View Full Version : Knights of the Really Old Republic (KOTROR)

Star Ghost
02-08-2006, 03:32 AM
???? years before the events of KOTOR 1, the galactic republic was formed. However, many sought to destroy this tenuous alliance between the different races. One of these people was the Sith Lord (a real Sith, the speices that had been extinct aeons before KOTOR, metioned in either 1 or 2, can't remember) Ralavak. None of the republic knew of this man, but he had discovered a small planet past the outer rim, with a species similar to humans, who were all strong in the force. Ralavak bent these poor people to his will, took a powerful one as his apprentice, and formed a massive army of Force users.

Ravalak was swift to attack the republic, and they were all but ready to defend his attack. In panic, they swiftly put together a small fleet under the command of Jedi Master Kael. Each ship in the fleet was commanded by a Jedi Knight.

Ravalak sent a small detatchment of his fleet to destroy the republic capital ship, the Eagle IV. He underestimated the Jedi, however, and his detatchment was destroyed, so he and his whole fleet started moving out to try again...


Don't do anything stupid
No godmoding
No killing players without permisson
Max 2 character per person
No lightsabers, they're still being invented, so maybe you can have them later, but for now, only swords.
No one can be Ravalak or Kael permanatly (e.g. if you want to make him say something you can)

Character Sheet:
Side (Sith, Republic, Bounty hunter, un-employed mercenary):
Ship (optional):
class of ship-
History (optional):

Name: John
Side (Sith, Republic, Bounty hunter, un-employed mercenary):Republic
Rank:Captain Jedi Knight
Apperence: Short dark brown hair, blue eyes, 5'4", Special non force retrictive armor standard to all fleet captains, Is white and is worn over his red robes on his chest.
Equipment: Basic utilities, special datapad w/ hacking capabilities
Weapon(s): Enchani Double-bladed sword
Ship (optional): The Star Ghost (yes that was origonally a name I made up for a ship i drew)
class of ship- Cruiser
History (optional): John Quickly excelled to the rank of Jedi Knight. He was strong in the force, and had a lightning quick mind, which is why he was made a Captain. He was with Kael during the attack, and was commended for his service during the attack.

John Walked slowly up to the veiwing deck on the bridge. He looked out at the vast nothingness of the outer rim. He and half of the republic fleet had been out here for weeks, searching for Revalak's mystery planet, but there was nothing but asteroids and space wyrms out here.
His string of thought was interupted by his helmsman

"Orders sir?"
"Continue on our current vector."
"But that will take us further out, no one has ever been further than this."
"Yes, but the scanners are picking up ion trails."
"But it could be a space wyrm!"
"So? I've always wanted to see one up close anyway."
"Yes, sir."
"Prepare a marine squad."
"Sir yes sir!"

02-08-2006, 07:47 AM
Name: Clooud Strife
Side:un-employed mercenary but goes Republic later on in the story
Rank: will be Commander later on in the story
Apperence: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/5/50/Cloud_Strife_art.jpg
Equipment: medpacks, a toolkit, and a toolbelt
Weapon(s): Sword(seen in pic), dual pistols, and a belt of thermal detonators
Ship: The Echo
class of ship- mercenary ship
History (optional): As a small boy, Cloud Strife read many stories about the Jedi. He loved exploration and space. He was so smart, he took apart a hyperdrive and put it back together when he was in 10th grade in under 5 minutes. After collage, he opened a starport/mechanic shop on Aldeeran(sp?). He spent hours in that shop, doing what he loved: fixing and repairing things.

Once when he was doing a mission, he falls for a young flower girl named Aerith Gainsborough. After some adventures, she was killed by a Sith named Darth Sephiroth. Cloud vows to kill him if its the last thing he does.

Name: Zaalbacca
Side: Republic
Rank: 5-Star General Jedi Master
Apperence: Big, blue-eyed, blonde fur, and arms strong enough to rip off your arms.
Equipment: Comlink
Weapon(s): Echani Blade, Bacca's ceramonial blade
Ship: The Undertaker
class of ship- Cruiser
History (optional): Database corrupted.......................................

