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Darth Groovy
07-23-2002, 05:25 PM
"A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away......."

Academy Wars

Episode II

"A New Order"

It was a dark time for the Lucasforumns Academy. The Sith Under the leadership of the Evil Divine Spirit had driven the students to the far edge of the galaxy.

Obi-wan 13 and the remaining forces had constructed a hidden base on the small planet Thedonias.

Determined to survive the current chain of events The Jedi have joined forces with a secluded alien race of warriors.

Determined to crush the academy, Divine Spirit has called upon bounty hunters from all edges of the galaxy to assasinate Obi-wan 13.

Guarded heavily by elite forces Obi-wan returns to his home planet of Coruscant, the shining capital of the galaxy aboard his space cruiser with vital information that could affect the future of the academy...."

Dissectional
07-23-2002, 05:31 PM
K, I'ma post a story. Nobody interrupt! plz. :p

Dissectional
07-23-2002, 05:49 PM
Once on the landing pad at Coruscant, Obi-wan13, Dissectional, Tyrion, and Reb_Starblazer step off the shuttle. Something feels amiss, but they can't figure out what.

Obi-wan13: "We must inform the Council of our discovery. I sense trouble, so everyone keep on your guard. The future of the Academy depends on our getting this info to the council, and I am willing to give my life for it."

Dissectional: "as am I, General Kenobi."

Tyrion: "Well, let's catch an Air taxi, it's the fastest way to the Council.."

As the foursome prepare to board a Taxi, Laser bolts tear through the cab, blowing it to smithereens. Lightsabers blaze to life immediately, as 8 Hover cannons descend on the platform.

Obi-Wan13: "Protect the Data disk! Don't let them get it!"

Dissectional proceeds to distract the cannons while the other three bolt for the nearest transport barge.

Once Inside the nearest building, the three ponder Dissectional's condition, as well as their own predicament.

Starblazer: "Should we wait for him?"

Tyrion: "We don't have time! He can take care of himself, I hope. Let's make our way to the Council Chambers!"

Obi-Wan13: "Yes, but how?"

Starblazer: "Wait! this is the Coruscant City Civic Center! We can ask a Resource Droid or something!"

Tyrion: "Ahem, we don't have time! we will just have to steal a ride or something!"

Obi-Wan13: "Well, No time to decide that now! We'll have to think on our feet, come on!"

As they make their way through the halls, They run into a group of 12 assassins, armed to the teeth.

To Be Continued...

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 05:54 PM
Good introduction Dissectional:D Obi-wan13 should carry on with that story, if anyone...

I shall now continue the events on the planet with the Academy personel...so bare with me I will be a little while:)

obi
07-23-2002, 05:56 PM
Then Obi-wan got the courage to ask the very lovely female assasin on a date.

Obi-wan: "How 'bout friday?"

Female assasin: "I'm busy Friday. How bout now?"

Obi-wan: "Sure, whatever......"

Then, 9 months later, Luke and Leia where born.

*Everyone just assumed their father was Annie, and their mother was Padm'e, they are wrong I tell you! WRONG!*

:lol:

I am at a writers block right now, so pretend my post didn't exist for the moment, and I'll continue the story later. :)

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 06:07 PM
i could try to start it if thats ok

Dissectional
07-23-2002, 06:15 PM
well dark is making a story, i just did one (my fingers are still sore):D and obi has writer's block. go ahead and continue off dark's when he's done. I have a feeling that his is gonna be decent. and obi's continuing mine.

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 06:21 PM
Originally posted by Dissectional
well dark is making a story, i just did one (my fingers are still sore):D and obi has writer's block. go ahead and continue off dark's when he's done. I have a feeling that his is gonna be decent. and obi's continuing mine.
ok sounds good

Darklighter
07-23-2002, 06:52 PM
This is just a short introduction to the new Academy. People can feel free to add more to it in their stories.


It had been nearly a year since the incident. Since Divine Spirit had driven the Academy students and Masters out of their home. He had been a student once, but his link to the darkside would not be suppressed. Divine was now Emperor of an enourmous military force, consisting of officers, clonetroopers and the dreaded Dark Jedi and Sith, trained under his forceful guidance in his Sith Academy.

Darklighter awoke suddenly. The sun shone brightly now through the large pane windows which spread about one wall of his quarters. The Admiral raised into the early morning light, changing into his official uniform as he walked out and descended the stairs down into the lower regions of the building.

Thedonias was a more desert-like planet than the previous one they had inhabited. It had less vegitation, the landscape rocky, a yellow and sandy wilderness littered with a few forestry patches. It was however very secluded, far out of the Emperor's reach. They had come along way from their home.

