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Burnseyy
06-15-2008, 03:50 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/288pq2x.jpg

I hope it's big enough to see the writing.
Haven't got photoshop yet, so the shading and that isn't too good.
but soon, i will. [:

hope you enjoy!

Fredi
06-15-2008, 05:29 PM
Nice!... Revan is a woman in the comic right? ... Still nice!:)

Construct
06-15-2008, 05:42 PM
I like this...I like the style and even though it's manga-ish, it's awersome!

Rev7
06-15-2008, 05:48 PM
Not bad at all Burnseyy. Much better than I can draw. Keep up the good work!

Burnseyy
06-15-2008, 06:59 PM
thank you everyone!
updates will be up soon hopefully. [:
and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol

Arcesious
06-15-2008, 07:13 PM
You are quite the artist... :)

Quanon
06-16-2008, 05:14 PM
thank you everyone!
updates will be up soon hopefully. [:
and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol

Looks great none the less, oh do you got a script allready ?
My tries at comics always end at page 15 or something :lol:, cause I get bogged down in having no real plot points what so ever :p

But the art is real nice, show us some more :drool:

Inyri
06-16-2008, 05:19 PM
Very nice comic. :)

My only real suggestion is try to keep the text in the text bubble, and maybe more centered. Then it'll be great!

Burnseyy
06-17-2008, 08:51 AM
Looks great none the less, oh do you got a script allready ?

yer, but it only oes up to page 3, so far. i'm gonna be working on it [:


My only real suggestion is try to keep the text in the text bubble, and maybe more centered. Then it'll be great!

i tried to centre it, but that's the best i could do, since there was no centre option on Comic Life lol
thanks though. [:

The_Catto
07-10-2008, 09:39 AM
Nice work there Burnseyy. Great artisticsism! (Heh, I'm MAKING that a word! :P)
Hope to see some more of it soon??

TheExile
07-10-2008, 10:23 AM
Nice job!!!

bally3000
08-07-2008, 07:14 PM
i had no idea u did a comic strip this is awsome =]

Phantom Knight
08-08-2008, 09:39 AM
Its nice to see something different in the CEC. Keep it up.

Rabish Bini
08-09-2008, 08:38 AM
Good work, very well drawn, :thumbsup:
(Geez, I really use :thumbsup: that smilie alot)

HIGH ON PIE 14
08-14-2008, 12:52 PM
thank you everyone!
updates will be up soon hopefully. [:
and be nice, this is my first attempt at a comic lol


And a great one it is. Donīt know how Iīm just seeing this now :confused:, but whatever. I like your comic. Not only did you draw it well, but it has that real comic feel to it, you know. Not just two people in a box with speech bubbles...like the perspectives - Revan in the third box and how in the last one, Revan is speaking but we see Malak...:^: I do love your art Burnseyy!

-HOP