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06-13-2006, 05:25 PM
Hello, I am exilerevan. This is my first RP on this site... I'm looking forward to this. Afew rulez though, 1)no god modding 2) No cannon characters i.e. Revan
3) No killing the other RPers without permission from that RPer 4) Please use this sheet before RPing doesnt have to be exact... just ball park it.
(Note this is my character XD)
Name: Silo Bahn
Occupation: Jedi Weapons Master
Age: 39
Planet of Origin: Correlia
Small Bio: Taken as a child, taken to Couracant where he grew up to be a great and devout Jedi
Weapons/clothing: Tattered Jedi Robes, Orange-Yellow Lightsaber
Physical Apearence: Medium Length Black Hair, Green Eyes, Many scars from many battles, one on face.
Force Powers if any: Lightning, Mindtrick, basic powers (push, pull, jump)

Well, here it goes....

A long long time ago in a galaxy far away....

STAR WARS: The Echo Rising

The Galaxy is in a bad way. Everything is going downhill from here. The Senate is crashing down from the inside, the Jedi are leaving the order for some Sith Lord named DARTH VENGONCE and his harsh training methods. The current High Council Member, SILO BAHN, is debating with his friends on how to deal with this threat and has asked his master Briana the Handaiden many times but she didnt answer. He desided to go to Telos, to search for her, his ship, Grace Hawk, is coming in on the Telos Academy to search for this threat....
I'll start the RP when i get some RPers.XD

06-13-2006, 05:50 PM
As you see, i've been around Star Wars RP's for awhile, and I think this one might go somewhere, only if we improve the plot a little better. I'm in.

Name: Drake 'el Morosa
Occupation: Jedi Exile
Age: 26
Planet of Origin: Unknown
Small Bio: Most of his history is unknown, only that he grew up with the Jedi on Dantooine and was exiled after becoming a Jedi Knight at age 20. Through his travels, both sides of the Force have been trying to track him down, only to be cut down. He is known all around the Galaxy, and hunted relentlessly- hated relentlessly. Every Jedi has been told about him, either in a bad way or good.
Weapons/clothing: He has two deep purple lightsabers, the hilts crossed in an X formation on his right hip, bound by a belt.White no-sleeved shirt, ankle-length polyester brown trenchcoat. Black baggy pants and brown leather boots.
Physical Apearence: Short brown hair, bangs falling over his eyes and his hair coming down past his ears. He has the mark of Exile (they did that back then) which is an X across his right cheek.
Force Powers: Push, pull, speed, jump, throw lightsaber, force storm.

06-13-2006, 08:49 PM
Good thnx for comin aboard!XD I am open for suggestions. Oh and welcome to my RP.

06-14-2006, 07:21 AM
Name: Sankra Tomb
Occupation: Jedi Watchman
Age: 31
Planet of Origin: Irodia
Small Bio: Found to be a Force Adept at infancy and was taken to the Enclave on dantooine for training. After his jedi trials he went to coruscant and began to take assignments from the council, He Now Sits on the council as a Master on coruscant.
Weapons/clothing: Jedi Master Robes, Green Staff-Sabre
Physical Apearence: Zabrak species with sharpened spikes and a tribal tatoo the top of his head. Has a scr that goes from his forehead, through his left eye and down to his cheek, this has left the eye blind.
Force Powers if any: Basic Powers,Master Force Camouflage, Master Speed

06-14-2006, 11:18 AM
Welcome aboard. XD 2 more and we can start =)

06-14-2006, 11:19 AM
Name: Jack Goren
Occupation: RIB (Republic Investigation Bureau)
Age: 28
Planet of Origin: Correlia
Small Bio: Former Jedi but was exiled at a young age. However he did not join the darkside, he hated the sith and the evil it stood as the sith was reason for a downfall and death of his master. He has now joined RIB -star wars version of the FBI- and on his first assignment was to work on his home planet Correlia to investigate threats on a sith attack, he has also been asked to work alongside the jedi which he feels uncomfertable with due to his past.
Weapons/clothing: Blaster, shield generator and clothes
Physical Apearence:---Clicky Here--- (http://www.bbc.co.uk/doctorwho/gallery/s2_03gallery/800/doctor1.jpg)

