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Wraith 8
06-10-2002, 08:08 AM
Hi guys. i was wondering if you guys are good at making welcomes texts for new potential members.

I have made a bit of an improvement on Gaalgoths welcoming on the SWgalxies.net site. .. (sorry Gaal :D)
but i dont realy like it.. so if you guys can make a good welcome speech... one that realy tells who we are.... and what we do within our PA...

This is the Welcome speech (http://www.swgalaxies.net/guilds/guild.php3?id=62) i wrote.. but it sucks.

so please help me out witha better one :D

thanks

-Wraith 8-

setsuko
06-10-2002, 10:08 AM
I could write something when I get home from work.

Gaalgoth
06-11-2002, 12:41 AM
lol, it's ok wraith. It needed to be changed...that had been meant to be just a temporary, but i got lazy.....the welcome is fine.

Wraith 8
06-11-2002, 04:30 AM
ah...... well... i think it needs to be a little more catchy..... that people WANT to join up :D... but im not a politician :D