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Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 03:38 PM
50 years after Luke Skywalker's death, the Jedi Order is nearly in shambles. A new Dark Lord has taken over but the Sith's identity remains a mystery. This new Sith Lord has attacked Dantooine, Coruscant, and many other Jedi Enclaves . There are a few survivors to stand up against this new threat.......

Now the RP will need the survivors, duh, you can pick or make up a new planet as your Jedi Enclave. I will need 1 or 2 Jedi's to be pilots. Also one of you will really be a Sith, maybe the Sith Lord. I will PM who it will be.The Jedis will follow KotOR1, and eventually KotOR2 rules regarding classes and powers.Can be up to 2 players.

Expect this RP to have constant fights, romance, and betrayel.

Requirements:

Name:
Species:
Class:
Age:
Appearance:
Biography:
Lightsaber Color:
Jedi Enclave:


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Name: Rukia Granger
Species: Human
Class: Jedi Counsler
Age:26
Appearance:Red/Gold hair, brown eyes. Curvy and petite, wears a blue Jedi robe.
Biography: Headstrong girl who was brought to the order when she was 6. A farmer's daughter on Dantooine. She stayed at the Enclave in Dantooine.Rumors are she constantly escaped the enclave to spy on her family.
Lightsaber Color: Orange
Jedi Enclave: Dantooine

Divide&Conquer
07-22-2007, 04:05 PM
I'll give this a shot. Good Luck with this Empress Padme :nod:

Name: Javin Aldan
Species:Human
Class:Jedi Guardian
Age: 25
Appearance: Medium Length brown hair. Blue eyes, medium build. Wears a Tan Jedi Robe. Something like whats below.
http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t160/dwisley4/DanteBluuincolor.jpg
Biography: Was born on Coruscant, only had his mother until at the age of 5 he was taken into the Jedi order and trained. Holds a strong faith in the Jedi order, but at times has trouble following the rules.
Lightsaber Color: Blue
Jedi Enclave: Coruscant
The Ship:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/901684/?qo=67&q=Star+Wars+Ships&qh=boost%3Apopular+age_sigma%3A24h+age_scale%3A5
Passenger ship, Javin learned to fly the ship from his master. After his masters death it was given to him to take care of. The weapons systems are up to par, produces its own gravitational field. Has the third best shields on the galaxy. The ship is called StarWind.

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 04:14 PM
Accepted.

starmark2k
07-22-2007, 04:17 PM
Name: Tau Saska
Species: Zabrak
Class: Consular
Age: 34
Appearance: Tall and muscular build, sharpened horns yellow horns of his head.
Biography: Born on an Irodian colony world and was found to be a force adept at a very young age. Taken to the Jedi he began training in the ways of the force, he was extremely strong in the force and learnt to use it to enhance his body and those of the people around him. Very calm at all times and would never even think of breaking the Jedi code.
Lightsaber Color: Cyan
Jedi Enclave: Yavin IV

Name: Krail Nasai
Species: Human
Class: Guardian
Age: 25
Appearance: Young facial features with athletic build, Small beard under his lid. Blond hair and blue eyes.
Biography: Left at a Orphanage as a new born he wasnít found by the Jedi until his 8th birthday. While training with the Jedi he was found to have a great skill with the lightsaber. A Risk taker with the need to do what he perceives as the right thing at any cost, he has often came close to touching the Dark Side.
Lightsaber Color: Violet
Jedi Enclave: Yavin IV

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 04:30 PM
Like I would refuse you Starmark.SO ACCEPTED.

Art Of Betrayal
07-22-2007, 04:30 PM
Name: Stiehl
Species: Human
Class: Jedi Guardian (Pilot)
Age:21
Appearance:
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j242/ArtOfBetrayal/JediStiehl.jpg



His Ship: The Flying Wing
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j242/ArtOfBetrayal/Flyingwing.jpg

This Unique Ship, asymmetrical design with some influence from Correllian design. This ship has multiple engines in weird configurations, wings that moved and rigging on sails. The upside down dinner plate in the middle is the main crew section to port of it stern is the only mass cargo hatch, ventral not seen in the same area is the crew ramp/lift, starboard of the main section is the bridge.

The bridge has its own gravity field and yes it is in a 90 degree alignment to the rest of the ship. This ship would fly in the vertical mode for stellar travels , but switch to the horizontal mode for planet side landings.

Biography:
Abandoned on Coruscant by his bounty hunter parents at the age of Six, he was found by a Jedi Master who upon feeling the childís connection to the force, took him to the temple to craft him into a jedi. The Jedi took Stiehl as his Padawan and began to instruct him in the ways of the jedi, constantly impressed with Stiehl's devotion to his studies and the principles of the order.

Do to the unusual gravity on Stiehl's home planet, his bones and muscles were denser and stronger which allowed his force reserves to be processed more efficiently enabling him to participate in much longer exchanges, which complemented his love of lightsaber training and combat. During his tutelage under his Master, he perfected lightsaber forms II, IV and V, forms focusing on lightsaber on lightsaber combat, which made him a swordsman matched by very few.

After his Knighting, he accompanied his Master on many missions, on one of which he constructed his truly unique gold bladed lightsaber.


