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01-22-2006, 03:46 PM
This is Probably me trying to flog a dead horse but I'll give it a go anyway.

I think it's safe to say the Mercenary crew thread is dead, May it R.I.P.

While doing it i noticed several problems with the situation. The most notable was the fact we were being 'Good Guy' criminals against a 'Good Guy’ government. Another problem was the lack of planning as a group (This was mainly my fault.) The characters were on the ship together for months and the crew barely knew each other and seemed to have no other relationships.

The first problem could be sorted by a simple change of the Time line (a 4000 year difference.) and take us to the period between revenge and Hope. This is so the government is tyrannical but we won't get involved in the whole Film storyline. This thread sorts the second problem.

This Thread is to sort out characters and the storyline, work out what the other members of the crew know and don't know about your character. We don't want crewmen who are open books but we don't want the exact opposite and have someone who is only known by 1 letter.

The Story

9 years after the form of the 1st galactic empire and the purge of the Jedi. The Echo captained Nic White flies across the galaxy, taking on jobs no matter how hard or illegal. The Ship and Crew do what it takes to survive and keep flying in the galaxy.

The Missions
starmark2k:'The Passenger' (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=159448)
The Crew looking for some more legitimate work take on a private transport job. They End up taking a mysterious passenger, The passenger turns out to be a Jedi on the run from the Evil sith controlled Empire…
Writer:'An Old Friend and a New Job' (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=160156)
With the crew now heavy one Jedi the Echo carries on to Alderaan along with a Mysterious Hitchhiker from Jana's past. After narrowly avoiding one imperial Fleet they soon find themselves up against none other than the Dark Lord of the sith Himself, Darth Vader.
steven:'Rhea' (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=162640)
On a trip to Naboo the crew of the Echo are caught by a traitorous Imperial Captain who makes a deal with them. In exchange for their freedom the crew must still information on the location of an old Clone Wars Ship. Reluctantly the crew except and attempt to con a Moff out of the information by sending Nic and Beryl in as a married Couple.
stingerhs: 'Fraught with Disappointment' (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=173031)
In an attempt to rescue her lost love Ryshana recruits the crew to help her infiltrate an Imperial prison facility taking Beryl along for the ride. Meanwhile Nic and the rest of the Crew come across Ghosts from the Captains pass when an Imperial Ship boards them for a routine inspection.
JasraLantill: 'Brothers in Arms' (or 'Out of the Frying Pan...') (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=182823)
Two months after the Prison escape that saw Ryshana Killed with Beryl and Nic both being taken captive the Two prisoners find themselves on Carida looking to escape. Meanwhile Jana and the rest of the Echo's crew are Constantly on the Run from Imperial Pursuers, while at the same time Conway and Max are on a mission to rescue the Corellian pilot. Once the crew are reunited they go to stop Beryl's Brother and his evil experiments.
Rogue Nine
Discission about the future...


The Ship- The Echo

Rougth internal Layout- http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/starmark2k/Echo.jpg

A medium Kuat Freighter that dates back to the clone wars. It's has greatly improved Engines and shields. It has also had a second turret placed on the dorsal hull and has had part of the Cargo hold turned into a 'quick drop' Hanger for a Z-95 Headhunter. The Bridge has a small forward bridge for the captain, pilot and a passenger, This leads into the common room where food can be prepared and consumed it is also where the crew can relax and play games like Dejaric or Sabacc. The Opposite side of this is a small corridor with access to the ventral and dorsal turrets. This then leads to the engineering section. Off the corridor are 10 Sleeping Quarters for the crew and passengers. Ladders to the lower level are located in the common room and the ladders to the turret also lead to the lower level.

The lower level is one large cargo hold with catwalks along walls, The rear has a small hanger that holds the Z-95, the cockpit is accessed via the catwalks. The hanger has doors under the hunter to allow the fighter to drop out of the ship and quickly get to action. The loading ramp is on the starboard side of the ship.

Crew Positions (on a first come first serve basis.)
Captain- Nic White (Starmark2k)
Pilot- Jack Goren (Steven)
Engineer- Cloud Strife (Extreamjedi12/NPC)
Medic- Oliver Van Impe(Dec'd)(XoRRoX), Conway Harlowe (Rogue Nine)
Turret gunner(First Mate)- Jana 'Shortstuff' Vincent (Writer/Grace)
Headhunter Pilot- Beryl 'Psycho' Quitaan (JasraLantill)
Fugitive Jedi- Ryshana Oliaya(Dec'd), Jeez(Stingerhs)

How you were recruited:

Rules- Rp forum rules are standard.
no 'super' character
no killing without
No char controling
Thread master controls all 'plot sensitive' Npcs

Position: Captain
Name: Nic White
Nickname: N/A
Species: Human
Age: 35
Allignment: Light
Appearance: http://www.armchairempire.com/images/Reviews/gamecube/resident-evil-4/resident-evil-4-2.jpg
Weapons/Equipment: Blaster Pistol, Vibroblade (concealed in Boots.), Short-range scatter shot blaster rifle (Shotgun).
Bio: Nick White was born and raised in the capital city of Naboo, Thread. His mother was one of the queens handmaidens so he was brought up within the walls of the palace. His father was a Lieutenant in the Naboo security force and took to the Security force. Soon after joining the Clone war began, Naboo only saw small fragment of the war and was only attacked once causing the Republic to place a base on the planet. This caused the Naboo security force to only take on low level policing. Nic noticed how the clone troopers seemed to be working there way into the government. When a Governor was appointed to ‘look over’ Naboo Nic knew that this was leading to something worse and left the NSF. When the Empire was formed he decided to get away from his world and took to the stars, He joined a small team of mercenaries where he learnt new skills. He did many missions and made a name for himself, during one mission he had to meet a contact in a cantina he ended up helping a women in a fight. The women, Jana Vincent, didn't need his help but appreciated him all the same. Nic introduced Jana to the world of freelance mercenaries and she took to it like a duck to water. They ended up working together on many jobs and after one successful mission nic joined a ‘friendly’ game of sabacc with an old retiring mercenary, The stakes kept getting higher until it came down to Nic and the old merc. The Old merc put is Ship in the pot which would have forced nic to leave if Jana hadn't stepped in and gave nic her life svings. Nic Won the game along with the Echo.
How you were recruited: He own the ship.

We can work out relationships between the crew later. This can be how crew members are related, married or old friends. The only one who can't have a previous relationship is the jedi.

Remember that your first Character Sheet does not have to be set in stone as relationships will chnge things.

59 BBY- Jack Goren Is born on Naboo.
44 BBY- Nic White is born on Naboo. Beryl Quitaan was born on Corellia.
43 BBY- Ryshana Oliaya was born on Ryloth.
42 BBY- Jana Vincent is born on Corellia.
39 BBY- Jack Goren joined the Naboo Space Security
38 BBY- Oliver Van Impe was born on Dantooine.
32 BBY- The Trade Federation Blockade Naboo and the Sith reveal themselves to the jedi for the first time in many years. (ep1:TPM)
31 BBY- Jack Goren was offically declare a missing person. Beryl Quitaan attends the TCTA (Talus Combat Training Academy) in the Corellian system.
30 BBY- Cloud Strife Was Born on Alderaan.
29 BBY- Jana Vincent begins attending TCTA.
27 BBY- Quitaan Scholarship Fund established and a new TCTA flight control tower is built by Rade Quitaan of the Corellian Engineering Corp to replace the one that was irreparably damaged by an over zealous Berly Quitaan doing a hot-shot flyby and blowing out the windows. Jana Vincent is awarded a Quitaan Scholarship for her high scores in turret gunning and contact combat.
26 BBY- Nic White joins the Naboo Security Force. Cloud Strife's father leaves Alderaan and goes to Naboo and joins the Royal Guard.
24 BBY- Beryl Quitaan becomes a test pilot for CEC rival Incom-Subpro for the Z-95 series fighters where she earns nickname of Psycho. Oliver Impe’s father is murdered by some Bounty Hunters.
23 BBY- Ryshana Knighted by the Jedi.Oliver Impe meets Fenric Khan, who tricks him and takes Oliver to Naboo.
22 BBY- The Clone War begins. (ep2:AOTC) Jana Vincent graduates from TCTA and returns to Corellia, lives there for a year.
21 BBY- Ryshana given the rank of General and given command of a platoon of Commandos. Jana Vincent leaves Corellia and goes to Alderaan, a month later, she travels to Coruscant.
20 BBY- Jana Vincent runs out of money and begins working in various restaurants and bars on Coruscant.
19 BBY- The Clone War ends and the Republic becomes the Empire, The Jedi are all but Destroyed. (ep3:ROTS) Nic White leave Naboo to become a mercenary, He joins a small team. Beryl Quitaan is fired with the creation of Incom Corp due to the availability of less expensive clone test pilots from the Empire.
18 BBY- Nic White becomes a Freelance Mercenary. Beryl Quitaan begins working under father Rade as CEC test pilot for new CR-90 Corvette series cruisers. Oliver Impe meets a girl and falls in love with her, he also begins a career in medicine.
17 BBY- Oliver Impe turns to drink when he discovers his true love is a smuggler after she is arrested. Cloud Strife is found to have great skill in mechanics when he disassembles an engine and puts it back together in 5 minutes.
16 BBY- Nic White and Jana Vincent meet in a bar fight. Nic White and Jana Vincent become Good Friends and pratically Mercenary partners taking jobs on together.
15 BBY- Beryl Quitaan becomes a blockade runner. Her father, Rade Quitaan, dies (of natural causes). Due to his alcohol problem oliver impe is fired from his Medic's job, this causes him to become a social recluse.
14 BBY- Nic White Wins the Echo. Jana Vincent Joins the crew as the First-Mate and Turret Gunner. Oliver Impe gets his job on the Echo. Cloud Strife joins the crew of Echo.
13 BBY- Cloud Strife falls in love with Aerith Gainsborough, later she gets killed by Sephiroth.
12 BBY- Cloud Strife Leaves crew for a while to seach for Sephiroth.
11 BBY- Cloud Strife Rejoins the crew of the Echo. The Echo's Pilot is murdered, Jack Goren saves Nic White's Life and becomes the Pilot of Nic Whites ship. Beryl Quitaan's ship was impounded by The Empire while Blockade Running. She escapes and wins her place on the Echo by beating Nic White at Pazaak
10 BBY- THE RP. Now.
00 BBY- Alderaan is destroyed by the Death Star. The Death Star is Destroyed in the Battle of Yavin. (ep4: ANH)

BBY= Before Battle of Yavin (Episode IV: A New Hope)
All dates from http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_wars_timeline

01-22-2006, 03:51 PM
Position: Turret gunner 1/First mate

Name: Jana Vincent

Nickname: Short Stuff

Species: Human

Sex: Female

Age: 33

Allignment: Light

Appearance: dark brown curly hair falls mid-back, dark brown eyes, 5' 2" tall

Weapons/Equipment: She's had extensive training in hand-to hand combat... anything she can lift is a weapon in her hands. Other than that, she carries a modified blaster pistol and a long knife anywhere she goes.

Bio: Jana was raised by her father and mother on Corellia. Her life was not much affected by the Empire, though she was living during the government switch. Her parents had always been concerned for her safety and therefore, when she was old enough, they sent her to a combat school.

At combat school, she excelled in nearly everything she tried, specifically, turret use. She was also trained in several different forms of martial arts. In the combat school, she heard rumors of the best pilot ever, a girl named Beryl Quitaan. Though Jana would have been interested in meeting the hotshot pilot, the meeting never occurred.

After combat school, Jana left Corellia and went to Coruscant. There, she ended up loosing most of her money, forcing her to stay and work. Stubborn enough not to contact her parents for more money, this is exactly what she did, but it led her to fighting.

In one such fight, she met Nic White. He introduced her to the work of a freelance mercenary. She liked it enough that she stayed close to Nic. When he had a job, she went with him. Gradually, they spent less and less time apart. When he won the Echo, she was watching. When he asked her to be the start of a crew he'd recruit for the new ship, she accepted, becoming the first turret gunner and first mate.

01-22-2006, 04:38 PM
Name: Jack Goren
Allignment: Neutral
Appearance: http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Crater/4736/krussel.gif
Weapons/Equipment:Custom-made blaster-riffle + Light Armour
Personallity:Dosn't speak much. At all for that fact, he only grunts his replies. He only speaks when he's insalting someone or has a very good point to make.
Bio: Not much is known about Jack expect he was a piolt in the naboo secerity air/space force. He was up for an award for his bravery during the battle against the droids however he never attened it. The next day he was offically declared missing. And he remained missing untill two months ago he was recuited on board the Echo as their new piolt.
How you were recruited: They met after Goren pulled Nick out of the way of a landspeeder which was trying to run Nick over in Mos Espa. He also helped Nick kill the thugs that tried to them over. They talked alittle at a cantina and Jack learnt that Nick was a captain of a ship and his piolt had recently been killed. After some more talk Jack was recuited as the ships new piolt.

01-22-2006, 04:48 PM
O.K i made various mistakes in the first post so i'll edit it, The main one is the fact i haven't put the rules in... I know it's my thought but one of my Rules is always no 'super' characters. This includes spenies that can be shot 50 times and still be standing. With or without armour. So sorry Steven, But your character is in violation of that rule... Your bio is good and it will work with pretty much any species so i hope it doesn't cause to much inconveiniance.
But i'm sure you see my point as it makes characters to unbalanced which makes it unfair to other players.

