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Darth Groovy
07-20-2002, 02:33 PM
Today I read the most unsettling thing. It seems A former member of the Lucasforums Academy has formed his own alliance of pure evil. http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=70368
Our leader and founder Obi-Wan 13 has declared war against this rebellion. This is a most difficult time especially for me being a Sith. I am sworn to the Lucasforums Academy and shall fight along side my Master Yoda_623 in a battle to the death. We shall not be defeated, yet I weep for those who have fallen to honor what they hold so dear. After reading some of the comments made by others who wear the name "Darth" I am ashamed to share that name amoung these others. I know I will be considered a traitor to my own kind....but my double saber belongs to the Academy, I shall defend what I hold true. We shall not perish!

.........At last we shall have revenge!:dsaber:


.......Begun this Academy War has!

obi
07-20-2002, 02:38 PM
On to Victory!


We must come together, all of us!

Dark side or light, This turn of events is unfortunate!


Admiral Darklighter, when you recive this transmission, act very quickly:
[begin transmission]

Gather workers, and build Defense Turrets, within 20 feet of each other, and a line of anti-air craft turrets behind them!

I want nothing to get through!!!!!!!!!

[End transmission]

Shadow Angel
07-20-2002, 02:49 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13
I want nothing to get through!!!!!!!!!

[End transmission]

Nothing to get through, eh? It is too late. There is already a traitor amongst your ranks. Your infrastructure is withering as we speak. You will cower before the name of the Sith.

At last, we will have our REVENGE!

obi
07-20-2002, 02:55 PM
Originally posted by Shadow Angel



At last, we will have our REVENGE!

What did we do to you?

:confused:

I thought we could live in harmony together, But the recent Rebellion has proven me wrong.

Now, we must fight eachother.

See you on the battle field.

*used by REB Starblazer*

May the force be with you, because victory will not.

Shadow Angel
07-20-2002, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13


What did we do to you?



Beats me....... just feel like rousing a few feathers here. Know why? Because I'm evil! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

obi
07-20-2002, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by Shadow Angel


Beats me....... just feel like rousing a few feathers here. Know why? Because I'm evil! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

oh. That explains it. :D


Well, seing how my troops and back-up, and your troops and back have not yet arrived, care for a game of Yazzi?

:D

(looks like we're going to have to delay this war for a while:) )

Zindell
07-20-2002, 03:22 PM
Oh well I am neutral for this battle. That goes without saying.

Darth Groovy
07-20-2002, 03:30 PM
Zindell......I'm gonna let that one slide because you are an ambassador diplomat type...we're all in the same gang here.

Shadow Angel. Am I the traitor you are refering too? Had the Sith Academy been born sooner.....I may have had a different allegiance, but these Jedi Took me under they're wings despite my evil past, and I shall defend their honor. Traitor? I can live with that.......how long can you live with this?-----> :dsaber: War is Hell.

"Long Live The Academy......Hooooooorahhh!!!!!!"

_Darth Groovy

Zindell
07-20-2002, 03:33 PM
hehe, I'm a keeper of the peace, not a soldier. Gee that sounds vaguely familiar. wonder where i heard it.

Darth Groovy
07-20-2002, 03:42 PM
Master Obi Wan 13, please we need a name for the infantry soon, reply here:http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=70410

It's all good Zindell, after all someone needs to plead our case to the senate. General Obi wan is only defending his Academy from the forces of evil.

Also someone needs to requisition us some Repeater Guns(that's my JO gun baby!!! When I use guns!!!) and as many disruptor rifles as we can get our hands on for our swat unit.

Shadow Angel
07-20-2002, 03:50 PM
Originally posted by Darth Groovy
Zindell......I'm gonna let that one slide because you are an ambassador diplomat type...we're all in the same gang here.

Shadow Angel. Am I the traitor you are refering too? Had the Sith Academy been born sooner.....I may have had a different allegiance, but these Jedi Took me under they're wings despite my evil past, and I shall defend their honor. Traitor? I can live with that.......how long can you live with this?-----> :dsaber: War is Hell.

"Long Live The Academy......Hooooooorahhh!!!!!!"

_Darth Groovy

No, I have no affiliation with you (you're cool, though.) However, I can't let you in on my plans, lest everything be ruined.

And Obi-Wan13, I won't be able to summon my forces until I counsel with my Master (Divine Spirit.) And that'll probably be tomorrow. And then, we will BATTLE!

Now, to dust off my bent lightsaber... is there a bent Dooku-style saber smiley?

Kstar__2
07-20-2002, 08:28 PM
master greedo626, can i fight alongside you?

Darklighter
07-20-2002, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13
On to Victory!


We must come together, all of us!

Dark side or light, This turn of events is unfortunate!


Admiral Darklighter, when you recive this transmission, act very quickly:
[begin transmission]

Gather workers, and build Defense Turrets, within 20 feet of each other, and a line of anti-air craft turrets behind them!

I want nothing to get through!!!!!!!!!

[End transmission]

Sorry...I've been kind of sleeeping on duty...but no, I am fully awake:mad: and ready for conflict...

This is it! I will rally the principal staff and wrorkers along the first line of defences...Jedi Masters, you will take your apprentices and position behind the turrets. This will be their first taste of combat, show them well!:D

Dissectional will lead the remainder of the soldiers in the speeders. This is it, make sure you're ready for them...:)

Dath Maximus
07-20-2002, 09:07 PM
Its time the groundskeeper prepares for battle.

obi I shall be your general.
I shall go get my troops imediately

Darth Knight
07-20-2002, 10:37 PM
i am ready for battle

obi
07-20-2002, 10:54 PM
Obi-wan13 Stood in his office at the top of the Academy. He was standing by the window, watching The teachers work with their Padawans, teaching them Saber Techniques and more. Over to the far right, Whitedragon was conducting a double-edged Lightsaber class. He looked to the north, at the mountins, and then back to his students, then to the workers working around the clock to get station defenses online.

That ruined the beautiful sight.

"This could have all been avoided......this war........Divine Spirit took a huge chance at defecting to the sith order, and slipped away without us knowing. Now, He has an army, and that is very dangerous. He must be stopped." Obi-wan13 turned around to talk to who was in the room.

"He did catch us off guard, sir." Admiral Darklighter said.

"I know. There was nothing we could have done to prevent this. Let us not grieve on the situation, my freind. That will get us no where. The deed has been done, and the past is past." Obi-wan13 said, as he turned to stare out of the window again.

There was a loud shot. It came from out of nothingness, and just appeared out of thin air. A small metallic object shot through the window, and hit Obi-wan13.

"I'm hit!"Obi13 shouted.

Dark lighter ran up to obi-wan13, and looked at his chest to find a small toxic dart. Obi-wan13's facial expressions began to fade, and his eyes closed.

Dark lighter picked him up, and ran to the medical quarters. The on-duty Doctor gave him immidiate care, and saved his life.

2 days later........

"how are you feeling?" Darklighter asked.

"I am fine. Thank you for saving me. I hope I have the pleasure of doing the same for you one day." Obi13 said.

"You have, on several occasions, sir. I just thout I was returning the favor." Darklighter said, and then the two let out a chuckle, and calmed back down to seriousness.

"Have you found who has done this?" Obi13 asked.

"Captain Tyrion and his men found a disabled droid in the high mountins. It had Luacious Poison inside of it. There is no doubt that it is the one who fired, and there is no doubt that it came from Divine Spirit. We must be cautious, sir. These are dangerous times." Darklighter said.

"Untill I recover, admiral, you are in charge." Obi13 said.

"Rest and return to health, General." Darklighter said, as he bowed to his master and exited. Obi13 looked at the numerous tubes running through his arms, and at his hospital bed, and sighed.

"This is just the begining." he said to himself.

Tyrion
07-20-2002, 10:54 PM
:tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1:


Look at my huge army*

Locked and loaded...


*Each tank represents 1 trillion tanks.

You wont believe how many fodder troops I have.....

I say we use stealth against them,I have a plan.I'll PM anybody who wants to know it.

Divine Spirit
07-20-2002, 10:56 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13


What did we do to you?

:confused:

I thought we could live in harmony together, But the recent Rebellion has proven me wrong

:emperor: Typical of the lieing scumbags in the pitiful Jedi Academy!

It is you that first declared war in the Sith Academy thread!

he he hee, a Jedi promotiong violent actions against non violent people...what a truley corrupt "Academy" you have!

Tyrion
07-20-2002, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by Divine Spirit


:emperor: Typical of the lieing scumbags in the pitiful Jedi Academy!

It is you that first declared war in the Sith Academy thread!

he he hee, a Jedi promotiong violent actions against non violent people...what a truley corrupt "Academy" you have!

Have you ever seen a nice acadamy that had the words"Dark,Sith,Dark lord,and sith lord"?

:D

obi
07-20-2002, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by Divine Spirit


:emperor: Typical of the lieing scumbags in the pitiful Jedi Academy!

It is you that first declared war in the Sith Academy thread!

he he hee, a Jedi promotiong violent actions against non violent people...what a truley corrupt "Academy" you have!

actually, you called us panzies. Jedi don't like it when you call um Panzies.

:D

Divine Spirit
07-20-2002, 11:04 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13


actually, you called us panzies. Jedi don't like it when you call um Panzies.

:D

Dont like it do you?

What are you going to do about it then?

Originally posted by Tyrion
Have you ever seen a nice acadamy that had the words"Dark,Sith,Dark lord,and sith lord"?

I never said we were nice, i was just saying we hadnt done anything bad........yet! :D

obi
07-20-2002, 11:08 PM
Originally posted by Divine Spirit

What are you going to do about it then?



as much as one can do over the internet. :D

Seriously though, let's do an RP. I've started. If you have any story tellin skills, go for it Divine Spirit. Tell your side. :)

Yoda_623
07-20-2002, 11:26 PM
Originally posted by Tyrion
:tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1: :tank1:


Look at my huge army*

Locked and loaded...


*Each tank represents 1 trillion tanks.

You wont believe how many fodder troops I have.....

I say we use stealth against them,I have a plan.I'll PM anybody who wants to know it.
I would like to know this plan. :D

Divine Spirit
07-20-2002, 11:43 PM
Divine Spirit sat in his throne room, gazing out at the evening sky. A soft beep came from a speaker on the armrest of his throne and the door to his chamber opened. Shadow Angel strode into the room. A tall, strong soldier who's menacing appearance was only enhanced by the dimly lit interior. He strode up to Divine Spirit's throne and knelt in front of him.

"Rise, my friend" commanded Divine Spirit. "I told you to remain on the command ship."

"A small Jedi force has penetrated the shield and landed the planet's surface" replied Shadow Angel.

"Yes I know" commented Divine Spirit.

"What is thy bidding, me Master?" asked Shadow Angel

"It is of no concern. Soon the invasion will be crushed! Your work here is finished, my friend. Go out to the command ship and await my orders" said Divine Spirit. "Darth Kaan is already onboard a Star Destroyer heading for the location of the invaders"

"But Master, what if they manage to get into your warehouse and steal the plans?" inquired Shadow Angel

"Patience, my friend. Darth Kaan will take care of them. The secret plans are safe and soon the craft will be operational"

"As you wish my Master"

Shadow Angel bowed and exited the room.


"Everything is proceeding as I have foreseen" Divine Spirit said to himself as he turned around to face the viewscreen once again.

Divine Spirit
07-20-2002, 11:46 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13
Seriously though, let's do an RP. I've started. If you have any story tellin skills, go for it Divine Spirit. Tell your side. :)

English isnt my best subject but ive given it my best shot! :D

Next time ill mention the poisonous dart event :)

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 12:00 AM
A few days after the dramatic attack that had injured the General, Sir Obi-wan was back on his feet, his wound now covered, diguised by his robes in typical Jedi uniform. However, although there was little visible trace of dart's strike, the poison had spread through his body, weakening one leg, as he now had a small limp in his reight leg. Most of the poison had now receded, and soon he would be back to full health.

Obi-wan now descended the lift from the council room. It judered and shook as it finally slowed to a halt, and the doors opened suddenly. The light of the sun gleamed into his eye, and he raised his hand to block the glare of the light rays upon his face. It was hot, and the green of the surrounding lawn glowed with magnificance. He looked to his left at the great building of the Academy, standing tall among the trees to the side of it.

Maximus and his padawan were stationed on the grass, upon a higher point as the young jedi trainees sat, watching their every move as they went through basic lightsaber techniques: blocks, attacks and different defensive movements.

"You're back" came a voice from behind a tall tree next to the lift. A uniformed figure stepped into view from amidst the bright yellow gleam of the sun.

"You have been meditating on this situation for a long time. Is everything okay Sir?" Admiral Darklighter walked up beside him and Obi-wan turned to face him.

"No" he replied sullenly. "Not after all this Academy has been through." He began to walk off towards the lake, the Admiral ermaining by his side. There was a long silence before he spoke again.

"This has happened to a student under my care. It is my responsibility. I cannot help feeling guilty for the path Divine has taken."

"There wasn't anything you could have done" the Admiral responded quickly and reasuringly. "No one could have foreseen this. The dark side..."

"...clouds everything" Obi-wan interrupted, finishing his sentance. They both smiled. "I know".

"He could strike again at any time" Darklighter suggested. "Like you said, It is not over..."

At that point, there was an explosion far off byond the lake, right before the mountains. The snow at the base errupted in a fountain of white dust, and the Admiral and General jumped back, drawing their lightsabers at the harsh sound.

The alarm bell rung, and the Academy was filled with noise of shouts and screams. The children padawan's ran to the safety of the caretaker, and squdron pilots were running, sprinting to the hanger bay. The two could only stand and watch with horror.

"No going back Sir" Darklighter exclaimed.

"No. Lets go!"

To be continued...

Darth Knight
07-21-2002, 12:01 AM
ha ha this is cool

HellFyre69
07-21-2002, 12:38 AM
lol..

finally sumthing interesting and funny to read =)

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 12:40 AM
The hanger bay doors were wide open, and the pilot-uniformed Academy personel were running to and from the stations around the hanger, gathering equipment and gear and preparing for battle.

The General and the Admiral run towards the hanger. Immediately as they entered Reb came to face them, exhausted and gasping for breath.

"What is wrong?! What is happening" Obi-wan's voice was deep, laden with foreboding anger.

"I think you should come see for yourself sir" he replied.

"You go Sir, I'll rally the ground forces" as he said this Darklighter was gone among the fighters and pilots. To the right of the hanger from where they had entered was a small cylindrical lift, leading towards the roof of the building. Both Reb and Obi-wan entered it, and the doors rolled shut. It took them only a couple of seconds to reach the top. There was a number of small platforms, connected by steps and a watchman stationed at the very top. Reb called up.

"Report!" The man looked up from his binoculars and faced them.

"It doesn't look good sir" yelled Camus among the gunfire in the distance. Reb and Obi-wan ran up, and Obi-wan grabbed the binoluars and stared in horror at what he saw. There must have been about four, maybe five AT-ATs advancing from the mountain region, surrounded by half a dozen chicken walkers. They were coming at alarming speed, and behind a couple of hundred meters, a long thin line of dark clothed figures could be seen.

Obi-wan said nothing, only lowered his binocluars and looked into empty space.

"What do we do now, Sir?!" The voice behing Camus was greatly desperate, shrouded in fear. It was sOulblihtr, his first battle and he was nervous and his voice cold.

"Get ready. sOulblihtr go to Admiral Darklighter and give him the order to advance. Tyrion will carry the ground force. Now go!" with that he disappeared towards the lift and was gone.

"It will be okay" Obi-wan reassured Reb. "The worst will come another time. I can feel it". They looked out towards the troops of the opposing side. "Divine will not come...he is too afraid...I can feel it. We will meet again."

Darklighter was far beyond the opening of the hanger. He had descended the stairs, and Tyrion was readying his men, giving out orders in a loud and clear voice. He was one of the youngest soldiers in cmmand, and yet one of the most proffesional.

"You will go after the speeders have carried out their first three waves of attack" Darklighter yelled at him, "by then at least three of the walkers should be down.

"How many are there?" He was confident and ready to take on the enemy.

"I have not had word yet. There will be at least three, and more AT-STs."

"Right" Tyrion nodded.

sOulblihtr had been listening behind them, and interrupted with the news. "There are four, maybe five."

"I am counting on you Captain" Darklighter exclaimed.

"You don't need to worry" he said with a smile. "Tell the Master I want a payed vacation after this" Tyrion joked, and turned away to his troops.

Dissectional was now in the center of a large circle of pilots and gunners, awaiting his orders.

"You will pair up into a pilot and gunner team for each speeder" he instructed. "Your main objective is to take down those AT-ATs. Leave the chicken walkers for the turrets.

"Why the AT-ATs?" questioned Darth Knight. "The AT-STs will arrived at the base quicker."

Whitedragon interrupted before the Squad Commander could answer, "The AT-ATs do more damage. The closer they get, the more dangerous they are. They must be taken out first."

Dissectional looked both shocked and angry, "Very good Ensign, perfectly right, but next time, speak when you are spoken to! Gather your men everyone, and proceed to your stations."

On that note, they dispersed into their vehicles. They waited, ready for the signal to attack...

To be continued...

Darth Knight
07-21-2002, 12:52 AM
yes finally i get to kill some at ats in my speeder who hoo!

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 12:52 AM
A siren rang throughout the hanger bay as the Imperial Shuttle rested onto its landing platform. A squad of twenty clones ran up to the front of the ship and arranged themselves into two parrallel lines. As the siren died out, the echo was lost in the sound of a hiss and then the noise of the departure ramp lowered intself from the shuttle.

Divine Spirit strode from the ship with a less then pleased look on his face. The first assasination attempt on obi-wan13's life had not gone well. Even though he had just arrived back home he had already got news of obi-wan13's recovery. Darth Talliusc promptly walked beside Divine Spirit as they left the Hanger Bay. Talliusc was an apprentice now, had only been under the training of Divine Spirit for one day and was making good progress. Divine knew that one day Talliusc would become the first Sith Master of the Sith Academy.

The Hanger bay door slide shut and the sound of boots on refreshly polished floor came into the range of Divine's Hearing.

"Income is up by 0.8%, production of clones is up to schedule, costs are up by 0.35% and --"

Divine waved his hand and silenced the officer who had recently joined his company. "That news is not important to me. How is the production of the new fleet coming along?"

"Well.....er......im afraid....my Master... we are behind schedule by 2 weeks. I am sorry but since the accident in the trials we--"

"You have failed me for the last time" Divine told the officer. The Emperor's hand lifted into the air and the officer started to clutch his throat. After a few seconds the body of the officer lay in a heap, to the side of the corridor. "Apology accepted"

Divine and Kaan continued down the corrider and after a few minutes, Kaan gulped and said "My Master....I have another plan"

"Yes?"

"I believe that my undercover agent on Coruscant has found a security fault in the area surrounding the Jedi Academy."

"You have done well. What do you propose to do?"

"If we can get a Star Destroyer in the correct position, it could fire through the hole in the shieldsand knock out the shield generator. When that has happened we can send down AT-Ats and AT-STs to the surface. From there they can reach the Jedi Academy"

Divine Spirit stood in deep thought for a minute. "Impressive, most impressive"

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 01:05 AM
--Invasion is going well Sir. The AT-ATs are advancing to the Jedi Academy and the target should be in range in a matter on minutes--

"Good work commander" replied Divine Spirit, just before he shut off his comlink. Divine took a long, deep breath......

"Yes.....obi-wan13 is at the Academy. And soon him and his pitiful Academy shall fall"

obi
07-21-2002, 01:13 AM
Obi-wan13 Limped to the service lifts in the main building, and Pressed the button to activate it.
The lift went to the top, and Obi-wan13 limped to the edge, putting all of his weight on his kane.

He watched in silence, and meditation.


I feel.........lightheaded.......I......Must get to the front.....

Obi-wan13 thought to himself. Knowing his second in command, Darklighter, would object to this.


Obi13 went back to the lift, went to a hallway, and went to his sleeping quarters. He sat on the edge of the bed and stared at the ground. He knew what he must do. He Stood, and wlaked over to his Shelves, and stared at his books.

It was as if he was seeing his belongings for the last time. He had a sad look on his face, as he then went to his Storage Locker, and opened it, and Took out his light-blue lightsaber, and activated it. He stared at the blade, then he deactivated it, and put it on his belt.

He then limped back to the lift, and went to the ground. He walked over to the hanger, and got into a ground speeder. The troops where getting breifed, and arming themselves, and they didn't even notice him.

He turned on the speeder and heard the engine hum. He backed out, and set off to through the forest, and Straight into the heart of the imperial forces. It would take him a while to get to them, but he had to hurry.

To be continued....

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 01:21 AM
"Death Squadron will be organised after the speeders have returned" Darklighter informed Obi-wan on the deck of the watchtower-platform on top of the hanger. The evening luminescence was fast dissapearing behind the shadowing mountains and hills far off in the distance. The sun was now only a glistening speck in the vastness of the pale orange-red sky, and the long cold night had nearly begun. The attack would be carried out in almost darkness.

The Admiral turned to face Obi-wan, but said nothing. There was no need for words, it was beyond that now. Darkness was clouding the skies, thick dark-grey clouds were spreading across it, shadowing everything beneath it. In the distance, beyond the mountains and hills and the fleets of troopers beneath them, the two men caught a glimpse of it. A huge, black spine tower reaching towards the sky, filled to the brim with evil malice and devilish blackness. It was a horrible sight, after all the Academy had hoped to achieve.

"How could this have happened?" Darklighter said, almost involuntarily. Obi-wan still said nothing, only watched. Darklighter looked at him for a moment. He knew his master well. He knew Obi-wan was trying to find wisdom or hope in this hour of need, to think of what he needed to do. The Admiral admired his master for his sheer patience, and his union with the force made him an even stronger Jedi than ever before at this point. Darklighter shrugged off the thought and followed his master's gaze.

------------------

Greedo now was running to meet Tyrion at the front of the hanger bay. He almost fell over with exhastion as he reached Tyion.

"The speeders are ready to go" he breathed heavily "and the master has given the order for us to meet at the turrets as they leave.

"I though we were going after the first few waves of attack from the speeders!" Tyrion exclaimed.

"Yes Sir, but we must go now! The infantry need support at the turrets and we are all that is available.

Tyrion shook his head. "Very well" He turned now to his men. "Lets go!"

On his command the entire troop marched over the ridge down to meet the forces already stationed at the first post. They ran quickly and swiftly down towards the preliminary forces and dived behind the ridge, guns at the ready. Greedo was beside Tyrion, and his sniper rifle was brought at, beautifully crafted and shining wit the last glow of the pale sun. They sat, ready, waiting, watching the AT-ATs come over the small elavated ground a mile or so in front. At that point, the speeders flew over there heads, breaking the quietness of there position, as they speeded to meet them.

"Here we go!" Tyrion yelled, and there was silence.