On his first mission he was to accompany another Jedi named Rukia Granger to look into some reports of a pair of Bounty Hunters targeting Jedi's. As they set out on this mission they exchanged the normal pleasantries but kept it very simple. Apon arriving at their destination Rukia headed the mission due to she was 5 years older than Stiehl.

When they were searching for the bounty hunters they split up. While Rukia was looking for them she came apon a table of two people a male and a female who were enjoying a drink. She decided to try and get some information out of them. She asked the wrong questions.

The couple then said we should show you what we found last night and decided to lead her to their ship saying it had just docked the other night and it was strange. When Rukia wasn't expecting it they captured her and brought her on their ship "the Flying Wing"

Feeling a disturbance in the force Stiehl asked someone who saw where they went he was told and went after them.

Just as the ramp was closing he jumped into the ship and walked in very cautiously. The male bounty hunter yelled to the wife as he saw him walk into the ship. The ship stayed landed and the woman came out as well. On the floor in the corner was Rukia who was just regaining consciousness without her weapons and her hands tied and some sort of device on her head.

Stiehl looked at them in pure dis belief as if he had seen them before then he realized that these two people were in fact his parents. He said to them "release her," the male laughed and said, "thats not going to happen but you are more than welcome to try"

Stiehl thought for a second nodding his head then said, " well if thats what you want father, i would be more than welcome to," and with that he Force pushed His mother and charged with his lightsaber at his father who was not very smart to bring a blaster to a lightsaber fight. He swung at his father his father went limp and fell to the ground.

By that time his mother had gotten up and was well a bit more prepared she pulled out a lightsaber and started to swing at Stiehl. As Stiehl defended himself he said to his mother, " Well at least now i know where i got it from too bad you don't know how to use it right," and with that he went on the offensive swinging with precised and deadly strikes as fast as his mother had ever seen, it was too much for her and he overpowered her striking her to the ground.

He went over to Rukia and untied her and took the device of her head she hugged him. Stiehl decided to take his parents ship seeing well no one else was going to. Ever since then when Rukia and Stiehl are not on missions they have been seen hanging out together. Except for when she goes to spy on her parents in which he tries to make it so no one notices.


Lightsaber Color: Gold


Jedi Enclave: Dantooine

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 04:37 PM
Accepted and you can write how they know each other.

* wodering if any of your Jedi's are pilots, still need at least 2 to fly ships.Will even let you name and design ship. Since I suck at that.

Art Of Betrayal
07-22-2007, 04:40 PM
Accepted and you can write how they know each other.

* wodering if any of your Jedi's are pilots, still need at least 2 to fly ships.Will even let you name and design ship. Since I suck at that.


Ill be one of the pilots i just need allitle bit more background on your character in some aspects

Divide&Conquer
07-22-2007, 04:40 PM
Well what kind of ships are you looking for, I don't mind being a pilot of one. Need like a transport ship or a fighter ship?

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 04:44 PM
Something like the Ebon Hawk. We definately need something for the survivors to travel in and meet. Considering the survivors are splattered across the galaxy. Splattered was a bad choice of words but...

Divide&Conquer
07-22-2007, 04:47 PM
Alright, I'll be the pilot of a transport ship.

How about we called it hm... StarWind? sounds good :sweat:

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 04:49 PM
Sounds great.

Divide&Conquer
07-22-2007, 05:06 PM
I got a quick questions since Luke Died Sometime between the start of the Confederation-Galactic Alliance War and the Sith-Imperial War, is this story going to be connected at all with those events?

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 05:12 PM
nope

Art Of Betrayal
07-22-2007, 05:19 PM
I updated my post with the ship and more to my history

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 05:26 PM
* mouth opens in awe of ship* WOW, that'll work.Perfect history for Rukia and Stiehl.Will get this thing started in the next 15 - 30 minutes.

Art Of Betrayal
07-22-2007, 05:28 PM
* mouth opens in awe of ship* WOW, that'll work.Perfect history for Rukia and Stiehl.Will get this thing started in the next 15 - 30 minutes.
Score

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 05:31 PM
just waiting to see if a friend of mine joins but it doesn't look like it so ,me headed to making it.

Divide&Conquer
07-22-2007, 05:33 PM
I suppose it be a good idea to show off the look of the ship I'll pilot, and give info huh, i'll update my thing as well.

Weave
07-22-2007, 05:39 PM
Am I too late?

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 05:42 PM
your not too late, come aboard

Weave
07-22-2007, 05:47 PM
Name: Taral Asedo
Species: Human
Class: Consular
Age: 24

Appearance: Dark Brown medium-length hair. Gray eyes. Average height/size. Black robes with tan leggings, no hood, no cape.

Bio: Born on Ando Prime. He was abused by his father, and blamed for his mother's death. Stowed away on a freighter headed to Coruscant where he was found on the streets by the Jedi at the age of 7. He had some force sensitivity but was considered to be a little inept. Though, he had bursts of incredible power... or phases of oneness with the Force. It's speculated that he is inept because of his restlessness and his problems with his past. He is very kind to people and is very much willing to help anyone, but he exhibits rebelliousness towards anyone who is considered to be "higher up". He sees all sentients as equal. However, he has great compassion for life and empathizes with other individuals who have toiled in their own adversity.