"How are the repairs coming along" Darklighter asked Darth Knight, as he entered the hanger bay down the steep metal steps.

"Very good Admiral" Darth Knight replied, as he slid out from under one of the battered speeders. "They gave us quite a shock, huh Sir?" Darklighter nodded, a smile glimmered on his pale young face. Their run-ins with bounty hunters had been endless since their dramatic escape a year back. Only hours before, a pair of hunters aboard armed air crafts had ambushed Ice Squadron on a routine scout mission. Little did they know taking on the fully piloted famous Ice Squadron was a bad idea.

"You sure showed them Knight" they smiled and laughed as he proceeded to the outside of the hanger bay. The Academy had been craftilly built into the side of a huge hilly mountain, covered in sand. The building delved right into the centre of it, and outside a recangular building stretched out a few hundred metres. Below it was a landing platform and the entrance to the hanger, from where Ice and Death Squadron exited and entered the Academy building. It was smaller than the last, but large enough.

A turbo lift ran right through the centre of the mountainous hill upwards, and took you to a large flat area on the top of the mountain. It was here that the council would meet, the circle of seats covered by a large metal structure above.

The betrayal of Reb had been a devastating blow to the Academy's spirit, not so much after a year of sorting things out. If it could happen to Reb, it could happen to any of them, Darklighter had thought painfully. Every moment the students were at danger of power of the Sith.

The supposed death of AB_Legion at the attack sent shockwaves through the Academy. He was one of Darklighter's closest friens, one of the most powerful Jedi in he Academy. Legion never made it onboard a craft, and would have been executed if found by the enemy. It had been a terrible time for them all.

Darklighter walked out onto the landing platform. The sun was high now and burning bright. Pilots and mechanics were running to and fro inside the hanger, sparks from weilds flying, and the teachers instructing padawans on the grassy verges. It is much like before, he thought.

"Sir!" a voice shreiked behind him, as Greedo ran to him. "Admiral...Master Kenobi and the Jedi have not reached the Council on Corruscant. Something terrible has happened!"

The mood changed suddenly. This is not good one bit, he said to himself. Darklighter would have to contact the council himself to solve this matter.

Where could he be? he said again, as Darklighter walked back o his quarters.

To be continued...




As for Legion's death, I will resolve that in the next post;) Have no fear, everything will turn out well...

Agen
07-23-2002, 08:12 PM
Obi wan, Tyrion and Terminator stepped back slowly, all of them knew what they had to do, with a quick glance at each other they swiftly split up, it was 3 assassins to every jedi and 3 freelancing all dressed quite equally. Obi wan jumped over a whinch type rope thing that ahd been shot by a young man and pulled him to him and used him as a guard to the laser bolts, he came out quickly mutilated the msot agressive one with his saber and done the butterfly to kick the other one to knock him ferosciously to the ground. The other 2 weren't doing quite so well with tyrion retreating from the 3, 2 of them woman, it didn't take long for obi-wan to think of force psuhing one of them to give tyrion an advantage but before he could an assassin got on his back and strangled him. Obi wan struggled for breath and backstabbed the assassin. Agen by this time had worked his 3 down to 1 and anger was growing in him with a heavy slash he chopped off an asassin's head and soem white robes fell to the ground with blood smeared on them. Tyrion had taken out his 3 by now and the jedi outnumbered the assasins. They got together and killed the remaining ones.

The 3 jedi looked for dissectional who had jsut dissapeared, by this time they were all worried and didn't know at all what happened to them as the darkside had clouded it.

The jedi were extremely worried and hijacked an air taxi "sorry about that with a ;) " blurted tyrion and Agen took the drivers seat. He speeded at an unhealthy speed through all the ships and and eventually spotted a vehicle speeding underneath them with what lookedl iek dissectional in it gagged and tied up with somesort of weird roep. 2 Bounty hunters were in it and noticed them, they went throguh some tunnels and made it like joy riding through the air of corouscant.

EDIT: As you can see i edited Reb to make him me since he wants to be a bad guy.

Dissectional
07-23-2002, 08:26 PM
dammit lol, i got caught by bounty hunters!

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 08:41 PM
white dragon was in deep meditation concentrateing on where obi-wan and the others could be. when darklighter came to him with the news he immediatly went to find them through the force. the force flowed through him as he tryed to locate his master. dragon suddenly awoke with a start. he knew where they were and he sensed great danger for them. dragon immediately grabed his lightsaber and went to look for his padawan. he found s0ulblihtr in the training room "come on we are leaveing" " where are we going" to corouscant to find obi-wan." dragon dident even talk to darklighter before he took a ship and sped of towards corouscant.