Reb Starblazer
07-21-2002, 01:21 AM
This is character development, not much to do with the actual war, but I'll get to that later. This is in answer to Divine's Spirit's thoughts on me being a Dark Jedi in a Jedi academy. Feel free to skip it if you want.

Dark Path

Earlier that day...

The door slid open with a "whoosh" as Obi-Wan entered Reb Starblazer's quarters. He walked in a few steps, and noticed Reb sitting on the floor, shirtless, deep in meditation.

"It is a troubling time, is it not old friend?" Said Reb, almost startling Obi-wan.

"Yes, indeed it is. The Dark side has taken yet another victim, as it almost did to you." Replied Obi-wan.

"Almost?" chuckled Reb. "The dark side had taken me completely, becoming a part of my soul. It was only with your help, and hers..." Reb's voice faded as a sad look crossed his face " That I was able to be brought over, at least partially." Reb stood and faced Obi-wan. Obi-wan noticed Reb's scar laden chest, reminders of his past, ones that would never fully heal.

"Neither the scars, nor Reb." Obi-wan thought to himself.
" But it wasn't just my doing. You wanted to be turned, more than anything. I just gave you a little push in the right direction." Obi wan said with a smile.

Reb walked slowly over to his closet, his black Sith boots, clicking on the floor, a stark contrast to Obi-wan's brown.

"The force can be a cruel master, can it not Obi-wan? Then again, so was Darth Talon."

Obi-wan almost shuddered at that name, at the thoughts of all the violence wrought by him, before Reb took that final step that was necessary, and struck down his Dark master.

"That's how I got these scars. I learned the hard way. My master didn't turn the Lightsabre power down while practicing, it was full out, or not at all. If I died, then I wasn't good enough to be his apprentice, that was that. I had to be fully committed to the ways of the Sith."

"But you weren't, you were always a Jedi at heart. In your heart you were never a Sith, never like him. It's only because of your 'condition' that you're forced to use the Dark side"

Reb chuckled at Obi-wans use of the word "condition". "It's alright Obi-wan. It's my curse" Obi-wan opened his mouth to say something, but Reb raised his hand and silenced him. "But it's also my blessing".
Reb reached up and pulled his shoulder length, dirty blond hair back into a ponytail, revealing the five vestigial horns on his forehead, a trait common to all Zabraks.

"We've never quite figured it out have we Reb? Why you have such a strong connection to the Dark side, but barely any to the Light. Do you still believe it's your lineage that's the problem?"

"Yes. I think that's it's the combination of Human father and Zabrak mother that caused this. It's not their fault, they had no idea this would come about. Or maybe..." Reb, suddely remembering why he went to his closet, opened the door. "I'm just an anomaly in the Force." Reb said, with a light tone in his voice. Reb looked into the closet, staring at the black tunic and cape that he hoped he would never have to wear again.

"You came here in search of peace, only to find war. I'm beginning to think trouble follows you wherever you go" Said Obi-wan, trying to have a light moment in such a dark conversation. He hoped he didn't offend Reb however.

"Trouble doesn't follow me Obi-wan." Reb replied "I am trouble". The last sentence was said lightly, and Obi-wan tried not to laugh, realizing he had not offended Reb in the least. "I find myself at a crossroads, and am undecided at which road to take. Should I once again immerse my self in the grip of the Dark, or hide, cowering in the light, afraid of what I may become.

"Be entirely tolerant or not at all; follow the good path or the evil one. To stand at the crossroads requires more strength than you possess, my friend." Said Obi-wan, quoting an old saying, that he never really understood until now.

"Perhaps I shall take the middle road then. Follow the path of evil, for the side of light. He that does evil so that good may come, pays a toll to the devil to let him into heaven. Is that not right?"

Obi-wan and and Reb looked at each other and laughed. Two men, quoting old sayings, in the middle of a war. Two friends, searching for a spot of light in a sea of darkness.

Reb broke the silence first, "I know now what must be done. Power never takes a step back - only in the face of more power, and I shall do what I can. He must be stopped, and I shall give in, become evil incarnate if that's what's neccesary, to see it done." Reb reached in to the closet and took hold of his tunic, reclaiming a name he had long since uttered.

Obi-wan nodded, and turned to leave the room. "May the force be with you, Reb Starblazer" Obi wan said, as he left the room, leaving his friend to comtemplate his path, and his purpose in the days ahead.

"May it be with us all Obi-wan, may it be with us all." Reb said to the empty room

Later, a figure was seen leaving Starblazer's quarters. A haunting vision, dressed in black, a Lightstaff on his belt, made it's way through the academy. The younger padawans, stepped aside, a look of terror on their faces, as he silently walked past. He headed for the forward command center, finally realizing his part in the grand scheme. As he entered, all eyes were locked on him. He walked slowly, his face obscured by the shadows of his hood, and stood silently in front of Obi-wan. The figure, bowed down to one knee, and removed his hood. A familiar face, covered with intricate designs of war paint, stared up at Obi-wan, a face he had not seen in a long time. The once green eyes had changed, now, red and orange piercing eyes, imbued with the power of the Dark side, met with Obi-wan's.

"Darth Malice, at your command. What are your orders, General Kenobi..."


Once again, way too over the top(and probably way too long:D), but I like writing. I have a whole collection of unfinished stories on my computer, including the tale of Reb Starblazer, a character I've had in my head for many years.
Man, you're right Darth Knight, this is cool.

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 01:58 AM
Obi-wan was no longer by Darklighter's side. He had left the platform and returned to the hanger. Before leaving, Obi-wan had said to him - "I have some unfinished business", and that was all. The speeders had not yet left the hanger and Tyrion's forces were beginning to proceed to the first station. As he stood there, the Admiral began to contemplate everything that was happening. He knew what his master was going to do. He did not want to interfere, for Obi-wan would not regret his actions. Darklighter would not have approved of what he wanted to do, but once his master's mind was made up, it was not his place to argue.

Standing there, at the helm now of the attack, in retrospect he started thinking about where he was, what he had gotten himself into. He thought about his first meeting with his master, and how had saved his life.

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Many years back, Tidus Darklighter was a farmboy on one of the nearby moons of the Academy's planet. His mother and father were both human, and worked hard at keeping themselves safe and healthy. He lived well, was cared for dearly. However the trouble in his fathers work had encouraged him to go into smuggling. This would have surely brought in more money, and proved a better chance of their success. However the figureheads that his father had gotten involved with were ruthless and cunning. Tidus' father had borrowed an obscene amount of money to pay for transpots to a nearby industrial system. The smugglers knew he would never be able to pay that money back, so hired bounty hunters to do the deed.

Obi-wan was on a reconassance mission to the moon. He was sometimes working there, exploiting the weaknesses of the smugglers, using his powers to lead him to evil doers detroying the peace. It was by luck he found out about Tidus' father, what the bounty hunters had in store for him. He raced to meet him, fearing the worse.

When Tidus was only 15, he was working late on the farm, gathering supplies from the forest where they lived. A ship was descending from the sky, his mother and father leaving the house to greet the visitor. However the welcome was shortlived. The figure that emerged leaped from the craft to the ground and shot his mother. He stood and watched as his father ran to her dead body on the floor. Crying, he looked up and the figure raised his gun and shot him in the forehead.

Tidus stood in horror. The bounty hunter looked at him at the edge of the forest. He began to run, following Tidus through the thick dense forest. He came into an pening, and turning around the figure glared at him. He closed his eyes, full now of sorrowful tears, awating death. At that point Obi-wan leaped into the opening, decapitating the hunter with his lightsaber in one swift stroke. They stared at each other for a moment, Tidus in complete shock and sadness.

A gun went off, and the Admiral awoke from his trance. That was how they met. He was enrolled at the Academy after that, as Obi-wan's first apprentice. He looked beside him again. The man he looked up to as a father was nowhere to be seen. A tear rolled down from his eye: after everything they had been through, Obi-wan still did not trust him to know his inner most thoughts. He was left a lone once again.

obi
07-21-2002, 02:47 AM
Obi-wan's speeder came to a hault, just a few meters outside the imperial temporary camp. Obi-wan came at a good time. The imperials where tired from their hike, and where about to turn in for the day. Obi-wan noticed the night watcher's stalking in the darkness, only seen in the few Lights they had posted up.

I am getting too old for this Obi-wan thought. He walked around the gates and fences, unoticed, as though he where a small feline. He looked at one of the garrisons, and saw 3 clone troopers guarding the entrance. A Lamda Shuttle was there, engines humming, as if it where going to take off.

here's my chance Obi-wan said. He dodged the guards in an amazing show of stealth, and made his way onto the shuttle. He hid behind a few Cargo crates, as a few clone troopers, and an officer, dressed in black, walked on.

"We must not keep the emporer waiting. Pilot, take off." The officer commanded.

"Yes sir" the young man said. The doors closed, and the craft began to lift off, untill it was in space.
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The Emporer Watched out of the window at the shuttle coming in.

Yes, Come to me! Come to your Fate! your death! The Emporer said to himself. A young Officer walked in the throne room, and Spoke to the emporer.

"My lord, The replacement command crew has arrived." The young officer said.

"Good. Have them report to me immidiatly." The emporer said, as the young man bowed and left.

"You are foolish,Obi-wan Kenobi" The Emporer said.
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Obi-wan remained on the shuttle for a good number of hours, then snuk off. He made his way down a few halls, when A security patrol passed him by. He hid, and went unnoticed once again. He made his way to the shield generator room, and Gently strode passed the guards. He left and went through a vent, and made his way to the door of the throne room. A guard noticed him, and demanded he surrender.

Obi-wan Looked at the man, and waved his hand.

"Open this door." Obi-wan commanded.

"Yes, right away." The guard said, and opend the door. Obi-wan walked through, and the blast door closed behind him.

"Welcome, General Kenobi. I have been expecting you." The Emporer said, as he turned his chair around, and revealed himself to Obi-wan. The emporer stood, and ignited a Lightsaber.

"You will find that my age will not interfere with my Fighting Skills." The Emporer said.

"Nor with me, For I am a jedi." Obi-wan said, as he ignited his blue lightsaber.

The two sabers met in air, and then on the ground. The emporer took a swing at Obi's head, but Obi blocked. The emporer kicked Obi-wan's right leg, sensing his weakness.

Obi fell to the ground in pain.

"I can see that the poison has not fully left your system, Obi-wan13. You are a weak fool, and the poison makes you an even weaker fool! Now, You shall die." The emporer said, as he brought his saber over his head, and Slashed downward on obi-wan.

To be continued......

(I'll finish this part:) )

Darth Groovy
07-21-2002, 03:23 AM
Originally posted by Divine Spirit


:emperor: Typical of the lieing scumbags in the pitiful Jedi Academy!

It is you that first declared war in the Sith Academy thread!

he he hee, a Jedi promotiong violent actions against non violent people...what a truley corrupt "Academy" you have!

I don't see how defenging the Acedemy from the forces of evil is promoting acts of violence. I suppose I can see your point of view. I don't thing Master Obi Wan 13 wanted a war, but it is necessary to defend that which we hold sacred. I for one am not looking forward to slaughtering fellow Sith, But my saber belongs to The Academy, my family, my future.


Darth Groovy sat quiet in his quarters. His master had long since retired for the evening. Groovy was restless and began practicing his meditation techniques that Master Yoda_623 tought him. He sat crossed legged on the floor, arms outstretched. Fading were his dreams of becoming a teacher at the Academy as visions of violence and distruction flashed in his dreams. He saw the blood on his hands as young Sith fell before him.......Darth Groovy cried out in agony...."NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!" Suddenly he returned to conscienceness and his eyes blinked open. He gathered himself.....he knew what he must do. He had never been in a real battle before this moment. He stood up in the middle of his quarters and touched a control on the com bracelet on his arm. A few strange beeps emmited as 25 small probe droids entered the room. In one long gracefull circular motion Darth Groovy's long saber hilt flew from the belt on his hip into his hand. He twirlled it in a figure 8 as the probe droids began fireing small lazer bolts upon him, in one swift spin the double red blade cut through the droids like confetti........... Yoda_623 rushed into the room gazing for a moment at the sparks and wires which glittered on the floor of Darth Groovy's chamber. Darth Groovy took a deep breath and powered down his saber. "Is everything alright my young padawan?" Yoda asked? "Yes, my master" Darth Groovy slowly replied. Yoda_623 smiled slightly and left his chambers. He feared for his apprentice, not only for his safety, but he knew his personal feelings on this matter had made his pupil restless. Tommorrow he would place heavy emphasis on relaxation techniques and self control. Tommorrow was to be a long day remembered.

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 03:33 AM
wow, theres some really good stories coming along here :)

Yoda_623
07-21-2002, 03:40 AM
Man, Killer story Groovy. :D All these are so interesting to read.

obi
07-21-2002, 03:43 AM
........As the Emporer slashed down on Obi-wan, Obi-wan rolled away to safety as the saber hit the floor next to him. The same thing happened once more. Obi-wan looked at his sabe hilt, a pulled it to him, and ignited it, blocking the emporers next attack. He swung like a madman to get hte emporer away. When he had enough space, he stood again, all weight on his left leg.

The Emporer ran towards him and began swinging a barrage of blows against Obi-wan, which where deflected. A small explosion shook the throne room, and The Emporer was stunned.

"This is Death 4, going in on my attack run." A pilot said, as an x-wing swooped aroun and fired on one of the shield generators.

"heh heh heh heh." The emporer laughed, as he swung at obi again. Obi backflipped and avoided to swipe.

The x-wing fired a torpeado on one of the sheild generators again, and it exploded. A young officer ran into the throne room,and interupted the duel. Obi-wan was going to kill the young man, but held back when he realized the boy was unarmed. Another cloaked figure came into the room, and Obi-wan's attention shifted. The Emporer, taking the chance, Hit obi on the back of the head with the hilt of his saber. Obi fell unconscious.

"Did you need something captain?" The emporer asked.

"Sir, the Academy forces have launched an air strike on us, and we where unprepared, and our shields are failing. we must With draw, or we will be destroyed!" The officer said.

"Let us make our leave, then. *emporer points to obi* Darth Kaan, take him to a cell. We will interogate him, and find out everything we can. Then, we shall kill him." The emporer said, as Kaan bowed, and drug obi away.

"My lord, we must move quickly to evacuate our forces on the planet." The young captain said.

"We haven't the time. Set course for Coruscant and engageour hyperdrive." The emporer said.

"but my lord, we...."

"NOW!" The emporer yelled.

The young man was now very afraid, and said "yes, my lord"

The x-wing squadron was attacking the Star Destroyer when it suddenly blasted to hyperspace.

"Good job Death Squadron. Return to base." Darklighters voice came over the comm.

Darth Knight
07-21-2002, 04:08 AM
obi man you are writing some really tight stories they are really good

Dissectional
07-21-2002, 04:17 AM
Nice, Nice guys. I hope i can compile a tale that shall be on par with you guys'.

After the missions with Ice and Death squadron, Captain Dissectional Returned to the academy. Once safely docked, he received a comm transmission: General Kenobi Had made it safely back. Relieved that he had escaped the clutches of the emperor, Dissectional raced to talk with him.
"Well, sir, good to see your face again, I feared you dead," Dissectional announced with a hearty smile. "How in the hell did you escape?"
"A long story, which i will be glad to share over a juri juice." Kenobi chuckled.
"well, we have more important things to take care of than stories and liquor," Dissectional stated quite gruffly. And with that, they all headed for the academy war room.
"My lightsaber is itching for sith flesh," The bold young padawan stated.
" You'd better curb that temper, lest you be tempted by the darkside yourself!" Kenobi barked. "we'll be mashing sith once we figure out where they are and what they plan on doing next!"
Death Squadron Recon had found that the sith academy troops were moving their fleets closer to the LF academy system, and were only a mere 4 parsecs away.
" I want death squadron on full patrol, 24 hours a day. They plan on a straight spearhead into the academy system." Kenobi grimly muttered. "This is looking like it's all about to blow up into a battle of gargantuan proportions, none like we've ever seen before.."

To Be Continued.... :D:D

There's my little smidgin of a tale. Hope you guys enjoy it!

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 04:31 AM
Darklighter looked down upon the battle below. The seepders had already taken out the first AT-AT, thanks to the skillful work of Reb Starblazer. The arrangements had to be made quickly, and the pilots and gunners joined up in pairs; first Dissectional and Exterminator, then Reb and KordKelly, Wjitedragon and Camus, and finally Darth Knight and sOulblihtr.

Darklighter now looked upon the battle ground, and down at the ground forces below. He knew what he had to do.

Obi-wan, master, you're gonna hate me for doing this . On that thought, he leapt from the side rail of platform, plummeting down headfirst towards the dround a hundred meters below. He flipped fowards and flung his cloak aside. He landed on his feet, with effortless ease.

He was dressed in pure white garments covering his body, with tall black boots and a black belt around his waist. His hair fell before the sides of his face, down to his neck, which shone jet black. His face and skin was markless and bright. He had the appearance of a padawan, but after 15 years of Jedi mastery he was nearly as able as his master. Tidus Darklighter, master Jedi, would fight once again...

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Tyrion and his men manned the turrets, awaiting the AT-STs as they closed in on their position. Greedo sat, his eye's fixed on the cockpit, ready to fire. At that point, it all changed. Imperial troops began descending from the walkers. They aligned and began to walk slowly towards them. The chicken walkers halted, aiming their guns at the turrets. They were ambushed.

"No, this is all wrong!" Tyrion yelled. "Where is our back up!" He drew his comlink from his pocket and spoke. "Tyrion to Ice Leader! Tyrion to Ice Leader! W have more surprises here commander, you gotta give us some support!"

"No can do" Dissectional replied in the speaker. "We cannot deter ourselves, if we try to leave now we're as good as dead!"

"Damn!" Greedo replied. "We'll have to take them."

Darkighter was now running furiously down towards Tyrions men. As he approached the hill, a hand grabbed his shoulder. He swung round to draw his saber, until he realised who it was.

"I thought I told you to stay wheer you were" AB_Legion said. "I can't have you, second in command going into battle now, can I?"

"Looks like you'll have to do without me...I am needed."

"And so am I!" They both smiled.

"We're with you too" Darklighter's face shone as his fellow Jedi's came into view. Maximus, XERXES, Agen and Yoda_623 stepped out beyond the shadows.

"Didn't think we were gonna let you go alone, did you?" Maximus joked.

"Together again, huh?" XERXES chuckled.

"Lets go!" said Agen, as the Jedi marched towards the front line to meet their enemy.

To be continued...

Darth Knight
07-21-2002, 04:42 AM
darklighter that was really good but one thing i thouhgt obi was a prisoner still

Darth Groovy
07-21-2002, 04:43 AM
Clad in his usual oversize black robe and sunglasses, Darth Groovy stood silently behind the turrets along with other padawans as he was instructed to do so. The gunners shifted the turrets right and left.....alternately exchanging fire. The smoke from the blasters up ahead had layed a dense fog in all of the surrounding areas. Nerfyoda stood next to him talking his ear off as usual. Back in class Nerfyoda loved to use Groovy as the butt of his unusual class clown antics yet would defend him just as easy. Darth Groovy had often found himself just as amused by Nerfyoda's absurd humor as much as he was annoyed by it. "Bloody AT-ATs!" said Nerfyoda as he spit on the ground. "What good would lightsabers do against those things?" Before Groovy could reply Nerfyoda had holstered his saber and pulled out a deadly rifle with a long range scope on the end. Nerfyoda grinned devilishly as he pulled a clip out of his back pocket and slapped it harshly into the butt of the rifle. "Just in case!" Nerfyoda chuckled! "You should not underestimate the power of the Force", Groovy replied. "Your too tense mate, relax! Yoda_623 is on the other side of the battle field. Did ya screw it up this morning Darth? I know it wasn't at lightsaber training!" Darth Groovy did not respond and only looked past Nerfyoda. Nerfyoda was right......Yoda_623 had been very stirn early that morning placeing unusual emphasis on emotion control and relaxation, he had seemed tense like he was holding back from his apprentice. Nerfyoda had often made jokes about Darth Groovy......his Lightsaber scoring always shadowed Nerfyoda Ten fold, and made him jealouse. while Nerfyoda was a better pilot than he was and loved to hunt minoks with his rifle. Obi wan 13 had prohibited rifles at the academy especially amoung students. Darth Groovy had known about his rifle and it's hidden location in his footlocker. Often on weekend leave Groovy would go minok hunting with Nerfyoda just to watch his amazing aim. Darth Groovy never took his saber skills very seriously, his passion was art and music which made Nerfyoda pick on him even more. At times it did seem strange to see a black and red tattooed face with a crown of thorns crooning Corillian love ballads in the mess hall surrounded by screaming students. Saber training came natural to Darth, as if he had been trained a thousand times. Today his skills would be needed. "I really hope we win today or this will be a waste!" said Nerfyoda as he pulled a cantine out that was slung across his shoulder and held it in front of Darth Groovy. "What is that" said Groovy, "I'll give you a hint......it ain't water and it ain't blue milk either!" replied Nerfyoda. "I made it last weekend.....this is our victory dance" "Um, of course" said Groovy. Nerfyoda twisted off the cap of the cantine "smell this" he said and held it up to Groovy'd nostrils. Groovy inhaled and let out a large cough followed by a gasp for air. "Jeezum Crow! your gonna kill somebody with that stuff" Groovy said as Nerfyoda chuckled wildly. "Mother's maiden recipe..... bless her soul!" Nerfyoda kissed a pendant that adorned his neck and quickly stuffed it back into his tunic. Nerfyoda gripped the charging mechanism below the barral of his gun as a pulsating hum whirred up to full power. "Do you think we will win?" asked Nerfyoda. "We will win.....my master has forseen it. Besides we were instructed to wait behind lines, the first few AT-ATs have fallen and we may not need to fight at all." Groovy finished. "Not till I take down at least one of 'em" Nerfyoda injected "I want a sith head on my mantle."Darth Groovy pursed his lip and gave Nerfyoda a generic look of discust. "WTF?" replied Nerfyoda, and Groovy rolled his yellow eyes up at the night sky and let out a sigh.
Groovy focused on Tyrion who was in the main command platform running back and forth barking orders at uniformed officers and multiple uniformed holographic images. A large explosion went off not more than a few yards behind the two padawans. Groovy And Nerfyoda ducked as dirt and ash rained down upon them "That was too close!" Nerfyoda screamed, "We may fight after all!" As Nerfyoda closed his sentance the two padawans gazed into the night sky and saw the faint image of a single tie interceptor with flames and smoke emmiting from it's port wing. The ship spiraled down and crashed into a tree. Tyrion cursed loudly and jumped off the platform to join a group of troops running towards the crashed ship. Groovy grabbed Nerfyoda's shoulder as he was about to run...."We wait here my freind until the Master's instruct us to do otherwise!" Nerfyoda cursed and then looked up at Groovy. "Your right, there will be plenty of heads on the field when the battle is over." "When the Battle was over......" Darth Groovy pondered heavily on that last sentence. Then looked up and smiled widely, "Master Obi-Wan is alive......he made it......thank the Force!"

obi
07-21-2002, 04:58 AM
Darth Knight is right, im in a SD.

good though. edit it a bit. :)

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 05:08 AM
The light was dimming fast. The flood-like lamps situated underneath the walkers gave out a blinding glow, and the soldiers who advanced from them reflected the light. They were dressed in a new uniform armour; the new clonetrooper armour, and thick, the helmets shone with white. The long line of soldiers could be seen approaching.

