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Fate's Decision
01-18-2006, 01:07 AM
The galaxy has fallen into chaos. As soon harmony is created, it becomes vulnerable to the flames of deception. As light shines forth, shadows are formed. There are many concepts of perfection. These concepts can be united by power, but as soon as power becomes loose for contention, they can begin to drift apart. As the galaxy's concept moves toward peace, there are those who are not so easily adaptable...those who challenge the might of good and attempt to grasp the power that steers these concepts. But even as the galaxy falls to evil, there is always hope that power once again can be reversed...

Three weeks have passed since the fall of Niaj Qad. The Jedi Keep has been destroyed, a select few Jedi remain. The Civic Empire has fallen under the control of Rures Sith, an evil ex-Jedi who became dominated by hatred. The Civic fleets begin to take control of one planet after another, mercilessly executing any who resisted. As Rures's plan falls into action, a rebellion is formed.
Eptima, the leader of the Niaj Qad rebellion failed in his mission to defend the Jedi Keep. Along with a small force of survivors, Eptima gathered together another rebellion of surviving Jedi, imperial traitors and mercenaries to stop this great threat. Yet they were far too small of a fighting force to take on the entire Civic Empire. Knowing this Eptima carefully planned out an attack that could potentially do massive damage to the empire. Using his most trusted spies’ information, he planned a siege on Dexus, the current capital of Naboo. After seizing the city, they would immediately depart for Coruscant, where spy reports lead him to believe Rures was. While reinforcements arrived to reclaim the city, it would decrease the amount of security at Coruscant. Though the empire’s numbers were far superior to that of the alliance, the chances of success would be increased. Extremely small, but increased. But then, even smaller than he had anticipated…for what Eptima did not know was that the rebellion had been tracked down…

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Current Status
A huge Civic Imperial fleet has surrounded the Alliance and was given direct orders from Rures Sith to execute all of them and let none escape. Fortunately, the alliance had purchased eight-hundred starfighters from Corellian starfighter manufacturers. Model design YAI-80, a long but slender diamond-shaped spacecraft with laser cannons on either side. They could work over the Civic Starfighters and RIG fighters but were out of league for the Imperial Grand Starfighters, or Skull fighters as they were nicknamed.
The objective for the rebellion is destroy all of the tracking systems on the attack frigates and immediately depart for Dexus, Naboo. The objective for the Empire is to eradicate all rebels and let none escape. Bac also had plans for his own Tatooine rebellion. You can choose this as a faction as well.

01-18-2006, 02:57 PM
Name: Phinius Gage
Faction: Jedi
Class:Jedi Master
Equipment:One purple lightsaber
Strengths:Force Powers, Knowledge, Hand to hand combat
Background:After the disasters of Niaj Qad Phinius was made a master by the council for killing the evil jedi Zion, who was his former master. He has been having nightmares and can still feel Zion's presance wherver he goes. Becasue of this the Jedi have placed him on this mission to get this off his mind.

01-18-2006, 11:10 PM
Name: Bac Rueben
Faction: Rebels
Class: 86th battalion commander
Equipment: Blaster rifle, commando pistol, thermal detonators, and time bombs
Strengths: Battle planing, squadron fighting, one-on-one fighting, assassination
Weaknesses: Piloting, mechanics, mercy for victims
Background: Bac Rueben started out as an Imperial soldier on Niaj Qad, but soon switched to the rebels when he realized how bad the imperials had become. He soon became the 86th battalion, made from the men that followed him and vollunteers. After the destruction of the planet, the reinforced on Tatooine and eventually met back up with Eptima. They now go to Naboo to help the rebels. In the end, Bac hopes to rule the Civic Empire and create a more peaceful galaxy.

Fate's Decision
01-19-2006, 12:31 AM
Name: Mid Kunar
Faction: Rebels
Class: Jedi Knight
Equipment: A white lightsaber, detonators, a black-purple Jedi light-scythe, Jedi master robes, blaster rifle
Strengths: Near-impervious fighting style, handling of guns
Weaknesses: Using the force, anger
Background: Mid was lead by Dyce's group on Niaj Qad and was responsible for saving several Jedi before the planet's detonation. He had lived in the Jedi Order all his life, but was very poor with the force when he was younger. His master was extremely wise and powerful and took him on several missions. On a mission in Tatooine his master was killed from an ambush by several bounty hunters. Mid thought that he could have aided his master if he were stronger and prevented his death, and from that day forward he trained his hardest until he had far surpassed his peers.

01-19-2006, 03:57 PM
....The room was dark. In the corner a Jedi was sitting in the pitch black. Suddenly a purple glow lit the room. The Jedi's lightsaber gleamed. A sudden noise made the jedi focus. A dark power. An evil power. It was stonger than anything he had ever sensed. The thing, whatever it was, was stonger and was getting closer. The Jedi stood up and faced the door. It slid open and a dark jedi stepped in. His red lightsaber glowed. His body was hald mechanical and hald human. The jedi laughed....

Phinius woke up sweating and panting. He sat up shaking. He wiped his forehead. He got up and put on his Jedi robes and grabbed his saber from under his pilow. He walked slowly to the bridge of the ship
"Anything to reprort captain?"
"Nothing yet master Phinius"
Phinius's head was pounding. He turned to leave when a message came through
"We have received word that the Civic Army are closing in. On one of the Capitol ships we believe there is a sith lord"
The message fuzzed over with static. Phinius looked up at the captain the captain looked back anxiously. Phinius gulped....

Fate's Decision
01-19-2006, 10:12 PM
Mid slashed out at invisible foes with his white blade. He had been training twice as hard sinse the Niaj Qad disaster, early every morning until sunrise, or, whenever sunrise should be. If anything like that ever happened again, he would not fail to protect his allies. Mid was currently aboard one of the rebel Capital ships where he would remain until the Naboo invasion, he was practicing saber combat as a soldier entered his room. Mid sheithed his lightsaber blade as the soldier panted, "Our scout frigates have spotted Imperial Captial ships! We're surrounded!" Mid's expression changed, he nodded to the soldier to show he understood. He grabbed his scythe and hurried to the main deck. He joined up with the other Jedi and after all of the men were collected, went strait to the docking bay. He chose a green-trimmed corefighter and sped out into space. There were much more of the enemy than he had imagined.

01-21-2006, 04:12 PM
In Bac's ship, the alarms started ringing throghout the ship as reports of the Imperial Fleet passed through. Bac and the rest of the 86th battalion hopped into ships and sped out to attack the fleet head on.

Jedi Atomic
01-21-2006, 04:33 PM
(((Some questions.....

I was wondering how many years is this past the destruction of the Niaj Qad Keep?

May I have Scur Jal' Daan again continuing from the last chapter? And if Deamon doesn't take Zaran can I control him?

I would like to continue Scur and Zaran's story.)))

01-22-2006, 01:27 PM
(Three weeks has passed since the destuction of Niaj Qad)

Phinius walked to the hanger and got onto a boarding craft. Several other Jedi got in and several soliders also entered the ship. The ship took off within moments. Phinius felt his stomach flip and watched as the two enemy fleets clashed. The ship Phinius was in offered a cloaking device and was invisible to the enemy. The ship managed to get too close to the capitol ship before anyone notcied.The ship came under fire but it didn't matter the ship was already in side the hanger. The ship was immediatly fired at by ground troops. The Jedi and soldiers inside jumped out and staright into combat. Phinius sensed a dark power. He deflected back a blast from a enemy solider. The Jedi had managed to infiltrate the enemy capitol ship it was only a matter of time until...
A shadow moved. A dark jedi jumped down from the ceiling and slashed at two jedi killing them immediatly with his single red lightsaber. Phinius knew this was the sith lord. The hooded figure turned. And lowerd his hood. Phinius gapsed. The man was half man and half machine...Zion Romantix was back and it looked like he had been upgraded.....

01-22-2006, 02:37 PM
The 86th battalion soon met the other fighters and began to fight them. Bac knew he couldn't stay for long because he wasn't a good pilot. The whole scirmish was for Bac to get inside the capital ship and use sabotage to destroy the fleet. He pushed his YAI-80's thrusters to full power and sped towards the capital ship.

Jedi Atomic
01-22-2006, 05:47 PM
((Well then I'll continue the story of Scur and Zaran until Deamonomic gets back unless he doesn't want to control him.

Just incase somebody new joins here are Scur and Zaran's information:

Name: Scur Jal'Daan
Faction: Jedi Council
Class: Jedi Consular
Weapon: Dual Lightsabers; Silver/Orange
Equipment: Blue Jedi Consular robes
Strengths: Piloting, 1-on-1 Fighting
Weaknesses: Close together fighting

Bio: (summary of the last chapter) Scur Jal'Daan was a consular on Niaj Qad. He was liked by many people because of his generosity and kindness. He defeated many opponents when the Civic Army invaded the planet, trying to kill all Jedi, which failed. Many Jedi escaped with the Rebellion.

Scur fought with the new Sith Lord, Zion, who turned to the Dark Side in the middle of the battle, and killed many Jedi from within the Keep. Zion escaped and quickly made his way to the reactor to the planet and switched it to self destruct. Scur had a vision of him doing this and quickly made his way towards the reactor to stop it followed by Zaran.

Once Scur made his way to the Reactor it had started exploding and Zion tryed stoping Scur, which failed because Zion escaped the explosion of the planet as Scur used Force Barrier on the explosion to try and suffacate it with the help of Zaran. the explosion grew too strong, and flung fainted Zaran and Scur into space, soon to be picked up by Phinius.
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Name: Zaran
Faction: Jedi Council
Class: Jedi Master
Weapon: single bladed lightsaber; Blue
Equipment: Jedi master Robes
Strengths: agility, ability to calm down instantly and focus
Weaknesses: Injured leg

(Well that should be it, and if Deamonomic joins he can write the Bio for Zaran)

Fate's Decision
01-22-2006, 11:41 PM
As Mid made his way toward the enemy fleet he checked his belt to confirm that his lightsaber and folded scythe were not left back on the Mothership. He had taken a long time to make his new lightsaber and was not up to designing a new one. Ever sinse Zion had betrayed the Jedi, they had refused to use red lightsabers. Mid had cast away his old blade and created a lightsaber even better than before. White was a neutral, calm color, and Mid noticed that he felt a little calmer using it, even though he was still getting used to it. As for his scythe, he would easily make twenty Jedi lightsabers and cast them away before dreaming of losing it.

Mid locked onto the nearest frigate's tracking radar. The alliance would have to take out all sensors if they hoped to make the Naboo invasion unexpected. Unfortunately, the Empire had little need of the frigate's sensors, so they stuck them all the way in the back. Back behind formations of skull fighters. Mid knew that getting through them would be no easy task...

01-23-2006, 09:59 PM
"Squad 5, cover me as I head towards the capital ship," Bac commanded. "Roger," replied the squad leader, Romul. Romul was an original 16th battalion soldier(The battalion that Bac started commanding when under the Empire) and had always been there for Bac. He was also the best pilot the 86th battalion had. Bac slowed down to let Squad 5 surround him in a box formation and they headed towards the capital ship.

01-24-2006, 12:46 PM
Phinius stared into the cold grey eyes he had once admired and respected.
"B-b-ut I saw.....you die" Phinius was speechless he looked like he had been petrified.
Zion did not smile like he used to when he saw his old aprentice he just looked at Phinius with pure hatred
"You saw wrong" Zion spat at Phinius in a voice of pure venom. Zion looked around and the stunned jedi.
"I guess you all wan't to know how I surivived? My master saved me and brought me to this ship and made a new me"
Zion did not carry any hint of a threat in his voice but they all knew what was about to happen
"To buisness" Zion threw his cloak aside and jumped up. Two Jedi went to meet his as he landed
"NO!" Phinius yelled
Zion dropped and sliced one Jedi's head off and then cut the other in half. Zion used to force to grab one of the dead jedi's lightsaber and he ignited it. He controled the two baldes so well no one could get close to him. Those he tried soon met their deaths. Another Jedi rushed forward and atempted to attack Zion. Zion picked him up with the force and threw him through the ray shield and into space. Phinius did nothing even when a Jedi yelled at him for help. He knew Zion was too strong. A few soliders fired a few shots but Zion deflected them back and killed them. Zion using the force picked up one of the skull fighters and threw it at a few Jedi who were caught un-aware. They colapsed under the weight and Zion's use of the force. Phinius was soon the only one left. Zion looked at him. Phinius knew it was time to face up to Zion. He ignited his purple blade and like Zion used the force to pick up a fallen comrades lightsaber. He ignited the orange blade and looked into the cold eyes of fury and evil....