06-14-2006, 11:21 AM
Welcome aboard, 1 more =)

Diego Varen
06-14-2006, 11:22 AM
Name: Fergus Marf
Occupation: Jedi Master
Age: 60
Planet of Origin: Tatooine
Bio: One of the wisest Jedi Masters of the Order and has only had one successful apprentice. His apprentice is believed to be dead.
Weapons/clothing: Brown Jedi Robes, Blue Lightsaber
Physical Apearence: Long Black with shades of Grey Hair,
Blue Eyes, One scar over his left eye.
Force Powers if any: Mindtrick, Heal, Protect, Absorb, Jump, Speed, Push, Pull, Lightsaber Throw

06-14-2006, 11:34 AM
Great! welcome aboard XD RP time =) here it goes....

Silo's ship flew into the Telos Academy, to find a desolate place it was to quiet. No students... no masters, no nights... afew blaster marks on the walls, some tattered articles of clothing, alot of burnt holocrons. Silo only felt two faint presences, if he could find them maybe he could find out what was going on. First he called a republic frequency requesting investigative assistance, then he would look for the lifesigns he senced earlier... he ran and ran looking all over the vast academy and then heard te sounds of lightsabers clashing... he drew his saber quickly and ran to the sound. His master, Briana was fighting some sort of Dark Jedi... and loosing. He ran to the fight lightsaber ignited but right before he got there Briana was disarmed and stabbed in the stomach, Silo ran to the scene and started to duel this Dark Jedi. This one was powerful but not a match for Silo. They fought across a bridge to the meditation room where Silo threw the Dark Jedi out of the room and kicked him off the bridge... he ran to his masters sid to find that she was dead... this was bad for two reasons... one his master was dead two, the security tapes were destroyed so that now he didnt know how this couldve happend... the Republic showed up... finaly a good thing.

Diego Varen
06-14-2006, 11:42 AM
The Jedi Master, Fergus Marf also heard the clash of Lightsabers. He ignited his blue Lightsaber and ran towards Brianna and the duelist.

06-14-2006, 11:58 AM
Silo was standing over the body of his dead master as he saw Fergus arive just to late. Tears in his eyes and anger welling inside him... jumped off of the bridge to find the Jedi that killed his master. The man was cralling on his hands, his legs were broken. Silo took out his lightsaber and slowly walked towards the Dark Jedi... planing to strike him down.

Diego Varen
06-14-2006, 12:02 PM
Silo was standing over the body of his dead master as he saw Fergus arive just to late. Tears in his eyes and anger welling inside him... jumped off of the bridge to find the Jedi that killed his master. The man was cralling on his hands, his legs were broken. Silo took out his lightsaber and slowly walked towards the Dark Jedi... planing to strike him down.

Fergus noticed the young Padawan with anger. Anger led to the dark side.
"No young Padawan!" He shouted, "Anger will lead to the dark side!"

06-14-2006, 12:15 PM
((Jedi Weapon Master))

Silo looked up at Fergus and then looked at the Dark Jedi, he continued to walk towards the animal that killed his old master. "You dont know what pain is do you?" Silo said still walking towards the squirming Dark Jedi, his saber ignited his eyed squinched in rage, his lightsaber raised as he was about to strike down this traitiourous dog.

06-14-2006, 12:18 PM
A sqaud of republic agents burst into the room, with guns raised. Jack was part of the squad and he saw what the Jedi was about to do and shouted "No! We need him alive! He's wanted by the RIB for questioning."

Diego Varen
06-14-2006, 12:21 PM
Fergus hoped that Silo would do the right thing. Fergus knew that the RIB had needed the Dark Jedi alive.

06-14-2006, 12:23 PM
"You dont know what he's done his life is invaluble!" he yelled back and then saw what he was doing and put away his lightsaber... and walked quickly to Jack, "He diserves nothing less that a lightsaber to the head." he whispered and walked into his old room in the east combat chamber.

06-14-2006, 12:28 PM
"I know how you feel and I'd rather you'd cut the guys head off right now but he's the only lead to a sith terrorest cell located on Corellia." Jack replied. He then turned to the other agents "Cuff the dark jedi and bring him to the shuttle."
Jack walked over to Fergus and said to home "We're sorry for your loss and if you wish, you may sentance the dark jedi to any punished you see fit after we're dont with the interrogation."

