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01-11-2006, 07:39 PM
(lucky...my singing is a curse from my point of view because everyone hates me)

01-11-2006, 07:41 PM
(Everyone used to hate me, but then I started becoming ignorant and bossy and I got friends! YAY!)

01-11-2006, 07:51 PM
(damn...maybe i shouldn't act so much as a b*tch)

01-11-2006, 08:10 PM
(I just was nicer to kids, and I said a lot funnier things. JUST STAY AWAY FROM PREPS! They will take you in and turn their backs on you in a heartbeat.)

01-11-2006, 08:14 PM
(i know...believe me)

01-11-2006, 08:47 PM
(1) Vernon stepped out onto the sand, mechanical eyes searching, as a platoon of soldiers surrounded him. "Post-M Soldier Grade 9," a soldier barked at him, "check that warehouse."

Vernon smirked, opening the door quickly, drawing his gun on a small child, lying in the corner nibbling on a pie.

"We found Dart!" Vernon laughed angrily, but his team had left to search other places.

(2) "This power, is unbelievable..." Vernon laughed evilly. "Put all the people to work!" He yelled, slamming on a button on the desk. "Bring me everything I want!"

He smirked darkly, his hair shadowing over his eyes.

01-11-2006, 09:07 PM
In the the future also....

Eva was clutching the bed tightly, screaming for all she was worth, and then...silence, and finally a baby crying. Eva looked up with all the strenght she had left. With her ast breath, she said "Her name is Glory. Find her a good...home." and then, Eva's eyes shet and her hand dangled lifelessly from the side of the bed.

01-11-2006, 09:16 PM

"Eyaaaah!" D'Artagan screamed. "I didn't kill him! I swear to god! Someone jumped off a train, and fired a shot through the window - that was all, and he died because of air intoxication!" Vernon laughed. "Please. We don't need excuses. Post-M Response is taking you in, murder or not. You're a fugitive who's living outside of the safety of our city."

"No!" D'Artagan yelled, as a small furry animal similar to a cat crawled out from behind him. "I swear to god! If you want to take me, you'll have to find all of us!"

Vernon lowered his gun.


Vernon addressed the screens to his sides. "A new citizen is born. Target: Glory. Violation; miscount, unregistered parent."

"Bull****," Vernon growled. "Have her in captivity."

01-11-2006, 09:20 PM
In the present(since future Eva is dead)....Eva sat in the lodge, drinking a glass of peppermint tea she brought from home, she picked up her copy of Ripley's Believe it or not and continued to read.

01-13-2006, 11:43 PM
(Cheez, post or the hammer will fall!)

01-14-2006, 01:52 AM
(What happens to Eva in future 1? Does Glory team up with Dart? Eva doing casual things in the present doesn't seem very interesting, or helping with the plot.)


Vernon sighed, looking out the warehouse, ripping the communicator out of his ear, running across the field and shooting one soldier, before he had time to react. His vital sign failure reactor didn't go off, as the communicator was blasted out of his ear.

"Unit Vernon is down, and Unit Wander has removed his communicator. Something's wrong. It's the hostile."

Vernon smirked, reloading his gun, as they went to the site of the battle.

"Oh ****! Rogue alert! Rogue alert!"


Vernon smirked atop his throne. "Soldiers," he growled happily, "bring me a drink. A nice glass of water."

01-14-2006, 01:56 AM
(Oh......Maybe we'll have a little present rebound fun, shall we????) Eva got up from her seat in the main lodge. She found a telephone, picked it up, and dieled a number.

"Hello?" She said "Is Matt there, it's Eva."

01-14-2006, 02:02 AM
(Still not doing anything for the storyline.)


Vernon dived over, firing on the soldiers. "Send in Ship Maelstrom! I repeat, send in-" The soldier quickly had the communicator shot out of his hands, as Vernon smiled a dark smile, revealing the eyes under his hair. However, the other soldiers stood in shock as Vernon waltzed over, biting open his neck and sucking out his throat darkly, as blood gushed all over him.