Fate's Decision
01-24-2006, 09:20 PM
Mid fired into a group of Imp starfighters and moved around the explosion. He was waiting for the other Jedi to join the fray so he could get past the skull fighters. He blasted and tried out a few other missle commands, but he was getting used to the machine. True, Eptima made sure that all of the Jedi knew how to use them but the only time he had been in a starfighter not made specifically for Jedi was a skull fighter that he stole under commander Dyce Fondoa's command in order to rescue his fellow Jedi before Niaj Qad blew.
Mid tried out some long-range explosives in aim at the sensor relay points. He lined up his targeting monitor with the tracking system and fired. The shot was off by a mile! The missle went in a complete and totally different direction, crashing into the armor of a GSfighter. Mid hadn't even payed attention to where he was shooting. Mid slowed his fighter down so he could turn around. He was thinking of what happened on Niaj Qad, of how Phinius had slain the monster responsible for its destruction. A red beam swiped right above Mid. He was less than 200 yards away from a huge group of skull fighters. "Aaah!" he cried in frustration. Why couldn't he concentrate?
Mid flew his corefighter backwards and sped off toward the Mothership. How did the Empire find the alliance anyway?
A rebel soldier took him out of his trance. "Sir, a Sith Jedi has boarded the Mothership and is killing our soldiers!!"
Mid sucked in the shocking news and risked a higher burn to get to the ship faster. He flew right into the docking bay and commanded his ship to land. He didn't even wait for his ship to touch ground before he thrust himself out of the cockpit, flaring his lightsaber. A dual lightsaber was slicing through soldier after soldier, menacing and mercilessly. A blade that only belonged to Zion Romantix.

01-24-2006, 10:59 PM
There was many ships that tried to stop the box from heading towards the capital ship, but the 86th battalion was a determined, persistant, and powerful battalion, even in the air. They seemed to know just where their comrades were and moved into postions that would help them out. Bac mainly stayed out of the fighting. His objective was to stay alive and destroy the capital ship. Every now and then he'd help out, but only if the battalion was in desperate need of his assistance. The battalion still probably wouldn't have made it had it not been for the stray fighters that were picked up to help them. The last defense was a considerable group of fighters that launched out of the capital ships hangar. Not only that; though, but the turrents on the main ship was killing us out there. Eventually, Romul and his top two fighters told me to go on and they would follow to give a distraction. The rest of the fighters would fight the ships to keep Romul, Bac, and the two other fighters protected. They finally swirved out of the fighting and made it inside the capital ship.

01-25-2006, 01:00 PM
Phinius saw the Jedi get out of his ship but not stop to try and persuade him to leave. He imediatly had to block one of Zion's attacks.
"You are already doing better than the others" said Zion
Phinius stepped back and twirled his lightsabers
"I see you are a master now"
Zion launched into another attack. This time Phinius was less lucky. Zion caught one of Phinius's blades and struck it in half. The orange saber flew out of the ray shield and the two halves floated uselessly in space. Phinius raised his Purple blade to deffend himself. Zion kicked Phinius in the stomach and Phinius fell to the floor. He jumped back up but immediatly hit the deck as another Skull fighter was flung across the hanger. Phinius force pushed Zion threw a door and followed. Zion was ready. He hit Phinius in the face with the hilt of his blade. Blood spurted everywhere. Phinius was blinded by the blood but wiped it off. He slumped against the wall as Zion kneed him in the stomach. Zion slashed at the walls and pushed Phinius threw. Phinius fell threw the wall and down a small shaft. Above he heard an elivator moving down. ZIon was standing in the corridor watching. Phinius raised a hand weakly and attempted to stop the lift from crushing him....

Fate's Decision
01-26-2006, 06:15 PM
Mid stared horrified at the few dead Jedi sprawled around. Only a few survivors (many were unconcious) remained. But the death of Phinius would not stand. As Zion lowered the elevator onto Phinius, Mid grabbed a fallen rebel soldier's arm cannon and fired wildly. Zion stopped the elevator controls and blocked the rapid bullets. As he did this he slowly moved foward to take care of the nuisance. Yet Zion was not so easily fooled, for he used the force to keep the elevator slowly falling. Mid charged up the cannon to maximum damage and fired at the controls. Zion blocked a large chunk but couldn't hold back the entire blast. The elevator controls exploded. Mid now had to figure out a way to distract Zion long enough to allow the remaining Jedi to escape in the corefighters.

01-27-2006, 02:55 AM
The elevator stopped a few inches away from Phinius's face. It was then flung up into the air. Phinius heard it hit the top and then hurtle down again. He managed to stand up. When the elevaotr was just above him Phinius spun around with his saber in the air. The elevaotr hit the bottom. Phinius had cut a hole and had gone into the inside. He stumbled and grasped the wall. He felt a rush. Zion had thrown it back into the air. The elevator crashed once again at the top of the shaft and Phinius hit the ceiling and dropped onto the floor. Once again the elevator dropped, it hit the floor with sutch force Phinius was almost knocked out cold. The doors made a small bing and opened.Zion was standing there lightsaber ignited looking at Phinius.
"Going Up?"
The elevator shot up. Phinius jumped up and iginited his lightsaber and attacked. Zion blocked the wild slash easily and forced Phinius against a wall. The elevator made a noise and stopped. The doors opened and Phinius force pushed Zion out threw the doors. He followed limping.....

Jedi Atomic
01-27-2006, 06:17 PM
Scur made his way down the hallway of the Star Ship as the sirens were blazing. He walked into the bridge and felt Phinius needed help. Zaran was in the hangar as Scur walked in preparig his starfighter. Scur headed over to Zaran, "Hey Zaran we need to help Phinius since he saved from the suffocation in space after the destruction of Niaj Qad. Prepare your ship for departure and follow me."
"Yes, Master." he said as he half-way climbed up the ladder to situate the cockpit.
Scur walked over to his starfighter "Ready?"
"Yes it is"
Scur climbing the ladder into his starfighter and readyed the controls. (comlink)"Ready Zaran?"
(Comlink)"Yes Master Scur."
(Comlink)"Ok on our way to the capital ship." Scur said as the two ships hovered then blasted out of the hangar and into space.

01-28-2006, 12:04 PM
Bac Rueben, Romul, and the two other fighters landed in the enemy hangar and jumped out. Bac looked around and saw dead bodies all over. It seemed they were killed by a lightsaber. Bac and Romul walked forward, commanding the other two to guard the ships. They opened the door and saw a sith get pushed into an elevator followed by a jedi with a purple blade. They also saw another jedi with an arm cannon. They crawled through and hid behind a corner and watched the fight that ensued in front of them.

Jedi Atomic
01-28-2006, 12:20 PM
As Scur and Zaran made there way into veiw of the hangar bay on the enemy capital ship, some starfighters enterd the hangar. Scur quickly made his way to the ship and felt the force inside the ship. "Zion!" Scur said into the comlink.
"Where?" asked Zaran.
"Inside the capital ship."

Soon they entered the hangar and some of the Alliance troopers were running through the blast doors. "Zion and Phinius are close." said Scur as they landed inside the hangar. They jumped out and landed on the ground already sprinting towards the blast door leading to Phinius and Zion.

01-28-2006, 01:38 PM
Phinius struck at Zion witth such force when the two blades collided a burst of energy erupted making the walls around them crumble. Phinius blocked Zion's attack and then continued to parry with him. Zion kicked out and Phinius backed off. Phinius used force heal and regained the use of his right leg. He was still badly hurt but it hurt less. Phinius jumped up in the air and kicked Zion in the side of the head. Zion barly flinched. Zion looked into Phinius's eyes and grabbed his foot. Phinius's body fell limply down but was then thrown up as Zion started to spin. He spun several times gathering speed and then let go. Phinius hit a wall and slid down. Phinius got up slowly
"You always were a good fighter"
"You were always an arogant brat" spat Zion
Phinius nodded
"I wasn't arogant I just belived in my own abilities. SOMETHING YOU NEVER DID!"
Phinius flew at Zion and attacked. Zion started to smile. Phinius had to calm down or he would also fall to the dark side....

Jedi Atomic
01-29-2006, 09:56 PM
Scur and Zaran halt once they see Zion and Phinius fighting.
"Phinius No need to get angry about what he says, just tune him out!" Scur yelled after Phinius attacked in a frenzy, angry, interrupting the two Jedi fighting.

01-30-2006, 11:25 PM
While the jedi were busy, Bac Rueben and Romul rolled past the battle. They walked inside the door to find a few Civic pilots manning the turrent controls. They slowly pulled out their pistols to not diturb the pilots and fired upon the pilots. Two fell, but 3 more got up and fired. Bac rolled to the right behind some boxes and fired on the one closest to him. He was hit in the head and died instantly. The one next to him fired at Bac, but he ducked and was missed. Romul, meanwhile, didn't have such luck. He strafed and fired at the same time, but the pilot hit Romul in the shoulder. Romul fell, injured, but fired on the pilot. The pilot was shot in the chest and killed instantly. Bac finally popped up to see that the last pilot pointed his pistol at Romul. Bac aimed and fired, hitting the pilot in the leg and dropping him. Bac rushed towards him and knocked the gun out of his hand, pointing his pistol at him.

01-31-2006, 03:04 PM
Phinius landed a nasty blow on a control pannel and a door slid open. Zion backed into it. Zion glanced at the control and force pushed a dead body into it. The door slid closed and Zion and Phinius were seperated. Phinius heard a buzz and tried to unlock the door but it was stuck. Phinius sat down exhausted. He breathed heavily and focused. He used force heal to heal himself some what. He stood up slowly and ignited his lightsaber. He closed his eyes and raised the door using the force. Zion wasn't behind it. The light above where he had been flickered and died. The onlt light was the light from Phinius's lightsaber. Phinius entered. The door closed behind him. Phinius focused. Zion had hidden his presance and Phinius could not detect him. Suddenly a red glow filled the space behind Phinius. He turned but it was too late Zion had already struck. He sliced a deep wound into Phinius's back. Phinius choked and spat up blood. His vission blured. He went onto his knees. He gripped his blade and turned suddenly taking Zion's leg clean off. Blood sprayed the wall. Phinius fell onto his back on the cold floor and gasped in pain. He backed away. He left a trail of blood. Meanwhile Zion was cursing. Zion screamed and a new mechanical leg came out from where his old one once was. Phinius almost threw up. Zion stood up smiling.
"You think you can beat me?"
Phinius screwed up his face in pain and stood up.
"I don't think. I have to"
Phinius learched and hit the floor. Blood was everywhere. He gasped for breath. He tried to focus. He felt the wound in his back heal slightly. He struggled onto his feet again. But faced Zion determinatly and swung....

Jedi Atomic
01-31-2006, 09:29 PM
(You weren't even phased when Scur yelled at Phinius.)

After Phinius took a few swings at Zion, Scur quickly ran to the side of Phinius. "Since you saved me and Zaran we shall save you." said Scur as he ignited his orange and silver bladed lightsabers and Zaran ignited his blue lightsaber. " Don't worry we're here with you.