I also added Sex and Allignment to the Char sheets

I'm sorry but is was a long post with alot of info in it.

01-22-2006, 05:28 PM
Edited my post, added lots of info about my char.

01-23-2006, 07:45 AM
Thats Good Wildjedi and for alls INfo Nic has had the ship 5 years.

01-23-2006, 11:32 AM
Position: Medic
Name: Oliver Van Impe
Nickname: Impe
Species: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 29
Allignment: Light
Appearance: Very small, long red hair and not-fancy clothes.
Weapons/Equipment: A little blaster, and three boxes with medic equipment.

Oliver was born on Dantooine, where he did work for his parents on their farm. His childhood did end, when his father died by some hunters in the area. That did hurt Oliver. He decided, that farming wasen’t his life. He wanted to be something great. Like a general or something. Maybe one of those guys, with the ”lightsabers”. Like the story says.
But he choosed the wrong freinds. Fenric Khan, one of his old childhood freinds cheated him. So he didn’t arrive to Coruscant, where Oliver thougt he could be a politician. Oliver was on his way to Naboo.
On the way, while Oliver was in a really bad mood about his travel to Naboo, he did meet a young girl, who was a soldier. She was medic in the army – and they falled in love on the very long trip. She learned him everything about to be a medic – and he did have a great talent. But when they arrieved, the girl was arrested. She was a criminal – and Oliver couldn’t forgive that. He is very lawful, and he decided, that he never wanted to meet her again, and took job on the ship called ”Echo”.

How you were recruited: Did get a job by the captain.

(Sorry if the english is bad. I’m not perfect to english, but i will try my best.)

01-23-2006, 11:38 AM
I've editted my thing. He's no longer a super-being..

01-23-2006, 12:03 PM
hmm, i'll take the renegade jedi. and if you don't mind, i'll use a character from my fanfic. :)

Name: Ryshana Oliaya
Nickname: Shana
Species: Twi'lek
Sex: Female
Age: 34
Allignment: Light
Appearance: Deep purple skin tone with barely noticable black spots on her lekku(head tails)
Weapons/Equipment: yellow lightsaber; plain, unassuming clothing
Bio: Excerpt from a deleted Corellian Database
corrupted portion....397!*&@!

ii**``&..served with distinction as a General in the Clone Wars as Commander of i@iii!..corrupted portion.... led the Commandos through the swamps to raid the Seperatist Command Center at the Siege of 974ii..corrupted portion... and served with Gunnery Sergeant 0089 who was later discovered to be Jedi Knight Yajisif Quiinzara that had been secretly inserted into the Clone ranks by the Jedi#iiii!!..unexpected end of file

Excerpt from the Imperial Bounty Database
...is considered to be armed and extremely dangerous. As a former General during the Clone Wars, she was able to bring about the only betrayal of any squad of Imperial Soldiers during the conflict. Having been executed as traitors, her squad of Commandos is not a threat. Utmost caution is still highly advised.

((if that's too much, or if you need more, just let me know. ;) ))

01-23-2006, 12:21 PM
Ummm well part of the first thread is your char joining so no need to worry about the joining , History wise You can put down info which would be on an imperial bounty sheet, or which would be on public databases. As my char will probably check those after we discover you are a jedi.

01-23-2006, 12:30 PM
ahh, gotcha. i'll go ahead and edit the post. ;)

01-23-2006, 02:37 PM
Position: Engineer
Name: Cloud Strife
Nickname: Cloud
Species: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 21
Allignment: Light
Appearance: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/5/50/Cloud_Strife_art.jpg
Weapons/Equipment: Sword(seen holding in picture), E-11 Blaster Rifle, a wrench, and a belt of grenades.
Bio: As a small boy, Cloud Strife read many stories about the Jedi. He loved exploration and space. He was so smart, he took apart a hyperdrive and put it back together when he was in 10th grade in under 5 minutes. After collage, he opened a starport/mechanic shop on Aldeeran(sp?). He spent hours in that shop, doing what he loved: fixing and repairing things.

Once when he was a mercenary, he was doing a mission with some of his friends, he meets a young flower girl named Aerith Gainsborough. After some adventures, she is killed by a soldier named Sephiroth. Cloud vows to kill him if its the last thing he does. After about 6 months, he returns to his homeplanet, to cope with the loss of his love, Aerith.

How you were recruited: It was a hot day. Cloud was sitting on a hammock when the Echo landed in the landing bay. Nic ordered a repair and Cloud decided to do the job personally. He did his best and Nic was impressed. He invited Cloud to join his crew and he said yes.

01-23-2006, 02:50 PM
Hi extream, all good except its based about 10 years before alderann has been destroyed,

01-23-2006, 03:00 PM
Oh, then I'll change it.

01-23-2006, 03:24 PM
Now we almost have a full crew, we can start to work on the relatioships between the crew... Remember that you can continue to change your character how you want (within the rules.) As the Relationships may change your bio. I.E If me and someone decide to have been comrades in the NSF, bios and recruitment will no doubtibly change. Also if to people intemd to be in a relationship loke a husband and wife this will also change the bio (it may also change the recruitment although you may have first met on the ship.). Also in relationships work out if there are certain characters your chacacter hates, We are stuck on a confined ship together so we won't be one big happy family. This is also an opportunity for you to voice your opinions on other peoples characters, Keep your critisisms constructive if you do so.

o.k so if you want to have a bit more of a story on how you come to be on the ship post what you would like to do. It can be anything You could have been stealing from me i caught you and you managed to blag your way on to the crew. Also i'm willing to have a pre-echo relationship with one person- wither as a person i served with on naboo, or worked with as a merc before i won the ship.

Also in the event we don't get a headhunter pilot it will become a drone fighter, And if we don't get gunner 2 the captain (me) will take the turret in emergancies.

We won't start untill everyone is happy...

01-23-2006, 03:32 PM
In the beginning, i don't relly have a relationship with others in the crew. I would tryk to play Oliver, as a man there had to many bad memories about humans/aliens in his mand. He is actually a lonely person.

But it could be nice, if the captain could have "a pity" (Say if it looks stupid) relationship to Impe.

01-23-2006, 04:04 PM
Starmark, I'd be interested in changing my character so yours knew her pre-Echo... I think I'd like that better than her current story.

01-23-2006, 04:08 PM
Ok, so the engineer place is taken. :-( I'll take the Headhunter Pilot.

Position: Headhunter Pilot
Name: Beryl Quitaan
Nickname: Psycho
Species: Human
Sex: Female
Age: 35
Alignment: Loyal to Captain Nic, and that’s all that matters
Appearance: 5’8”, short blond hair, toned, pretty--but does not normally dress to impress
Weapons/Equipment: Blaster pistol, and various other sharp and pointy objects hidden amongst her person
Bio: Born on Corellia to a CEC (Corellian Engineering Corporation) engineer, Beryl was the only girl out of eight children. She’s a tomboy, a gambler & thrill seeker, and more than a little rebellious, but a “damn good pilot” as her father used to say. Three of her brothers have joined the Rebellion, but her father has forbidden her to join them. So, she’s doing the next best thing she can think of.
How you were recruited: Playing Pazaak with Nic one night, she bet that if she won he would take her on as part of the crew. He lost. 

01-23-2006, 04:13 PM
XoRRoX- That sounds fine, But why would Nic take pity on your char.

Wildjedi- Sounds good, So What do you want our pryor relationship be, I'm willing to change my bio and possibly my homeworld (as most planets would of had a local security force.) and i can proberly change my age by 5 years either way and still keep the character as the guy he is.

01-23-2006, 04:49 PM
Don't change your age... I'll change mine. Prior relationship would be... I donno... what do you think?

01-23-2006, 05:04 PM
I like your character and recruitment, makes my character a bit of a gambler.

Well We could have been In the NSF or another military together before the Empire and decided to leave when the empire was formed becoming mercs and working together, When i got the Echo you could have joined as the first mate


When i left the NSF we met while i worked as a freelance merc, Got to know each other became friends (possibly more but thats up to you.) and i won the echo and you followed. becoming my first mate.


We knew each other from childhood but when i left the NSF we lost touch until years later when we meet up again, I already have a ship and you need a job so i take you on.


Anything you can think of...

01-23-2006, 05:23 PM
I like your third option... will modify my profile to reflect that.

01-24-2006, 06:22 AM
Thanks, Starmark. I think Psycho and Nic would have one of those 'try-and-best-me-if-you-can' type relationships. You know, a little competitive, but all in good fun.

@ ExtremeJedi12--And since Psycho grew up in an engineering/piloting/shipbuilding type of family, she's a pretty good mechanic. She'd be more than willing to lend a hand to Cloud when (or if) he needs it. She might come across to him as a know-it-all though. Could be some friction there, if you like.

@Steven--If Goren's gruff and tough all the time, Psycho will like him. He'd remind her of her dad. But she'll probably tease him just to get a rise out of him once in a while, but never in a mean way.

@ZoRRox--Psycho's a thrill seeker and likes to live dangerously, so she gets herself cut, bruised, & battered quite a bit. (Hence her nickname being 'Psycho'!) I imagine that she and Impe will be well acquainted! Don't worry though. She has a high tolerance for pain and her injuries are never really that serious. (You know, broken ribs, black eyes, the occasional gash on the head...nothing really life threatening. Just irritating. :) )

01-24-2006, 07:36 AM
K guys so we don't get confused with the time lines, i'm going to make one up in the first post, i'll proberly start it around my chars birth, But i'll extend it later to put in everyone elses. It'll go up to when we start the rp and possibly beyond so we know how long it will be to the events of the new hope. The time line will include key events in all characters lives and when people joined the crew. so once i put it up (i'm on my lunch break at the mo so it'll take me an hour once i finished work so 6 to 8 hours time.) you can give me your time line which i will add to the main one in pos 1.

01-24-2006, 10:17 AM
Starmark, I'm changing my char slightly yet again... Nic and Jana didn't grow up together... part of the reason I say that is the difference of planet. We met after you left the NSF. Jana was just getting into freelance merc work and partnered up with you a few times before deciding to tag along.

I'll explain it better in my post above.

01-24-2006, 01:13 PM
The Timeline as far as i know it
59 BBY- Jack Goren Is born on ??? (i think it was Naboo).
44 BBY- Nic White is born on Naboo. Beryl Quitaan was born on Corellia.
42 BBY- Jana Vincent is born on Corellia.
38 BBY- Oliver Van Impe was born on Dantooine.
33 BBY- Ryshana Oliaya was born on ???.
32 BBY- The Trade Federation Blockade Naboo and the Sith reveal themselves to the jedi for the first time in many years. (ep1:TPM)
30 BBY- Cloud Strife Was Born on Alderaan.
26 BBY- Nic White joins the Naboo Security Force.
22 BBY- The Clone War begins. (ep2:AOTC)
19 BBY- The Clone War ends and the Republic becomes the Empire, The Jedi are all but Destroyed. (ep3:ROTS) Nic White leave Naboo to become a mercenary, He joins a small team.
18 BBY- Nic White becomes a Freelance Mercenary.
16 BBY- Nic White and Jana Vincent meet in a bar fight.
14 BBY- Nic White Wins the Echo. Jana Vincent Joins the crew as the First-Mate and Turret Gunner.
10 BBY- THE RP. Now.
00 BBY- Alderaan is destroyed by the Death Star. The Death Star is Destroyed in the Battle of Yavin. (ep4: ANH)

BBY= Before Battle of Yavin (Episode IV: A New Hope)

Ok now ive given you the Dates of your birth for each character acording to your chars age and of the major events in between then and 'now' (with the addition of yavin so you know exactly when it's based), Also i added all of my chars events.
Now I need your Timelines, if you notice that your D.O.B does not fit in with the rest of the events i.e you were only 10 when the clone war begin (stingerhs) now is the time to change it, But make sure you inform me. Also give me any major events in your life like when you left your homeworld. Or somthing major in your bio happens. I also need your join date just make sure its between Nic winning the ship and 'now.'

Thanks all and i hope what i've already done helps.

01-24-2006, 01:30 PM
You might mention in the timeline that Jana works with Nic repeatedly between the time they meet and the time he wins the ship. After all, in my profile, I mentioned it and also mentioned that Jana watched (and we might assume part of her money was at stake too... seeng how high the betting went) as Nic won the ship.

01-24-2006, 01:37 PM
59 BBY-Jack Goren was born on Naboo
39 BBY-Jack joined the Naboo Space Security
32 BYY-Battle of Naboo
31 BYY-Jack Goren was offically declare a missing person
11 BYY-The Echo's orginall pilot was murdered.
10 BYY-Goren returned the galaxy and saved Jack's Life
10 BYY-Goren joined the crew

01-24-2006, 01:41 PM
starmark: Because he is so lonely, if you know what i mean? :)

Jasra: Sounds nice to me :)

01-24-2006, 02:06 PM
I've added stevens although i've decided the RP will begin at the year Beginning so i changed the 10 BBY Dates to 11 BBY I hope this is fine.

