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Kyr'am Galaar
08-06-2010, 11:58 PM
Hello, all! I'm mainly starting this for feedback. I am trying to make Juhani look better. Here is what I have for her head:

http://a.imageshack.us/img21/7057/juhanifreckles.th.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/juhanifreckles.jpg/)

As you can see, she now has some hair, her skin has been smooth'd out, her stripes are gone, and she has freckles! Oh, and her hair is now black.

Check my WIP album for more pictures (http://lucasforums.com/album.php?albumid=477)

I think that's everything. I welcome feedback, and suggestions.

Thanks!
~KG~

Zhaboka
08-07-2010, 12:50 AM
Hmm... The dark hair is a bit unnatural-looking. The gradient from skin to hair is a little too wide, maybe?

miro42
08-07-2010, 01:25 PM
I agree with Zhaboka. Hair grows from beneath the skin in single hairs. It seems you've given her a crew cut, so the fade on the side seems fine (although a profile screenshot of her would be good to see too), but the scalp shouldn't fade like that. The gradient is a great starting point, now you just need to merge the skin and hair with small bits of hair coming out of the scalp itself.

Also, I think some more definition in her facial structure would make this really pop. Other than around the eyes, the shadows are deep enough.

Does all that make sense?

Holty1-5
08-07-2010, 01:36 PM
IMO the bits around the eyes look like their pieces of metal (bronze to be specific)
But its good

Phildevil
08-08-2010, 02:01 AM
Unnatural-looking, maybe, but I still think this is better to look at than the original Juhani. In my book, that would be good work ;)

Kyr'am Galaar
08-08-2010, 10:39 PM
Hey all. So this is how I plan juhani's model to look like. Tell me what you think.

http://a.imageshack.us/img38/4760/juhanialmostfinal.th.jpg (http://img38.imageshack.us/i/juhanialmostfinal.jpg/)


EDIT: The texture is out of date. I fixed the hair that I skinned onto the scalp to look more like an actual woman with a ponytail.

MishraArtificer
08-11-2010, 01:39 AM
Put the stripes back...without them, she doesn't look quite so feline as she should...

Sith Holocron
08-11-2010, 02:00 AM
The hair looks like a bowl cut. Eeeek.

Kyr'am Galaar
08-11-2010, 10:54 AM
The hair looks like a bowl cut. Eeeek.

Yes. The skin in that pic was way out of date. Here is the updated picture:

http://a.imageshack.us/img638/2375/juhanimaybefinal.th.jpg (http://img638.imageshack.us/i/juhanimaybefinal.jpg/)

Darth Payne
08-22-2010, 11:38 AM
Hey, she kinda looks like an elf now. :)

Kyr'am Galaar
09-01-2010, 07:52 PM
Sorry for not updating for a while... I have made some serious progress with this mod, I couldn't get the ponytail on her head to lower in-game, but that's minor. I've been working on her clothing as well, and given her some armours that should be useful to her. Be aware that they will be restricted to Juhani. I haven't taken any screens yet... But look for a release soon!

~KG~

Darth Payne
09-01-2010, 11:47 PM
Exiting news.

I look forward to seeing the new armors.