06-14-2006, 12:31 PM
Silo said to Jack and Fergus, "As a senior council member I will see that a fair punishment is given to him. The council will be in an emergency gathering, Fergus make sure you're there."

06-14-2006, 12:39 PM
"Whatever" Jack said codly, I under if this Jedi even remenbers me? The aspiring Jedi who broke the rules, the young jedi who he personally exiled. Jack figured that Fergus didn't recongise Jack as he had changed his apperance greatly since he left the order.

06-14-2006, 02:23 PM
The Zabrak Master in the tower which contained the Jedi's council chamber, he looked out of the window at the view of the galactic capital. He stared at the newly constructed senate building not far from the temple of the jedi. He knew it was in session and the senitors were pointlessly discusing the problems in the galaxy as the senate failed. This was not on Sankra's mind, His mind was elsewhere on a far away world where his fellow Council member, master Silo Bahn, was. He could feel fury, anger and hate coming from that place. Master Tomb looked down in disappointment as he closed his eye's and began to concentrate on the location.

06-14-2006, 05:59 PM
Silo's shuttle docked in the Temple's Bay, Silo was still in tears over his dead master. He stood, wiped his face and slowly walked out of the shuttle to be congradulated by his many friends for defeating a Dark Jedi, he couldnt seem to smile. Holding back tears is not easy for him... as he rarely cries. A part of him died with his master, nothing was left of him just an echo. His face was somber the rest of the day sitting on the council was Master Bahn (Silo), Master Tomb, Master Marf, Master Rand, and Master Bau-Dur the rest arent important enough to mention now. Silo stood and said to the council, "My friends and fellow Jedi Masters, I have gathered us here today to deliver grave news, Master Briana... is dead." Master Marf, Rand, and Bau-Dur were shocked and Master Marf now understood why Silo was so angry, "If- When the courts find him guilty it is our desision how he will be punished, any suggestions?"

06-15-2006, 12:03 AM
As the shuttle docked into the bay, men- soldiers began to drag the beaten and bound Dark Jedi into the bay and towards the shuttle. The vicious sound of a lightsaber igniting was heard moments before a flash of violet flashed infront of the men- it was a lightsaber. Seconds later, the Dark Jedi's head separated from it's body, sliding down and landing on the ground with a sickening plop.

"This Jedi is going nowhere.." Drake said, catching the thrown lightsaber in his right hand as he ignited his second violent lightsaber, illuminating the dark corner of the bay where he is. "Now, you can either leave, or be slaughtered like the foolish Master was," he said, twirling the lightsabers with a dull hum. "Any takers?"

06-15-2006, 02:09 AM
"Drake! This was the courts desidion... not an exile's. In the name of the galactic senate of the repulic, you are under arest for murder... please dont resist Drake..." Silo said igniting his saber with many other masters in the room, "Drop your saber now!" he demanded

06-15-2006, 02:33 AM
Drake just smiled to himself, walking towards Silo. "I might as well even the odds a bit..." He said, deactivating one lightsaber and dropping it in it's sheath and twirling the other. "Don't give me this arrest nonsense, if you want to stop me, then do it," he said, his eyes glowing green for a moment as a white spiral of energy coated his body (Force Resistance).

06-15-2006, 02:41 AM
"Fine... i've been waiting for this , your arrogance is your downfall as it always has been, Exile. Just know that killing you for resisting arrest wont give me plesuere nor you honor, you will always be an Exile, you get to be the one killed be the Seinior Council Member." he said going into his defencive stance (sorta like Anakin vs. Dooku threy both had their sabers above their heads, thats what my char looks like now). He walked slowly towards Drake... very adjutated, he didnt wish to kill this Exile.

06-15-2006, 07:52 AM
Master Tomb stepped inbetween Silo and drake holding his hands out, he turned his head to the council leader. "Stop this foolishness!!! The death of the Dark Jedi was inevitable, He choose the Dark path and it always ends that way. The Exile mearly accelerated it to the inevitable conclusion, this is not his crime. However he should not have returned to the temple of his exile." Tomb turned to Drake. "Tell me why have you returned Exile?"