I added a bit on to the Timeline about Nic and Jana, I hope this is fine with you wildjedi.
I'm only editing the timeline on the first post.

01-24-2006, 02:10 PM
Looks good :)

01-24-2006, 02:18 PM
Thanks Wildjedi, I changed my Bio to include your character, It basically states that i introduced you to the life of mercs and you helpped me win the Echo

01-24-2006, 02:23 PM
ahh, i was assuming this one would be much closer to the end of RotS than this. okay, i'll adjust Shana's age to reflect this. her age should now be about Nic's age since Shana would have been about 20-22 at the very start of the Clone Wars. i'll make it.... 34. ;)

and she would have been born on the twi'lek homeworld: Ryloth. ;)

01-24-2006, 02:25 PM
Sounds good... and because of it, Jana will occasionally tease Nic about the Echo being partly hers.

01-24-2006, 02:28 PM
Thank wild.

@stringerhs- oK i've changed your D.O.B and added the homworld, If you want to add other bits to the timeline you are more than welcome.

01-24-2006, 02:46 PM
well, a little bit can be added in, since some of this would be available in public databases or historical records. this should be about all you need. ;)

21 BBY- Ryshana Knighted by the Jedi
23 BBY- Ryshana given the rank of General and given command of a platoon of Commandos

01-24-2006, 03:22 PM
@stringerhs- I added your bits although i swapped the dates around as the dates go in desending order as time moves forward.

@XoRRoX- O.k thats our characters relation ship sorted.

@All- so you know, here's how i see my chars relationship with all of yours this is based on your bios and other posts, Some things i made up to add more interest in it, this is can all change it's just a 'so far' post

Jana is the only person who nic would trust with his life, They have been friends for around seven years and fought many battles including several bar room brawl.

Jack Goren isn't an easy person to get on with, Nic can't say he partically likes him nor can he say he partically hates him, Nic dosen't like owing people favors so after Jack saved nics life he saw the best way to repay him was to give his a job. Nic does respect the old Pilot for his skills as a pilot, He keeps the ship moving and thats the most important thing.

Oliver Van Impe would not have been Nics first choice for a healer, but With the lack of options for medics to mercenaries he took him on. Nic saw a lonly and sad man in his new medic and found himself pitying Impe.

Cloud Strife is a brilliant enginneer, Perhaps the best, although Nic would never tell him as much. Nic and cloud have the classic captain/engineer relationship, Cloud needs good parts to work, Nic dosen't buy them.

Beryl Quitaan is a gambler and fighter pilot, Whats not to like. Nic spends alot of free time playing sabacc and pazzack in the common room together, They also gamble on what is often considered by others as 'foolish' things such as who can kill the most badguys, Turrets or fighters.

Nic beleives the jedi are fools, The way Nic sees it they could have prevented all of the tyranny that now rules the galaxy.

01-24-2006, 04:13 PM
Jana-hardly knows. Doesnt talk to her

Nick-usually follows orders to the letter and knows that Nick doesnt like the fact he owes Jack.

Oliver-hardly knows. He doesn't often go to the infirmary on his own concent. He doesn't like being treating his injuries, he either heals them himself or leave them there

Cloud- hardly knows but he does release his skills in engineer and respects him for that.

Beryl- like the rest of the crew he hardly knows.Though she often teases him

01-24-2006, 04:32 PM
I suggest we all post what our characters think of the others... it'll give us a bit of a look into how they might react to one another and, overall, get a better feel for each others' characters.

Jana trusts Nic as much as he trusts her. If she has a problem with one of their jobs, she'll tell him. She feels comfortable telling him anything that's on her mind. They know each other very well.

Jack Goren doesn't talk much. Jana respects his skills as a pilot, but as second in command, she's annoyed by his lack of communication. Because of it, she occasionally jokes to Nic about their pilot's 'excellent people skills' and suggests he might need to go back to school for a communication class.

Oliver Van Impe patches up the crew, a task Jana finds incredibly helpful from time to time. She's been known to take chances she shouldn't and has learned to respect Impe's skills. She also pities Impe's lonliness.

Jana appreciates Cloud Strife's ability to keep the Echo running, if given the proper parts. When the captain doesn't buy the parts Cloud needs, he goes to the second in command, Jana, putting her in a tough place. She wants the ship to run smoothly, but she would hate to contradict Nic. She usually tells him, "Were I in charge, you'd get your parts. But I'm not. So don't ask."

When it comes to Beryl Quitaan, Jana has mixed feelings. On the one hand, Beryl's a great fighter pilot. She's very helpful when it comes to sticky situations the crew of the Echo might face. On the other hand, Beryl seems to bring out a foolish side of Nic. Though Jana never forgets that gambling was what got them the ship, she can't help but wish, Beryl was a little less of a risk-taker.

Jana isn't quite so strong in her dislike of Jedi as Nic is. She too believes that the Jedi could've halted the Empire's ascent if they'd focused more on what was going on around them. As a child, Jana idolized the Jedi. Now, their reputation has taken a devastating hit. In Jana's opinion, it'll take a lot for them to redeem themselves... but she doubts it'll ever happen.

01-24-2006, 04:33 PM
Ok Starmark, here are my contributions to the timeline. Let me know if there are any glaring errors! :)

31BBY Beryl attends the TCTA (Talus Combat Training Academy) in the Corellian system.

27BBY Quitaan Scholarship Fund established and a new TCTA flight control tower is built by Rade Quitaan of the CEC (Corellian Engineering Corp.) to replace the one that was irreparably damaged by an over zealous female student pilot doing a hot-shot flyby and blowing out the windows (oops... :) )

24BBY Beryl (along with her twin brothers Telk & Teser) becomes a test pilot for CEC rival Incom-Subpro (before its merger into Incom Corp.) for the Z-95 series fighters where she earns nickname of Psycho.

22BBY Clone wars. Beryl's brothers (Rayne and Nuss) join up w/Republic forces.

19BBY Beginning of Empire. Beryl is fired with the creation of Incom Corp. due to the availability of less expensive clone test pilots from the Empire.

18BBY Beryl begins working under father Rade as CEC test pilot for new CR-90 Corvette series cruisers.

15BBY Beryl's brothers (Syruss and Rel and Joshi) join Rebellion. Beryl becomes a blockade runner. Her father, Rade Quitaan, dies (of natural causes.)

11BBY Blockade running ship Beryl was piloting is impounded by Empire. She escapes and wins passage (and a new job) on the Echo by beating Nic White at Pazaak (and, as she keeps insisting to Nic, no, she didn’t cheat!)

If this is too detailed, feel free to edit!

01-24-2006, 05:01 PM
Good JasraLantill, i added what i felt were the most relivant for us all to know, This mainly ment removing the bits about your brothers and the (Brackets). I hope this is fine by you.

And it would be nice to do as wildjedi has said and all give our opinions on other characters from our chars P.O.V. Remember as nothing is set in stone let everything can change.

Also timelines looking good so if anyone wants to add somthing just let me know...

01-24-2006, 05:04 PM
Y'know... this is the most detailed and thought-through RP I've ever participated in and I really think it's going to be helpful. I'm really starting to look forward to getting this going. :)

01-24-2006, 05:09 PM
Thanks... I think if you're going to do somthing you might as well do as well as you can. This whole thread is so we are reading from the same page, I can't count the number of times i've been in a thread and people had differant opinions on the time it was set and how well everyone knew eachother. This was the main reason why i think the second chaptor of the original merc crew failed as no one really knew what to say cos people thought 'i can't ask that as my character would already know the answer' (well i found myself thinking that.)

01-24-2006, 05:16 PM
Oops. Forgot some info about Cloud. I'll add it.

01-24-2006, 05:17 PM
Not to mention in the first Merc Crew thread, that little bit where I had to tell somebody (can't remember who now) that Emma's 'Hawk' identity had not been discovered by anyone but the Jedi. :p

01-24-2006, 07:39 PM
And it would be nice to do as wildjedi has said and all give our opinions on other characters from our chars P.O.V. Remember as nothing is set in stone let everything can change.

Here’s what Beryl (Psycho) thinks of everyone…in her own words. (oh dear, oh dear, oh dear…)

“What do I think of Captain Nic White? I like Nic. He reminds me of my brother Rayne—did I mention that I have seven brothers? Good. Anyway, Nic’s a good guy—he likes a good joke, likes a good fight, likes to have a drink while he’s losing a few credits…. Just kidding. He’s not a bad card player, although his right eyebrow twitches when he has a good hand. Oh, erm, don’t tell him I said that, will ‘ya? I’m still down 50 credits on our last game. Yup, Nic likes a little competition now and then. Oh, and by the way, if he ever mentions my name and Imperial fighters in the same breath, the totals are 56 to 54 in my favour. Just, to set the record straight, mind you. But Nic’s a good captain. I respect him. I do. Sure he can be stubborn when he wants to, but most of the time he’s got his priorities set straight. And if he doesn’t, Jana sets him right!

Jana? Oh, she’s the first mate. She’s known Nic a long time. They’re really close friends. *a pause* Hey! Don’t look at me like that. I’m not one to poke my nose into other people’s business. Of course, Jana does give me that ‘look’ once in a while, especially when Nic and I spar in the common room. You know…that ‘look’ your mom gives you when you’ve just caused her favourite vase to teeter dangerously on the mantlepiece when you and your brothers are battling each other with mop handles for swords in the living room. Yeah. That look. But don’t get me wrong. I like Jana. In fact, if it weren’t for her, lots of stuff wouldn’t get done on the Echo. *rolls her eyes* No, I don’t mean stuff like the washing up! We have a rota for that. One that Jana set up, mind you. It’s stuff like that, I mean. Getting parts, supplies, ammo…if it wasn’t for Jana, we’d be in a right mess.

Oh, speaking of messes, if you’re ever in need of patching up, then see Impe. He’s kind of quiet, but he’s got the touch when it comes to healing. See that? That. Right there, above my wrist. Twenty-one stitches, and I didn’t even feel it. No, I’m not kidding. Barely even a scar. Now that’s skill for you. What? Where’s he from? Dantooine, I think. *an amused snort* You know, the amount of time I spend getting patched up by him, you would think I would know more about his background! I’ll have to put that on my to-do list.

Oh! That reminds me! I was supposed to help Cloud with calibrating that manifold coupling. *rolls her eyes* Well, of course I know how to do it! Sith’s blood, my dad was a CEC chief engineer. I practically grew up inside a hyperdrive engine. Me? An engineer? *laughs* Ha! Do I look like an engineer? *shakes head* No. I don’t. Besides, I don’t have the patience for it. *indignant scowl* Yeah, so? I know Cloud’s young, but he’s got this special way of thinking…like he’s playing Dejarik, but with parts, you know. Always thinking one step ahead. Heck, if he didn’t, this ship wouldn’t be in half as good of shape as she is! He’s a great engineer. And, he’s easy on the eyes,… *clears throat* Erm…, not that I’m looking, mind. I mean, like you said, he’s just a kid, right? I mean, I was flying ships before he was even knee high.

What? Why am I not the pilot? Because we already have one. Didn’t you notice that sour-faced curmudgeon in the cockpit? Aw, he’s not that bad, really. Suppose some people would think he’s a bit… well, abrasive, for lack of a better word. But he’s okay. Good pilot, too. And tough as nails. Eats them for breakfast, or so I’ve been led to believe. Yup, Jack’s the strong and silent type. His Basic vocabulary might be lacking, but he’s got an entire repertoire of grunts, growls, and groans that would make a Wookiee envious. Think I’ve figured most of them out though. *frowns* Well, there is that one he makes that I’m not real sure of. Could mean either ‘I totally agree with you one hundred percent’ or ‘get out of my face you psychotic shutta.’ I haven’t quite had enough experience with that one to put it in the correct context.

Is that it? Great. Say, would you hand me that Telescoping Vibra Joiner before you go? Thanks. What was that? *grins* Ha! Not if I see you first."

01-24-2006, 08:50 PM
and so you can get some very brief backround on Ryshana, i'll go ahead and give you guys the cover story that Ryshana's been using for about 3 years (till the start of the RP).

Ryshana has been working as a legitimate cargo transport engineer (as in not involved in smuggling) for the past three years. However, the captain of the frieghter decided that he needed extra credits and was going to start smuggling spice for one of the Hutts. Unaware that an Imperial operative was infiltrating the frieghter, the frieghter was captured by an Imperial Interdictor and impounded for smuggling on its first mission. Using a very clever technique, Ryshana was able to escape completely undetected after being imprisoned for conspiracy.

01-24-2006, 10:38 PM
Aw, geez... Jasra, your post had me laughing practically the entire way through! That was great! It sorta portrays Nic and Jana as 'Dad and Mom' of the Echo and the crew... I like it lots! Especially the part about the 'look'... that was great! Sounds just like something Jana would do! :)

01-25-2006, 07:44 AM
@JasraLantill- I agree With Wildjedi, You seem to have captured the characters in a nice and comical way, I think you have worked out the relationship between Nic and Jana really well.

@ All- I'm still waiting on timelines from XoRRoX and Extreamjedi12. If it's not to much to ask can you two have joined the crew between the years of 14 BBY and 12 BBY, As those years are the times you would likly be recruited. Also Wildjedi can i have a couple of entries in the timeline for Jana as we only have ones which relate too Nic.

