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Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 01:20 PM
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Star Wars
Jedi Forces Part II - Forbidden Return
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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…

Star Wars
Jedi Forces Part II - Forbidden Return

The JEDI ACADEMY on YAVIN IV has fallen to the new SITH ORDER, which is being led by EMPEROR DEVON. His new empire, including the SITH and the IMPERIAL REMNANT are on their way to taking the galaxy.

Along with that, several GENOSOSIANS have organised the new CONFEDERACY OF INDEPENDENT SYSTEMS and have built a new DROID FACTORY on their home world of GEONOSIS and have built a new DROID ARMY. Along with that, the organiser of the new CIS, JAGGER DELSO has built the ultimate weapon.

Meanwhile, the remaining JEDI KNIGHTS who are still being led by the GRAND JEDI MASTER, LUKE SKYWALKER have all scattered across the galaxy, waiting to return to REPUBLIC SPACE, to save the NEW REPUBLIC from the upcoming devastation…

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Rules

1. No Godmodding.

2. Maximum of two Characters. If you want anymore, ask me in this Thread. The only people who can have more than two Characters are the Thread Creator (Me) and anyone else I give permission.

3. All Off-Topic Posts go in here.

4. Have fun and try to post often.

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Characters:

Jaden Korr - Pottsie (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=133624)
Jan Ors - Jason Skywalker (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=140602)
Rosh Penin - Pottsie (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=133624)
Kyle Katarn - Jason Skywalker (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=140602)
Luke Skywalker - Pottsie (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=133624)
Emperor Devon - Himself (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=117380)
Jagger Delso - steven (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=110628)

Created Characters:

Sam Ranger - steven (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=110628)
Vereor - Rexraptor2000 (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=138418)
Solaris - CSI: Nihilus (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=146416)
Tahita Nui - CSI: Nihilus (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=146416)
Sa'adow Fan - Dark_Lady (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?userid=146173)

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Here is my Character (Who happens to be the main Character).

Name: Jaden Korr
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Favourite Weapon(s): Lightsaber/DL-44 Pistol
Lightsaber Colour(s): Purple
Favourite Ship(s): The Raven's Claw/X-Wing
Favourite Force Power(s): Too many
Master(s): Kyle Katarn
Apprentice(s): None
Homeworld: Coruscant
Political Affiliation: New Republic/Jedi Order
Occupation: Jedi Knight
Allies: New Republic/Jedi Order
Enemies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Bio: Here (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jaden_Korr)

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If your Character is a Force User (Jedi, Sith, Dark Jedi, etc), this is what you need in your Profile:

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If your Character is a non-Force User (Soldier, Scout, Scoundrel, etc), this is what you need in your Profile:

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Please join and have fun.

Jason Skywalker
10-07-2006, 01:38 PM
Kyle and Jan for me if i can have two. If not, just Kyle. Just wait a sec.

EDIT:

Name: Kyle Katarn
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Favourite Weapon(s): Lightsaber/Bryar Pistol
Lightsaber Colour(s): Blue
Favourite Ship(s): The Raven's Claw
Favourite Force Power(s): Force Absorb, Force Protect
Master(s): None
Apprentice(s): Mara Jade, Jaden Korr, Rosh Penin
Homeworld: Sulon
Political Affiliation: New Republic/New Jedi Order
Occupation: Jedi Master
Allies: New Republic/New Jedi Order
Enemies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Bio: Not feeling like to post link.

Name: Jan Ors
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Favourite Weapon(s): E-11 Blaster Rifle
Favourite Ship(s): The Raven's Claw
Homeworld: Alderaan
Political Affiliation: New Republic/New Jedi Order
Occupation: Freelance Mercenary
Allies: New Republic/New Jedi Order
Enemies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Bio: Not feeling like it as well.

Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 01:52 PM
Of course, you can have both of them Jason. Just to let you know, Jaden's part in the Fic involves finding Jan, so she won't be with Kyle. Kyle will be with Luke and Rosh on some Planet, which I'll decide. This Part will focus on the rise of the new Sith Order, the new CIS and the production of General Grievous II, built by Jagger Delso (Both Characters were created by steven).