02-01-2006, 04:34 AM
Phinius looked at his friends.
"Thanks guys" he said in almost a whisper
He turned off his purple blade and put it in his robes. Instead he pulled out another blade and ignited it. This blade was yellow.
"Do you remember this?" Phinius asked Zion
"It's the first lightsaber you gave me"
Zion nodded as Phinius stared directly into his eyes
"You can't beat all three of us" Phinius said raising his blade
"So surender"

02-01-2006, 07:32 PM
Bac ordered Romul to guard the prisoner and walked through the door to the right. He had guessed right. This was the Engine Cooling Room. He pulled out his rifle and shot the security turrent, then started placing a time bomb on the cooling tank. Once he set the timer on all 5 of them, he ran out of the room. Behind him, the cooling tanks exploded, which on the outside caused the engines to fail. The ship swerved forward and Bac barley was able to grab onto a pole.

Fate's Decision
02-09-2006, 05:37 PM
(sorry I havnt posted in such a long time)

Mid ran ahead of Zion and Phinius and dropped down a hatch leading to their level. He then backtracked his way to where he saw Phinius last. Mid entered an extremely dark area only one room away from the place he last saw Phinius and Zion fighting. This would no doubt be the room where both of them were. He moved very cautiously along a long wall until he heard the faint buzz of a lightsaber around one of the corners, which he peeked around. It was Zion, and behind him he faced Phinius, Zaran and Scur. Mid made his entrance.

02-09-2006, 08:06 PM
Name: Arca "Shifty" Wolfe
Faction: Neutral
Class: Bountyhunter
Equipment: Unarmed except for telekenetic glove (crushes things)
Strengths: Mechanical stuff, Being silent, Assassination.
Weaknesses: Tacos, other assassin's blaster fire, Semi-jedis.
Background: After his parents were killed by jedi, He hitched a ride on the nearest out-bound ship. The jedi killed that ship (beliving it was carrying supplies for its enemies) and killed some of his friends. after crash landing in a strange planet, A sith found him and nursed the dark side in him.
Angered that that sith uses the powers of jedi, He tried to kill him, after a bit of fighting that involved a lightsabre mark in his back, arca finally did kill him. Then he set off again, Now hating both sith and jedi.
He found that he wasn't the only one hating both sith and jedi. He soon formed an organization of skillful assassins called C.R.O.W.s (Capable Resisters of war).

02-09-2006, 08:07 PM
damn i dunno whats going on here... i dunno where i should start

02-09-2006, 08:28 PM
Arca climbed up the ladder leading to the bridge of the capital ship. "Man", He said to himself, "This is gonna be simple and easy. The dumb guys don't even think of a bounty hunter being on the ship." Arca was on his own mission, for personal reasons, on this ship. Arca said, "I'm sure noone will care if i blow up the ship, so Why waste time killing dumb jedi individually?". Arca ran off to the engine room.

02-09-2006, 08:45 PM
Arca peeked through a stuck door, the engine room door. Inside was a rebel battalion commander of some sort. The commander said an order to someone arca couldn't see, and planted time bomb(s).
When the commander bent down to plant the time bombs arca knew he had to run before the soldiers found him as they ran out.
Whispering "thank you" secretly to the commander for doing his job for him, He ran off.

02-10-2006, 02:54 AM
Zion laughed.
"You three? You must be joking? You are not match for the sith!"
Zion flung Zaran aside. He hit a wall and slid down it. Zion struck at Phinius but Phinius dodeged. So instead he went for Scur. He swung his blade at Srur almost taking his head off. Scurr rolled out of the way. Zion force pushed Scur into a door which opened. Zion then picked Scur up and threw him through it. The door closed and locked. It was only Phinius and Zaran left. But Zion stopped.
"Another approaches" Zion swung around and faced a new face to the battle....

02-10-2006, 10:28 AM
Arca was running down the corridor as fast as he could.
Damn, He thought, Wish i had a jetpack on me.
Arca stopped short. Something was wrong. He looked up ahead and saw a door. The control panel to it had been destroyed by what looks like a lightsabre. Oh crap, He thought as a shiver went up his spine, Jedis.
He ran to the door. He could hear the light buzz of lightsabres and noises as if people were bouncing off the walls or something. He felt something in there. Even any mortal non-jedi could feel those medicloreans in there. One of those jedi was really powerful.
Arca knew he couldn't just stand in the middle of the corridor like this. Using his powerful legs he threw himself up to the ceiling and climbed along the poles, Approaching the door from above. He dropped down. He was thinking what to do when a squad of civil empire soldiers marched down the corridor, heads high.

02-10-2006, 10:48 AM
Bac went to find Romul and found him still in bad condition. The prisoner was still alive, but made no move to attack. Since Romul needed to be taken care of, he picked them both up and went down the hall.

02-10-2006, 10:58 AM
Arca gulped. Trapped. Behind the first squad of civils their was another, then another. They must have been trying to hunt down the jedi. It was pretty obvious really, Kill the jedi, And you have a way better chance of recapturing the ship.
Ok, He thought, Maybe those lightsabres were that of the good jedi. Maybe they would spare me. Arca started repairing the broken control panel and finally managed to fix the door when finally the soldiers started shooting. Arca pushed them down the corridor using his teleknetic glove, not even touching the troops, but flung them into each other, and threw himself inside the near pitch black room. He took a few pieces of pole and jammed the door so that it wouldn't open. It was beyond repair or opening now. Now he was trapped in a room full of jedi.
He could hear his heavy breathing and that of others. Part of his senses told him their was 3 jedi in the room, And the other part told him that their was 4. He saw a yellow lightsabre jumping around nearby. He threw himself to the ceiling again, Virtually invisible to mortal eyes. But not to jedi or sith senses.

02-10-2006, 04:38 PM
Zion sensed two newcomers but only saw one. Someone was on the ceiling. Zion had no times for games. He knew the biggest threats were Phinius and Scur. Phinius's yellow lightsaber was now in ruins on the floor but he still gripped his purple lightsaber and breathed heavily, exhausted from the battle. Zion smiled slightly. His job was easier now Phinius was denied two blades for combat. Zion twirled his blade around his fingers. He threw his lightsaber towards Scur. The blade cut a pole above Scur. He was then trapped under piping from above. Zion turned on Phinius.
"This is our fight and ours alone" he mumered
"...Agreed" Phinius panted. He could bearly stand. He was bleeding heavily from his shoulder and had a deep cut above his eye. He looked like he had come off pretty bad in a huge crash. Zion stepped forward with his blade rised.
"Before we start please inform me why you still stay loyal to the Jedi?" Zion asked
"Becasue we fight for the good"
"For good? Good and evil is just a point of view. I see the Jedi as evil becasue they try to police the galaxy and go against what they teach and turn their backs on those who need it most. Is that "Good"?"
Phinius stayed silent
"Fine....be that way. You will not see the truth. You are beyond my teachings. You are too "Good" which makes me "evil" I suppose" Zion said bretahing heavily
"Time to end this" Phinius said roughly
"Indeed..." Zion sighed
Zion raised his blade and attacked....

02-10-2006, 04:39 PM
Zion sensed two newcomers but only saw one. Someone was on the ceiling. Zion had no times for games. He knew the biggest threats were Phinius and Scur. Phinius's yellow lightsaber was now in ruins on the floor but he still gripped his purple lightsaber and breathed heavily, exhausted from the battle. Zion smiled slightly. His job was easier now Phinius was denied two blades for combat. Zion twirled his blade around his fingers. He threw his lightsaber towards Scur. The blade cut a pole above Scur. He was then trapped under piping from above. Zion turned on Phinius.
"This is our fight and ours alone" he mumered
"...Agreed" Phinius panted. He could bearly stand. He was bleeding heavily from his shoulder and had a deep cut above his eye. He looked like he had come off pretty bad in a huge crash. Zion stepped forward with his blade rised.
"Before we start please inform me why you still stay loyal to the Jedi?" Zion asked
"Becasue we fight for the good"
"For good? Good and evil is just a point of view. I see the Jedi as evil becasue they try to police the galaxy and go against what they teach and turn their backs on those who need it most. Is that "Good"?"
Phinius stayed silent
"Fine....be that way. You will not see the truth. You are beyond my teachings. You are too "Good" which makes me "evil" I suppose" Zion said bretahing heavily
"Time to end this" Phinius said roughly
"Indeed..." Zion sighed
Zion raised his blade and attacked....

02-10-2006, 06:49 PM
Arca knew he had to move. But he couldn't just jump down and run away. He had to choose a side and hope it was a good choice. He had to choose.
Mustering courage, Arca jumped down behind the sith, Took a swipe and knocked him down with his glove, Moved a trapped jedi's lightsabre to this one named Phinius's feet, And ran through the un-jammed door, All in one quick move. He nearly tripped over an unconcious jedi on the other side, But ran intill he reached the end of the corridor opposite of the door.
Arca sat down, eyeing the door and breathing heavily...

02-10-2006, 07:31 PM
(can't we get off this ship sometime!?!? i thought we were going to naboo)

02-10-2006, 07:48 PM
Arca knew he had to get off this ship. But he had to kill those jedi and the sith. Instead of heading to the door opposite of him, he headed towards the bridge. He had an idea...

Finally arca got to the bridge. He checked the transmitters and found one undamaged. He said "This is Civic Capital Ship SS-01 to Frigate 12-0R, Hello?"
"This is Frigate 14-P2 whats going on?" Replied the radioman.
"Jedi are destroying the ship. Just me and my men are left." Arca lied. "When need you to destroy this ship, Theirs no hope for it. We'll find a way out of here. The...erm.. sithlord is dead. And i repeat, you need to destroy the ship."
"Your order has been accepted." The radioman said after a pause. " You have approximitly 5 minutes to get out of their before the gun turrets fire, over."
At that Arca left without repliying.

Jedi Atomic
02-10-2006, 08:11 PM
(You mean that Zaran was trapped under the pipes since Scur is on the other side of a locked door. Change the part about Scur being trapped under pipes to Zaran being trapped under the pipes or whatever you used to crush Zaran.)

Scur flung onto the floor of the cold-smooth hallway, with the doors closing, locked.

Meanwhile, Zaaran is getting up from the force push when many many pipes and junk from the ceiling fall on him immobilizing him for the time being.

Shortly after, Scur jumps up and searches for his lightsaber not finding it. He holds out his hand and uses the force to find it. soon something hits his hand and its cold with a warm feeling to it. He looks at it and its his lightsaber hilt. He serves the area and starts thinking, as he soon heaars two lightsabers buzz as they clashed. He ignites his saber and walks towards the blast door between Zion, Phinius, and Zaran from Scur. Scur slowly pushes the lightsaber into the door as it moves the the metal door melting everthing it touches. He slowly starts making a circle(like in Phantom Menace when Qui-Gon on the CIS Capital Station where its noticeable from the other side).

02-10-2006, 08:16 PM
ok then who am i kidnapping???? cuz if zaran is getting up and scur is getting up... and i tied up someone....

Jedi Atomic
02-10-2006, 08:25 PM
(Zaran was crushed in the same room as Phinius and Zion as Jedi Consular Scur was force pushed and locked out of the same room still conscious. just to let you know juice. So really you didn't capture any other persons characters but you may capture anyother jedi except Scur((force pushed out into the hallway)), Zaran((like I said is crushed under rubble and cannot be retreived at the moment because Zion and Phinius are fighting in the same room as Zaran)), and obiviously Phinius and Zion((currently fighting each other)) so you can't capture one of them four at the moment)

02-10-2006, 09:51 PM
:( fine. i better just edit that post then. and we should really get off this damn ship now!!

Fate's Decision
02-10-2006, 10:29 PM
(you might want to skim through the prequel Niaj Qad Keep (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=154046). also note that the rebellion can't be tracked when moving to naboo)

Mid was unsure of whether to aid Phinius or not. He knew he shouldn't interfere with their "one-on-one" battle, but Mid had seen Zion kill jedi before. If Phinius let his guard down...he would be dead in an instant. However, seeing civic imps walk through the corridor narrowed Mid's ability to help Phinius. Mid was also interrested in seeing if the Imperials concidered a Sith Lord friend or foe. Their orders came from the same source, but Mid doubted that Rures would metion the his little Sith group just yet.
When the imps came close enough, Mid jumped forward with his saber in form-four position, then landed it on one of the troops. He began to cut them down from the center of the group, hoping he would draw fire away from Phinius.