Lightsaber Color: Cyan
Jedi Enclave: Coruscant

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Name: Edessa Saan'ke
Species: Arkanian/Human/Miraluka mix
Class: Sentinel
Age: 23

Appearance: Has the typical Arkanian-offshoot look. Slender, average height. She has long white hair and very light blue eyes. She usually relies on seeing through the Force. However, she can see out of them for short periods of time without the Force. She wears tan robes.

Bio: Like many Arkania off-shoots, she was sent off as a miner at a very young age along with her parents. However, her family managed to escape from Arkania and settle on Corellia. Found by the Jedi at the age of 6, she is said to be very powerful in the Force. She can be very cynical and sarcastic at times but she is also timid at other times. She has faith in the core of what the Jedi teach (self-control, compassion, etc.) but she is incredulous about other aspects as well. Excellent pilot, secretly enters pod-races under the name of Tess.

Lightsaber Color: Blue
Jedi Enclave: Kamparas

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 05:51 PM
Accepted, thanks for making one of them a girl.

The RP is up. * sighs* * prays she doesn't mess it up*

By the way I haven't picked which of you will be the Sith Lord......or have I.

Divide&Conquer
07-22-2007, 05:55 PM
Just don't pick me please, I'd make a horrible Sith. The whole evil ruling the galaxy thing, couldn't do it.

Fredi
07-22-2007, 06:07 PM
Name: Fred Cruz
Species: Human
Class: Consular
Age: 29
Appearance:
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s35/Stiletto1991/Jedi_Master_Kyp_Durron_by_FalconFan.jpg
Biography: Was born in Corellia, son of a middle class. Like most of the Jediís was taken by a Jedi to study the ways of the force, achieved the knighthood and then became a Jedi master by taking a apprentice, became the head master of the Jedi Teaching Center in Corellian.
Lightsaber Color: Green
Jedi Enclave: Jedi Teaching Center in Corellian.

He is not a pilot... but he has his own ship>>
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s35/Stiletto1991/ship_sketch005_by_concept_on_mac.jpg

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 06:08 PM
Accepted.

Ferc Kast
07-22-2007, 06:09 PM
just waiting to see if a friend of mine joins but it doesn't look like it so ,me headed to making it.
Being impatient are you?

Name: Phaedrus Starkiller
Species: Human
Class: Jedi Guardian
Age: 27
Appearance: Brown hair, blue eyes. Prefers to wear a black tunic & Jedi robe.
Biography: He was born on Tatooine. A Jedi had come to Tatooine when he was 6, and brought Phaedrus before the Jedi Council on Dantooine to discuss training him. He was headstrong. He read most of the books in the Archives. He was always interested in the tale of Revan. He is curently a Jedi Knight. He would've been more than a Jedi Knight if the Jedi Order had not been scattered. He is one of the best pilots the Jedi Order has ever seen. He flies a old Jedi starfighter which looks like this: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Erik16/myfolder/thumb/set35_01.jpg_thumb.jpg (http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/Erik16/myfolder/set35_01.jpg)
Lightsaber Color: Green
Jedi Enclave: Dantooine

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 06:13 PM
..............Accepted.Now 3 pilots. Okay we have enough pilots. People can still join but will have to create a planet or mention a planet that hasn't already been mentioned.

Black Knight of Keno
07-22-2007, 06:41 PM
Name: Valentios Horellos
Species: Equine
Class: Jedi Sage Master
Age: 62
Appearance: http://images.wikia.com/starwars/images/1/10/Equine_Knight.jpg
Biography: It is unknown where the now old jedi came from. Rumour has it that one day when the Jedi of Ossus saw it a great day to train outside, he was sitting by the front door playing a soothing tune on his flute. The young boy was carried inside and identified as a part of a species thought long gone from the Galaxy. When asked where the boy came from he pointed upwards to the sky with a sly smile. Not only did he prove to be a worthy student by the teachers of Ossus, no Master could connect with the young boy until one day Grand Master Skywalker came to inspect the enclave and the two met. Finding the boy's talent worthy of noticing, Luke meditated with the boy and before his visit was over gave the boy the advice to meditate more upon himself as "You do not know who you are before looking within yourself."

This proved to be a life lesson to the boy as soon thereafter he found a master for himself. He grew to become a humble man that knew himself and his abilities throughoutly. He was only twelve when Skywalker died an he did attend his funeral with his new master before returning to Ossus and continuing his training. During his years as a respected Jedi Knight who always seemed to find a solution through peaceful means he saw the Order become proud and the Old Skool of teaching being replaced over time. He despised this change in the Order and was given the honorary title of Sage Master, which he was honored to recieve. At some point between his knighting and his Sage Master title he trained at least two padawans and had established himself on Dantooine. After he recieved the title of Sage Master, however, he left the Enclave of Dantooine and chose the Wilderness as his place until his meditations were ready and he deemed himself ready to wear such a title openly amongst Jedi. When he came out of the wilderness he had crafted himself an armor and imbued a self-carved walking stick with the force, having foreseen the shattering of the Jedi Order. However, he came too late and by the time he arrived to the Enclave the Sith had already paid it a visit. Knowing too well not to blame himself for the lack of foresight of the Masters at the Enclave he began to search for survivors
Lightsaber Color: Bright blue
Jedi Enclave: Dantooine

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 06:45 PM
I'm accepting it....we could use a Gandalf /Yoda dude. No more Masters though.