02-08-2006, 12:10 PM
Name: Jacen Cradus, goes by the name J.C.
Side: a pilot for the Republic, one of the best
Appearance: Brown haired, green eyed (an oddity) often mistaken for a smuggler because of the clothes he wears: the Han Solo look
Equipment: Carries a blaster (upgradeable), prefers a melee or fistfight
Ship: Rogue One, a starfighter, tough little ship, has taken more hits than one could count
History: Raised as an orphan, he led a rather tough time being bullied but discovered the secret of inner strength at a young age. He ran away from home at the age fifteen and joined the fleet of the newly formed Republic. His piloting skills rivaled that of the best smugglers. He is often seen in the presence of a furry like creature. He...error...data corrupted...

Name: Tergis Erron
Side: Republic, a new Jedi
Rank: Jedi Knight
Appearance: dark haired, brown eyed and wears a tunic; has a distictive tatto on his right hand
Equipment: tool kit and comlink
Weapon:the singing blade of his people
Ship: The LoreSeeker; stock freighter class
History: Origin unknown, possibily from beyond the known space of the Republic. Appeared as a student of the Jedi. Able bodied his build allows him to move with a grace that seems almost dance like...incomplete entry.

Star Ghost
02-12-2006, 08:41 AM
As John walked across the bridge of his ship, he thought he saw something in the window in the corner of his eye, but when he looked back, he saw nothing. In that instance there was a slight tremor in the force-
"BRACE!!!!" he shouted,
but it was to late, the Sith Heavy Cruiser came out of Force Cloak and began firing upon the smaller ship.
The whole ship began to shake,
"Activate sheilds NOW!" John screamed
He heard the energy sheilds burst on.
"Fire at that cruiser with everthing we have! Sargent, get those marines into the boarding craft. You- send a distress call to the rest of the fleet."
"Sir, we have multiple Sith cruisers coming out of hyperspace- INCOMING TORPEDOS!"
The ship's hull was ripped appart, John felt many around him dying, his concience was slipping...
And then there was a huge flash of light.

02-12-2006, 12:45 PM
Character Sheet:
Name: Darth Redis
Side (Sith, Republic, Bounty hunter, un-employed mercenary): Sith
Rank: Sith Lord (Apprentice of Ravalak)
Apperence:No one can tell because he always is wearing a powerful, heavy, spiked, armor with helmet.
Equipment:Explained above
Weapon(s): Blade of Dark Blood (Crafted himself)
Ship (optional): The Ashla Slayer
class of ship- Private/Attack ship (very fast and powerful)
History (optional): Found by Ravalak to destroy the republic. Pretty much it. :)

02-12-2006, 11:07 PM
After the flash of light a voice came through but faint and through the Force, John do not lose hope. I am arriving with a Jedi and Republic fleet. Out of hyperspace the stock freighter The LoreSeeker came out leading three companies of fighters, mostly Republic pilots but some Jedi. Behind were some capitol ships.

The fighter Rogue One immediate took the lead with his squad. Jacen Cradus, aka JC, smiled as he led his forces between the Sith ships. He gave the order, "Rogue group follow me through the two main ships, Red group and Green group head to the south sector to protect the dammaged ship."

02-13-2006, 05:34 PM
Meanwhile, Redis was flying The Ashla Slayer over the planet Mustafar on the Outer Rim. "Have you found the core?" A voice asked. It was Revelak's, over the radio. "Yes" Redis replied. "And the Jedi Knight, John?" Revelak asked. Redis walked over to his pilot. "Did you get a contact of John?" Redis asked. His pilot turned around. "I already have a Heavy Cruiser ansd a Sith fleet after him.."
Redis walked to the radio and smiled. "We've got him taken care of." There was a laugh over the radio. "Good. " Revelak said. "So bring the core over to me right way."
"Yes sir." Redis replied and turned off the radio.

02-13-2006, 05:42 PM
Redis was on his way over to the planet Revelak was hiding on when he saw an explosion. There were sith and jedi ships, with torpedos flying back and forth. And there Redis saw it. The Star Ghost. The pilot turned to Redis. "Should we attack?" He asked. "You bet." Redis replied, and the Ashla Slayer shot a missle at the Rouge One and flew away quickly. "Darn!" Redis shouted. "It didn't destroy it! Urghh!! Never mind! Attack the Star Ghost instead!"

