Comfort

[Grimalkin]

How's this?:

Comfort
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To the dark hole
Of the inner-void
To the coldness
That I scarce avoid

To the recess of the inner soul
Have I lost it,
Have I lost control?

Conscience
Clear
Do you whisper in my ear?
Or am I lost to the cold
Did I lose control
Am I listening?
Did I ever hear?

To the Brightness
Of your inner mind
To the comfort
That my comfort finds

I pledge honour
Though my soul is weak
I pledge truth
Though my mouth can't speak

To the ending
Of my futile shell
In the battle
Of the soul I dwell

I find comfort
In the midst of pain
I find sunshine
In your holy rain.
:manny:

[Metallus]

I like it! Great effort. Good to see people are using this forum again :).

[MtBlanc]

*claps*