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Guybrush122
02-26-2002, 03:12 PM
theyre two songs I wrote for Human Error...tell me your comments...im eager to know

Awkward Moments:

Tiny ****ing moments
Eating at my brain
All those awkward times
They drive me insane

They spit and tear at my heart
Rip off my arm
And I know it's all my fault

And these ****ing moments
They rip me apart
They just eat away
My skull is numbing
I'm throbbing with pain
My heart is mangled
I can not see
I feel like I'm strangled
Why can't I see?

They spit and tear at my heart
Eat out my guts
And it's all my fault

Those long spent moments
They chew at my brain
**** those damn moments
Send them straight to hell--

My heat is pumping
I can not see
There's heavy breathing
Sweat dropping
**** THIS

They spit and tear at my heart
I cant ****ing see
And I know that it's all my FAULT

Things Wrong With Life:

She said "get out"--
I packed my bags
She said I suck
And that I'm a fag
But do I care?
No; it ain't a lie
She's just another thing wrong with life

He said "do your homework"
I said "**** you, Dad"
Then he hit me
Right on the head
**** him; I don't need him
Know why?
He's just another thing wrong with life

Life's a *****
And then you die
You're married? You have kids?
Damn, you're gonna die

My Mom said "****,
you better clean your room"
I said, "God No!
So screw you too!"
She hit me and left
She didn't say goodbye...
Cause she's just another thing wrong with life

The teacher said to me,
"Dentention for you!"
I said, "No, I'm smarter than all of you!"
He locked me up
Wouldnt care if I died
Schools just another thing wrong with life

Life's a *****
And then you die
People are ****
And that's what's wrong with life

comments?

NiKo
02-26-2002, 04:33 PM
2 thumbs way way up in my nose!
great songs GB!!

Guybrush122
02-26-2002, 05:06 PM
Originally posted by NiKo
2 thumbs way way up in my nose!
great songs GB!!

approval from niko!?! :eek: thats a good sign

NiKo
02-26-2002, 05:22 PM
heh, really. i like the message!
the 2nd song kinda sounds like an eminem song, but that's a first impression...and screw first impressions.

Joshi
02-27-2002, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by NiKo
heh, really. i like the message!
the 2nd song kinda sounds like an eminem song, but that's a first impression...and screw first impressions.

well if were doing that, the songs crap.

second impression: it's great! three thumbs up (genetic mutation, i don't want to talk about it.)

Guybrush122
02-27-2002, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by NiKo
heh, really. i like the message!
the 2nd song kinda sounds like an eminem song, but that's a first impression...and screw first impressions.

ill send you some of the music......it sounds a lot like the Clash

NiKo
02-28-2002, 05:55 AM
Rock on dude!