Jason Skywalker
10-07-2006, 02:46 PM
Alright, got it. Also, i see Jagger Delso is a descendant from Gizor Delsor from Mustafar on Battlefront II, am i right? ;)

Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 02:49 PM
Alright, got it. Also, i see Jagger Delso is a descendant from Gizor Delsor from Mustafar on Battlefront II, am i right? ;)

Yes, steven had created him to be his descendant.

steven
10-07-2006, 02:59 PM
A paralell version of my character from John's rpg

Name: Sam Ranger
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Blue
Hair Colour: Brown
Favourite Weapon(s): E-11 Blaster Rifle
Favourite Ship(s): The Titan:
http://www.3dactionplanet.com/lancer/images/freelancer/artwork/122202/s_armor.jpg
Favourite Force Power(s): Levitation (however she cannot use it)
Master(s): None
Apprentice(s): None
Homeworld: Corellia
Political Affiliation: New Republic
Occupation:Transport captain
Allies: New Republic/Jedi Order
Enemies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Apperance:click here (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Image:Nomi_Sunrider.jpg)
Bio:Owner of an armoured transport. Sam works for the Republic by transport goods to the Jedi Academy where her brother trains.

Name: Jagger Delso
Gender: Male
Species: Geonosian
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: No hair
Favourite Weapon(s): Sonic blaster
Favourite Ship(s): The Rebellion
Click here to view Picture (http://screenshots.filesnetwork.com/8/files2/67375_14.jpg)
Homeworld: Geonosis
Political Affiliation: The new CIS
Occupation: Viceroy/Leader
Allies: Sith Order and several businesses
Enemies: The New Republic/Jedi/Imperal Reminant
Bio:After the death of his father, Jagger slowly followed in his footsteps and in 20 years time Jagger was successfull. He had made deals with several planets, goverments, companys and alliances. He gain plans for new droids, ship and even a new General Grievous. He see's the New Republic much weaker than the old one and plans to bring it too it's knees.


Also: Click here for picture of the Regular Droid controll ship (http://screenshots.filesnetwork.com/8/files2/67375_15.jpg)

Rexraptor2000
10-07-2006, 03:51 PM
Name: Vereor
Gender: Male
Species: Human\Miraluka
Eye Colour: Grey
Hair Colour: Black
Age: 30
Favourite Weapon(s): Saberstaff
Lightsaber Colour(s): Red
Favourite Ship(s): None
Favourite Force Power(s): Lightning, Choke, Wave
Master(s): Emperor Devon
Apprentice(s): None
Homeworld: Alpheridies
Political Affiliation: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Occupation: Sith Apprentice
Allies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Enemies: New Republic/Jedi Order
Bio: Unkown

Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 04:13 PM
Nice Characters people. Since Vereor has become Emperor Devon's new apprentice, there is no need for another, unless if someone wants to create one. But a maximum of two/three apprentices. Also I'll control Rosh, so I can develop the relationship, between both him and Jaden.

Name: Rosh Penin
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Black
Favourite Weapon(s): Lightsaber/DL-44 Pistol
Lightsaber Colour(s): Yellow
Favourite Ship(s): The Raven's Claw/X-Wing
Favourite Force Power(s): Too many
Master(s): Kyle Katarn
Apprentice(s): None
Homeworld: Yavin IV
Political Affiliation: New Republic/Jedi Order
Occupation: Jedi Student
Allies: New Republic/Jedi Order
Enemies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Bio: Here (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Rosh_Penin)

steven
10-07-2006, 04:17 PM
When are we going to start?

Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 04:19 PM
When are we going to start?

As soon as Luke is chosen and if Emperor Devon decides to join as himself, we'll start. Please note, people can still join. Also, this Part, along with a Part IV (If I decide to do one, set after this current storyline, which ends in Part III), will be the only RP. Once this part is over as an RP, I shall write the Fanfic version.

Emperor Devon
10-07-2006, 04:21 PM
As soon as Luke is chosen and if Emperor Devon decides to join as himself, we'll start.

With people who'll call themselves my minions, how could I refuse? :D

Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 04:27 PM
With people who'll call themselves my minions, how could I refuse? :D

No idea my lord. Feel free to post the Profile anytime Emperor. Also, steven, just to let you know, I allow you to control the production of General Grievous II occasionally. As I said before, Grievous is just getting built and he needs to be tested. Jagger Delso will be his tester, since he is the Viceroy of the CIS. This is optional, but if anyone wants to create a partner for him (Similar to Rune Hakko for Nute Gunray in the Prequel Trilogy), feel free.

Emperor Devon
10-07-2006, 06:22 PM
Pottsie, if I may, the official title of the leader of the CIS is 'Count'. 'Viceroy' is for the Trade Federation. :)

I'll get a profile up a little later...

Diego Varen
10-07-2006, 06:24 PM
Pottsie, if I may, the official title of the leader of the CIS is 'Count'. 'Viceroy' is for the Trade Federation. :)

I'll get a profile up a little later...

Thanks for that, Emperor D. Count Jagger, Viceroy Jagger :lol:. I don't mind what steven decides what position to give him.

Another note, if by the time Luke hasn't been chosen by anyone, I will take control of him. I'll start the Thread soon after.