02-11-2006, 07:57 AM
(i did twice but the things so big i miss stuff and why does it matter if the rebel ships can't b tracked! like the civil leader is a sith!?! shouldn't he be able to sense the ships moving their. and look at #43 to see arca ordering the ship to b blown to hell .pardon my language. im doing a countdown typa thing) (my char is after u fate's decision!!!)

Arca ran to the hangar and looked around. All the ships collidided in a corner when the ship lurched after its engines being blown out. The rest of the ships were destroyed by debris or supports falling from the wall.
"Goddamnit!" Yelled Arca at the ship and he threw a fist at the wall only to bring it back, howling.
If he was going to be stuck on this ship when it blew up he was gonna kill as many jedi as he can, He thought as anger filled his mind.

There was 4 minutes till destruction

02-11-2006, 01:35 PM
Zion clashed blades with Phinius. Phinius drew back and struck low at Zion. Zion blocked it and kicked Phinius in the face. Phinius backed away glutching a bleeding nose. Phinius spun his blade around and struck Zion's hand. Zion did not flinch, he did not show sighns he had been hit at all. He just kept attacking. Phinius was at a loss. He had no idea how to defeat Zion anymore. Anything he tried failed. He sensed something. The ship was in trouble. Zion seemed not to care.
"The explosion of this ship will not harm us Jedi. We are trained....well I am trained in how to deal with these situations"
Zion threw his blade towards the ceiling. It bounched back and hit Phinius's leg. He screamed in pain. A sound echod through the ship.
"The first of many explosions" muttered Phinius
Zion force grabbed his lightsaber and to Phinius's surprise turned it off.
"This is no over" Zion said seeing Phinius's face
"But i do not wish to be blown away and this fight is rather interesting. If you want to survice follow me towards the bridge. The ship will not fully blow. Half the ship will be blown into oblivion. We will simply fall to the planet below, there we can continue our fight. Get your friends to follow you" with that Zion walked back into the darkness and vanished. Phinius hobbled over to Zaran who was under the rubble. He used the force to get the stuff off him.
"Come on we need to leave. YOU TOO MID!" Phinius yelled

02-11-2006, 03:52 PM
(hurray im finally ending this ship battle)

Arca flew back and forth off the walls in impossible speeds only avaliable to his Unknown species and jedi. He saw a sith walking through the ship and... Jedi following him? Arca kept up behind them at a safe distance. His mind wandered and was full of questions as he did so. Was the sith and the jedi allies now? Maybe they were all jedi and they just had an argument?. Then a thought struck him: What part of the ship were the stupid imps going to fire at?
Arca looked outside a window: They were in low orbit around a familar planet. Another thought struck at him again: Was that the planet my C.R.O.W.s (see my entry) were stationed on in case i failed? And another thought: Maybe the jedi and the sith were going to crash land on it. Then they would continue fighting and my men would be in danger... The colour draining from arca's face as he kept following...
Then his thoughts were cut short as he shivered: Now someone was following him. Must have been the other jedi he sensed. So it was a following game was it? The jedi followed the sith and Arca followed the jedi, Another jedi was following arca. Or at least someone with the powers of a jedi...

There was 3 minutes to destruction

02-11-2006, 06:35 PM
(New char!!!)(This guy is my main guy hes gonna kill arca)

Name: Juice Flowe
Faction: Neutral
Class: Hired Assassin
Equipment: Stolen Jedi Lightsabre
Strengths: Assassination, Cityfighting, Going behind enemy lines, Force powers
Weaknesses: Space sickness, Space Combat (Piloting), Spread Shot blasters
Background: Juice Flowe and Arca Wolfe were friends in a Mercenary Acadamy on Tatooine when they both found out they had large amounts of Medocloreans in them. Arca denied it but Juice excepted it but refused to go to the jedi acadamy when a jedi master came to him (Ended up slaying that master as well :D) and kept on training to become an assassin. When the Mercenary Acadamy was attacked during the battle Juice and Arca were seperated they thought each other ran away from each other and forged a new hatred for each other. Once they fought each other while trying to assassinate one target: A chancellor. They still have that hatred up to this day.

02-11-2006, 07:40 PM
Juice looked through the space window to see the spce battle that had been going since yesterday. There had been many ships falling from orbit but one that had its engines blown and was slightly smoking was the one he was on and the one different from the others. Juice could feel jedi and sith presences on the ship. There was only one sith presences and at first he could feel many jedi presences... but most of them disappeared now.. meaning they died... Juice coul even feel the presence of a semi-jedi, a jedi who refused ro belive of his powers. Juice only knew one of those type and that was Arca Wolfe.. but he couldn't possibly be on the same mission as hime twice. Juice was hired by a rebel Admiral to kill a sithlord by the name of Zion Romantix. He was even in the same room as all the jedi, the sith, and the semi-jedi for a long period of time, All that time Juice was using an old Mercenary Acadamy tactic of staying on the ceiling. Juice grew suspicious of his theory that it might be Arca on this ship as the semi-jedi did that same tactic. That semi-jedi was probally noticed by the sith and jedi. Luckily Juice had a power that not many jedi have; to not only disappear in the force but to disguise the non-presence of himself as something else, in this case, a recon droid watching from inside the pipes.
But after the jedi had a few clashes and dramatic talks (lol) with the sith they left, talking about half the ship blowing up but being able to crashland it and them heading to the bridge.
Now Juice was following the semi-jedi by using a tactic he figured only jedi,sith and people of Juice and Arca's species: Jumping off the walls back and forth at Astonishing speeds. Juice groaned when he found out something that confermed Juice's sispicions: The Semi-jedi (Arca, He now knew) was using that same tactic.
Hatred pouring through him because of Arca ditching him on tatooine (or so he thought), He used Force speed to excellerate his jumping-off-the-walls tactic, And then caught up to arca. With speeds making him barely visible to mortal eyes he wiped out his lightsabre, activated it and swung it down on arca...
Arca turned around and threw juice back using his stupid telekenetic glove.
"I knew i felt another jedi presence in that darked out room back there". Arca murmered
"Shutup and lets get on with it, fool" Juice snapped back. And whipped his lightsabre around, Nearly catching Arca in the foot.
"Fin-- Arca didn't get the time to finish because two surviving jedi ran into the room (not any other chars) obviously to see what the racket was about.
Arca, Angered that what seemed the interpution of the utter defeat of his old friend, Telekeneticly threw one jedi against the wall and exploded another jedi's head in a explosion or blood, brains and bones. Arca quicked Telekeneticly pulled a jedi's lightsabre to him, activating it.
"Now lets forget that little interuption ever happened and get on with it." said Juice.
"Indeed." Replied Arca. And they started expertly swinging at each other but each other blocked each attack they threw. They bounced off obsticles and every time Juice's Black stolen Jedi lightsabre and Arca's New lightsabre collided. Finally Juice turned off his lightsabre and threw Arca's Lightsabre against the wall, Turning it off to.
As Arca called his lightsabre back to him said "Do you know that this ship is gonna go boomy-boomy in 2 and a half minutes?"
"Yes, I was the one who tricked the imp idiots into doing that"Arca replied, Caustious.
"The sith says that only half the ship will blow and their going to just let this thing drop to the planet below, Then fight continue there."Juice said slowly."Maybe we should do the same".
Arca thought for a moment then tucked his lightsabre on his belt and said."Agreed".
They set off bouncing of the walls down the corridor again towards the bridge...

There was two minutes till the destruction of the ship...

Jedi Atomic
02-11-2006, 07:46 PM
Scur finally made a hole in the door and noticed Phinius moving the rubble with the force, revealing Zaran who was pretty banged up from being crushed. "Well what happened to Zion?"
"He said that the ship is blowing up and we shall continue the fight on land. We must follow him to the bridge."
Zaran slowly stood up and swiped off his bruises and cuts with Force Heal which made the scars disappear almost.
"Lead the way Phinius." said Zaran as he felt for his lightsaber hilt. Phinius started walking towards a blast door leading towards the bridge.

(Juice this happened little before your post!)

02-11-2006, 08:20 PM
(lol sorry if i keep taking over the story and don't giv u guys enough time to respond but i like this role-play and i go on the forums a lot)
(This post is after you all get to the bridge)

Juice and Arca reached the ladder that lead to the bridge. They stopped and turned to each other.
"Well here we are" Said Arca, Twitching at the fact their was a sith above him.
"I guess we wait for the ship to explode" Said Juice
"Or...." Said Arca. "Or what?" Juice said back, Curious.
"Why are you here, Juice?" Asked Arca, Curiousity clear on his face.
"Well if you really must know... To kill that sith above us." Said Juice
"Exactly the same reason as me!" Exclaimed Arca."Why don't we run up there and just kill the sith!" He took a step towards the ladder.
"NO!" Roared Juice.
"You can't stop me." said Arca, angry, Though he wasn't so sure himself.
"watch me" Replied Juice Fiercely. And before arca could respond, Juice rammed his palm into his temple, knocking Arca unconcious. He hoped no one heard anything up above.

There was 1 minute till destruction... (Hurry up guys! i hate fighting on ships)

Fate's Decision
02-11-2006, 09:58 PM
(yes, Rures is an extremely powerful Sith lord but the rebellion doesn't know that he has that much power)

The ship have an unexpected jolt as it broke in half from chemical defusion. All of the Jedi were thrown off balance, giving the que to leave. Mid finished off the last of the Imperials and beckoned Zaran to follow him to the first hangar. He retraced his steps back to his green-trimmed corefighter and Zaran used the force to unhinge a blue-trimmed one from two other corefighters. Master Kantei and his Padawan were both concious and already loading up injured but living jedi into each of their gunships. Mid and Zaran then flared up their corefighters and flew around to the other end of the ship, and waited for the exit of Phinius and Scur.

02-12-2006, 09:54 AM
(I'm getting my chars off this damn ship now)

Their was a great groan of the ship as it broke in half. Juice was starring out at the window at the dying space battle as Arca awoke...
Before Juice could do anything, Arca activated his lightsabre and took a swipe at Juice's back. Juice screamed out in pain then activated his own black lightsabre.
"So thats how you want to play is it?" Juice swung back, Taking Arca's finger off.
Then they stopped catching each other off guard and once again matched each others attacks. They kept fighting without saying anything intill juice turned his lightsabre off and said
"Catch me if you can" To arca, And when flying off the walls down the hall.
Arca growled, Turned off his lightsabre and took off after him.
Juice used force speed to gain speed moving along the halls and finally reached the part where the ship broke in half.
"Race you down there" Juice said. Juice put his rebreather in his mouth and back flipped off the ship to the atmoshpere below.
Arca did the same. they fell down at speeds so fast they were just a blur to anything. They had no jetpacks, no parachutes to land. No jedi or sith could do this. They had skin that burned easily in the atmosphere. People of Juice's and Arca's Species had metals as bones and their skin was tough as titanium (Not tough enough when it comes to a lightsabre). Juice could feel his body heating up and friction daring to burn him up to nothing.
But he was going so fast the atmosheric entry was only 15 seconds long. He knew if raised an arm it would only break off. they reached speeds at a thousand miles per hour and then they hit ground.
It blew a 2 deep holes and 2 small craters in the grounds in the long flat valley they landed in. They both lay curled up in those 2 holes suffering from lack of energy. Now when they did that type of maneuvre in Mercenary acadamy their would be people ready to pick them up. But this time they just had to suck it up.