Black Knight of Keno
07-22-2007, 06:50 PM
You have too many youngsters anywho. Everyone's under 30 except starmark's other character. Also, if you wish so, I can put my character on Ossus. It's no problem to me since I haven't even started RPing yet

Empress Padme
07-22-2007, 06:52 PM
no, I have already put you in the RP, Rukia is looking for you.


Name:Tohru Lavery
Species: Miraluka
Apperance: Black hair.Tall,slender.Wears Jedi Knight robe in tan.
Class: Sentinal
Lightsaber Color: Violet
Age:35
BIO: Was brought to the acadamy that was built on Kataar.She's extremly shy but opens up around younglings.Not much is known about her.
Enclave: Kataar

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 02:25 AM
I'm saying this before the moderators do,and I know they will. We need to step up on the posts.One-liners and one sentences won't work.At least not on a regular basis.Also for some of you the * is not the same as " . If it continues I'm stepping in and editing it myself.

Also I have chosen the Sith Lord. I am also allowing you to have up to 3 characters because of this. Since the Sith Lord is one of you.By the 100 post I plan on a suprise....you guys may like, you may not.

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 03:35 AM
Thanks guys. I've been wanting to due this RP for weeks but fear kept me from it. I couldn't bear to watch it fail. The fact that it has done the exact opposite brings tears to my eyes. The fact that you guys participate and enjoy it brings me joy. * sniffles* ok , mushyness over.

Black Knight of Keno
07-23-2007, 03:46 AM
Is it just me or does every single character feel everything in the force and pretty darn accurately too for an under-30 jedi knight? Some realism wouldn't hurt, I think

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 03:51 AM
I've edited my last post, tried making it more realistic.

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 03:55 AM
My characters are not that smart. One had her leg caught in rubble the other got kidnapped by a lone Sith. Gotta make my 3rd character smarter. It's nearly 1 am in california ,darn insomnia. Well it worked out for you guys, secrets revealed. should crash soon.*yawn*

the jolee comment was directed at black

Weave
07-23-2007, 03:56 AM
Is it just me or does every single character feel everything in the force and pretty darn accurately too for an under-30 jedi knight? Some realism wouldn't hurt, I think

Well, my character's pretty inept when it comes to battle... like I said before, he has randomly destructive power... but he can't harness it cause he doesn't have any peace... And my other character, she hasn't even fought yet so...
Besides... if you think about it... we ALL want our characters to be kick-ass sith smashing Jedi Masters who can feel even an ant through the Force... halfway across the galaxy.
But I have my own little surprises that I'm going to put in. *hint *hint

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 04:00 AM
BTW noone try to save Rukia successfully. She's there until I get the Sith info up and all that. Poor Rukia,has to suffer for my limited ability to multi-task.

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 04:01 AM
are we allowed to be like a room away then a hord of sith attack us, holding us back for a long time.

or

Do we just not go after you character right away?

We'd probably need a plan and all that stuff.

Man what happened to going in guns blazing hoping you don't get shot yourself.

Black Knight of Keno
07-23-2007, 04:09 AM
you know some people have nicknamed u Jolee Bindo, not in the posts put in PMs.
I can't see an insult in that :P

Weave
07-23-2007, 04:16 AM
are we allowed to be like a room away then a hord of sith attack us, holding us back for a long time.

or

Do we just not go after you character right away?

We'd probably need a plan and all that stuff.

Man what happened to going in guns blazing hoping you don't get shot yourself.

The fact that we're snot-nosed Jedi who have to "deliberate" and "consult" before opening the can of whoop-@$$
:P

Weave
07-23-2007, 04:32 AM
man every one needs a good can of whoop-@$$, lol

That's where the Dark Side comes in comrade :lol:

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 02:33 PM
Saving Rukia's okay now.*sighs* I think I can multi-task both.Okay like I said sith will become playable characters after the 100th post.I guess that means 4 playable characters ( remind me to stock up on headache medication, I feel I may need it.)
You can make your Sith evil as can be or wanting to redeem themselves and turn to the light side . Pretty much the same requirements , minus the jedi enclave. Class will be : Maurader, Assassin, Dark Jedi Counsler. No Lords or Masters unless the Sith Lord deems you worthy.

Weave
07-23-2007, 02:44 PM
Cool... I'm just in time too... I logged on like what? 4 or 5 seconds ago...

Is a Kreia/Vegere Character... with a little Joleeness mixed in acceptable?

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 02:46 PM
yeah, also if you guys want your current jedis to become sith ,PM first so I know, they can after the 100 th post . hopefully not all your jedi will become sith.

Weave
07-23-2007, 04:03 PM
Name: Skurr
Species: Killik
Class: Sith Assassin
Age: Unknown
Appearance:

Picture of a Killik:
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Image:Killik_NEGAS.jpg

He has very bright red eyes and a darker exoskeleton than most Killiks. His lightsaber hilt resembles that of a short lightsaber. However, the length of the blade is considered to be average in length.

