Lord Konohomaru
07-11-2006, 01:28 PM
This is my new fanfic of my rp char Onri Konohomaru AKA Lord Konohomaru. Please know that this is a brief oversight of his current life and i will create more that will be of his individual adventures. Hope you like it, I would really like some reviews on it so if anyone can please rate it. Thank You and enjoy.
The Life of Onri Konohomaru/Lord Konohomaru
Chapter I The Jedi Acadamy
Lord Konohomaru was born on the harsh desert planet of Tatooine. Yet he did not live there. The day he was born, he was taken to the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine. Normally he would not be taken for a while longer but the Council did not feel it was safe leaving someone of this much power with his family, who were not at all force sensitive.
You see Onri Konohomaru had incredible force control at birth. The day he was born, he used his power to enhance his strength and balance, and thanks to that he walked alone on the day he was born. Also, the day he was born, all of the force sensitive, felt a very great disterbance in the force.
The Jedi Council were very concered about Onri. They felt he was going to fall to the dark side at a very young age and become a very powerful dark jedi. But they felt they could keep him on the path of the light. They thought if they started his training at a very young age he wouldn't stray. So he was taken as a baby to Dantooine, and there he was kept so his natural use of the force could be monatored, and so they could see even now if he was falling to the dark side.
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Years later, at the age of five, Onri started his training. His use of the force was incredable, he could easily win any battle with his bare hands and his use of the force. But this is not the jedi way. He was then taught the ways of the jedi, taught to only use his strength and weapons when nessicary, and to when all possible solve his problems without violence, with his mental weapons, not his physical ones.
He started to train more in combat at the age of seven, in which he dominated all his sparing partners with great excellence and grace. He was on the road to being a great jedi. Onri did not use brute force or rage to fight any more either, he defeated most of his sparing partners minds with the use of the force to predict their movements and struck with the utmost accuracy.
They started intence training of force use with Onri at age eight. He greatly excelled there, more than he excelled in combat. He soon learned may techniques to avoid the use of a weapon, and ways to persuade his enimies to give up. He also learned many combat techniques to stun, push, and block his enimies. And of course he learned many healing and self improving tactis as well.
He became a Padawan at age ten. And soon after he was taken under a Master and became an Apprentice, where he learned very quikly. He became a Master at age 20, yet took no apprentices.
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Later that year, Onri began his fall to the dark side. He soon began to disrespect the council and their wishes. He refused to take any apprentices, and disrespected his fellow jedi. He began to believe he was the best, that all others were just useless pawns. Then he fell. Onri Konohomaru, for no reason at all, had slaughtered many Dantooinian citizens. No jedi were harmed, but many farmers fell to his horrible rath.
Onri then stole one of the jedi's ships, and fled the world of Dantooine, and went to Korriban, where he wanted to begin his new life, as a sith...
The Life of Onri Konohomaru/Lord Konohomaru
Chapter I The Jedi Acadamy
Lord Konohomaru was born on the harsh desert planet of Tatooine. Yet he did not live there. The day he was born, he was taken to the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine. Normally he would not be taken for a while longer but the Council did not feel it was safe leaving someone of this much power with his family, who were not at all force sensitive.
You see Onri Konohomaru had incredible force control at birth. The day he was born, he used his power to enhance his strength and balance, and thanks to that he walked alone on the day he was born. Also, the day he was born, all of the force sensitive, felt a very great disterbance in the force.
The Jedi Council were very concered about Onri. They felt he was going to fall to the dark side at a very young age and become a very powerful dark jedi. But they felt they could keep him on the path of the light. They thought if they started his training at a very young age he wouldn't stray. So he was taken as a baby to Dantooine, and there he was kept so his natural use of the force could be monatored, and so they could see even now if he was falling to the dark side.
****
Years later, at the age of five, Onri started his training. His use of the force was incredable, he could easily win any battle with his bare hands and his use of the force. But this is not the jedi way. He was then taught the ways of the jedi, taught to only use his strength and weapons when nessicary, and to when all possible solve his problems without violence, with his mental weapons, not his physical ones.
He started to train more in combat at the age of seven, in which he dominated all his sparing partners with great excellence and grace. He was on the road to being a great jedi. Onri did not use brute force or rage to fight any more either, he defeated most of his sparing partners minds with the use of the force to predict their movements and struck with the utmost accuracy.
They started intence training of force use with Onri at age eight. He greatly excelled there, more than he excelled in combat. He soon learned may techniques to avoid the use of a weapon, and ways to persuade his enimies to give up. He also learned many combat techniques to stun, push, and block his enimies. And of course he learned many healing and self improving tactis as well.
He became a Padawan at age ten. And soon after he was taken under a Master and became an Apprentice, where he learned very quikly. He became a Master at age 20, yet took no apprentices.
****
Later that year, Onri began his fall to the dark side. He soon began to disrespect the council and their wishes. He refused to take any apprentices, and disrespected his fellow jedi. He began to believe he was the best, that all others were just useless pawns. Then he fell. Onri Konohomaru, for no reason at all, had slaughtered many Dantooinian citizens. No jedi were harmed, but many farmers fell to his horrible rath.
Onri then stole one of the jedi's ships, and fled the world of Dantooine, and went to Korriban, where he wanted to begin his new life, as a sith...