"Matthew, eh?" Vernon asked, taking his dogtag right off his body.

The soldiers watched in a state of shock.

A gigantic fleet of ships loomed overhead darkly.


Nothing significant.

01-14-2006, 02:06 AM
Eva and Matt talked for a while

"So, it's really strange that you're in town near here, isn't it?" Asked Eva over the line.
"Yeah, sure is. Maybe I could come visit you at this camp place." Replied Matt.
"Great idea, I guess you could come by around fiveish, okay?" She said.
"I'll be there." He happily replied. "See you tonight, Evita"
"Hehe, bye." Said Eva as she hung up the phone. Then she went to her cabin to change.

01-14-2006, 02:10 AM
Vernon did not stop there. He tore out Matt's stomach, pouring the acid all over the ground.

"Holy ****!" Soldiers screamed, as he drenched himself in blood, painting under his eyes and marking himself. He looked up at the plane with an insane grin.

01-14-2006, 02:15 AM
(Okay, this is just getting icky.)Eva was searching through her bag, looking for somthing relevantly decent to wear. She decided on a nice pair of jeans and a button down blouse she had never chosen to wear before. She was excited to be catching up with old friends, met in hospitals.

01-14-2006, 02:17 AM
Vernon grinned, as bullets tore through the sand around him, the frightened and sickened D'Artagan crying and screaming, running away.

"Bring it on!" Vernon yelled, running under the fleet of planes.

01-14-2006, 02:23 AM
All of a sudden as if time had flew by it was five o'clock. Eva went out to the gates. She waited a few minutes until Matt arrived. When his car pulled up, and he got out Eva had a look on her face that was completely undiscribeable. Matt was very puny for a 19 year old. He was very skinny and slightly taller than Eva. He had dark brown hair and diamond-blue eyes you could stare into forever.

"Oh Matt, look at you!" Said Eva, her hands on her hips and a smile on her face.

"Well, haven't we changed a bit since Dr. Charmine's." He replied, giving her a hug.She took him by the arm and said "C'mon, you gotta see the place" as she led him through the gates.

01-14-2006, 02:36 AM
Vernon jumped around, from crate to crate, jumping atop a warehouse and vaulting onto a gunship, hanging on for his life as it swerved around, and he produced a psychic pole, jamming it through the windshield, jumping to another one.

01-14-2006, 02:39 AM


"Wait," Vernon asked. "Is it possible for me to return to the past?"

A soldier nodded. "It's a prototype, though. You'll be only allowed 30 minutes."

Vernon sighed.

"Send me back. Back to Whispering Rock, a long time ago."

He stood up, walking into a chamber, as light flooded around him.

"Something's gotta give," he muttered.

01-14-2006, 12:30 PM
Eva and Matt were walking down the path to the lake.

"It's been so good to see you." Eva said before they reached the lake. "Well, here it is, Lake What's-its-name." Matt looked at her and smiled. Eva looked up at him and smiled back. "Well, now that you've seen the camp let's head up to the main lodge." She Said. Eva took his hand and led him back up to the lodge.

01-14-2006, 01:32 PM
Vernon arrived, tearing off his mask and breathing in the fresh crisp air. "Where is she?" Vernon asked, opening the door to the main lodge. Scars were visible on his face, insomnia bags under his eyes, and rage present in his eyes.

01-14-2006, 01:47 PM
Eva and Matt were still walking up the trail. She had to set fire to a few squirells, just to entertiain him. When the two reached the doors, they decided to just stay outside on such a lovely day this was. Eva and Matt sat at a picnic table outside the main lodge. They made small chat on the weather, recent news stories, and whatnot.

01-14-2006, 05:19 PM
Vernon looked around. "Bastards," he growled. He smashed apart the tables, finally knocking the door down, staring straight at Matt and Eva, directly into Matt's soul quickly with fire in his eyes.

01-14-2006, 05:32 PM
"My goodness!" Eva yelled," Vernon, what are you doing here?!?!?!"

01-14-2006, 05:51 PM
Vernon sighed. "Don't."

