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03-09-2006, 02:10 AM
KotOR: Gunned Down
During the daring rebublic assault on the Star Forge one ship was crucial in the attempt to make a distraction for the Ebon Hawk. This ship was known as the 'Viridian Raven' due to its distinct green markings. On board were at least three Jedi, guiding the pilots through the battle. After the Star Forge had been destroyed the ship was heading to a nearby planet for fuel, but on route the ship was attacked by a lone mercenary ship carrying multiple Malak followers fleeing the Star Forge. As the ship was only meant to be a distraction, and not meant to fight, it was gunned down easily, crashing into a small unknown planet. Most of the crew died but the few survivors prepare to be sieged as the Sith decend to the planet. Although only the Jedi can feel an eerie presence on this planet, and what dark forces loom there.

Ok so basically we will have some Rebublic survivors and some Jedi, the Sith landing along with the Mercanaries and if anyone wants to the evil forces that occupy the planet that oppose both the Sith and the Rebublic.

Character sheet like this:
Faction: Rebublic, Sith/Merc. or 'Unknown Force'.
Bio (optional):

My character will be a young Jedi Knight who was aboard the ship.
Name: Viper Kordon
Faction: Rebublic
Class: Jedi Sentinal, Jedi Knight
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 23
Weapons: Single Green Lightsaber
Equipment: Black Jedi Robes

Diego Varen
03-09-2006, 02:25 AM
Okay I'll start.

Name: Krad Morean
Faction: Republic/Jedi
Class: Jedi Consular/Jedi Knight
Race: Zabrak
Sex: Male
Age: Twenty One
Weapons: Green Double Bladed Lightsaber
Equipment: Tattered Jedi Robes
Bio: After the Mandalorian Wars, Master Zhar found Krad on his Homeworld of Iridionia and believed him to be strong in the Force. Like Revan, he was a special case. He was a promising student under Master Zhar.

03-09-2006, 07:47 AM
Name: Vao Vash
Faction: Rebublic/Jedi
Class: Jedi Master/Jedi Guardian
Race: Kel Dor
Sex: Male
Age: 35
Weapons: 2 Lightsabers, (1 Green, 1 Orange
Equipment: Jedi Master Battle Armor w/Robes
Bio (optional): A Jedi Master in the Republic, he is not always true to the Order.

03-09-2006, 02:43 PM
Name: Qui Toral
Faction: Rebublic
Class: jedi Sentinel/jedi healer
Race: Kel Dor
appearance: check the sig and avatar
Weapons: green lightsaber
Equipment: Grey Jedi Robes,Healing supplies

03-09-2006, 05:23 PM
Name: Tidus
Faction: Rebublic
Class: Scout
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 17
Weapons: a longsword(seen in pic), thermal detonators(18), and a blaster
Equipment: Med packs(6), Toolkit, and emergancy equipment
Appearance: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/e3/Tidus_artwork.jpg

03-09-2006, 09:47 PM
Sounds cool, I'll join
Name:Marc Vern
Faction: Republic
Class:Jedi Duel master/knight
Weapons:Single blue lightsaber,whatever he can grab
Equipment:Those blue jedi robes from Kotor I
Bio:After joining the jedi Marc quickly became a master dueler.

03-10-2006, 01:17 AM
Ok that will about do it for Jedi. One more maybe, first come first serve.
Ok we might as well start. Let's say we crashed about 2 hours ago?
Viper awoke on the shore. Rising from his unfortunate position he noticed the damage. The ship had split in two on impact, the tail end landing around 300 yards out at sea, and bottom up. Anyone still alive in there would have to swim down to get out. Surveying his surroundings Viper noticed some fellow Rebublicans. It looked as though most of the Jedi had survived. Marc Vern, Qui Toral, Master Vao Vash and Krad Morean. All men. Most women had been strictly prohibited from the Viridian Raven, too many lives would be lost along with the chance for future generations of Rebublicans. There were of course the few who had managed to make it, but these were only the extremely skilled pilots and medical officers. The Raven was to be nothing but a distraction for Revan. It was not meant to be caught up in a fight.
Viper than spotted something he hadn't wanted to see. Sith troops were marching out of the clearing towards them, and more Sith ships were landing on the far side of the horizon. This would be a long day...