Also Just to let you know we will start the RP on a commercial space-station after bringing smuggled goods to it.

This is good work all and it looks like we will manage to start this friday or saturday if all are happy.


01-25-2006, 08:59 AM
Glad you approve of Beryl's POV post, WJ & Starmark. Starting on the weekend sounds great to me! Looking forward to it!

01-25-2006, 10:11 AM
Sorry i haven't answered, bu here it is :)

38 BBY- Oliver Van Impe was born on Dantooine.
24 BBY- Oliver Impe’s father dies by som criminal hunters.
23 BBY- He meets Fenric Khan, who tricks him to take to Naboo.
18 BBY- He meets Fenric Khan, who tricks him to take to Naboo. He meets a girl, he falls in love with.
17 BBY – The girl is arrested by Naboo police by smugling. That crushes Olivers life, and he begins to drink. He do find a job, thanks to his medics skill.
15 BBY – He is fired becuase he drinks to much. He is very lonely and dosen’t meet manye humans.
14 BBY – He gets a job on the ”Echo”. But he drinks a little to much on his room, and he dosen’t speak very much.

Nic White is a nice fellow. He did save Oliver from being a ”drinking hell”. But Oliver dosen’t speak with him very much. Oliver only wants to be alone, not with his captain.
Pilot- Goren (Steven)

Jana Vincent is one of the things, that do Oliver’s job nice. Oliver respects her to be a person, there treat Oliver, as he wants. But sometimes she it is like, that she keeps an eye on him. Like shw wants him to talk with the others in the crew.

Goren, the pilot, is not Oliver’s cocktail. He does always go away from Oliver, and when Oliver can see, that Goren has tanken some damage, Goren dosen’t never go to Oliver.

JasraLantil is a nice person, but damn she gets alot of damage! Oliver does like, that he can do something for her, but sometimes it is to much, and Oliver maybe says wrong things to her, because he can get tired of her.

01-25-2006, 01:11 PM
29 BBY- Jana begins attending TCTA.
27 BBY- Jana is awarded a Quitaan Scholarship for her high scores in turret gunning and contact combat.
22 BBY- Jana graduates from TCTA and returns to Corellia, lives there for a year.
21 BBY- Jana leaves Corellia and goes to Alderaan. A month later, she travels to Coruscant.
20 BBY- Jana runs out of money and begins working in various restaurants and bars on Coruscant.

01-25-2006, 02:08 PM
Hi guys i've added the bits to tthe timeline, so thanks for that and i also did a quick internal layout drawing of the ship- http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/starmark2k/Echo.jpg
Yeah i know it's not that good but it lets you know where all the rooms, Ladder, etc... are.
I also added the link to the 1st post.

01-25-2006, 02:24 PM
Hi guys i've added the bits to tthe timeline, so thanks for that and i also did a quick internal layout drawing of the ship- http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/starmark2k/Echo.jpg
Yeah i know it's not that good but it lets you know where all the rooms, Ladder, etc... are.
I also added the link to the 1st post.

Awesome! And I was just trying to work out the layout by hand drawing a map myself. *wads up paper and tosses it in the bin* Ta!

01-25-2006, 02:40 PM
"She's a fine ship, Captain," Jana said, observing the Echo. She chuckled. "Hope she stays together well... she'll need to for some of the stuff we do."

01-25-2006, 04:11 PM
Obviously the Sketch is rougth, The common room is an all purpose room with tables and chairs for relaxing and playing games. Also theres a kitchen unit in there to prep food and a large table where we can all eat. and you can do the descriptions of your Chars room while we play the RP (or now if you really want, It can give an insight in to your chars personality). You'll have to imagine the ship as that internal image is the extent of my artistic abilities. Again if someone does wish to do a better job than me on the plans you are more than welcome to do so. If you are highly skilled in art you can draw the out side of the ship or anything else you like. Once Ryshana joins the crew she will have the G1 room.

01-25-2006, 05:21 PM
30 BBY- Cloud Strife Was Born on Alderaan.
26 BBY- Cloud's father leaves Alderaan, goes to Naboo and joins Royal Guard.
17 BBY- Disassembles engine and puts it back together in 10th grade.
14 BBY- Joins crew of Echo after repair job.
13 BBY- Falls in love with Aerith and later she gets killed by Sephiroth.
12 BBY- Leaves crew for a while to seach for Sephiroth.
11 BBY- Returns to the crew of Echo.

How's that for a timeline?

01-26-2006, 07:50 AM
Thanks all for your input in making this prep for what i hope will be a good (possibly the best) series of RPs.

I'm going to give my character one last quirk...
Nic has an odd relationship with his blaster 'shotgun', It's a one of a kind weapon that he built himself the first year he became a Freelance merc. He beleives a Machine with a name has a soul and a machine with a soul works better than those without one. This is why he has called his blaster 'shotgun'... Betsy(it only works with a name like that otherwise it just becomes silly). He will often talk about the gun as if it was a living breathing person, "Betsy won't let me down." "I can always trust Betsy."

And with that i beleive that is all we need to get started. As i said i'll only start when all are happy so simply post to give me the go ahead... If you need to change somthing now is your last chance.. let us know if you do.

01-26-2006, 09:29 AM
"I'm good to go, chief," says Beryl. "Let's get this party started!"

01-26-2006, 10:50 AM
Jana nods and deadpans, "Yes, Cap'n, Betsy's always been there for you." Then, she shrugs and says, "So now that you've got that straightened out, let's get going!"

01-26-2006, 04:53 PM
Cloud looks up and looks at Nic. "Ready to go, captain."

01-26-2006, 05:30 PM
"I'm ready too. Let's get off this godforsaken rock." Said Jack and headed to the bridge.

01-26-2006, 09:23 PM
lets roll dude. ;)

01-27-2006, 07:43 AM
Well thats almost everyone... so let's BEGIN!!!!

We can still use this thread to discuss the events and story of the RP...

Here's the Link if you are to lasy to go look for it...

01-28-2006, 08:58 AM
I would just like to make it clear, that Oliver is almost alcoholic. He gets his alcohol in a curious way. The crew dosen't seen him outside the ship very much. (I don't think, that i have said that clearly).

And in the future, i would use a dictionary, because my english is limited.

Master Kan-Maz
01-28-2006, 01:58 PM
Position:Turret gunner 2.
Appearance:Tall,red furred,wearing shorts.
Weapons/Equipment:None(like of ripping his enemies hands out.)
Bio:Kerhirr borned on the Kashyyyk, his mother instantly killed,for doing mistakes.He lived ordinary life,until the slavers came to the Kashyyyk.He fought,but was slaved.
How you were recruited:Nic White smuggled him out from the planet, and Kerhirr owed him.He left with him.

I'm new,please feel free to say what I did wrong.

01-28-2006, 02:05 PM
Sorry Master Kan-maz but the RP has already started.

Master Kan-Maz
01-29-2006, 05:02 AM

01-29-2006, 08:26 AM
Ahh hey guys, long time no posts for me lol, major computer crash spent alot of time backing up some school stuff, still dont have my comp back, im on my old one so hopefully u guys dont need to take over my character like u did in the last one, o and since the rp already started can i get recruited while u guys are at a pitstop or somehting since it wouldnt make sense for me to suddenly appear.....

Position: Turret Gunner 2

Name: Kip Zaroke

Nickname: Kip

Species: Twilek

Sex: male

Age: 29

Allignment: Light

Appearance: Guy with the black head cover http://img.engadget.com/common/images/3364715482646794.JPG?0.9074419133602677

Weapons/Equipment: Two blaster pistols http://brad2389.tripod.com/MR-SW-126_anh_stblastle_lg.jpg
and a rocket launcher strapped to his back

Bio: Kip is John Zaroke's son who heard about the crew his dad was in and wanted to be in it just like him, but before he could join he was sent to the Republic to fight, he soon worked his way through the ranks and achived the rank of Commander, Commanding a squad of 16 men after the battle in space to destroy the death star on yavin, he lost only 1 man, his best friend who had helped him throughout the whole war but was last to a stray blaster shot that hit him directly in the eye as Kip was standing next to him. Now Kip is looking for something on the edge and more behind the scenes gig.

How you were recruited: The last time Kip;s father contacted him was right after the war and Kip brought up that he wanted to join "the crew" because everyone knew they were up to something but never knew what or why, John told him that he has to go to crowded planets and in cantinas because thats where the crew looked for fresh blood. Kip had searched 3 or 4 planets until he came to one planet, he saw the captain of the mercenary crew, his dad had described him, Kip ran up and greeted him, told him that he could blast some turrets and that he was John's son.

01-29-2006, 08:29 AM
Sorry but as i told Master Kan-Maz we have already started the RP and We're too far into it to Have more crew members in it.

02-01-2006, 07:48 AM
This is the PM concerning the jedi discovery...

Hi guys i thought i'd let you know my idea for the rest of the RP.

The prisoner will escape (surprise!) While everyone is pretty much asleep and he'll kill Wade. Then he'll come into Someones room (possibly mine) and a small fight will happen which will result in him taken someone hostage. He'll disable the hyperdrive and then try and escape in the headhunter... Before he gets there stringerhs character will save the hostage, and knock the prisoner into the air-lock in a way to cause some suspicion but not name her as a jedi. We Flush the prisoner. Then the imps come along claim they are aware of us having a jedi onboard, Jana puts 2 & 2 togeter works and works it out. Proberly another space battle. We come up with a logical conclusion that involves why the jedi becomes a permanant crew member.

Then i'm going to do what i was going to do with the first one and let others create stories for the crew. As i'm doing it the only fair way, Wildjedi was the first to join so she can do the second story (if you want).

Let me know what you think of the idea.

As previously stated each following story will be done by someone else The order is the order you joined this thread and is as follows.

Discussion about the future (possibly the last one)

I'll Proberly do a short one either side of stingerhs one which will be a character development one for all.
If you don't want to do a story let me know and i'll do one (but make your character the main guy.)
Your story does not have to make you the main character if you don't want it to.
I think it would be nice if we started each episode with a short prologue as told from your characters POV a bit like how i started the first but this isn't essential.

02-03-2006, 03:11 PM
Just so you know, Starmark, this little bit I'm currently doing with JasraLantill and the stranger 'Riebe' will come a bit more into play in my story... For now, it'll just be sorta left where it is :)

02-03-2006, 03:45 PM
Thats cool Wild, I expected as much.

@Wildjedi- I think it won't be much longer than a week before we go on to yours so if you want any aditional planning for your story and need to know more about other characters history you have untill you start the thread

@ ALL-one last note to all, when doing your story to save typing Mercenary Crew: Age of the Empire we can use the acronym 'MC:AotE:' <insert Title> you dont need a title just put chapter or episode then the number it is.

@stingerhs- At the end we are oing to discover the imps are waiting for us near alderaan so can your character say somthing like 'you can drop me off at the next world.' and my character will invite you along for the ride. If this is o.k for you, It's the only logical way i can come up with. If you have any better ideas let me know

02-03-2006, 04:55 PM
Sorry but as i told Master Kan-Maz we have already started the RP and We're too far into it to Have more crew members in it.

I have an idea on how we can add him in. It goes along with your plan. We land on the other side of Aldeeran where my mechanic shop/spaceport is. KWH's charecter is at the starport waiting for a shuttle to come get him and we see him. One of us can go up to him and see if he wants to join the crew. Or we meet him on the next planet. What do you say, S2K?

02-03-2006, 05:03 PM
No it's too late now, i think we're already pushing it with the number of participants.

02-03-2006, 05:54 PM
Just so you know, Starmark, when Ryshana takes care of Tasser, he'll be forced to let go of Jana rather abruptly, I imagine. Nic should be close enough to catch her and prevent her from falling... and she'll not want to let go of him for a little bit... she was a bit more afraid than she thought :)

02-03-2006, 05:57 PM
o.k that sounds good. And stephen before you flush Tasser out the air-lock i want to say a couple of things through the inner door to him.

02-04-2006, 04:22 AM
Starmark: Sorry, but i don't think, taht I could handle a story. Because of me limited english and lots of homework from my school.

02-04-2006, 04:29 AM
o.k. I'm sorry to hear that.

as XoRRoX is writing himself out we have a couple of options

1) We leave it and continue without a Medic
2) If Ryshana has any healing abilities it will make it a better reason for her to stay on the ship.
3) or we recruit a new player to take a medic position (i'll ask killwithhonor)

I'll let stingers decide if the second option is acceptable to him if not we will go for 1 or 3 on a vote.

02-04-2006, 11:34 AM
Starmark, I'm hoping that Stingerhs will take the place of the medic. It would make perfect sense. (I'm assuming that Capt. Nic would be dropping of Oliver on Alderaan though in order to keep continuity?)

But if Stingerhs decides not to take that route with Ryshana, I'll cast my vote for option 3, as a medic might come in handy later on. (And if that falls through, I'll offer to take over Oliver's character, if there are no objections.)

02-04-2006, 12:00 PM
I agree with JasraLantill.

02-04-2006, 02:06 PM
that works fine for me. it would make some sense story-wise, anyways.

