Your time is up"
He walked towards scur slowly. He meant to kill the jedi....the jedi he had lost faith in....

Jedi Atomic
11-23-2005, 03:02 PM
((Sorry, but I don't get it. Did your character die or is the duel starting?))

11-23-2005, 05:08 PM
My character is about to engage your in combat. My character is not dead he has turned evil and lost all faith in the jedi order

Jedi Atomic
11-24-2005, 10:05 AM
((Ahhh I see, Ok then, Well I'll start then since you haven't yet))

Scur waved the other jedi off, not to interfere. "You can still turn to the lightside, don't give in to the hatred and anger, young one. You have much to learn." Scur stood watching the angered jedi slowly walk towards him.

((Your a Jedi Knight. Since I am the Consular II I should have the advantage. I think I should like injure you instead of killing you, like Obi-wan did to Anakin on Mustafar. Your choice!))

11-24-2005, 12:01 PM
(ok cool. And like on Mustafar with Anakin and Obi Wan, Zions power has increased greatly and he uses his anger as a weapon)

Zion laughed
"Lightside? That's pathetic, all the jedi want is power. They think they can police the galaxy but they can't. Their is no good or evil, there is only power and those too weak to seak it"
Zion smiled
"I should warn you jedi I am a lot stronger than I was before. Counceller or not you are no match for a si-"
He stopped, his red blade almost touching Scur.
He glared at him and aimed a slash at the jedi....

Jedi Atomic
11-24-2005, 11:54 PM
Scur quickly reacts with a force push to the unsuspecting jedi, making him skid back a couple feet but till standing. The angered Jedi stood up straight and then charged at Scur, jumping before him He swung as hard as he could at Scur's head. Scur blocked the swing and skidded back about a foot still holding his saber from touching him. "He has much anger" Scur thought as he pushed the jedi away from him. Scur decided to only defend, to make sure he made no mistakes. Zion started a fury of saber swings at Scur as he blocked every swing, making it look easy. Zion backed off for a few seconds.

11-25-2005, 04:31 PM
Zion turned fast and relentlessly attackd Scur not caring what happened. His blade might not connect with him but Zion wanted to scare Scur. His power was increased beyond what Scur could imagine. He hadn't even begun to show off his power. Zion smiled
"You think this is it? You think this is all I have? My anger hasn't even started yet!"
Zion struck at the walls. He connected with a control pannel and a door slid bewtween the two fighters, Zion smiled. The light flcikered and died. The corridoor was now in complete darkness. Zion moved silently. His plan was simple. To kill Scur in anyway possible....

11-26-2005, 12:40 AM
(oooo fnice fight u 2 i want to see more now lol)
zaran was saddened by his oppenents lack of loyalty. he had sacrificed his own men to try to kill him. it didnt matter now the man had dissapeared. so he decided to head back to the keep to help defend them. when he got there he saw 14 soldiers trying to break into the keep. he threw his light saber killing 9 of them. the other 5 opened fire but were killed when the light saber came back.

(you didnt think it was over did you?)

11-26-2005, 01:36 PM
Zion sneaked back into the hanger. He saw the droids repeairing the ship. He destoyed the droids and damaged the ships beyond repair.He took a deep breat and held onto a metal pole. He threw his saber at the rayshield generator and it exploded. The ray shield went down and the contents of the ship was sucked into space. Zion managed to use the force to get his saber back. He waited, sure enough a metal sheet slid across where the ray shield had been. The ships were now floating uselessly in space. Zion smiled. He walked in total darkness into a deserted corridoor. He sensed Scur and he smiled. The Jedi was worried. Zion laughed quietly and said in a horse whisper
"Im coming for you....."
His cloak billowed in a non existant breeze and he searched on....

Jedi Atomic
11-26-2005, 04:49 PM
As Scur felt the jedis starfighters were damaged and in space, he quickly spoke to the awaiting jedi. "All of you go to the Bridge and take control of it. Don't destroy the bombs, whatever you do. Also once you have control send it down to the planet to land not crash. Got it? Go!" The jedi started off towards the bridge and disappeared behind a corner.

Scur turned back around and looked around for Zion, in the darkness.

11-26-2005, 05:17 PM
"ok you 3 take those tables and put them in the hall way. you take the other tables and blockade the door once the others get back." ordered zaran
"also let us know when you break threw the firewall. we need that code to get to the secret hangar."
"sir, look at the secruity screens. that guy is comming back"
"ill hold him off. you keep working. you 3 come with me."

11-27-2005, 06:12 AM
Zion felt the ship start to move. He concentrated...he could see the outside of the ship....it was heading towards the planet. So Scur thought he could lead him into more Jedi? No matter he would kill them too. Zion smiled and waited for Scur to find him or the ship to land whichever came first....

Jedi Atomic
11-27-2005, 11:09 AM
Scur felt a presence behind him, he quickly snapped his head in the direction and seen something moving. He walked over and noticed Zion started jumping out at him as both men ignited their sabers.

Scur blocked the hit as he slowly walked backwards. Zion took a couple of swings at Scur as he blocked them. ((Once Scur thought he had a chance of hitting Zion.....((Hey Jediofdoom, I was wondering maybe we could be like stunned by some Civic survivors. Want to?))

11-27-2005, 05:19 PM
Ok thats cool. In future can you not control my character please. It's not that you're doing anything bad but theres a certain way I want Zion to be portrayed. Cheers. I'll post later when I have some time.

11-27-2005, 08:58 PM
Bac Rueben looked up to notice that the jedi were back ( dang ). Bac Rueben stealthily moved behind a destroyed vehicle to survey the scene. It didn't look pretty. They were preparing to defend. Bac knew he didn't have enough men so he did what he felt was best. Save his men and surrender. He built a flag of white and tied it to a metal pole and waved it.

11-27-2005, 10:20 PM
as they tied the flag to the poll zaran came up behind them and activated his saber. and put it right to the neck of their leader.
"surrender of die."

11-28-2005, 05:35 PM
" We surrender!" proclaimed Bac Rueben. He was finished fighting the jedi and the rebels. Not like he was getting much help from the other commanders anyway.

11-28-2005, 06:15 PM
zaran thought about this for a moment. and a thought came to his mind. if he let this soldier go it would only prove to the rest of them that the jedi were not plotting to take over or anything of the sort.
"you are free to go"

11-28-2005, 06:31 PM
Bac Rueben was surprised. He knew the jedi would probably let them live but he didn't think they were that kind. Still, he was suspicious. Could this be a trick the jedi are using to get us on there good side? He didn't know. He did; however, accept to their kindness and left to fight the rebels and recieve reinforcements.

Fate's Decision
11-28-2005, 07:15 PM
The Civic Empire launched their secret grand frigate's giant missile salvo, destroying the main upper hideout. As soon as the Civ Imps saw a good clean opening it was open-fire on all of the jedi. Only 3 survived. All of the RIG fighters went kamakazee into the remains and victory was claimed. So end the first jedi council and the Niaj Qad Keep. Thanks for playing!

Fate's Decision
11-28-2005, 07:22 PM
Just kidding. Man I'm bored.

"surrender of die."