Agen
07-23-2002, 08:57 PM
Heh, i think i'm dead i'm no where to be seen :p :D

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
Heh, i think i'm dead i'm no where to be seen :p :D
ok whatever you say

some one needs to write how i come in to help the guys out because i have no clue. your not going to leave me out of the fight this time :D

greedo626
07-23-2002, 09:11 PM
whoa guys. I don't read long posts (sorry, I'm just too lay-z). but get to the part where I start kicking a$$:D

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 09:23 PM
Originally posted by greedo626
whoa guys. I don't read long posts (sorry, I'm just too lay-z). but get to the part where I start kicking a$$:D
ill start kicking ass soon

Reb Starblazer
07-23-2002, 11:06 PM
Well, I've got the story compiled, I'd just like Obi's and Divine's email. What format do you guys want this in. Word, wordpad, plain old notepad, what? Also, you guys may want to check out my second last post in the first thread. I think you may have to edit me out of your stories so far. Just read it and you'll see why.
I think I'll try and post a part sometime later, that should help clear some of the impending confusion up.

BTW, a year? That's a frickin' long time man.

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 11:10 PM
white dragon and s0ulblihtr landed their ship on the lower levels. white dragon reached out through the force to locate his fellow jedi. he felt one near by. they ran towards it. both felt rather than heard rappid fire comeing from behind them, they ignited their light sabers. white dragon let instinct take over, both white blades wizzed accross the air deflecting shot after shot, he saw his enemy it was a hover cannon it flew past him but s0ulblihtr destroyed it before it went past. they both ran towards the strongest appirition of the force they could feel it was probly several jedi together. several more hover cannons came out of nowhere and fired at them. s0ulblihtr dodged and destroyed two of them, dragon threw his saber at the others and destroyed them. several bounty hunters came out of buildings, one said "hey you there". dragon used the force and riped a piece of metal out of the building next to him and threw it at the one who spoke. "i am so sick of hearing that" dragon said. :p

Yom
07-23-2002, 11:17 PM
so yom will never appear in this at all, well i see how it is *sinf sinf* well i gess i will go to my box then and cry *walks away*

whitedragon
07-23-2002, 11:23 PM
Originally posted by Yom
so yom will never appear in this at all, well i see how it is *sinf sinf* well i gess i will go to my box then and cry *walks away*
well yom you can write a story of your own like i did

Yom
07-24-2002, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by whitedragon

well yom you can write a story of your own like i did

why do that in the summer i do it in 3 weeks

obi
07-24-2002, 12:07 AM
Originally posted by Yom


why do that in the summer i do it in 3 weeks

Yom, you want to know why you aren't in any of this? Here's the answer:



BECAUSE YOU ARE THE FRAKIN CHEF!

:D

Hey, you wanted to be the chef, so don't go blaming me. :)

BTW Reb, My email address is cpmjdavis@juno.com

Yom
07-24-2002, 12:11 AM
Originally posted by obi-wan13


Yom, you want to know why you aren't in any of this? Here's the answer:



BECAUSE YOU ARE THE FRAKIN CHEF!

:D

Hey, you wanted to be the chef, so don't go blaming me. :)

BTW Reb, My email address is cpmjdavis@juno.com

well i can take that i guss u guys will never eat in this story then oh i will were ever u need me *walks back in to the box and slams the door*

obi
07-24-2002, 12:17 AM
Originally posted by Yom


well i can take that i guss u guys will never eat in this story then oh i will were ever u need me *walks back in to the box and slams the door*

I didn't say don't post your story, feel free to. I was joking, come on now........

Darth Talliusc
07-24-2002, 12:23 AM
wow, i loved the shocker in your post on ep1 Reb, hehe excellent, now you are my sith brethren... so which light jedi do we kill first? j/k well since you're the one compiling the story, if you could just edit out the final part of my last story post (where i come out of hyperspace and sense that something is wrong) and add in that something called Talliusc to the planet? i figure thats a good time for me to meet you for the second time, oh and as for our new alliance i have some spiffy ideas that you may like, ill PM them to you later tonight.

Yom
07-24-2002, 12:23 AM
i will wright one on sunday to were i save the day, cuz i am tierd now and i will only be one for a short wihle tommorw.

Reb Starblazer
07-24-2002, 01:51 AM
It had been a year since the evacuation of the Jedi academy. It had been a year since he had changed allegiances, a year since he had ceased to be Reb Starblazer, and had become Darth Malice. A long year full of “failed” attempts by him to find the secret location of the new Academy, and a year of punishments by his master for his “failures”. He was actually quite surprised he had lived this long. Only he truly knew why he failed on those attempts, but that was a secret he was keeping to himself. For now, he was content to stare out the transparasteel window on the bridge of his own Star Destroyer, the Renegade. The Emperor was a cruel master, but he could also be quite generous. When he felt like it.