"We can't do this" Tyrion's confidence had been diminished.

"I'm sorry" replied Greedo solumnly.

Just as they had given up hope, the band of Jedi came over the ridge to greet them, AB_Legion leading. They really were a symbol of magnificance, kitted in bright white and bauge robes with their lightsabers haning from their belts. Tyrion was overcome with relief.

"I thought you'd never show" he said gleefully.

"Concentrate all the turrets fire on the walkers" AB_Legion did not smile. His expression was of no-nonsense, he knew exactly what to do. "We'll take care of the troops."

"Just like old times, eh Sir?" Greedo smiled and placed his rifle on the ground, drawing back his cloak to reveal his saber hilt above his belt. AB_Legion raised his voice to the infantry.

"All ensign ranked personel will remain here and concentrate fire on those walkers!" his voice deep and menacing. "Those of higher rank will follow me on my signal!"

The Jedi drew their sabers from their belts.

"Ready" AB_Legion gave the command, "CHARGE!!"

On his word half of the ground force proceeded at sprint pace to meet the enemy. Darklighter was right beside AB_Legion, running with him, his saber still unignited. The enemy troop began running now. At the same time, the Jedi ignited there sabers, a spectrum of muticolour and light, blinding to see with magnificance and power. The first shot came, and AB_Legion deflected it back at its firerer. The two sides met, and Darklighter leapt over the first line to meet the second.

He flipped to the side as he threw his lightsaber at the troopers. as he landed, he kickedone of the troopers to the floor, and the saber returned to his hand. he backflipped again to avoid the shots fired at him, and cartwheeld before slicing two troopers at once.

After some time, he spied an unmanned speeder bike. Looking out now towards the enemy base far off, he jumped on the bike to race to it, evading the shots from the troops and walkers. It seemed to go on forever. The endless passing of the long grass about his feet, as he hovered, racing now even faster towards the enclosed military encampment. As he arrived, he leapt from the bike and walked slowly towards the bunker.

"I've been waiting for you" a voice came from behind. He turned to greet it.

To be continued...

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 05:11 AM
Obi, do you think you could edit your post before my last long story and write how you escaped...I didn't see your post cos I was writing my story...sorry:(

edit - problem solved. Thanks:D

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 05:31 AM
I think we should take turns in writing the story so we dont have these problems.

I think Dark Academy writes section and then Light Academy and then Dark and so on.

The person on each academy to write the story is the one who claims it in the thread first. So you write a short message claiming it and if no one else has claimed it THEN you start to write the story.

Feel free to ask people in your academy you want to write next turn.


Do you all want to stick to this system?

Reb Starblazer
07-21-2002, 05:36 AM
Darklighter, here's an idea. Everywhere in your last two posts where you have Obi-wan, replace it with AB_Legion. It would kind of fit, because he's gone, and you guys would be surprised to see him. As for you idea Divine, it seems good. But as I don't know the grand scheme of things, I can't really decide what my part in it shall be. When I do come up with an idea, I'll try to keep it as low key as possible though. Part of the story, but not too big a part of the story, as I'm only a "minor" character, the story isn't revolving around me so much as it is around you and Obi. This is turning out great though, I must say.

EDIT: An example of what I'm talking about is where Obi-Wan appears and tells you to stay where you were. Just have it that AB appears and says something like "I thought Obi-Wan would have wanted you to stay here." Just improvise. As for Obi escaping, I'm sure he's got some plan and story arc up his sleeve:D

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 06:01 AM
I will continue my little story in just a second, about what happens to me.

BTW, Reb, you can really write about what you like. We haven't heard much of Death/Ice Squadron yet, so you could write a bit about them. Or you could go off at a tangent and write about your own story. I you want to, its perfectly fine with us:)

edit - afetr this is finished, we should definitely combine them all into chapters...that would be cool:D

Dath Maximus
07-21-2002, 06:03 AM
Im gonna make it short cause i dont have lots of ideas.


Arriving on the academy grounds Maximus leaves his condo lightsaber in hand.
"Perhaps today is a good day to battle!!" he cried.

Tossing his apprentice a e-11 blaster, he managed to yell out "cover me!"

Maximus began his way to obi-wan13.

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 06:30 AM
"It was foolish of you to come here, Darklighter" as he turned around slowly, the figure was in full view, standing at the entrane through which he had come. "You are only delaying your iminent death." It was Shadow Angel, Darth Dominance, Divine Spirit's sith lord companion. He was tall, his thick, long cloak pitch dark, his hood covering his face.

"You cannot win" he said in a low, foreboding voice that shattered the silence.

"We will see" came Darklighter's response. "You may have power, but you lack the spirit of a Jedi. You cannot foresee your victory while we are still alive, Shadow" his voice now deep, he was circling around shadow, his hand inches away from his saber hilt.

"You speak as if there is still hope left for your kind" he replied menacingly. "We will see if you are right, Admiral" he began to close in on Darklighter, they were both walking to confront each other. "You know you will not win this battle. The darkside is the only way out. Join us Tidus. You know it is the only option."

"The only option if you are weak enough to give in!" he shouted, as the tension mounted Shadow's face was grim and smirkless.

"Fool!!" he quickly drew his lightsaber. In a split second he leapt into the air towards Darklighter, his brandished red saber gleaming with malice. Darklighter was too quick. Before the saber could strike him, his orange-white saber was drawn to block the attack. They locked, Shadow's teeth gritted together, Darklighter's eyes glaring beneath his low brow. Shadow flung himself backwards to land on the ground a few metres away.

He ran at Tidus again, swiping to his left. He parried the attack, and ducked to avoid the next swipe across his head. Darklighter spun, circling in the air just in time to avoid Shadow's deadly upercut. He landed, and they faced each other again. Full of anger, Shadow ran at him, his blade high above his head, ready to strike. This he did not foresee. As he brought hi ssaber down as he ran, Darklighter dodged to the side. Everything moved in slow motion. Shadow ran passed and missed, and Darklighter brought his saber down upon his back.

With a cry he fell. "Curse you, and your Academy!" he yelped. The shuttle was just in time. It cruised overhead, guns ready, firing at Darklighter. he dodged them and dived behind the bunker out of view. Shadow crawled to his feet, and the shuttle ramp lowered.

"We will meet again!" He cried, as he climbed aboard the caft, injured and limping. Darklighter knew this was only the beginning. He would have to face him again, but not yet. Holstering his saber, he climbed aboard the speeder bike, and raced back to his comrades.

Dath Maximus
07-21-2002, 06:42 AM
Unless my double sith maximus shows up im gonna make him my nemesis.

Stepping out into the hallway of the main academy building Maximus met his double.
"we meet again Max" the Sith warrior said coldly.
Without acknologing this Dath pulled out his lightsaber using force pull. Instanly two blades clashed. One red one blue.

"You are strong old man!'' the nemesis cried
"far stronger than you'' maximus yelled back kicking the clone aside.

Shadow Angel
07-21-2002, 06:52 AM
OMG, there was like, 20 people here a once and I kep getting the "This page cannot be displayed" screen for 9 HOURS! AHHH!!!!!! Has anyone else had this problem? Well, I don't know if this chapter has become outdated or not, but here goes:

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Space. The final frontier. A red planet, shimmering like a jewel, a deception of the fiery hell within. A black, silent ship jumped out of hyperspace in its orbit. The Sith Infiltrator, ferrying the Dark Lord, the Shadow Angel, sped towards a landing platform marked in the Emperor's special coordinates.

As the ship landed, a pair of blast doors in front of the platform opened, and two black-robed, hooded firgures emerged. The Dark Lord exited his craft, and one of the attendants spoke. "This way, my Lord. We have been expecting your arrival for a long time."

The three entered the facility, and the doors slammed shut behind them. Although he wasn't affected by it, Shadow could sense the searing heat inside. "Exactly why did you choose such a hot and uncomfortable planet as this to develop your weaponry here?"
"Simply because soldiers grow lazy in comfortable climate. They must learn to feel the heat of battle."

"Soldiers? I didn't come here to inspect another batch of stormtroopers--" the attendant quickly interrupted.
"Oh, our new clones are much more than mere stormtroopers, I can assure you." The three entered a turbolift. One attendant pushed a button, and they were off.

Shadow, not being one to ask a lot of questions, instead probed the attendant's mind through the Force. After a few moments, his eyes widened.

The turbolift stopped, and opened to reveal a catwalk reaching across the chasm of a volcano! Below were several platforms floating above the lava. On it, were thousands of hodded figures sparring against each other with double-bladed lightsabers.

Once again, the attendant spoke. "Many years ago, the great Darth Sidious built a clone army using a template of a bounty hunter. Although they made excellent soldiers, they still could not meet the Emperor's incrasing demands. We have remedied this problem by using the DNA of one of Sidious' strongest, most loyal apprentices, Khameir Sarin... but you might know him better as DARTH MAUL.

Indeed, my Master was wise to make this decision. "Before I make my final report, I would like to test out one of these clones personally." The attendant was a bit reluctant. "As you wish, my Lord, but I must warn you. You may not survive the test run. We've made certain enhance--"
"Just do it." And the attendant left Shadow at the catwalk.

Minutes later, the door at the other end opened to reveal a clone. The Maul clone removed his hood and cloak, then drew his double-bladed lightsaber and ignited each blade, one by one. Shadow ignited his own curved saber, it's purple blade, an untraditional color for both the Jedi and the Sith, glowing across his face. The clone immdeiately charged at Shadow and twirled his blade at him, but the Dark Lord easily blocked. The other side of the clone's staff immediately rushed to Shadow's face, but his keen sense of the Force acted as an alarm, aiding to block and parry each incoming strike. The sabers locked, and Shadow was surprised at the clone's strength as his blade kept coming closer to his face. However, the Dark Lord's mechanical strength in his arm kicked in and pushed the clone back off balance. A quick Force Pull brought him closer before Shadow brought his blade down on the clone's neck and decapitated him.

The attendant rushed back in. Shadow put away his saber, turned to face him, and said, "39 seconds. Most impressive. The Jedi will be overwhelmed by this elite fighting force. How many of these soldiers are prepared?"
"Two million, sir." Shadow grinned.

"Excellent. I want them sent to the Jedi Academy battleground at 0600 Coruscant time. Meanwhile, I have a personal agenda to follow. There will be no one to stop us this time!"

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How's that? Good? I was typing for over 2 hours, but then my system crashed, and I had to start over. I was getting impatient, so I shortened it a lot. Note that "39 seconds" was the winning time at the JKII Gateway Challenge.

Reb Starblazer
07-21-2002, 07:44 AM
Warning*** Extreme long post alert *** Reader discretion is advised. :D


"Ice leader to Ice Three, come in Ice three."

"Ice leader, this is Ice three, Starblazer here"

"Starblazer, I'm taking Exterminator, WhiteDragon and Camus, and we'll be attacking from the north. You take Kordkelly, Darth Knight and s0ulbilhtr and attack from the south. We'll box in the remaining AT's, and then hit them harder than a Catharian moustrap." Captain Dissectional said.

"Agreed" Said Reb into his comm unit. "This is Ice three, Kordkelly, Darth Knight, Camus, you heard the man, form up into flight pattern Tango Echo niner. Time to play 'Hammer and Anvil'."

"Roger" the others all said at the same time.

The plan worked perfectly. While neither side had truly won the battle, Ice Squadron definetly had the upper hand.

"Whhooohoooooo" Darth Knight yelled as another AT-AT toppled to the ground. "Just like Shaak tipping" He exclaimed.

"I wouldn't know" Reb responded "My youth was wasted learning the Sith arts. I never had time to for anything fun like Shaak tipping" Reb finished as he made a run against the downed AT-AT, shooting it's vunerable neck. The AT-AT exploded into a ball of flames.

"HEY! NO FAIR" Yelled Darth Knight. " That was my kill" he responded more quietly this time.

"Alright, alright. The next one's yours" Reb laughed into the comm.

"Wait a minute" Kordkelly said over the comm. "You're a sith? What? Did I miss something here?"

"Yea, fill us in Leftenant" replied Camus

"Yea, I'm a Sith. Or at least, I was. I came to Obi-Wan's academy to find peace, I didn't want to fight anymore. I was tired of it all." Reb said. An AT-ST burst into flames to his left. "Nice shot Darth Knight. Obi-wan accepted me into his academy, as a shuttle pilot. It was a job where I wouldn't have to use the Force. That way, no one would really notice I was using the Dark Side. I have no connection to the Light Side of the Force. That doesn't make me evil, I just can't do it. Try to understand that this doesn't change who I am to you guys, or to this academy."

"We understand Leftenant. Don't worry." replied s0ulblihtr

"Alright, now, back to it." Said Reb as KordKelly attached the tow cable to an AT-AT's leg, Reb began to fly around the AT-AT, trying to trip it. "Just one more pass, one more pass" BAM! The speeder shook around him. " I'm hit, I'm hit! " Reb yelled. The sudden shock cause the tow line to become unattached as well.

"Is it bad? You gonna make it?" Asked WhiteDragon

"I'll be alright for now. But we can't take much more of this punishment. Concentrate on taking down those AT-AT's, they've got the most firepower."

"Good idea Leftenant. I agree. Alright Ice Squadron, move out"
Said Dissectional over the comm.

Two more AT-AT's were taken down, including the one Reb originally tried for. But now, the AT-ST's were becoming a problem. They were taking potshots at the speeders while they were tying up the AT-AT's.

" Starblazer, you and Whitedragon finish off those AT-AT's, the rest of us will start working on those chicken walkers.

"Roger that sir" Replied both Reb and Whitedragon, as the others took off to engage the enemy. Reb moved into position, ready to make a run against an AT-ST.

"Cover me Whitedragon." Reb ordered.

"Already on it sir." Replied Whitedragon cheerily.

The cord attached to the leg of the AT-AT, and Reb began circling around, attempting to tie it up. He had completed one pass around when...

"REB LOOK OU..." Whitedragon yelled into his comm as a stray bolt from an AT-ST connected with Reb's speeder. The speeder, began to spiral out of control, and Reb pulled tightly on the flight stick.

"This is Ice Three, I've been hit bad and I'm going down. I repeat, I'm going down. I'm going to try and get to the mountains in Tangu sector, at least that way we'll be out of the battlezone."

"Roger that Starblazer. Don't you go dying on us now, hear me?"
Dissectional said.

Reb couldn't help but smile despite the fact that he was quickly losing control of the speeder and approaching the ground.." Roger that sir. I'll take that as an order. Try not to get in too much trouble without me, and may the Force be with you."

"May the Force be with you too." Said Dissectional, the last transmission Reb would get before he hit the ground.

"Ohhhh..." Reb said aloud " this is gonna hurt

Well Darklighter, you asked for a story about Ice Squadron, and here it is. I hope none of you mind that I used your names in my post, and I hope I didn't write you guys too out of character:D

Shadow Angel
07-21-2002, 07:58 AM
Originally posted by Darklighter
"It was foolish of you to come here, Darklighter" as he turned around slowly, the figure was in full view, standing at the entrane through which he had come. "You are only delaying your iminent death." It was Shadow Angel, Darth Dominance, Divine Spirit's sith lord companion. He was tall, his thick, long cloak pitch dark, his hood covering his face.

"You cannot win" he said in a low, foreboding voice that shattered the silence.

"We will see" came Darklighter's response. "You may have power, but you lack the spirit of a Jedi. You cannot foresee your victory while we are still alive, Shadow" his voice now deep, he was circling around shadow, his hand inches away from his saber hilt.

"You speak as if there is still hope left for your kind" he replied menacingly. "We will see if you are right, Admiral" he began to close in on Darklighter, they were both walking to confront each other. "You know you will not win this battle. The darkside is the only way out. Join us Tidus. You know it is the only option."

"The only option if you are weak enough to give in!" he shouted, as the tension mounted Shadow's face was grim and smirkless.

"Fool!!" he quickly drew his lightsaber. In a split second he leapt into the air towards Darklighter, his brandished red saber gleaming with malice. Darklighter was too quick. Before the saber could strike him, his orange-white saber was drawn to block the attack. They locked, Shadow's teeth gritted together, Darklighter's eyes glaring beneath his low brow. Shadow flung himself backwards to land on the ground a few metres away.

He ran at Tidus again, swiping to his left. He parried the attack, and ducked to avoid the next swipe across his head. Darklighter spun, circling in the air just in time to avoid Shadow's deadly upercut. He landed, and they faced each other again. Full of anger, Shadow ran at him, his blade high above his head, ready to strike. This he did not foresee. As he brought hi ssaber down as he ran, Darklighter dodged to the side. Everything moved in slow motion. Shadow ran passed and missed, and Darklighter brought his saber down upon his back.

With a cry he fell. "Curse you, and your Academy!" he yelped. The shuttle was just in time. It cruised overhead, guns ready, firing at Darklighter. he dodged them and dived behind the bunker out of view. Shadow crawled to his feet, and the shuttle ramp lowered.

"We will meet again!" He cried, as he climbed aboard the caft, injured and limping. Darklighter knew this was only the beginning. He would have to face him again, but not yet. Holstering his saber, he climbed aboard the speeder bike, and raced back to his comrades.

Whoa, guys, this thing has grown huge since I was gone. Nice story, Darklighter, but I kinda wanted establish my character first (I'm sort of a cross between Darth Vader and Tyranus). Oh, well. Let's see here.......

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The Shadow Angel's shuttle quickly docked into his Super Star Destroyer in orbit around the planet. As the ramp lowered, the usual procedure of stormtroopers marching in formation around the craft took form, a bit hastily. Admiral Jericho, commander of the SSD Black Phoenix, rushed to greet the Dark Lord. To his shock, Shadow Angel's robes were tattered and torn, and he looked exhausted. As he limped out of the shuttle, Jericho said:

"L-L-Lord Dominance.... back so soon--"
"You may dispense with the pleasantries, Commander. My confrontation with Master Darklighter has turned with unexpected results. Now, if will excuse me, I will retreat to my quarters. I do not wish to be interrupted!"
And with that, Lord Dominance stomped off to his meditation chamber.

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Upon entering, Shadow immediately removed his damaged Sith robes, revealing his buff, built torso, marred only by the immense scar on his back. But most disturbing, there was no blood. In it's place, was a myriad of tristed wires and metal. His arms, from the elow to the fingers, were also metallic, polished in chrome. The Shadow Angel did indeed rise from the ashes.... as a cyborg!
No matter, thought the young Dark Lord. A mere lightsaber wound cannot stop me from my hatred, my quest for vengeance.

My thirst for blood.

<All in good time, my young apprentice.> The Dark Lord raised his head towards the ceiling. "Master?"
<Yes, it is I, Divine Spirit. I have had to retreat from the Jedi forces, but my plans have not yet failed. You will go to my secret cloning laboratories on [censored! I can't tell you! But for story purposes I will call it Volcanic Cloning Planet.] The coordinates will be beamed to you shortly. There, you are to perform an inspection and certify them as ready for battle. You will be most impressed, I assure you.>

"As you wish, my Master." And with that, Lord Dominance rose from his seat. The scar that was once on his back was no more. It had completely healed. He opened a compartment in the wall on his chamber (the closet) and changed.

The cocoon of the chamber opened. What emerged, was a figure of terror, yet also resembling an icon of ultimate coolness. Donned in a leather trenchcoat, the Dark Lord ran his metallic claw fingers through his long, electric blue hair. His equally shiny, metal boots boomed across the polished floor. He approached Admiral Jericho.

"Admiral, prepare my personal craft at once. I will depart for [Volcanic Clong Planet]... alone!"


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What do you think? Good?

obi
07-21-2002, 08:00 AM
....... Obi-wan! no!........................Move move move!..................... we cannot escape, we must surrender......................You are beaten.................


Obi-wan heard the different voices, all combined into one gargle of nonsense, and he didn't understand why he heard such things. He awoke from his coma, and sat up in a small interogation cell.

"HE's awake. Inform the emporer." Obi heard a man say.

Obi-wan looked around at the small room he was in. It was grey, and had only one door. His lightsaber was missing, which didn't surprise him much. After a few moments, The emporer and 4 Troops walked in, with black interogation droids.

"Now, we will find out all we need to know of your weak academy." The emporer said.

"What makes you think I will tell you anything?" Obi-wan asked.

"The truth serum was made by my top scientist, and is proven 100% to work. You will tell us what we want to know, whether you like it or not, and then, you will die. Along with your freinds." The emporer said, followed by a laugh.

The balck droid drifted closer to Obi-wan, with the needle sticking out, and it pierced his skin. Pain ran through Obi-wan's entire body, but he didn't show it.

"You are in pain. And I sense your hate building inside you. Your anger can be a powerful ally, obi-wan kenobi." The emporer said.

"I control my anger, it does not control me." Obi13 replied.

"In time, you will be dead. Your freinds beside you. You do not matter to me." The Emporer said.

"That's what you think. I am a threat to you, and you are afraid of me. " Obi-wan said.

There was a blank look on the emporer's face, as he gritted his teeth, and shot Obi-wan with lightning.

Obi-wan fell to the ground, and was trying to wear off the shock, but now the drugs where kicking in. The EMporer laughed.
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Obi-wan layed in his cell, staring at the cieling, and meditating the best of his ability. A guard walked in the room.

"It's time. Come with me. NOW!" the guard said, as obi-wan nodded and stood, and walked as best he could out of the door to his death.

He looked desperatly around, to find an escape, but found nothing. He walked down the hall, the guard behind him, gun drawn. Obi-wan looked onto a nearby table, and saw an oxygen mask. He then acted like he tripped, and landed on the table. He quickly grabbed the mask, and tucked it into his robe.

"Sorry. The drugs still have an affect on me." OBi-wan said, and the guard nodded.

They continued to walk down the hall to an air lock.

"Get in." The guard said.

"Very well." Obi-wan said, as he took a step, turned, and knocked the guard flat on his back with the mask.

"Sorry about that." Obi-wan said, as he pulled the stormtroopers body away, and took his armor and blaster.

to be continued........

Dath Maximus
07-21-2002, 08:11 AM
Dath Maximus slowly walked around the empty training hall, lightsaber drawn stretching out with the force to find his leathel opponent.
"You prepared to finish this fight Old man?" a voice echoed.
"of course i am, but you will find my power is greatly more than yours." he calmly replied.

