View Full Version : Magical Strike Force S

06-19-2009, 03:13 PM
NOTE.- (This Story borrows elements from a famous anime called Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha, but in order to expand on the story further I have simply taken some of the elements and transformed it into a unique original story. Many things in this RP will have no relation to said anime because I want every participant to create their own spells and use their imagination too not just adhere to the existing elements of that anime. If you want to participate and don't know the anime, it's fine, but if you can look it up, specially the Third season called StrikerS, then you'll get an idea of what I'm aiming for.)

Dimensions, through time and space the Federation of Time and Space Security has watched over for the safety of the Multiverse. Magical forces of the FTSS have kept balance for over a hundred years. Now this balance is threatened.

Strike Force 10 has been decimated. Not a single unit member survived.

Their mission was clear. The Extraction and Safety of Federation officials from the Planet Sigmunde in Multiverse Sigma. The unit was decimated by a rogue group of Mages. However due to their efforts all Federation Officials were saved and extracted.

The Elite Division Nine has been assigned to the case. There are also reports of ancient artifacts resonating in multiple areas of the multiverse.

The Purpose of Division Nine is simple, to locate, secure and protect ancient magical artifacts and also to prevent the use of these artifacts through team effort.

You are now a cadet of the Elite Division Nine. Your Magical power is beyond that of an ordinary Mage, and your aptitude tests are off the charts, this is the reason why you were hand picked by the Division. The division is led by Commander Terra Carrington, with Captains Illya Terranova and Juno Aika.

You are now part of Forward Team Cobalt. You have recieved a Magical device during your basic training. This device when in standby mode can take the shape of anything, be it a jewel, card, book, headband, or basic jewelry. When activated in combat, the device will take the form of the weapon that the user gave it when he first activated it be it a gun, staff, sword, etc. The device also provides the user with a magical armor, the user when first activating it has to picture his armor very clearly in his mind, these armors go from light fabrics like dresses to knight armors, even though dresses or suits may look not as tough as an armor they have the same resistance as a fortified suit of armor, the only aspect that changes is the physical look as it adjusts to the user's preference in clothing.

The devices also have power limits depending on the user's rank or mage standing. The maximum mage rank attainable is SS which is pretty much unleashed and it's reserved to the Federation's highest officials and it needs permission to be activated. The highest normal mage rank that can be achieved is S. All cadets are B rank mages and upon their graduation they become A rank. The highest Mage rank attainable for Middle Rank Officers is AA.

When into the Division, you are expected to work as a team. There are several positions in a team, mostly consisting of four. The Two Close Quarters Specialists, The Mid-Ranged Combat Specialist and the Support Magic Specialist.

All cadets are broken into teams of four. Right now Division Nine has recruited only a handful of trainees. You, are one of them.


You all know these:
-No Godmodding
-No taking huge plot decisions without consulting me first.
-No offensive language except if it is in character.
-No one liner posts, try to detail your characters actions even if he doesn't have much to say, remember that body movements, and emotions can be conveyed through words.
-There will only be one character for person unless I state otherwise.

Character Sheet
Appearence: (Pictures are better, if you have anime ones are best since this is an anime type RP)
Device Name: (You have to name your device which in turn gives you your weapon and armor. In order to use your device and call upon your armor and weapon, you must say "Device name, setup", and it will activate after responding with "Stand by, Ready", Also say what the device looks like when not in weapon mode.)
Specialty: (Close Quarters, Mid-Range or Support Magic)
Special Attacks: (These are the signature magic spells of your character performed with the device's help. Just so you know, your device is alive in a way, it can communicate with you in some degree, it can understand your words though it may not always reply, think of it as a program. After you call your special move's name, your device will say something around the sort of: "Insert special attack name, stand by" as it readies the attack and then fires)
Biography: (Explain where you come from, what planet were you born. If you were born on Earth state that you come from Unregulated Planet #97)

Click here to learn more from the Devices and se an example. (http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3519/nanohafatedevices.jpg)

Check this youtube video to see what the show Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha is like for reference. (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w40AKkEdEmk&feature=fvst)

Using severe amounts of magical power cause great stress in one's body so make sure your characters don't overdo it too much otherwise they will have to suffer a bit.

Every mage has a linker core inside of him, it's what allows him/her to use magic. Whenever you hear this term you will know about it.