Biography:

Very little is known of Skurr. His species, known as the Killiks, live in the Unknown Regions and have preferred to keep to themselves ever since their defeat at the hands of Grand Master Luke Skywalker and the Galactic Alliance. It can only be surmised that he was exiled from his nest and eventually left his world. He has a natural ability to 'deaden' his mind and to also bend light around him. He 'blackens' his thoughts by encoding them in his language, which most sentients do not understand. He also exerts false impulses, speaks to you indirectly, and hides his motives. His lightsaber is also upgraded with Stygium... adding to his abilities in Steath.

Lightsaber Color: Red
Jedi Enclave: N/A

Fredi
07-23-2007, 04:08 PM
Hey guy's any help my academy is open for help.

Black Knight of Keno
07-23-2007, 04:10 PM
Was there some sort of an unannounced weird time jump in the RP? Taking Rukia has seemingly been tortured for hours. At least tht's the vibe I got from Empress Padme's last post

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 04:16 PM
We need the Jedis to gather somewhere. Since Padawan can help, I suggest they all meet there, preferably before the 100 post.

Weave
07-23-2007, 04:19 PM
I suppose we could start up a scene back at the apartment and then have some dialogue of us deciding to go to Corellia...?

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 04:22 PM
Uhh don't we still need to save our captured Jedi Friend (kinda forgot the name ><)

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 04:24 PM
thats being taken care of.... i think

Fredi
07-23-2007, 04:28 PM
I have free food at my academy..... :D ... I can send my ship to one academy right now.

Weave
07-23-2007, 04:33 PM
I have free food at my academy..... :D ... I can send my ship to one academy right now.

:lol: I think it would be easier if all of our people came to you. Sorry for keeping you ostricized from us for virtually... well, the entire story.

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 04:36 PM
ok someone does need to save rukia a.s.a.p., my writer bailed.

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 04:38 PM
Well I would, but I'm stuck in an apartment waiting for Weave to get his character back >< so we can use my ship.

Weave
07-23-2007, 04:42 PM
Well I would, but I'm stuck in an apartment waiting for Weave to get his character back >< so we can use my ship.

Well I'm waiting for the Equine Jedi Master and that other dude to talk to me...
like I said... I think we should just skip to where they're all in the apartment, trying to figure out a plan to get Rukia back. Or deciding whether or not to head over to Corellia or something...

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 04:44 PM
poor rukia.... maybe ill make a 3rd character to save her. Minor change in revealing Sith Lord. The person I chose feels it would be to soon, so some kinks r being worked out.Plus i know who will be the first victim I havent PM him yet....Maybe padwan can save rukia......* goes to take something 4 headache*

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 04:44 PM
Then please do it. I dont mind skipping. What do you think Empress

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 04:53 PM
i dont mind skipping.....

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 04:56 PM
but you would rather not skip, correct?

Weave
07-23-2007, 05:00 PM
Well... I just think it'd be more convinient... less un-needed dialogue you know? I just think that it'd be better if we had something important going on rather than frantically trying to reach the 100th post.

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 05:06 PM
Guess i'll start up the Dialog

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 05:11 PM
Rukia is very happy to here that

Fredi
07-23-2007, 06:58 PM
So I should edit the commander dialog?

Weave
07-23-2007, 07:22 PM
I think it's perfectly fine. That's just my opinion though.

Weave
07-23-2007, 09:00 PM
Sorry everyone i don't have msn IM or MSN period... But i suppose you can E-mail me if you want...

Sorry padawan :(

My girlfriend moved to Japan...

Fredi
07-23-2007, 09:36 PM
Name: Kal Kelic

Species: Quarren

Class: Jedi Weapon Maste

Age:28

Appearance:
http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s35/Stiletto1991/jedi_quarren_by_kwasny.jpg
Biography: Born In Mon Calamari from a poor family which knowing that he will not have a safe future with them they decided to give him to the order, he was strong in the force but very head strong, he managed to have a good friendship with the young master Fred Cruz and both became the leaders of the Enclave in Corellia.

Lightsaber Color: Green
Jedi Enclave: Jedi Teaching Center in Corellian

Rogue Nine
07-23-2007, 11:12 PM
Yes, in the other thread story thing we are in. Page 13 and 14 or 15 posts down look for Rouge Nine.
Hi, I'm right here.

Guys, this is not a hook-up site. This is a Star Wars message board. Turn down the hormone levels or I will do it for you.

Furthermore, this is the RP section, so please keep discussion to RP-related material only, otherwise, I will again do it for you.

I don't want to have to warn you again.

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 11:17 PM
I honestly didn't expect Toruh to be the bad guy, now I wonder who's going to get the Axe.

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 11:19 PM
Empress have you decided who gets killed yet?

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 11:31 PM
I'm so afraid to post now.Tohru works for the still secret sith lord.the person i decided to kill hasnt been on this site all day so now thats up in the air.

Divide&Conquer
07-23-2007, 11:36 PM
Well you have plenty more character to chose from to kill off.