06-15-2006, 10:48 AM
He gave a sarcastic smirk to Silo and twirled his saber, deactivating it and sheathing it. "One.. I didn't join the Dark Side, in my view, they're as corrupted as you.. brainwashing..
" He looked back at Tomb after taking a second glance at the body of the Dark Jedi.
"I came here to speak with Briana, but apparantly she had gotten bested by a mere Dark Jedi.. I would have expected more... blood."

06-15-2006, 11:06 AM
John entered the room furious, he had been informed of the death of the dark jedi "What the hell happened!? Who the hell is this? You now what I don't care, did he kill the dark jedi?" One of the troopers noded "Master Tomb, please do the honours in arresting him."

06-15-2006, 11:29 AM
"Put down your weapons. You will face the courts for this outrage." Silo said motioning for Master Tomb and a small squad to arrest the Exile.

06-15-2006, 12:18 PM
"Master Bahn, Calm yourself." He ordered despite the fact Silo was was his superior. "You have had a great Loss, do not let it consume you"

He then turned to the republic troops and there leader, John. "This man will be arrested in good time." He looked back at the Marked Exile. "And i trust he will give us no trouble."

06-15-2006, 01:49 PM
He shouldered past the soldiers, walking out of the bay via a small door, exiting into a hallway within the Jedi Academy. You know as well as I do that she deserved it.. He sent to Tomb, keeping his pace. He closed his trenchcoat and headed towards the main doors, stopping for a moment at the doors then pressing forward,heading out the door.

06-15-2006, 03:59 PM
"You! Stop!" Silo yelled now angered considerably more. "One more step and I'll-" as Drake neared the door Silo used force pull to pull him in and shock him with force lightning. He went unconcience. "Inprison him. He will face the courts tomorrow." Silo said coldly looking on with distain.

06-15-2006, 04:10 PM
Sankra took out his half lit staff-sabre and swung it under the Neck of Silo "Master Bahn Control yourself, You are giving in to your anger." He looked over at jack and the soldiers take the exile to the infirmary first."

"Now are you going to the meditation chamber to reflect or do i have to... 'Escourt'... you there." He said turning back to Silo

06-15-2006, 04:15 PM
Silo said to the wise master, "You do not know. I have controled my anger for fifteen years! It is something Briana taught me. Now that she is gone, I will control it on my own, do not question my meathods... Master Tomb. Escort him to the prison I will go and rest." he said quickly walking away.

06-15-2006, 04:18 PM
Sankra placed his sabre on his belt and walked over to Jack the leader of the Republic soldiers. "I will aid you in escourting this prisoner."

Diego Varen
06-15-2006, 04:25 PM
Fergus hadn't really been paying attention to the recent events. He was getting too old for this sort of thing. He decided to follow Sankra and the others.

06-15-2006, 04:28 PM
"Thank you." Jack grunted, still annoyed over the death of his only lead to the terrorist cell. Who is this son of a ***** anyway? Another exile?"

06-15-2006, 04:33 PM
((OK, that's it. Read my posts. FORCE RESISTANCE... and plus, that was an auto-hit. Plus, he was two floors above him, seeing as the docking bay is below ground and he was at the main doors..equals.. a hypocrit. See, this is what I don't like about these new guys, no idea how to rp right.))

Drake shook off the effects of the stun and stood up. "I'm out of here.. pathetic Jedi Weapon Masters using their powers like toys.." He headed back to the door and opened it, walking out into the cold air and towards his ship- which was a small Republic Starfighter- modified, of course, to fit his needs. He hopped into it and fired up the engines, flipping down the viewscreen and buckling in.

06-15-2006, 04:42 PM
(( ok, sorry but i am not new to RPing. I didnt understand your posts, so please before you make fun of me, please tell me and i'll edit my post. And if i have done something wrong please tell me privately. I'm no idiot and not a hipocrate either. You didnt specify where your character was,sorry again))

Silo sat in his chambers contiplating how he should deal with the new threat of this unexpected Sith Lord rising from the unknown reigons... the Republic fleet is few and scattered, how could he possibly figure this out. Send out the Jedi, strike them from a planet that they would never expect... but where. Theis ships roam everwhere... he cant seem to figure out how... to get them all in one place.