He commanded his glare still on Matt. "Don't follow him, or me. I have to return to the future. And any way you take ends in pain, for all of us."

He growled. "The only way to stop all of thi-"

As he began speaking, from seemingly nowhere a heavily armed soldier fell to the ground, followed by the child D'Artagnan and his small pet.

"Phew ****!" The soldier yelled. "Wait a second."

Soldier Vernon stared at Emperor Vernon, Matt, and Eva for a second.

"How in hell?" He asked.

"Who are you?" Emperor Vernon gasped.

"I'm Vernon Tripe. I became a soldier on the day Maloof was killed."

"That's impossible. I killed Maloof."

"Oh really? It was this kid that did it. And then he fled to the desert, and I figured the safest place to put him was back in time. Back in the best place of my childhood. But I guess I didn't go far enough."

"No, this is impossible."

Soldier Vernon looked up, hearing the familiar whir of a fleet of ships. "Today is just not my lucky day!" SV growled, leaping off the ground up and grabbing onto the underside of one ship.

"This day gets stranger and stranger," Emperor Vernon sighed. "From leaving Eva at camp to getting attacked by a fleet of planes."

Emperor Vernon sighed, grabbing simply a twig, as it materialized into a psychic sword.

01-14-2006, 06:01 PM
"Wait a minute, I thought I killed Maloof on that island over there." Said Eva

Matt looked over at her and said "You killed someone?"

Eva looked back and said, "It kinda had to be done, he was like the Psychic Hitler."

"Oh, Alright then." Said Matt staring at Vernon, "Now who are you?"

01-14-2006, 06:45 PM
Vernon sighed. "I'm... At least, I was... No. Maloof's been alive. He can project a clone of himself anywhere he wants... or at least, he could, before he died."

D'Artagnan looked around, holding his small furry animal and running inside the lodge.

01-14-2006, 06:55 PM
Eva and Matt both looked up at Vernon with a confused look on their faces. "Well, wanna go up to the lodge and see what's on Vh1?" Asked Eva.

"Good idea." Said Matt. She took his hand and they went up to the lodge.

01-14-2006, 07:16 PM
Soldier Vernon spun around, ripping the very wing off the gunship as it exploded, sending the fleet into a chain reaction, drawing his pistol and kicking down the lodge door in front of them. "Whoa there, pal," Soldier Vernon laughed. "None of you are going anywhere."

"That's right," the calmer and more refined voice of Emperor Vernon smirked in its tone, "We'll have to kill both of you; although I'm sure we both want to just kill one of you."

They set their gunsights on Matt. "Put your hands up, we got you from both sides."

01-14-2006, 07:20 PM
"NO! Yelled Eva. "You don't have to kill us. Can't you just erase our memories or somthing?"

01-14-2006, 07:22 PM
"Hmph," Soldier Vernon grunted, turning his pistol and firing some shots at Matt.

"I've seen enough blood. I'm gonna go check on the kid. Emperor, I won't deny you the pleasure."

The Emperor looked down at his feet, sighing. "No," he whispered, dropping his weapon. "I can't."

He began to fade out of the past, as Soldier Vernon and D'Artagnan sat in the TV Lounge.

01-14-2006, 07:28 PM
Eva held Matt tightly, tears forming in her eyes. He was her best friend she could remember. They always dreamth of being on Broadway together(Matt is totally straight.) All of a sudden she heard him sing.

"No more talk
of darkness,
Forget these
wide-eyed fears.
I'm here,
nothing can harm you -
my words will
warm and calm you."

Eva looked up at him singing and she smiled.

01-14-2006, 07:44 PM
Soldier Vernon smirked, watching the sentimental moment. Since that day, killing was his passion, as the child watched TV, impervious to the death that occurred just outside.

"I'm afraid that's his swan song," Vernon smirked, lighting up a cigarette and drawing his pistol once more, closing the door on D'Artagnan, "and you better start composing yours soon."

01-14-2006, 07:49 PM
Eva then sushed up Matt. There was a moment of silence then she sang.