11-28-2005, 10:12 PM
maby now we will have a chance to make the soldiers realize that the jedi were not a threat. but if he returned and attacked zaran would have to kill him. he had shown his enemy mercy. and if his enemy showed that he did not want mercy by returning as an enemy still then he will not recieve mercy.

11-29-2005, 01:43 PM
Zion sat in the darkness. Listening and sensing his surroundings. He knew the ship would touch down soon and he would encounter many angered Jedi. No matter her knew how to fight. He took out his second lightsaber. He focused on them and in a flash of light he combined them into a double bladed lightsaber. he switched it off. And stood up. The ship was in the atmosphere and was close to it's destination. Zion walked into the hanger and released the blast shield. In a rush of freezing air most of the things in the hanger were sucked out. Zion held onto a pole and watched as the ground came nearer. When he was sure he could survive the jump he ran and flung himself out of the hanger and falled. He hit the ground but using the force he did not receive damage. Where his fist had landed a creater had apeared around him. His black hood came down and revealed his now scared face. He smiled and made his way to what was left of the keep...

Jedi Atomic
11-29-2005, 06:21 PM
Soon Scur could feel the capitol ship stop moving and he assumed it had landed. "Lower the main ramp and take control of the remaining vehicles inside of it. We'll try to disquise ourselves into the Civic Army." commanded Scur as he started to the main garage inside the ship.

Fate's Decision
11-29-2005, 08:51 PM
General Rasco advanced upon the small fleet, a white flag in the midst of them. It only twisted his unreadable lips into an angry smirk. As he approached, he caused several privates to back up in fear. One took a small step forward.
"G-Generral Rasko. I...I think we should surrender. Think of what we’re doing-"
"We are in the red. There is no need of surrendering."
"Our morals, what do we gain from this!? Stop this battle at once!"
"Follow orders. Just kill, do not ask questions."
"I refuse to abide by this tyranny! If the Jedi are not evil, then the empire must be!"
General Rasco shot the trooper directly in the heart. He fell to his knees, swearing. Rasco's face changed to a crazed grin.
"So let us be evil. Hatred brings power, and power is the ultimate moral. I serve a higher authority than myself.
Rasco pointed his blaster at their commander, Bac Rueben.
"If you will not turn, you will die."
He turned to his backup.
"Kill them."


Civic War Admin Maas Corva ran down the short hall to two guards in crimson uniforms, guarding a door with two electric spears. Maas tried to walk up to the door as if the guards weren't there, but their spears overlapped without moving any other muscle.
"Access to the emperor is str-"
Maas made a wide kick and the two guards were thrown on the solid black floor. He put his Admin key into the slot and the door slid open. He walked in. The Emperor's chair was empty, the only person in the room besides himself was a dark robed man looking out the window as if he was deaf.
"I must see the Emperor immediately. Where is he?"
The man slowly turned to him, his yellow eyes locking onto Maas's. "What is it you want to speak to him about?"
"It's about the Niaj Qad order. I must speak to him now it's very urgent."
"Ahh, the Niaj Qad order. Yes, what is it?"
"It's for the Emperor to he-"
"Why Admin Corva, do you not recognize your dear Emperor?"
Maas's expression changed from urgent to a rage.
"WHAT?! What have you done to the Emperor?!"
The man merely cackled.
"Funny, you're the first to realize he's gone. I have disposed of him and taken over the Empire myself."
Maas withdrew his blaster from it's holster.
"Who are you?!"
"Rures Sith. Pleasure to meat you."
Maas pointed his blaster at Rures.
"Calm down boy, that blaster will be of no use to you," smirked the fiend. As if an invisible hand had grabbed Maas's blaster, it jerked out of his hands and into Rure's.
"Why are you doing this? How do you know the force?!"
"So many questions. There is little point in telling you, you won't be alive much longer." He grinned. "Do you know what power is? Surely you do, you are a War Admin I see. I know the force because I am a Jedi, obviously. After becoming a master I decided to go on an exploration for a grater power. My own master told me I was selfish to want power greater than the force was intended, and that he refused to let me leave. He told me I was needed at the council and I would have to live in the way the force had chosen. Without even going on an expedition, I found it. A power so great that I was able to kill my master, one who I had loved for so many years. This love-conquering power was called hatred. With hatred and the force, I was able to influence the galaxy under my control. I attacked the Jedi Keep to secure my position and have no other force-using competition. Hatred is powering the troops down on Niaj Qad, keeping them under my control. I have even persuaded a Jedi Master to the dark side."
Rures's roguish smile retained undiminishingly throughout the story. Maas practically exploded.
"You...you killed my emperor?!?!"
He pulled out a heat dagger and jumped at Rures. Rures shot Maas with his own blaster, no effort involved.
"Yes, young Maas, the old empire is dead, and the new empire...is mine!"

11-29-2005, 11:53 PM
(wow) (you do realize you cant kill all of the jedi right?)

Jedi Atomic
11-30-2005, 07:49 AM
((I'm still here, as a jedi. With many other jedi.))

11-30-2005, 02:07 PM
Zion ran until he could see the jedi fort. He showed no evidence of slowing down or no effort not to be seen. He wanted the Jedi to see the one who had killed so many of them. Zion was looking forward to fighting the others. he gripped his double bladed saber and leapt over the ruins of a speeder. He saw a white flag in the distance and a commande yelling orders out. Perfect he would be the first martyr. But then Zion sensed Jedi.....He stopped. He saw some of the advance. Perfect. He ran forward and jumped. Whilst in the air he ignited his double bladed saber. He hit the floor on one knee and took out two of the Jedi's legs. He then jumped and kicked one over. He swung his blade around and sliced off a Jedi's arm. One of the jedi without a lower leg was on all fours panting and moaning. Zion kicked him in the side. He flew a few feet in the air and rolled. He landed in a bleeding heep. Zion pointed the blade at the mans throat.
"Zion....what are you....doing?" He panted
"Taking revenge on the Jedi for what they have done" Zion said violently
"Now tell me who is in charge?"
"Like im going to tell you"
Zion moved the blade closer to the mans throat
"Tell me and I shall make your death quick and painless"
Zion moved his blade over the mans chest. He screamed in pain. The blade cut into his skin and left a deep trail of blood.
Zion focused...
"Zaran? Your thoughts betray you"
Zion left the man the bleed to death as he looked for this Jedi....

Fate's Decision
12-02-2005, 10:20 AM
Dyce woke up to a crash. A civic grand starfighter had crashed not 200 feet from where he was. The big problem was he didn't know where was "here". He was off the battlefield, and alive. In fact from where he was, he couldn't see anything, didn't know which direction to go. He looked higher to see if he could spot the peak of the keep. He saw a large cliff in the distance, was the keep located near a cliff? If it wasn't, he could always climb it so he could spot the keep. Then a AO-OT flew right over his head, landing on it's side. Okay. Dyce began to walk slowly toward the battlefield. More vehicles flew past, one by one. "Okay...that's...kind of weird...," Dyce mumbled to himself. They were all in good condition. As soon as he reached the peak of the hill, he realized that he was behind a Civic assembly area the whole time. I Jedi was in the goup as well, a very experienced Jedi. He was blocking with his two lightsabers while slicing through anything and everything. He was also throwing unmanned vehicles at the crowd, which was actually fairly effective. Dyce decided to go around the assembly. Unfortunately, he was spotted.
"He's one of Eptima's troops! Get him!" Dyce found he had about five Imerials chasing after him. It would have been pretty funny, if they wouldn't have been shooting at him. Dyce decided to lead them to his infantry...wherever they were. He finally saw the Keep. And the battle. There were so many blasters firing, Dyce thought he would go blind. Since his troops were preoccupied he turned around and shot the Imps himself with his spread blaster. This was getting pretty intense.