Here's my character so you can have an idea.
Character Sheet
Name: Shana Takeuchi
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Appearence: Like the girl in my sig, but instead of a sword she carries a Staff.
Device Name: Queen's Heart, it looks like a pendant when not in use.
Specialty: Mid-Range Attacks
Special Attacks:
Destiny Cannon
Star Dust
Eager Cleaver
And in the Excellion Form(Advanced form, you all have one but you must activate it, you can call the form whatever you like but you must say "Name of form, Activate")
Excellion Buster
Nova Cannon
Destiny Cannon Advanced
Biography: Born on Unregulated Planet #97, Shana is a japanese girl with little background as a mage. Due to an incident with a former Strike Force member she was granted the device Queen's Heart which she used to protect herself and the officer out of instinct. She was recruited into the Federation at age 10 and has been with the Task Force ever since. Due to her service record and high marks on tests she was hand picked by Captain Terranova to serve under her squad. She's been under training regime for the past 2 months.

06-19-2009, 09:16 PM
Well, this looks like fun, I haven't much experience in this type of RP, so bear with me, I'll get the hang of it:D Here's the character:D

Name: Akira Takahata

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearance: {Sorry, I don't have any pics:( } Akira usually wears standard gray military coveralls. He is always prepared, as he always wears his black utility belt, which is equipped with numerous weapons, a small amount of ammunition, a small first-aid kit, and a supply ration. He wears standard black combat boots, with a small knife tucked onto the side of his right boot. He wears a gray military cap which is often doffed to the side. He has jet-black hair, brown eyes, and is 6 foot in height. Akira has sharp facial features, and small scar that runs close to his right eye.

Device Name: New Dawn, the main piece on top is built in the image of a black colored eagle.

Speciality: Close-quarters combat

Special Attacks:
Dark Shockwave
Disciplinary Action
Last Resort{a suicidal explosion!!!!:D}
Final Strike {a combination of the others}
He can advance these attacks by going into his form, Omega.
Power Claws {climbing and attack claws come from his gloves}
Biography: Akira was born on Unregulated Planet 97# to a military family in Japan's quadrant of the planet. At the age of 9, in order to please his militaristic and rigid father, he made it into a Federation Military Academy. He proved extremeley adept in nearly all of his classes, but do to a tough early life, his social ability was less then average, often getting into fights or being shunned by his fellow classmates. From there, he formed a cold state-of-mind, caring little for others, which nearly ended his career after a training incident at age 14. He still maintains that state-of-mind, but tries his best to change it, trying to get to know his fellow comrades-in-arms. For the past 3 years, that has not been met successfully...yet. He still maintained his status as Elite, and is currently undergoing advanced training under a tough as nails soldier named Sergeant Yamamoto. His training is near complete, and Akira hopes for a transfer to one of the Federations Elite units.

06-20-2009, 05:14 PM
Your character is pretty good and I look forward to starting this RP and work together :D let's just wait for some more peeps, please guys it'll be fun I promise! :D

06-22-2009, 05:14 AM
I havent seen Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha :$ is that a problem?

Name: Wolf Krimson
Age: 26
Appearance: http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_BXA63B_l9P4/R-78xbHUd6I/AAAAAAAAAEE/0Kq12t2Fjow/S220/AnimeGuy.jpg
Device Name: Valefor's Darkness (A moon stone pendant chained to his Revolver)
Special Attacks:
- Dark Bomb
- Dark Fist
- Blade Surge (When Device is activated, Krimson's Sword becomes infused with Dark Psi energy, enhancing its stregth and speed)
- Body Surge (Much like Blade Surge, except inflaming Krimson's entire body with Dark Psi Energy. Increases Strength and Speed, but it has its limits: he can only use it once during battle)
- Malakahn (A concentrated beam of dark Psionic Energy, unleashed from Krimson's hands)
- Form: Fenrir
(in Fenrir form)
- Energy Drain
- Dark Wave
- Rising Phoenix (When Krimson plants his palm to the ground, energy-based projectiles fire from beneath the soil in the battle field)
- Malakahn Nova (An extremely powerful version of the original Malakahn attack. He can only use it once in battle, and after he does, reverts back to his normal form)

Biography: Wolf Krimson origninated from the war-torn planet Sol, from which most of his blood relatives were killed. After his planet was destroyed, he was recruited by FTSS and served three years of cadetship. For unknown reasons, he resigned and worked as a Mercenary - keeping the Device he has been given to aid him during missions. Having been recently assigned on a mission to the Sigma system. Due to engine failure, he and his crew have now crash landed on the Planet Sigmunde. He is the remaining suvivor of the entire crew - save for the Maitenance HoverBot "Loey".