06-15-2006, 05:04 PM
((Didn't mean to explode, I just had to make a point. It's cool now, just read over posts thoroughly from now on alright? I didn't completely make my leave out of the enclave perfect, but I thought you'd get what I meant. I'm waiting for someone else to post before I do, a habit. Heh.))

06-15-2006, 05:07 PM
((same here, sorry i exploded too, its cool))

06-15-2006, 05:10 PM
"Sir," Said a troop walking up to Jack and reported the prisoner escape. Jack was about to burst into flames due to anger however instead he took a deep breath and said clamy "Screw him, I'm not going to waste my time searching for some vigilanty outcast while my home planet is at risk."

06-15-2006, 05:13 PM
His ship lifted off into the air, sputtering a bit then blasting off forwards. Drake typed in the coordinates for Nar Shadaa. If anything, he could get lost in the crowd there. He pulled back a lever near the thruster shutoff switch as the ship lurched into hyperspace.

06-15-2006, 09:05 PM
"Jack. Where would our elusive friend... sorry murderer, dont tell me you lost him Detective." said Silo aproaching Jack slowly and sincerely, "He may be dangerous, comb all of Couracant, and send squads to nearby systems understood?" Silo ordered.

06-15-2006, 09:39 PM
She ship slid out of hyperspace. He steered towards the Nar Shadaa docking platforms of the planet below, sending in docking codes and waiting to be verified before activating the landing gear. Minutes later, his ship landed gently onto the docking platform, along with two other ships- tourists. He leapt out of his ship and handed a few credits over to the docking employee, whispering something in his ear. (Now, the Republic will have a problem landing on Nar Shadaa because of docking problems. Heh, bribery.) The shady Twi'lek nodded and got back to work as Drake kept on walking.

He turned the corner into the main square, which was filled with many people of many different races and many different sizes; yet all the same smell. He pushed his way through the dense crowds and walked through the open doors into the Entertainment District. He was always a sucker for Twi'lek dancers.

06-16-2006, 02:15 PM
"I don't take orders from you," replied Jack "He's your problem, I'm not wasting what resources have left to take care of some dumbass exile who thinks the jedi are unducting some conspiracy."

06-16-2006, 08:59 PM
"Detective, may I remind you that I, in war times am a General... and your commanding officer will hear of your sudden... lack of technicque? Move it." Silo said pridefuly.

06-16-2006, 09:09 PM
Sitting at a small table in the corner of the bar, he was served two Juma Juices. Even though he doesn't like them. Taking a swig of one, he glanced around the room, taking in the smoky environment and the lousy and dense atmosphere, as well as a jolly ambience. Disgusting... He thought to himself.

06-17-2006, 05:06 AM
"In war times you did Jack s***! You did nothing while countless innocent lives were slatured by mandalorians! Even when they were defeated, you did nothing about the raiders on Dantooine. They kidnapped, attacked and killed the villagers that were under your protection. It was up to me to put an end to all that and you kicked me out. Just for doing the greater good, I flet my family, my frend and my lifestyle just to become a jedi and you kicked me out like it was some sort of browny club. And you were sirprised that I didn't go and do the labour on some dull farm world." He replied in anger"You guys aren't curropt. Your just idiots. This jack*** maybe dangerous but he's not my concern. You can talk to my commander officer, he'll tell you to f*** off"

06-17-2006, 11:28 AM
"Insolence! I fought in the first wave on Taris you grunt! It was my job to free the local enclave from Mandalorian control! I suffered a great injury in the first two battles. I was sent back to Couracant where I recieved a pardon and I was demoted to a Padawan learner for four years! Dont you dare tell me that I did nothing to fght the Mandalorians, get out of my sight." Silo said infuriated.

06-17-2006, 05:07 PM
"I'd love to. I couldn't bare to stay in the presence of a proud, stuck up git like yourself." He then turned to master Tomb "Good to see you again Sankra. Well I'll be off. I've got a terrorist cell I've got to destroy"

06-17-2006, 05:14 PM
Master Tomb watched jack walk away and turned back to Silo "I must prepare for the next meeting of the council." He then walked away.