Empress Padme
07-23-2007, 11:55 PM
I sacrificed one of my characters,i just can't kill any of you.

Weave
07-24-2007, 12:00 AM
I sacrificed one of my characters,i just can't kill any of you.

Y-Yeah I just saw that... wasn't expecting it at all...

Besides... you can kill our characters! Well mine are up for grabs... but you'd have to deal with A LOT of negativity and sad endings and emoness...
actually ummm... don't kill them off

Fredi
07-24-2007, 12:11 AM
Hey you can kill me if you want.... I really am a background character... and then Weave can lose another master :D lol

Weave
07-24-2007, 12:32 AM
Hey you can kill me if you want.... I really am a background character... and then Weave can lose another master :D lol

Cute... you have a million more where that came from I'm guessing.
:lol:

Oh and Reclaimer... sorry but you have to talk about RP stuff... "The Party and Big Brother" are cracking down on us.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 12:41 AM
laying on the floor with no arm....alone.....wheres the love ppl.I'm not killing rukia.can someone at least give her a band-aid.

Weave
07-24-2007, 12:42 AM
Geez... that's how I feel in REAL-LIFE...
:lol:
Anyways, I'll be making my 4th character soon... maybe in the morning...
Can' think of a species to us though... I don't want to use humans too many times.

Never fear... the motley crue of padawans is here... to save Rukia and battle legions of Sith... even though they haven't slept a wink.
Uh-oh.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 12:45 AM
reclaimer r u joining the The New Jedi Order ?

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 12:49 AM
I guess I should. I'll start working on a character, you give me a quick summary.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 12:57 AM
im a girl.He..err.All the jedi enclaves r destroyed.except 1 . sith r going crazy.one chopped off my arm ,had 2 rescue myself...twice.theres a sith lord but only 3 ppl know, they aint gonna tell, now 1 of my characters is killed off because im to found of the group to kill them...in real i see i would not make a good sith lord...* sighs* * collapses in front of computer*

* if certain members dont post after a week they r considered NPC till they come back or tell me they quit. Personally I will put their characters in a coma until they post. I have no idea if i have the power 2 do that but....if you don't play ....and you aint on some street corner in an actual coma...i really dont know what to do.

Weave
07-24-2007, 01:00 AM
im a girl.He..err.All the jedi enclaves r destroyed.except 1 . sith r going crazy.one chopped off my arm ,had 2 rescue myself...twice.theres a sith lord but only 3 ppl know, they aint gonna tell, now 1 of my characters is killed off because im to found of the group to kill them...in real i see i would not make a good sith lord...* sighs* * collapses in front of computer*

And she's a sucker for nice PMs hehehe :lol:

whew... that was a good one... but then again, I'm comic relief... you know, the dude that comes up with stupid comments to make everyone laugh... or look at me in a weird way :lol:

Ahhh don't worry about it Empress... you're doing good :D

Wait a second... are my jokes still funny or are they wearing thin?

Weave
07-24-2007, 01:08 AM
Well... I have three puppets that i pull the strings to.
Human dude who kinda reminds me of atton.
Arkanian off-shoot who looks like Jarael (I never mentioned that did i?)
And a Killik Sith who's going to mow down loads of Jedi.

ARE MY STOOPID JOKES STILL FUNNY!?!? I nEeD To KnoW

All-in-All Reclaimer... we're the best group ever... we have loads of fun, and we're (Dare I say it for the 3rd time) The best bunch of angst peas in a pod.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 01:16 AM
i have another jedi coming a female human named Corsett Cavvar.More info on her in a couple hours.if u dont hear from its cause i passed out on the floor due to lack of sleep and stress.im on california time.

Corsett will be a jedi guardian who loves battle ,picture jessica alba.thats who she looks like.rukia looks like mandy moore,sort of.

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 01:21 AM
Name: Ryu
Species: Human
Class: Grey Jedi
Age: 30
Appearance: http://www.tsurugi.co.uk/ryu.png

Biography: Ryu was born into a wealthy family on Coruscant. He was spoiled from birth and throughout his early years. As he aged though, so did his parents wealth, and soon they went broke. Ryu's father couldn't find work anywhere, and his mother could only get a job as a waitress. Ryu's parents couldn't afford to pay for Ryu's schooling either.

While exploring the depths of Coruscant, Ryu found what was an old Yuuzhan Vong encampment. As he serched the camp, he stumbled upon an old man named Murloc. Murloc was an old Jedi from years ago, and his time to pass on was coming soon, so he entrusted Ryu with a Holocron filled with information on the Jedi's teachings and the Force. Before he left, the old man told Ryu he had sensed the Force in Ryu, and that he would one day become a Jedi himself. Ryu was determined more than ever to learn the ways of the Force.

When Ryu turned 18, he had already progressed much in the Force. He could already use many Force powers many couldn't at his age, and he had begun construction on a lightsaber. For his final lightsaber part, he need a crystal from Ilum. Ryu left for Ilum and retrieved a crystal; a rare silver crystal. He added it to his saber, and thus completing it.

Ryu returned home to Coruscant, only to find his home in shambles. He found his mother dead, and his father close to death. In his father's last dying breaths, he told Ryu of his killers; Assassins of the Sith. Ryu vowed to avenge his parents death, and soon disappeared into the Coruscant underground for years.