Viper stood up and drew his green lightsaber. He would need help.
Viper: Krad! Get over here. We've got company!!!
Viper sliced through the first few troops, force pushing back another lot.
Viper: Krad! Krad Morean! Get over here. Let's go!

Diego Varen
03-10-2006, 01:26 AM
Krad got his Green Double Bladed Lightsaber out and saw the troops ahead of Viper. Krad ran towards the Troops and blocked back all the blaster shots that hit his Lightsaber. Soon all the Troops fell to the ground.
"What do we do now?" He asked.

03-10-2006, 06:13 AM
Viper: I'm not sure. This place clouds my vision... we should consult Master Vash, he may know what to d...
Viper suddenly spotted something down the shore and through some trees to his south.
Viper: A temple? Consult Master Vash, I will check it out with some troops. I need four men ready to roll here! (ExtreamJedi12 this could be your chance to come in) We are heading down to that temple to check it out. The rest of the Jedi and troops will remain here to defend the crash site. Is that clear men?
Soldiers: Yes sir!

03-10-2006, 07:35 AM
Vao exited out of the ship and noticed Viper and Krad moving in another direction, towards a temple. He easily Force jumped there.

"Need some company? I sense the temple is full of the darkside, we must be careful."

And with that, Vao headed off towards the temple.

03-10-2006, 07:41 AM
Tidus woke up and stood up. "My head hurts." Tidus thought when he stood up. He heard Viper call for 4 men. Tidus rushed over and volunteered. He seen Vao exit the ship. "Hey," Tidus called out. "Wait for me." He rushed towards him to follow. "Hi," Tidus started. "Mostly kept to myself on the ship, so I don't know everyone. So, who are you?"

03-10-2006, 06:32 PM
Qui Toral stood up. The flight was a blur to him. He must have been knocked out. he heard Viper call for soldiers and Qui got up and ran to the group. "Maybe I should go with you. I am a healer after all. you might have need for me." He stood, impatient, and waited for an answer.

03-10-2006, 06:51 PM
As Marc came back to his senses he looked around. The last he remebered he was running to the cockpit when everything when black. Seeing several Jedi walking toward a structure in the distance Marc sprinted to catch up.

03-11-2006, 12:51 AM
(since there arn't many people my character will die and I will become someone inside the temple)
Viper: Master Vao, I believe we should head inside. I too feel the power of the dark side in here. But if many more of those Sith troops reach us we will suffer a much worse fate. We sh... *SPOTS FOUR SITH JEDI DOWN THE BEACH* go... get inside now, all of you. I will buy our unprepared men some time to make it to the temple. Now just go.

Viper walked slowly towards the four Sith, drawing her lightsaber as he walked. He knew he wasn't going to survive. He turned back to the group one last time.

Viper: Once all the able bodied men are inside seal the doors.

Sith 1: So, the Jedi have found the ancient tomb...
Sith 2: ...just as our lord had perceived...
Sith 3: ...they do not know their fate...
Sith 4: ...this will be the end of the Jedi once and for all...

The battle began with Viper launching himself down between two of the sith cutting off one of their arms. Another swung at him leaving a gash across his chest. Viper was wounded but not finished yet. He stabbed one through the skull killing him just as the one with the missing arm cut Viper's body in half, leaving his torso on the ground, still alive but only being kept alive by the force.

Viper: Not yet... not like this.

Then he spotted something. A belt of thermal detonators strapped around a dead rebublic soldier. He used the force to pull it towards him. He pressed the detonator on each of the spheres. Then he force threw his lightsaber into the fuel tank of the crashed ship and hurled the thermal detonators over.

Viper: You will burn in the fires of Malachor today Sith hounds! Never under estimate the power of the Jedi.

Then suddenly the fuel tank and entire remains of the ship exploded killing Viper the four sith and all Rebublic Soldiers left on the beach. (ones at or moving to temple excluded)

Name: 'Scar'
Faction: Unknown Force
Class: Scoundrel (secretly a force user)
Race: Unknown (appears human but is a native of this mysterious planet)
Sex: Male
Age: Appears young, around 18
Weapons: Vibroblade
Equipment: Ancient Robes
Appearance: face looks like this http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/7/77/Squall_Leonhart_shot.jpg

03-11-2006, 12:57 AM
Scar: *hears the temple doors starting to open and awakens*... gah? Someone is entering the chamber... from the outside...??? What! No! Stop! You must not enter! *draws vibroblade but collapses just inside the door*

Everything inside the temple appears old and worn and cobwebs are in the corners and ceiling. The walls are smeared with dry blood and there are skeletons all over the ground. The blood appears to be theirs but they must have been dead for a long time. Scar's clothes and hands are covered with this same dry blood.