06-17-2006, 06:22 PM
Silo was flustered, tired, and had lost a big part of his life... he was angry and couldnt concentrate on the task at hand, "Master Tomb, thank you for tolerateing my behavior. I have lost a mentor and my only parental figure. I am sorry, I have nearly lost control three times today, I will go and rest." Silo said to Master Tomb, "Then i'll be off, to find our Exiled friend. I will recieve no help from the Republic... if you want a job done right, do it yourself they always say, heh." Silo said walking away.

06-18-2006, 09:41 AM
Master tomb turned back and walked up behind Silo, he placed his hand on the council leader shoulder to stop him walking.

"It is not a good idea to chase this exile in your current state of mind, the council will not agree to your leaving." He stated removing his hand. "but i have known you long enougth to understand that you will go with or without the support of the rest of the council... That is why i will aid you in your task and travel by your side."

06-18-2006, 11:28 AM
Silo smiled and said, "You will? Thank you Master Tomb! I only plan to arrest him for his actions here. We will go to Nal Hutta first. It is the Hutt homeworld and will be a great start for our fugitive hunt. Be in the hangar early tommorow morning we will star our hunt there. While we are searching there we may be able to find out about this Sith Terror Cell."

06-18-2006, 11:40 AM
"That would be wise, the Sith have grown more daring the past few weeks. There threat must be dealt with as soon as we can." He said before raising his hood.

"May the force be with you Master Jedi." and with that he walked out of the room and went to the meditation chamber.

06-18-2006, 02:31 PM
'So bub, hows aboutsh you give a guys a hand?' a man said in a deep accent, dropping down on a seat across from Drake. "Not interested..." 'C'mon...' "No.." Drake responded, turning to the man. 'I said buy me a **** drink!' The man yelled, pushing Drake violently. Within moments, the crowd stopped to look as a beam of purple light shot through the man's chest and out of his back. He pushed the man over and deactivated his saber.

Drake stood up and headed out of the door, the patrons rushing over to see if the man was alright. Several people ran out of Drake's way as he headed out the door. A bit popular now.

06-20-2006, 02:04 PM
Early the next morning, Silo's ship the Grace Hawk was preped for launch. Silo was waiting the arival of Master Tomb.

06-20-2006, 02:10 PM
Master Sankra Tomb walked into the hanger where the grace hawk and Silo were waiting. He Walked up the loading ramp into the ship and towards silo. "I'm ready to follow your lead."

06-20-2006, 03:19 PM
"Alright, Master Tomb please go to the primary deck and I will be there in a minute." Silo said pointing at the moddified Correlian Corvette.

06-22-2006, 02:50 PM
Master Tomb stepped upo and walked over to the co-pilots seat and looked around at Silo "I presume you are driving."

06-22-2006, 03:09 PM
"Of course, who else could keep this pile running." Silo said with a smile. "Set course for Nal Hutta, investigation location number one. " as they reared on the slimy planet they got a news report of a murder on Nar Shadda, "Should we check it out?" Silo asked Master Tomb.

06-22-2006, 03:58 PM
"Perhaps we should. It would be good fr the reputation of the jedi if we aid the locals in this investigation." Master Tomb agreed

06-22-2006, 04:57 PM
"Damn civilians.. always get in the.. WAY!" And with that last word, he had slugged one drunk man in the jaw who was stumbling on him, knocking the man flat on the ground. He flicked his fingers a little bit from the impact and continued walking. He opened up the door to an old hotel, walking to the counter he rang the bell, watching as an old man walked towards him. " I'd like a room on the top floor, sir," Drake said. "Alright.. that'll be 4000 credits a night." The man said, taking 8000 credits that was on the counter. "Expensive as hell.. " Drake walked off," highway robbery..damn old man.." He mumbled under his breath as he started up the stairs to his room.

By the time he made it to his room, the crowd outside was beginning to calm down an authorities still had no idea who had killed the man, but there were witnesses.

06-22-2006, 06:00 PM
The GraceHawk had trouble landing, apparently there were no available pads available. Silo knew that there was a pad somewhere, he took her into the area he found an available pad. He and Master Tomb walked down the ramp to be met by Czerka Slavers. A Tw'leik male walked towards them with thugish Gran riflemen, "This sector is restricted, you'll need permits to land here." he said in the Tw'leik tounge, Silo then only able to understand very little Tw'leik asked Master Tomb, "I dont know what he said, please 'convince' him to let us pass? Tell him were with the Republics investigation team."