06-22-2009, 10:19 AM
it isn't a problem, I have put up the intro to the show in my first post it should give you an idea of what I'm aiming for :D

Chevron 7 locke
06-25-2009, 07:45 PM
((So...you promise it'll be fun? :D))

Name: Kai Gorita

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearence: http://www.lucasforums.com/album.php?albumid=384&pictureid=3453

Device Name: Dark Guardian, a black Crescant moon shaped pendant that is chained to his wrist
Specialty: Close Quarters/Mid-range

Special Attacks:
Sword Empower: Empowers his sword with dark energy.
Sword Enhance: Kai is able to make his sword much lighter and is thus able to pull off much more complicated attacks with it.
Dark Aura: Kai infuses his body with dark energy that allows him to move much faster and jump much higher then usual. This attack is usually used in conjunction with his Sword enhance ability.
Shadow Sword Slice: Kai gathers energy into his sword and then swings it rapidly to release the energy onto an attacker.
Infinity shot. (Not learned yet.) Kai's sword shifts into a cannon with two handles on it that can fire a rapid amount of magical energy at a target in a short amount of time.

Form: Berserker

Dark Lightning: Brings down a torrent of black lightning down on a group of attackers
Rememberance of Hizuni. (Not learned yet.) Kai's pendant turns into a large cannon that fires a massive burst of magical energy at a target. However, if Kai is low on magic it takes a small portion of his life force and his remaining magic to fire it.
Final Explosion: Kai takes himself, and everything within a hundred feet of him out with him in a powerful suicide attack.
Dark Cannon (Not even close to being learned yet.) After watching Shana's destiny cannon in action Kai is now attempting to find a way to create a similar attack only much more powerful.

Biography: Kai was born on a small planet known as Unregulated Planet number 72. Eight years after he was born, his planet came under attack by an unknown species and all the colonists were killed in the battle with the exception of Kai who lived alone there for nine years.

Kai was recruted by the Federation after they sent someone to check the planet for survivors and was assigned to Elite Division 9.

Kai doesn't show much emotion and rarely smiles.

In his Berserker form he can shrug off small power attacks and is much faster, however, the injuries still remain after he drops out of Berserker form and then they begin to take their toll on him. When in Berserker form, his eyes turn a dark red and his hair drops down to his waist.

Short term history: Before embarking on the transport Kai used his Berserker form in a training duel and as a result lost control and destroyed the training area. The remains of his Berserker form have not left his system yet and as a result he is very quick to attack or to fight back if attacked, his eyes also randomly flash red for a short while after use of Berserker form.

06-25-2009, 09:24 PM
Name: Tasagore Tenchi (Tasa for short)
Age: 30
Gender: Male
Appearance: http://www.animeviewer.net/samurai-deeper-kyo-21-the-hellish-mibu-castle
Device name: Kageyume, a small neckless he wears around his neck, just a strand of string with some beads and a small 'x' shape on it.
Specialty: Close quarters
Special attacks:
Yoru (person he hits falls asleep)
Kage (Person becomes blind, for a while or permanently)
Tsubasa ( He increases his speak for a bit)
Shinjitsu ( A torture technique)
Form: Samurai
Final Strike ( A quick move, generally takes down weaker opponents)
Honor in Death ( Before Tasa would die, he gains the ability to send his weapon out and kill as many foes as possible)
Biography: Tasagara grew up in a backwater planet, the only son of a drunkerd father and a naive mother. He tried to disproved the numbers, which said he'd be a druggy and a gangsterm but failed. By the time he was 18, he had a record and was waiting for teh end of his sentence to kick in. One day, a military general came in, he told him that he could get out, now, if he joined with a group of soldiers. Heck, Tasa knew how to kill, it would be easy. Or so he thought.

06-26-2009, 02:25 PM
Hey there, Shana.