02-13-2006, 06:38 PM
JC was bobbing in and out through the Sith ships giving a whoop every now and then. HE had just cleared a path for red a green squad when he sensed something wasn't right. He wheeled around to find a warship closing in to clear the breach. He began to fire at the deflector shield power source timing it with deadly precision. He tried to raise the comm, "Master Jedi are you all right?"

Star Ghost
02-17-2006, 10:40 AM
As John came back to his senses, he thought he heard something, then he relised it was just his commlink. The Star Ghost was flying through open space, taking fire all the time. John sensed some very powerful sith on the battlefeild.

"Yes, I'm ok, thanks for that rouge 1! We would be toast if you hadn't come just on time!"

He sensed the people around him suffocating from loss of oxygen, and he relised he was getting a little dizzy, so he put on his compressed oxygen tank.

"Rouge 1, the Star Ghost is finished," he said with utter sadness in his voice, "I need evac fast, there's a huge hole in the hull, and we're losing oxygen. half my crew is already dead."

02-17-2006, 11:40 AM
"This is Rogue One copy that. Search and rescue is on its way. The squads are keeping the enemy at bay. We can give at most thirty minutes. Send what you can to the escape pods. Over and out," came the reply.

02-17-2006, 08:23 PM
Character Sheet:
Name: Darth Terran
Side (Sith, Republic, Bounty hunter, un-employed mercenary): Sith
Rank: Sith Maurader
Apperence: hidden by mask and black robe
Equipment: a special crystal that can be used to torture people towards the darkside.
Weapon(s):The Terran blades
Ship (optional): The Echo
class of ship- capital ship
History (optional): Unknown other than that when he was 15 he was angered by his village and slaughtered them all. soon afterword he made a fleet of sith ships...

Darth Terran was on the bridge of the Echo. He was nearing the area where the sith heavy cruiser was. Terran was going to board the sith heavy cruiser and kill the sith lord on it named "Darth Ralavak" even though he was a sith, Terran thought he could take him down and be throned lord of all sith

02-21-2006, 08:32 PM
When Redis finally got to the planet that Ralavak was on, he bowed and said "Master, I sense a distrubance in the force. There is one of our own after you..." Redis closed his eyes. "His name is... Darth Terran. What should I do with him?" RAvalak held out a hand. "Give me the core and will discuss the minor things later." REdis pulled out a small orb from his cloak. It was Black with a glowing shade of red. "NOW MY SITH ARMY WILL BE UNSTOPPABLE!" Ravalak laughed manicacally and walked triumphantly over to a huge generator in the back of the room they were in. "Activate 'Drop of Blood'." Ralavak said. Redis watched as Ravalak put the core inside the generator and it started to hum. Suddenly a dark red beam shot out of it and hit Ravalak in the chest. "yes..." He muttered. "YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!" Ravalak flew up in the air with black lightning striking all around him. "This power! All the way from Mustafar!" He turned towards Redis, still in midair. "Take this energy and use it to give our whole army this emense power!!" Ravalak shot the same dark red beam (known as the beam of blood) and shot Redis in the chest. "Yes sir!" Redis walked away. "Hold on!" Ravalak shouted. "Before you use that power to strengthen the army, take care of Terran first, by any means possbile!" REdis continued walking and said "Yes sir!"

02-22-2006, 11:38 AM
JC weaved in and out till he reached John Skywalker's ship. The search and rescue were lready attaching umbilicals but something was not right. Making a daring move, he guided the ship into the hangar bay and touched down.

02-22-2006, 11:39 AM
Terran then sensed something powerful through the force almost invincible... no that was impossible could ralavak actually become undefeatable. He knew he would have to quickly order his fleet to move to a diffrent area... maybe the jedi fleet would be fun to wipe out.