12-02-2005, 04:28 PM
Zion walked slowly towards the keep. Laser fire was being directed at him but he deflected it back with his duel lightsaber. He jumped onto the wall. A sniper turned around just in time to see Zion's foot connect with his head. The sniper fell to the floor below. Some troops looked up
"Jedi scum!"
Zion jumped down and sliced their heads off. The others watched in shock and amazment
"Kill him!" one of them screamed
Zion blocked back the blasts easily and then sliced through one and then another when he got to the last one he kicked him over
"Please..." he said
"I...I thought Jedi were supposed to be mercyful!"
Zion smiled
"I am no Jedi"
He then stabbed the man through the chest and his head hit the floor
Zion stood up and turned his saber off he looked around the remaining soliders stood frozen in fear. Zion stamped the floor and the troops fell over, they got to their feet and ran at Zion. He ignited his saber and spun around so fast he was hardly visible. The apporaching soliders were sliced into bits as Zion spun. He stopped suddenly. The group of mutilated soldiers were all moaning and screaming. He smiled and left them to bleed until their deaths. He entered the main chamber and continued his search for this jedi named Zaran.....

Jedi Atomic
12-02-2005, 05:16 PM
Scur climbed into a tank looking thing(Piercer). He manned a machine gun and watched as another two jedi climbed in and took control of the controls and the other manned the machine gun on the other side of the piercer. The tank drove off the ramp and he waited for a little until in the middle of the battle. He aimed at some fighters in the air and fired at the engine, destroying it and sending it down into the Civic army's men, smashing them.

The Civic men noticed that the tank wasn't for them and they started throwing grenades at it even though their men were right next to it. The Piercers with the other jedi started firing at the men and starfighters around them, like a portion of the army just rebeled and started attacking everyone in the middle of the field. Men were flying everywhere and fighters would be shot down trying to penetrate the piercers defenses. Scur noticed a tank start turning towards his so he aimed and shot right into the cockpit window killing the driver. Scur aimed back at the soldiers and fired at them. He knock many down tring to get near the tank to climb into it to kill Scur and the other two jedi.

The Civic Army did not know that it was the jedi until a piercer was invaded and were sliced as they opened the door on the roof. The jedi jumped out and started killing everyone around them. Scur tried shooting off the men from the piercer and away from the piercer. "Get back in before you die. I will shoot them away from the tank." Scur said to the jedi slicing the soldiers on top of the tank, while blocking blasts from everywhere.

12-02-2005, 08:09 PM
(hmmm well you wont kill me easily i promise you that.)
"master zaran!!"
"we have terrible news!!!!"
"what is it?"
"one of the jedi who was in the hanger has told us one of our jedi has turned into a sith!"
"what?!?!? where is he now?"
"we believe hes searching you you."
"dam get the young ones to the secret room in this chamber. its behing that screen."
"we will healp you sir."
"you cant. you are not as powerful as i. you must defend the young ones if i fail."
"also contact master scur"
"yes sir."
"tell him there is a new sith"

12-02-2005, 08:10 PM
(hmmm well you wont kill me easily i promise you that.)
"master zaran!!"
"we have terrible news!!!!"
"what is it?"
"one of the jedi who was in the hanger has told us one of our jedi has turned into a sith!"
"what?!?!? where is he now?"
"we believe hes searching you you."
"dam get the young ones to the secret room in this chamber. its behing that screen."
"we will healp you sir."
"you cant. you are not as powerful as i. you must defend the young ones if i fail."
"also contact master scur"
"yes sir."
"tell him there is a new sith"

12-04-2005, 04:31 PM
(Excellent I love a challenge. Lol. but seriously I know I can't kill you cus thats char controling, and we don't want that)

Zion continued his search for this master Zaran
He sensed an unusual amount of fear close to him. He sensed Jedi.
He walked into the chamber where Zaran stood alone.
"It's good to finally meet you Master Zaran" Zion said giving a short bow
He gripped his saber
"You must know why I'm here...I'm here to kill the remainder of the jedi"
Zion looked around
"You may ask yourself why I have turned against the Jedi...well I won't bore you with the details but I will tell you the Jedi have been weak for decades. They think they can police the galaxy when it Dosn't wan't policing...thus what you see outside"
Zion turned to look outside and watch the battle
"You see what You've done? many innocent people will die becasue of you. You may think I'm evil but im really not"
Zion turned back to Zaran
"But enough chit-chat...lets get down to buisness"
Zion ignited his double bladed lightsaber
"Once I've disposed of you I'll kill the young ones and the others behind that screan there"
Zion smiled and walked towards Zaran slowly raising his balde as he went....

12-04-2005, 08:12 PM
(LOL this will be interesting) (oh btw you have my permission to kinda control my char during a fight so long as he dont lose all of his limbs, losing important limbs, oh and death.)
"well answer me this. why do you want to kill the young ones? they have nothing to do with this war. anything that has been done to upset others was done by the older ones. it is apperent you still have much to learn"

12-05-2005, 05:06 AM
(Lol cool)

Zion laughed, his laughter was becoming more high pitched and malishous
"The youung ones are being bought up to become Jedi. The Jedi order must be destroyed. And as for my learning.....I know enough"
Zion stood close to Zaran and looked into his eyes
"The Jedi's time will soon be over"
Zion swung his blade around to try and connect with Zaran's head. Zaran dodged and stepped back
Zion smirked
"Whats the matter? Scared of little old me?"

12-05-2005, 10:27 PM
" This sucks," Bac Rueben said. He knew he probably was going to die. It was most likely the end of the line. However, he wasn't going to give up that easy. He shouted," RUN!" and threw 2 thermal detonators at the army. Once the grenades went off, The troopers were either stunned, injured, or both. The small squad along with Bac Rueben ran with all their might firing backwards to keep off people who started to get up. Eventually they found Dyce firing at the Imperials. Bac finally realized how evil the empire had gotten. He ran towards his old bud, firing at the Imperials attacking Dyce.

Fate's Decision
12-06-2005, 10:35 AM
An NA-AT bomb flew right at Dyce. He wheeled around and ducked. Then he saw somebody running toward him that he didn't want to see. Rueben. Bac was running toward him. He was trapped between a fleet of some of the best soldiers in the Empire and NA-ATs. There was no hope. Until the fleet began to shoot at the NAs. Dyce rolled behind the Imperial lines and began to shoot on them at point-blank rage. They were caught offguard, too preoccupied with the new rebels to notice.