Ducking before thinking Maximus narrowly missed a lightsaber being swung at him. jumping and slashing outward he once again regaind control of his environment.
The two blades clashed with a spark of light. Spinning and twrilling around the room, the two warriors used the force to propel all around them.
"it ends now!!" cried the sith raising his lightsaber high.
"yes it does" maximus said softly cutting down his assailent.

Standing over the dead body of his attacker Maximus sensed a stormtrooper nearby.
Using a mind trick on the hapless minion he persuaded him to take him to obi-wan13's location.

Dath Maximus
07-21-2002, 08:24 AM
ohh thats nice obi im trying to tie into your characters location and you leave now im gonna be stuck with the emperor

Dath Maximus
07-21-2002, 08:28 AM
why did my last post go under one i already did and not at the end of the posts themselves

so as i said:
Nice job obi, i was trying to get my story with yours and you leave me with the emporer

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 08:29 AM
That was great Reb. Really, really good stuff. I have more though:

After the last battle Darklighter was quite shaken up. Shadow had been a worthy adversary, and he was only in training...after 15 years of mastering these skills, he could feel Shadow's power and anger. It overwhelmed him.

The dark side really is strong he thought to himself, as he climbed towards the speeder. What if they are stronger? What will we do? It was not good to dwell on these thoughts, and with a shrug he banished the idea from his memory.

As he was just about to start the bike engines, voices could be heard, a couple of hundred meters beyond the entrance to the opening. Darklighter jumped off and crept with unheard stealth to the small forest patch near to where the voices were coming from, and ducked out of view. As he crept ever so closer, he caught a glimpse of a band of troopers, with an officer breifing them on the situation.

"We have word" the officer began again, "that there is a break in the Academy's defense." Darklighter drew closer and listened intently.

"The Emperor has informed me that there is a gap in the sheild. A precise hit will knock out the sheild generator. When this happens the Academy will be free of defene, and the bombers can begin their attack. Understood? Now move!" On his command the soldiers darted round the back of the forest patch into the opening.

To his amazement, hidden behind thebunker area, Daklighter saw, was a huge landing site, with ties stationed everywhere. He could have attempted to take them on, but even with his skill, he would be no match against two dozen blaster pistols. He watched the ties take off, the officer climbed aboard an interceptor, it cast a great black shadow as the merciless killing machine thundered overhead.

"Admiral Darklighter? Admiral come in!" a muffled voice came from the comlink on his belt. He grabbed and answered it immediately.

"Yes, I am here."

"Admiral, you must come back at once. The troops have made it into the hanger bay, and we have only just caught sight of Ice Squadron. There is one speeder missing!" the voice was that of a frightened Greedo.

Immediately Darklighter ran to the opening entrance and pulled out his small scanner binoculars. Quickly darting from one side of the large open plain to another, towards the mountain region, Darklighter spotted a crashed speeder. A figure had emerged and was now walking towards the mountainous regoin before him.

"I see it" he said down the com. The figure was dressed in dark cloak - it was Reb for sure.

"I'll meet you back there" he said again.

"Hurry Admiral, we need you now!" on that note, he jumped on the speeder and rode off towards the Academy.

Dath Maximus
07-21-2002, 08:35 AM
am i the only one who seems to be messed up on this place???

ive posted 2 times already and they go under my last post and not at the end of the thread.

Reb Starblazer
07-21-2002, 09:02 AM
Well, I believe it's the Sith Academy's turn to post. However, if no one does soon, I'll put up another part. I'll more than likely just edit this post.

Coming soon: Into the Dark
Soon to be seen in fine "Academy Wars" threads everywhere.
Oh wait, there's only this one...

BTW, nice story Darklighter. Your reference of me worked perfectly, and I'm going to try to find a way to connect my post to yours.

Darth Talliusc
07-21-2002, 09:17 AM
Darth Talliusc crouched in a dark chamber, he knew the droids would be upon him soon and he had yet to find the lightsaber his master had hidden in the temple grounds. BOOM! a missile launcher shot was fired, Talliusc knew he didnt have much time to get out of the way, he leaped through a nearby window and landed in a garden of zworrip bushes. trying to be as quiet as possible Talliusc crept along the garden edge towards a gatehouse, "my master Divine Spirit is wise and would not let this challenge be easy" thought Talliusc.

moments later on the gatehouse roof Talliusc spotted his lightsaber, its beutiful matte black handle glinted in the moonlight on a nearby pedestal. gathering his rage Talliusc leaped high and far along the grounds "the lightsaber is within my grasp, soon. SOON!" he thought desperately. as he approached however he realized that something was amiss. it was a trap. calling the darkside to him, Talliusc absorbed an onslaught of laser blasts from a squadron of droidekka's nearby, using his anger he called the lightsaber to his hand.... snap-HISS!!!! snap-HISS!!!! the double blade extended Talliusc knew no fear, he charged down the droids one by one and cut them to pieces. as the last droid blew apart Talliusc heard laughter "hahaha excellent my young apprentice, you have done well. the jedi will be no match for you".
"thank you master, i live only to serve" replied Talliusc
"soon when the jedi have committed against our feint attacks, we will launch our true strike, and none shall be left alive" laughing again Divine Spirit seemed to collaesce, and.... dissappear as if he was one with the darkness.

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 09:19 AM
Originally posted by Reb Starblazer
Well, I believe it's the Sith Academy's turn to post. However, if no one does soon, I'll put up another part. I'll more than likely just edit this post.

I would post but im still enjoying obi-wan13's story! :D

Keep the good stories comin' guys!

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 09:27 AM
Reb, do you want to carry on your story? I would carry on mine but I posted my like last. So, does anyone else want to carry on? I'm not sure when Obi-wan will get here you see...

Reb Starblazer
07-21-2002, 09:37 AM
Another extremly long post by me. Who'd have thunk it?:D Hope you enjoy Talliusc. You too Divine.

Reb Starblazer awoke to every nerve in his being screaming out in pain. He pushed open the ****pit of the Speeder, and stood up. He turned around to check on his gunner, Kordkelly, and was surprised to find him gone. "Perhaps he woke up before I did and is already outside. Rather unlikely, but possible" he thought to himself. He stepped onto the speeders wing, and was surprised at how warm it actually was here. It was probably just below freezing temperature, so his jumpsuit was more than warm enough. "Well at least I won't freeze to death." He thought as he jumped down into the snow. That was when he noticed a man in dark robes standing there, staring at him. Reb's hand instinctively went for his Lightsabre, only to find it missing.

"Don't worry, I mean you no harm. Yet. I've come to make you an offer, on behalf of my emperor. I am Dark Talliusc, of the Sith Academy." The pale faced man said, lifting his hand to show Reb's Lightsabre in his possesion.

"I have no interests in offers from Sith. I know you're kind." Replied Reb.

"Indeed. And so you should for you are our kind. I can feel the Dark Side rolling off you. You know that you'll never truly fit in here. You don't belong, not with them" He answered, the last word rolled of his tongue with spite, the blood red tears, tattoed below his eyes, seemed to glow with hate.

"No, I don't. I truly don't know where I belong..." Said Reb, as an evil smile spread across Talliusc's face. "But I know where I stand." Reb continued, and Talliusc's smile faded.

" Then you stand on the path to destruction. You, and every Jedi that cowers before us, will die. It is your destiny as it is our destiny to rule." Talliusc said, his voice rising.

"Everyone dies eventually Sith" Reb spat out the last word with contempt. "But not everyone is lucky enough to die for what they believe in. As for my destiny ... I make my own." Reb finished, reaching behind his back for the blaster that he always kept there, attached to the belt of his flight suit.

"Not so fast Traitor." Said Talluisc as he stepped aside, revealing Kordkelly, legs and arms tied, laying on the ground. "I thought something like this would happen, so I planned ahead." He continued. Reb stopped his reach for the blaster, and brought his hand out somewhat, but still close enough to grab it if necessary.
"Oh how pathetically Jedi-like of you. Now then, I suggest you reconsider my offer. I may let him live."

"Don't do it Reb, you know he'll kill us both" Yelled Kordkelly

"Quiet Jedi, or I shall kill you right now. Your time is running out Starblazer. As is his."

"My name, is Darth Malice. And you shall soon see why" Said Reb, grabbing his blaster and firing a few shots at Talliusc while he dived behind a snowbank for cover. Talliusc's red Lightsabre snapped to life, and he deflected all the blasts. Reb hoped to draw Talliusc's attention long enough for Kordkelly to get away. Unfortunately, things do not always go to plan.

"Come out Traitor. Or your treachery will be paid for with his blood." Talliusc yelled. Reb knew that he had no choice. He stepped out from behind the bank, dropped the blaster and raised his hands. "Ah good." Talliusc said. "Now you can watch him die" Talliusc picked Kordkelly up by the hair, and Reb stared in horror as a red blade pierced through Kordkelly's chest, passing directly through his heart.

"No!" Reb yelled. "He was an innocent bystander, your quarrel is with me. Why?

"Because you couldn't" Talliusc said calmy as he extinguished his blade. Kordkelly's limp body dropped to the ground. Reb could feel the life drain out of him, becoming one with the Force. "So, what is your answer?"

"The same as it was before. I live my life as a warrior, and I am not afraid to die as one." answered Reb, as he started walking towards Talliusc.

"And what is a warrior without weapons?" Mocked Talliusc, begining a slow stride towards Reb. The two were about 5 feet apart when Reb spoke.

"A warrior still." Reb said, as he jumped into the air and connected with a surprise dropkick to Talliusc's chest, sending him, as well as his and Reb's Lightsabre into the air. Reb was on his feet first, and he rushed at Talliusc, tackling him to the ground. But Talliusc, grabbed Reb's flightsuit, rolled to his back, and threw him over him. Both got up at the same time. Reb and Talluisc faced each other, circling, waiting for the other to make the first move. Talluisc never was one for patience. He threw a punch at Reb, to have it blocked, and blocked one of Reb's in turn. He then spun on his heels, and shoulder threw Reb to the ground. Talliusc raised his foot to stomp on Reb's forehead, but Reb rolled to the side onto his stomach and caught Talliusc with a donkey kick to the face, knocking him on his back. Reb stood up slowly, while Talliusc kickflipped himself up off the ground. Talliusc's eyes shifted, and Reb knew what he was looking at. Talliusc used the force to call his Lightsabre to him, and ignited it. Reb, still unsure as to where his was, backed away, hoping to aviod the deadly strike of the lightsabre. Then he saw it. He saw his Lightsabre a few feet away on the ground. He jumped over Talliusc's swing, and rolled, picking his lightsabre up as he went.
He ignited it and turned around in time to block Talliusc's crimson blade with his own light blue. The two fought, blocks and parries abound, until their sabers locked. They pushed against each other, and neither gained leeway, and they split apart. Talliusc, then iginited a second crimson blade, an evil grin crossing his face. Then Reb activated his second blade, a forest green.
" Well met Starblazer "
"Don't call me that. You have even less right to speak that name then I do." Reb charged at Talliusc, spinning his lightsabre, a barrage of colours, creating a shifting circle of blue and green. Talliusc blocked Reb, and twisted his Lightsabre, hoping to catch Reb in the ribs. But Reb pushed off his inital swing and parried Talliusc's newest attack. Red met blue and green as the two dark siders battled, neither giving way to the other. Then, Talliusc saw his opening. He swung high, and brought his lightsabre down, hoping to catch Reb unaware. Instead, Reb leapt back, but Talliuscs blade cut through his sabre, splitting it into two. Reb, then took one of his sabres, and swiped at Talliusc, but caught his handle and split it. Now, both combatents were armed with two lightsabres. Blade met blade met blade over and over again, never relenting, never resting. Reb attacked low, and Talliusc high, as they simultaineously blocked each other. They each saw their chance. Reb, brought his left hand up, slicing Talliusc's right arm off at the elbow, while Talliusc brought his left blade down, slicing off Reb's right leg below the kneecap. Both fell backwards, lying on the ground in pain. In the process, Reb dropped both of his lightsabres, one of them tumbled down the icy hill. Talliusc stood, holding his right arm, now just a stump.
"You will pay dearly for that traitor. You will pay with your life."
He started walking towards Reb, lying on the ground, almost defenseless. " Don't judge yourself the winner before the deathblow is dealt." Reb retorted.
Talliusc laughed, a disturing sound. "Oh please. Look at you, you have no weapons, you can't even walk. What could you possibly do against me?"
Reb strecthed out with the Force, finding his remaining lightsabre, and used the Force to move it.
"Improvise" Reb stated coldy. With that, Reb's lightsabre sprang into the air and ignited. It flew toward Talliusc, and pierced right through his heart, the same as Talliusc's had earlier done to Kordkelly.
"No" Was all he could whisper, as he staggered towards Reb, crimson blade now ignited. He raised his blade over his head, and fell, right on top of Reb, the blade cutting Reb in half, from the top of his head down.





"NO!" Reb yelled as he awoke with a start. It was all a dream. A dream. Or was it a vision? A vision of things to come? His destiny. "No" Reb thought to himself, " I make my own destiny "
Reb quickly opened the ****pit and stood up,ignoring his aching body. He turned, relieved to find Kordkelly there, and still alive. He took off his flight suit, wearing the dark tunic and pants that were underneath. He took his cloak, and made sure his Lightsabre was on his belt. He picked Kordkelly up, and placed him over his shoulder. "You're not dieing today, not as long as I can help it" Reb said. With that, he started his long walk back to base, as a TIE Interceptor flew overhead.




So, how was that? I hope I put your character to good use Talliusc. And I hope I made him evil enough for your liking:p
Just in case you're wondering, I put that TIE Interceptor in there in order to "tie" in with Darklighter's post. Get it, tie? Sheesh, tough crowd:D As for why I like long, person oriented posts. Well, that's what Star Wars is all about. It's about one person's contribution in the grand scheme of things, showing that one person can make a difference, no matter who they are. As for the continuing tales of Reb Starblazer, if you think this was harsh, wait til you see my next post. But that'll be tomorrow. Sometime late tommorrow as I have to work from 9am to 6pm. I look forward to seeing how much this thread changes. BTW, please don't do anything too significant with my character while I'm gone. I have plans, yes, BIG plans for Reb. *Rub's hands together evilly* Well, everyone except Talliusc, he has permission.:D

Darth Talliusc
07-21-2002, 09:40 AM
He awoke with a start, he flailed out and immediately wished he hadnt, there was a horrible pain all along the outside of his skin, and it felt as if his very bones would burst if he moved again. agony, perfect agony. he looked around and tried to figure out where he was, he was floating upright in a bacta tank in a dark room. little else could be seen. "strange" he thought, most medical centers are brighter then this. his head started to burst with questions: "how did i get here?" "how am i going to get out?" "am i a prisoner of war?". that last thought jarred his memory, war. yes there was a war going on, but he had not been captured, no he would die before be captured, and the enemy wouldnt likely leave him in a room unguarded if they had managed to capture him anyway.
what had happened to him? he tried to think of his most recent clear memory... yes, he had been part of the assault on the jedi complex. he hadnt actually fought anyone, or had he? slowly his memory eased back into him and showed him what he had forgotten. he had commanded a section of the invading army's assault and had been angry that he was forbidden to cleave jedi. his master had wanted him there as an observer and director, not a frontline soldier.
it was all coming back now, he had watched as a speeder crashed into the ground near his position. there was something special about this speeder, YES. it was the speeder of Reb Starblazer. perhaps, thought the man, i can do my masters bidding sooner than i thought. he reached out with the force and found the unconscious form of Reb, "yes, this will please my master greatly if he can be turned". he connected his very soul to that of Reb, and came to him as if in a dream, to Reb it must have seemed as if this was actually happening.
"excellent" he said to himself allowing himself a small smile as he worked himself farther into Reb's mind. he manipulated Reb's thoughts, "hmm, this ones mental defenses are more complex than most jedi, no matter he is unconscious and should pose no problem".
"Don't worry, I mean you no harm. Yet. I've come to make you an offer, on behalf of my emporer. I am Dark Talliusc, of the Sith Academy." The pale faced man said, lifting his hand to show Reb's Lightsabre in his possesion.
"I have no interests in offers from Sith. I know you're kind." Replied Reb. "Patience, Talliusc scolded himself, he will bend, if not break"
"Indeed. And so you should for you are our kind. I can feel the Dark Side rolling off you. You know that you'll never truly fit in here. You don't belong, not with them" He answered, the last word rolled of his tongue with spite, the blood red tears, tattoed below his eyes, seemed to glow with hate.
"No, I don't. I truly don't know where I belong..." Said Reb, as an evil smile spread across Talliusc's face. "But I know where I stand." Reb continued, and Talliusc's smile faded,
"NO, Talliusc thought to himself, he is unconscious there is no way that he can resist me" he felt the anger swell up in him, but tried to make him appear serene to Reb.
Talliusc tried to convince Reb, but his will was iron."Then you stand on the path to destruction" Talliusc added. "You, and every Jedi that cowers before us, will die. It is your destiny as it is our destiny to rule." Talliusc said, his voice rising.
Reb was having none of this, thinking quickly with his sith mind Talliusc conjured an image into Reb's brain, he showed him his copilot on the ground, at Talliusc's mercy.
over the next few moments Talliusc got more and more discouraged, and more angry as well. "why isnt he bending knee?" thought Talliusc, "he should be groveling for my masters aid by now!".
They began to fight. Reb shouldnt be any match for a sithlord in a dreamscape that the sith controls. but alas, this Reb was not normal at all, indeed his mind was one of the most powerful of the jedi, that is why Talliusc was sent to turn him. as the fight drew to a conclusion Talliusc was surprised to see his arm chopped off, in a fit of rage he severed Reb's leg. "it is done, Talliusc thought, he cannot defy me anymore"
he slowly sauntered over to where Reb lay, and was shortly impaled by his lightsaber. "NOOOO!!!" this could not happen, before Reb could manage anything else Talliusc cleaved him in half and severed his mental connection.
"i have failed, and made the jedi stronger for it." he muttered to himself
"CAPTAIN" he yelled "get us out of here, were going back to Coruscant".

the rest of his memory was still hazy, if the battle was not real then how did Talliusc get so badly burned? and why was he in a bacta tank? he then saw an image through the bacta, a cloaked figure, an imposing visage even through the bacta... Divine Spirit had come to check on his apprentice. and the final memories clicked into place.
when Talliusc had reported his failure to turn the Jedi, the dark emperor had punished him, before Talliusc could even register that an attack was coming he was enveloped in sith lightning.
"YOU WILL NOT FAIL ME AGAIN DARTH TALLIUSC!" he spoke the words softly yet they rang in Talliuscs head, his master was not forgiving.
quickly his mind snapped back to the present, he raised himself out of the bacta tank as his master stood before him. "Have you learned your lesson Darth Talliusc?"
"Yes master, i will not fail you or the order again." even as he spoke he felt terrified, facing an army of jedi would be immensely more pleasant than seeing his master displeased again.

a silence hung in the air while Talliusc waited for his master to continue.

"very well, im sending you on another mission, you will travel to the system of Kessel and see that its spice mines step up production" his master paused then, "oh and fashion yourself a new lightsaber ive disposed of your old one. Do not fail again Lord Talliusc" he then left, collaescing into the night once more.

The ride to kessel was long but it allowed Talliusc to make himself a new weapon, "the jedi wont know what to do when they see this coming" he smiled to himself and thought of what he would do next time he met that cursed Starblazer.






so what do you think? sorry about stealing some of your stuff Reb, i just read your amazing story and had to continue it from another perspective. we should continue this rivalry of ours when you return from work tomorrow.

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 09:42 AM
After riding on the bike for a while, Darklighter was drawing nearer to the Academy. He could see the hanger loom into view over the hill as he descended. But as he came over the ridge, he had to swurve aside to dodge the pile of rubble left from the attack before. A stray piece of metal struck the left engine. It spun out of control, toppling him off the bike and hitting him hard on the ground. He looked up just in time to see his bike crash in into the remains of a turret a hundred feet away.

"Dammit!" He shouted to himself. "Looks like I'm going the rest on foot then." As he raised to his feet, Darklighter began to glimpse the sheer horror of what was happening. About him lay the remains of the battle. Huge metal structures obliterated by wespons of destruction. All about the plane in which he stood lay remains of the Emperor's walkers, taken out by Ice Squadron only hours ago. The smoke still rose from the burning engines, the soot black as night against the dark blue midnight sky. He began to walk slowly, facing toward the Academy. It was still far away.

He hadn't gone ten steps before hearing a groan of agony to his left. He stopped and looked at the heap of machinery which it came from.

"Arrrrggghh!!" came the groan again. Darklighter raced to lift the heavy metal, revealing a figure pinned down underneath.

"XERXES!" yelled Darklighter, as he saw his Jedi comrade.

"Admiral!" came his desperate response. "Boy, am I glad to see you"

"Don't speak...I'll see what I can do" said Darklighter, as he spotted the wound in XERXES' side. It was a large gash, about a few inches wide. "I can help" he said again. XERXES stayed calm, as Darklighter placed his hand over the wound. With the power of the force, he managed to heal it a little.

"Hang on" he said to him caringly.

"They took him!" said XERXES desperately in a deep breath. "Agen, they took him! To a bunker a few leagues to the west. You have to hurray.

Removing his comlink from his belt, Darklighter proceeded to contact the Academy base. "We read you Admiral " said the voice of Greedo no the other end. "Bring ground forces to pick up XERXES. He is injured at the site of the furthest AT-AT from the Adademy. Hurry! I ned to make my way back to the Academy."

"But..." Greedo's reply was cut short. Darklighter leant down again. "Just hang on. They'll be here soon."

"Good luck" said XERXES smiling. "May the force be with you."

Darklighter nodded, and headed towards the Academy. You could sense the presence of his Master, and needed to hurray. There was much to talk about.

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 09:55 AM
Very good story Darth Talliusc....its good to see an apprentice coming along nicely :)

u may want to edit ur sig a bit: The shroud of the dark emperor Diving Spirit has fallen. :D

oh yeah, dont forget to check out the Sith Academy website!
Do you dare to enter? (http://www.angelfire.com/empire/sith_academy)

obi
07-21-2002, 09:56 AM
Obi-wan walked down the hallway, and Saluted the officers as they walked by. He had to find a way to get out of here, and fast.

HE didn't want to ask anyone, that would seem too suspicious. He desided the best thing to do was to roam the hsip, and search for the hanger bay with the force.

The emporer knows I'm still alive he thought. I must leave quickly.

About an hour later, he found the hangar. The guard walked up to him and said "It's about time you got here! you where supposed to be here an hour ago! Consider yourself on report!" The man said, and walked off.

That almost made Obi-wan laugh. He walked around the hangar, and noticed he was the only one there. He found himself a prototype, hyperspace tie interceptor, and went aboard. He looked at the control room guard, and waved his hand. The guard then Walked over to a control panel, and decompressed the hangar bay. Obi-wan flew the tie interceptor out, and Looked at the control panel. He set course for the Academy, and was about to blast to hyperspace, when he got stuck in a tractor beam. A voice came in over the comm.