02-14-2006, 06:49 PM
Juice groaned and had to use much effort to throw himself up the hole. When he got there he saw arca standing at the edge of a nearby forest. He said:
"Up for a game of hide, seek and tag?" And disappeared into the forest.
Anger flew itself through Juice. Arca didn't have the right to tease him. Arca was weaker than him.
He ran through the forest as quiet as a ghost. Arca was playing games with him. He was finally using the force, And now he hid himself in it. Juice did the same. He felt Arca's presence close by but didn't know where. As he approached a hill Arca's presence was gone. Then he heard the Hum of a lightsabre and his own voice uncontrollably screaming. His hand was on the ground, Sliced clean off. And their was Arca, Smiling.
Uncontrolable anger coursed through his veins in unbelivable amounts. The cracking of a massive electric storm rolled overhead. Juice screamed in anger and the forest burst into flames. The mounatins on either side of them shook then exploded as if they were active volcanos the entire time.
Holding his bleeding stub of what used to be an arm, He screamed
He activated his lightsabre and leaped upon a trembling Arca. He raised his lightsabre in attempt to block the inevitable attack.

Thats when Juice was blinding by Pure white light.

He screamed as a blaster bolt blew through his shoulder, Blood splurting everywhere. He looked up to see C.R.O.W.s standing in perfect circle formation around him. One fired and took out Juice's stomach. Another fired and knocked him in the leg, Making him collapse. The C.R.O.W.s tighted their formation, Shooting one by one. His black lightsabre blew out of his hand as a bolt took out his other shoulder.
"Nooo!" He screamed over and over as the Crows fired at him, Turning him to a bloody mass. Juice struggled to breath as he only had one lung left.
He looked up at the sky and screamed one last time. "Noooo!" The Crows and Arca backed off then blew into dust then the valley turned to dust from a massive light wave, Making it a ravaged wasteland. Juice looked at his pieces of flesh in pools of blood. His last thought was 'I'm not done yet' and his head fell to the ground. Dead. The explosion that made the valley a wasteland could be seen from all over the planet.

02-19-2006, 11:54 AM
(sos I havnt posted in a while of been on holiday)

Phinius stumbled as the ship gave a huge jolt. Zion had disapeared from view and now Phinius was in complete darkness.
"Where...am....I going" Pinius managed to gasp. He continued to walk down the dark passage and eventually found the bridge. The space battle outside was crazy. Ships everywhere, explosions and Phinius could even hear the sreams of the men who were being killed. Phinius tried to block these noises out. he knew he could only hear this becasue of the force. He screwed up his face and almost weapt. He fell to the floor. Zion stood in a corner staring at his old pupil.
"You now what I mean?"
Phinius ignored him
"See what the Jedi have casued?"
Phinius sobbed over a control pannel
"Some Jedi you are....A Jedi is not supposed to have the feelings you have"
Phinius stopped in time to say
"I hate you" when the ship gave another jolt and the ship ripped in half...

02-22-2006, 02:01 PM

The ship plumeted to the planet below. It gained speed and crashed head on into a building. Phinius was thrown against the control pannel at the front of the bridge. He hit his head and everything went black. He had a starnge vision. A dark Jedi in a mask was directing a war. He turned to see Phinius looke at him. The figure ignited a blade which was dark red. Phinius got out his purple blade and they started dueling. The Jedi swung and took a slash. Phinius woke up was covered in blood and sweating. He lay on the floor for some time before coming colpletly to his senses. He sat up and took in his surroundings. He remembered what had happened now. Zion was no where to be seen. Phinius walked down the dark hallways and came to a room. Inside was a grey Jedi robe which he exchanged for his blood stained one. He left the room and went to where the ship had been split in half. The ship was still glowing red from the heat. He jumped out and went in search for any survivors. Strangly enough he could not find any cuts on him so that meant his old Jedi robe was not covered in his blood but someone elses. The ship had crashed into a cathedral. Phinius entered the now ruined area. He came to a foundatin. Sitting by the waters edge was Zion. He was meditating.
"You took some time"
"I was-"
"Covered in blood....and dreaming of what is to come"
"Yes...well how do you know that is to come?"
"I have foreseen it...A Jedi Civil war"
"It can not-"
"Enough. You came here to attempt the finish a Job"
"But you-"
"I have been given the title of a Sith lord. But why does this title suddenly make me evil ? How can any title make you evil? A title is just a name it does not control what you do"
Phinius reached for his saber but it gone.
"I have it"
Zion stood up and threw the Lightsaber to Phinius who ignited it as he caught it. Zion sighed.
"You have mutch to learn"
"Me? They started to war! People die in war Phinius it what happens! I merly killed many because I thought that might stop it. My intentions were good! But you need more than good intentions. As you see I Have made it worse! Both sides blame each other for the destruction of that planet. They refuse to see the truth! They refuse to see the consequences of their actions! Thus they are punished! The Jedi Council either don't do anything until it's too later or rush in and make mistakes and one day they will see this. Your visions prooves this! The war you saw will kill thousands and almost wipe out the Jedi order! Can you not see this?"
Phinius was quiet.
"The Jedi Council have their flaws as do you and me but you can not say that you killed innnocents-"
Phinius attacked. Zion blocked it and flipped over Phinius's head and then kicked him into the pool of water...

Jedi Atomic
02-22-2006, 07:22 PM
Once the ship crashed landed, Scur and Zaran whirled over the land inopposite directions and skidding along the dirt. Scur was conscious but was in much pain. Zaran was unconscious from the impact but was still alize and had no scratches or bruises. Scur hoisted himself off the ground and force healed some of the pain in his limbs and chest. He looked around and noticed they were on (whatever planet we're on?)

After a while of looking around he noticed Zaran laying on the opposite side of the crashed ship. Scur ran up to Zaran and started shaking him. "Zaran! Wake up."
he looked around again and force healed Zaran's head and chest to see if he would start breathing again and get his brain together. Zaran moved and started breathing slowly but didn't open his eyes.

"Am I alive?" asked Zaran after opening his eyes shortly after he started breathing. "Yes you are alive. this is Scur remember?"
"Yes I remember."
"Well we crash landed on (planet?) and are trapped but I have no idea where Zion and Phinius are."
"Well we must help him."
"I agree, but I haven't a clue where they are."
"Lets look on the ship first." Zaran said as he slowly sat upwards. "Hmmm. no pain? That's weird."
"Yeah. Certainly is." Scur said as he looked around again while Zaran stood up felling for his lightsaber.
"Woah! Where's my lightsaber?" Zaran said as e wipped himself around scanning the ground. Scur looks around and finally notices it.
"Over there." Scur murmured as he pointed somewhere beside Zaran.

02-23-2006, 12:49 PM
Phinius jumped up and attacked.
"Obviously that didn't cool you off" Zion muttered
Phinius matched Zions at attack with perfect defence. There was nothing between them.
"I see you have taken the councils plan to heart" Zion said after a while
"What Plan?" Phinius said with so much venom in his voice that Zion was a little surprised.
"You do not know? You were made a master so you could defeat me"
"I don't understand"
"You are the only Jedi alive who knows my combat skills and moves- well you know a some. They made you a master so you could catch me so you could lead the battle against me"
"They made me a master becasue of what happened on Niaj Qad-" Phinius said in a hurt voice
"That's what they told you"
Zion swung around and caught Phinius off Guard. Phinius was slammed into a pillar which crumbled. Phinius rolled our of the way of falling rubble. And tripped Zion up. He kicked Zion's blade away. And put the purple blade to Zion's throat.
"Are you going to kill me?"
"It's not the Jedi way"
"Neither is abandening their own but they did that to me"
"No- you were uncontrolable-"
"Thats a lie. I was left for dead. But I cursed the Jedi and now i'm here"
zion kicked Phinius off him and punched him. Phinius was bleeding but he stood up defiantly.
"I see you will not believe me no matter what I say" Zion sighed and screamed. His face turned into the face Phinius had seen on Niaj Qad. A face with no remorse a face with no emotion, just hatred. The sith lord Zion had returned and this time he was going to finish the Job. Phinius took off his Cloak and rasied his blade ready for the attack....

Jedi Atomic
02-23-2006, 07:12 PM
Scur and Zaran started running for the downed ship and entered through a crack along the wall. They looked around and started down a hallway which was angled downward.

Soon enough they heard some buzzing from lightsabers clashing. "That must be them." Zaran exclaimed.
"Hurry." said Scur as he started running. Zaran started running after Scur but stopped abruptly.
"What's wrong?" asked Zaran confused.
"They're under us." Scur said as he ignited his saber and slowly stabbed it into the floor.

02-23-2006, 09:29 PM
(just make up a planet name like UggaBearhugcuddles)

Juice was shaking uncontrollably.

As he shaked, He looked around with his unfocused eyes. Where was he? Juice thought he died in the former-valley-now-wasteland. Once his eyes focused he saw a figure standing infront of him in pure white robes.
"Greetings." He said as if they were long lost friends. "I am Tyuak Caatic. The other elders of time greet you too."
"Wha- Where am I?"Juice replied.
"You are in the Gap of time." Tyuak Simply Replied.
"What the hell is a Gap in time?" Juice said, Confused.
"THE gap in time." Said the white robed man. "This is where those who have lost their souls go."
"WHAT???" Juice exclaimed.
"You, My friend, Lost your soul when you used your anger so powerful you tore an entire countryside apart." Tyuak Replied, Chuckling to himself.
"You shall be brought forth in front of the elders to see if you deserve to go back to the Mortal world."Tyuak Smiled.
"Ya whatever, Lead on."Juice said.
"My pleasure." And Tyuak went through a pure white door like the room around them.
Panicly, Juice felt for his lightsabre. It was still there. Relief washed over him.
They entered another white room. In it sat other people in white robes. The elders.
"My fellow elders, I have brought yet another lost soul before you."Tyuak said, His powerful voice echoing in the room.
"Hmmm." One powerfully built elder said. "This one is of great importance in the mortal world."
"Let us test him." Another elder said.
On que, Someone entered the room.
Juice filled with anger and threw himself at arca, drawing his lightsabre. But the lightsabre was no longer there. He noticed but kept running at arca. Preparing to kill with his rough hands if he had to.
Then when juice was so close, Arca disappeared. Juice banged into the wall headfirst like some hallucanating idiot. He looked around hungryly like one of felucia's carnivore animals.
"Interesting." Tyuak said.
"Indeed." An old elder said. "We shall return him to the mortal world as the forever angry mortal he is. The dark side will wash over him, But that is not of our concern."
Tyuak said "We shall be seeing you around Mr. Flowe." And the world flashed back to him.
Juice was standing near the downed spaceship he jumped off of. His lightsabre was there again, and he was wearing a Mandalorian Helmet and a cape. The dark side had taken Juice Flowe.

02-24-2006, 11:04 AM
(sorry i keep making chars but i killed arca so i need someone to fight)

Name: Vai Zacor
Faction: Neutral - Elder of the gap in time
Class: Elder
Equipment: Purple double-bladed (like darth maul's) lightsabre
Strengths: Lightsabre combat, Quick thinking, Planning, Controlling Anger
Weaknesses: Space combat, Mechanics
Background: As a young teen, Vai lost his soul when his entire world was blown up. He was mourning so much he detached himself from the rest of the world, Refusing to talk, Eat, Or move. During the time he was in that little coma of his he was thinking a lot. Alot, Alot. He was so intelligent that when his body could no longer take seperation anymore and he lost his soul the other elders decided to make him an elder. (Not all the elders are old they are just called elders, Vai is 21 years old.)

02-24-2006, 04:38 PM
With one vicious slash Zion struck at Phinius's blade and it was dislodged from Phinius grip. Blood trickled down his hands. Phinius was stunned.
"Such power" he thought
Zion stood tall and powerful
"I am no ordinary dark force. I am no sith. I am against evil. Just a different evil to you" Zion said
Phinius force grabbed his lightsaber and struck. They matched each other perfectly. A surge of energy surrounded them. Blue light surrounder Phinius and Red light surounded Zion. They matched each other blow for blow. The rubble around them started to shake and raise into the air such was the power of the battle. Phinius had found a hidden power and was using it to his advantage but Zion was terribly strong. Phinius back flipped over a pillar but Zion followed it up. He delivered a roundhouse kick and Phinius stumbled and fell to his knees. He dodged a vicious slash by Zion's lightsaber and flipped back up. They started to match eachother again....