02-23-2006, 09:03 PM
Redis piloted his ship all the way to Coroscaunt. "Soldiers.." He said to an army of trained sith soldiers in front of him. "We will soon have unlimited power and control the universe.." He raised a hand and the Blood BEam struck all the soldiers and they all got powers, but not as powerful as Redis or Ravalak. They all hovered in the air and each pulled out red and black glowing swords, the same exact color as the blood beam. "Patrol the planet." Redis said. "If you find a Sith named Terran, or any Jedi force masters in hiding, bring them to me, dead or alive." A soldier looked at Redis awkwardly. "I thought we destroyed them already." Redis walked up closer to the soldier. "Trust me. There is one alive. But he dosen't know it yet, he must be destroyed before he learns are weaknesses." Redis whispered something in his soldier's ears. "Yes Master!" He said. Redis walked back to where he was originally standing. "Now Go! I sense that both people we are looking for are going to be arriving at Coroscaunt shortly."

02-24-2006, 01:42 PM
JC got out of the ship and his astro droid jumped out as well. He told him to stay in the hangar as he searched the ship.

02-24-2006, 02:27 PM
(it never said the jedi and republic fleet were destroyed did it??)

Terrans fleet was aproaching the jedi-republic fleet, all ships were cloaked so it would be aurprise attack. There was also another sith fleet in the area where the power he sensed was. luckily it was moving away to coruscant

02-24-2006, 03:27 PM
Name: Ingle Rec
Side: Bounty Hunter
Rank: Bounty Hunter
Appearance: Doesn't wear armor, lightish complexion, ruby-colored eyes. High quality clothing of the best fashion.
Equipment: Grappling hook wrist-launcher, personal stealth-field generator.
Weapons: Tranq Dart Sniper Rifle, Cortosis Knife.
Ship: The Knife of Patagon
Class of Ship- Modded small cargo ship (Hidden weapon implants, smugglers hideaways turned to prisoner holding)
History: Trained on Patagon in hand-to-hand and melee fighting, as well as staying hidden, he got a ride off of Patagon, and realized his skills allowed him to excel in the bounty hunter's association.

Rec hung, suspened upside-down by his wrist, eye to the scope of his rifle, following a man 700 feet away on one of the bridges of Coroscant. The man walked into a closed room, with a glass window. He was quite alone. Rec fired his rifle, a small tinkle sounded as the dart made a tiny hole in the window. The man fell to the ground, unconcious.
Rec made his way to the room, where he picked up the still-unconcious man, and slung him over his shoulder. As he made his way to Kabba the Hutt's palace underneath the towers of Coroscant, he looked to the stars, barely visible above the skyscraping constructs of steel and glass. Something big was coming, he was sure of it.

02-26-2006, 05:59 PM
Redis sat silently in his hotel room in Coroscaunt. HE heard a noise come from his radio. "What is it?" He asked. "We've searched for days!" A soldier said. "No sign of anyone! And you aren't letting us even take a sip of water until we find one. How do you even know they are on this planet?"
"ARE YOU QUESTIONING MY COMMANDS?" Redis shouted and stood up. "If you don't want to search here you will nead to find someone who knows his whereabouts!" Redis threw down the radio and stomped out of his room. He walked down the hallway and out of the hotel to take a walk to relieve his stress. It was getting late, and Redis thought for a second about his past. He didn't remember much about it. He just remembered this one bit.....

"Why did you do it, Redis?" A voice asked the young child. "He deserved to die." Redis answered and pulled out a blaster and fired it. Ravalak walked up to him. "You have done a fine job, my apprentice."

Just realizing he was daydreaming, Redis bumped into a well dressed man carrying a dead body over his shoulders, just watching the sky. "Watch where you're going, fool!" Redis shouted but then took a closer look at his face. It was Ingle Rec. A Bounty Hunter known all over the galaxy for his keen eye and abilities to hide. "I'm sorry.." Redis said with a smile. "By the way, if you aren't busy, I have an offer for you. It pays big." Redis turned to REc, waiting for a reply.

02-26-2006, 07:16 PM
Rec looked back at the man who bumped into him. A job? Why not, he was getting bored of doing Kabba's dirty work, and besides, this guy had an air about him. "Okay, what's the job?" he said harshly, thumbing the hilt of his cortosis knife.