I'd love to join, but I don't know what it's about...

06-26-2009, 02:34 PM
I will send you a pm if you'd like with some details so you can get an idea of what it's like as well as some links to reference material ;)

06-26-2009, 02:41 PM
Thanks, Shana. And I don't believe we ever met. My name's SkywalkerRules. Nice to meet you.

06-26-2009, 03:30 PM
Same to you SkywalkerRules, hope you join and have fun with us :D

06-26-2009, 04:14 PM
Thank you. :)

07-02-2009, 10:05 AM
Oooh, quick question!

I'm thinking of modifying my character profile to "suit" his person. Does he HAVE to be a cadet for the Federation? Cause I was thinking about making him a War Veteran who used to work under the Fed. Can I do that? It wont change any part of the plot, promise!

07-02-2009, 11:45 AM
All Forward unit members are cadets yes. The best of the cadets. A war veteran being there and having to follow orders from the team captain which is my character wouldn't be very pleased, and also being a war veteran he'd have to be a higher ranking officer which in turn wouldn't work because he'd be with newbies. He'd have to be higher in the Division and not a forward. And the only members of the Unit who are higher are both Captains and the Commander.

07-03-2009, 04:19 AM
All Forward unit members are cadets yes. The best of the cadets. A war veteran being there and having to follow orders from the team captain which is my character wouldn't be very pleased, and also being a war veteran he'd have to be a higher ranking officer which in turn wouldn't work because he'd be with newbies. He'd have to be higher in the Division and not a forward. And the only members of the Unit who are higher are both Captains and the Commander.

Ok, how about just a guy who used to work for the federation? He used to be a cadet - hence why he has a device. No special rank or anything. He can meet up with the team later on. Can I do that?

07-03-2009, 09:16 AM
Yeah sure , you can do that :D

07-03-2009, 09:41 AM
Yeah sure , you can do that :D

Thank you :D

EDIT: OK, all done. See you on the Planet Sigmunde

07-03-2009, 02:34 PM
Phantom, Sergeant Yamamoto went to pick you up at Sigmunde so you can roleplay your arrival to the Division's HQ, I will welcome you with the Captains. :D

07-03-2009, 07:52 PM
Shana, would it be possible if Sergeant Yamamoto became one of my characters?:D

07-03-2009, 08:07 PM
Well sure I guess so, just remember he has no authority within Division Nine because he's not a member, he's with the military ground forces. ;)

07-20-2009, 09:33 PM
Made up my mind. But I need you guys' help. What do you guys think I should be? Something that's easy for me and that fits me.

07-22-2009, 01:33 AM
I don't know, what kind of characters do you mostly like to play?

07-23-2009, 04:26 PM
I don't know, what kind of characters do you mostly like to play?

Well, I never played in a military RP before. How 'bout a trainee or cadet?

Chevron 7 locke
07-23-2009, 04:50 PM
The rank of all the characters is currently Cadet. The only two Captains are under Shana's control. :D

07-23-2009, 09:59 PM
As Chevron said, you are a trainee, so don't worry. If you need any pointers feel free to ask, just read up the character sheets of everyone so you can get an idea of what the characters are like :D

07-24-2009, 09:00 AM
As Chevron said, you are a trainee, so don't worry. If you need any pointers feel free to ask, just read up the character sheets of everyone so you can get an idea of what the characters are like :D

I also happen to be playing as a mercenary :) so you can go that road too if you wanted.

We're all on Planet Sigmund. Your character could always meet us there, and somehow join the team...

07-24-2009, 03:26 PM
I also happen to be playing as a mercenary :) so you can go that road too if you wanted.

We're all on Planet Sigmund. Your character could always meet us there, and somehow join the team...