"Hey! YOu there! You do not have clearance to fly this ship!" It was obviously one of the officers on the bridge.

"Yes i do. Recconosance on the academy. Ask the Emporer yourself." Obi-wan said, as the tractor beam began to pul him in.

Obi-wan turned the fighter, and began to shoot at the Tractor beam. He shot many times, eventually damaging it long enough for him to escape. He then blasted to hyperspace.

"My emporer, the jedi has ecape..........." The captain fell to the ground, dead.

The emporer didn't even raise his hand, or look at him. He was so powerful, he could kill someone by just thinking of it.
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The Hyperspace modified Tie Interceptor came out of Light speed, and over the academy. Obi-wan slowly guided the fighter to the academy, when a turret began to shoot at it.

"No! NO! It's General Kenobi! Cease fire! cease Fire!" Obi-wan said, but to no evail. Obi-wan Looked at damage control, and realized his comm system was down, due to the draining power of light speed.

"Stupid Imperial prototype Flyers!" Obi-wan said to himself as he tried to avoid the shots of the turret.

But one lucky blast shot the fighter down. It began turning, and hit a tree.

Several Soldeirs came to the crash, Blasters drawn.

"Hands up!" One of them shouted.

Obi-wan stood up, and removed his Trooper helmet.

"Master Kenobi? Is that you, sir? How did you get like this?!" The young LT asked, obviously confused.

"No time to explain. I must speak with Admiral Darklighter immidiatly."

to be continued.......

Darklighter
07-21-2002, 10:12 AM
Well, I'm not sure what's happened, but the latest few posts Reb, Talliusc and I made have for some reason gone before yours Obi? I don't know what's going on!?:confused:

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 11:29 AM
Originally posted by Darklighter
Well, I'm not sure what's happened, but the latest few posts Reb, Talliusc and I made have for some reason gone before yours Obi? I don't know what's going on!?:confused:

Since that new patch, new posts go in stupid places in the thread....its all to do with the time that we post them and the time that the forum 'think' theyre posted.

look at the thread called 'WTF is going on!?!?!?!'


Edit - i deleted my post which was further up in the thread, which should have been down here.

I have now posted it again. (Look one post down) :)

Divine Spirit
07-21-2002, 11:32 AM
Previously...

Divine Spirit swiped his card through the dusty terminal and the door creaked but eventually opened. It had been a long time since he last travelled in his assualt shuttle and his personal quaters had, of course, not been used since the last time he was here. As he strode into the room a strong aroma of recycled air entered his nostrils. "Lights" he called and the room was lit up. The cleaning staff had been into his room before he left the Sith Academy and had left it immaculately clean.

He walked over to the nearest relax-chair and sat down. He shut his eyes and gradually let the air out of his lungs. A smile crossed his face. A smile which twisted and became a grin. He had just captured and executed Obi-wan Kenobi and he was very satisfied. He let his mind wander into the dark side.....it felt so good. A Sith Trance was more refreshing than any shower thought Divine, as he began to relax every muscle from head to toe.

An alarm bell rang in Divine Spirit's head. "I feel distress, panick, anger" thought Divine. "What could this be?" he pondered. He let his mind reach across the ship. Every corridoor, every appartment. "There it is!......its a worthless clone regaining consciousness and feeling these emotions. But why?"though Divine. "It must be Obi-wan!" exclaimed Divine. "I sent him to the executioner over an hour ago! Divine leapt from his chair and hit the door release button in his chamber.

But just in that instance, the ship was put on red alert and sirens blared throughout the whole ship. An officer sprinted around the corner and skidded to a halt in front of Divine.

The captain bowed, "My Lord, an unidentified person is--"

"I know. Send all your troops to the hanger bay!"

"Yes My Lord" replied the captain.

Divine Spirit Force ran up to the command deck to try and regain control of the situation. He used his anger to spur him on, going ever faster with each step.

When he reached the command deck the whole room was a hive of activity. Soldiers shouting commands at one another and other shouting out reports but this commotion was cut short as the shuttle was rocked by laser beams. Divine grabbed hold of a table and he knew then that obi-wan must have got into a fighter. "Transfer energy from lasers to the tractors beams" he shouted to one of the soldiers.

"Yes my Lord" was the instant reply.

Another pummeling of shots hit the ship and there was loud explosion. After regaining his balance, the viewscreen at the front of the command deck whirred into life.

"My emporer, the jedi has ecape..........." The captain fell to the ground, dead.

The emporer didn't even raise his hand, or look at him. He was so powerful, he could kill someone by just thinking of it.

Darth Talliusc
07-22-2002, 01:42 AM
Kessel system:
"sir! an unidentified ship has entered the system and is demanding to speak with you by order of the dark emporer." said galono on sensors.
"very well ill take it in my private chambers" said the director of kessel neimus flirk.
moments later flirk looked on at a shrouded visage, imediately he dropped to one knee. "my lord, what can the kessel system do for you today?" he said trying to impose as much sincerity into his voice as possible, truly he hated these sith.
"you will start by informing me as to why production is slowed" s
aid Darth Talliusc.
"Slowed? production? my lord the men have to get used to the mines more before production can rise again" sputtered the fat spice dealer.
"is that so? or is it possible that you have been skimming some resources off the top for your private operations? i shall be with you soon to discuss the situation" and with that the comm flickered and shut off.
"this is no good, no good at all" he flipped the comm so as it would send a direct message to stitch, his security director "director, please gather a host of soldiers and conduct our visitor to the... ehhhh, special chambers on the fifth floor, tell him i shall meet him there" and with that he flicked the comm off as rudely as the sithlord had.

on the landing platform:
" greetings visitor, if my lord would please follow me ill take you to master Flirk, this way please" the sith said nothing but followed, his mind was elsewhere or else he may have noticed the deception.
"i wonder how long these fools intend to keep me here? ill just slay the leader and be done with it, then i can return to the matter of that cursed Starblazer" Talliusc thought to himself.
Talliusc ran his hands along his two new lightsabers, he had been angered that his master had decided to dispose of his old ones, yet pleased that he was allowed the opportunity to design his own new ones. very few among the jedi would be able to steel themselves against his saber attacks, for this design was unknown to them all.
"right through there m'lord, the master is inside waiting" stitch said.
"hmm something is wrong, i sense noone in the room beyond at all.... the pitiful fools mean to destroy me" thought Talliusc. he slowly scanned the minds of all the security force present, it appeared as if the bulk of the troops didnt like the idea of killing a sith and enjoyed their service, "very well" thought Talliusc "only the leaders need be punished, the workers have waranted no punishment yet".
with a flash of his hand the stout security director was dead on the floor. none of the guardsmen moved, "admirable of them not to flinch at the death of their leader" thought Talliusc as he entered the room knowing full well of the trap beyond "clean that mess up" he called back as the door slid open "and instruct his second in command that they are now first in command by order of the Sith" no one else spoke but one man nodded so Talliusc started for the door again.
"m'lord, do not enter that room, i fear my leader means to destroy you" the man who had nodded said. "yes i know" came the reply and he was through the door.
As soon as Talliusc was through the door it slammed shut behind him and gas started to flow in through the air vents. Calmly Talliusc sat in a chair in the room and waited. a holoimage sprung up of Flirk. "as you will find that gas is quite toxic and you will not survive, i will inform your master that you must have travelled to close to the maw cluster and were sucked into the black hole, he will believe me for all you sith are reckless" said Flirk. "quiet arent we?" asked the fat director when he got no response "no you wouldnt want to waste the breath. perhaps you wonder why im telling you this? its because i want to see you DIE sith, you and your whole Academy!" with that Flirk sat back and waited. minute after minute rolled by and eventually Talliusc gasped and slipped in his chair to the floor. he made a sick hacking sound and went limp.
the pudgy director ordered his comm to send only to the security personnel monitoring the base, "watch the sith for one hour and then, if he doesnt move in that time send security director Stitch to remove the body to my personal chambers, i want to know everything about this man as possible!"
"im sorry sir" the voice came back "but Director Stitch was slain by the sithlord before he entered the room."
"damn! thats a loss, not many men in this organization are as loyal to me as Stitch, ah well inform his second in command that he leads now"
"that promotion went through 10 minutes ago sir" came the voice.
"what?" sputtered the fat man. "wretched sith muddelings." and with that once again he shut off the comm, this was not a good day.

one hour and fifteen minutes later in the directors private rooms:
"we're ready to begin the autopsy director" said lead doctor Sviddle.
"very well, you and your team may begin when ready" said Flirk
with that the team of 7 doctors started to arrange the necessary tools. two guards waited nearby in case something odd happened, you could never be too careful around sith, even dead ones!
"wait, first grab me his weapons, i want those as trophies!" said flirk.
the doctor began taking off the weapons of the dead sith, first he handed him a double bladed lightstaff that had clung to the siths back, then two curved lightsaber blades with odd ends.
"what the hell?" said Flirk. as he examined the odd blades inspiration struck him and he connected the curve handled blades together at their ends.
"strange, its almost like another doublebladed saber but it forms more of an S figure then a line. ive never seen this type of saber before... anything else?" he asked the lead doctor
"yes, these" and with that he handed him what appeared to be sharp blades that were attatched to the ends of Talliusc nuckles. "careful director, they appear to be poisoned"
"very well" replied Flirk "begin the autopsy."
slowly the doctors began removing Talliusc clothes, they left his shorts on as they were going to start in the chest. He was a pale man, all his body was a near white colour, no not white. white was too nice for this colour. this was beyond White. Talliusc was not a massive man, he was only about 5"10 with short black hair that flowed towards the sides of his head and outward. his arms were slightly above average size but not huge. they were toned as was his whole body so that it appeared as if he was flexing everything at once.
"magnificent specimen" was all the doctor could say.
after several moments of the doctor feeling his stomach and back he gave a yelp "GAHHH"
"what? what is it?" asked Flirk quickly
"director pardon me but are you sure this man is dead?" asked the doctor as he stepped backward.
"yes of course he... SECURITY TO THE DIRECTORS CHAMBERS" he screamed.
in a flash Talliusc's eyes opened and he kickflipped upright onto the table.
" they shall never arive in time Director" was all he said before he became a blur of motion.
he leaped first ontop of the guard nearest him and laid him out with a snap kick to the neck. he then twirled over the mans already dead falling body and shoved his hand into the eye socket of the second guard, a rodian. he was already in the midst of turning on the first doctor when the rodians eye was pulled free. the doctors raised their hands and were cut down all the same, the first three with punches to the throat. the next ones with snap kicks that crushed hearts. soon it was just Talliusc and the fat director.
"so this is how you treat honoured guests" said Talliusc "i thought you would simply have me shot but this way took much more guts"
finally remembering that he still held Talliusc lightsabers he ignited one "stay back" he called.
"while i have been presumed dead i have been thinking over your operation, i have come to the conclusion that kessel itself is fine, but its head needs removing" and with that the lightsaber that Flirk held turned on its wielder and cut off his head.
"how poetic" sighed Talliusc and recovered his garments and weapons. he then picked up the comm system and flicked it to send to all citizens of kessel "System of kessel, your director is dead and his security chief with him, you will vote tomorrow for your new leader and that person shall name a new security chief, all who hold allegiance to the fallen director Flirk may wish to evacuate the planet before they are killed" he flicked off the comm pleased that he had finally finished his errand here.

one day later on the landing platform:

"Thank you m'lord for deposing the former director of kessel" said newly appointed director islek.
"my task was not for you director, but the income that feeds my masters soldiers in their campaign. replied the dark lord of the sith.
"very well my lord, if i may ask though. why did you feign death when you were in the gas chamber, you could have surely defeated anyone that was sent against you" said Islek
"simple, this way only those who deserved death got it, and i was able to weed out my enemies on kessel" came back his response.
the director was about to say something else when his comm beeped "WHAT? i specifically said that i did not wish to be disturbed!" there was a muffled reply but Talliusc's sith hearing told him all he needed to know.
"lord Talliusc im afraid that a couple of-"
"i know and i go to destroy them, send none of your troops" came back the interupting reply of an angry sithlord.

5 minutes later on the south landing platform:

the people loyal to the former director had appropriated a ship for themselves and were firing at any who came near. calmly Talliusc ignited his S shaped saber construct and walked towards the vessel. it was a correllian class corvette.
blocking laser blasts left right and center Talliusc moved ever closer to the enemies ship.
"you said we would be allowed to leave!" came a startled yell from the main hold.
"no, what i said was that you may wish to leave before you were killed, you have stayed too long" and with that he deflected the most recent blast into the throat of the yeller.
"this blade is most exceptional" thought Talliusc. "i must inform my master of the new designs success. privately of course so that the jedi do not steal my invention"
it took less then 6 minutes for Talliusc to clear the entire ship of the foolish loyalists. he came last to the backmost quarters and was pleased to find 6 men and aliens huddled near the door. with his lightsaber he swiftly beheaded them all. "these fools offer little resistance" thought Talliusc "i must fight among my equals again. i must fith Reb Starblazer once more"





well there it is, the third installment in the Darth TAlliusc story. Reb we should try and come up with a good storyline that we can wright up different views on. it promises to be good fun =)

oh and sorry for the bad spelling and grammattical errors, a little tired tonight

Reb Starblazer
07-22-2002, 01:49 AM
Excellent job of working our posts together Talliusc. I rather like that whole, thought it was real, find out it's a dream, find out it was really a Sith induced nightmare thing:D As I said in my last post, Reb has a dark and winding path ahead of him. This is not going to be pretty ladies and gentleman. It deals with death( lots of it), life, finding your path, and true heroes. I even gave it a title:D Without further ado...

Into the Dark

The last rays of the sun had long since faded as Reb trudged along the snow covered plain, Kordkelly still unconscious over his shoulder. "He should be awake soon" he thought. Being half Zabrak came in handy sometimes, otherwise, he would probably be still unconscious too. No matter how hard he tried though, he couldn't get that dream out of his mind. He relived the moments of watching Kordkelly die, over and over. He couldn't bear the thought of losing someone under his command. "Not this time." He thought, "Not again. No one gets left behind this time" He also couldn't shake the fear. Yes, he admitted to himself. He was afraid. Afraid of taking a false step on the tightrope of his life, once again falling into the dark. He had seethed with rage as he felt his leg being dismemebered, and it was this that made him strong enough to summon the Force and strike down Talliusc. But Talliusc had his revenge and the last laugh. "It was just a dream. No more, no less" He told himself as he reached the peak of the hill he was climbing.
"By... the ... Force." Reb spoke slowly. He couldn't even comprehend what he saw before him. In the soft glow of the twin moons, Reb saw it. A battlefield, as far as the eye could see, littered with fallen imperial walkers and clones. And Reb's allies. Hundreds upon hundreds of bodies, guards and infantry alike, strewn about, never to rise again. In the distance Reb could see smoke rising from the Academy. "The hangar" Reb spoke as he feared the worst. Seeing his beloved Academy burning in the distance, his fellow members lying dead on an icy grave, was more than Reb could take. His right hand clenched, every knuckle cracking as his grip tighted. Then Reb spotted another fire, one which was of a smaller scale. "A camp" Reb realized. "But why would someone have a camp when the Academy is right there... An imperial camp." he thought. Reb stood at the peak of the hill, "The question that has plagued me has finally been answered. My destiny is not fixed, my choices are mine and mine alone." Reb lay Kordkelly down in the snow, and covered him in the thermoblanket that was in his backpack. He gripped his lightsabre tightly and stared at the base camp with slit eyes. "I am a warrior. Let the battle be joined" He broke into a run, with only the Dark side and a thirst for vengeance pushing him on. As he neared the camp, he pressed the release button on his lightsabre. It dissconnected at the centre and became two separate lightsabres. He slowed to a walk, and stealthily entered the camp. A trooper, out on night patrol, thought he heard a noise and went to investigate. He saw a shadowed form walking towards him. "Hey! You there!" shouted the trooper. "Stop! I wanna see some I.D. What's your name? The reply was simple. One word, just one word spoke countless volumes.
"Death". A snap-hiss was heard, a blue and a green streak made their way towards the trooper, sealing his fate. Reb continued into the camp, striking down anyone in his path. One clone managed to yell " Intruder " before he was permanantly silenced. This brought troops out of the bunks, brandishing their weapons, firing at the two floating streaks. "MURDERERS!" Reb yelled. Then another glow appeared, this one red, and in the shape of a humanoid. Red energies surrounded Reb's body, as a Dark Rage took over, the Dark side entering his very being. He became a multicolored whirlwind of death, deflecting blaster bolts, and then striking down those that fired them. Over and over again they fell, with more coming to replace them. This only increased Reb's fury, as he doubled his efforts. Then, all was quiet. All except the hum of two lightsabres, and Reb's heavy breathing.
They were dead, all of them. Reb suddenly felt weak, his strength leaving him following his rage. He extingiushed his lightsabres, and took deep breaths, calming himself. He looked around him, at the bodies strewn everywhere. Just like the massacre on the battlefield he had seen earlier. Except this had been his doing.
"No... what have I done? What have I done..." Reb said, staggering his way out the camp. As he reached the edge, he fell to his knees, too exhausted by his earlier rage to go any farther. "YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS EMPEROR!" He yelled into the night. "YOU'LL PAY FOR WHAT YOU'VE DONE, AND WHAT YOU'VE MADE ME DO! IT MAY NOT BE BY MY HAND, BUT YOU, WILL, PAY!" he finished as he fell to the ground weeping. And this is how Tyrion found him, lying face first in the snow.
"Reb, are you OK? Say something." said Tyrion, shaking him. Reb suddenly pushed Tyrion away.
"No, don't touch me! Stay away, I don't know what I may do to you!" he said, backing along the ground away from Tyrion.
"It's alright Reb, you're going to be just fine. We went out on foot to check your speeder, and followed your footprints. We found Kordkelly on top of the hill. He's fine, and awake now. We've recieved word that we need to head back, and also tend to XERXES. I've already sent a few troops ahead for him. We're leaving now." Said Tyrion
"No" replied Reb.
"No?"
"I said no. I'm not going. It's too dangerous for me to travel with you, I don't know what I might do. Go on without me, I need some time to think about my place in this war. I need to cotemplate my path."
"Reb, your being irrational. I know you're having some doubts, but you're a part of this Academy. You're a part of our family. Besides, you're a hero. You survived a speeder crash, saved Kordkelly's life, and defended yourself against an..." Tyrion said.
" I didn't defend myself. They didn't even know I was coming. They barely had time to prepare. I slaughtered them. I killed them, I killed them all..."
Reb interrupted, his voice faltering on the last sentence.
"You defended yourself. This is a war we're fighting Reb. And no matter what you did, taking out an entire battalion by yourself is a great accomplisment. You're a hero of this war Reb. We're all gonna be heroes. Besides, they were only clones serving the Emperor."
"No, we're not heroes Tyrion. These ..." said Reb, pointing out towards the battlefield, to the bodies he saw before." These are the heroes. The ones who died in battle for something they believed in. Us, we're just the lucky. We're teachers, we survive to tell the tale of the heroes, so that something like this never has to happen again. So that the lives of good people are never wasted. Even though they were 'only' clones, they were alive. And I stole that from them. Every lifeless body on this entire planet used to be somebody. Every one of them had a name."
"Yes, they did Reb. Ensign Kanos, Ensign Torrez, Leftenant Antilles... the list goes on. All good men who fought bravely and died under my command. I knew everyone of them, and their names are etched in my memory for as long as I live." Replied Tyrion, a sad, faraway look in his eyes.
Reb saw something in the young captains face, something he hadn't noticed before. This war had changed Tyrion, made him no longer naive and brash. He seemed much older than he really was. Tyrion had seen things that never should have been revealed to him in his young life, and that made him strong, and determined. Determined to go on, or go out, fighting. So that when the young padawans at the academy reached his age, they would not have to face the same plight as he did now. Seeing Tyrion, standing over him, offering him his hand, it gave Reb strength. But more importantly, it gave him hope. With that, Reb took his hand, and Tyrion helped him to his feet.
"Come on" Said Tyrion. "We've got an Academy to save"


I hope everyone enjoyed it. It kinda portrays my thoughts on this "war", and war in general. I'm sorry if you don't like the way I portrayed you in my story Kordkelly. I also hope you don't mind me using you in the story Tyrion. I tried to write you well and I hope you like it. I also made you someone wise beyond his years, because that's what I feel you are. I didn't really mean what I wrote in the "Why I should be a mod thread", to sound bad. I'm not ageist against you, or anything. Well, consider this my form of apology:)
Reb has now taken another step in his journey, but is he headed in the right direction? Find out, in the continuing tales of "The Academy Wars". DUN DUN DUN :D

obi
07-22-2002, 02:07 AM
Reb, was that a dream of some kind? :confused:

Obi-wan walked along side several soldeirs. His limp was still with him, and it would be for the longest of times. He walked up to a man in a highly-brassed uniform, who was giving commands to another soldier. As Obi-wan walked up, the other soldier went away.

"Master! your back!" Darklighter shouted.

"Only by the will of the force, Admiral. I must construct a new lightsaber. My old one was destroyed. Also, the Imperial Star Destroyer has left this planet, and Left the forces on this planet alone, and without support. I am going to leave the next course of action to you, Admiral. I will be in my quarters, *Look at Clone uniform* removing this damned thing if you need me."

"Very well, sir. Glad to have you back. Sir, is there.....anything else you would like to share? I sense, a feeling of......fright...." Darklighter said.

"No, nothing." obi-wan replied.

"Yes there is something. Whats wrong?" Darklighter insisted, his curiousity growing.

Obi-wan sighed. "I was captured on the Star Destroyer, and they gave me a truth serum to tell me everything about the acdemy, and....."

"NO! I don't beleive you are weak enough to fall to simple drugs!" Darklighter exclaimed.

"......I didn't fall to the drugs........I resisted, and the emporer didn't get any information from me. However, The emporer is more powerful then we had thought. I engaged him in a duel,which was cut off. The thing that is troubleing me is, They are building proto-type Tie's that can jump to hyperspace. They can come without any warning, and without a mothership." Obi-wan finished.

"Damn. That's not good. I will have a few specialists gather into an assault team to take out the Production facility when it is located." Darklighter said.

Obi-wan nodded his head. "I shall retire for the day then, old freind." Obi-wan said, as he walked away, and went to his room. He removed the Trooper uniform, and Slipped into his sleeping cloths. He got comfortable in his bed, and slept.

..........Obi-wan! NO!..............MOVE! MOVE!MOVE!..................We cannot escape, we must surrender...........You are beaten.....................

The words rang in Obi-wan's head, as they had done before. Still the voices where garbled, and he couldn't make out a meaning. However, this is the second time he has heard these words, and it was up to him to find out what they meant.

To be continued..........