"Think of me
think of me fondly,
when we've said goodbye.
Remember me
once in a while -
please promise me
you'll try...."

01-14-2006, 08:06 PM
(sushed up!? wtf does that mean)

01-14-2006, 08:08 PM
(She shut him up.) Eva continued to look at Matt and sing.

"We never said
our love
was evergreen,
or as unchanging
as the sea -
but if
you can still
stop and think
of me . . .

Think of all the things
we've shared and seen -
don't think about the things
which might have been . . ."

01-14-2006, 08:55 PM
Vernon fired a shot, hitting Eva's hand, causing her to drop Matt. "Please. Enough sentimental stuff. It almost makes something as beautiful as death bitter." He loaded his gun once more, sending a shot, however, it was stopped in midair, by the young D'Artagnan, who had seemingly stopped time to catch it.

"Stop it," he muttered. "I don't want little Fluffy to see people get hurt. Stop it."

Vernon looked shocked at the child, and the catlike creature. He sighed almost of sorrow, dropping his gun to the floor and removing his belt full of ammunition.

"I'm sorry," he whispered, looking at the child.

01-14-2006, 09:02 PM
"Ow!" Yelled Eva dropping to the ground. She held her hand in pain. Matt leaned down by her, and he put her wounded hand in his. The pain seemed to ease from her hand, as if the wound didn't exist.

01-14-2006, 09:10 PM
D'Artagnan produced a small hand from his sleeve, resting his hand on Eva's shoulder. "Don't worry. My mom taught me how to make people better."

The gunshot through Eva, and all of Matt's wounds disappeared in a hiss and a glow.

01-14-2006, 09:16 PM
Eva then looked at her hand. The hole and the blood was all gone. "Thank you." Eva said quietly, Matt nodded in agreement.

01-17-2006, 05:43 PM
D'Artagnan smiled. "Thanks! My mom would be proud, I bet. And I heard the ships, so I guess we better leave again?"

"Right," Vernon sighed. "I'm sorry," he said heavily. "In these days of the future I have become a fool, after 10 years." He looked back into his memory, to the very day he met Eva. "Don't forget me, even if you're happy with him."

D'Artagnan nodded. "Be happy but wise!" He chirped, gleefully, holding his small animal in his hands. "Kitty-Ferret says bye-bye too!" He held the creature's paw, waving it at her gently. The creature opened its mouth in a yawn.

"Our paths may meet again," Vernon said, opening the door, as D'Artagnan held Kitty-Ferret in one hand and tugged on Vernon's sleeve with the other.

01-17-2006, 09:34 PM
As the door shut in a blinding light, Matt looked over at Eva and said "What the f*** just happened?" Eva looked back at him and said" I......I.....I don't know." Eva sat down, holding her head and sighed looking at the hand which had been shot.

01-31-2006, 12:08 AM
(Weather I'm here a lot, or not. I'm not letting all the RPGs die.) Eva and Matt stood outside staring at the darkning summer sky. Matt began to sing in a bass voice, a very low one at that.

"Night-time sharpens,
heightens each sensation . . .
Darkness stirs and
wakes imagination . . ."

Eva heard this and began to giggle "Do you always sing Phantom of the Oprah songs?" She said

Matt replied "Well, I do need preporation for my big debut...whenever it comes. And you'll be really unprepaired when your singing Christine's part, to my Phantom."

Eva just looked at him, rolled her eyes and giggled as the friends walked on.

01-31-2006, 09:20 AM
Vernon smirked a little bit, before yelling profanities so loud that D'Artagan had to cover Kitty-Ferret's ears. He saw from the gates hundreds of Post-M Reconstructors, thrown back in time with him.

"Aw christ!" Vernon yelled, shoving D'artagan lightly. "Run!"

01-31-2006, 07:15 PM
(wait...is Vernon back in the future or did somthinf f***** up happed with the door and Vernon is still in the past?)

