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NiKo
02-13-2002, 06:08 AM
it's not one of my most intelegent songs. but it's catchy when i sing it... (sounds a bit slipknot)

tell me what ya think ok? :)
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Falling in love is easy.
snaping out of love is hard.
its easy going crazy
staying sane can tear me apart.
dreaming about the future may please me.
but remembering my past pains my heart.

the road may seem easy
but the way is much harder than it seems.
the goal may look close to reach
but remember, Life's a B*tch.
life's a b*tch...

having a good time is easy.
not loosing your control is hard.
{or is it the other way around?}
asking a question is easy
answering a question is hard.
{some answers can never be found}

the road may seem easy
but the way is much harder than it seems.
the goal may look close to reach
but remember, Life's a B*tch.
life's a b*tch...
life's a b*tch...
no matter what your mommy tells ya...
life's a motherf*cking- backstabbing-
sh*tgiving- doublecrossing- filth tossing- fartsniffing -faith killing- joy stealing-eye poking- blood drinking- heart biting- B*tch!!!

so enjoy the ride...

Fender
02-13-2002, 11:19 AM
****in' Brilliant! You are one hell of a song writer, NiKo!

Kylilin
02-13-2002, 12:28 PM
life's a ***** and then you die, thats why we get high, cause you never know when you're gonna go

Guybrush122
02-13-2002, 02:16 PM
man niko..its so true

i just wrote, like, two songs thinking they were pretty good and yours blows them both out of the water


lol, it would be an embaressment to post them

JosÚ ManÚ
02-13-2002, 06:57 PM
its good, but its kinda weird the way you organized it. I need to see it together with the instruments. do you have that part done too?

i see what you tried to do by reapeating easy and hard, but (im not sure y) it didnt sound like a game of words, but more like a simple repetition

was the "seem" repetition intentional?

what happened at the end? (again, i need the instruments to be sure)

this part is awsome: the goal may look close to reach/ but remember, Life's a B*tch./ life's a b*tch...

at the end, eye poking is kinda ramdom there in the middle, try it as one of the first ones.



Originally posted by Kylilin
life's a bicht and then you die, thats why we get high, cause you never know when you're gonna go
nice.


Guybrush122, you should post it here, so we can all give constructive advices.


Fred Mercury is 1 of the best composers i ve ever seen (or heard), he is the 1 that inspires me (who cares if hes gay and hes dead, he good and period!). Who inspires you guys?

NiKo
02-14-2002, 05:20 AM
Originally posted by JosÚ ManÚ
its good, but its kinda weird the way you organized it. I need to see it together with the instruments. do you have that part done too?

i see what you tried to do by reapeating easy and hard, but (im not sure y) it didnt sound like a game of words, but more like a simple repetition

no we havent recorded it yet.

the easy and hard thing may not rhyme. but when i sing it you really dont notice, cause those 2 words are kinda 'burped'
(listen to KoRns "children of the korn to know what i mean by that)
and when i sing it i stretch the word untill you cant really see that it doesnt rhyme,
(easyyy-aaaah - haaarrrd-aah) something like that.





Originally posted by JosÚ ManÚ

at the end, eye poking is kinda ramdom there in the middle, try it as one of the first ones.


once again, this part is being sung really really fast and once again in the 'burby' way, so i dunno if anyone will even notice...
but i can always play with the lyrics some more. :)


and hey, thanks for all the positive replyes dudes,

makes me feel good... :)

NiKo
02-15-2002, 11:59 AM
stop being so modest GB! modesty is a girly thing... :p
c'mon i'm sure...no....i KNOW they're great cause you have a Great mind for these things!

anyways here's another song i've just written....its called 'Overload"

Overload



sadness, anger, chewing up my heart
confusing me so i dont know where to start
how can i express myself when i got no lips
how can you even hear me, you ungreatfull little b*tch?
i cant seem to find the words to express the way i feel
the confusion in my brain deny's all that is real
hate, love, all mixed up together now
depression, joy, f*cks me up completely now
nothing makes sense to me anymore
what am i even here for!?


holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!!
to many thoughts going in my head!!
to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad!
to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!!
i think therefor i am,
therefore i'm going mad!

why,what,where, and when
every answer i got is replaced by a question
i can open my mouth,
but only screaming comes out
nothing i say makes sense
nothing i think makes sense
am i making any sense?
or am i saying nonsense?

holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!!
to many thoughts going in my head!!
to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad!
to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!!
i think therefor i am,
therefore i'm going mad!



where's the off switch to my brain!?
there's gotta be a way to keep me sane!
all i feel is the pain
of my brain trying to NOT go insane.
whoah, thats a lot off rhymes in one little f*cking verse
....erm.......nurse, purse, oh f*ck this, lets reverse...
{reversing sound}

holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!!
to many thoughts going in my head!!
to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad!
to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!!
i think therefore i am,
i think therefore i am!!
i think therefore i am!!

Mad!!!

Guybrush122
02-15-2002, 02:05 PM
Originally posted by NiKo
stop being so modest GB! modesty is a girly thing... :p
c'mon i'm sure...no....i KNOW they're great cause you have a Great mind for these things!

anyways here's another song i've just written....its called 'Overload"

Overload



sadness, anger, chewing up my heart
confusing me so i dont know where to start
how can i express myself when i got no lips
how can you even hear me, you ungreatfull little b*tch?
i cant seem to find the words to express the way i feel
the confusion in my brain deny's all that is real
hate, love, all mixed up together now
depression, joy, f*cks me up completely now
nothing makes sense to me anymore
what am i even here for!?


holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!!
to many thoughts going in my head!!
to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad!
to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!!
i think therefor i am,
therefore i'm going mad!

why,what,where, and when
every answer i got is replaced by a question
i can open my mouth,
but only screaming comes out
nothing i say makes sense
nothing i think makes sense
am i making any sense?
or am i saying nonsense?

holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!!
to many thoughts going in my head!!
to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad!
to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!!
i think therefor i am,
therefore i'm going mad!



where's the off switch to my brain!?
there's gotta be a way to keep me sane!
all i feel is the pain
of my brain trying to NOT go insane.
whoah, thats a lot off rhymes in one little f*cking verse
....erm.......nurse, purse, oh f*ck this, lets reverse...
{reversing sound}

holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!!
to many thoughts going in my head!!
to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad!
to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!!
i think therefore i am,
i think therefore i am!!
i think therefore i am!!

Mad!!!

Christ, man.....Overload rocks the casbah!

alright...ill stop being modest and post my ****ty song (its called "Loving Hate")

Is love worth living for?
Is love worth breathing for?
Then why am I so unhappy
With Love?
And people toy with my effections of...
And tell me lies about my rejections from...
I'm rejected from you.

I can't stand another broken heart
Not one
God, not one

They say that time can heal all of loves wounds
yet mine have never been...
they were never healed before
Yeah!

My heart is broken and bleeding on the floor
and they just point and laugh
My heart is broken and bleeding on the floor
and they just point and laugh like all the others did before

All Ican say is
When my heart breaks
I'm never the same as I was
before!
before!
before!
After my first heart break
Ive never been the same before!






ok, *cringes* tell me what you think....no holds barred....I can take it!

NiKo
02-15-2002, 03:24 PM
...and you were ashamed to post that why!?

that song wets the cat's pajamas....mmmm, or something with that affect....

its cool!

Guybrush122
02-15-2002, 03:48 PM
Originally posted by NiKo
...and you were ashamed to post that why!?

that song wets the cat's pajamas....mmmm, or something with that affect....

its cool!

thanks man....but overdrive was way cooler than loving hate...by far

NiKo
02-15-2002, 04:22 PM
Originally posted by Guybrush122


thanks man....but overdrive was way cooler than loving hate...by far

so you say....

oh and....overLOAD....:D

Guybrush122
02-15-2002, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by NiKo


so you say....

oh and....overLOAD....:D

*ahem*i knew that...