02-26-2006, 08:53 PM
JC began to wander about the ship looking for the Jedi master that was trapped. He had a cold feeling down his spine as he kept looking.

02-26-2006, 09:04 PM
"I bet you know some information." Redis started. "As a good bounty hunter should. Do you know the whereabouts of Darth Terran. Well, he is threatening to destroy the galaxy and I need you to stalk him down and bring his head back to me. So, how's the deal?"

02-26-2006, 09:39 PM
"Threatening to destroy the galaxy, huh? Well, I'll get to it as soon as I can" Ingle Rec brushed past the man, wondering to himself. Did he really think that he cared whether the man was threatening to destroy the galaxy or just looked at him the wrong way? Money was money, and it didn't matter who you killed to get it.
Rec walked into Kabba's palaces, slung down the man, and collected his 5,000 credit chip. Whatever he had done, he was going to regret it upon waking up. He went back to the Bounty Hunter's association, hidden in the slum districts of coroscant, and went into his apartment. The first thing to do to find this 'Terran' was to start asking questions, but who to ask? He put down his rifle, keeping his knife, and went back into the streets.
He stopped into the 'Drunken Hutt' and elbowed up to the bar. "Gimme a ruby bliels, and keep em' coming" he said to the bartender. He surveyed the cantina with a cursory glance, and then sat down to thinking, but always with eyes shifting around, evaluating everything. He had killed a lot of people, and a lot of people wanted him dead.

02-27-2006, 07:14 AM
"Master Ravalak, I have some news." Redis said over the radio. "What is it child?" Ravalak growled. "There is now a bounty on this Terran's head and I have a plan. I can't tell you now for there may be spies where I am, but I have it under control. Good Bye." Redis hung up and then walked over to the commander of the sith fleet on Coroscuant. "Call them up, now!" So then the commander pressed two numbers on his radio.00. At that moment every Sith in the galaxy was contacted. Even the ones in Darth Terran's fleet. "All siths listen and listen carefully. We have a traitor in our midsts. He goes by the name of Darth Terran. If you are listening, Terran, you are commanded to meet at Coroscaunt. If not, I have the best bounty hunter in the galaxy after you. And all you in his fleet, I know you are recieving this message, so if you do not bring Terran in to Coroscaunt, dead or alive, you will also be hunted down. So here is your question. Who are you more loyal to. Your commander, or your life and your organization you joined?" Redis waited for a reply from Terran or his fleet.

03-02-2006, 08:06 PM
suddenly terran got hailed it was the ravalak person saying he was wanted and was up for bounty and what not and his fleet was to turn on him...
Terran then hailed ravalak and asked him if he thought his fleet would acctually turn on him but suddenly he heard loud explosions outside of his ship and looked out a window to see ships attacking eachother and he sensed that his ship would be tooken over unless he jumped several times with hyperspace and so he did......

03-02-2006, 08:09 PM
... terran was jumping to corsuscant a very hard place to be found so he would probably be safe unless the sith fleet attacked him

03-02-2006, 08:17 PM
(i need to redo that one)
terran jumped to coruscant as ravalak said so he could meet this great sith lord

03-02-2006, 08:23 PM
"We are chasing after him now." The voice over the radio finally said. "Good." Redis said and left the room. His work on Coroscaunt was done.
As Redis was about to enter his ship he felt a disturbance. "I believe the coward is near." He said and walked over to where the Sith Commander was. "Terran is on this planet. Get to him by any means necessary, and I'll put the shield over Coroscaunt just like we had to do to a planet called Teris, long before either of us were born. The people of Coroscaunt will be sorry until they find Terran."
Redis pulled out his radio and signaled for Ingle Rec. "He's on the planet. Take him out."