A elder Jedi survivour of the crash surveyed the battle.
"This will surely go down in history as one of the greatest lightsaber duels in history" He muttered. He walked down a stone path and entered the temple. He walked in on the two fighting.
"Phinius!" He said clearly
Phinius turned
"You can not win. He is too strong"
Phinius shoulder slouched and his face cracked
"NO! I won't let him win!"
"It's too late. He has become too evil too consumed by hatred. His strenght is beyond any Jedi alive"
Zion smiled
"So I shall imprisson him"
Zion's smile faded instantly.
"What do you mean old man?" Zion spat
"You shall remain here until the Jedi who can defeat you arrives and this will not be for come time"
"This temple will be your resting place"
The elder Jedi twirled his hands. A green light echoed through the Temple. Zion screamed and disapeared.
The elder turned to Phinius
"This shall forever be known as the temple of the damned. But come, we have much to discuss"
Phinius was stunned. He picked up his cloak and followed the elder back to the ship.....

02-24-2006, 04:55 PM
Phinius sat down and waited for the old jedi to explain. But he didn't seem to let anything slip. So phinius asked
"What's going on?"
"Zion has just been trapped In that temple until the one who has the power to defeat him comes to destroy him"
"Who is that person?"
"He is not born yet. His name is...well will be Jax"
"I see"
"He will be a normal child. His parents will not be force sensitive and neither will he to begin with but you must train him"
"You are the only one who can teach him what he needs to know"
"Zion is the biggest threat in the galaxy at this time. You know him better than anyone alive. He was your master and you will teach your student what he must do. It will not be easy. Clouded his future is"
"I see...but how can you see this?"
"I may be fairly useless with a lightsaber but my force powers are somewhat....incredible if i say so myself"
Phinius sat gob smacked
"When will he be born?"
"Not for a long long time"
"How old will I be?"
"Oh...I'd say.....err...as old as me"
"How old are you?"
"Very old"
Phinius sat there and shivered
"What now?"
"We wait"
"The Next threat"
Phinius sat and waited but nothging more was said. So phinius laid back and in a few moments was in a deep sleep....

The young boy known as Jax had given up on his teaching. Phinius had to finish it. He travelled to temple of the damned. Zion was waiting for him. Phinius withdrew a lightsaber and attacked. Zion laughed and countered. He threw Phinius aside.
"You have brought death to the galaxy. Your pupil will not be pure enough. You gave him too much freedom! You let him aid the alliance. He is out of your control and will no longer pose a threat for me!" Zion laughed and slashed....

Phinius woke up. The elder had gone. He tried to remember his vision but couldn't. He stood up and saw Juice. Phinius noticed a difference in the way he stood. Phinius brabbed his lightsaber and aproached.....

02-25-2006, 01:33 PM
(lol this is gonna b sweet, u can kinda control my char. but don't make juice's head chopped in half or sometin, take it easy)

Almost machine-like, juice activated his Black lightsabre and lept down upon Phinius.

After juice was transported from the gap of time, The old Elder of time said to the strongly build one, Vai: "Young vai. Juice Flowe is a massive threat now. We need your young body and intelligence to protect the most important people of the galaxy from him."
"I understand." Vai said. And Teleported himself to the mortal world.
Vai gasped for breath when he got there. He was used to the non-polluted, non-dirty air of the gap of time. He breathed slowly intill he could breath the dirty air properly. He set off after Juice at a safe distance.

02-25-2006, 05:18 PM
(Same. You can control my character some what and yeah lets take it easy)

Phinius ignited his blade and blocked Juices's attack. Phinius fealt calmer and more powerful. He swung at Juice but missed. Phinius made his center of gravity as low as possible and dived at Juice, who lost his balance and fell. He got staright back up and turned breathing heavily...

On top of the hill that overlooked the crash site the elder Jedi stood watching the battle. He smiled to himself and chuckled. He turned and came face to face with a man.
"Your plan will fail Jedi" he whispered
"Zion will not be confided in those walls any longer"
"Ah thats what you think lord...sorry I didn't catch the name?"
The sith lord smirked and raised a blade
"Kill me if you must but my....er spell if you like, will not be lifted until the boy comes to defeat him"
The sith lord moaned and stabbed the Jedi in the chest. The Jedi fell to the floor and lay still. The Sith Lord known as Nekx screamed in fury and hatred and approached the battle below to kill the Jedi who stopped Zion from completing his job...

02-26-2006, 08:47 AM
Juice sprang back at Phinius and slashed at him at astonishing speeds for a 17-year-old but Phinius blocked everyone of them. Juice was angered that this jedi could block every move he made. (using the force) he lifted a massive piece of ruin from the temple and threw it in Phinius's direction while it flew towards Phinius, Juice summoned the force and anger shot from his hands, In the form of lightning. Sith lightning.

Vai was sitting on a grassy hill above the battle, Legs crossed. He was meditating, It helped clear his thoughts and sharpen his focus. Vai was calm and knew that his time to interfere would come soon. Another approached.
"Ssssitttthhh." He stretched out the word. Erai, One of the 6 female elders, Had talked about battling a sith lord when he landed on her planet and killed her parents and her village people. She killed that sith but did it so angryly she lost her soul. Like Juice, she was so angry she blew the entire countryside apart.
"If he interferes with the battle when he comes, I will have to stop him." Vai said. "Elders and Sith lords are equal. But noone knows that."
The sith lord was approaching and was in natural line of sight. Vai shifted to the sith lords right and concentrated on a mountain. The mountain rumbled and lifted off the ground like some rocket. Then he forced the mountain sideways. The mssive chunk of rock was above the sith lord. Vai let the Mountain drop.

02-26-2006, 08:50 AM
(I was thinking maybe we could have 2 battles at once. Phinius and Juice, and beside them, My elder and your sith. Gotta love my mountain)

Juice sprang back at Phinius and slashed at him at astonishing speeds for a 17-year-
old but Phinius blocked everyone of them. Juice was angered that this jedi could block every move he made. (using the force) he lifted a massive piece of ruin from the temple and threw it in Phinius's direction while it flew towards Phinius, Juice summoned the force and anger shot from his hands, In the form of lightning. Sith lightning.

Vai was sitting on a grassy hill above the battle, Legs crossed. He was meditating, It helped clear his thoughts and sharpen his focus. Vai was calm and knew that his time to interfere would come soon. Another approached.
"Ssssitttthhh." He stretched out the word. Erai, One of the 6 female elders, Had talked about battling a sith lord when he landed on her planet and killed her parents and her village people. She killed that sith but did it so angryly she lost her soul. Like Juice, she was so angry she blew the entire countryside apart.
"If he interferes with the battle when he comes, I will have to stop him." Vai said. "Elders and Sith lords are equal. But noone knows that."
The sith lord was approaching and was in natural line of sight. Vai shifted to the sith lords right and concentrated on a mountain. The mountain rumbled and lifted off the ground like some rocket. Then he forced the mountain sideways. The mssive chunk of rock was above the sith lord. Vai let the Mountain drop.

02-26-2006, 09:10 AM
after this role-play ends we should make another role-play thingy. like start from new. new characters, New story. Cuz this one and that massive wat-cha-ma-call-it series are linked now and ya,

02-26-2006, 09:14 AM
(I love the idea of the moutain. ANd good idea about both battles too. I tilt my hat to you...well I would If I had one)

Phinius sliced the huge chunk of rubble in half and it fell around him. But he unable to dodge the lightning. He screamed and fell. When the lightning stopped he gasped for air. He got up shaking and calmed himself. His new maturity made it possible for him to think logically about this new foe...

The mountain dropped. But before it hit the sith. It crumbled, as if it was scared to touch the sith lord. Nekx turned to Vai.
"Elder, you dare threaten me?"
Nekx's black cloak rippled in a non existant breaze. He withdrew two lightsaber and waited for the elder to act. He did nothing, so Nekx continiued to talk
"Your blood be upon your own head then if you should try and stop me from killing the Jedi"
He ignited the two blades which where both as red as blood and stepped towards the elder....

02-26-2006, 09:35 AM
(come on! be a man! fight wit ur fists! watch dis.)

Juice was really angry now. Attack after attack, The jedi still got up and stood ready. He held his lightsabre tightly. Their was a Bzzzzmmm Sound and his lightsabre flickered and died. Now Juice was shaking he was so angry.
"Lets see how jedi fight without their lightsabre." Juice said and pulled phinius's lightsabre from his hand and crushed it using the force (u can repair it later).
(Chanting :Fight, Fight, Fight,) Juice lept at him and pinned Phinius to the ground.

"You will not get there in time, Nekx." Vai said calmly.
The elder was calm and could feel the air on his neck. Vai ignited his purple double-bladed lightsabre and.... disappeared. He reappeared at Nekx's Back and brought down his lightsabre...

02-26-2006, 02:38 PM
Phinius smiled
"If you think a Jedi is defined by his weapon think again!"
He kicked Juice off him and stood ready. He raised his fist and punhced Juic in the stomach. Juice went down on one knee and gasped. Phinius then roundhouse kicked Juice and Juice fell to the floor.
"You must have known all Jedi are trained in un-armed combat"

Nekx smiled. He mimicked Vai and disapeared before the blade could fall. He re-apeared infront of him and force pushed him away. He then ran at him. He slashed but Vai dodged. Nekx turned and asked
"When you say I will not get there in time what do you mean? That puny Juice is no match for Phinius"
Nekx kicked Vai and aimed a stab his way but he dodged again.
"Ok lets stop playing games"

02-26-2006, 11:06 PM
(Sorry I havn't posted in forever, I'll catch me up)

Bac continued carrying the two, Romul and the imperial, until they reached the hangar. The two other soldiers grabbed a guy each and put them in their ships. The ship lurched back and forth and Bac ordered them to go. They all entered their fighters and the other two ships made it out. Bac's ship couldn't start before the ship started going down and Bac went with it.

Down on the planet, Bac got up slowly. He had been saved by the fighter's shield's that had accidentaly went off. Bac got out, slightly bruised and surveyed the area. He heard a fight somewhere nearby, but he couldn't tell where from. Bac walked out of the ship and sat down to rest.

02-27-2006, 04:25 PM
Phinius turned around and grabbed his lightsaber. It was damaged but not beyond repair. Phinius twidled with it it fizzed and turned on. He smiled.
"Sentimental Value"
Phinius turned it off and put it under his robes. He spun around and kicked Juice in the head. He then flipped onto the ship and jumped off. He landed a punch and soun around.
"You are no match for me, give up and I will spare your life"
Juice growled. And charged at Phinius. Phinius dodged and tripped Juice....

Nekx swung at Vai but he dodged again. Nekx slid down a slope and was feet away from Phinius. Phinius looked directly into Nekx's cold grey eyes.
"You..." Phinius gasped
Nekx shot Vai a dirty look and ran at Phinius. Phinius dodged his attack. Nekx spun his blades around. Phinius took out his lightsaber and ignited it. Phinius was out numbered. He had no idea if the sith lord was in league with Juice. He looked at both of them and then up at Vai.
"What's going on?" he asked Vai

02-27-2006, 08:06 PM
"You must go phinius." replied Vai steadly.
Juice side-flipped to Vai's side. Both Vai and Juice took out their lightsabres and ignited them.
They both launched at Nekx simutanously. As if reading each others minds. Nekx ignited his own lightsabre to block the incoming attack. They clashed, Lightsabres swinging.
Juice was having a hard time keeping up with Vai's attacks against Nekx. "We shall countue this fight later." Juice forced pushed Phinius a mile away and countinued fighting alongside Vai the Elder against the Sith lord.

02-28-2006, 12:17 PM
Nekx screamed as Phinius was flung away. He growled and elbowed Vai in the face and almost took Jucies's head off in anger.
"You Fools!" He said through gritted teeth
"You shall now feel the wrath of the sith!" He screamed
As lightning bolts shot from his fingers and engulfed the two other fighters and he smiled...