“My Lord. The assassins you dispatched have arrived at Coruscant and should be engaging the Jedi now.” Said Admiral Klieg

“Excellent. Good work Admiral. I’ll be in my chambers. Please don’t disturb me before nineteen hundred.” Malice said as he walked off the bridge. He stepped into the turbolift and stated the deck he was going to. Once he reached the deck, he got out and began again. Officers and Clonetroopers alike stepped aside and saluted as he passed. He just ignored them and kept on walking.

The door to his chambers opened as he stepped in front of it, and closed just as quickly once he was inside. He pressed a button, locking it behind him. He stared around his living chambers, which were quite barren. He could easily have as extravagent a room as any world leader, yet he prefered something more simple.He had a small bed, a mat for practicing his Lightsabre skills and Teras Kasi, as well as a Holo-projector which he used to stay in contact with the Emperor and the other Sith Lords.

He removed his cloak, and sat cross-legged on the mat, attempting to meditate. He needed to relax, focus. The assassins would fail, they would be no match for the Jedi. He knew that before he sent them out. He fully expected to receive another “punishment” from the Emperor next time they met in person, but he was willing to accept it. He delved deeper and deeper into the Force, stretching out with it, searching for wisdom, searching for anything.

Then she appeared before him. Just like always, just like every time he tried to mediate. Just like every time he tried to sleep. She seemed to be calling him, calling him to her. But he could not go. He could not let her see what he had become… again. They had both agreed it was best for him to leave, to seek council with Obi-Wan, to try to learn to tame the beast within him. That, was two years ago. He had not seen nor heard from her since. Perhaps it was for the better, that she not see him as he was now. He always wondered how he was doing though. Was she happy? Was she healthy? Was she still alive...? He didn't know, what had became of her, and if she was living a fine life, or if she was living on the streets.

But now, he could give her anything, anything she desired. Being a Sith Lord had its perks after all. He could easily give her a large house on any planet she desired. Her own home, their home. “No. What am I thinking? That’s the Emperor’s influence on me, nothing more. She’d want nothing to do with me now. I don’t deserve her love anymore, not after this. Not after what I’ve done, what I’ve become.” Lord Malice thought to himself.

“Lord Malice. There is an incoming transmission…” Admiral Klieg’s voice said over the Comm.

“I told you I didn’t want to be disturbed until nineteen hundred hours Admiral.” Malice interrupted.

“Yes my Lord. But this is a transmission from the Emperor, so I figured that it might be…”

“Very well Admiral. Patch it through.” Malice interrupted again. Malice got up and walked over to the Holo-projector, and bent to one knee. A very large holo-image of the Emperor’s face appeared over him.

“How goes the progress with the Jedi, Lord Malice?” the Emperor’s voice boomed through the room.

“I have dispatched twelve assassins to Coruscant. How is it that you knew they would attempt to go there? Have you learned of the location of their Academy?” replied Malice.

“Patience, you must have patience. All will be revealed in time. As for my knowledge of their attempt to contact the council, I have my ways, and my sources. Obi-Wan and his pitiful Jedi have avoided us long enough. ” The Emperor’s image faded away into nothing, and Darth Malice was left to contemplate these new events, alone, in a barren room.


Well, there you have it. The first post from the other side in the Episode 2 thread. This is a bit of an explanation as to why I joined with the Sith, what Malice has been haunted with since he turned, and I'm also trying to help push forward the plot a bit. I don't believe there will be many posts here for a while, as we've just finished the first episode, and most of us, me included, are suffering from writer's block. I may come back and try to add to this if I think of anything.

Shadow Angel
07-24-2002, 03:01 AM
Hey, since my posts from Episode I were all out of order and probably didn't get read, I'll quote my reply on the Episode I thread here. Since this is mostly about me and doesn't involve other characters and current events, I think it's still useable, for the most part. Especially my Sith comrades, you should read this.

Man, this sucks. My Net's been out for a few days, and the two posts I did make were placed out of order, and were either ignored, or they sucked. To whoever's compiling, since no one used mine, you don't have to put it in, but it got out of order. My first came after this post:

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Originally posted by Darklighter
"It was foolish of you to come here, Darklighter" as he turned around slowly, the figure was in full view, standing at the entrane through which he had come. "You are only delaying your iminent death." It was Shadow Angel, Darth Dominance, Divine Spirit's sith lord companion. He was tall, his thick, long cloak pitch dark, his hood covering his face.

"You cannot win" he said in a low, foreboding voice that shattered the silence.