02-04-2006, 03:44 PM
O.k someone is going to have to get injured for Ryshana to heal... As their will be another small space fight it can happen then... so any volunteers.

02-04-2006, 03:44 PM
Well Jana's already in place to get stabbed :p

02-04-2006, 03:47 PM
not now...

02-04-2006, 03:51 PM
heh... nope, that's fine :) Somebody else can get stabbed... Jana's been through enough today anyway :p

02-04-2006, 03:52 PM
as i said somthing can blow up in the space battle and injure someone, I think it should be me as it will add an 'i owe you' element to it. You heal me and by this point we'll know you are a jedi so you can use the Force. I let you stay on board.

02-04-2006, 03:55 PM
sounds like a plan to me. :)

02-04-2006, 04:05 PM
O.k it'll happen at the beginning of the Battle so Extream can take the turret in the fight. (if you want). So here is where we are in the ten points.
7) Me and Jana go to the cockpit and discuss what happened while cloud fixes the hyperspace.
8) Imperials came and say they know we have a jedi on board, Jana puts two and two together.
9) We get into a small fight Where Nic gets injured and Ryshana heals him when they escape.
10) We discover the Imps are waiting for us outside alderaan and agree to take Ryshana on as crew to keep her safe providing she helps us as a medic.

02-05-2006, 04:02 AM

Now i don't understand a thing. I think you all can see, that my english is to limited to make a story. But that's your to decide. You have already maked plans, without saying something to me.

If it is so importent, then i can make a story? Okay?

02-05-2006, 04:13 AM
Ah... I think we misunderstood XoRRoX... if I'm reading this right, he still wants to be involved, but doesn't think his English is quite good enough to be the lead character of a story.

02-05-2006, 04:15 AM
O.k. i think i got confused by what you said, i thought you were leaving the RP... In that case we'll try somthing else... any ideas.

02-05-2006, 04:18 AM
I'm sorry for the misunderstanding. That is my fault. I must practise more with my english

But i will make a story then.

02-05-2006, 04:20 AM
Well, we still only have one turret gunner... if Ryshana's any good at that sort of thing, she might find a permanent place there :) Other than that, maybe she can help Impe in the infirmary... and possibly straighten out his drinking problem :p

02-05-2006, 05:56 AM
I'm sorry for the misunderstanding. That is my fault. I must practise more with my english

But i will make a story then.

No it's my fault, I got confused as it seemed like you were going to shoot yourself in a post in the actual thread... only it now appears you weren't. If you don't want to do a story you don't have to... If you do and want help i'm sure we'll all help.

So sorry. As for the reason why Ryshana stays on board i've got two ideas.

1)Jana persuades Nic to let her stay, as Ryshana saved her life agains Tasser.
2) When the fight starts Ryshana pushes Nic out of the way of an explosion, saving his life. (the after effect of this could be that Ryshana gets injured making it "she would have sacrificed her own life to save mine... <twi'lek swear> I owe someone else.")

02-05-2006, 06:02 AM
Well, that detail was made for, that Oliver is rather clumsy with guns :p

I actually have an idea for a story - but not like the on-going story. I will tell it later, when i have some details ready.

02-06-2006, 07:48 AM
@stinger or Wildjedi. Can one of you make a decission from my last post as it will be needed soon.

02-06-2006, 08:46 AM
it wouldn't be too difficult to go with the second one. just have to set things up, that's all. ;)

02-06-2006, 03:50 PM
There's a strong chance the current RP will end tomorrow or wednesday... Once we've entered hyperspace, We can do a 'one hour later' Where ryshana is all better and i say she can stay on board.

@ Wildjedi- Now is the time to do any group prep that may be needed for your story.

02-08-2006, 10:45 AM
okay, the first thread is done, so what about the next one?? ;)

02-08-2006, 12:36 PM
Wildjedi's not sure if she should open a new thread for her RP as the 'invitation only' one was closed due to it exclusivity... So she may start it in the Current RP thread.

02-08-2006, 01:25 PM
Here's how we'll work it... I'll start a new thread, but this will stay the discussion thread.

(also, my current user title should cause amusement, not embarassement... for I am a guy :p )

02-08-2006, 01:44 PM
Sounds good to me, just make sure you inform us when you've started.
((note- move wildjedi from the Women i'd like to meet list to the men i'd like to meet list.))

02-08-2006, 02:00 PM
Wildjedi's not sure if she should open a new thread for her RP as the 'invitation only' one was closed due to it exclusivity... So she may start it in the Current RP thread.well, all the parts have been cast already in the mercenary crew stuff. with that one, the parts hadn't been cast, and they wanted specific members to join the RP. that was where the issue was. if they want to close the next thread, i will fight tooth and nail to make sure that they understand the difference. ;)

02-08-2006, 02:12 PM
Thanks, stinger :)

preparing to start now...

02-08-2006, 04:00 PM
New thread is started! :)

02-09-2006, 09:14 PM
stinger, Ryshana will have heard of Riebe. She's been in and out of the Jedi Temple on Coruscant since about a year before SW EP1. During those early days, she carried a saberstaff with burnt orange blades. Shortly after the Battle of Naboo, she disappeared for a couple of years. When she returned, her saberstaff was blue and she took a couple of missions for the Jedi before disappearing again.

After three years, Riebe returned again with twin sabers, both green blades, but she also had both of her saberstaffs, the orange and the blue. After that, she stayed fairly continuously at the Temple for three more years.

Two years before 'Attack of the Clones', she went away for about six months.

She made a name for herself during the Clone Wars, fighting alongside the Jedi frequently. Around the Temple she was best known for scolding the Jedi Council. She did this whenever they treated her as just another Jedi. She was not and they knew it; they were afraid of her because of it.

Shortly after the Battle of Naboo, she took an apprentice, Caitlin Bryce. Caitlin learned quickly and was Knighted three years after she became a padawan. The Council allowed Caitlin to be a full Jedi, though her Master had been more of an 'Honorary Jedi'. When Caitlin took on Erica West, Riebe began training Nadira DelCarr. When Nadira learned even more quickly than Caitlin had, the Council exiled her. Riebe took this very hard and vanished again (this was the reason for her vanishing the first time between EP 1 and EP 2).

Still, Riebe remained mostly loyal to the Jedi... until the Council attacked Palpatine. She followed Anakin to where Mace Windu was fighting with Palpatine and watched as the conflict came to an end. She watched Windu get shoved out the window and then, Palpatine turned to her. He revealed that he knew the history of the Sith Hunters and called her a backstabbing fool who should backstab again. She took up Windu's lightsaber along with that of another of the Masters that faced Palpatine and agreed.

She went along with this long enough to vanish. Any Jedi clever enough to escape the purges would have heard that she'd turned against them long enough to slip away into hiding. This may be a point of some bitterness for Ryshana until, later in this chapter, Riebe comes to rescue the crew (they'd been captured) from Darth Vader. Vader stops her, they talk, and then they fight. Neither one wins, but Riebe tells Vader to get to the bridge. His crew is significantly smaller than it was when Riebe and our crew came aboard. She suggests that, perhaps they could use his help in piloting the ship. He leaves and Riebe finishes getting the rest of us out :)

02-10-2006, 01:30 PM
If you havant already noticed i've added links and Synopsis to The stories... So if you already know the title and basic storyline to yours you can send me a Synopsis at any time.

I understand that what people do before you can affest the whole plot to yours so it's not 'set in stone' and can be changed at any time (obviously not after we've started your story).

02-12-2006, 12:22 PM
Hi all
I've been giving some thought to the story after Jasra's (i know it's a long way off but it don't hurt to plan.) and i have what i think is a good idea. Although Nic will be the front man of the story it should give everyone somthing to do.

For this to work i'm going to need to stick a story before Stringers, This will not be long and if done right shouldn't take more than a week to do. The basic story line is we are stopped by imps for a routine inspection and are all seperated & interrogated. This will make it more a collection of short stories than an RP, Although it's to reveal somthing about Nic (which will play in the story after Jasra's) it can be used by all for character development.

The story after Jasra's will basically involve two or three people being captured (Ryshana Can't be captued and either Nic or Jana need to be captured) and taken to Vjun by Darth Vader (Vjun is a place where Vader has built a palace and it rains Acid). He's done this to use the captured as Bait so we'll take Ryshanna to him. The rest involves us escaping. More than that will depend on the fact if that's the last story or not.

Again this is not set in stone but i'd like to hear your opinions. I know it's a long way off (could be a year) so no need to volunteer yet as the stories inbetween could greatly change things.

02-12-2006, 12:36 PM
I think it's a good story line, StarMark! (Especially since it involves a villian (DV) that we shouldn't be able to kill.) Hopefully, by the time it's ready to take place, we'll know more about any 'special skills' that the individual crewmembers have, and that might make it easier to decide who gets captured and who does the rescuing. But I like it!

02-12-2006, 08:03 PM
I'm willing to be taken to Vjun.(Gets Force Choked by Darth Vader.) I also have a plan on meeting with Sephiroth(the guy that killed Cloud's love).

02-12-2006, 09:36 PM
sounds good. i'm really liking what we're doing with this set of rp's, and it's a great distraction from my studies. :D

02-13-2006, 01:48 PM
Thanks Guys
Extreme, i'll take your volunteering as a provisional as i the stories inbetween may change circumstances.

02-13-2006, 03:23 PM
Good idea. I vounteer myself for the capturing and being taken to Vjun. Sounds fun.

02-13-2006, 03:40 PM
We'll decide the details to the Vjun Story when we are closer to doing it... at the moment lets concentrate on the current one. I just thought i'd let you know the future plans for the series.

02-13-2006, 06:00 PM
The malfunction I spoke of OOC in the MC thread only needs to take a little time:

Riebe's ship will enter the Imp fleet virtually ignored and one of the Imp ships will turn and head in our direction... covered in, at most 4 posts.

02-19-2006, 09:01 AM
I'll be meeting Sephiroth on Corellia. Plus, I'll have this 'flashback' sequence as I chase him.

02-19-2006, 01:13 PM
EJ, just curious... at one point didn't you say you'd see him on the SD with Darth Vader? Will that still happen or... hmm... I bet you chase him and he gets away. Then, he watches us and finds out where we're going next and that's why Vader's there with his fleet to capture us... mind if we use Sephiroth that way, EJ?

02-19-2006, 01:38 PM
WJ- This is what i plan on doing if it's fine with you...

Nic collects the crew in the common room to lay down the plan of action, he basically sends Jana and Beryl to sell the Swoops, While him and Ryshana go get some fake IDs for the crew (this way when we are taken by the empire they won't know who we really are and it allows the people doing the following stories more free range). Meanwhile Cloud goes out for revenge, Nic asks oliver and Jack to keep an eye on him and makes sure he doesn't get killed. (if thats fine with EJ aswell). then whatever happens happens we leave corellia then the whole vader thing happens.

Let me know if this is fine, if its not good for you just say, also say if it needs alterations but otherwise fine.

02-19-2006, 01:45 PM
It's good. :)

02-19-2006, 06:09 PM
I like you're idea, S2K.

02-19-2006, 07:46 PM
sounds good. :)

02-20-2006, 09:45 AM
Sounds also good to me :)

02-22-2006, 07:44 AM
Should I make a charecter sheet of Sephiroth?

02-22-2006, 07:50 AM
No He's an Npc, and as we know what he looks like so it isn't needed.

03-01-2006, 10:18 AM
I should have brought this up when i received EJs PM, but as my character wouldn't 'leave a man behind' can we have Beryls brother inform us an imperial patrol ship has just entered the system on the far side of the planet so we have to leave then or they will find us.

03-01-2006, 12:47 PM
Not necessary. Cloud's not getting left behind. Impe just went out, found him unconscious, and is bringing him back. He'll wake up and demand that he be allowed to chase Sephiroth. We'll refuse, so he'll run off in the Headhunter and we'll chase him. Up in space, we discover why Cloud left. Sephiroth is just preparing to enter hyperspace. He does and Cloud follows him. Then, we follow Cloud.

After coming out of hyperspace, we all get pulled into the Star Destroyer waiting for Sephiroth. Cloud and Seph get to fight again and Cloud kills Seph. Then, we get captured.

03-01-2006, 01:01 PM
Ok thats cool.

Also an Update for those who are interested... In the Vjun episode only Nic will be taken hostage, leaving Jana in charge of the ship.

03-01-2006, 03:50 PM
Oh, dear... that should be interesting :p

03-02-2006, 04:54 PM
Events of the next few posts:

Cloud's going to run off in the Headhunter and we'll chase him. There's no Imp fleet where we're at. When we come out of hyperspace, we'll get pulled into a Star Destroyer, where Cloud will fight and kill Sephiroth. Then, we'll all get captured.

03-03-2006, 01:02 PM
Wild if you want Nic to do somthing 'hot-headed' (which would be his character) when we meet Vader, like Shooting him or charging at Vader with his Knife only to get Force gripped and thrown aside, Just let me know.

03-03-2006, 01:13 PM
Heh, yeah that would be cool :) Go for it!

So as for control, EJ controls Sephiroth. I'll control Vader and Riebe (when she shows up). Any random Stormtroopers are up for grabs :D

03-03-2006, 02:51 PM
While we're on the star destroyer, can I kidnap any imperal officer?