During his years, Ryu took to learning the techniques of the Sith Assassin. He believed to kill one, he must be one. Ryu returned to the abandoned village and searched for any tools to help his training. During the search he found another holocron, this one was Sith though. As Ryu inspected the holocron, he deemed it thousands of years old. When he activated it, his thoughts were confirmed; the last recorded date was 3950 BBY.

The Sith on the holocron wore a mask, and referred to himself as Revan. He had mastered the art of the Sith Assassin, and made this holocron as reference to his achievement and for others to use. Ryu spent years learning from this holocron, and eventually mastered the art himself.

Ryu moved on to the Jedi holocron, learning more ways of the Force and lightsaber techniques. He practiced on the beasts of Coruscants and ventured to the surface every so often. Soon, after years of solitude, he emerged from the depths changed. Ryu boarded a frieghter off to assist a group of Jedi he heard had been sent on a hard mission. Feeling that they may lead him to his killers, Ryu goes off to join this group of Jedi...

Lightsaber Color: Silver
Jedi Enclave: n/a

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 01:35 AM
Thanks guys. I didn't want him to be too uber.

I still need approval from Empress though...

Weave
07-24-2007, 01:48 AM
Empress'll do it... she's kick-@$$ awesome like that... :lol:

I asked her if she accepted a Vergere/Kreia type character and she said yeah...

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 01:49 AM
She better, or I'll make him a Sith Lord.

Weave
07-24-2007, 01:51 AM
Actually... Sith Assassin... she doesn't let ANYONE get the rank of Sith Lord... unless they are deemed worthy.

@Padawan: I don't sleep :devsmoke:

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 01:52 AM
Well, seeing as he has training as a Sith Assassin. Yep.

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 02:01 AM
Damn, well I guess I'll make my super sweet entrance tomorrow then, and save you all.

Where are you guys by the way? Some type of enclave?

Weave
07-24-2007, 02:04 AM
Yeah... On Corellia... you uh... may want to read the story from page two to get an idea of where we're at and why we're there.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 02:46 AM
I'm quite frankly scared. accepted Reclaimer.

Name: Corsett Cavvar
Age:26
Lightsaber: viridion
Appearance:White hair with a black streak.Wears black tank top and sweatpants
Class:Guardian
BIO: Grew up on Telos.Is a rebel.She's a wild child with a heart of gold.She's put up with because she don't have mean bone in her body and can use a lightsaber like no other at the Telos Acadamy.
Species:Human
Enclave:telos
******************************

Mistress Vala
Age:unknown
Species:human
Lightsaber:red
Class:Assassin
BIO: Is the New Sith Lord's most trusted.Nothing goes by him that she doesn't see first.

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 02:54 AM
Scared of what? My character?

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 03:12 AM
thats a jedi I would not get on the bad side of.hope your characters on my side reclaimer.just came to post and introduce my nu characters, now maybe my fragile mind can rest .

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 03:20 AM
Lol, that's true, but he's a Grey Jedi, so he's really not with anyone, but for the sake of the RP, he'll be working with you guys.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 03:24 AM
YAY , though I do have a 2 good characters and 1 bad characters, so either way one of my characters will be on your side

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 03:26 AM
I don't really plan on going Sith, so staying Grey is good. I also have access to both sides of the Force. =]

Black Knight of Keno
07-24-2007, 04:28 AM
Taking you have managed to post more than a hundred posts since the wee hours of the night when I went to sleep in my lovely bed and I am not in the mood to read it all by far, you can count me pretty much out of the RP.

And no offence but some of your writing skills depend too much on sudden plot twists, godmoding and character controlling. No offence, but rather constructive criticism. I was like that back in 2003-04.

Goodbye to the RP, I might say

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 06:34 AM
Look at this I go to bed and alot of stuff happens. I'm now going to be really up set. Drama ppl. And welcome aboard reclaimer.

Rogue Nine
07-24-2007, 10:42 AM
I have pruned this thread of most of the off-topic nonsense.

Let me make a few things crystal clear:
If it does not pertain to the RP directly, do NOT post. This is a forum, not an instant messenger chat, so do not use it as such.
Secondly, this is NOT an internet hookup site, so keep stupid flirty comments out of your posts, both in the RP and OOC. Empress Padme, this is directed at you moreso than anyone else. Your penchant for calling attention to yourself is rather pathetic and incredibly juvenile.
Thirdly, the quality of the RP really needs to be stepped up, as it not only tends to degenerate into one-liners, but also makes no bloody sense at all. Fix it fast and fix it soon, or else I will fix it myself. Permanently.

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 11:21 AM
Alright tell you all what I'll do. When I get home from work. I'm going to read threw the story and take down notes of this that we need to work on, and fix so improve the quality of our story. When I've fineshed I'll post it here so we can talk about it and work on it.