"We will see" came Darklighter's response. "You may have power, but you lack the spirit of a Jedi. You cannot foresee your victory while we are still alive, Shadow" his voice now deep, he was circling around shadow, his hand inches away from his saber hilt.

"You speak as if there is still hope left for your kind" he replied menacingly. "We will see if you are right, Admiral" he began to close in on Darklighter, they were both walking to confront each other. "You know you will not win this battle. The darkside is the only way out. Join us Tidus. You know it is the only option."

"The only option if you are weak enough to give in!" he shouted, as the tension mounted Shadow's face was grim and smirkless.

"Fool!!" he quickly drew his lightsaber. In a split second he leapt into the air towards Darklighter, his brandished red saber gleaming with malice. Darklighter was too quick. Before the saber could strike him, his orange-white saber was drawn to block the attack. They locked, Shadow's teeth gritted together, Darklighter's eyes glaring beneath his low brow. Shadow flung himself backwards to land on the ground a few metres away.

He ran at Tidus again, swiping to his left. He parried the attack, and ducked to avoid the next swipe across his head. Darklighter spun, circling in the air just in time to avoid Shadow's deadly upercut. He landed, and they faced each other again. Full of anger, Shadow ran at him, his blade high above his head, ready to strike. This he did not foresee. As he brought hi ssaber down as he ran, Darklighter dodged to the side. Everything moved in slow motion. Shadow ran passed and missed, and Darklighter brought his saber down upon his back.

With a cry he fell. "Curse you, and your Academy!" he yelped. The shuttle was just in time. It cruised overhead, guns ready, firing at Darklighter. he dodged them and dived behind the bunker out of view. Shadow crawled to his feet, and the shuttle ramp lowered.

"We will meet again!" He cried, as he climbed aboard the caft, injured and limping. Darklighter knew this was only the beginning. He would have to face him again, but not yet. Holstering his saber, he climbed aboard the speeder bike, and raced back to his comrades.


------------------------- And here's my first post.....

The Shadow Angel's shuttle quickly docked into his Super Star Destroyer in orbit around the planet. As the ramp lowered, the usual procedure of stormtroopers marching in formation around the craft took form, a bit hastily. Admiral Jericho, commander of the SSD Black Phoenix, rushed to greet the Dark Lord. To his shock, Shadow Angel's robes were tattered and torn, and he looked exhausted. As he limped out of the shuttle, Jericho said:

"L-L-Lord Dominance.... back so soon--"
"You may dispense with the pleasantries, Commander. My confrontation with Master Darklighter has turned with unexpected results. Now, if will excuse me, I will retreat to my quarters. I do not wish to be interrupted!"
And with that, Lord Dominance stomped off to his meditation chamber.

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Upon entering, Shadow immediately removed his damaged Sith robes, revealing his buff, built torso, marred only by the immense scar on his back. But most disturbing, there was no blood. In it's place, was a myriad of tristed wires and metal. His arms, from the elow to the fingers, were also metallic, polished in chrome. The Shadow Angel did indeed rise from the ashes.... as a cyborg!
No matter, thought the young Dark Lord. A mere lightsaber wound cannot stop me from my hatred, my quest for vengeance.

My thirst for blood.

<All in good time, my young apprentice.> The Dark Lord raised his head towards the ceiling. "Master?"
<Yes, it is I, Divine Spirit. I have had to retreat from the Jedi forces, but my plans have not yet failed. You will go to my secret cloning laboratories on [censored! I can't tell you! But for story purposes I will call it Volcanic Cloning Planet.] The coordinates will be beamed to you shortly. There, you are to perform an inspection and certify them as ready for battle. You will be most impressed, I assure you.>

"As you wish, my Master." And with that, Lord Dominance rose from his seat. The scar that was once on his back was no more. It had completely healed. He opened a compartment in the wall on his chamber (the closet) and changed.

The cocoon of the chamber opened. What emerged, was a figure of terror, yet also resembling an icon of ultimate coolness. Donned in a leather trenchcoat, the Dark Lord ran his metallic claw fingers through his long, electric blue hair. His equally shiny, metal boots boomed across the polished floor. He approached Admiral Jericho.

--------------- My second........


Space. The final frontier. A red planet, shimmering like a jewel, a deception of the fiery hell within. A black, silent ship jumped out of hyperspace in its orbit. The Sith Infiltrator, ferrying the Dark Lord, the Shadow Angel, sped towards a landing platform marked in the Emperor's special coordinates.

As the ship landed, a pair of blast doors in front of the platform opened, and two black-robed, hooded firgures emerged. The Dark Lord exited his craft, and one of the attendants spoke. "This way, my Lord. We have been expecting your arrival for a long time."