03-03-2006, 04:11 PM
Kidnap? Sure... I guess, but just know that you'll have to let him go once we get captured or when we make it back to the ship.

03-04-2006, 04:15 PM
While i was looking around the web for things i need to do a Fan-fic i found this. http://blogs.starwars.com/abelgpena/5

It has a list of Star Wars Curses so it should be useful in the future, after all we are playing the characters from the lower levels of society being Mercs.

03-04-2006, 07:01 PM
Think this will come in rather handy in the near future (when we get captured.) Thanks!

03-05-2006, 12:01 AM
While i was looking around the web for things i need to do a Fan-fic i found this. http://blogs.starwars.com/abelgpena/5

It has a list of Star Wars Curses so it should be useful in the future, after all we are playing the characters from the lower levels of society being Mercs.hehe, now that is an interesting find. i don't think you'll here Ryshana bust many of those out, but you'll find out that she used to 'curse like a trooper'. ;)

03-06-2006, 03:46 PM
Ok, so I've been playing around with my new Photosuite program, and I've come up with a crew pic using the descriptions and/or pics provided in your character sheets. I did this just for fun, but feel free to give your comments.

Clockwise from Centre: Nic White (& Betsy), Jana Vincent, Jack Goren, Cloud Strife, Beryl Quitaan, Oliver Van Impe, and Ryshana Oliaya.


03-06-2006, 04:06 PM
That totally rocks... and even Betsy got in there. wooooo.

03-06-2006, 05:44 PM
I can give you a more realistic pic of Cloud.


03-06-2006, 05:54 PM
Cool! Thanks, EJ! I'll edit him in!

((Ok, EJ, I've edited in your Cloud into the pic and changed the link. Hope his hair doesn't look too odd. ;) ))

03-06-2006, 10:18 PM
I like the pic. My twin brother likes it too.

03-06-2006, 11:31 PM
hehe, now that is cool. nice to have another nice visual reference. :D

03-07-2006, 06:11 AM
I don't look rather freindly on the picture. But hey - am i freindly? ;)

03-07-2006, 11:15 AM
I don't look rather freindly on the picture. But hey - am i freindly? ;)

Yes, you're friendly! :) Point taken, I've edited the pic. Hopefully, Oliver looks more friendly now. ;)

03-07-2006, 12:17 PM
For joke sake can you give Nic a mustache?

03-07-2006, 01:01 PM
For joke sake can you give Nic a mustache?
Ok, Steven. Just for you, I did. (Actually, it's not a bad look for Nic...)


03-07-2006, 01:07 PM
eh... entertaining, but I'm not sure I like it much... :p

03-07-2006, 01:10 PM
Thats Very nice Jasra, Nic with a tache.

On a completely differant subject but relevant to the Merc Crew 'universe'. I (with a little help from wildjedi) have made a Fan-Fic based around Nic and Jana (I say a little he's practically co-wrote it).


03-09-2006, 03:40 PM
Although i'm unsure how much longer wildjedi's story will take. i can't imagine it won't be too much longer, So steven as you are up next if you need any prep or character details now is the time to do.

03-09-2006, 04:16 PM
It dought that'll be nessiary. I just would like the rpg to end with all of us leaving the star destroyer alive.

03-09-2006, 04:27 PM
It dought that'll be nessiary. I just would like the rpg to end with all of us leaving the star destroyer alive.

End the whole RPG, or just this part of the story? Are you planning to quit?

03-09-2006, 04:46 PM
I ment the chapter.

03-09-2006, 05:02 PM
Don't worry... we'll all get out of this alive :)

03-09-2006, 10:29 PM
Edited my post in the RP... go check it out :)

03-10-2006, 07:42 AM
oh just a note about everyones stories. They don't have to start dtrait after the previous one but don't make them any longer than a couple of months after. If you do base it a week or more please fill in the gap so the crew know what they've been doing as we don't want everyone contradicting each other. i.e we dont want one person too say "since the jedi arrived we ain't had a single job." then one to say "that job we had yesterday made a ton of cash."

03-12-2006, 02:23 PM
Ok. Since you guys are about to leave the Star Destroyer, I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter of MC: AotE to fight Sephiroth right?

03-12-2006, 02:28 PM
I see this going two ways:

First, you could run into Sephiroth and kill him just before Riebe finds you.

Second, you could wait for the story you're in charge of and kill him then.

03-12-2006, 02:31 PM
Yeah, it looks that way, EJ. ;) Although now that Cloud knows Sephiroth is a Force Adept, your character might want to seek out some training tips from Ryshana in preparation for his next meeting with Sephiroth. Just a suggestion. :)

03-12-2006, 02:38 PM
I now have an idea. Sephiroth and Cloud keep meeting one another until I decide to have Sephiroth die. I don't know what thread that will be in, but I'll make up my mind later.

03-12-2006, 02:40 PM
Let me put it this way: any idea you come up with on your own is likely the best idea for your characters.

That said, I say, "Go for it!" :)

03-12-2006, 08:32 PM
I have a personal question that I want your opinion on: Do I suck at RPing?

03-13-2006, 12:42 PM
^^^ no you don't suck

@ Everyone- O.k because we have 3 of the 10 or so force sensitives in the galaxy, i think we need some kind of reason. This is star wars and stuff like this doesn't happen by coininsiance(sp). I think it should be somthing like Nic or Jana sonehow act as a force magnet drawing these sensitives to them... I suggest Jana as that can be the reason why she has Reibe looking over her. Unless Wild has somthing else planned.

03-13-2006, 12:51 PM
Yeah, that's fine... and it makes me happier now... unexplained stuff bothers me ;)

Yes, Jana is a 'Force magnet'. That's likely the reason Ryshana felt drawn to approach her in search of passage to Alderaan. Jana isn't extremely Force sensitive herself, but Riebe sticks around to shelter her... Riebe knows that, if Jana were found by the Empire, they would use her to attract Jedi. So Riebe uses her abilities to hide Jana's 'magnetism'. Still, in close quarters, Force sensitives feel drawn to Jana.

03-13-2006, 01:01 PM
well thats somthing i should add into the n & J fan fic.
@wild- Nic is not Force sensitive. But if you want nic to somehow be destined to protect Jana because of some prophercy or whatever let me know.

03-13-2006, 01:10 PM
That may be part of it... but remember the circumstances in which they met... Nic was going to walk away. It was Jana that chased him and went with him...

03-15-2006, 08:05 AM
I won't be posting until you get to the Echo because it's a short run to the Headhunter.

03-17-2006, 12:41 AM
well, since the current rp seems to be getting nowhere, and since we've pretty much accomplished what we wanted to accomplish, i think it would be a good idea to just simply post a summary of what we've already decided will happen and move on to the next thread.

that is unless we've just lost all interest in pursuing further rp's with this idea...

03-17-2006, 01:11 AM
My fault, really... I've just been so busy, I've been unable to post recently and, as this one was my story, it suffered. I'll post a general end that includes all of our characters once I get confirmation from all of you that char control is alright in this situation.

03-17-2006, 02:55 AM
My fault, really... I've just been so busy, I've been unable to post recently and, as this one was my story, it suffered. I'll post a general end that includes all of our characters once I get confirmation from all of you that char control is alright in this situation.

Fine by me.

03-17-2006, 07:08 AM
Go ahead.

03-17-2006, 07:34 AM
fine by me.

03-17-2006, 08:56 AM
Fine by me. :)

03-17-2006, 11:13 AM
sounds good to me. ;)

03-17-2006, 12:51 PM
Ok, so starmark just PMmed me an idea that will give the RP a little more life, bring up some questions, and effectively bring this RP to a close. So hang in there a little longer :)

03-18-2006, 12:00 PM
Great ending, WJ! :) So, Starmark, when is the next chapter starting? It's Steven's turn for a story, yes?

03-18-2006, 12:34 PM
Yes. I'm still think of a plot. Pm any suggestions you may have.

03-20-2006, 04:31 PM
Here's the link to Steven's story incase you didn't notice it already

@steven- Now all i need is a breif Synopsis of the Ep to stick on Post 1 of this thread.

03-22-2006, 08:43 AM
My person is unconscious, because of the RP, and because i have a importent school project, and i only can be online maybe 1 time in a day. But it ends soon.

03-22-2006, 07:28 PM
Okay, before we go any further, Steven, can you give a hint on what you have in mind for Jack's story?

03-23-2006, 12:53 PM
We meet with one of the Dreadnoughts, who is corrupted and he offers us a job to search for a relic from the clone wars which has something to do with Jacks past.

03-26-2006, 01:45 PM
C'mon you guys! We've landed the Echo---post something!

03-26-2006, 02:03 PM
'tis the Echo you mean :p

03-26-2006, 02:09 PM
Is it too late to join? the new rp? (steven's.)

03-26-2006, 02:59 PM
o.k heres the deal, I'm going to put it up to a vote if Rav can join. Here are the Three options. Every player gets 1 vote, majority wins. don't feel obliged to say yes just to be nice, if you think it will ruin RP say so.

1 yes to permanent join- Rav can create a character and we will come up with a reason for him/her to join the crew.

2 Yes to 'guest' join (only with Stevens permission)- Rav can create a character with steven that is sensitive to the story and will only appear in the current story

3 No- self explanitory.

Note- if you vote no.2 also put a secondary vote incase steven says a no to him being a guest.

03-26-2006, 03:08 PM
Does it have to be a unominous decision or just one vote over one?

03-26-2006, 03:10 PM
It's majority wins so one vote can tip the balance.

03-26-2006, 03:11 PM
I'll go for Option 2, but if Steven doesn't agree, then Option 3 (mainly because I'm not sure what the new character's position would be on the Echo.)

03-26-2006, 03:12 PM
And, if i'm allowed in I'll someway be apart of the mercenary crew? Like not a Sith who was sent by Vader to capture you all? Nothing like that?

03-26-2006, 03:27 PM
I suppose it depends on what type of character you would be playing. If you develop one that fits into the current crew structure, I'm not opposed to you joining the crew. But it's really up to Steven as it's his thread at the moment.

03-26-2006, 03:28 PM
If option 1 is decided on Rav's Char will probably be a force sensitive(non-trained) to keep with the Jana storyline.

If it's option 2 Your Characters purpose will be desided by Steven and Rav.

03-26-2006, 03:32 PM
I think if it's okay with everyone else that I play a Dark Jedi who was gave the order from Vader to capture the crew members of the Echo, but in the end I get killed (in the end of the roleplay i suppose.) So whichever of the choices will work out, but I tag along until some sort of trap?

Starmark your voting as well I suppose?

03-26-2006, 03:33 PM
I'd say 2. He could be the corrupt Dreadnought captain that sends us looking for a relic from the clone wars but that dark jedi idea isn't bad.

03-26-2006, 05:01 PM
I'll vote for 2... the crew's pretty well complete... I just can't figure a place to add another (unless Jana wins out and Nic hires a chef... and I really can't picture a Dark Jedi becoming a chef :p )

03-27-2006, 10:37 AM
Well - i would say 2. But if it fits the RP, he could join? :)

03-27-2006, 06:46 PM
I wouldn't mind another person joining he crew. And I don't mind him trying to kill us either. 1 or 2.

03-27-2006, 07:36 PM
So what shall I be? (I think being the Dark Jedi would be much more interactive with the roleplay), but it's entirely up to you.

03-28-2006, 01:12 AM
A Dark jedi could be nice - it will suit the RP with Jana.

In RP: My person is dying right now. But there isen't anyway to save him. How do you think, i should save him? (if i should save him :P). He is dying because of his old freind, who has posioned Oliver. If that is good RP? :)

03-28-2006, 03:46 PM
Is that question to me or the people of the roleplay? So what shall I be the corrupted General or the Dark Jedi? (If i'm the Dark Jedi I can be killed off at the end just, because of the 2nd choice everyone seems to choose..)

03-28-2006, 03:48 PM
Well looks like your going to be the dark jedi but your only going to be allowed to meet and fight the crew untill I say so.

03-28-2006, 04:03 PM
Well do you just want me to start off, by Vader commanding me to recapture you all?

03-28-2006, 04:43 PM
Idea: Sephiroth(Cloud's Sith enemy. See MC: AOTE: Old Friends and New Jobs for more info.) travels with RaV's charecter to find us.

03-28-2006, 05:44 PM
i think it would make more sense if your character was someone that was still carrying out the Jedi Purges by hunting down and killing any Jedi that remained. Given Ryshana's backround of being on the run, it would make sense if your character was specifically looking for Ryshana.

03-28-2006, 05:52 PM
I love the idea Stingerhs! If I do this idea should I one way or another be a member of your crew or just hunt the crew down and where would be a place to start my roleplay at in the rp?

03-28-2006, 05:55 PM
that desicion lies with Starmark2k, not me. ;)

03-28-2006, 06:06 PM
Oh okay, well I appreciate the idea anyway. (check your inbox Stingerhs.)

03-29-2006, 06:45 AM
As it seems to be fine with Steven you are a Dark Jedi under the Empires command to hunt the remaining Jedi... Now you can start it with you being breifed by the emperor or you can start as if your char has been hunting Ryshanna for a while.