Phinius landed heavily. He got up. He was fuming. Those two had no right to do this to him! He was a Jedi Master! If any one had a chance of deafeating the sithn it was him!
Phinius breathed heavily and sat down to calm himself. He closed his eyes. He opened them as he heard a scream.
"What now?" he said, exhausted
he turned to see a young girl
"What's wrong?" he asked
She was looking terrified.
"J-JEDI!" She said pointing at Phinius
The girl screamed and ran off. Phinius layed back down.
"Strange girl" he mumbled. Phinius felt cold all of a sudden. He sat up and looked around. The grassy hill he was laying on was now surrounded by mist and fog. He grabbed his lightsaber. He felt te darkness consume him but fought against it. He saw a dark shape move into his field of vision. He recognised the man. It was the figure that had saved Zion from Niaj Qad. Phinius realised. Nekx was a decoy. He wanted Phinius to thrown out of the way of the other two. Nekx was stopping the others from interfering with this fight. The Old sith seemed to realise what he was thinking and said in a horse voice
"Nothing will penetrate this mist of darkness. We shall not be disturbed. Not even the "elders" from the "gap in time" can penetrate this place"
Phinius watched the figure withdraw a lightsaber
"Let's skip the formalities Im going to kill you anyway" he said laughing slightly
He ignited the blade and waited. Phinius did the same.
"Who are you?"
"I...I am the sith"
"What do you mean?"
"Let me show you"
the figure said stepping towards Phinius....

02-28-2006, 04:46 PM
But then, out of the depths of the Corolla Empire, jumps none other than the nefarious, notorious, gaseous Bim Blaster Bob!!!! yay!!!! Utilizing his ultimate double staff lightsabres, he quickly dispatches the evil Civic scum and proceeds to pull his spine out of his rectum. He then turns to the sith boss of doom and says, "let's team up and fight against the powers of good!!!! Teeheeeheeeheehee!!!!"

02-28-2006, 05:23 PM
Bac looked around and realized he had never been here. If he did, he'd know where to go. So, he got up and started walking around, hoping to find somebody or some sort of civilization to get off this planet.

02-28-2006, 05:43 PM
........that was almost amusing but im afraid you have just gone from funny staright to stupid and imauture

02-28-2006, 06:03 PM
Yeah, that one was funnier when i came up with it. Ah well, room for improvement, i spose.

02-28-2006, 08:30 PM
They both struggled for a moment then broke of the flow of lightning. Then they attacked. Vai stopped fighting for a moment and swung around to face what looked like a tornado that wasn't moving at all. He turned back to the other to fighting. They both stood there lightsabres at their side. Juices lightsabre dropped and deactivated. He fell to his knees. A clean lightsabre hole was visable from one side of him to another. His mandalorian helmet was on the ground and his pale eyes were visable.
"No juice you can't die!" Vai screamed at Juice.
Juice turned around with a smirk on his face. "I won't. Go back to your gap of time."
Juice threw his lightsabre in a perfect arc, taking Vai's head clean off.
He forced it back to him and stabbed Nekx in the stomach, To Nekx's shock.
As the body fell to the ground juice said. "How foolish. To sacriface yourself for some sith."
Juice's heart thumped quickly then died. He lost conciousness
Juice was moving in and out of conciousness, then he stayed unconcious. He dreamed. Or was it a dream?
Juice woke up to loud lightsabres buzzing, and plasma guns firing. jedi gunships broke the atmosphere guns flaring. Thousands of Jedi, Sith, And elders were battling it out in a deserted plain. There was combat as far as Juice could see. A sith ran at him, lightsabre activated. Juice ducked and threw his own lightsabre into the sith's stomach. Juice fell to the ground again.
(Another dream)
White. white, white, white. A beautiful woman who looked like she was around 31 looked down on him.
"Destiny, Is a funny thing." She said in the sweetest voice Juice had ever heard. "I am Veria Dwin."
Juice grunted and got up. He was on top of a mountain with mist swirling around it. "Where am I?"
"That does not matter." She said. "Your destiny is doomed, Juice."
"WHAT?!" Juice roared at her.
"You are soon to be destroyed." She said, Smiling.
"Bu-but how?" Juice answered back nervously.
"A war shall come. Between the Elders, Sith, and Jedi. A massive war that will engulf a single planet of great importance."
"Whats is it called?" Juice said calmly.
"You shall see." The woman said.
"Oh great. If i don't be 'doomed' first, right?" Juice shot back.
"No, You will be alive at that time at least." Veria said.
"Oh thats great, I get to see a war before i die, How nice." Juice said angryly.
"You don't seem very dark for a sith." Veria replied.
"Sith are too grumpy." Juice said.
Veria laughed. "Shame for you to die."
"Is their some way i could live?" Juice asked.
"Ummm.......No." Veria said after a pause.
"So here we are... talking about how im going to die." Juice said. So whats my purpose in life now, Why not die right now?"
"You must do something for me. Go to a planet called Seria El and seek out something that may be of both you and me. Hate to make you stronger, But if your going to Seria El... We shall meet later, Juice" She said then snapped her fingers.

03-01-2006, 11:25 AM
Juice's early childhood flashed before him. His home, The sith that attacked because Juice's parents had a force-sensitive child in their care. He even got to see what his parents looked like...
Then Juice woke up.
He groaned and looked around. He was in the same place as before, Except with a starfighter beside him. But Juice felt different, he just shrugged, probally afteraffects of sudden fainting.
Remembering the dream, and that there was a starfighter beside him and that it means it must be true, Juice climbed into the starfighter, Did a precheck and launched. The ground rumbled as the liftoff boosters turned off and the coxswain engines took over, and launched the starfighter into space.
After leaving the atmosphere, Juice cut in the hyperdrive engines and bored off into space.
The starfighter had an extra hyperdrive fuel tank so Juice got to Seria El in less then 15 minutes (lol wow). He cut the hyperdrive engines and the coxswains took over again.
Juice realised the planet was much like Yavin 4. It had high temples everywhere and forests covered the planet. Juice grunted. He had a lot of work to do..

03-01-2006, 12:19 PM
He watched as the newcomer landed on Seria El. He had seen those type of creatures before, Them, With their sticks that hurt and their magic that killed thousands of his race. His tail curled, They didn't even give his race warning.
At a Leader's command, him and 50 others ran foward towards the ship. He was of an ancient species all had forgotten about. His people called him Eithrel, His race's language for fearless.

Name: Eithrel
Faction: Serian
Class: Standard Serian Warrior
Equipment: Remote-Bomb, DC-15 blaster rifle with custom sniper scope, orange lightsabre.
Strengths: Assasination, Hand to Hand combat, Swift movement, Rapid entry tactic.
Weaknesses: Piloting, Grenades, Fighting in large scale battles.
Background: Joined Serian United Warrior clan when 6 Serian years old (6 is when Serian Males enter manhood, Serian Females mature at 5).
Looks like: Half the size of a human, Four hands (like a monkey), Red strip of cloth tied around his head (samuri style), Leather pants, Ingraved scar on bare-back shaped like a snake.

03-01-2006, 12:50 PM
The warrior pack of 50 was nearing the creature that had landed. finally they came to one of the few clearings in Seria El and spotted him.
Juice looked up at the tiny people questioningly. One of them said an order in a tongue Juice couldn't understand and the little people swung their DC-15 blasters that were strapped to their back around so they pointed at Juice. Juice's hand was moving towards his lightsabre when they opened fired.

Eithrel grunted. This one had a stick that hurt, he could see when the creature took it out. All 50 Serians were firing on the creature but he deflected the bolts back at the Serian warriors, Causing them to screech in pain as the bolts tore their bodies. Eithrel fired too but one of his bolts came back and burnt his DC-15 in half. Now eithrel was angry. He took out his own stick that hurt and threw himself up out of the trees and landed right in front of the creature, stick-that-hurt activated. The creature was obviously suprised and the other Serian Warriors ceased firing.
Eithrel ran towards a tree, jumped up and bounced off it straight at the creature...

Once the Native took out a lightsabre, Juice realised he wasn't the first Jedi here. And he also realised this was no game.

Jedi Atomic
03-01-2006, 07:25 PM
((When can Scur and Zaran come back in the story? I'm confused.))

03-01-2006, 07:28 PM
bring um on in

03-01-2006, 07:30 PM
((right now! make a very long post im bored. make up someone new then fight um thats wut i did :D))

Jedi Atomic
03-02-2006, 04:28 PM
((Where are you because all of a sudden you guys were away from the ship wreck))

03-02-2006, 05:22 PM
(Phinius is curently in the middle of no where fighting with the sith lord who made Zion evil)

Phinius raised his lightsaber. The sith lord laughed.
"You may be a Jedi master but you are no match for me"
He shot lightning bolts out of his fingers but Phinius held his lightsaber in front of him so the shocks went into his lightsaber which glowed. The sith lord smiled. Phinius did not attack. He did nothing but hold the blade up for defence. The sith lord merly shrugged and attacked viciously. Phinius was almost unable to block his first attack. He struck with such force that Phinius was almost pushed over. Phinius steadied himself and waited for the onslought....

03-02-2006, 06:04 PM
((im on a totally different planet :d))

Eithrel and the creature circled then the creature made the first move. He moved left, then right, then left again then struck down on Eithrel. Eithrel blocked the attacked the creature's unguarded right, Juice's lightsabre came down and blocked it, then he dropped, tripped Eithrel and swung at his head. Eithrel came up and blocked it. He took a fake swing to Juice's legs then at his arm. Juice screeched in pain as it made a cut through his arm. He jumped over Eithrel and took a slash to the back. Eithrel turned just it time to block it, Then grabbed Juice by the cloak and pulled him towards him. Eithrel swung underneath and tried to jab Juice in the stomach. Juice pulled away, Force pushed Eithrel back then used force run to get to him and swing his lightsabre at him. Eithrel rolled away and struck at Juice's legs. Juice jumped over the lightsabre directed at his legs and couldn't regain his balance and tripped. Eithrel ran towards him and brang the lightsabre down on Juice's head. Juice rolled away, Jumped up and took a swing at Eithrel. It cut lightly through his small chest. Just enough to make a scar. Not good enough for Juice. Eithrel faked left, Faked right then attacked Juice's knees. Juice jumped up at clothslined Eithrel in mid-air. Eithrel tumbled but got up, breathing heavily but ready for more.

Fate's Decision
03-03-2006, 11:30 AM
(I'm really sorry I've been unable to access this site until I fixed my network settings)
((Emansive confusion!!!! What planet are you guys on and why?? Tell you what, let's say you guys are on Ossus. With the Elder stuff and rocky climate, it would fit in well.))

(Since I havn't been on in a while Ima gonna start back where I left off and double post a little to catch up.)

Mid swerved his corefighter over Ossus, firing at the RIG fighters attempting to land, but trying to avoid shooting at skull fighters in case of counterfire. As he guarded the earth from immigration, he also seached for other Jedi who had already landed on the planet. As he pulled up above a cliff, he saw a faint figure among the uneven surface. Just as he flew close enough to see what it was, he was blinded by a searing light and lost control of his corefighter.

Jedi Atomic
03-03-2006, 05:39 PM
Scur and Zaran lost them after the shipwreck but after searching for so long they finally found them fighting in the open between some palm trees.

Scur and Zaran ran down the hill towards Zion and Phinius. Zaran ignited his dual lightsabers and ran ahead of Scur with Force Speed. Scur waited until close to combat and then ignited his dual orange and silver Lightsabers and jumped into the air above Zion, swinging at him in mid air.

03-03-2006, 06:34 PM
((uhh check Jedi of doom's post of #69. Zion is locked away in the temple of the damned, Juice is on a planet called Seria El fighting someone called Eithrel and ya.))

03-03-2006, 07:59 PM
Bac finally found a small town east of his past location called Inn Fetro. He walked into the local bar there and sat down. The creatures inside stared at him awkwardly as he sat down. Bac noticed, but kept his mouth shut. He ordered the bartender to give him a drink when one of the creatures walked over to him and put a gun to his back.