03-11-2006, 09:24 AM
Tidus makes it barely inside the temple before it closes. He looks around it. "I wouldn't live here. Even if it was clean." he chuckled. Then, he seen 'Scar'. Feeling unsure, Tidus draws his longsword. "Who are you?" he called out.

Diego Varen
03-11-2006, 11:29 AM
Krad walked inside the Temple. Viper was right. The Dark Side was present here. He would have to be extremley careful. He walked along, looking at the walls of the Temple. They had ancient coffins laid out on the walls. Krad entered a room of the Temple. Suddenly the coffins moved. Out of them, came demons. They were Sith. Once.
"Who are you?" Krad asked, scared for his life.

03-11-2006, 04:08 PM
(BTW everything in the temple looks extremely old, and you had to blast your way through the door which was sealed shut using a welding torch from the outside. Even Scar's clothes look old and tattered, thats why you all find it hard to believe hes in here when you come in here k?)

Scar decided to answer Tidus' question, after all he was in no shape to fight,
"You must leave now... you do not now the power in this place. My brother will kill you all!" Scar feels the cold of Tidus' sword hanging at his neck, "If you must know my name is Scar." Scar suddenly turns when he hears Krad confronting a dark demon.
Scar begins to charge towards it, his vibroblade glowing with an eerie light, as if an angel was dying within it, white but with a sense of darkness. As he decapated the demon another two coffins opened.
"Seal the door now! They must not leave the temple. If they go anywhere they must go to my brother. You people must understand you have started a chain of events that cannot be broken. None of you will leave this temple. This is not a threat but a warning of what is to come. Now seal the doors!"

Diego Varen
03-11-2006, 04:15 PM
The demons said nothing. They closed in towards Krad. Krad got out his Lightsaber and attacked the demons. It fell to the ground. He killed some more. The last demon seemed to not give up. It sucked life out of Krad. Krad was sure he would die. But with the last of his power, he destroyed the demon. I feel strange, Krad thought, I must find Tidus, wherever he is.

03-11-2006, 04:30 PM
Tidus went to the door and shut it. Then, he heated up his sword by dragging it along on the ground. Finally, Tidus jumped and slashed the crack in the door, sealing it. "There. Now tell me Scar." started Tidus. "What the hell are you doing here?"

Diego Varen
03-11-2006, 04:43 PM
Krad left the room where he had fought the demons. Something isn't right, He thought. He wondered whether they were creatures that the Sith had bred. Or were they once Sith as had thought before? Whatever it was, he had to worn the others. He could hear Tidus's voice beyond a door. Krad tried opening the door. It wouldn't budge. Looks like we'll have to do this the hard way, He thought. He once again got his Lightsaber out and sliced part of the door. Inside he saw Tidus and a man.
"Who's this Tidus?" Krad asked, raising his Lightsaber at the man.

03-12-2006, 12:04 AM
As Marc explored the temple he felt strangely cold and almost afraid. "What the hell is with this place!"Marc asked to no one in particular. He wandered into a large room, as soon as he entered the doors sealed and a strange gas filtered into his lungs. As the poison came so did ancient droids. After fighting them off Marc collaspsed.
((I'm kinda screwed here so if someone can rescue me that'd be cool))

03-12-2006, 01:22 AM
"I am Scar, but my name does not matter. *re-seals the door*. You do not need to know why I am here... yet. *checks data pad in hand* Someone in the atrium... how many more of you are there, no wait no time for that. Round up your men and gather them here in the front hall. I must go to the atrium."

(EVERYONE BUT Maverick5770 IS TO COME TO THE ROOM WHERE ExtreamJedi12 AND Pottsie ARE)

Scar left the two and ran through a few hallways to the door into the atrium.
"Damn, the gas has been released. *hits the door switch and charges in* Get down!"
Scar slashed through the droids. The gas didn't seem to affect him. He defeated the final droid by delivering a roundhouse kick to its head, sending it flying to the top of the stairs at the far end of the room. A man mirroring Scar walked out and crushed the droid head with his foot.
Scar grabbed the jedi on the floor and pulled him to his feet.
"Go now! Head towards the front hall where you came in. The others will be there, tell them they have awakened my twin brother and that all hope is lost. GO! NOW!!!"
(i will control the brother)
Name: Seifer
Faction: Unknown Force
Class: Soldier (secretly a force user)
Race: Unknown (appears human but is a native of this mysterious planet)
Sex: Male
Age: Appears young, around 18
Weapons: Vibroblade
Equipment: Ancient Robes
Appearance: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/6/67/Seifer_Almasy_shot.jpg
(sorry to any final fantasy fans, I couldn't help myself.)