Jason Skywalker
10-07-2006, 06:25 PM
And that is based on Dooku? Cuz', he was Count of his homeworld of Serenno, nothing much, nothing lesser.

Emperor Devon
10-07-2006, 06:31 PM
Dooku chose that to be the title of the CIS's Head of State. It was probably because he was the Count of Serenno.

CSI
10-07-2006, 11:03 PM
I don't know if a Jedi Master went undercover is okay...

Oh, Pottsie, is Rank of Jedi Master OK? If not okay, I'll change it into Jedi Knight.

1. Jedi Master Profile:
Name: Solaris
Species: Wookie
Eye Colour: Light Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Favourite Weapon(s): Paired Lightsabers
Lightsaber Colour(s): Silver
Favourite Ship(s): No preferences, because he thinks "Flying is for Droids".
Favourite Force Power(s): Eh, Force Transform as sometimes he went undercover... and Force Sight, and Telekinesis.
Master(s): Eelysa, Deceased.
Apprentice(s): No Apprentice
Homeworld: Kashyyyk (Hope I spelled it correctly!)
Political Affiliation: New Repulic, Jedi Order
Occupation: Jedi Knight
Allies: New Republic, Jedi Order
Enemies: Sith order, Imperial Remnant
Bio: Eh...This might be a problem because a Wookie Jedi is very rare. So I grabbed the short bio of Tyvokka, http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Tyvokka

2. Undercover Profile:
Name: Tahita Nui
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Brown
Favourite Weapon(s): Vibroblade, but looks like Japanese Katana / Disruptor with modified chamber upgrade and scope upgrade as snipering purposes.
Favourite Ship(s): Even he's gone undercover, his dislike of ship still doesn't change a little bit.
Master(s): N/A
Apprentice(s): N/A
Homeworld: Kamino
Political Affiliation: New Republic, Jedi Order
Occupation: Bounty Hunter / Smuggler
Allies: New Republic, Jedi Order
Enemies: Anyone who oppose to New Republic, and Jedi Order
Bio: He has an apparance like Jango Fett. You may use this bio: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jango_Fett as he's a lightsided version of Jango Fett.

Diego Varen
10-08-2006, 05:40 AM
Both profiles are fine CSI. Also, Solaris (There should be more Wookiee Jedi) could be a Jedi in hiding on the Planet you choose. Kashyyyk is spelt correctly and Solaris being a Jedi Master is fine. The only Jedi Masters in this RP so far, are Solaris, Luke and Kyle. Please note that Luke, Kyle and Rosh will all be on the same Planet. And since nobody has taken Luke.

Name: Luke Skywalker
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Blonde
Favourite Weapon(s): Lightsaber
Lightsaber Colour(s): Green
Favourite Ship(s): X-Wing
Favourite Force Power(s): Too many
Master(s): Obi-Wan "Ben" Kenobi/Yoda
Apprentice(s): Many
Homeworld: Born: Polis Massa/Raised: Tatooine
Political Affiliation: New Republic/Jedi Order
Occupation: Grand Jedi Master
Allies: New Republic/Jedi Order
Enemies: Imperial Remnant/Sith Order
Bio: Here (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Luke_Skywalker)

I'll start the RP Thread later. Please note that people can still join, once the RP has started. And where is Emperor Devon's Profile?

Diego Varen
10-08-2006, 08:18 AM
Starting Places for Main Characters:

Jaden Korr - Yavin IV, Sith Academy Prison cells
Jan Ors - Nar Shaddaa, Cantina
Rosh Penin - Coruscant, Old Jedi Temple ruins
Kyle Katarn - Coruscant, Old Jedi Temple ruins
Luke Skywalker - Coruscant, Old Jedi Temple ruins
Emperor Devon - Yavin IV, Sith Academy Throne Room
Jagger Delso - Geonosis, New CIS Throne Room

Created Characters have a choice of where to start.

Also, for Jason Skywalker, Kyle and Jan, if they see each other in this RP, their relationship should be slightly worse than it was in JO. Since they haven't seen each other for two years, it would make perfect sense.

Emperor Devon
10-08-2006, 01:55 PM
I'll start the RP Thread later. Please note that people can still join, once the RP has started. And where is Emperor Devon's Profile?