Now as a few peeps did select option 1 we will conider this a trial as well, Basically when we are close to the end we'll have another vote to see if you will be a permanant addition, You'll probably convert if we(and you) want you to stay around otherwise you and ryshanna will probably saber fight to the death.

You don't need to do a Char sheet unless you want to.

04-01-2006, 05:02 AM
A Dark jedi could be nice - it will suit the RP with Jana.

In RP: My person is dying right now. But there isen't anyway to save him. How do you think, i should save him? (if i should save him :P). He is dying because of his old freind, who has posioned Oliver. If that is good RP? :)

XoRRoX, are you wanting anyone to save Oliver, or are you planning to do that on your own? Just asking because it appears that Jana is returning to the ship and she would most likely discover Oliver lying in the corridor. (And the idea of going after a posioner sounds okay to me as an RP topic.)

04-01-2006, 08:58 AM
I would like, that Jana could save me. That could be cool :)

04-01-2006, 09:12 AM
Too late. Jack has come to the rescue. :P

04-02-2006, 01:19 PM
Sorry I haven't been posting. I've been sick lately. I'm feeling well enough right now to post this. When I get better, I will post more about Cloud's father and what happens after he leaves the Palace when I feel better.


04-03-2006, 05:13 PM
Change of plans peeps. If you dont mind but if your guy is in theed, I would like them to get arrested. From there they will be taken to a prison on a different planet.

04-05-2006, 02:49 PM
Erm...arrested? Again? Leaving only Jack, Jana, and Oliver (who's still sort of sick, right?) the only crewmembers on the Echo? I don't know about anyone else, but I'd rather not split up the crew at the present moment.

Steven, could you give us a hint on where the story is going and why being taken to a prison on another planet is necessary to the plot? I'd rather just find out what Carmen's business is with Nic, get back to the ship with the supplies, and go with the story from there. Jana's been waiting for an answer from the Dreadnaught captain for 35 posts now as to why he wanted to speak with her and he hasn't yet answered. I know there is a lot of bureaucacy in the Empire, but... c'mon! ;)

04-05-2006, 05:02 PM
I agree with Jasra, We were only in custody in the last episode.

If you can do somthing differant please do but if it's 100% essential for us to be captred.

04-05-2006, 05:58 PM
Nevermind then. I'll go back to plan one.

04-06-2006, 12:58 PM
Ok guys i'm going to go into Nic's backstory basically because it seems like another person is going into a similar direction and i don't want it to seem as if i'm ripping them off. I'll put it in a spoiler tag so if you want it to be a surprise it will be.

Nic White isn't his real name, He changed it after he left naboo. He left naboo because he ended up killed his brothers wife, although the circumstances made it unavoidable he felt so guilty he left the planet

05-05-2006, 10:21 AM
ok, should we officially call the thread 'dead', or what?? i actually was looking forward to getting to my story (especially since i'm done with college this semester), but if that's not going to happen now....

05-05-2006, 10:36 AM
Sorry, if i haven't been active. I have been on a school camp in a hole week, and the school is giving a lot of homework.

05-05-2006, 12:39 PM
ok, should we officially call the thread 'dead', or what?? i actually was looking forward to getting to my story (especially since i'm done with college this semester), but if that's not going to happen now....
We could always skip my story if you guys want to keep the rpg going. My life not reallty important.

05-05-2006, 04:35 PM
K Vote time.

1) Skip it go on to the next.

2) Continue this story but go strait to the Con job.

3) Skip this story and just go only do stories that have been thoughurly(sp) planned.

4) kill it.

one vote each... i say 2

05-05-2006, 09:04 PM
I vote 2 as well

05-05-2006, 09:34 PM
i'll go for either 1, 2, or 3, but my official vote is with #2. ;)

05-06-2006, 05:12 AM
I'm going to have to go with the crowd. #2

05-06-2006, 05:25 AM
#2 for me. In fact, that's what I was waiting for...someone to land the ship at this resort so we can get to the scam part.

05-06-2006, 07:10 AM
ok even without EXs and XOs votes the decission is ennaminus so i'll just to a 2 day's later

05-06-2006, 12:06 PM
Sorry I haven't been on recently. I was having my own vacation time on a video game whose name I can't say because some people might get POed at me.

07-22-2006, 12:43 PM
I'm waiting for someone else to post for the RP to continue.

Edit: oK guys Is this RP Dead, with no one wanting to continue Or do at least half of us wish to continue.

Personally i want to contiue but i can't RP on my own... without getting kicked from the forums for spamming.

Also with Stingerhs still AWOL the RP is going to go slow as the Jedi is pretty pivitol to our story.

07-22-2006, 12:52 PM
Perhabs it'll help if we skip my story or even create a new rpg like this, but without the different chapters.

07-22-2006, 07:05 PM
It won't help to skip the story, Steve. Our current problem is that about half of us aren't posting regularly any more. At the moment, I think we're waiting for a post from Stingerhs. As for creating a new RP... well, I wanna finish this one! It had so much structure and was turning out very well. Let's see if we can't tough this lull out. I bet that, once school starts and people are around their computers more frequently, it'll pick up again... I hope :confused:

07-22-2006, 10:25 PM
are you guys really waiting on me?? my apologies. give me a minute, and we can get this thing moving again.

and yes, i should be getting online much more regular now, so quit fretting mates. ;)

07-23-2006, 03:34 PM
Well - i'm still in, but i can't do much right now. I just rad and wait :)

07-28-2006, 01:50 PM
Hi guy's i'd just thought i would share an idea i had for a run of Fan-fic's based around this RP. I have had Ideas for a series of stories that start from the Jedi joining the crew and will end with an '8 years story'. Obviously i will be using characters created by you lovely people(i should have started the flattery earlier but it's too late for that now) and i don't want to do it without your permissions. So I will give you an idea of changes i'll be making by adding short character Bio's and breif synopsis of the stories. Let me know if this is OK and if you would like me to make any changes (I.e change the name as you don't mind me doing the stories but you would prefer me not to use the same name.)

Nic White- Nic White was born Simon Raikelli as a twin and raised in the capital city of Naboo, Thread. His mother was one of the queens handmaidens (not Padme’s) so he was brought up within the walls of the palace and his father was a Lieutenant in the Naboo security force. While Children Nic and his Brother, Kriss, became friends with a young girl called Tanya. The three of them remained good friends throughout there childhood and all of them joined the NSF. Nic and Kriss both feel in love with Tanya but Nic did not act on his feelings leaving Kriss free to marry her.
Soon after joining the NSF the Clone war began, Naboo only saw small fragment of the war and was only attacked once causing the Republic to place a base on the planet. This caused the Naboo security force to only take on low level policing., which led to Nic joining the Naboo Elite Guard (N.E.G). He trained as a sniper and remained as one until the war was almost over. During what was to become his last mission he accidentally shot Tanya leaving him distraught and filled with guilt.
He took to the stars and changed his name, as he couldn’t stay on the world of his sin, he joined a small team of mercenaries where he learnt new skills. While in the team he ended up playing a game of Pazzack with a wealthy crime-lord known as Carmen. The stakes got to high for him and he ended up betting his services as a Body Guard, he lost and ended up spending a strange six months with the crime boss. When this period ended he smuggled himself onboard a ship trying to get to Irodia, but was discovered and literally dropped off on Coruscant. While looking for a way off the world he found himself in bar and trying to help a waitress, Jana.
Nic has sworn to protect Jana for reasons unknown to himself but has done it never-the-less.

Jana ‘short stuff’ Vincent- Jana was brought up on Corellia by her mother and father in one of the Coronet Suburbs. Because of her short stature her parents were concerned with her safety and sent her away to the T.C.T.A where she excelled.
She was quickly found to have a gift in many forms of martial arts combat and learnt how to use a variety of weapons and use improvised ones. She also got the highest scores in turret simulations and was equally first-rate at the real thing. While at the Academy she ended up getting a close relationship with one of the Combat instructors known as Reibe.
When she left the Academy she decided to explore the galaxy and collected her money together and headed for the core worlds. She only got as far as Coruscant when she ran out of money and went looking for work as a turret gunner. Unfortunately for her no one took her seriously due to her size despite her record at the T.C.T.A and ended up taking what work she could. She ended up working in restaurants and cantinas but due to her short fuse she kept getting into fights, which led to her getting fired. In one fight she ended up being helped by Nic White and started working with him as a mercenary.
She looks to Nic like an older Brother and has always wondered why she has stuck with him for so long and why he has let her.
Unknown to herself Jana is a ‘Key’ to the force and had been prophesised to be the one who can be used to destroy the force. She is the ancient ancestor of Reibe who has persuaded Nic to protector from the ‘Order of Traya’ an ancient cult who wish keep the universe balanced and destroy the force.

Cloud Aragu- (I’m changing the last name so I wouldn’t be copying the FF franchise) Cloud was born on the peaceful world of Alderaan and raised by his mother. His father left his family home when cloud was only nine to go and fight in the clone wars and never returned. He often spent his evenings looking out into the stars wandering where his father was and dreaming about travelling the stars.
Cloud was very intelligent and intuitive from a young age and quickly found a passion for engines and mechanics. He implemented these skill during his adolescence by supping up his friends racers and getting a job in a local ship-dock fixing up independent ships.
Despite his vast intelligence and the fact his family had enough money he chose to leave school at 16 and became a full time mechanic. A year after leaving school the Echo came to Alderaann after only recently being won by Nic white. It was in need of repair as the captain had chosen to fly it’s first trip without a mechanic and cloud was assigned the repair job. The Echo’s pilot Aerith often spent time with cloud during his repairs and persuaded Nic to recruit the young man.
Cloud jumped at the chance to explore the stars with the group of mercenaries and also found love onboard the ship with Aerith. Unfortunately for Cloud, Aerith like most mercenaries had made some enemies and had a bounty placed on her head. A Bounty Hunter known as Kason(Changed the name for same reason as before) came after her and killed her but not before Cloud tried to stop it and seriously wounded the bounty hunter. Kason has vowed revenge on Cloud as Cloud also vowed revenge for the loss of his love.

Oliver Van Impe- Oliver grew up on the fields of Dantooine as the son of a farmer, He was privileged with excellent education and eventually ended up going to medical school to train as a doctor. He learnt a lot about cybernetics and took it up as his speciality.
He graduated when the Clone War began and decided to sign up and become a medic on one of the republic’s medical ships. He spent these years replacing lost limbs and other parts of the body with new cybernetic ones onto the clones and enlisted troops. He was very quickly thought to be one of the foremost authorities in the field as the war came to the end and was promoted through the Republic’s ranks.
At the end of the war he stayed on and utilised his skills in Cybernetic implants to aid the Imperial Navy’s storm troopers and officers. He ignorantly went about his duties believing all the imperial Propaganda and believing he was doing his part for ‘Galactic Peace’.
One day he was ordered to the Wookie home-world to help in the re-education of the primitive species. He began working on new Cybernetic equipment he believed would be used to increase the Wookie’s intelligence when in reality they were being used to help subjugate the species. He soon found out the truth and managed to leave the imperial ranks.
With his eye’s now open to the truth he saw the galaxy for what it was and he could not take that he was apart of it. He soon took to drink trying to forget the things he had done. With no job, money or anything else Oliver joined some criminals as a medic and this soon led to him meeting the crew of the Echo. Oliver saved Nic’s life after he had gotten shot by a sniper and Nic took him on as his ships medic.

Jack Goren- Jack was born and raised on Naboo into a family with a long military tradition and Jack didn’t break it. He joined the Naboo Security force and began to train as a fighter pilot in the Royal Guard. He earned his place as one of the N1 pilots and because of the worlds peaceful stance he only ever flew in display shows and saw no combat
When the trade federation invaded his home-world jack was one of the captured pilots that were freed by the Jedi and journeyed to Coruscant via Tatooine. After the unsuccessful Senate meeting Jack also returned to Naboo with the queen. He was with the fighters that attacked the Droid Control ship in orbit of Naboo while the Gungan’s fought on the ground. While fighting Jack took a bad hit and lost engine power, Drawn by the planets gravity he went swirling into Naboo’s atmosphere and bailed out.
He was knocked out before he hit the ground by a piece of debris and awoke with two men standing over him. One of the men knocked him out again and Jack awoke a second time aboard a strange ship. His captors explained to him that they were apart of the ‘order of Traya’ and they had sought him out as he was neutral through the force (a rare occurrence).
Jack joined the order and served then for 20 years in their task to keep the order neutral and to seek ‘the key’. Then he was sent to kill one person so light in the force she disrupted the galactic balance. Jack went to kill her but discovered that he was sent to kill a girl of only five years old, Jack couldn’t bring himself to do it.
Jack was quickly thrown out of the order and had his memory of his service to them erased. He woke up on Tatooine with no knowledge since the moment he bailed out of his Fighter back on Naboo. It didn’t take him long to hear about the Clone War and the Empire taking over the galaxy but he could not discover anything about himself.
A couple of years past and he didn’t leave Tatooine, he had decided that he probably didn’t want to know about the last 20 years although he was still curious about the lost years. While walking through the market he saw a man running from a couple of Thugs on Swoop bikes and decided to help the guy out. The man was Nic White and he owned a ship that needed a Pilot.