The three entered the facility, and the doors slammed shut behind them. Although he wasn't affected by it, Shadow could sense the searing heat inside. "Exactly why did you choose such a hot and uncomfortable planet as this to develop your weaponry here?"
"Simply because soldiers grow lazy in comfortable climate. They must learn to feel the heat of battle."

"Soldiers? I didn't come here to inspect another batch of stormtroopers--" the attendant quickly interrupted.
"Oh, our new clones are much more than mere stormtroopers, I can assure you." The three entered a turbolift. One attendant pushed a button, and they were off.

Shadow, not being one to ask a lot of questions, instead probed the attendant's mind through the Force. After a few moments, his eyes widened.

The turbolift stopped, and opened to reveal a catwalk reaching across the chasm of a volcano! Below were several platforms floating above the lava. On it, were thousands of hodded figures sparring against each other with double-bladed lightsabers.

Once again, the attendant spoke. "Many years ago, the great Darth Sidious built a clone army using a template of a bounty hunter. Although they made excellent soldiers, they still could not meet the Emperor's incrasing demands. We have remedied this problem by using the DNA of one of Sidious' strongest, most loyal apprentices, Khameir Sarin... but you might know him better as DARTH MAUL.

Indeed, my Master was wise to make this decision. "Before I make my final report, I would like to test out one of these clones personally." The attendant was a bit reluctant. "As you wish, my Lord, but I must warn you. You may not survive the test run. We've made certain enhance--"
"Just do it." And the attendant left Shadow at the catwalk.

Minutes later, the door at the other end opened to reveal a clone. The Maul clone removed his hood and cloak, then drew his double-bladed lightsaber and ignited each blade, one by one. Shadow ignited his own curved saber, it's purple blade, an untraditional color for both the Jedi and the Sith, glowing across his face. The clone immdeiately charged at Shadow and twirled his blade at him, but the Dark Lord easily blocked. The other side of the clone's staff immediately rushed to Shadow's face, but his keen sense of the Force acted as an alarm, aiding to block and parry each incoming strike. The sabers locked, and Shadow was surprised at the clone's strength as his blade kept coming closer to his face. However, the Dark Lord's mechanical strength in his arm kicked in and pushed the clone back off balance. A quick Force Pull brought him closer before Shadow brought his blade down on the clone's neck and decapitated him.

The attendant rushed back in. Shadow put away his saber, turned to face him, and said, "39 seconds. Most impressive. The Jedi will be overwhelmed by this elite fighting force. How many of these soldiers are prepared?"
"Two million, sir." Shadow grinned.

"Excellent. I want them sent to the Jedi Academy battleground at 0600 Coruscant time. Meanwhile, I have a personal agenda to follow. There will be no one to stop us this time!"

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And that's all. Since I made an entire army of Darth Maul clones, maybe that was a little over the top? I dunno. Maybe you guys could use the general idea in the next episode (I haven't read it yet.)



There ya go. Feedback would be nice.

Darklighter
07-24-2002, 07:25 AM
That was very good Shadow, and welcome back!:) The whole layout of the post was a litle confusing (lol) but thats fine. The Darth Maul clone thing is a great idea. Maybe not two milllion...a little over the top?:( You could edit it down to a much smaller number that would suffice, if its not too much trouble.

However, good news for you, I have just had a great idea of how I can incorporate your story into Episode 2. You guys, we wnat to start this off kinda slow right now - no really really big things happening just yet please - I want this to last a little longer than the first:)

My first post was a little introduction to the Academy, not very exciting. My next one is gonna be a little more action packed:D Bare with me please, for I am writing now......




edit - I have just edited my last post to incorporate Reb's betrayal story (how dare you turn against us Reb;) lol). Hope thats okay, just so there is a little continuity. Anyway, back to the story.....


edit edit - I have put a little aboot another character, namely Legion, in my last post so there will be some link with my next story. Anway, back to writing again...

Darklighter
07-24-2002, 08:25 AM
This is also a very long post. It gets good, so do not give up on it too soon please:(


Whiedragon had left in a hurry. The whereabouts of Obi-wan had been revealved. He was on Corruscant, that much was certain. At least he has made it, Darklighter thought to himself. The sun was now going down, and teachers were finishing their sparring matches and lessons with their students. The dark was coming fast, and Darklighter walked quickly through the hanger bay towards the turbo lift. he needed to gain focus on the sitiuation, retrieve hope of wisdom from their actions.

"Report Sir!" KordKelly's voice came from behind him, and Darklighter turned around reluctantly. He knew what he was going to say. "Still no word of Obi-wan's presence." Darklighter's head fell, and he stared into space. "However" Kord continued, "Whitedragon has landed on Corruscant, and has begun his search."

"Very good" his tone was sarcastic, and he glared at Kelly for a few seconds before turning around again.