Below. :)

Name: Emperor Devon
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Yellow and red
Hair Colour: White, and in small quantities
Favourite Weapon(s): The Force
Lightsaber Colour(s): Red
Favourite Ship(s): None
Favourite Force Power(s): Whatever is the most effective
Master(s): Dead
Apprentice(s): Yet to be determined
Homeworld: Unknown
Political Affiliation: Imperial Remnant/Sith
Occupation: Galactic Emperor without a Galactic Empire
Allies: Anything against the New Republic and New Jedi Order
Enemies: New Republic/New Jedi Order
Bio: Unknown

Dark_Lady
10-08-2006, 08:00 PM
Name: Sa'adow Fan
Gender: Female
Species: Human
Eye Colour: Green
Hair Colour: Red
Favourite Weapon(s): The Force
Lightsaber Colour(s): Red
Favourite Ship(s): None
Favourite Force Power(s): Force Speed, Mind Trick, Telekinesis
Master(s): Emperor Devon (if he doesn't mind)
Apprentice(s): None
Homeworld: Unknown
Political Affiliation: Imperial Remnant / Sith Order
Occupation: Sith Aprrentice
Allies: Imperial Remnant / Sith Order
Enemies: Everyone against the Imperial Remnant or Sith Order
Bio: Unknown

CSI
10-08-2006, 11:09 PM
Solaris loves Katana practice.

Just kidding, but pardon me, is Telekinesis like manipulating floating lightsabers?

Starting Places for Main Characters:

Jaden Korr - Yavin IV, Sith Academy Prison cells
Jan Ors - Nar Shaddaa, Cantina
Rosh Penin - Coruscant, Old Jedi Temple ruins
Kyle Katarn - Coruscant, Old Jedi Temple ruins
Luke Skywalker - Coruscant, Old Jedi Temple ruins
Emperor Devon - Yavin IV, Sith Academy Throne Room
Jagger Delso - Geonosis, New CIS Throne Room

Created Characters have a choice of where to start.

Also, for Jason Skywalker, Kyle and Jan, if they see each other in this RP, their relationship should be slightly worse than it was in JO. Since they haven't seen each other for two years, it would make perfect sense.

Pottsie, like you said before, I'll start off by Kashyyyk. BTW, are you going to start a new thread of RP or start in this thread?

Jason, if your character, Jan Ors, saw one of CSI Nar Shaddaa crew, send my regards, say, Nihilus said hello to them. OK? Thanks. :D

Dark_Lady
10-09-2006, 12:06 AM
Yeah, sort of. It's basically the ability to move objects with your mind. I was too lazy to write "I like Force Push, Force Pull, Force Levitate, etc, etc, etc..."

Diego Varen
10-09-2006, 01:46 AM
Pottsie, like you said before, I'll start off by Kashyyyk. BTW, are you going to start a new thread of RP or start in this thread?

If you haven't noticed, there is already a Thread. It had two replies and about fourty views.

Dark_Lady, Character is fine and now Emperor Devon has two apprentices.

CSI
10-09-2006, 01:50 AM
Oh, I got it. Good for you, so I can practice my new feat, Blade Fury.

Diego Varen
10-09-2006, 02:41 AM
I will release a Fic version soon, with possibly all these Characters (Who might get killed off or who aren't used in Part III). The reason I did the RP version was so I could have made up Characters and plots, since I've been having bad Writer's Block with this part. Part III will be easier to write. I hope. So I might make things up about these Characters, like Sa'adow Fan was a perfectionist. I'd like to thank you all anyway.

CSI
10-09-2006, 09:18 PM
To Jason:

Thank you.

BTW, Nihilus is not same as Nihl. There is two Sith lords through out the whole galaxy, Darth Nihilus (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Darth_Nihilus), which is my avartar, who was around 4000 BBY. But Darth Nihl (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Darth_Nihl) is in EU, 130 ABY. Click the links above to see details of Darth Nihilus and Darth Nihl, respectively.

Jason Skywalker
10-10-2006, 05:24 AM
I know, i know them both, i just use Nihl as a diminutive.

CSI
10-10-2006, 10:12 AM
To Jason: OK, I won't mind. Just a reminder.

To Pottsie: Are you going to turn Rosh to the darkside? Geez...BTW, nicely written, Pott.

Diego Varen
10-10-2006, 11:13 AM
To Pottsie: Are you going to turn Rosh to the darkside? Geez...BTW, nicely written, Pott.

No. I might make him feel anger, like Kyle in JO. Thanks for the compliment.

Jason Skywalker
10-10-2006, 02:30 PM
"Jaden, i know you're angry, but don't feed into that emotion, believe me when i say that." - Kyle Katarn.

Heed and remember these wise words guys. ;) Unless you're a Sith that is. :lol:

Dark_Lady
10-10-2006, 02:43 PM
Your words are foolish and empty. Why would you ask Jaden to deny true power, a thing useful in an infinite number of ways, for any cause he cares to espouse, merely to keep hold of a single, fading ray of light?

Couldn't resist. :D

CSI
10-11-2006, 12:48 AM
Oh, yeah. As a wise Jedi, it's my job to teach any jedi to resist the dark side and to redeem fallen Jedi.

Once A Jedi, Always a Jedi. -- Solaris