01-31-2006, 07:33 PM
(Vernon is still in the past until he can get Dart somewhere safe)

01-31-2006, 07:42 PM
(oh, ok then) Eva looked at the gates.

"Quick, to the roof!" yelled Eva, grabbing Matt's arm, and levitating up.

01-31-2006, 08:23 PM
Dart ran with Kitty-Ferret, squealing his little head off, as Vernon checked his guns. Empty. "Hey, I could use a hand here..."

02-01-2006, 08:38 PM
"Umm...." yelled Eva, "I can't...... I'm protecting the non-psychics."

Then Eva tossed down a sai and said "Here, try these."

02-01-2006, 09:49 PM
Vernon grabbed it, confused. "Sai? Sounds like a bagel."

02-01-2006, 10:34 PM
Eva looked at him with a glare. "Shut up, and kill them." She said.

02-04-2006, 04:14 PM
(Uh, hi. What's going on? Does anyone wanna play Milla cause I haven't been on that much.)

02-04-2006, 04:39 PM
Vernon headed into the field, confused. He backed off as hundreds of laser pointers went straight onto his stomach.

"Kitty-ferret!" D'Artagan yelled, as suddenly the small furry animal leapt from his hands, into the field of soldiers. "Come back kitty! Come back!" D'Artagan's hat began raising straight up. The soldiers looked around, poking at the creature, picking it up and slapping it, trying to figure out what it was.

"Don't hurt him!" D'Artagan growled, raising into the air. The soldiers stared at him, dropping the kitty-ferret. It seemed to be trapped in a levitation bubble, as the kitty-ferret rose up into midair. "Don't HURT IT!"

Out from the bubble was a huge explosion, as D'Artagan's eyes began to glow, and his voice became layered. Soldiers scrambled everywhere, some alive and some dead. The kitty-ferret seemed to fall out of the bubble, running back to D'Artagan, jumping into his arms.

"What happened to all the soldiers?" Dart asked, staring at the battlefield.

Vernon stared, mouth agape. "Now we really gotta run," he managed to say.

02-04-2006, 06:28 PM
Eva and Matt huddled close on the roof.

"This is so not good!" Yelled Matt.

Eva looked at him with a frightful look in her eyes "I am SO not coming back."

Matt nodded and said "I am so glad I'm not a psychic."

02-04-2006, 07:29 PM
D'Artagan meeped, holding Kitty-Ferret tight as he heard stomps.

"Aw, ****!" Vernon yelled. "Walker H units! Everyone evacuate! If one of them catches sight of us, it's all over!"

Vernon dived into a stump, followed by Dart. The carts were long since broken.

02-05-2006, 02:18 AM
Eva turned invistible and Matt layed down on the roof. They both layed there in scilence, like they did so long ago.

02-05-2006, 02:20 AM
Vernon screamed up at the roof. "You idiots! It can see you on the damn roof!"

Thumping disturbed birds out of trees. "OH ****! HERE IT COMES!" Vernon began running through the root system.

02-05-2006, 02:22 AM
"SHUT UP! It's called improvisation!" Eva yelled, as she grabbes Matt's hand. She levitated off the roof and went quickly towards the lake to get a canoe.

02-05-2006, 02:23 AM
The walker crunched through the forests, over Vernon, looking around, looking to the lake.

"ORGANIC SIGNAL CONFIRMED," the machine screamed into the night.

02-05-2006, 02:25 AM
"Shoot." Eva said as she and Matt reached the lake. "Take a deep breath, we're goin' under." Eva then, pulling Matt behind her, dived into the lake.

02-05-2006, 02:33 AM
"HEAT SIGNATURE DETECTED," the walker growled, growing closer to the lake. Like an ice fisher, it jammed its fist into the lake, reaching around for a human.

02-05-2006, 02:37 AM
Eva and Matt swam deeper. Matt looked behind him and saw the hand. He got scared and swam faster. Eva tried to catch up, but felt a tugging on her leg.

02-05-2006, 03:05 AM
The machine yanked Eva out of the water, dangling her from her leg. It stared at it, zooming in onto her with its optic sensors.