12-06-2005, 10:04 PM
Seeing Dyce leave, Bac Rueben decided to rest behind rebel lines since he now was pretty much a rebel. After declaring to the main guy on the ground, he got his men rest and supplies at the assembly area behind the front line. They desperately needed it. They had only 125 out of 550 men at the start and around 80 had major casualties. All of them had some form of casualty and they were starving and running out of energy. They also lost their self-esteem. The whole squadron was torn apart. No longer was the 16th Battalion infantry the most feared battalion of the empire. They now seemed entirely different. Bac Rueben finally decided to rest for a while, and think on what to do next.

12-06-2005, 11:18 PM
(hey jedi of doom. im gonna do something to your char once. he will not be harmed in any way say or really do anything. if u dont like it ill change it when i get on next)
zaran sensed the soldiers. they were angry... very angry. so zaran used force push on zion knocking him out of the way of the soldiers shots.
"you cant kill him. it is my responsibility to kill him."
then zaran jumped over them and preceeded to slice them all into pieces.

Fate's Decision
12-07-2005, 10:12 AM
Dyce killed the last of the Imperial fleet. He saw Bac's fleet moving out of the line of sight, and decided that he needed some troops of his own. He ran over the corpses of his enemies, following an indirect path back to the Keep. The GIs were getting closer to the Keep to protect the MUH. That was the only mission now, besides the flank troops in the Civ starfighters, but they were getting gradually outmatched by the GSfighters. The Jedi army was losing. They needed a plan. The Rebels began filling sniping posts at the Keep. Those with supply caches filled the window launchers with extra missles. They weren't the same design, but they would still fit.
Dyce had several injuries by the time he reached the keep. He would need some med packs...if there were any left. He couldn't think of a singe plan. There were no Jedi Starfighters left, and he was not in the mood to blown up again anyway. The TIT-ATs were on the other side of the battlefield. They would need a formation plan. He ran into the council chamber. He saw a Jedi raise an eyebrow.
"I must see...whoever is in charge..."
The Jedi glanced around his shoulder, as if he heard somebody.
"He left just a while ago...I'm not sure where he is now. I can suffice for now."
"I've got a plan...give me some Jedi and show me to the starfighter room."

12-07-2005, 06:47 PM
Bac Rueben finally rested up and went to the leader of the battalion of rebels here. Upon meeting him and declaring a new allegiance to the rebels, he was given an assignment to prove his loyalty. He was to take out a small battalion of Imperial reinforcements 5 km east, behind the cliff. He gathered up his refreshed men and 75 more rebel reinforcements. They walked east, to face the battalion of men sizing up to be 325 men.

12-08-2005, 05:15 PM
Zion was flung back by Zaran.
"kill? Strong words from a Jedi!" he panted
He jumped up and charged at Zaran, knocking him to the floor. He rasied his blade but Zaran blocked it and pushed him back. Zion jumped up at once and started to attack. He put on end of his blade in the wall and used his flipped over the hilt kicking Zaran in the head. Pulling out his blade from the wall he heard a noise. An explosion ripped apart the walls and Zion was flung back under a pile of rubble...

12-09-2005, 10:48 AM
zaran couldnt move. and could see anything for that matter. but he was a master jedi. and that is what probaly saved him. he closed his eyes and used the force to see his surroundings. he was trapped under a pile of rubble... now zaran used the force to move the rocks.
"take the young ones into the next room, i will be there shortly"
and as he sent that message a single ray of light started to peirce the blackness.

Jedi Atomic
12-09-2005, 06:24 PM
Scur started firing at the soldiersa again after helping the other jedi get into his tank. "Head for the keep."
"On it."

12-09-2005, 07:12 PM
Bac Rueben was now just within sight of the new reinforcements. Luckily, Bac and his troops were on a hill with a bunch of rocks. They found out they were headed for the keep. They had just fired upon it, crumbling it a little more. Bac surveyed the area to find a potential weakness. Sure enough, He found a tent with the Imperial flag over it, signaling that it's the leader. It was heavily guarded, but Bac had an idea. He put on his old suit and walked towards the tent, knowing the new reinforcements would consider him as one of theirs. He got past the guards and entered the tent, finding the leader of the battalion. During the conversation Bac had to listen to about the new troops wiping out the rebels and jedi, etc., etc., Bac dropped a tiny charge and kicked it under the chair. After 30 min. or more of the leader's boring talk, Bac walked away. Once with his troops he pushed the button.

12-10-2005, 05:47 AM
Zion opened an eye and scremed the rocks and rubble around him flung up and hit the ceiling and fell around him. His power was increasing every second and he could feel it. He looked over at the pile of rocks with Zaran underneath he was ordering the young ones out of the room. Zion looked around a Jedi knight was quickly pushing the young ones out. Zion smiled at him the jedi looked terrified but stood his ground he ignited his lightsaber and charged at Zion. Zion laughed. Zion dodged the mans attack and struck him on the back of the head knocking him out. he the force pushed him against the hard wall and he fell into a heep. Zion raised his head and his energy in a flash all the rublle was flung up into the air and Zaran was revealed. Zion smiled his threw the rocks against the wall which cracked.
"Ready for round 2?" he asked

12-10-2005, 11:51 PM
all the sudden the rocks flew everywhere and he saw zion. across from him was the jedi knight who was supposed to protect the young one
"Ready for round 2?" he asked
zaran stood up.
"you seem to be an honorable person. so why go agianst the jedi? after all you were training to become one of us."

12-11-2005, 01:54 PM
BOOM! All of the camp around the leader's tent blew to smitherins and everything else was damaged or covered with dust from the explosion. Bac's army then charged, attacking the main army from the back. The missle launcher's stayed back to take out the vehicle's before they turned around. The rest fired at the main force of imperials.

12-11-2005, 03:38 PM
Zion stopped
"I did train to become a Jedi....then I realised how weak the Jedi were....how corrupted they were..... I didn't want to be like that....I refuse to be a part of something I have no faith in"
Zion looked around
"The Jedi were once pure....but not any more....I may be brutal and cruel but I will clense the galaxy of those who have life but do not deserve it....I am no sith....I am a new breed of freedom fighter....you could call me a clenser or an inquisitor.....or a bastard but either way I am here to do a job"
he paused
"Have you ever wondered why life turned out this way? The world is not quite what it seem, we live lives of superficial dreams. Live your life and live it true"
Zion jumped up through the hole in the roof. He landed on the top. His red blade glowed. This blade didn't mean a thing. He pulled back his hood. And smelt the air. This was the begining of a new era....and Zion would make sure only those who deserved the live did. He jumped down. This battle was pointless. Zion would stop it...somehow...

12-11-2005, 08:59 PM
The battle was intense. Many brave rebels died, some being the original 16th battalion. However, Bac Rueben was victorious over the imperials. He had few men left though. They went back to the main forward base, to recover and recieve new assignments.

12-12-2005, 08:45 PM
(did u just leave?)

12-13-2005, 02:51 AM
If your talking to me I have just fled our battle I have not left the r/p

12-13-2005, 05:08 PM
zaran was about to follow zion when the young jedi awoke. he walked over to him and helped him stand up.
"are you alright?"
"yes master"
then they heard a scream comming from the other room.
"the young ones!"
zaran rushed to see what was going on.

