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Rabish Bini
04-07-2009, 01:18 AM
Well, I finally decided to make a thread for my lyrics/poetry, but mainly lyrics, and a later date I'll probably put a guitar tune to 'em. Anyways, it starts out with a heartfelt one. Enjoy! :)

A Song For Stacey

I spend my nights
Dreamin' about you
I spend my days
Thinking about you

To the whispering wind
On the hurt inside

If you notice me
If you love me

I've opened my heart
And poured out my love
Just to be stopped by
Forces above

Am I living this way
Don't I stray away

My life
Is hell without you
But I'll
Make it through

As God is my witness
And Stan knows
The Darkness won't last
The light shall grow
And I'll be there...

For you to come home
'Til the dead of night

That you will come home
That you'll come home soon

I've opened my heart
And poured out my love
Just to be stopped by
Forces above
And I'll be there...

I spend my nights
Dreamin' about you
I spend my days
Thinking about you
And I'll be there

I'll be there...

04-07-2009, 01:35 AM
Ballad style!
Nice one Bini! I like.

In a band yet, man? Get some muZAK to those lyrics!

Rabish Bini
04-07-2009, 06:25 AM

Nah, not in a band yet, I really cbf at the moment, and I'm still saving for an electric, so it's acoustic music for me for now, which is nowhere near a bad thing.

04-07-2009, 06:35 AM
Hell no. Sometimes I just lay my electric down and jam out to Acoustic for a couple of hours. It's one of the best things to do! If I'm writing a song, I play on Acoustic first.
Just like what Chris Cheney has once said (and this is my philosophy as well!): "Why plug in an electric and make a sh*t song even LOUDER???"

What type of acoustic do you have?

Rabish Bini
04-09-2009, 07:46 AM
Another song, I sorta envisaged this one to be a metal song, and a dark song at that, sucks for me having an acoustic then :xp: ah well, Enjoy!

Satan's Cry

I awoke this morning
Sweating from fear
Listened to evil calling
Death I could hear
Thought it was a warning
Maybe the end was near
The rain outside was puring
My path was clear

I went outside, into the rain
Started feeling, feeling insane
Is this real
Or some kind of hell?
It drew near
The Four Horsemen were hear

Blood fell down
From the sky
Men were deafened
By Satan's Cry

The city burned
Everyone perished
Sent to hell
With everything they cherished

They sky turned red
As people died
Faces turned purple
Babies cried
Satans call was
Hard to miss
For most
Death is bliss!

Pestilence came first
Stormed through Hells Gates
For blood it thirst
Doom he creates

Was was next
Brawling it released
Came to Earth
To abolish Peace

Then came famine
And people starved
Mounds of bodies
Famine carved

Then I saw
The serpent laughing
The worst is here
And the body count's climbing

Death came out
And took control
Searing bodies
That looked like coal
Evils arrows
Never missed
And for all
Death is bliss!

Must it end
Did we not repent
Will this not halt
It must've been our fault

And so it goes on
Evil wins
Christ never came
So the serpent grins
Masses of bodies
Lying in pain
Hordes of evil
Being humanity's bane

And so I sit here
Writing this song
From a humans perspective
I can do no wrong
And while I smile
At humanity's grief
Eternal torture
With no bliss

Death is bliss...

04-16-2009, 09:37 PM
Hellz to the yeah, Bini! Nice work.
The structure is good, and I can even imagine an awesome sounding riff to that, but I'll leave that part to you, lol.

Has the makings of a great metal song indeed.

It's funny too cause when I was reading it, "The Four Horsemen" - Metallica came on the playlist and I just read the line you wrote and I was like ... "Woah ... That was coooool!!!!" Haha.

Great work.
Post some freakin more!


Rabish Bini
04-20-2009, 12:47 AM
Thanks BFA. :)

The inspiration for the song just so happened to come from "The Four Horsemen"