03-02-2006, 09:37 PM
Rec's Radio buzzed, "He's on the planet, take him out." Well, that eliminates a lot of territorry, time to start walking. He turned to the bartender, "You ever hear of a man called Terran?" He asked. The barkeep shook his head, and Rec thought to himself, "Well, it wasn't going to be that easy" He pushed back his chair, and started to walk around the bar. He got various answers as he roved the bar, none that would help him though. Then he came upon a battle scarred rodian. "You ever heard of a man called Terran?" He asked wearily.
"Who wants to know?" The rodian replied. Rec flashed his 5,000 credit chip in front of the rodian. The rodian made a grab for it, and Rec's left hand shot out, catching the rodian by the wrist.
"Information first. If I like it, I pay. You want to argue?" He released the rodian's wrist, then flourished the cortosis knife and pressed it to the rodian's throat.
"Okay, the only thing I know is that Terran took up residence in a slum district, you'll have to go there to find out more."
"Thanks buddy" Rec said and then gave the rodian 1,000 credits for the Info. Believe it or not, the slum sector gave a lot away, first and foremost that this guy wanted to stay hidden. Rec went back to his apartments, got his rifle, and engaged his stealth field.
Running through the streets, the only sign of him was the slight shimmer as light reflected around him. He reached his sniper point. A high vaulted ceiling, he fired his wrist cannon in to the place where the arches met. He hung there, upside-down, and through the scope of his rifle he saw the entire slum sector. Whatever this guy said, almost everyone prefered a live prisoner to a dead one, and if not, the situation could be easily remedied with some quick hadns and a cortosis knife. With a Patagonian Knockout Dart loaded in his rifle, he scanned the sector. There was enough sleeping poison in one of these to take out a fully grown rancor in under a minute, and put him to sleep for a couple of hours. And then he saw his mark. No one saw him as he took steady aim, right into his neck, and he let loose the dart.

03-03-2006, 12:10 PM
JC was scouting throught the wreckage when he found the Jedi Master near the bridge. Knowing that there wasn't much time, he quickly walked up to him.
((I'm kind of lost because starghost hasn't posted in a while))

03-03-2006, 07:04 PM
Terran was sitting in his room when he sensed something moving a dart directly at him he dodged left and used the force to push it back at the bounty hunter he saw nearby

03-03-2006, 08:57 PM
The dart streaked by Rec embedding itself into the wall 10 feet back. He probably should try something a little different next time. He fired off one last dart, aimed at his target's head again, then dropped from the ceiling and set off at a run, making sure his stealth field was still active. Luckily, it was.

03-03-2006, 10:46 PM
Redis got in his ship. "I sense our friend Terran has been found, but not yet dead. I think I should start my search for another person.. The last Force Master..." His pilot walked in and they started the ship up for the area where the Sith fleet attacked earlier. "He should be right there." Redis said and the ship took off.

Star Ghost
03-04-2006, 04:36 AM
OT: Sorry ppl i went on a vacation to this beach hotel place and they had no I-cafe there :firemad:

John walked up to JC with a slight limp in his leg.

"Exellent work JC, I managed to get some of my crew to the escape pods, but many were lost I feel. There is a great disturbnce in the force, it would seem to me that there is a rouge Sith in Ravalak's ranks, and a powerful one at that. I'm sorry but I am forced to assume command of you for the time being, I really need to find the remainder of my crew, they crash landed on the planet we are in orbit of now, it's a habitable world, but there are no humanoids there."

John's commlink crackled:
"Master Jedi....Commander Solak here...need backup...Sith occupy the planet"
After that the signal was lost...
"JC I need you to get me down there now and get a large detatchment of the fleet, I think this is the planet that Ravalak has enslaved."

03-04-2006, 10:00 PM
Terran knew his hiding spot was obvious so he left the area awating for Ravalack to tell him where they would meet.

03-06-2006, 07:10 AM
"Terran." Redis said into his comlink. "You must meet me in the abandoned apartment I am now sending the coordinates to your pilot. Once you meet me there, I'll give you a last chance for survival." Redis walked around and waited in his apartment, for he now knew that Terran wouldn't cower. A sith soldier broke in. "I have a message and a gift from Ravalak." The sith soldier held up a carved metal shaft. "What is this?" He asked.
"This," The sith soldier said. "Is a lightsaber. One of Ravalak's scientists learned how to put the same material from the blood orb in it's regular crystal form. sending light through it, to send out a saber of heated crimson light that can tear apart anything."
Redis stubled back and picked the hilt of the lightsaber up. "How do you use this?" And the sith soldier showed him...