Okay then! Thanks, guys! I'll post my CS right way. :D

07-24-2009, 04:12 PM
Name: Reina Wu
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Appearence: http://api.ning.com/files/-GGJ7SiSWqeEFzFeLFBWoqSXDNEC2iUsWpZC1DcC0whUrJvEKIT g0LMTmdSxa*OwdbtiqbpFk*1N7wA1FWw1gGPofCeScFEP/anime_dark_gothic_girl__019.jpg
Device Name: Bloody Iris, it's the small red jewel that's tied on her right wrist. (See pic)
Specialty: Close Quarters
Special Attacks:
- Shadow Wolf (A black shadowy wolf is formed, and runs towards the enemy, attacking them.)
- Raven Strike (When she raises her arms, a dozen of shadowy ravens rise from the ground, attacks the opponent)
- Bloody Rage (When her eyes glow crimson red, she attacks the opponent with rage)
- Nothingness (A black mist covering the enemy, so that escape can be made.)
Biography: Not much is said about Reina's past, only thing is that she was born on the Unregulated Planet #97. There, she was raised in a tough neighborhood and that she learned many things from her trusty mentor. Now, she is a young explorer, looking for a job and adventure.

Oh, I'm totally gonna screw up...

07-24-2009, 06:06 PM
Here's my character:

Name: Xi Ming

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Appearence: (no picture, unfortunately) Ming often wears a conical, straw hat, the type seen in the Far East. He also wears a large, black coat (kind of like the one Train Heartnet wears at the start of the anime Black Cat. Don't know what it's called, sorry). He has hazel eyes, and a large scar running down the left side of his face.

Device: Blue Dawn (a jade ring that dangles from a red string that's tied to his hat).
Specialty: Mid-range/Close-quarters

Special attacks:
-Light shot (thin beam of light that he can shoot from his fingers)
-Meteor (concentrated ball of light that can be thrown at enemies)
-Impact (light concentrates around his fist, which causes his punches to be more powerful.)
-Light wall (pretty much just a wall of light used for defensive purposes)

Form: Evening Star
-Shining beam (a wide, powerful beam of light that can be shot out the palms of his hands for a short time)
-Supernova (causes a big, blinding explosion a short distance away, but takes alot out of Ming, and could potentially hurt his comrades)
-Firefly (causes small points of light to gather around him, then shoots towards the enemy)

Bio: Born on Unregulated Planet #97, Xi Ming is a half-Chinese person who was once a mercenary. A veteran of a few battles, Xi Ming often prefers to work alone, unless given no other option. Xi Ming was recruited due to his experience, but has little training as a mage. He is also very quiet, and prefers to have little or no conversation. He is also short tempered, and acts in a cold manner towards others.

(This is my first time doing this type of RPG, so I hope my character isn't too over-powered, or too lame)

Edit: Forgot to say, could someone PM me with the story so far? This sounds fun, and I'd really like to be a part of it.

Edit 2: Changed age.

Cyborg Ninja
08-02-2009, 08:29 PM
Name: Hank Coleman
Age: 21
Appearance: http://astronblackmoon.deviantart.com/art/Hank-Consternation-116392802
Hank's face:
Device: Devil's Eyes (The red goggles he wears on his face)
Specialty: Close/Mid Range
Special Attacks:
- Barrage (Energy bullets shoot out from gun, which do more damage and don't require reloading)
- AeroAssault ( Energy surrounds his legs and allows him to jump higher and to fall back down slower
- Beserk (Energy surrounds his arms and legs allowing him to hit harder and quicker)
- Dual Assault (His gun becomes two, allowing him to dual wield for a short period of time)
-Dragon's Fury (Fires a powerful, exploding ball of energy from the gun)
-Time Splitter (This requires all of Hank's energy and is only good for a very short while. If any other attack is used before this than he cannot preform it. This also drains all his energy and may or may not cause him to pass out. Hank slows down time using all the energy he can and is very deadly in this stage.
- Form: Demon
(in Demon form)
- Hell's Fury (throws fireballs at enemies)
- Devestator(Shoots a giant wave of black energy from his hands knocking his opponents back)
- Tendrils (Black tentacles spawn from his back and grab at enemies
- Spikes (Black spikes shoot up from the ground)

Biography: Hank Coleman was born and grew up on the planet Ven. Ven was the criminal factory planet of the world. So rule one on planet Ven was always to watch your own back. Like most people on Ven, Hank was forced into stealing to live. He became quite talented at stealing due to his agility and speed; not to mention his trusty assault rifle. After getting old enough he decided to start traveling to other planets to see where his skills could help people. He came mostly in contact with other humans from Unregulated Planet #97. They were different than Hank, for one thing his skin was gray while theres was not.

09-19-2009, 11:06 PM
ok so I made a change in the age of Shana so now she's 16 for plot purposes XD