Seifer: Squall my brother.
Scar/Squall: Shutup, I no longer use the name given by our parents.
Seifer: Oh how long it has been since I last awakened. Tell me, has the world changed much over the last 1000 years???
Squall: I would not know, I have pride in the fact that I have been able to stop you from leaving for so long.
Seifer: Well, I guess you have failed in doing that now.
Squall: Perhaps... we shall see.
Seifer: Your friends will die, you do know this do you not. Both those already inside the temple and those attempting to enter.
Squall: Attempting to enter? There are more?
Seifer: Yes. Some that follow our ancient ways are attempting to enter from the outside.
Squall: YOUR ancient ways, I saw its flaws years ago just as mother did before you struck her down.
Seifer: And do not forget our sister. Servents, *servents enter* prepare the ship.
Squall: You are leaving?
Seifer: But of course.
Squall: But the hanger door...
Seifer: Yes, Irvine is dead, the seal is broken. It seems he didn't make it to his resting place before the last lockdown began.
At these words Squall charged foward but fell back when Seifer force pushed him. Seifer then walked away, sealing the door behind him.
Squall headed back for the main hallway to see how the others were fairing.

Diego Varen
03-12-2006, 03:14 AM
"Nice to see the family tree" Krad said to Tidus, "We must find Marc, I sense that Scar or whatever his name is will try to find him"

03-12-2006, 03:28 PM
"I disagree." Tidus said. "We should wait here in case he comes to us."

03-12-2006, 09:58 PM
Marc stumbled into the room where the other jedi were standing. That guy scar says we need to get outta here now!Marc panted.

03-14-2006, 05:00 AM
Suddenly the main door to the tomb burst open with hundreds of troops waiting. But Scar/Squall appeared out of nowhere and knocked most of them off guard with a force push.
"Go now! There is a ship in the docking bay," said Squall as he threw a datapad map to Krad, " use it to get out of here. Be warned though, my brother will have placed troops along the way. I will meet you there."
Squall then force pushed the Jedi and Rebublic men (ie Krad, Marc, Tidus etc.) back through a door and used the force to close and lock it to ensure that they would listen to his instructions.

03-14-2006, 07:17 AM
Tidus started banging on the door. "Well," Tidus started. "No where to go but forward." With those words, Tidus started walking forward.

03-14-2006, 07:39 AM
Vao turned down a corner and saw the other Jedi and remaining soldiers.

"Hey, this way, the ship's this way!!"

03-14-2006, 11:36 AM
"I guess this better than dying"Marc thought as he followed his Jedi friends down the hall.

03-14-2006, 11:54 PM
Meanwhile in the docking bay another ship was already leaving (don't worry still one left for the good guys). Seifer was preparing to board when he heard the Jedi coming.
"Deal with them my servants."
"Yes master. We will deal with them swiftly."

Suddenly two men appeared from behind Seifer, drew what looked to be lightsabers, and began to move towards the group.
Seifer in the meantime had boarded the ship and had begun to take off. (there is no chance to catch Seifer. Let him go and we chase after him in the other ship later.)

Diego Varen
03-15-2006, 01:18 AM
Two people attacked. Krad used his Lightsaber to kill them all.
"We need to find another Ship" He told the other Jedi.

03-15-2006, 07:36 AM
"This way, there is what looks like a Sith Landing craft with a Hyperdrive. Hopefully it has the codes to get through the Sith Fleet!"

Vao began running down the hall. Two Sith corpseswith lightsabers lunge out, and are slayed by Vao. The rest of the Jedi and Republic soldiers reach the hanger.

"C'mon, here it is!!"

03-15-2006, 07:51 AM
"I'll pilot this thing." Tidus said before moving to the cockpit. But, then he remembered Scar. "What about Scar? He knows more about that wacko then we do. I say he comes with us."