Reb Starblazer
07-22-2002, 02:24 AM
Well, seeing as you asked, I'll try to explain it as someone else might wonder too. The one I posted about my duel with Talliusc. That was a dream. Turns out he did it(once again, good job Talliusc. Adding another angle to this). My last post about Reb's continuing descent into the Dark side(uhh, I didn't just say that), that wasn't a dream. Reb basically goes berserk, and kills everything in his path, then realizes what he's done and can't live with the shame. Tyrion the comes along and gives him a ray of hope to cling to, and that's enough for now. Also, I put that part in about XERXES so that it would tie in with Darklighter's post.

I liked that blatant "Damn. That's not good" ripoff by the way. Then again, I ripped of Dark Rage, and also the first clones lines(had to do it, it seemed so funny for a clone in the war to say "Hey! You there!") so who am I to chastize:D

BTW, I'll probably just edit this and have my next chapter here. Unless of course a bunch of people post and a dirtload of stuff happens. As for now, it's 3:00 am, and I'm going to bed. More work awaits me when I wake up.

obi
07-22-2002, 02:28 AM
Originally posted by Reb Starblazer

I liked that blatant "Damn. That's not good" ripoff by the way.


LOL!!!!

I couldn't think of anything better for him to say, so I just ripped off luke, because I figured Luke wouldn't care. :p
It's 2 am here, so Im goin to bed now. see yall tommorow(if the forums aren't screwed up again, that is :D)

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 05:54 AM
Hey guys! The forums are really screwed up:( I was writing my next part of the story which would have fitted in soooo well, and then they started moving in the middle of writing, and it erased evrything when I replied:( I came back today after trying to remember what I had said (writing it out all again) when you'd carried on:( Oh well...

...I am writing my story now, so bear with me please:)

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 08:03 AM
I will advise you, that this is an extremely long post, so please bear with. I did not want to leave all of my previous story out of, so I combine it and my new improvised version together. Sorry about this.


The air was warm and comfortable inside the Academy halls, a refreshing relief from the icy chill of the planes where the battle had taken place. Everything seemed calm, but tensions were running high, and urgent matters had to be attended to. Obi-wan had arrived not a few hours before, aboard a tie interceptor which crashed among the forests around the Academy, adjacent to the lake. He had been through much, but refrained from speaking of it...the thought of the enemy being more powerful was too much for him to comprehend, even begin to understand.

Darklighter now stood, pacing in the courtyard-like garden area circled off by the Jedi Council building and the Academy main building. His steps were light, almost unheard. His ghostly silouette only a black shadow against the dark green grass shining in the moonlight.

"Beautiful isn't it?" a figure emerged from behind the tree next to the doors of the building. "The sound..."

"Yes" he quickly replied. "The sound of the grass whistling in the breeze. The splash and drop of water in the lake. The calming soothness of the air" he laughed to himself, "even though it cannot be heard" he stood thinking, recollecting, "I remember Obi-wan telling me that."

The man now fully emerged. AB_legion stood before Darklighter, his hands folded behind his waist, across the back of his silk brown cloak. His hood covered his face.

"The calm before the battle" added Legion.

"There is nothing beautiful about battle" Darklighter's eyes narrowed, his gaze now towards Legion was unsettling.

"True, true...yet it is all we have left. I sensed this in Divine when I taught him. I knew he wouldn't obey what he was told. I sensed the darkside in him. He was never a focussed student" Legion began, when he was cut short.

"Not all of them are" Darklighter's voice was now harsh, he turned to face Legion and they stopped in each other's paths. "No one could have foreseen this...not even you Legion" the remark was cold and direct.

"No...you can't tell...but you can think it and I did" Legion replied. "Everybody is hurt at times like these...Obi-wan was powerful enough to escape the torment of the enemy because of his link to the force, can you say the same about Agen" it hit Darklighter like steel hammer. Agen would not last much longer. A plan had to be arranged.

"You're right" he replied with a blank look, and standing tall walked back to his quarters. He paced pondering the thought, of what he should do. We cannot go as a grouped force, he thought frustratingly. I will have to go alone. Obi-wan would object with the upmost concern, insisting if anyone were to go it would be himself. Tidus was not about to put his master through the same torment as before. He removed his uniform and placed on his white Jedi garments. It was up to him now.

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He snuck off between the Academy's defenses in the dead of the night towards the side of the hanger bay. The defenses were so tight only a Jedi could get past them. As he reached the rim of the Academy boundaries, Darklighter looked out towards his destination. It was far to the West, a long run, but he could make it easily, and with that thought, he set off.

"The emperor will attack again" Darklighter’s voice was harsh and almost shrill in the cold night air, as he spoke into the comlink. He continued to wade across the open land, his black boots tainted with the clear white snow that splashed and crunched under his feet as he ran. Apart from that and the sound of his lightsaber hilt hitting against his black belt, nothing was heard. He moved swiftly and stealthily across the snowy plane, camouflaged by his white-beige garments.

The warmth of dusk had long since passed, and the night was now drawing to an end. Darklighter could see the warm glow of early sunlight creeping above the hills, the red and orange tint of morning already beginning to surface. The bright penumbra of the sun was beginning to rise towards the east. He would have to hurry to avoid being seen in the daylight.

"He knows our weakness. There is a gap in the energy force field surrounding the Academy. Re-route all power available to the shields before it is too late. It’s our only chance." His voice seemed desperate.

"Yes Admiral" the voice of that was Greedo, his only contact, and the only man he could trust to obey his wishes.

"Do not inform Master Obi-wan of my position. The bunker will be swarming with the Emperor’s troopers. Infiltration is the only option here." Dark Jedi too, he thought to himself. Sith apprentices trained by the Emperor himself. He would want to avoid confrontations with them at all costs.

"Yes Sir" Greedo’s loyalty was unmatched. He would carry out orders from his superiors, and always respected their decision. "May the force be with you." He swallowed hard and replaced the com to his belt on his side. Darklighter continued his long run into the west.

The bunker he was heading for was not unbeknownst to him, as the Academy itself had undergone its construction. The small, compact outward appearance of it was a thin veneer, hiding a large network of underground corridors and monitoring equipment. It had also been used to contain captured prisoners, rebels and enemy soldiers forced to surrender in battle. But that was a long time ago. The tables had turned, now Agen was being kept there. Just thinking about it made him angry.

He arrived just in time. The light was just dim enough to hide him in the shadows. The bunker was made of stone and metal, surrounded by a thick forest. Two sentries were positioned guarding the entrance. With a wave of his hand, a twig snapped loudly to the right of the guards, diverting their attention, giving just enough time for Darklighter to sneak around the back. He jumped to the roof of the bunker, and stooped down as the guards began talking about Agen.

"Apparently he’s someone important" came the voice of the first, muffled through the clone trooper helmet, "Almost as much as that Obi-wan fellow."

"This ain’t gonna be easy for this guy though. The Emperor has given strict instructions to use any methods necessary in obtaining the information we need" replied the second trooper.

"I’d be interested to see how long he holds up" both laughed to themselves, "These Jedi can’t be so tough."

His friend was in danger and needed help. He removed the ventilation shaft cover from the roof of the bunker and dropped down into the darkness.

Dath Maximus
07-22-2002, 08:16 AM
is this still messed up??
i posted 3 things yesterday and they all showed up after my previous post and not at the end of the thread so i say again.

i just got my story to get to obi-wan13 and he leaves and now im with the emperor.

Go ME... ohh forget it!

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 08:25 AM
I think they've just about worked it out...everything seems to be going okay now.

BTW, with the stories, it should be Divine to write next, then Shadow, then Reb/Talliusc, then Obi-wan and then me. Maximus, you can write at any time if you want, cos you haven't foe a while:)

Just kind of stick to that order for now...I know Shadow doesn't post much, so you can kind of leave him out if he's not around:( sorry Shadow....

BTW, once we have finished this first Episode (I'll call it episode, as the first chunk of the Academy wars:D ) we have to compile them and give them chapter names...but we don't need to worry about that now...I think the stories are going great, so keep up the good work!:)

Dath Maximus
07-22-2002, 09:05 AM
i had a nemesis but i killed him

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 11:22 AM
:eek: Already Max?...lol:D

It really doesn't matter what order you fo the stories in. If there is no one else around, just put a little warning saying you are giong to carry on with your story, then write it.

BTW Reb, you know you have invisible mode on, well we can't see when you're online. Its not a big deal really, just can't tell if you're online, so don't know if you're writing at all, so make sure you let us know:)

Keep up the good work!:D

Divine Spirit
07-22-2002, 12:12 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
BTW, with the stories, it should be Divine to write next, then Shadow, then Reb/Talliusc, then Obi-wan and then me. Maximus, you can write at any time if you want, cos you haven't foe a while:)

I think i might write my next bit of story independent of everyone else - that means i get a bit more freedom about it :)

So someone else should be going next.

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 02:07 PM
Okay guys, you can really write anytime, just not twice in a row, ok?:D

We should try to keep this going for a while, its really fun:)

Dath Maximus
07-22-2002, 02:21 PM
Well i will be unable to finish the story cause im leaving for a week again.

but you guys can finish it for me.

ok i was planing on having the emperer some how making me sorta like like vader and turning me against you guys but you will turn me back to the good side.

s0ulblihtr
07-22-2002, 04:42 PM
Well I want to go off into a tangent and talk about battles that are fought in the back ground that do not directly affect the story line, but help in aiding the Academy in victories that will lead to and overall victory... OK?

obi
07-22-2002, 04:58 PM
Originally posted by s0ulblihtr
Well I want to go off into a tangent and talk about battles that are fought in the back ground that do not directly affect the story line, but help in aiding the Academy in victories that will lead to and overall victory... OK?

go for it:)

Obi-wan woke, and meditated on the words he had heard in his dreams. He played them over and over, like a broken record.

Later, he stood, and limped to the cafeteria for a cup of Earl Grey. He took his drink, and sat down at one of the Local tables, with a few soldeirs. They saw him, and stood up at attention.

"As you where." Obi-wan told them, and they continued to eat their breakfast. Obi-wan hardly ever ate anything, and thie morning was no different. He finished his tea, and walked to the Saber Training gorunds. WhiteDragon and one of the students where having a mock'Duel, and Obi-wan watched. It was truly a magnificent sight, for WhiteDragon was quite the Swordsman. He himself had a duel with whitedragon once, A duel which he barely won. It was one of the longest duels Obi-wan had ever had. He thought about it, and brought his attention back to the duel.

The young padawan took a swing at WhiteDragon's leg, and WHitDragon blocked, and brought the other side of the wooden saber onto the Padawans side.

"Your dead." WhiteDragon told him. "Good fight, you where on a roll for a while. More practice, and you will be wualified to be my assistant."

"Thank you Master." The young man said, as he bowed, Put the Wooden saber on the table, and walked off.

"Good fight. The boy is learning a lot from you." Obi-wan told WhiteDragon.

"Yes, he is one of my best students. He practices hours on end every day. He will not stop until he is perfect, either. Thats the third time this week he has challenged me, and the third time he has lossed." WhiteDragon said, as both of the men laughed.

"He is an asset to this academy. We all are. I am going to need you to keep the student's spirit's up. These are very stressful times, and we need to keep our heads calm and cool." Obi-wan said, and WhiteDragon agreed.

"Have you seen Admrial Darklighter?" Obi-wan asked.

"No, I have no clue as to his location." WhiteDragon said.

Obi-wan and whitedragon said their goodbye's, and Obi-wan walked off. He went back to his Quarters, to meditate on the location of Darklighter. He hadn't seen him for a while, and neither has anyone else. He had to find his old freind, and soon, because this worried him a great deal.

to be continued........

(I'll finish this part too, I have something special planned. :) )

s0ulblihtr
07-22-2002, 05:16 PM
Oh and by the way... I wanted to give props to all of the guys who have already posted. Looking good. You make my monday here at work go by faster. Thanks. Very Entertaining. Now, I will work on my little vignet to help in making this a masterpiece, lol.

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 05:25 PM
you started a war and im missing it.

*bam* die pig die youll never take the white dragon alive

Agen
07-22-2002, 05:39 PM
Agen_Terminator woke with pain all over, with guards been torturing him over and over again and trying to obtain infromation, he had not yet spilled but he himself knew that he woudl be able to last much longer. Knowing that the time had almost come for him. He was strapped up and his force drained by a machine. Tho he could not use the force physically he could still feel that things were going wrong outside.

He lifted his head to view the room aroudn him, very dark and dusty floor with a few chains on the ceiling, the only light was coming from the machine, he had no weapons and had been stripped of his robes.

Soon after a while he felt a new hope of saviour and sensed that it was darklgihter but Agen lost his consciousness and konked out.

After an hour or so a regiment of troopers came in and took him to a room with all sorts of scriptures but by this time Agen was limp and had to be carried by the troopers, he was lifted by soem sort of beam thing and trapped (liek in ep 2 that obi is in)
The dark lord himself came in and and the troopers walked away swiftly while one caem to report news but limped and went dead and divinespirit said
" i know. Well Terminator, a high member of the academy trapped and weak liek the rest of that pitiful association, i have a good mind o tell you my secret plans but this is no james bond film."

Croaking and finding it hard to breathe Agen coughed out

" you will not prevail from this war"

"oh but you are wrong, you see you jedi are always to sure of everything, i mean you think that Darklighter is going to save you right now, but you are wrong."

With a swift movement Divine gripped Darklgihter out of the vents and whacked him off the wall and let him slump to the floor where he lifted him by the throat and placed him in the beam beside Agen.

"Farewell jedi" said Divine as he left the room and his robes waved abotu as he walked away. By this time Agen had figured he was udnergroudn and now concentrated on trying to get lighter to snap out of it.


Edit: oh yeh obi about your part 2, i didn't actually read the end about it and darklighter properly and i really hope my part doesn't interfere with your part or you can get it to fit around itt.

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 05:41 PM
oh dont be so melodromatic

Agen
07-22-2002, 05:45 PM
hey i missed out all the way and everyone forgot about my character :( So i just decided to fill myself in and the whereabouts of lgihter. I won't be so selfish alter tho.

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 05:51 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
hey i missed out all the way and everyone forgot about my character :( So i just decided to fill myself in and the whereabouts of lgihter. I won't be so selfish alter tho.
ok what ever. *takes out rocket luauncher and fires it at a coupel dark jedi*

Agen
07-22-2002, 05:54 PM
*splat*

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
*splat*
dragon looks around and dosent see any dark jedi so he walks forward toward the bunker where agen and darklighter were held. no one is guarding the doors or inside but the dark side is hard to see. suddenly dark jedi are all over the place and activate their lightsabers. dragon activates his own and waits for them to make their move

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 06:28 PM
Hey, nice going Agen:D Cool plot twist...

Do you mind if I carry on with our little story and escape? I didn't know you'd be coming in with it:) but that was good. Now we actually have a good reason to get out:D lol

Would you mind if I carried on? Then we could get out and continue with our own stories...

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 06:29 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
Hey, nice going Agen:D Cool plot twist...

Do you mind if I carry on with our little story and escape? I didn't know you'd be coming in with it:) but that was good. Now we actually have a good reason to get out:D lol

Would you mind if I carried on? Then we could get out and continue with our own stories...
im sure he dosent mind

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 06:39 PM
the first dark jedi jumps at dragon, dragon quickly dodges and cuts the dark jedi while hes still in the air. the others charge after him. dragon knew he couldent take them on all at once so he projected force lightening through his body in a shock wave to scater them. dragon cut two down while they were still getting up and ran for the door to take him to the next room. the dark jedi ran after him. dragon dident go through the door he instead he jumped and kicked off it he landed behind them and cut down three more. dragon fliped backwards and saw that there were only five left so he summed up the last bit of force lightening he could use and shocked them all to death. dragon needed to wait for his energy to replinish but he dident have time for that. he walked toward the door and opened it

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 08:06 PM
The pain was agonising. He could feel it long before he could even open his eyes. The air was cold, but musty and it stank of drying blood. Slowly, Darklighter raised his eyelids. His vision was blurry, and it made his head feel light and achy. He stared blankly at bars criss-crossed in front of his face, and the floor was frozen against his skin. As his sight became more clear, Tidus lifted his limp body with his weak hands. His arm slipped and he fell again, but with more effort he dragged his bruised body upwards and kneeled on the floor. It was dark all around, the looming shadows black as night and it surrounding him, engulfing his body into darkness.

"You've awoken" the voice behind him was loud and shocking. Darklighter turned round quickly to see, "I was hoping you would soon."

The figure sat motionless on the bench that hung from rusted chains on the wall, his face blackened by the shadows. He did not move an inch. Darklighter knew it was him though.

"Agen" his voice weak and faint, it hurt his throat and made his head ache. "What's going on...where am I?"

"You know where you are" he still did not move. "As for what is going on, I'll let you guess" he replied, a hint of sarcasm in his deep voice. It did not encourage Darklighter.

Darklighter now looked around him. His vision was now more clear, he was imprisoned, that much was certain. His robes had been removed from his torso, and as he looked at his bare chest Darklighter saw slashes and bruises covering his front, the blood had runand stained his skin. He thought back to his encounter with the Emperor - he really was powerful, able to throw him to the ground without raising an eyebrow. Amazing Obi-wan could have survived his wrath he thought to himself. Darklighter shuddered at the thought, and proceeded to heal his wounds using the power of the force.

"It's no use" Agen said immediately. "They have drained the power out of you. You are too weak my friend."

The anger began to swell in him. His hatred for Divine stemmed back from when they had trained as padawans...they would have always confronted each other, Divine always provoking him, getting Tidus into trouble. The thought that this man was the cause of their suffering now was too much. His eyes narrowed, his head bowed towards the ground, his devilish eyes looking straight.

His lightsaber stood now in the guards position, over a few metres away from the cell entrance. His hands gripped the bars tightly, and he trembled with deep rage. Everything bad happened to us has been your fault Divine! , his thoughts echoed in the back of his mind.

"Admiral..." Agen's voice was worried, he began to stand, watching Darklighter shake with anger, his face bright red. Darklighter stood up, glaring at the guard, reaching out with all his strength.

"Nooooooo!" his scream rang in their ears, and the lightsaber flew to his hand. He ignited it, and sliced the bars. The guard began shooting frantically, but he was too late. Darklighter walked forward towards the gurad, blocking every shot. One precise hit fired the laser right through the troopers helmet, as he fell to the ground lifeless.

Darklighter leant to retrieve Agen's saber from the guard's belt. He still stod in the cell, amazed at his power and will with the force. He threw Agen's lightsaber to him. Darklighter had calmed down now, his face no longer red, his eyes just as before.

"Lets go" he said, as both men proceeded to the exit door.

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The only option here was stealth. One false move, one wrong sound, and the alarm would be activated. The two Jedi crawled amongst the shadows and dodged out of the guard's line of view. They were weak, but hope was in them, and their confidence as well as strength was building again. They finally reached the ventilation shaft through which Darklighter had entered the bunker. They leapt up into it, and proceeded to the roof. The day had now come. It was the next morning, the sun was warm against their skin and the sky was cloudless.

As they both emerged, a terrible sight struck them. One of the Emperor's royal shuttles was loading a few hundred metres away. They both ducked behind a metal ridge for cover, and peered over.

Darth Talliusc was stood, ordering troopers to carry things to the shuttle. He was dressed in a dark cloak, his face sheilded. At that moment, Daklighter felt it. A strange sensation. It made him shiver, and his heart felt cold. The darkside, he could feel it in his blood, Agen too. Talliusc's head slowly turned to face them, but the two Jedi managed to duck before he could glimpse then. Talliusc shrugged off the feeling and entered the shuttle, two guards on either side of him. Agen and Darklighter stood as the engines glowed red and propelled it into space.

"The Emperor is here. I can feel it. I felt it from him" Agen suggested, and Darklighter quickly nodded. But now Darklighter felt something else. It was familiar, and the words came out of his mouth involuntarily.

"Whitedragon!" he yelled, "He needs our help!"

"Okay, lets go!" Agen replied, and without hesitation, the Jedi jumped from the bunker and disappeared through the blast doors, cutting the troopers as they went.

To be continued...

Agen
07-22-2002, 08:14 PM
Very nice work, i'm tired now and i'm gonna go to bed, let's see if anyone else can add to this saga heh.

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 08:19 PM
dragon walked through the door. he walked into a bright room with a mat on the entire floor there were tables in the corners of the room that were stacked high with books. a very large man sat on the floor in the middle of the room. he was wearing flexible gauntlets that were made of mandalorian iron, they were used to block light sabers. "welcome" said the man "i am here to stop you from rescuing your friend. he is being held here but you must fight me first. i will not tell you where he Is because like devine sprit said this In no james bond film." dragon put his light saber on the floor along with his jacket "very well mr. scaramanga. I mean mr. badguy. sense you fight with your hands I will fight with my hands" dragon went Into a defensive stance. badguy didn’t miss a beat, he ran forward punching dragon In the gut. badguy started a barrage of kicks and punches and didn’t stop until dragon was on the floor coughing up blood. "you weak coward" badguy said "you mite as well run back to the jedi sense you are no match for me." dragon got up without any trouble and wiped the blood from his mouth "wow your good that actually hurt" dragon said. badguy look dumbfounded, he used his strongest moves. dragon grinned "but now that I’ve seen all your moves you’re all mine." dragon ran forward and kicked badguy In the face. badguy stumbled back wards and swung his fist at dragon, dragon blocked It, tripped him, and then brought an ax kick down on badguys neck. badguy was dead. "sheesh" dragon said to himself "maybe It would have been the same result If I didn’t let him hit me." dragon picked up his stuff and walked to the door at the end of the room.

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 08:26 PM
BTW, whitedragon, me and Agen kind of escaped already...that's what I just wrote:( I'm sorry if it kind of hinders your story:( :( :(

Darth Talliusc
07-22-2002, 09:28 PM
first off, thanks again Reb, i really like how our stories compliment each other and our rivalry grows, oh and darklighter very nice work. congrats. i like how i was portrayed in your most recent story. im really pleased with all this war so far. keep it coming, well im going to wright another fairly lengthy story now but ill just edit this post and attatch it when im done so look for it here.

Sith academy grounds:

Darth Talliusc flinched in the nights cold. it wasnt due to the near freezing temperature around his masters academy grounds. it was something else... Talliusc's first thought was of the jedi, but no they could not have escaped, the guardsmen watching over the jedi were competent and the jedi didnt have the strength to escape anyway, at least not without the Dark Emperor knowing of it. "no matter" thought Talliusc grimly.
Talliusc was about to enter the shuttles hold when something caught his eye, he looked over towards a stack of supply crates but found nothing, stretching out with his dark force powers he found nothing as well. "jumping at shadows" Talliusc scolded himself "i must remain focused on the task at hand" and with that he checked to see that everything necessary was on the shuttle and he climbed aboard. it was not long after that the shuttle shot off into space and entered the hold of the mark III star destroyer Dreadhold. it was not the most massive vessel in the fleet but it was fast, maneuverable and Talliusc's favourite. His master had allowed him a crew of the finest clones. they took longer to make but were were more efficient and expensive then the bulwark of clones in the imperial navy, with one exception, the commander of the vessel was not a clone. Talliusc had first met Admiral Relnick 5 years before, and had instated Relnick as the commander of Talliusc's personal vessel just months ago.