12-13-2005, 09:57 PM
Bac Rueben and his men were congratulated on the past battle once they entered the base. Applause roared everywhere in the place, and the head commander of the base awarded the men left a medal, and the 16th battalion (the remaining 40 members including me) were awarded a new medal and plaque of our history and our turn to the rebellion. While all this was great, Bac Rueben couldn't help but wonder if the keep was still up and if so, for how long till it fell? So he suggested that he and his new 86th battalion (the survivers of the last battle plus 37 vouluntered, equaling 90 men) set up a defense over the keep and help the jedi. The main commander agreed and Bac and his troops set off.

Jedi Atomic
12-14-2005, 06:03 PM
Just then Scur and the jedi group burst through the gates. "We've trapped you..........Why aren't you firing?" yelled Scur as he kept his lightsaber ignited and in defense stance, staring at the soldiers that slowly stopped chearing.

12-14-2005, 09:21 PM
Bac Rueben turned around to find a jedi with an ignited lightsaber." Don't worry, we're of the new 86th battalion of the Rebel army. We have come to reinforce the keep. I thought the keep would need some more men to defend it."

Fate's Decision
12-18-2005, 03:23 PM
(sorry I havn't posted in 2w)

Dyce lead his own personal Jedi group out in a hovercraft armored with starfighter parts. It was a very resistant vehicle, the armor had not once yet been pierced. Dyce found it somewhat enjoyable to run over oncoming troops and watch them fly overhead. The Jedi were at the side turrets, blasting away with super-accurate shots. Dyce went in a strait line toward the command caches, smashing into a crowd of Imperials as he went. That's where all of the Civic Army were regrouping. One was already up in smoke. Dyce insisted that every one of them be the same.
"Alright," he directed the Jedi, "coarse B time."
The jedi ignited their lightsabers. They had every color of those things you could imagine. Black, white, red, blue, green, purple, yellow, orange, all igniting at the same time. Dyce alligned the hovercraft parellel to the cache.
"Now!" he commanded one of his own troops. He punched in some commands on the mast and starfighter parts opened out and exposed the awsome Jedi cannon to the outside. And the blaster fire to the inside. Sabers soared in protection of his troops. Just a little closer and...Boom! The force of the cannon actually rocketed the hovercraft backward, slicing enemy lines with razor-sharp starfighter hatches. Down went a cache. Dyce wheeled the hovercraft and...Boom! Down went another! The Jedi army was making a decent comeback.

12-19-2005, 05:04 PM
Zion watched as the ohovercraft moved. He saw the Jedi ignite their blades. He felt anger. The Jedi had turned their backs on him. Zion wanted to make sure none of them survived. He ran towards them his blade ignited. He heard someone yell. A Jedi behind him
"Zion....stop" He panted
"Phinius? NO! The Jedi have corupted this galaxt for too long!"
"The Jedi are not evil!"
"They have poisoned your mind....listen to reason! The Jedi only want power!"
"That's not true and you know it"
"I know more than you" Zion spat
"I will not alow you to kill anymore Jedi" he said quietly
Zion turned and heard the sound of a lightsaber being ignited
"Don't do this Phinius, you know you can't win"
"It's not about winning It's about making sure you see the truth. Maybe If I fight you..."
"I will kill you if I have to"
Zion moved his blade to Phinius's
"I'm sorry master" Phinius whispered and tried to strike but Zion blocked it
"No...I'm sorry"
Zion struck at Phinius's leg and he fell to his knees. Zion then force pushed him into the wreckage of a tank. Phinius got gingerly to his feet.
"I will not allow you to keep killing...."
Zion force pulled Phinius towards him
"You....are young and foolish...maybe some day you will realise what I mean..Someday"
Zion threw him aside
"please....Zion...Do what is right...Not what is easy!"
"You think this is easy?"
"Goodbye Phinius...."
Zion rasied his hand. He kicked Phinius in the head and knocked him out. He summoned all his energy and called a Jedi Starfighter to their position. He strapped Phinius in and set a coarse to a distant planet. He closed the hatch and the ship rose into the air. Zion watched it go....He didn't want Phinius to be on the planet when he destroyed it. Zion was going to plant a massive bomb in a tunnel not known to many. This tunnel lead to a reactor core that kept the keep powered. When the reactor blew the planet would be ripped in half. A black hole would be created and everything would be sucked ina cease to exist.....Zion shivered. The bomb was hidden in his robes. Zion touched the warp bomb he knew it would all be over soon....

12-19-2005, 09:19 PM
one of the creats had gotten free. and was attacking the young ones. so he attacked it and killed it.

"why did zion leave like that?"
"i sensed that he wanted to do something. he wanted to do it so everything would stop... and the jedi destroyed."
'he cant kill every jedi single handedly..."
"he knows this..."
"wait a minute...."
"dam! hes heading to the reactor!!!"
"what reactor master?"
"only the masters know of it. its the thing that keeps the keep running if he blows it up we all die!"
and with that he ran off as fast as he could to find the short cut that only he knew of to the reactor.

12-19-2005, 10:37 PM
Buc Rueben walked past the jedi and moved his units into position. Bac Rueben took the bottom story turrent and turned it towards imperial vehicles. " On my count, we will fire upon the imperial vehicles. 1. 2. 3!!!" Imediately the whole battalion fired upon different vehicles. Eventually, after all the firing, the imperials started losing their vehicles. Bac Rueben then turned his eyes towards the imperial soldiers. He watched as they started falling on the ground and he knew in his heart that they thought they were dying for the right reason. He walked away from the turrent, not standing to bear watching his ex-comrades fall under his own guns. Maybe things could turn out okay in the end and the imperials and jedi could go home peacably. Yet, in his heart he knew this was near impossible.

12-20-2005, 07:07 AM
Zion's choice meant that all people on the planet would die. Many of them young but so few were inocent. Who was he to say he had the right to live or die? But he knew he had to stop this madness. It was the only way. His blade now at his side he got into a speeder. And sped to the reactor. It was a fair ride via speeder. Zion had heard there was a short cut but he had no idea where it was. He continued. He sensed someone was trying to stop him. But he had his mission. He had to do this. He was 15 minutes away from the tunnel. He put pressed on the accelerator and he sped away in a cloud of dust....

Jedi Atomic
12-20-2005, 05:29 PM
"What the...." thought Scur as he stood inside the keep watching the battle. "Zion!! I must try and reason with him." He murmured to himself.
"What master?" said a jedi guarding the room.
"Nothing." replied Scur as he tried to sense where Zion was. He pictured a man on a speeder with the robes flapping spedily behind him. "The reactor!!"
"What about the reactor?!?!" asked the jedi again.
"He's heading to the reactor to destroy the planet!!!"
"Who's going to destroy the planet? And how are they going to do that?"
"Nothing, just remain here and defend the Keep." Scur replied as he hurried out the door with his cape slowly raise and lower a he walked out of the room and into the hallway towards the speeders.

Scur launched out the hangar doors as they started closing. He sped across the terrain as he came up to the reactor. he moved a secret rock and the panel glowed as he pressed the code in. The ground lifted and Scur hurried down the lader towards the reactor.