03-12-2006, 08:22 AM
Terran arived in a short time and asked Redis why he was here.

03-12-2006, 12:42 PM
"So, you finally arrived?" Redis asked and to sith soldiers blocked the door so Terran coudn't escape. "You have attempted to betray the sith order and for that you must be destroyed. You attempted to take out master Ravalak and if you do not give me some decent info then I will demonstrate my new lightsaber on you!" Redis said and ignited it.

03-12-2006, 03:20 PM
what do u want to know

03-12-2006, 03:52 PM
"Do you know the wherabouts of the last Jedi Force Master?"

03-12-2006, 05:34 PM
maybe but what do i get out of this... a lightsaber perhaps

03-12-2006, 06:34 PM
"YOU'RE LIFE! You know you can't stand up to a lightsaber and this new power of the force."

03-13-2006, 04:36 PM
may i assist u in this

03-13-2006, 06:16 PM
"what do you mean 'may i assist you in this?' your death?

03-14-2006, 05:48 PM
no in kill ing the jedi u insulint fool

03-14-2006, 05:57 PM

03-15-2006, 09:46 PM
on a republic ship i will download the coordinates to your datapad

03-16-2006, 07:01 PM
"Thank you... " he said and left him in the room by himself. "You might like this prison cell! HA!" HE left the room and the two guards with lightsabers and the special sith powers guarded the doors.

03-17-2006, 08:36 PM
Terran sat for a few minutes he was right of course... he gave Redis the wrong coordinates that lead to an asteroid belt and planted a bomb on the door in case this would happen. he let the bomb go off and ran to the gaurds bodies. he picked up there lightsabers and after a couple tries he could weild the new weapon

03-18-2006, 02:09 PM
Redis soon realized the coordinates were fake. He had a plan also. He disapeered and the building blew up, leaving Terran behind.

03-19-2006, 04:14 PM
Terran rised from the ruins of the building sensing that none had survived except him. well it would be hard for Redis to stop him with these new weapons that he picked up. Terran returned to his ship to see hit destroyed as well with the bodies of his men everywhere...

Later Terran found the body of his apprentice who was still living and asked what was going on. His apprentice replied"the crew mutined for Ravalack and there was a vicous battle many were lost and a clumsy soldeir hit the engine cooler and the ship blew...." then his apprentice died

03-19-2006, 05:09 PM
"Terran.... " Redis said, noticing his enemy. "FOR RAVALAK, AND FOR THE SITH!" Redis shouted and charged in at Terran. He took his red lightsaber and swung it at Terran, who was not as experienced at it as he was. Redis jumped back and sot a red beam out of his hand that struck Terran in the chest and painfully knocked him back. "Give it up, Terran." He said. "My powers, skills, and weopons are far better than those of your own."

03-20-2006, 06:40 PM
what do you mean give it up. You want me to join you or what.

Star Ghost
03-21-2006, 07:08 AM
O/T: what do you guys mean when you say 'the last force master'? There are many jedi in this time. And the whole republic fleet wasn't destroyed, only a part of it.

The Republic fleet entered the atmosphere. John was on a ship called the Force Runner II. Dropships could be seen with marines and jedi jumping off with their heli-chutes spinning behind them at high speeds.
"I'll jump now with the rest of the jedi and marines." John said to the captain.
"I'll meet down on the feild John, may the force be with you." the captain said.

John jumped off the ship with 30 marines and 10 jedi. The anti-aircraft guns on the planet began opening fire, targetting the dropping men and the capital ships that had just entered the atmosphere. A man near John was promptly ripped to pieces, the flecks of blood splattering on his white robes. The first drop of many to come.

He was low enough now to see the opening battle. The sith forces were not easy to see, as they were fighting mainly in the forest and wearing camoflouge armour. The silver glint of swords burnt lines in his eyes.