Onboard the Star Destroyer Dreadhold:

"i shall remain in my quarters until we reach the target, forward all messages for me there, interrupt me ONLY if the dark lord Divine Spirit summons me!" said Talliusc to the now aged Admiral.
"yes my lord, will you lead the attack when we arrive or stay onboard?" asked Relnick timidly.
"i shall inform you when we reach the target zone" with these last words Talliusc closed down the comm and sealed his room shut. this room was like no other, to some it would seem to be a waste of space, but not to a man like Talliusc, complete with obstacle course, dueling circle and observation gallery Talliusc had all that he would need to survive. he would have some time to himself to practice with his lightsabers. Talliusc removed the Doublebladed lightstaff that always hung along his back and placed it on a table across the room with the force, he then took up both of his curve handled duelling sabers and connected their backs to each other. "Marvelous" thought Talliusc to himself, the only thing he enjoyed more then practicing his saber techniques was putting those techniques to use against Jedi. with the two sabers connected the blades came out either end of an S shaped handle, one blade shot back to Talliusc 's right, close to his body, the other blade shot out to his left somewhat farther away from him. Talliusc spent the better part of 7 hours twirling the blade about and jumping all over his own personal obstacle course. finally he retired the blades, separating them from each other and placing them on either hip in the fashion of bounty hunters placing guns in holsters. Talliusc walked up to his observation galley and stared out into the cold bleakness of hyperspace. His thoughts dwelled on the jedi, they proclaimed to be the right doers of the galaxy, they were so wise in their own way, yet so foolishly blind to not sieze power where it lay. the jedi would pay for their ignorance with blood, and Talliusc planned to have a front row seat when their lives came crashing down around them. but one matter remained, that cursed Starblazer, he was an enigma. Talliusc knew that he could become a powerful ally if turned, but turning him would prove difficult and agravating, but that was good. anger was necessary for a siths existence. Talliusc continued to ponder the problem of Starblazer well into the night and into the early hours of the morning.

When the Dreadhold came out of hyperspace immediately sirens blared throughout the ship. "these were not typical alarms, something is wrong!" thought Talliusc as he took up his lightsabers and made for the bridge.




well there you have it, im hoping that Reb will do something interesting with this story and take it forward, if he doesnt then ill just have to think of something myself. well what do you guys think of my doublebladed curved saber? i was trying to describe it during the story but it didnt turn out so well, basically you take two curve bladed lightsabers, point ones end (the end where the blade comes out) and point it facing behind you, and the other saber facing in front of you, then snap the backs together. i wonder if they could make this work in ep3? ah well, keep the stories coming, im anxious to hear about agen_terminator and Darklighter

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 09:39 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
Very nice work, i'm tired now and i'm gonna go to bed, let's see if anyone else can add to this saga heh.

ok ill write another part

dragon deflected another shot as the troopers still came. "of all places i could have ended up it had to be the storm trooper barrics." as another bunch of troopers came at him he used the force to push them into another bunch then he used the force to throw them all into the wall. a blaster bolt came at his back, he turned around to block it but he dident really need to. " where the hell did you two come from" standing before him was
agen-terminator and darklighter,they both were bleeding and looked like they had internal bleeding. dragon then decided that he needed to pause the fight. he used the force to bring the roof down on the doorway. "you two look like sh!t dragon said."thank you for that observation" agen said. dragon used the force to heal them both, then he reached in his back pac and took out some jedi robes and two lightsabers. after they had put on the robes dragon put some trip mines on the wall in front of the door.
"where to" dragon said "we need to end this today. the emperor has gone too far this time" darklighter said. dragon noded. they started off down a corridor and tryed to use the force to locate the emperor. the three of them opend a door and went inside. it was extreamly dark but they dident need their eyes, just the force. they all felt a desterbence in the force and they all activated their light sabers, agen and darklighter took out the light sabers dragon had given them. three very strong dark jedi came out of the darkness and activated their lightsabers. darklighter, agen-terminator and white dragon knew this wouldent be an easy fight

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 09:40 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
BTW, whitedragon, me and Agen kind of escaped already...that's what I just wrote:( I'm sorry if it kind of hinders your story:( :( :(
yeah but my character dident know they escaped ya see

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 09:49 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13


It was truly a magnificent sight, for WhiteDragon was quite the Swordsman. He himself had a duel with whitedragon once, A duel which he barely won. It was one of the longest duels Obi-wan had ever had.

why thank you obi-wan.
sorry master but i kind of started with out you but why dont you put a part in where you tell me to find darklighter after you descover where he is

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 09:52 PM
Originally posted by whitedragon

yeah but my character dident know they escaped ya see

Well, I'm sorry, but kind of told that they escaped. Not sure how it should effext your story...just telling you...

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 10:16 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter


Well, I'm sorry, but kind of told that they escaped. Not sure how it should effext your story...just telling you...
well sorry but you should write the next part because we are going to kick ass :D

Darklighter
07-22-2002, 10:23 PM
Okay, I have a really good idea...I'll edit my last story to fit in, and then show them entering the bunker. Then I'll write the next part. I have to sleep now, so I'll do it tomorrow, okay? Night ya'll!:D

edit - here is the missing part of my story.

The shadows began glow as three Jedi emerged from them, lightsabers in hand, creeping along the floor swiftly and silently. They entered a great round room, which spanned a huge distamce. The walls were dark, the patterns mosaic, and he floor was silver-grey stone.

The three Jedi payed no notice, and using the force concentrated on the whereabouts of their enemies. Their's was the most atuned and keenest instincts of Jedi's. Darklighter stared about the room again, as they kept moving.

I don't remember this he said, examining the great hall. At that moment there was a flash of light. Lightning struck them from far off, as the three Jedi tumbled backwards to the ground. Divine Spirit now approached them far beyond, cackling menacingly.

"You thought that you could fool an Emperor?!" Divine's voice was croaky and deep, utterly evil and shrouded in malice. He laughed again at them, and descended from the steps in the distance, a figure on one side of him.

"I told you we would meet again, Darklighter" his name sounded bluntly. Shadow Angel, Darklighter's head sank as he thought the name. The Jedi were now raising to stand.

"You're kind are so predictable. The darkside cannot be foretold, but the light can" Divine walked closer to them, his eyes almost red with hatred. "Right now you're master is on his way to try and rescue you."

"Obi-wan" Darklighter's voice was desperate, he had to warn his master, but could not.

"Yes" the Emperor focussed his gaze on Darklighter. "I am so sorry, but I have some duties to attend to" he began to turn round, walking back towards the way he had entered, lifting his hands towards the ceiling as he said "The destruction of the Academy!

"No!" Whitdragon yelled furiously as he ran towards Divine, his lightsaber high above his head.

"Wait!" Agen's warning was too late. The Emperor turned and with one hand and propelled Whitedragoninto the far wall, his body hit it with amazing force, as his unconcious body feel to the ground. Darklighter and Agen looked in anger at their enemy, as he stared back.

"Farewell. Jedi" and he cackled again, walking with Shadow towards the lift on the far side of the hall. At that point, swarms of guards entered from all directions, surrounding the Jedi. Some carried lightsabers, obviously apprentices in Divine's Academy. The two looked around in despair.

"They win this round" Darklighter said horrified, and placed their weapons on the ground. They were carried off out of the hall.

Whitedragon lay unconcious, Agen and Darklighter had once again been captured, and it was certain doom for Obi-wan if he attempted to rescue them.

To be continued...

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 10:24 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
Okay, I have a really good idea...I'll edit my last story to fit in, and then show them entering the bunker. Then I'll write the next part. I have to sleep now, so I'll do it tomorrow, okay? Night ya'll!:D
ok sounds cool

whitedragon
07-22-2002, 10:29 PM
by the way ill edit mine to say it was a bunker

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 01:05 AM
Well, first off, I just wanna know, when does this "Episode" end? How far are we going to go with it? I think Obi and Divine have some kind of backstory worked out, but aren't revealing it. That's good though, I like it that way. Man, this is only the first part too!

Also, yea, I like where this is going as well Talliusc. And to think all this started when I PM'd you for permission to use your character:D I've got some interesting ideas for what to do with my character, and what to do involving our rivalry. Perhaps I'll PM you sometime, when I decide just which ideas I'm going to go with, and we can work out some details.

As for now, I'm heading to bed. Depending on what's happening in this thread tomorrow and how much time I have, I may post another part to my story. So Talliusc, I guess it's yours until then. I've got an idea kicking around for one of our future meetings, but that'll have to wait;)

obi
07-23-2002, 01:39 AM
thats it! Obi-wan thought to himself. He's there, in the imperial incampment!

Obi-wan grabbed his new lightsaber, and put in on his belt. He took the lift down to the ground, and exited.

He limped across the academy grounds, and began his long hike to the camp. He allowed the force to guide him. When suddenly, he found himself stareing against a solid wall.

That's not right........ Obi-wan thought to himself. Why had the force led him here? For what significance is this?

Then, he got his answer.

THe spirit of his dead Master, Qui-gon Jinn walked from behind a tree.

"Hello, Obi-wan." He said. "It is good to see you again."

"Yes, it is. Why have you made contact with me? Are you the one who led me here?" Obi-wan asked, with a mixed feelings of joy and confusion at the sight of his old master.

"Your freind, Darklighter, Went to rescue a prisoner. That attempt will fail, and you will try to rescue them both." Qui-gon told him.

"I know, I have seen it in my visions." Obi-wan told him.

"No, you have not seen the whole truth. You will die in your attempt to rescue them, and then they shall be executed. If you return back now, you will live, and only one of them will die." Qui-gon said.

"With your warning, I know that I must prevent their death, and I know that I can prevent mine. I must help them. They are my Strongest allies, and my best freinds. I will help them, and I will free them. Both of them, they shall both live." Obi-wan replied.

"Obi-wan, I never knew you to be so closed-minded. Listen to me, for I know the truth!." Qui-gon said, as the spirit faded.

Obi-wan continued his hike for the incampment. When he arrived, he noticed two guards at the front, and approached them.

"Hey! You there!" one of them shouted. He walked up to them, without one word, and sliced through them with his Blue Lightsaber. He slashed a panel out of the wall and the blast doors opened. He walked in, and immidiatly guards began shouting, and shooting. Obi-wan called upon the force and deflected every shot. 4 sentry's came out of the wall, and began firing on him. He deflected the shots as he rolled forward behind a security desk. When they stoped their fire, he used the force to gain speed, and hurried his way into the main hallway.

The doors on both closed, and one of the walls opened, and revealed 4 officers and many troops, holding blasters to Darklighter and Agen's head.

"Surrender, and they will live. Resist, and you shall die." One of the officers shouted. Obi-wan Deactivated his lightsaber, and called on the force.

"You will release the prisoners." Obi-wan said.

"That Mind trick will not work on me, jedi. The emporer has trained me to have a strong mind, and that is what i have. Now, surrender." The officer said, as Obi-wan ran to them, igniting his lightsaber, and slashing 3 of the guards. One lucky shot by the officer blazed into obi-wan's back, as he fell to the ground, and his lightsaber deactivated.

"Obi-wan! NO!" Darklighter shouted. The two jedi stared at the body of Obi-wan, and decided it was time to stand up to the imperials. They looked at eachother, and nodded, knowing what each must do. Then, simultaniously, they stood, and kicked the guards behind them, and avoided the shots of the other guards and officers. They broke the cuffs, and force pushed them all to the gorund. The weapons where disposed of, and the imperials surrenderd.

Darklighter ran up to obi-wan, and picked his head up off of the ground.

to be continued.......

Darth Groovy
07-23-2002, 07:04 AM
Ok first thing is first. Since I am the one who started this thread I will now set the standards. I didn't expect this to get so big, but I am very greatful, and I tip my hat to all of you excellent writers out there.....the Force is with you!

Second Standard. Posting and story writing is unlimited however, in order to kill off an existing character, you must first have the existing characters permission. In other words if you want to kill AB_Legion off in your story.....you must PM AB_Legion and get his permission first. If he wants to work out a deal with you, that's his right.

Third Standard. I like the idea of Each side taking a turn, however it is impossible for everyone to be online at once. So post when you like but make sure you read the previous posts and try to keep things in chronological order if possible. As a side note, anyone who volunteers to compile this battle into chapters may do so, provided he sends a copy to all contributing writers.

Fourth Standard. The battle is not over until the founding members of both Academies agree to an ending. I don't think Divine Spirit is going to yield anytime soon, nor is Obi-Wan 13, so happy hunting! I would suggest waiting until everyone has completely run out of material and then we will close. Both leaders must agree on a conclusion before we end this.

Fifth and final Standard. Anything goes as far as story is concerned, I am not George Lucas and not as picky. If you want to bring Batman, Vash the Stampede, or Bugs Bunny into this story that is fine by me. The only thing I will put emphasis on, and It hasn't been a problem yet but I will still emphasize that all of Lucasforums previously laid ground rules apply to this thread. I don't want to see this thread locked because some idiot decided to be stupid. Ok enough standards...back to the battle.....and May the Force Be With You!

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 08:54 AM
What I am suggesting is that there is not an ultimate 'ending', if you will. We can carry on with another story someother time. This is like the first in something like 2 or 3 episodes, so I think the story might need to ended soon yes.

I'll have a go at compiling it once its finished. Once both Divine and Obi-wan have agreed to when it is finishing, you could PM me with your e-mails and I'll send the text file, punctuation all touched up and add in chapter names. If you would like to go back and edit your posts putting chapter names at the top be my guest :)

I am now going back to finish my story by editing my last post:D

edit - btw, I've just edited my last post and put a story in their...it fits well:D

Umm, I kinda added you in Divine and Shadow. It doesn't realy effect the story much, hope its ok:(

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 11:40 AM
my part of the story isent fiting in very well. if you guys think it best i could rewrite it

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 11:47 AM
No, no no no no dragon:) You don't don't need to rewrite it...you put in some stuff that we didn't already have, like dark jedis in the bunker. I like your story:) and it fits in well with ours now...I could go back and mention about the Dark Jedi in my previous story if you want, then yours would fit in even better?

Don't worry about it. If you feel like altering your story, thats fine, but there really isn't anything wrong with it:) Good job...

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 11:50 AM
Originally posted by Darklighter
No, no no no no dragon:) You don't don't need to rewrite it...you put in some stuff that we didn't already have, like dark jedis in the bunker. I like your story:) and it fits in well with ours now...I could go back and mention about the Dark Jedi in my previous story if you want, then yours would fit in even better?

Don't worry about it. If you feel like altering your story, thats fine, but there really isn't anything wrong with it:) Good job...
well thank you :D but i do need to do something with it so it can fit in with obi-wans last post

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 11:55 AM
Well, that would be fine:) It would be cool to intergrate the stories so they were like stages in the episode, all fitting together nicely...whatever you want to do is fine by me:)

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 11:57 AM
Originally posted by Darklighter
Well, that would be fine:) It would be cool to intergrate the stories so they were like stages in the episode, all fitting together nicely...whatever you want to do is fine by me:)
ok but do you want to write the next part to it ?

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 12:02 PM
Hmm, I'm not sure...you haven't written for a while, but Obi-wan was the one who came up with the last part...I'm not sure where he wants to go with it...

You can if you want to:) I don't mind doing it either...

Just remember you've been knocked unconcious, and Obi-wan is practically dead. Not sure about the Emperor, whether he has escaped or not...

Obi-wan? Ideas please...

edit - btw, Reb, you haven't said much lately...it would be cool to hear your side of the story again sometime...

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 12:07 PM
i had a good idea for the last part of my story. well not the last part but the last part in the bunker and it requires the help of
obi-wan and it is a good part but i do need obi-wan to be able to fight

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 12:12 PM
This is a post to tell you all that I'm trying to compile this story as I'm writing this. For continuity's sake I may "edit" a few of the already posted stories to make them fit better. Like where you were mentioning Obi-Wan in a few of your first posts Darklighter, but he wrote that he was gone. I'll do my best to make it all fit. I'm going to try and post another part of my story sometime today. I also suggest we wrap up this episode sometime soon. It's twelve pages long, and I'm only on Obi-Wan's and Divine's duel :D

obi
07-23-2002, 12:16 PM
"Obi-wan! You will survive! Just hang on!" Darklightr spoke.

Obi-wan, barely living, looked up at his freind.

"Death shall have it's day, but not today." Obi-wan said.

Darklighter put obi-wan on his shoulder, and carried him out of the compund, with Agen Closely following.

"I can walk from here." Obi-wan said, and Darklighter nodded and put him down.

Obi-wan walked around to the corner of an outside wall, and looked around.

"4 guards." Obi-wan said. "And a land speeder. We will need to get there without them seeing us." Obi-wan said.

"I'll take care of that." Agen said, as he ignited his lightsaber, and walked around the corner.

"Hey! Get him!" One of the Troopers shouted. They began to fire at Agen, who simply deflected the blasts. He closed within Saber range, and chopped away at them. Once the coast was clear, Obi-wan and Darklighter came around, and the men got into the speeder, and Darklighter drove.

They left, and headed back for the academy.
__________________________________________

Later that night.....

Obi-wan sat in his bed. It was quiet, and Obi-wan didn't like it. He heard the sound of a high-pitched alarm, then several "booming" sounds.

"Air raid!" Obi-wan shouted. He got up, and got his lightsaber. He looked out of his window and seen several Tie-bombers dropping their bombs on the Anti-air turrets. Some of them got passed, and headed for the main building of the academy. Obi-wan ran to the Lift, and went to the ground. He went to the security desk, and picked up a blaster. "I swore I would never use one of these." Obi-wan said,picking it up.

He went outside, and began firing at the tie bombers. There where several Guards running around frantically, and unarmed. They where running to the weapons bunker. SOme of them got their wepaons, and some didn't. 2 tie bombers came in with a swoop and bombed in into oblivian. The bombers then changed their attention to the main building.

"Aim for those bombers! There, near the building!" Obi-wan shouted, as the few soldeirs began shooting at the bombers. He heard the sound of x-wing engines firing up, and looked to see Death Squadron launching from the bay.TIe interceptor reinforcements came, to help their bombers. 2 Imperial landing craft followed. He then felt the ground shake, and heard heavy machinery. He looked, and saw 3 AT-AT's headed their way towards the academy, followed by several ground troops. Obi-wan was saddened by this sight, but there was only one option. Evacuation. Obi-wan ran to the main building, which was being bombed, and got to the comm system.

"This is Obi-wan Kenobi! Get to your escape transports, now! I repeat: Evacuate! Code Red! Evacuate!" Obi-wan shouted, but it quickly sparked, and smoke came out of it. The building shook, and Obi-wan Ran out as it blew up behind him. He heard shouts of the senior officers around him, "MOve! Move! move!" they shouted. Obi-wan now remembered those words from his dreams.........Obi-wan! no!........Move! Move! Move!.........We are surrounded, we must surrender..............you are beaten..............

Now it all came together. They must leave the academy, and they must leave now.

Several transports left the hangar, as the Imperials penetrated the defenses of the academy, and the Imperial shuttle crafts landed, releasing more troops.

"Retreat!" Obi-wan heard Tyrion say, as the ground forces began to withdraw, and move to the transports. Obi-wan himself went to one of them, and 5 minutes after he got on, it began to take off. As it was in the air, he looked down, to see Clone Troopers shooting prisoners, whiping out the remainder of those brave and honorable people who didn't get to a transport in time. The Dorm building exploded, along with the research buildings.

Before the Transport completey left, he looked down, and seen the emporer looking up at him.

This is not over, Obi-wan Kenobi. This.........is not over.

*End episode 1*

edit- hows that? Remember, the loose ends will be tied up in the next few episodes:)

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 12:17 PM
no lets keep the story going this is fun

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 12:23 PM
uhh obi-wan i dont mean to sound rude but are you even looking at my posts

Yom
07-23-2002, 12:28 PM
am i late!! did miss any thing darn it i did well anywho chef yom reporting for dutie

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 12:31 PM
Well, I kinda have something that I want to do before Episode 1 ends, if you guys agree to it. You probably won't like where the story goes though. I'm still working on it, damn the forums for screwing up. I've got stuff before where it should be, and after things that it's before... Just bloody confusing sometimes :D
I'll probably edit this post, so look for my story here.

EDIT: Obi-Wan13, for the love of god, from now on please spell it emperor, not emporer:D I don't know how many times spell checked has picked that up now:D Heh heh, I'm not mad at you, it's just a constant mistake you keep making. Figured I'd tell ya.

obi
07-23-2002, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by whitedragon
uhh obi-wan i dont mean to sound rude but are you even looking at my posts

Yea, but I didn't find them very enthusiastic, no offense. Like the reference to a James Bond film, etc.

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 12:56 PM
Obi-wan, nice ending, it had to happen some time:D You could put something on the end like:

The Jedi had escaped, and the Academy was in the posession of the Emperor.

Or something that states what has happened at the end...just a thought.

Also, for Reb compiling it, we may need an introduction similar to the rolling text at the beginning of the films. Just to say what the whole thing is about, to introduce the episode. We will have one at the beginning of each episode.

Plus, maybe we should have heard something from the enemies' point of view before it ended. Maybe Divine or Shadow or Talliusc could say what was happening on their star destroyer/ base place before they atack the Academy. Like:

"This is it" Divine said. "We will take the Academy."

It could end with like 'The Emperor's fleet was assembled, and the ties gathered in orbit around the planet.

Just a thought, cos it seemed a little rushed:) What do you think?

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 02:17 PM
Originally posted by obi-wan13


Yea, but I didn't find them very enthusiastic, no offense. Like the reference to a James Bond film, etc.
i like your ending with the tie bombers but. i had my own idea of an ending if you want i can PM it to you

Agen
07-23-2002, 02:55 PM
I think we need it all to be compiled and put on the websites. so people can read and see how the staff are involved sort of :D and it's very good, also when will we start episode 2?

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
I think we need it all to be compiled and put on the websites. so people can read and see how the staff are involved sort of :D and it's very good, also when will we start episode 2?
as soon as obi-wan thinks of a good way to start episode 2.
and ignore my story im going to put it in ep 2

Darth Talliusc
07-23-2002, 03:04 PM
so is ep1 over then? i kind of left my story at a cliffhanger, it wouldnt be too hard to tie in with the jedi academy evacuation storyline. hmmm maybe ill write that up today. and Reb we should definitely try and come up with a plot outline for our rivalry, ive got some ideas but id really need your input (not to mention permission) to pull it off.

