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cdunshee
02-14-2006, 09:19 AM
MIRA’S VISION

This is a story about characters from KOTORII. Reviews welcome, let me know what you think!

Mira’s green bladed lightsaber flashed, she pressed her attack against the Dark Jedi. With intricate movements she learned in her new life as a Jedi Knight, and some old ones she learned as a bounty hunter, she slashed the man across the stomach. He screamed, dropping his red-bladed lightsaber.

“Surrender now Sith, you need not die,” Mira informed him calmly. The man weakly nodded.

“Get up,” commanded Mira. He got up slowly. Mira pick up his lightsaber and attached it to her belt. As she was doing this, another Sith appeared, leaping at her. Mira cursed to herself and turned to face the new enemy. Out of nowhere a purple lightsaber intersected the red blade. Mira grinned. It was her good friend, the former Handmaiden, Brianna.

Mira marveled the way she skillfully used the lightsaber, no wasted motion, and her movements flowed. She methodically attacked the Sith, slowly but surely wearing him down. Finally the end came, the Sith losing an arm, but refusing to surrender. He tried to attack again with a hidden short lightsaber, but was cut down by Brianna.

“They never learn,” muttered Brianna.

“Glad you showed up. That could have been a problem,” responded Mira.

“You let your guard down my friend. That’s occurred our last two missions we were sent on by the Jedi Council. Something distracts you,” stated Brianna.

“Yeah…I know. You see…” Mira stopped as she recognized two more friends arrive, Atton and Bao-dur. Both were also Jedi’s. Atton deactivated his blue bladed lightsaber, while Bao-dur did likewise with his yellow one.

“Under control?” asked Atton. Mira nodded.

“We better get back to Coruscant. The Jedi Council will want to question this one,” stated Bao-dur.

A day later the foursome turned over the Sith prisoner to the Jedi and were debriefed. The youngest on the Jedi Council, Bastila Shan took a long look at Mira.

“I sense you are troubled.”

“I am okay Master Shan. I…still am orienting myself to being a Jedi. My thoughts still get confused at times.” Bastila smiled.

“You are a powerful Jedi Mira. You and Brianna are quite a team. The Exile has taught you well.”

“Is there any news on the Exile Master?” asked Brianna.

“Only a little. He is currently on Tatooine. He is looking for a female named Mission Vao, who may have news on Revan’s location. But enough of this. You’ve all had three missions in as many months. Go for a five week rest period.”

Mira, Brianna, Atton and Bao-dur bowed, and silently left the room.

Bao-dur and I are going for some much needed recreation time on Alderaan, you two want to come?” asked Atton. Brianna looked over at Mira, who shook her head.

“You two go ahead. We need some…female time together.”
The twosome spent the night at Mira’s apartment; relaxing from the recent missions they had been on. Finally Brianna decided it was time to break the ice.

“Okay Mira, out with it. You’ve been very distracted lately. It’s not like you. You’re always so intense when we’re on a mission.” Mira sighed, and looked over at her friend. She pulled off the top layer of her Jedi robe and tossed it aside.

“Okay here it is. Do you ever have visions, of the future?” Brianna considered before she replied.

“Only very short term in the future, maybe a few hours, and then just when we are on a mission together. It help’s us to stay a step ahead of the Sith.” Mira nodded. She had those types of visions also.

“Well, this one is different. It could be I’m seeing a hundred years in the future, maybe a thousand. It’s a very troubling vision.” Brianna took of her top robe and gently set it down.

“Tell me about it, why do you think it’s so far in the future?”

“It’s a purge, of Jedi. I see armored troops killing Jedi on many worlds. I didn’t recognize any of them. I see two Jedi fighting each other on a planet with lava.”

“Are you sure they are Jedi? Maybe they are Sith?” asked Brianna. Mira shook her head.

“On the lava planet, they both had blue lightsabers, and the others killed, are blue and green. Force lightning kills one, he had a purple Blade. Jedi don’t use lightning, only Sith Lords do.”

“Do they all die?” asked Brianna.

“I do not know. I only know many Jedi will die in this purge. I just wish I knew when it would occur.” Brianna sat back and looked thoughtful. She put a hand on Mira’s shoulder, which was trembling slightly.

“Is there any more to the vision?”

“Yes. I see the Jedi temple in flames, under attack. Some Jedi attempt to return to the temple and are killed in yet another trap.”

“Who could be bold enough to attack the Jedi temple? It would be foolish.” Stated Brianna.

“It appears to me many Jedi are of on missions. Few are left in the temple. If only I knew if this would occur in our lifetimes! We could help defend the Jedi order. I feel this purge will possibly destroy it.”

“It seems incredible that the Jedi order could ever be exterminated,” said Brianna, looking suddenly worried.

“I see no Jedi we know in the vision, it appears this will occur after our death,” said Mira.

“Are there any names…anything like that you might get from the vision?”

“At times I sense a vague reference to a name, but I cannot totally be sure what name it is,” said Mira.

“What does the name sound like?” Mira shrugged.

“Something like Annie or Anake, maybe Anakin.”

“The name may mean nothing at all,” said Brianna, looking more hopeful. Mira smiled.

“Your right, it probably means nothing.”

Alkonium
02-14-2006, 09:22 AM
Looking 4000 years into the future? Interesting, although it's of an event we all know.

Renegade Puma
02-14-2006, 09:33 AM
I like your writing style. And this is interesting so far. Keep up the good work :)

Diego Varen
02-14-2006, 10:09 AM
Welcome to the LucasForums, cdunshee.

This looks like it is going to be great. Linking KOTOR and the Star Wars Saga is the perfect match. Keep posting.

Vladimir-Vlada
02-14-2006, 12:35 PM
Not bad. Keep it coming.

Master_ Tyvokka
02-22-2006, 08:41 PM
Pretty Good. I like it.

ScieX
02-22-2006, 10:05 PM
interesting.... keep it coming. i like how you are connecting KOTOR and the Movies. keep it up.

cdunshee
02-23-2006, 08:19 PM
I will post the next chapter in this story very soon!
Clint

Jae Onasi
03-19-2006, 11:46 PM
Looking forward to more.

machievelli
12-04-2008, 02:39 PM
read

Bee Hoon
12-09-2008, 11:23 AM
The new thread is here (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=194292). In the future, please do not start a new thread for revisions--you may replace the chapter and post an update to let everyone know that you have edited it.