Beryl ‘Psycho’ Quitann- Beryl’s mother died during her birth so she was raised by her father and six brother at there estate on Corellia. Beryl’s father was one of the top engine designers in galaxy and this made his very wealthy but he still brought his children up himself. Beryl’s Brothers had the effect of making her a Tom boy, she loved to fight, engines and all kinds of things a Lady shouldn’t.
While she was very young a Jedi came to her father with a proposal to build new fighters for the temple. The Jedi felt that the force was strong with beryl and told the father she needed to be trained, not wanting to loose his daughter he turned the Jedi away and never told beryl of her affinity.
Beryl’s father decided to send her to the TCTA as she wished to become a pilot and she had great skill at it. While there she became known as a risk taker and a person who liked to push the boundries which once led to her destroying half of the main comm. tower. Her father paid the bill for repairs and persuaded the school to keep her on but she earned the Nickname ‘Psycho’ .
After graduation she joined her fathers company as a test pilot. When the clone war began all of her brothers went to fight against the separatists and beryl wanted to go with them but her father made her promise not to go. When the war ended three of her brothers returned as two died in battle and one stayed in the imperial army.
Not long after her father died and Two of the brothers left and joined the rebellion while the last brother started a transport company (secretly a smuggling ring for the rebels). The company was sold to the Empire on her father’s death so Beryl lost her job and ended up taking a job on one of her brothers blockade runners. On one mission her ship was captured and she got bailed out by her brother (despite her protests). She found herself in a bar gambling with anyone who would play including Nic White, Nic wagered a position on his crew and Beryl won.

Ryshana- With Ryshana I don't want to do anything differant as he will have her in his stories. So when it comes to exploring her past i'll like to work with him on it... But if Stringerhs is against the Idea of using Ryshana i would like to create a differant jedi although i would prefer to use a RY.

Notes: I’ve added the date on a DD/MM/YY basis and if you read Nic and Jana You’ll know I start stories having a character tell a prologue. This is normally the main character of the story.

1) The passenger- Nic intro 28/01/10BBY
The crew take on passengers as well as transporting a prisoner. Things go wrong and they discover one of the passengers is a Jedi. Basically the first RP edited but excluding Reibe.

2) The Last Jedi- Ryshana Intro 30/01/10BBY
This is the second RP with Cloud’s sub-plot cut out of it so it concentrates more on Ryshana. Also Reibe only appears at the end to save the day.

3) Reibe- Jana Intro 31/01/10BBY
After escaping from Vader the crew end up helping the mysterious Reibe in finding an ancient artefact. Reibe also reveals some truths to Nic about his First mate.

4) Best served cold- Cloud intro 17/02/10BBY
After finding a lead on the ware bouts of his lost loves murderer, him and Jana go out on a search for the bounty hunter. Meanwhile Nic, Beryl and Ryshana infiltrate a Grand moff’s party to get vital information for Carman.

5) Mistresses of ceremony- Beryl Intro 10/03/10BBY
While travelling through Skran space the ship in boarded, Nic and the women are captured. They discover the Skran pirates are a matriarchy and want the women to join them while Nic is to be married to one of the Skran. The only way to get Nic out of the situation is for Beryl to fight the would-be-wife to the death.

6) The Carbonite Jedi- Oliver Intro 12/03/10BBY
The crew find a derelict ship from the end of the clone war while leaving Scran space and decide to check it out. After discovering a Jedi encased in carbonite Oliver must make a decision about him.

7) Bounty Hunters- Ryshana Intro 02/05/10BBY
As the imperial ships can’t seem to find the Jedi, Vader choose to send the two most deadly bounty hunters in the galaxy, Sankra and Jon, after them.

8) Past Echoes- Nic Intro 13/06/10BBY
The echo is captured by an imperial dreadnaught commanded by Nic’s brother, Ryshana hides on the ship while the rest are interrogated.

9) Escape from Mayholis Prime- Jana Intro 35/08/10BBY
While gun running to the rebel’s on Mayholis Prime Some of the crew get stranded on the planet and end up helping the rebels and citizens do the same before the Empire arrives. This leads them and 50 others on a trek through a forest.

10) Brothers and Sisters- Beryl Intro 04/09/10BBY
Beryl is contacted by one of her brothers in the Rebel alliance to go and aid some rebels on a small moon. After persuading Nic to take the ship there she discovers that the moon is being used by the imperials to test Bio-weapons and another brother is an imperial stationed there.

11) Lost in rage- Cloud Intro 12/10/10BBY
Cloud manages to pick up Kasons trail again and this time Nic decides to take the whole crew to help his mechanic. This time the bounty hunter is much more powerful and uses the force with a lightsaber and has led the crew into a trap.

12) The Order Part 1- Jack Intro 13/01/09BBY
While travelling a ghost route to stay out of the empires way the ship gets caught in a disruption field and land crash lands on a world lost for 4000 years. Jack starts to remember visiting the world and finds himself instrumental in communicating with the local inhabitants, the Rakata. He finds out about the ‘Order of Traya’ a group he was once a member of.

13) The Order Part 2- Jana Intro 14/01/09BBY
The ‘Order of Traya’ captures Jana and Beryl and Nic goes to extreme length to find out where they’ve been taking by torturing a member of the Order. Only when Reibe turns up they find the Orders Temple and interrupt a ceremony in which Jana is vital to.

14) The Order Part 3- Nic Intro 14/01/09BBY
After rescuing Jana. Nic and Ryshana go looking for Beryl only to fid she has turned to the dark side of the force.

15) Derelict- Beryl Intro 20/01/09BBY
Not long after the events with the Order the ship ends up in a minefield and finds it-self floating in space. As Jana, Cloud and Jack try to fix the ship Nic tries to comfort Beryl after the recent events and Ryshana Asks Reibe what she knows about Nic

16) The Things we did- Oliver Intro 33/01/09BBY
Oliver is forced to face up to what he did when he finds out his research has begun to be used on mass to help subjugate the Galaxy.

17) Making it Personal- Nic Intro 01/03/09BBY
Sankra and Jon Come after Nic after making things personal the last time they met by digging into his past and attacking his weak spots.

18) Ignorance is Bliss- Jack Intro 19/03/09BBY
Jack starts to remember a lot more about the Order and begins to be reminded of the things he did and asks Ryshana to help him.

19) Jeez- Ryshana Intro 10/04/09BBY
With Jacks help Ryshana manages to find Jeez but her happiness is short lived.

20) Vjun- Beryl Intro 16/07/09BBY
Nic is captured by his brother by Vaders orders and taken to his palace on Vjun, the rest of the crew risk everything to go and save him.

21) The Truth Always Hurts- Jana Intro 18/07/09BBY
After finding out the truth about Nic, Jana turns to Reibe and quickly discovers the truth about herself and Reibe. The consequences of these actions lead to Beryl reconnecting to the force.

22) Rebels In Need- Ryshana Intro 23/09/09BBY
With Zeek, an acquaintance of Nic and Jana, now in the Rebel alliance he asks Nic to help in out. In the meanwhile Beryl is trying to control her feelings trying to stop herself turning back to the Darkside.

23) Rebels still In Need- Nic Intro 24/09/09BBY
After the night celebrations Nic and Beryl wake up together. But before they could discuss their feelings for each other the ship is attacked by imperial’s then saved by the Rebels. The rebels then ask for the crews help and Beryl decides to join them and leaves the crew

23) Retribution- Beryl Intro 35/10/01BBY
8 years after beryl left the crew Nic gets contacted by one of her brothers within the alliance. She has gone missing and needs an independent party to find her, Nic agrees and ends up helping her to get vital plans transmitted to the Tantive IV.

07-29-2006, 10:13 PM
i really like the idea, so go for it. just as a hint, i'm going to be really getting into Ryshana, as she'll be a new character in my next 'Betrayal and Retribution' fanfic, so you'll be able to get a lot of backstory on her when i write it up (i've delayed posting it as i want a more complete work to be posted just about all at one time rather than bits and pieces at a time).

one thing to note is the idea you had with Jeez. interestingly enough, i already had something planned there with my RP, whenever its my turn, anyway. if you want a bit of collaboration there, give me a pm. ;)

07-30-2006, 04:56 AM
None of the stories are set in stone (Except the first one, as i've already started it.) but they were just basic ideas i had which worked with the story arc. I just felt i needed at least one story which dug into Rys past and also connected it to the whole Jana being a 'key' to the force plot that runs all the way through the 'series'. I think you can tell from the synopsis that i'm adding a love story between Nic and Beryl that never goes anywhere untill the end.

07-30-2006, 09:36 AM
My, my, my you've been busy, StarMark! Felt like I was reading an episode guide for a new TV-series. :) Feel free to use Beryl however you'd like to in your stories. I'm looking forward to reading them! :)

P.S. And I like the idea of Beryl going to the Dark Side. Given that she's untrained, and is a bit mischievious anyway, that's probably exactly what she would do if she were to be fully aware of her potential.

07-31-2006, 07:04 PM
I'd make a few changes to that Jana bio...

Oh, and so everybody knows, I'll be offline mostly 'till this weekend, I think. We're in the process of moving and our Internet connection hasn't made it to the new house yet. See all y'all laters.


08-01-2006, 02:20 PM
I'd make a few changes to that Jana bio...

Ok in what way would you like it changed, providing It's not the whole 'Key' thing it should be fine. The 'key' part is fairly pivitol to the whole plot and plays a part in the big climax at the end of the thing.

As three of you have said yeah i'll pretty much consider that as the Go ahead unless someone pops up and says No. With that i'll attempt to do a Story a month providing i Stuff in the real world doesn't get in the way.

I'm halfway through the first one so i won't post that until' i've finished it, If you guys want to check it out before i post it PM me your e-mail and i'll send it in a format you request.(this will also allow you to have some input and let me edit it before it goes to the masses... or the three people who decide to read it)

08-01-2006, 07:29 PM
No, no, nothing like that. Just one thing, really: In the TCTA, Jana knew Riebe as Tarla Vel. It wasn't until much later that her real name, Riebe Sothe came out.

Oh, and I'm still workin' on the final chapter of the N&J story. Expect the final edited version sometime early next week, I think. And Starmark, if you're wanting an editor for any of these, I'm still open. But this'll be the last time I'm online 'till this weekend, when our 'net connection finally makes it over to the new house.

See ya all laters,


08-02-2006, 01:01 PM
If you'd like to Edit them i'm more than happy to let you get at 'em as your Edits do greatly improve on the story. I'll also make sure the Bio is edited for the stories.

08-03-2006, 06:24 AM
If you'd like to Edit them i'm more than happy to let you get at 'em as your Edits do greatly improve on the story. I'll also make sure the Bio is edited for the stories.

It would be a pleasure, Starmark. As you write, send 'em over. It'll give me something to do when I feel like doing nothing else... pretty much all the time :p

08-09-2006, 12:19 PM
So, are we waiting for Stingerhs again?

Diego Varen
08-18-2006, 02:09 PM
Is this Mercenary Crew Thread going to be discussion for Mercenary Crew III?

08-18-2006, 03:01 PM
MC3 has its own discussion thread already. You know, the one we posted our character profiles on? ;)


Diego Varen
08-18-2006, 03:27 PM
MC3 has its own discussion thread already. You know, the one we posted our character profiles on? ;)


Oh yeah, sorry. Thanks Jasra.

08-19-2006, 05:04 PM
Ok, in regards to my last post. I'm not sure who is approaching us. Could be Ryshana. Could be Stormtroopers. Could be Jack. Could be Beryl's brother Rayne or someone who works for him (as it is Rayne's hanger). Or a combination of any of the above. It's sort of dark and shadowy in the hanger, so Nic, Jana, and Beryl shouldn't be able to tell who they are until they are right in front of them.

At any rate, I'd like either Nic, Jana, or Beryl to jump him. (Or at least attempt to, if it's a 'friendly' approaching us.) We haven't had a fight scene in a while and I think it's time we have one. :)

08-24-2006, 10:12 AM
Hey guys. Sry I've been away for so long(more then 2 months). I was visiting my father and he didn't have a good internet connection so I couldn't get on. I also left because I ran out of ideas. I figured a vacation would bring me some new ones. Sry fo not telling you I went on vacation.


08-24-2006, 12:31 PM
Welcome back, EJ!

08-24-2006, 03:09 PM
Yay! Welcome back, EJ! :) Hope you had a great summer (even without a good internet connection. ;) ) The thread's been pretty slow over the past two months, so hopefully it won't take you too long to catch up on all of the old posts.

But, if you're short on reading time, here's where we are at the moment: Jack, Cloud, and Oliver have been on the Echo while Nic, Jana, Ryshana, and Beryl captured the data from Moff John Butcher about the Rhea's whereabouts, and then returned to the ship (after having to go and 'fetch' Jana after she got ditched off her swoop bike.) And now they're all back together again, they've got the data for the location of the Rhea. Vader's looking for them, and so the Echo is making her getaway from Corellia hidden in the belly of a behemoth freighter (owned by Beryl's brother.)

So, EJ, you're just in time to pick up where you left off! :)

08-25-2006, 10:01 AM
StarMark, I have a question. Is Sephiroth still the name of Cloud's enemy in the RPs?

08-25-2006, 11:54 AM
Why would I change it? Sephiroth is not envolved in this rpg anyway what-so-ever.