Fate's Decision
12-20-2005, 07:28 PM
"Commander!" cried one of Dyce's engineers. "You'd better come see this. The radar has picked up quite a reading." Dyce was not very happy to deprive himself of the magnificent cannon.
This had better be good. he thought. He beconed a Jedi with a red lightsaber over to the command bridge to take his place. He walked over to the monitor leaning on the mast. The entire screen was purple.
"It looks as though a lot of radioactivity has just been unveiled." said the engineer, his gaze fixed on the monitor screen.
"Unveiled?" asked Dyce.
"We weren't able to pick this much up before, and look!" The trooper pointed a finger at a small dot that was completely black with no detection whatsoever. It was moving at incredible speed.
"It's nearby!" Dyce exclaimed. They all looked in the direction of the object. Zooming right past the hovercraft was a Jedi on a speeder bike, robes trailing behind him.
"It's Zion!" said a Jedi with a blue lightsaber.
Another Jedi with a white lightsaber, a Master by his robes stared in horror and whispered "the reactor". Another Master jumped and yelled at the red-sabered Jedi. "Shoot him down!!"

12-21-2005, 07:37 AM
Zion sped along. He was almost there. He heard a shout "Shoot him down!!" Zion glanced up and was ulmost unseated. He was under fire. He smiled. The whole Jedi order was now probably after him. They knew what he was going to do. He smiled and gripped his saber. He saw the tunnel and skidded to a halt. He looked around. Someone was here...oh well they would meet their end soon enough. Zion grabbed his saber and ran into the cave. He sniffed. He glanced at the ceiling of the cave and focused. He started a cave-in and ran forwards. Nothing was coming in now unless they used the only other way in. Which Zion thought too late would have been the more sensible way to get in. Oh well it led to the same place. Zion stopped. A Jedi was here....he ignited his double ended saber and walked on....

12-22-2005, 03:13 PM
Bac Rueben saw one of his soldiers speeding towards him, breathing heavily. "What's the matter?" commanded Bac Rueben. " You must leave this planet now." Bac Rueben wondered why he needed to leave but the soldier talked before Bac could ask." I was talking to a jedi and he said that some reactor was about to be attacked and that the planet would blow!" He calmed him down and then ordered him to command all units to meet in the bottom hall. Once they all arrived, they went into the hangar and all entered ships. They then flew into space, finding an imperial fleet there.

12-22-2005, 04:58 PM
Zion's plan was working. People were fleeing the planet. What they didn't seem to realise was that It didn't matter if they fled they would still die. The warp bomb would destroy eveything near and the black hole left would take the rest. Zion felt his heart race and he turned a corner. Still no Jedi. He sensed one. A strong one. Zion gripped his saber. The red glow of his saber lighted the dark tunnel ahead he could see the reactor. It would all be over soon....

Fate's Decision
12-23-2005, 09:22 PM
Dyce stared nervously at the now-blocked cave. Then at the monitor. Not even the heat being generated from the caches showed up because they were overpowered by the amount of radiation.
"Eyol, see if you can match that amount of radiation with anything." he told one of his engineers. The starfighter parts were retracting back to armored position. They Jedi were very horror struck, Dyce wished he knew why.
The computer had analyzed the only possible matches. They all ended in "bomb".
"...where exactly is that Jedi going, and why?" Dyce asked the Jedi with the white lightsaber.
"The main reactor." The Jedi replied. "If he destroys it, the entire keep will be demolished. We must stop him..."
"Then we must get everyone to retreat!" cried Dyce.
"But the Keep is our only sanctuary. If we retreat, we will be overrun. We have no choice but to kill Zion...he is very confused...his thoughts have become twisted into fury and rage, he wants to destroy everything."
"Well we can't reach him now! At least we'll have some chance of survival!"
"Dyce, commander." One of the engineers, Onar Hunde broke in. "Why not leave the planet?"
"How will we do that?!" Dyce asked in a mixture of anger and fear. Hunde pointed at the Grand Starfighter port. There were no Civic troops around, there were enough in the sky to take out twice the size of Eptima's remaining fleet.
Dyce smiled. If they reached those starfighters, they could escape the battle. If they piled all of the Jedi and surviving troops into hovercrafts armored like theirs...
"Let's go for it."

Jedi Atomic
12-24-2005, 11:15 AM
Scur noticed a red glow shining against the wall and was getting closer and closer. He soon realized it was Zion or another Jedi turned to the Dark Side, which he doubted.

Soon he could hear the humming of the Lightsaber and he decided to hide in the shadows and watch where Zion goes, and follow him, maybe catch him offguard. Zion turned the corner slowly and the red saber lit the room with a red glow. Scur hid even further making sure Zion didn't see him.

Fate's Decision
12-24-2005, 01:57 PM
(Jediofdoom your dude needs to destroy the MR I have a good idea)

12-24-2005, 02:30 PM
(MR? Main Reactor? You realise with the bomb he is carrying it will rip the planet apart? Oh well I could make it slow and drawn out to increase tension)

Zion looked around. He could see the reactor. He winced as the radiation level grew. He coughed. He stood up still. Someone was here. He tasted the air.
"Come out Scur! I know you're here!" He said in a harsh voice
"You can not stop this! It's going to happen! And the Jedi will be no more!"
Zion was starting to loose what remaing sanity he had
He laughed
He ran to the reactor and pulled out the bomb. And Planted it.
"It's over! HAHA! IF YOU WANT TO STOP ME TRY!" He laughed his mission was almost complete in 15 seconds it would be over....

Fate's Decision
12-24-2005, 03:47 PM
(WAIT a second! I thought you were going to blow up the keep and then destroy the planet!)

12-24-2005, 07:07 PM
zaran had reached the tunnle and he heard people down there. so he ran to find zion and to stop him.
he reached the reactor and saw that one of the other masters was already here.
zaran almost yelled to him but then he sensed another jedi... zion.
he ran over to scur and told him they needed a plan.

Fate's Decision
12-24-2005, 08:14 PM
"I've blocked the radioactivity sensor for now, and that returned our communications systems." reported Eyol.
"Good. Contact Commander Tighe and tell him to scramble everyone into hovercrafts and get them to use the route we coordinated." ordered Dyce.
The engineer punched several communication lines but all of them were letting them communicate. The Keep's communication systems were still down.
"Well, I guess we have to go back." Dyce said.
"It will be too late by then!" said a Jedi with a purple lightsaber. "We must stop Zion! It's the only way!"
Dyce glanced out of a turret window. The Keep still stood. But it was so far away.
"We each board a different starfighter and go and pick them up." suggested the red-sabered Master who was currently piloting the hovercraft. Dyce had come to the same conclusion. It was risky, but much less risky.
The port was somewhat guarded, but what could they do to a dozen Jedi Masters? The starfighter parts opened and the Jedi jumped out and began destroying the Keep's defences. Dyce and his troops were having trouble keeping up with them. Finally the port was free of guards and pilots.
"Alright, everybody grab a different starfighter. Our mission is to rescue as many men as we can from the Keep. Thats where most of them have retreated to, but are there any others still on the battlefield?" asked Dyce.
The Jedi thought.
"What about Master Scur and Master Zaran?" asked a light-green sabered Jedi, who was still quite young and not yet a master.
"Yes," said the purple-sabered Jedi. "We cannot forget them...Ronin, are you prepared to collect them as your Master Task?" he asked the young Jedi.
"Yes Master, I will not fail." he replied without a moments thought.
"Find them. Their lives are in your hands, Ronin."
Ronin boarded a Grand Starfighter and took off over the battlefield. The rest of them then boarded seperate starfighters as well. Dyce took off with Jedi in his lead, to rescue the remaining Jedi order.
But all for naught.....