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 03:06 PM
You've got ideas?!...COOL!:D

Well, we should give a little bit before we start the next Ep...like a day:lol:

Reb is compiling it now, so bare with him:) Make sure all the paragraphs, punctuation is sorted out Reb;)

Dissectional
07-23-2002, 03:11 PM
I can't wait for the next Ep in Academy wars.. what ever shall we call it?
:D

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by Dissectional
I can't wait for the next Ep in Academy wars.. what ever shall we call it?
:D
a new dope....

oh well heres a side story

white dragon and yom looked at eachother and then at the last doughnut sitting on the counter....

Darth Knight
07-23-2002, 03:19 PM
Yeah i am defienetly putting this story on my site it is so cool.

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 03:24 PM
Originally posted by Darth Knight
Yeah i am defienetly putting this story on my site it is so cool.
were going to have to edit and connect it all after were done

Darth Groovy
07-23-2002, 03:33 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
What I am suggesting is that there is not an ultimate 'ending', if you will. We can carry on with another story someother time. This is like the first in something like 2 or 3 episodes, so I think the story might need to ended soon yes.

I'll have a go at compiling it once its finished. Once both Divine and Obi-wan have agreed to when it is finishing, you could PM me with your e-mails and I'll send the text file, punctuation all touched up and add in chapter names. If you would like to go back and edit your posts putting chapter names at the top be my guest :)

I am now going back to finish my story by editing my last post:D

edit - btw, I've just edited my last post and put a story in their...it fits well:D

Umm, I kinda added you in Divine and Shadow. It doesn't realy effect the story much, hope its ok:(

Ok I like that Idea. We could go into episode 2 soon. I would like for Darth Groovy to get in an action scene before we end this one. I have most of my character developement but I am saving his origins as a big surprise, maybe even the next chapter. Right now I just want Darth Groovy to kick some ass first. PM me and keep me posted on what's going on because I can't always be online, and when I do it isn't usually until really late when not that many users are online. Again I am so tickled as to how big and woderful this has become. Thank you all!

Agen
07-23-2002, 03:35 PM
Episode 3:Darkness Falls
would sound a bit cheesy but so did all of them in the real move but for ep 2 i have no idea.

Darth Groovy
07-23-2002, 03:40 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
Episode 3:Darkness Falls
would sound a bit cheesy but so did all of them in the real move but for ep 2 i have no idea.

I will come up with a title when I start the new thread. This one is not officially closed yet. I won't let you guys down...I promise.

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 03:42 PM
Well, I'm doing some editing to it now. I've changed the bond film references to "Holovid films", so it makes sense in the Star Wars universe, and some references to Obi-Wan when he's already gone. It's weird to read through, seeing a different writing style every chapter:D One thing I've noticed though. We all suck with spelling and grammer, me included. My spell checker has never had such a workout;) I've included every post that we've done, some of them had to be worked around and edited a bit to work, but I think it should be ok. As for our rivalry Talliusc, wait till my next post, you'll be surprised where I'm taking it. As I'm compiling this, I never had a chance to write it before Obi-Wan closed Episode 1, so I think it's fair that I can write it and include it in there. That sounds reasonable, right?:)

Agen
07-23-2002, 03:45 PM
don't change my bond reference, it only was mentioned once and then whitedragon got the idea to do everything bond. :D and good to hear that it's coming along :) keep it up.

Darth Groovy
07-23-2002, 04:49 PM
"This is Obi-wan Kenobi! Get to your escape transports, now! I repeat: Evacuate! Code Red! Evacuate!" The words echoed over the 1mc and reverberated through the schoolyard walls. Darth Groovy and Nerfyoda looked into the sky as they heard the screaming repulsors from the Tie Bombers in the sky. The turrets before them shattered like glass and bodies were tossed into the grass nearby. Before Groovy could say anything he saw the presence of his master Yoda_623 running towads them saber ignited. "Darth Groovy, you and Nerfyoda and the rest of the second string defense must try to devert the ground attack away from the transports. When the third transport is away, we will dust off the field and get you out." Yoda_623 shouted at the pupils. "Yes my master", Groovy said with a sharp formal snap. The troops surrounding them began slapping cartridges and loading weapons and finding cover behind trees and rocks and bushes. "They need me on the command ship", Yoda continued. "Where will we go?" replied Groovy. "Yoda placed his hand on his pupil's shoulder and smiled widely. "The battle has only begun my young padawan. Through knowledge of the Force the future you will see, although not always in order are these events. In time you will learn to stretch out to see these things before they happen. We have lost the building, but the Academy is still strong. We will win this war!" Yoda_623 started towards the hangar and paused to look back on his apprentice...."The Force will be with you......always!" As Yoda_623 scurried off the field, a loud explosion errupted as several white clone troopers scurried into the courtyard. Groovy and several students walked in a single line ahead while others holding blasters kept their ground. The line ignited the sabers in unison and began to deflect the blater fire like a large forcefield. An officer yelled in the distance, "Fire!" with that the front line of students hit the ground face first to allow for the surprise behind them. Blaster bolts echoed like a machine as clonetroopers fell to the ground. Darth Groovy crawled back towards Nerfyoda who was cursing and blasting troopers with his rifle. "I want you to cover me, I'm going to take out the commanders." said Groovy. "Like Hell you are", Nerfyoda snapped. Besides what do you think you will accomplish?" "They are sith, this is are only chance to slow them down. The troopers are bread to follow orders, not carry out plans. I will be back." Groovy pulled a small sphere out of his robe. "I have a bad feeling about this!" Nerfyoda continued, "just hurry back right?" Groovy smiled and ran to the front of the field. He through the sphere at the center of the first wave of troops. The sphere broke in half as a cloud of black smoke shot out of it. The blaster bolts lessened until the officers commanded they're troops to cease fire. Several dark hooded figures made there way past the clonetroopers as they snapped to attention. Three single hooded figures came to the front and stopped. AS the smoked cleared (:::cue duel of fates theme::::) Darth Groovy stood glancing down slightly. As his head rose, he removed his sunglasses to reveal two bright red and yellow eyes. The three sith without any words ignited they're red glowing sabers. In one circular motion a long saber hilt appeared in Groovy's hand and red blades shot out of each end. Groovy glared at the three warriors and let out a faint growl as he shot into the air like a rocket. His robe fell to the ground behind him. He flipped twice like a diver and landed on the ground before them. The sith surrounded Groovy and lunged into them with sabers aglow and ran around him like a twisted carousel. Darth Groovy blocked and parried the attacks and spun the double blade with one hand and stretched out the other. Reaching out to the force he knocked one warrior into the nearbye wall. The other two were on each end as Groovy twisted and turned and spun around. Nerfyoda sat behind the tree and watched in amazment the acrobatics of his friend. Suddenly the third sith picked himself off the wall and ran towards Groovy's back, and hit him hard with both hands. Groovy let out a yell of pain, the double blade flew out of his hand as he hit the ground. The other sith pulled his lightsaber back into his hand with the force and powered it up. The three sith stood over Groovy stabbing at him as Groovy rolled around on the ground dodging each blow. Suddenly the second sith grabbed his throat and let out a gasp as he fell backward. Groovy stood up into his direction and his double saber flew back into his hand. The Second sith screamed in agony as the Darth Groovy pulled the blade out of his abdomen. Without pause for reflection the other two sith came at him again even stronger. The first sith Force pushed Groovy into the tree behind him and shot him full of lightning bolts. Groovy gathered his strenght and hurled his saber past the sith's head. He closed his eyes and used his hand to steady the blades flight. The blade remained spinning behind the sith. Groovy closed his eyes and steadied the saber's flight. The sith stood with a blank look of surprise as Groovy laid there next the tree in deep concentraion with his hand stretched forward. As the sith turned around to see what he was concentrating on, the blade whirlled into him like a helicopter and sent his head flying across the courtyard. The blade slowly returned to Darth Groovy'd hand as second sith ran to his fallen comrad and grabbed saber from his hand. "Traitor....You are not Darth Maul!" The sith hissed. Groovy shook his head lightly and reached into his tunic for his sunglasses. "know...... I am something else." The sith growled and ignited both sabers as Groovy lunged into him. The sith crossed both sabers into a "T" and blocked Groovy's blow. The sith flipped backward and twirled both saberes in each hand and lunged forward again. Using his elbow he jabbed Groovy harshly in the chin and swung with the other blade. A large pile of sparks emmitted as Groovy's blade was chopped in two. Groovy continued with the other half of the blade as a large hum echoed in the backround. The courtyard filled with wind as he looked up and noticed Yoda_623 standing in the troop bay surrounded by students and pupils. "Around the Students a perimiter create", snapped Yoda_623. Then the ship sent out a stream of lazer bolts into the opposing forces. The sith glared at Groovy and looked back at his falling troops. He pointed a saber directly at Groovy's chest "this is not finished!" he yelled, and then ran back to his troops ordering them to fire on the remaining students. The Academy officers ordered the troops to get onto the hovership and Groovy stood for a moment and looked at the two dead sith that lay before him. He powered down his saber and headed towards the ship.

~end~

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 05:20 PM
Nice work Groovy:D That was great...

How far has it come along Reb? You have another chapter now:D

Divine Spirit
07-23-2002, 08:14 PM
Has/is someone put/ting the whole story in one file?

Agen
07-23-2002, 08:22 PM
Reb is compiling. looks like he's doing a good job too.

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 08:51 PM
“Tyrion, am I ever glad to see you.” Said XERXES, the medic tending to the wound on his side. The rest of the group that had set out with Tyrion, included Reb and Kordkelly, had finally reached XERXES position. The scouts that Tyrion had sent ahead with the medic saluted as he passed.

“The same can be said for you. By the way Darklighter called in, we weren’t sure if we would make it to you in time.” Tyrion replied.

“This?” XERXES joked. “It’s only a minor wound.”

“Yea a minor, life threatening wounds. You’re lucky to be alive, it’s a good thing Darklighter found you when he did.” Said Tyrion.

“Any word from him yet?” Asked XERXES. The look on Tyrion’s face said it all, and XERXES didn’t need a spoken answer.

“Is he able to walk? I don’t plan on staying around here forever.” Asked Tyrion

“He’ll be just fine. He can walk, but don’t push him. He needs time to recover. A slow, steady pace shouldn’t be too much trouble for him however.” Replied the medic.

“Alright. Let’s move out.” Tyrion yelled to the troops. That was when Reb noticed it, a disturbance in the Force. He could feel a Dark presence near, a familiar one.

“You head back to base. I’ll catch up. I have some pressing matters to attend to, with an old friend.” Said Reb. Tyrion gave him a strange look, but then he nodded. He made a ‘follow me’ motion with his hand, and the platoon moved out. Reb took one last look at Tyrion and the soldiers, and then left in another direction.


“Ah, I knew you would come. At least we finally meet, face to face, instead of in your mind.” Said Darth Talliusc, standing by a Lambda class shuttle.

“So it wasn’t a dream. You were manipulating my thoughts.” Replied Reb.

“Yes. But you defeated me, in my own dreamscape. I would have never thought it possible, but you proved me wrong.” Said Talliusc, taking his strange Lightsabre from his back, and igniting both blood red ends. “Now then, let’s see how you fare in the real world.”

Reb brandished his Lightstaff, igniting both ends with a snap-hiss as Talliusc charged at him. Reb blocked the first strike, and the second, and then attacked. Talliusc parried his blow, and the cycle repeated itself. Talliusc’s Lightsabre and fighting stance were the most unusual Reb had ever encountered, so he had to adapt quickly in order to keep his head. But he was finding it very difficult indeed, and struggled to gain ground against the advancing Sith.

“My offer still stands, ” stated Talliusc. “ You would be a powerful ally Starblazer. Don’t make me destroy you.”

“And, what, makes you think, you, could.” Replied Reb, between blocks, parries and attacks.

(If you have the Imperial March, start playing it right about now)
“Oh come now. Can you not see that you are fighting a losing battle? This duel, and the one you have in your mind. I sense the conflict within you. Join us Starblazer. It’s the only chance you have.”

Reb blocked Talliusc’s latest attack, and then backed off. Reb knew what he had to do. He did only have one chance, and he had best take it while the offer still stood. “ You’re right.” Reb answered, extinguishing his blades. “ It is my only chance. I accept your offer. I will join you, and serve the Dark Emperor.”

Darth Talliusc extinguished his blades and grinned. “Excellent choice Lord Malice. You are not as foolish as I once thought you to be. Welcome my Sith brother. Welcome to the New Order.”

Tyrion stood in shock. He had sent the others ahead, and followed Reb, as he was worried about him. He had felt the dark side growing stronger in Reb since earlier, and now he knew why.

“Reb, no! What are you doing?” yelled Tyrion as Reb began to walk up the boarding ramp of the shuttle, following Talliusc.

“What I must. The Force is leading me in a different direction than you and the others. Our paths will cross again Tyrion, I assure you. As for now, go Tyrion. Leave, and go as quickly as you can. I sense an event coming, one that will create a drastic change in this war. Hurry, and return to the Academy, while you still can. But please, grant me one request.” Darth Malice reached into his cloak, and pulled a pendant from around his neck. He tossed it to Tyrion. “When you see Obi-Wan again, please, give him this. And tell him… tell him I’m sorry.”

Tyrion opened the pendant, to find a small holopic of Obi-Wan, Reb, and a blue Female Twi-Lek. Reb was standing behind her, his arms around her waist. Tyrion wondered who she was…

“May the Force protect you Tyrion.” Lord Malice said to Tyrion. But it was too late. He had already started running towards the Academy. The engines revved up, and Malice climbed the rest of the way up the ramp.

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 08:58 PM
That's my final contribution. Not quite what you were expecting huh? It comes before Obi-wan's last post, if you're wondering. It was hard to come to this decision, but I have long term plans for what to do. Back to the story, what format do you guys want this in? I'll send it out to Obi-Wan, and Divine Spirit later, so they can put it on their sites. I'm proof reading it now. I didn't do the whole name the chapter thing, because there's about 50 of them.
That's it for now. I guess I can email it out to anyone else who wants it though.

Darth Malice, out.

Shadow Angel
07-24-2002, 02:39 AM
Man, this sucks. My Net's been out for a few days, and the two posts I did make were placed out of order, and were either ignored, or they sucked. To whoever's compiling, since no one used mine, you don't have to put it in, but it got out of order. My first came after this post:

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Originally posted by Darklighter
"It was foolish of you to come here, Darklighter" as he turned around slowly, the figure was in full view, standing at the entrane through which he had come. "You are only delaying your iminent death." It was Shadow Angel, Darth Dominance, Divine Spirit's sith lord companion. He was tall, his thick, long cloak pitch dark, his hood covering his face.

"You cannot win" he said in a low, foreboding voice that shattered the silence.

"We will see" came Darklighter's response. "You may have power, but you lack the spirit of a Jedi. You cannot foresee your victory while we are still alive, Shadow" his voice now deep, he was circling around shadow, his hand inches away from his saber hilt.

"You speak as if there is still hope left for your kind" he replied menacingly. "We will see if you are right, Admiral" he began to close in on Darklighter, they were both walking to confront each other. "You know you will not win this battle. The darkside is the only way out. Join us Tidus. You know it is the only option."

"The only option if you are weak enough to give in!" he shouted, as the tension mounted Shadow's face was grim and smirkless.

"Fool!!" he quickly drew his lightsaber. In a split second he leapt into the air towards Darklighter, his brandished red saber gleaming with malice. Darklighter was too quick. Before the saber could strike him, his orange-white saber was drawn to block the attack. They locked, Shadow's teeth gritted together, Darklighter's eyes glaring beneath his low brow. Shadow flung himself backwards to land on the ground a few metres away.

He ran at Tidus again, swiping to his left. He parried the attack, and ducked to avoid the next swipe across his head. Darklighter spun, circling in the air just in time to avoid Shadow's deadly upercut. He landed, and they faced each other again. Full of anger, Shadow ran at him, his blade high above his head, ready to strike. This he did not foresee. As he brought hi ssaber down as he ran, Darklighter dodged to the side. Everything moved in slow motion. Shadow ran passed and missed, and Darklighter brought his saber down upon his back.

With a cry he fell. "Curse you, and your Academy!" he yelped. The shuttle was just in time. It cruised overhead, guns ready, firing at Darklighter. he dodged them and dived behind the bunker out of view. Shadow crawled to his feet, and the shuttle ramp lowered.

"We will meet again!" He cried, as he climbed aboard the caft, injured and limping. Darklighter knew this was only the beginning. He would have to face him again, but not yet. Holstering his saber, he climbed aboard the speeder bike, and raced back to his comrades.


------------------------- And here's my first post.....

The Shadow Angel's shuttle quickly docked into his Super Star Destroyer in orbit around the planet. As the ramp lowered, the usual procedure of stormtroopers marching in formation around the craft took form, a bit hastily. Admiral Jericho, commander of the SSD Black Phoenix, rushed to greet the Dark Lord. To his shock, Shadow Angel's robes were tattered and torn, and he looked exhausted. As he limped out of the shuttle, Jericho said:

"L-L-Lord Dominance.... back so soon--"
"You may dispense with the pleasantries, Commander. My confrontation with Master Darklighter has turned with unexpected results. Now, if will excuse me, I will retreat to my quarters. I do not wish to be interrupted!"
And with that, Lord Dominance stomped off to his meditation chamber.

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Upon entering, Shadow immediately removed his damaged Sith robes, revealing his buff, built torso, marred only by the immense scar on his back. But most disturbing, there was no blood. In it's place, was a myriad of tristed wires and metal. His arms, from the elow to the fingers, were also metallic, polished in chrome. The Shadow Angel did indeed rise from the ashes.... as a cyborg!
No matter, thought the young Dark Lord. A mere lightsaber wound cannot stop me from my hatred, my quest for vengeance.

My thirst for blood.

<All in good time, my young apprentice.> The Dark Lord raised his head towards the ceiling. "Master?"
<Yes, it is I, Divine Spirit. I have had to retreat from the Jedi forces, but my plans have not yet failed. You will go to my secret cloning laboratories on [censored! I can't tell you! But for story purposes I will call it Volcanic Cloning Planet.] The coordinates will be beamed to you shortly. There, you are to perform an inspection and certify them as ready for battle. You will be most impressed, I assure you.>

"As you wish, my Master." And with that, Lord Dominance rose from his seat. The scar that was once on his back was no more. It had completely healed. He opened a compartment in the wall on his chamber (the closet) and changed.

The cocoon of the chamber opened. What emerged, was a figure of terror, yet also resembling an icon of ultimate coolness. Donned in a leather trenchcoat, the Dark Lord ran his metallic claw fingers through his long, electric blue hair. His equally shiny, metal boots boomed across the polished floor. He approached Admiral Jericho.

--------------- My second........


Space. The final frontier. A red planet, shimmering like a jewel, a deception of the fiery hell within. A black, silent ship jumped out of hyperspace in its orbit. The Sith Infiltrator, ferrying the Dark Lord, the Shadow Angel, sped towards a landing platform marked in the Emperor's special coordinates.

As the ship landed, a pair of blast doors in front of the platform opened, and two black-robed, hooded firgures emerged. The Dark Lord exited his craft, and one of the attendants spoke. "This way, my Lord. We have been expecting your arrival for a long time."

The three entered the facility, and the doors slammed shut behind them. Although he wasn't affected by it, Shadow could sense the searing heat inside. "Exactly why did you choose such a hot and uncomfortable planet as this to develop your weaponry here?"
"Simply because soldiers grow lazy in comfortable climate. They must learn to feel the heat of battle."

"Soldiers? I didn't come here to inspect another batch of stormtroopers--" the attendant quickly interrupted.
"Oh, our new clones are much more than mere stormtroopers, I can assure you." The three entered a turbolift. One attendant pushed a button, and they were off.

Shadow, not being one to ask a lot of questions, instead probed the attendant's mind through the Force. After a few moments, his eyes widened.

The turbolift stopped, and opened to reveal a catwalk reaching across the chasm of a volcano! Below were several platforms floating above the lava. On it, were thousands of hodded figures sparring against each other with double-bladed lightsabers.

Once again, the attendant spoke. "Many years ago, the great Darth Sidious built a clone army using a template of a bounty hunter. Although they made excellent soldiers, they still could not meet the Emperor's incrasing demands. We have remedied this problem by using the DNA of one of Sidious' strongest, most loyal apprentices, Khameir Sarin... but you might know him better as DARTH MAUL.

Indeed, my Master was wise to make this decision. "Before I make my final report, I would like to test out one of these clones personally." The attendant was a bit reluctant. "As you wish, my Lord, but I must warn you. You may not survive the test run. We've made certain enhance--"
"Just do it." And the attendant left Shadow at the catwalk.

Minutes later, the door at the other end opened to reveal a clone. The Maul clone removed his hood and cloak, then drew his double-bladed lightsaber and ignited each blade, one by one. Shadow ignited his own curved saber, it's purple blade, an untraditional color for both the Jedi and the Sith, glowing across his face. The clone immdeiately charged at Shadow and twirled his blade at him, but the Dark Lord easily blocked. The other side of the clone's staff immediately rushed to Shadow's face, but his keen sense of the Force acted as an alarm, aiding to block and parry each incoming strike. The sabers locked, and Shadow was surprised at the clone's strength as his blade kept coming closer to his face. However, the Dark Lord's mechanical strength in his arm kicked in and pushed the clone back off balance. A quick Force Pull brought him closer before Shadow brought his blade down on the clone's neck and decapitated him.

The attendant rushed back in. Shadow put away his saber, turned to face him, and said, "39 seconds. Most impressive. The Jedi will be overwhelmed by this elite fighting force. How many of these soldiers are prepared?"
"Two million, sir." Shadow grinned.

"Excellent. I want them sent to the Jedi Academy battleground at 0600 Coruscant time. Meanwhile, I have a personal agenda to follow. There will be no one to stop us this time!"

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And that's all. Since I made an entire army of Darth Maul clones, maybe that was a little over the top? I dunno. Maybe you guys could use the general idea in the next episode (I haven't read it yet.)

Darklighter
07-24-2002, 08:47 AM
Originally posted by Reb Starblazer
That's it for now. I guess I can email it out to anyone else who

That would be great Reb:) I'd love to see the whole thing together...btw, you have one new addition to Episode 1 (hopefully it will be the last). Shadow's been out of comission for some time, and he's written a new chapter above.

I'll PM you my e-mail address...

Reb Starblazer
07-24-2002, 12:00 PM
Actually Shadow didn't write a new chapter, he just reposted his two old ones. I've already included them in there shadow, so don't worry. I wasn't ignoring you:D As for the Darth Maul clones, maybe we can work them in somehow. Like when the New Jedi Academy is finally found, an army of Darth Maul's will be released upon them. That should be interesting:p I have some ideas floating in my head as to ways they can be used(or destroyed;))Just Pm that email along Darky, and I'll send it to you. I warn you now, it is LONG. Like 45 chapters and 53 pages kinda long.

Darth Groovy
10-08-2002, 08:42 PM
That's right folks, they are back for your viewing pleasure.......Episode 2 will be concluded soon and Episode 3 will be underway as well! Stay tuned!