Diego Varen
03-15-2006, 12:00 PM
"Maybe" Krad said, "But what if he betrays us?"

03-15-2006, 04:31 PM
"Then we'll deal with him, but for now, get him to fly this thing!!"

03-16-2006, 12:37 AM
(btw Squall is Scar if you hadn't already noticed. You all know him as Scar but his real name is Squall)
Squall suddenly burst into the hanger bay, blowing through the south wall. Hundreds of Sith troopers, the Malak followers from the beach, followed him through.
As he ran, dodging lasers as he went, he signalled for Tidus to take-off by waving his hand upwards.
As the ship began to take off Squall just manged to catch the edge of the landing platform as if folded in.

"Floor it! I got a little surprise," and with those words Squall pressed a switch in his hand and the entire Temple exploded as the crew exited it.

"That was close... too close. Listen, we must head for Coruscant. It is incredibly important that we make it there. My brother, Seifer, will atempt to destroy the planet using old Sith weaponry. I will admit to you, I was once a follower of the Sith. As was my Kingdom. But I and many others saw its flaws and decided to overthrow my brother. We failed but were able to lock him inside that temple. Unfortunately with you lot entering the tomb he has woken once again. His menace to the galaxy will not stop until he is destroyed."

The ship raced towards Coruscant in an attempt to beat Seifer. As they approached the planet Squall saw the surface for the first time in many thousands of years.
"A cityscape... so much has changed. Never the less this is good. It will delay Seifer's search for the weapon. Let us land."

03-16-2006, 07:23 AM
"Jedi Temple, this is Jedi Master Vao Vash, we request immeadiate landing now!"

"Roger, cleared for landing, Master Vash." comes the reply.

03-16-2006, 08:10 AM
Tidus lands the ship with great skill. The crew get off and are waiting at a landing platform, waiting for Scar to say more.

03-19-2006, 01:53 AM
"This is too easy," said Squall, looking around the temple.
"...my brother... he is here already. I can feel his presence. I must tell you all that I am a force user. My brother and I have a special bond... we can almost read each others thoughts. I know he is here, but he sends no resistance for us in this temple," suddenly Squall spotted a dead child lying on the ground behind a pillar, his blood still flowing. He was newly dead.
"We must leave now! They are here! We should split up, meet up outside town. I would not be surpised if most of the people of this planet are dead. Krad, get back in the ship with Tidus and take off and head outside the city limits to the south, in the mountains, and clear out any enemies there so we can safely exit. Master Vao Vash you come with me. We will clear out this temple of my brother's forces and then meet up with them later," said Squall, giving the Rebublic men his commands. However he hadn't quite noticed the Sith jump out and swing at his head. He ducked quickly and suddenly, slicing the man in two at his waist.
"Go Tidus, get out of here with Krad now!"
More Sith appeared as the ship took off to head for the mountains.

03-19-2006, 02:31 AM
Vao folowed Vash into the temple. Immeadiately, Vao ignited his saber against two Sith Assassins. Vao's yellow ssaber cuts both of them bown easily. The Sith Assassin's skills cannot top a Jedi Weapon Master like Vao.

Vao regroups behind Squall and continue to follow him in.

Jason Skywalker
03-19-2006, 07:42 AM
Name: Jason Skywalker.
Faction: Rebublic.
Class: Jedi Guardian,Jedi Knight.
Race: Human.
Sex: Male.
Age: 19.
Weapons: Light Orange lightsaber.
Equipment: Black Jedi Robes.

Name: HK "Reaper" 56.
Faction: Rebublic.
Class: Assassin Droid.
Race: Droid.
Sex: N/A.
Age: 10.
Weapons: Enhanced Blaster Rifle,Sniper Rifle.
Equipment:Droid Flame Thrower.

03-19-2006, 09:17 AM
Krad jumped in and Tidus closed the door behind him. "I hate days like this." Cloud said. The ship drove off to the mountains. As they got closer, Tidus noticed that it got colder. "Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr." said Tidus as he shivered. Suddenly, the ship rocked. Sith ships were on their tail. "Spawn of a Space Slug. GET TO THE TURRETS!"

03-20-2006, 05:48 AM
"There will be more of them about, keep your wits about you." Squall then turned a corner in the temple to see the floor soaked in the blood and lined with bodies of young jedi and their masters alike.
"This is horible. I know it is not the way of the Jedi, but this is why my brother must die, or else this will be the state of every planet in the galaxy. Now let us hurry, we should find any of the living and move on."

