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Mandalore The Shadow
05-23-2009, 08:46 PM
Seven years after the Mandalorian Wars

My story takes plaCe

CommanderQ
05-23-2009, 08:49 PM
Well, I think it's pretty good so far, you may want to spread the first big paragraph into a few smaller ones, but that's just me:D

So, how much more is planned, when will it come!?:D

Mandalore The Shadow
05-23-2009, 08:52 PM
i dont know where to post it and no it is kind of spontanious no plans

Bee Hoon
06-01-2009, 04:05 AM
Mandalore The Shadow, would you like me to move it to the Coruscant Entertainment Centre? That's where we usually post fanfics. (You'll have to edit the story back in though)