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SyntheticGerbil
03-29-2006, 03:01 AM
This was for school. It's the only flash cartoon I made I'm somewhat proud of so far.

Tell me what you think...

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/304071

Ray Jones
03-29-2006, 09:01 AM
That autobiographical?

itchythesamurai
03-29-2006, 09:26 PM
I liked it, Gerbil! Needless to say, you've got room for improvement, but it was nonetheless enjoyable.

Samnmax221
03-29-2006, 10:26 PM
I especially enjoyed the jumping IV stand

SyntheticGerbil
03-30-2006, 05:35 AM
Yeah I should probably go back and redraw a lot of it, and not do it for an assignment this time.

Or just do a new one... one day.

Samuel Dravis
03-31-2006, 02:43 AM
It's good, you should make more. I'd watch them. :)

TSR
03-31-2006, 07:29 AM
slightly off topic, but anyon here seen "burntfaceman"? class! watch and learn.
http://www.burntfaceman.com/

dont worry, he really isnt gay...

pock
04-02-2006, 05:18 PM
cool Gerbil, it was good...

Skinkie
04-08-2006, 12:09 PM
Me likey

Samnmax221
04-15-2006, 12:32 AM
Gerbil all of your work has a freehand look to it what are you using? Photoshop?

SyntheticGerbil
04-16-2006, 11:53 PM
Uh, I draw with a mouse...

But the backgrounds on that were scanned pencil drawings then colored like **** in photoshop.

Samnmax221
04-17-2006, 08:52 PM
Kinda thought you had one of those tablets

SyntheticGerbil
04-17-2006, 10:09 PM
Kinda is the key word.

StonerDaveN'Max
04-22-2006, 11:06 PM
Newgrounds links are usually no click zones due to I enjoy nothing there, but this was quite nice

Edit: oh compliments nice art good work .

Shmargin
05-03-2006, 02:05 PM
You know Gerbil, I'll be honest, for some reason I didnt think I would like your animation....Just....Because.

But I actually enjoyed it alot.

You talked **** about your own drawings, but it just looked like the style you were going for.

Like those kids shows they put on TV now that use drawing skills worse than I had when I was 8.

But all in all, I thouht it looked cool, I enjoyed the dialog and music, and it was totally fukcing insane.

Good job.

EDIT: I wasnt saying your drawing looked like the horrbile shows drawn for little kids...Upon reviewing my post thats what it kinda sounded like. Just that it looked like you were going for a kinda...How would I say...crunchy style. It worked good. Especially for the content. And the animaion was smooth, which can make anything better.

SyntheticGerbil
05-04-2006, 07:12 AM
Well thank you.

Ray Jones
05-04-2006, 07:33 AM
You both can stop massaging your peenises now.

itchythesamurai
05-04-2006, 05:43 PM
I think Ray's right on this one. Gasp! But overstimulation can lead to a wicked rash, and that's a visit to the doctor we are all better off not having to go through.

SyntheticGerbil
05-05-2006, 01:32 AM
Get one of those Q-tips in the phallus maybe.

Samnmax221
05-05-2006, 06:20 PM
I believe your supposed to put those in ears and push real hard

Skinkie
05-07-2006, 12:52 AM
However thay are also widely used in the study of venerial dieseases. Fun fun.