03-20-2006, 07:47 AM
"Then we must find him Squall, and stop him." Vao says.

03-21-2006, 01:35 AM
"We must hurry, let's leave this place."

03-21-2006, 10:35 PM
"Why must he leave if we must stop him?"Marc asked,"Shouldn't we actually stop him?"His lungs still ached from the poison.

Diego Varen
03-22-2006, 01:20 AM
"Yeah" Krad said, "But maybe we can stop him a different way"

03-23-2006, 09:04 PM
"What do you mean, a different way?"

03-24-2006, 03:18 AM
1. Krad I didn't mean to character control (well i didnt really) but I asked you to go with Tidus in the ship to secure the outter area of the city.
2. Therefore you can't talk to us (cept Tidus) until we get there
3. I didn't mean leave the planet, I meant to just leave the Jedi temple.

03-26-2006, 07:27 PM
Too late to join??

Ryan S'vla
03-27-2006, 02:42 PM
Name: Ryan Lightbringer
Faction: Jedi
Class: Jedi Guardian, Padawan
Race: Human
Sex: Male
Age: 18
Weapons: Silver Lightsaber.
Equipment: Jedi Robes.

03-28-2006, 12:58 AM
(no it aint to late to join, you may be survivors on coruscant.
JASON SKYWALKER, WTF!?! Explain a bit why you suddenly are on Tantooine and just re-inacted a scene from KotOR1???)

03-28-2006, 03:43 PM
(Survivors on Coruscant what exactly happend on Coruscant?)

03-30-2006, 03:23 AM
(Ok three things,
1. Rav, one of my characters Seifer [who is evil], landed recently. Due to that fact that all the people in the temple are dead another of my characters, Squall, assumes that Seifer's men killed them all [which is true]. So in short the main baddie Seifer landed and killed all the people [note if your a final fantasy fan I'm sorry about ripping the names]
2. Jason, I really don't understand what you are doing.
Why are you on Tatooine? It has nothing to do with the plot so unless you wanna tie it in can you please expain.
3. Rav and Ryan (and perhaps Jason), if you wanna be a new character I can perhaps give you a starting point. You could be maybe a surviving person on Coruscant. If you want a posistion given to you you could be one of Seifer's personal guards if you would like. They are semi-undead in that they were protected by the force in a coma for over 500 years.)

Squall ran through Coruscant with the rest of the Jedi. Seifer's forces could be seen all over the place, jumping from roof to roof and attacking with ease. Squall rolled under a flying kick from one, cutting his body down the middle in two. He waited for his companions to catch up and then hurried for the city gates to make it to the landing site.

03-30-2006, 07:47 AM
((Just delete it.))

"KRAD!?" Tidus yelled into the comm. "Forget it." he thought. He opened the window, activated one of his thermal detonators, and threw it at one of the ships. It blew upon impact. "Well, there goes one problem. Now for the others."

Jason Skywalker
03-30-2006, 01:25 PM
Edit:Forget it,i found out.
The Diamond Zephyr landed on Coruscant,and Jason and Reaper got out.Jason looked upon Coruscant.The once home for many people was now ruins and ashes.Jason and Reaper rushed to the Jedi Temple,where many secrets would unveil.

03-31-2006, 02:30 AM
"People still alive? And a droid? Hey you!" said Squall gesturing to Jason and Reaper. He suddenly noticed the lightsaber and reacted differently.
"Prepare yourselves, they must be sith..." but then Squall felt a surge through his body and felt the light side of the force.
"I was wrong perhaps... if you are a Jedi and wish to live through this fiasco hurry this way, there is nothing but blood and stone in that temple."
Squall then turned to the city gates and thrust them open. He could see Sith waiting at the place where Tidus was scheduled to land and rushed over, the other Jedi and the new companions following.

Jason Skywalker
04-02-2006, 03:21 PM
Jason noticed some Sith were seizing the Diamond Zephyr and rushed to there.Squall and Reaper followed,but proved to be a big mistake.

Ryan S'vla
04-02-2006, 06:29 PM
Ryan was semi-uncouscious, on one room in the Coruscant Temple. Then, he heared a noise. Someone entered, then two more others. The first one had a pacific voice, it seemed to be a wise man.

"Is it him?"