12-26-2005, 06:41 AM
(No I said I was going to blow up the reactor which would completly destroy the planet)

Fate's Decision
12-26-2005, 12:03 PM
(Well go ahead and do it)

Dyce reached the Keep's port in a hurry. He and the other Jedi opened the cockpit to show that they were friend.
"Alright, Jedi are FIRST priority" Dyce privately commed his engineers. Soon, Dyce had 24 onboard Jedi of miscelaneous rankings. Dyce flew up and out of the dock toward the GS port as hurried as he could possibly be. As soon as he was back in the air, he decided that this time he would rescue his friends. Tan Relod, Borse H'jall, Kep Albro, Naial Penlei Bac Reuben...where was Bac anyway? No time left...but he had to save his friends...

12-26-2005, 05:43 PM
The imperial fleet was powerful, but Bac Rueben knew all their space battle plans. He also knew their weaknesses. Bac flew into the battle with his men and zoomed past them. Jedi starfighters outran the imperial ships easily. They soon landed in the main capital ship and fought all the pilots there. If they could get through, he would destroy the ship's internal systems, causing it to lose it to be nearly destroyed and head towards the planet and crash. This would send the fleet into disarray, and Bac's men could get through.

12-27-2005, 09:25 AM
Zion's smile faded slightly. No hassel? They had just given up? Oh well.
The bomb ticked. And it exploded. The warp bomb created the energy Zion needed and Zion disapeared. He re-apeared just outside the cave. His energy was low. He felt the reactor blow and felt the earth beneath his feet shake. The planet would implode soon and then a black hole would appear destroying anything in it's path. Zion knew he would not survive but then again....you couldn't kill something that is already dead....

12-27-2005, 02:22 PM
when zaran heard the explosion he though he was dead... but it seems he was not yet destined to die. he passed out agian..
when he awoke he was in a pich black room... he couldnt move.... he used the force to sense his surroundings. he was underneath a pile of rock..... he then used half of his full force to through the rocks in every directions.
he was back at the keep. and there was zion. he didnt know how or why but he had been sent back in time. he igited his light saber.

Fate's Decision
12-27-2005, 06:55 PM
Dyce zoomed in and out of RIG fighter formations and hurried onward to the Keep. He had passed over the hills and it was now in sight, but then he felt a sick, churning feeling. A small luminous sphere of energy was forming at the base of the keep. There was nothing he could do. The Jedi Keep errupted in several explosions. The Keep was demolished. Fissures were branching from it, the ground began shaking hard with the force of atomic energy. But Dyce was unaware of his surroundings. He gazed fixedly at the collapsing, still exploding Keep. His friends were gone. Then the image of the dark Jedi appeared in his mind. Dyce knew only three about Zion: he was a Dark Jedi with a red saber, he was near the cave that he had entered, and that he would soon be dead at the hands of Dyce Fondoa.
Dyce turned around his Grand Starfighter to face the cave's entrance and there he was, somehow outside of the rockslide. Dyce fired some well-aimed shots at Zion, not at his head, but in symbolism of vengence; directly at his heart. Dyce curved up, flew a short distance and turned back around. Zion was unscathed somehow through that barrage, and Dyce knew that the only way to kill him was to fight him one-on-one down on the Niaj Qad soil.
"Dyce?" his comm interrupted his battle plan. "Dyce get out of there!" It was Eptima. "I've received a final transmission from War Admin Maas Corva. The Emperor is replaced by an evil man named Rures Sith...we must terminate him if the galaxy is to live peacefully ever again. Don't waste your life on grief Dyce." Dyce cared nothing of the galaxy any more. His only moral, his sole mission in life was to avenge his friends.
Dyce belly-landed on the hard-as-rock surface of Niaj Qad, near his only hopes of destroying Zion, a lightsaber. Dyce opened the cockpit and slid off the huge starfighter. He Immediately picked up the black lightsaber blade of a Master whos corpse was nearby and pocketed it. Dyce charged his spread blaster and fired. Zion twirled his dual-bladed lightsaber and blocked all of the shots.
Dyce didn't know how to use a lightsaber but he was going to learn fast. He ignited it and walked calmly toward Zion.

12-28-2005, 06:02 AM
Zion smiled at this new comer
"I take it you're not a fan of my work?"
Zion laughed
"A man with no training in the ways of a sword against a sith? Hmmmm this will be interesting"
Zion's smile flickered. He was taunting the man. The man anger would explode and then Zion would attack.
"Your friends all died in what they believed in...A pile of Jedi crap. The Jedi have destroyed many civilisations and now I have destroyed theirs. And now you wish...or hope to kill me"
Zion's smile faded slightly. He twirled his blade infront of him. He looked over at the dead Jedi body and then back at Dyce and grinned
"heads up" he murmered
Zion flung the body at Dyce using the force. The body hit Dyce but Dyce did not seem to care. Zion's grin faded
"Lets begin" He said in harsh voice. He spun his blade and attacked....

Fate's Decision
12-28-2005, 04:39 PM
Dyce parried with Zion's dual-blade, cautious of the other end. An image of his friends appeared in his mind, and flashbacks of training with them for all those years formed. Dyce's anger swelled and he went into a raging blitz, throwing blows with his dark blade. He cared not if he died, only if Zion did.
Out of the corner of his eye he saw another grand starfighter land. It was Ronin, on his search of Zaran and Scur.
Dyce caught Zion off guard and threw a saber blow. Zion blocked it. It was then that Dyce realized that Zion was too powerful to destroy. He was blinded by vengeance, and now he would have to fight his way out or die trying. Dyce fought as hard as a force-less Jedi could. But it wasn't enough. Zion was far beyond Dyce's power. He was left with only one option. Ronin boarded his ship with two Jedi Masters and took off. That was Dyce's chance. He reached into his armored garb for a grenade just as Zion let forth a jab with his saber...right through Dyce's chest.
In his last breath, Dyce attempted to throw his grenade at his starfighter but failed. Dyce died right as a huge fissure of light erupted behind him and fell toward the core of the devastation.

12-29-2005, 01:39 AM
(hey jediofdoom im in the past about to try to kill you so when u ready let me know)

12-29-2005, 06:23 AM
(ok I'll do it after this post. Which part of time are you in? Os Zion evil or is he still a Jedi?)

Zion watched Dyce fall to the ground. His job was almost over.
But he found himself asking
"was it the right thing to do?"
Zion turned and stared into the sky. The ships out there would all disapear. All of the men would die. The ground beneath Zion was crumbling. He turned in time to see a massive hole appear. He fell through it but managed to grab onto a small ledge. His saber dropped in the lava below. The lava was rising. soon this planet would implode. Zion tried to hoist himself up but he couldnt. He didn't have the strength. He had lost the will to survive. The lava was inches away from his legs. Suddenly sense snapped back to him. He hoisted himself up and began to climb. He was quite a way down and the hole at the top was widening all the time. Zion reached the top but a Jedi stood there.
Phinus looked down upon him
"If your in there...I'm sorry master"
He ignited his blade and sliced off Zion's hands. Zion screamed Phinius then force pushed Zion back into the hole. He plunged into the Lava below and did not re-surfice.....