Jedi Atomic
03-04-2006, 07:47 AM
(See that's why I'm confused)

03-04-2006, 08:18 AM
(this is so awsome! ive read every word in Niaj Qad keep and this one and they are my favorite rp threads! sorry to join so late)

Name: Shadda
Faction: Neutral (u'll see who hes working for later)
Class: Jedi Bountyhunter
Equipment: Purple lightsabre
Strengths: Assasination, Force powers, Jedi combat
Weaknesses: Piloting, Blasters, Sight problems (eyes drilled out by sith so he has to use the force to make let him know whats going on)
Background: Shadda was a nature force-wielder. he could handle a lightsabre at the age of 4 with almost as much skill as master yoda. Then the jedi found a virus capable of getting into even Jedi. Fear of it spreading into other jedi, They abandoned Shadda. A sith found him, Attempted to nurse the dark side in him, But Shadda didn't see the point of choosing light or dark. He became a bountyhunter taking contracts from hutts, But became more proffecional and took proffecional contracts.

03-04-2006, 08:53 AM
Shadda was riding along in his custom jedi starfighter. He was moving in through the ruins of a space battle not long ago. Saw a smoking ruin from the planet Ossus below. He swerved and prepared his starfighter for atmospheric entry. Then, blaster fire from 3 Skull fighters behind him took out his left wing and his R2 droid. He desprately tried to control the starfighter but it was damaged to badly. It was heading towards the ground, Nose pointed straight down. Shadda knew it was too late now. He tried pulling up the starfighter a couple times, Then took out his lightsabre and cut a hole in the cockpit. He stood their and 2 seconds before crash, He jumped off. The noise of the crash from below rattled his rib cage and he had to use the force to make him land on his feet without making them come off.
"owww" He said loudly as he hit ground.
He saw some strange mist off into the distance. He got a dry ration cube from his belt and ate it as he came over to it.
"Now thats strange." He mumbled as he poped the last of the cube into his mouth. He stepped through the mist two steps.
He came out the other side. He looked back at the patch of mist and saw it was 60 feet long. He stepped through it again only to come out the other side.
"Oooook then." He said. "Hello? Is anyone there?"
He heard lightsabre sounds and wondered where they were coming from. He conentrated on the mist but he couldn't move it with the force. More lightsabre sounds from inside the mist but louder. He could hear his heartbeating now. It was competeing with the lightsabre sounds of swinging and clashing. He lifted a rock below him using the force, lifting him up as well, and put it over the mist. He focused as hard as he ever on the mist below and the mist opened up. He slowly levered the rock to the ground.
"Hello? HELLO?!" He called as he wandered the long patch of mist. He heard the lightsabre sounds and started moving towards them. "Anyone here?"
He could hear the buzzing of lightsabres clearly now. He was getting close, really, really, close. His head was dripping of sweat from the effort it took to move that mist. Mist wasn't supposed to be that hard to move. Then he came to a clearing in the mist where two figures who were clashing with lighsabres...

03-04-2006, 01:30 PM
Phinius glashed blades with the sith lord. The Sith laughed as Phinius tried desperatly to gain the advantage. He spun around and glashed blades with him again. Phinius kicked out and his foot conected with the side of the siths head. He stopped laughing. Phinius stared deep into the cold eyes of the sith lord who was now glaring at Phinius. His eyes showed pure hatred. Phinis glared back. The sith lord looked up and behind Phinius. Phinius did the same. A figure had appeared out of the mist. The sith lord shurgged and aimed a slash at Phinius's legs. Phinius jumped over the lightsaber and landed aiming a slash at the sith lords head, which was blocked. Phinius twirled the blade around his hand. He glanced at the new comer. His presance was distracting. Phinius couldn't tell if this new comer was good or bad. But maybe Zion's teaching were finally having an affect becasue Phinius decided he did not care becasue good and evil were just titles from different points of view. Phinius glared at the sith and again blocked a fierce attack....

03-04-2006, 01:32 PM
(Oh yeah Shadda this RPG is set before Yoda's time. This is set before the Jedi Civil war)

03-04-2006, 02:46 PM
((oh ok.))

Shadda watched the jedi and the sith, fixed on there actions. The jedi was desprately trying to get the advantage over the sith. Shadda wondered for a moment if he should help or not. But if he did help? Who would he help? I'll see how it plays out, He thought. He sat down and relaxed, putting his hands behind his head. He started to hum an old Mandalorian war chant. He started playing with the mist using the force, which was easy now that he was actully IN the mist. First he made an blaster, Then he made a rancor. but then the mist actully started to form by itself. It made letters. It was in mandalore. It said "Help the jedi or emitt the dark side."
Shadda groaned. After 19 years of not being sith or jedi, He was finally being forced to take a side.

03-04-2006, 03:15 PM
Phinius pulled back. He was aware that the sith lord was more dangerous with every second that past.
"So you are finally coming to grips with Zion's teachings"
"Maybe he was right and I was wrong. "good" and "evil" are just titles. But his view on the matter was more "evil" in my point of view"
"You accept this too late Jedi"
"Maybe I do" Phinius struck out and connected. His lightsaber had cut the sith lord's robes and a dribble of black blood was running down them. the sith lord turned and struck Phinius so hard that he flew about 50 feet.
"SCUM!" he screamed and jumped. Phinius met him in the air and they made contact, Their blades clahsed together and they both flew backwards and landed on their feet.
Phinius glanced at the new comer.
"Don't even think of interfering. This fight is mine and mine alone"
Phinius stood up fully and looked acorss the clearing into darkness he had never seen before....

(Do not be offended Shadda. Phinius is a very proud Jedi feel free to join. But phinius will not accept your guys help lightly)

03-04-2006, 03:42 PM
(its ok. dark side time.)

Shadda's long black robes billowed in the wind. A storm broke over head and 13 tornados struck the ground. If Shadda had eyes they would be turning yellow. Lightning slashed the ground around Shadda. His lightsabre deactivated and then activated, this time a dark red. The lightning became more frequent and violent and started sparks around Shadda. Blue lightning and coldness also emitted from Shadda.

A new Sith had been created.

03-04-2006, 03:53 PM
"Oh thats just great" Phinius muttered
The sith lord smiled slightly. Phinius twirled his lightsaber around again. He took another lightsaber out of his robes and ignited it. the green blade and purple blade stuck out in the now dark sky. The storm overhead was intense. Phinius waited for the newcomers attack...

03-04-2006, 04:08 PM
Shadda lept and a bolt of lightning met him in the sky, Almost stopping him in time. He unfroze and lept down upon...

03-05-2006, 09:16 AM
Phinius stepped back and raised both his lightsabers, thinking fast. He was out numbered but not outclassed. He focused and pulled the mist in between the fighters. They were now all seperated. He had to focus. He had to reach Scur and Zaran some how. He tried to contact them telapthically but it failed. Phinius sensed the other to getting closer. He took a deep breath and ran into the fog....

03-05-2006, 09:32 AM
Shadda stopped dead in air as the mist floated around him. He searched for Phinius in the mist and found him, slowly heading towards him.

Jedi Atomic
03-05-2006, 12:02 PM
Scur felt someone trying to contact him through the force but all he felt was a tingling from the beginning words. "Who would be trying to contact me?" Scur said for Zaran to hear him.
"I'm not sure."
"Well I could feel that it wasn't coming from anywhere I can think of. But it was coming from the planet but not really ON the planet. You understand Zaran?"
"Sort of. Can you make out from where at?"
"That's what I'm trying."

Scur sits down followed by Zaran and soon Scur starts rising into the air with eyes closed trying to locate Phinius, not really knowing who it is though.

03-05-2006, 03:35 PM
The creature behind Bac started talking in a weird language he didn't know. Bac raised his hands slowly, and then moved his right leg behind one of the creature's legs. Bac got up quickly and tripped the alien, turned around and shot him. When he did, more aliens got their guns and started firing. Bac leaped behind the bar, and started firing back. One bullet grazed my shoulder and I ducked under the bar. There were too many of them. I got back up and kept firing, hoping to find a way out soon.

03-05-2006, 06:14 PM
((ok im leaving these forums for good so uh good bye u guys i gotta make a dramatic ending for my charactor))

Eithrel caught Juice of guard and Juice died.

15 years later, Eithrel got a job scratching a hutt's bum and after he decided to open up a stripclub. another 5 years later he was playing around with the jedi lightsabre and accidenetly stabbed himself, he smashed through the glass window in his apartment in coruscant and fell 50 feet on the selfish hutt who paid him to stratch his jiggily butt.

(Good bye everyone. more ppl should join in this thread its awsome. and you guys should make another thread connecting to this one, than another, than another, then another... then another........ then another.... then ano...... C YA!)

03-08-2006, 09:05 AM
Shadda was getting closer to Phinius when he stopped and thought; why don't i kill this sith and show this Phinius guy that im not just an ordinary jedi gone bad. He growled and moved back towards the sith. Jedi, he thought, always wanting to be hero of the story.

Fate's Decision
03-08-2006, 06:31 PM

Mid's eyes darted around for signs for a hint of a lightsaber glow, the sun was on the other side of the planet making one easy to spot. Suddenly, over the mountain range to the east, a lightning bolt struck, which suprized Mid for he had not sensed such energy. He turned his corefighter and pulled up above a forest to head to the spot where he saw it strike. There were no clouds and Mid's communications systems were down, meaning there was heavy magnetic impulse on this planet. Obviously, the lightning had been created by something on the ground.
As soon as he flew over the forest he saw the flash of connecting lightsabers. One of them was purple and the other red, so Mid instantly knew it was Phinius and Zion at a brawl once more...but when he flew closer it was not Zion who Phinius fought, and another Sith was there as well. Though Phinius could probably take on both sith lords (unless of coarse they were as powerful as Zion), but Mid didn't want to risk it. His corefighter stopped in the air instantly above a tall hill of stone-directly above Phinius and his target. He would see how well he fought against his first Sith.

Fate's Decision
03-08-2006, 06:34 PM
(wait are you a sith or not??)

03-08-2006, 07:14 PM
(yeaaah i kinda confused myself about that. yes im a sith, but i want to kill this other sith lord to prove my power)

03-11-2006, 03:25 PM
is anyone gonna post!!!

03-11-2006, 04:39 PM
(I'm going to end Phinius's part in this story)

Phinius ran blindly through the fog. He had no idea where he was going. It was hopeless. Phinius stopped and concentrated. He could see daylight. he opened his eyes and sure enough the sun was on his face. He turned around to see the wall of fog. Phinius walked away from it thinking to himself.
What was the point? What did this prove? Phinius glanced back. He ran all the way back to the ship. He knew it would be obvious but he didn't care. he was going to sleep. He was going to sleep until he was needed again. Phinius had gained a special ability. He could hybernate without aging. Well he would age slightly but if he slept for say 100 years, he would only age 10 or so. He walked into his room and locked the door using the force. He was not to be disturbed. He lay down and put his hands on his chest. He closed his eyes and concentrated. His body went as stiff as a staute and he lay still his lightsaber bu his side. He would wake again only when Jax Polara was born.....

03-11-2006, 04:47 PM
(well why don't we just end the story then? heres what happens to my char. note the 'exile for a 110 years' thing)

ok. After a dramtic duel, Shadda kills the sith lord. He stops the rebels from reaching Naboo and then he becomes emperor of the Civic Empire for many years and wars, but after 18 years of reign, the Civic Empire is bashed and shattered by Rebel attacks. The entire empire cracks due to civil wars and many trying to take the thrown by killing Shadda. After a massive bombardment on the Civic Capital, Shadda is forced to go into exile for 110 years intill almost all but few jedi masters forget him...

Fate's Decision
03-26-2006, 09:52 PM
(AAAAAAAAAAAAA I'm sorry I've been way too busy to post lately, I've been trying to make time but it's I never seem to remember about it. I think it's best to leave this thread alone for now, I'll revive it when I'm active on here again.)