"Very good Ensign. Dismissed" Darklighter answered as Kelly scuttled away to the hanger doors. This was an unfortunate business, his Master nowhere to be seen and he felt a disturbance in the force. He needed guidance.

Darklighter proceeded once again towards th turbo lift. Its shape was cylindrical, made of glass. He entered and the lift projected towards the top of the sandy mountain. It grinded to a halt, and he stepped out onto the platform. The heat from the sun was pulsing now more than ever. It was hot and humid, even at this time of the day. The seats for the Jedi council were set around in a circle, for the elite members of the Academy. His seat was next to Obi-wan's.

Outside of the ring of seats were meditation platforms, and he sat cross-legged on one. His eyes were closed, and he was soon in deep concentration, peering into the very being of the force. It flowed through him, a warm sensation unlike any other. His thoughts began to speak to them.

"Tell me what I must do..." his mind echoed the words, and soon it answered him.

"You will go to the moon of Oradian. An old friend will be waiting..." and wit that, the vision ended. Before it did however, Darklighter saw a hooded man, cloaked, his face covered.

"What could it mean?" he asked himself, as he preoceeded back to the docking bay. He would have to leave tonight. There was no reason to wait on these matters for long. From the turbo lift, he placed rugged old garments over his uniform, and jumped onto a speeder. He headed for the nearest space port, the city of Mas Eilsa. Sneaking aboard a public transport to the moon was the only hope now. He had to be discreet, for the Jedi would not be safe to reveal themselves now.

He arrived at the port just before dark. The ship was not large, only a small shuttle, large enough to carry a hundred passenger refuges. He climbed on board, and it took off with a shudder, and slowly proceeded into orbit.

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The moon Oradian was only a few light years away. It was a smugglers moon, full of cities littered with sky-high scapers. The dealers would look for business in the many bars and night-clubs. The Jedi were not liked now, so Darklighter had to keep his identity anonymous.

As soon as he stepped off the passenger ship, he felt it. He had an overwhelming sense of deja vu, the feeling in the force was oddly familiar. It drew him immediately towards a bar, but as he walked towards it, the signs in multicolour lights, a man stopped by him and grabbed his arm.

"Give me all of your money!" he yelled in a forced whisper. Darklighter dealt with this kind of people all of the time. He turned to face him and waved his hand.

"You don't want my money. You should make some for yourself" his voice was clam and soothing. A blank look came over the man's face.

"I am sorry Sir" he said now apologetically, " I will not bother you again" and with that he walked off, and Darklighter slowly continued towards the bar. As he walked inside, he could see it was dark, music was playing, smoke was everywhere. He spotted female alien dancers pacing around the area, and Darklighter payed no notice to the distractions and walked up to the bar.

"Correlian ale...in a clean glass" the bartender glared at him, and turned to get his drink, slamming it down on the table. Darklighter payed no attention, and sat drinking, unnoticably deeply mediating. Then he felt it. Time semed to slow down. He could feel it in the force again. That presence, he said, I know it!. He could see the figure again in the back of his mind. He could see him approaching from behind him. At the right moment, Darklighter unsheathed his lightsaber and swung it around. The figure behind him ducked beneath the saber's blow, and they stood staring at each other. Slowly but surely, the man lifted the hood off his face.

"Good to see you again...old friend." AB_legion stood before him.


To be continued...


Hope you guys liked it. If I'm going to be in anyone's stories, just remember I am gone for now. I will finish my little story in a while.

Divine Spirit
07-24-2002, 09:19 AM
Just letting you know that im going on holiday tomorrow so i wont be logging in until Monday 5th of August. This means i wont be able to participate in this thread until that date :(

Feel free to do whatever you like with my characters, as long as its not too stupid. And obi-wan13, you can go ahead with the special storyline if you want (the one i mentioned in a pm) ;)

Reb Starblazer
07-24-2002, 10:54 AM
Sorry you have to go Divine. Maybe the Dark Emperor(heh, your using the name I called you) won't be a major player in this, kinda like in ESB. You see him, but he doesn't really do much;) Special storyline eh? Sounds interesting. I've got a few plans up my sleeve as well. It's cool that you included me in your post Darklighter, just remember that it wasn't exactly hard for me to turn. I was over halfway there already, I was always a Dark Sider. As for why... I had only one chance left to join them, so I took it while I could. It was our only chance. I've got little hints in my post about my intentions and how I've been "furthering"(maybe furthering isn't the right word:D) the Emperor's search for you. I'm probably just gonna develop the search for the Jedi in my posts, and maybe a few other things,but not much action wise. Maybe this one should have little bits of action, spread along different people and planets, and lead up to one grand finale. Little bits of action, plenty of story:D

Agen
07-24-2002, 12:56 PM
I think i'll replace reb with me then since he decided to fall to the darkside :D Eventually a reason for my being.