Fate's Decision
12-29-2005, 10:40 AM
(in the past? that makes no sense. also I'm about to start a new RPG that takes place 3 weeks after this called The Origin of the Sith...and sinse u guys went back in time jediofdoom try to come out alive so that it will make the plot more interresting.)

12-29-2005, 02:12 PM
Sounds cool. Trust me Zion will survive he will just be in a cool suit like darth vader but less darth vader like if you get me

12-30-2005, 12:37 PM
After destroying the internal systems, the ship was starting to fall apart. Bac and his men hurried to the hanger and entered their ships. Once they were outside of the ship, they headed towards Tatooine to escape.

Jedi Atomic
12-30-2005, 08:42 PM
((This is right when you planted the bomb jediofdoom. I'm doing this because i haven't been on in a while))

Scur quickly thought for a moment after Zaran(If Zaran is still with Scur) showed up and asked what to do. As Scur started to open his mouth an explosion was heard in the other room and the hallways lit up in flames. Scur quickly thought about the sake of the others on the planet even though they were enemies to let them live. "Zaran!"
"What Master Scur!?"
"Use Force Barrier on the explosion except try and keep everything from escaping instead of getting in."
"I shall try that Master."
"I'll help you." as both Jedi started concentrating on keeping the explosion inside the area and keep it from breathing(like fire) and starve it, making it die out and keep from growing larger.

((Present Time Posting))

The Bluish glow from the Force Barrier started fading out as the explosion started to grow larger. "Concentrate!" yelled Scur as he started sweating.

12-30-2005, 11:43 PM
The 86th division were speeded out right before the captial ship started blowing to pieces. The imperial fleet were retreating and the 86th division took the chance and sped towards Tatooine. Yet, Bac Rueben couldn't help but think of all the people on the planet. He knew it would mean his life, but he decided to risk it anyway. He turned around and sped towards the planet.

12-31-2005, 01:33 PM
(Because Im bored Im going to continue the story as Phinius)

Phinius stared into the lava that had consumed his old master and friend. He picked up some soild. He blew it into the now gail force winds. His robe billowed out and he had to remain focused to stay up right against the winds. The planet was almost at breaking point. It was crumbling apart. The keep was no more. The only thing that remained was a lone Jedi start fighter that Phinius had used to get here. As he made his ay to the ruins of the keep he saw a dark shape. It was a terrifying sight. A man in a black cape. He noticed Phinius and stopped. Phinius grabbed his lightsaber. The man said in a cold voice over the wind
He knew who the man was talking about
"YOU KILLED MY MASTER!" Phinius yelled back
The man got out a saber and ignited it. The red blade glowed threateningly. Phinius gt out his blue saber and waited. The man snorted and lunged at Phinius. He blocked it. The man was powerful probably more powerful than Phinius. Phinius stumbled against the wind. The man laughed. Phinius jumped up and front flipped over the man and tried to strike him but the man blocked him and force pushed him away. Phinius landed on his ship. The winds were now so strong Phinius could no longer stand. His ship began to move. Phinius turned off his saber and pocketed it. He held on to his ship for dear life. The man had vanished. The winds were too srong. The ship lifted off the ground and was thrown away. Phinius still held on. He tried his hardest to make it to the cockpit. It opened. He pulled as hard as he could but could not fight against the wind. The ship plunged into a casmn it was falling woards the lava below. Phinius used all his strength and managed to get into the ship. He closed the cockpit and pushed the ignition the ship roared into life and stopped inches before the lava. Phinius turned and flew out of the Casmn. He felt the presence of other Jedi and knew he could not leave. But what could he do?

01-01-2006, 11:00 PM
Bac Rueben got near the surface of the planet and it looked devastated. Lava was now spurting up out of the chasm and the land was blown everywhere by the explosion. Also, he noticed the broken up keep was finnaly destroyed. He tryed everywhere to look for survivors, but he noticed none. Disapointed, Bac put his ship throttles to full blast and flew towards Tatooine.

Jedi Atomic
01-02-2006, 11:48 AM
(((Wheres deamonomic at i'm waiting for him to post about the reactor part??????)))

01-02-2006, 02:35 PM
(Jedi Atomic just continue. The reactor has blown and the planet is imploding. So get out of there)

Phinius flew over to the cave. He blasted at the rocks that covered the entrance. It created a small opening which was big enough for Phinius to climb through. He jumped out of the ship and ran over to the hole in the rocks. He clambered through and ran down the passage.
He saw them behind a fading force barrier.
"Guys lets go! The planets going to imploded you can't stop it!"
He knew what they were trying to do
"COME ON! You can't starve it! It's getting out anyway it can!"
Phinius pointed at the ground. Deep cracks had appeared and the walls of the caver were crumbling.
Phinius backed away
"Don't be fools" he murmered
Phinius knew it wasn't worth it. He had to leave.
The planet would implode at any moment. He ran back to the rocks. He clambered through the hole and ran to his ship. The winds were now even stronger. He jumped in and took off. He sped into space.
(This story isn;t really going any where so I'll do the obvious thing now)
The planet shudered and just as Phinius entered hyper space the planet imploded
Phinius hoped that any last minute strugglers like Scur and Zaran had got off the planet somehow.....

01-02-2006, 05:21 PM
Bac Rueben looked behind him to see the planet start to implode. He knew that going back to look might mean his life if a black hole emerged. Bac just hoped for the best and pushed his thrusters to full power. At least he knew his battalion was safe.

Jedi Atomic
01-03-2006, 09:00 PM
((I'll take control of Zaran until deamon gets back))

Scur noticed Zaran starting to faint and he quickly brought the shield over himself and Zaran as they were pushed away from the planet surface and into space, still with the shield keeping them alive from suffacation. A starfighter came into view and noticed a bluish glow from the force shield. "Must be Phinius." Scur thought as he looked at Zaran who was still fainted near death but Scur was giving some of his life to keep him alive.

((Deamonomic, just wake your guy when you get back on, sorry for controlling your characterbut but the story really couldn't continue without your character.))

01-04-2006, 08:37 PM
(dont appologize. i was the one holding everything up. i dont want to be the one to make everyone wait.)
zaran woke up alone. he was in a starfighter. so they had escaped....

01-05-2006, 02:53 PM
(Fates decision are you going to make this RPG "Origins of the sith" or not. If not I'll do it)

01-05-2006, 10:09 PM
Bac Rueben finnaly landed on Tatooine. He gathered with his battalion in Mos Eisley, with new suits that didn't show they were an army battalion. They decided to hold a secret meeting outside the city so they went and pitched some tents. Once everything was set up, They discussed their problem and what they should do about it. With a nearly anonimous vote, the 86th battalion voted to gather voulunteers and make a comeback against the imperial army. They immediately started gathering weapons.

Fate's Decision
01-13-2006, 09:39 AM
(sorry, I don't have a working computer so I'm going to wait to make the new RPG. I want to be available when I start it.)