Empress Padme
07-24-2007, 02:06 PM
Sorry but this is shutting down. I feel in my defense that If someone had a problem with me personally they should have had the respect to tell me via private message. To tell another member that they are juvinelle and pathetic were all the members could see is just wrong and calling someone pathetic is just cruel.I'm leaving Lucas Forums, to be told what was said above and not in a PM drove me to tears. I have pushed myself to into panic attacks trying to make this RP work because it means so much to me and to have made great friends with some of the people who signed up and then to be called pathetic in front of them. It should have been dealt with in a PM. So I'm out of all of this. Thank you to Padawan,Darth Balatro,Divide&Conquer,Weave ,you guys tried so hard ,I'm sorry.

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 02:09 PM
It's not your fault. Some people just don't have much for common sense. And honestly if you needed help, could have told me. I would have been glade to help you out so you didn't have panic attacks. I hope we do get to talk again, but until them I will miss ya. It was great getting to know you and becoming friends.

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 02:16 PM
I'm confused.

What happened? If need be, PM me the details.

Poor Ryu...

anakin34
07-24-2007, 02:21 PM
this is cool i think i'll join

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 02:23 PM
this is cool i think i'll join

Uh, the thread starter ended it.

Rogue Nine
07-24-2007, 02:51 PM
Sorry but this is shutting down. I feel in my defense that If someone had a problem with me personally they should have had the respect to tell me via private message. To tell another member that they are juvinelle and pathetic were all the members could see is just wrong and calling someone pathetic is just cruel.I'm leaving Lucas Forums, to be told what was said above and not in a PM drove me to tears.
Don't expect me to coddle you, not after you used the forums as a dating/flirting chatroom and as well as an outlet for your nigh-pornographic fantasies. These are far more egregious offenses than being called out for attention seeking.

If you want to call attention to yourself and be fawned over by hormonal teenagers, do it elsewhere.

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 03:00 PM
Alright, every one just breath. Find that peaceful center.

Now, yes we did go over board with the joking around and stuff. And I apologize for that. Rules are set for a reason and should be followed I also understand. And being a moderator isn't easy because you have to watch over the actions of each member.

Now...

The situation that occurred on this thread was just purely joking around. And the situation could have been handled differently. In stead of insults and putting people down, try coming up with something that make the person go ok, so that was wrong and I'll fix it. Some times things have to be looked at carefully.

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 03:05 PM
Not to be an ass, but...

I agree with Rogue Nine. The posts were very extreme in content, and it was turning into something I'd find in a J.D Robb novel. Rogue Nine is also a site administrator, and has every right to end something he/she feels is not appropriate for this forum.

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 03:08 PM
I'm not saying Rouge Nine was wrong putting an end to the extreme content being discussed, and I apolgize if it seems like that. But couldn't there have been a better way to go about it, then insulting some one.

Rogue Nine
07-24-2007, 03:14 PM
Like I said, I do not coddle people who test the rules. If you do something stupid, I will call you on it.

This is not up for further discussion. Either get this RP back on track, or I will shut it down.

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 03:27 PM
well i've read over some of the thread for the RP where the story is. This is what I've found. Not like it really matters

-Divide&Conquer-Some out of story line posts

-Art of Betrayal- Avoid using one line posts. Express emotion, thoughts, or even events going on with the character.

-Weave- First post page two needs to be edited. The survivors are on Coruscant not Dantooine. Also Fifth Post on page two need to be longer.

-Empress Padme- Fourth post page two need to also be longer.

thats what i've gotten so far.

Reclaimer
07-24-2007, 03:38 PM
well i've read over some of the thread for the RP where the story is. This is what I've found. Now like it really matters

-Divide&Conquer-Some out of story line posts

-Art of Betrayal- Avoid using one line posts. Express emotion, thoughts, or even events going on with the character.

-Weave- First post page two needs to be edited. The survivors are on Coruscant not Dantooine. Also Fifth Post on page two need to be longer.

-Empress Padme- Fourth post page two need to also be longer.

thats what i've gotten so far.

What about me? I must be sucky at something...

Divide&Conquer
07-24-2007, 03:40 PM
Haven't gotten that far yet. I'm still working on it however. But like I said, I don't think it will really matter.

Weave
07-25-2007, 12:57 AM
Sorry, I've been off most of the day... it seems our group has been torn and now lies in shambles in my absence :(
If I may... I think this situation we're in hasn't been handled very well... peaceful negotiation was possible... but everyone instead resorted to hostility... whatever though... can't change anything now...
I'm not trying to draw sympathy to myself because quite frankly, I don't need to be coddled. Thank you Divide and Conquer for your imput... on my posts :D

As for my comic dialogue in this certain thread... I admit that it was completely not-needed... and quite immature (although... I was being sarcastic the ENTIRE time)...

As for our story... I do happen to agree with Rogue Nine... Why is it that hyperspace travel takes two seconds? That's my only problem though... developing or characters more would be good too... but I happen to like our story for the most part.

Other than that... single posts is something I have been trying to avoid for the most part...

Reclaimer
07-25-2007, 09:34 AM
Yeah.

Maybe we can start a new RP?

Divide&Conquer
07-25-2007, 10:43 AM
We could, but some one will have to start it.

Reclaimer
07-25-2007, 03:06 PM
Who wants to start it then?

Darth Kalverys
07-27-2007, 11:58 AM
The thread master is gone... I don't think you can.