Finally, he landed. There was already a makeshift command post set up.
"Master Jedi, there is a large hanger abount 2 clicks due north-east. If we can capture it, our ships can land there and we can refuel our bombers." the general said.
"Ok, i'll lead the strike force- actually, I have a better idea. I'll lead a recon squad to scope out the hanger and area, then we'll take out their sensors and reprogram the autoturrets to fire on them. When I'm ready i'll call you in and you can bring the rest of our strike force to capture it.
"Sir yes sir!"
"I want your finest marksman, demolition specialist, and technichian immeadiatly."
"Of course sir"

03-21-2006, 05:58 PM
JC led the way back to his fighter. He had told the injured master that he would get them there. Once inside Rogue One, JC made a breakaway out of the damaged ship. No sooner than he had cleared it, than the ship exploded. He was immediately caught in a firefight by Sith. He caught a glimpse of the LoreSeeker and sent the message of a needed detatchment to the planet's surface. Desperately trying to weave in and out of getting hit, JC broke for the surface but was persued by three enemy ships. One hit with a lucky shot, sending the ship to the surface with a crash. The last thing JC saw was darkness as the ship crashed.
Jedi Erron had received the transmission and directed several squadrons to the surface. He saw Rogue One go down and hoped that they survived.

03-23-2006, 04:23 PM
Terran turned and ran jumping from the ledge of the landing pad to fall into vastness

03-24-2006, 08:47 PM
( The last force master...


Many years ago, there was a group of the strongest Jedis in all the galaxy and they were called Force Masters, for they can master the force more than any other race in the galaxy. They learned new force powers, similar to teh ones that Ravalak found with the Beam of Blood, and they used those powers to stop the evil that the sith were posing against the galaxy. The group of 24 Force masters were one night having a meeting in a sacred shrine in Alderaan. The sith new about this ordeal and knew that they needed to stop it no matter what the cost. So the sith army, organized under a powerful sith general, charged through Alderaan in the heat of night, carrying swords, blasters, and torches. From far away, the force masters did not know of this planning but one of them sensed the dark side of the force. The force masters ignorantly decided to stay put for they did not know what dangers were learking outside, even though they could probably defeat them. So meanwhile the sith army was nearing the shrine and the general stepped up, shouted, and threw his torch in the building. That torch was followed by many others until the small crackle turned into a roaring blaze. The radiant fire spread quickly, and the force masters were trapped inside. The head of the force masters looked at the other 23, and opened the door that led outside. The second he opened the door a blazing cascade of crimson flames shot through the openening and he slowly burnt to ashes. The other 23 tried to duck in a corner but they too.. had a horrible fate. Legend says that one of the force masters survived that fight, was explelled from the order, got married and had a child. Then that child had a child and so on and so forth. But after each generation the parents would die and the new force master would be left without parents.. Until this time, one of the characters on the light side is a force master... And I will secretly tell you who...))

03-27-2006, 05:15 PM
( what about the jedi?????)

03-27-2006, 05:38 PM
what about the jedi?

03-28-2006, 04:17 PM
(what about the rest)

04-01-2006, 06:38 PM
ok well....
Terran was falling
until he was 100 ft from the ground he used the force to push the ground so that the repelling air would slow him. Terran did a dive roll and sat down to meditate. there were very few people in this area so he decided that in his meditation that the only way to defeat Ravalak was to quickly decieve the last force master into training him to be one of them. Then and only then would terran have the power to defeat this sith lord.

Star Ghost
04-05-2006, 12:12 PM
(Ty for explanation about the last force master)

John was beggining to think that the suface invasion was going well after getting half way to the small hanger, then the recon force came to a small crlearing overlooking a vast plain, where the Sith were encamped. There were thousands of tents pitched, and thousands of troops marching out of the camp. They were heading in a straight line towards the main republic command post. Even worse, there were war Rancors in their ranks.

John turned on his commlink to send a message to the general, but the signal was being jammed. Suddenly, he sensed that they were being watched, and that this whole "small weakly defended hanger" was a trap for the republic forces, but all to late.

04-05-2006, 05:42 PM
Terran laughed the sith forces actually had believed him that there was a secret item at the republic outpost that would make them all invincible. This would be a good day...