02-05-2006, 03:26 AM
"OH YOU SUCK SO HARD!" Yelled Eva. "But, I ain't letting you get Matt." She looked over at a dock, and set it on fire with pyroknesis.

02-05-2006, 01:13 PM
The robot looked at the dock. "Incorrect heat signal, isolating original trace."

Vernon dived out of the stump, followed by Dart, looking at the beast holding Eva, and now plunging its hand down for Matt.

"Damn! We're too late!" Vernon yelled.

Dart looked up in awe at the robotic beast, dropping the Kitty-Ferret with his mouth agape. The kitty-ferret stood next to his leg, as D'Artagan's eyes turned a bright white, pupilless and evil as the robot snatched up Matt.


D'artagan stared up at it, running up to it, jumping into the air.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?" Vernon screamed, as Dart ran up ridges on its leg, jumping onto its arm, liberating Matt and Eva. The beast brought its hand up to its face, examining the young boy, who jumped directly at it, crushing its face in, jumping back onto its arm quickly.


D'Artagan proceeded to make a leap of faith, onto the robot's head, and from there, he lifted into the air, and unleashed thousands of psychic spears into the robot's head. The robot screeched, beginning to wave from side to side. D'Artagan was flung off, trying to neutralize his velocity, to no avail. He fell into the burning dock.

"Oh CHRIST!" Vernon yelled, running over to the dock, as the robot screeched and fell backwards, obliterating the docking station for the bathosphere.

02-05-2006, 02:28 PM
(Umm......It's called TK)Eva fell head first onto the beach and was knocked unconscience by the ordeal. Matt, however fell onto his back. He saw Eva there, passed out, and a burning child on the dock.

"Time to do what I do best" said Matt as he got up. He then walked over to the burning dock and leaped on. "Ow, ow, ow..." He said quickly running to Dart. He picked up the burned child had went back to the water, he leaped into the cold lake, and as both their figures dissaperred, steam rose from the water.

02-05-2006, 02:55 PM
Dart opened his eyes, underwater, screeching, flapping his arms, breaking free from Matt. He thrashed his arms about on the surface, gasping for breath. "Oh christ," Vernon growled. "We don't have time for this..."

02-05-2006, 03:07 PM
Matt rose and looked at Dart "You OK, little guy?" he asked the soaked child.

02-05-2006, 03:12 PM
Dart crawled onto the beach, running and grabbing Kitty-Ferret.

"That's it," Vernon growled, flipping his watch into the air off his wrist. "This place isn't safe any more." He changed a dial, and put the watch on Dart's wrist. "There's a place for kids like you. If you ever need me, just turn the watch to the number 8." Vernon hit a button on the watch, and Dart disappeared. "Now I've got another agenda to get to," Vernon said. He lifted his hand into the air, disappearing. "I've got to stop myself from ever leaving camp."

02-05-2006, 03:17 PM
Matt stared at Vernon, then back at the still passed out Eva. "What about Eva, I think she broke her neck."

02-05-2006, 03:56 PM
(Vernon left already)

Vernon looked at himself, about to leave camp at the middle of the night, so long ago, but in the present, only a few hours later. "Don't go!" FV yelled, as Vernon turned around. He heard an explosion, however, and after a white flash, hundreds of crows flew over the camp.

"What's happening?" Younger Vernon asked the soldier, stepping away from the camp gates.

"This can't be-" Soldier Vernon thought, as the main lodge faded away. And suddenly, he did too.

02-05-2006, 04:00 PM
Back in the future, Matt was panicing. He crawled over to Eva, and checked her pulse. There want't one.

02-05-2006, 04:05 PM
Normal Vernon found himself in the present, next to Eva. "Eva? What the hell!?"

The blue sky turned red. "What the hell is going on? I've gotta find that soldier guy!"

Out of the lake, however, mutilated children crawled. "What the..."

Vernon looked at the lake, as what looked like Clem crawled out, clawing at his leg. Vernon shrieked, crying. "ZOMBIES!" He pulled his old pistol out of his jacket, firing at Clem, until he fell back into the lake.