Then another voice answered, this other voice was sweet and a little more sharpen than the first one.

"Yes, this is him."

After that, Ryan was carried to a ship, and put into a kolto tank. It seemed to be a Republic Rescue team, but it wasn't, so who was it? It was a Jedi Team, Ryan felt the Force inside the wise man, and then, Ryan entered into deep uncousciousness.

Jason Skywalker
04-03-2006, 07:50 AM
Reaper started the battle by throwing a Smoke grenade,and then a Plasma,killing 5 of the 15 Siths.Jason force paralyzed three Siths,and cut them in half,leaving 7.Squall rushed through two,and cut their heads off.There were five remaining,but they looked stronger.The one in the middle was the most powerful.Other 2 were assassins,and the rest were Sith Guardians(Sith's Jedi Guardian).This was going to be a tough test.

Ryan S'vla
04-04-2006, 01:33 PM
When Ryan woke up he was in a medium ship, in a small room and inside a kolto tank. Ryan saw the wise man, he was a human and a Jedi. Ryan got out from the kolto thank, and after dressing his Jedi Robes, the Jedi said:

"Welcome, Ryan."

"How do you know my name?"

"I know many things, young padawan. Do you know why are you here?"

"No, I do not."

"You are here to become a Jedi."

"I was going to become a Jedi, but then..."

"We shall discuss that later. Now, you do know that you are going to have a special training. The masters sent me your id sheet, and some demostrations."

"So why, didn't you and your crew arrived earlier, you could stop that murder!"

Suddently, a young girl entered the room, and shouted at Ryan:

"How dare you to speak that way to master Falknar!"

04-05-2006, 05:27 PM
Tidus continued to professianally manuver between the reamining fighters. He had already thrown several thermal detonators and they missed. Then, he seen it. A crevace, big enough for the size of his fighter. "Here goes nothing." said Tidus as he pulled down. As planned, the Sith followed him. Then, when they lined up behind him, he went to the hole and they crashed. When Tidus got out of the other side, he landed.

04-08-2006, 04:53 AM
Squall jumped and swung his sword at one of the sith, then he ducked a swing from another and sliced him in two from the waist.
"Damn it! We don't have time for this. We have to make it to the landing site outside the city. Tidus should be there by now."
He looked down on the dead sith's torso. A utility belt was strapped across his chest with a thermal detonator smack bang in the middle.
Squall then pressed the detonator button and dropped it, running backwards towards the city gate.
"Come on! No time, we can come back for your ship later!"
He waited until the entire group had made it outside the gate and then force pulled the city limit gates closed. There was no way to enter the city from this gate as the thermal detonator had exploded causing the security in that area to go into lockdown mode.
Squall led the group down a rocky pathway towards the ship which Tidus had just landed.
"We made it... Tidus, I don't think we have a chance to take off again, the Sith are on high alert. We will need to continue on foot. I believe my brother will be in an abondond fort at the base of a mountain range just east of here. Shall we move out?"

Jason Skywalker
04-08-2006, 06:59 AM
"Wait,what about my ship!?"asked Jason.

"There's no time for that,we need to keep moving!"answered Squall.

04-08-2006, 11:11 AM
"Yeah, Scar." said Tidus. "Better watch out for Sith fighters. Ran into some on my way here." Then he went inside, grabbed his sword, and went outside again. "Which way?" he said before noticing new faces. "Who are you?"

Ryan S'vla
04-09-2006, 01:00 PM
"It's ok, he's still in shock." - said Master Falknar
"It's not ok master he cannot..."
"It's ok." - harshly interrupted the Master
"No, it's not ok Master, she is right, I do not have right to speak to you like that,
I would like to apologize for my behavior." - asked Ryan, kneeling in one knee
"Ok, since you are a very promising student, I will forgive you."
"What do you mean?" - asked Ryan
"Very well, I will explain it to you. Do you have a lightsaber?"
"Yes, I repaired one that I found from a lightsaber duel."
"And what did you do with the lightsaber?" - continued the master
"The winner of the lightsaber duel was a fallen padawan, and he came after me."
"And then?"
"Then, he found me, we had a saber duel and I won."
"Did you had any Force knowlegde, when you did that?"
"Indeed, now do you see why you are promising. And from now on you shall be my apprentice. This is Ayla, she is my apprentice too, and from now on, your fellow padawan.

And with that Master Falknar left the room.