"Oh my god," Vernon screamed, backing up. "Everyone I knew... What the hell happened in the past?"

His memories changed before him. He clutched his head, impervious of more approaching zombies.

02-05-2006, 05:38 PM
Matt took Eva's cold hand and squeesed it tight. "Come back to me Eva" Matt said, "You're not dying now!!!'' Matt then shed a tear that hit Eva on the chest. Then, a mirical happened. Matt felt a pulse.

02-05-2006, 06:54 PM
(Oh please. How cliche.)

Vernon looked at his hand, which was pale, with spiked claws. "Was I always.. like this?" Vernon looked, more claws, his face groing a cold white. "Eva? What are you doing with him?" Vernon's eyes began going white. "Who is he!?"

(This is the Vernon who just kissed Eva yesterday of course)

02-05-2006, 07:07 PM
(You know, shut up.)

Eva opened her eyes slowly, and she saw Matt gazing into them. "Ughhhh," she said "What happened?"

"Nothing too important." Said Matt, then he let out an embarassed laugh.

"Good," Eva said, "Cause we're goin out tonight!"

Matt looked confused "But, you were just unconscience!!"

"But, now I'm better!!" She said, "And we're gonna party! Woo hoo!"

Matt just stared at her, "Whatever." he said, even though he knew this wasn't normally the way she acted.

02-05-2006, 07:33 PM
Vernon looked at Matt. "Don't you people - understand...?" He growled, trying to keep his humanity. "They changed the past... Something's wrong..."

He fell to the ground, reaching up with a twisted hand.

02-05-2006, 07:37 PM
(I'm confused, no idea how to respond.)

02-05-2006, 07:57 PM
Vernon lifted his gnarled hand, grabbing Matt by the scruff of the neck, and shoving him under the water. "Who are you!? Who is she!? Where am I!?"

Vernon put another hand down, to grip him.

02-05-2006, 07:58 PM
(still very confuzzled)

02-05-2006, 07:59 PM
(Vernon is a zombie after he went back in time and is trying to kill Matt)

02-05-2006, 08:05 PM
(Alright, I guess I get it now.) Eva pulled her sai from her side and stabbed Zombie Vernon in the hand. "DON'T HURT MY BOYFRIEND YOU MONSTER!!!" She yelled, "LET HIM GO!"

02-05-2006, 08:23 PM
Vernon turned, now completely a zombie. His memories crashed and burned, forgetting who Eva was entirely, giving her a sweeping kick over, and bringing Matt up, sticking one hand all the way through him, preparing for some delicious flesh.

02-05-2006, 09:44 PM
(dude, I quit. This is getting WAY too f***** up. I swear.)

02-06-2006, 12:06 AM
(Wonderful. So I suppose I should just bump EVERY OTHER ****ING TOPIC AND LET THIS DIE THEN. PIECE OF ****ING ****.)

02-07-2006, 11:05 PM
(Well, if you didn't make it so dang complicated! Next thing, Eva's gonna have a tail and Vernon will turn into a rabbit!)

02-07-2006, 11:07 PM
(Finale time. Prepare for GORE.)

Vernon gutted Matt, as Eva watched in horror, while Vernon turned an empty face towards the red sky. Vernon looked back at Eva. She stood in horror, as Vernon drew closer, followed by thousands of zombies, the dead children of the lake. The sun disappeared from sight, as everything fizzed, crackled, and faded out around Eva, leaving her all alone, standing in the darkness.

(There. ENDED.)

02-07-2006, 11:12 PM
(Well, you know. You could have done Vernon better. He doesn't really seem like the stalker type who would kill your mom if she broke up with you!)

02-07-2006, 11:37 PM
(Vernon is a ZOMBIE now. Was. Then since Dart corrupted the past, everything ceased to exist.)

02-07-2006, 11:50 PM
(Yet again, there you went, making things all f***** up like you always do.)

02-08-2006, 12:18 AM
(No it's quite simple.)