Darth Talliusc
07-24-2002, 01:10 PM
my master is gone *sniff *sniff, now i get to sit in the BIG CHAIR!!! oh wait, they're gonna let shadow have it, nuts.
ive written up a story or four to play in with this new episode, but i need Reb's input first, CHECK YOU PM PLEASE! whatever happens ill post my next installment right here so stay tuned

whitedragon
07-24-2002, 01:27 PM
every tom, dick and harry with a blaster came out of every building and alley near the two jedi. the emperor put quite a bounty on their heads, 100,000,000 for each jedi they brought in. s0ulblihtr and white dragon twirled their lightsabers around deflecting shot after shot of blaster fire. "we dont have time for this" s0ulblihtr said. their was a brief pause from the bounty hunters and then they all ran down the street after somethin invisable. "nice illusion my young padawan" dragon said. "thank you master but where do we go from here". "up". dragon walked into an alley, he jumped up kicked off one wall then kicked off the oppisite one and repeated this untill he was at the top, his padawan did the same. they were right below rush hour traffic, speeders flew just afew yards above their heads. "what now" s0ulblihtr said. "we stick out our thumbs" dragon said. draogon jumped into the air and landed on a speeder. two rodians looked up at him and started yelling. dragon jump to the speeder in front of him being careful to time his jump, one slip and it was a long way to the bottom. he jumped to the next one and almost dident make it because he heard honking behind him. it was obi-wan and tyrion "hop in" obi-wan said. dragon opened the door and climbed in. "hello master" s0ulblihtr was sitting right next to him. obi-wan turned around "bounty hunters have dissectional, hes right below us". tyrion pitched the speeder down to where dissectional was and both speeders flew off into the lower levels.

Darklighter
07-24-2002, 01:28 PM
Guys, if you can, be good enough to try and stick to the previous stories...no pressure, it would just be nice to have some continuity that worked, ya know?:) Plus, if you are going to post a story, give us a warning first so people can wait.

P.S. Thanks Reb for the first Episode:) and yeah, i do have word:D lol

Thanks again!


edit - nice story there Dragon, good work...:thmbup1:

Shadow Angel
07-24-2002, 06:43 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
Guys, if you can, be good enough to try and stick to the previous stories...no pressure, it would just be nice to have some continuity that worked, ya know?


Haha, reminds me of some EU continuity. (No offense, but it's true! A lot of it doesn't connect.)

Agen
07-24-2002, 07:21 PM
Yeh, please keep it connected, we want this to be as good as episode 1.

whitedragon
07-24-2002, 08:12 PM
did i not connect something:confused:

Darklighter
07-24-2002, 09:27 PM
No, you did nothing wrong. I wrote my post just as you were wriing your story, so mine afterwards looked like I was commenting on yours...but I wasn't, thats whu i edited my post quite to say you'd done a good job...just a minor misunderstanding:)

whitedragon
07-24-2002, 09:29 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
No, you did nothing wrong. I wrote my post just as you were wriing your story, so mine afterwards looked like I was commenting on yours...but I wasn't, thats whu i edited my post quite to say you'd done a good job...just a minor misunderstanding:)
ok and thanks

Darklighter
07-25-2002, 03:14 PM
Does anyone want to carry on with this who hasn't written for a while? It would be cool just to keep it going for ages like the last:) ...anyone...:( ...hello?

Darklighter
07-25-2002, 10:06 PM
*bump*

Just keeping this up there on the page. Isn't anybody from the Academy going to write anything more? I will, but I wrote last. I'll leave t for a bit to see:(

Dath Maximus
07-25-2002, 10:44 PM
Im back!!!

well it looks like youve started again

this time someone include me.

i tried last time but i got killed or something.

frozen perhaps.

ohh well

Reb Starblazer
07-26-2002, 12:38 AM
I'd post something, but I'm gonna wait for another Sith, like Shadow Angel or Darth Talliusc, etc post, because I was the last Dark one to post on here. I don't want to tell the entire story from the perspective of the dark side(hmm, or do I...:D)

Shadow Angel
07-26-2002, 02:22 AM
Like Reb, I also have a wife in my past. I'm debating on wether to write it here or in the "A long time ago..." thread. I've developed a fairly good past for my character. Hmm........

Darklighter
07-26-2002, 09:05 AM
Any other Sith guys want to write a new story for Ep2? ou can Shadow if ya want...there's Talliusc and Kaan as well and Reb...Divine has left for a while though, so anyone please geel free to write:)

Darth Talliusc
07-26-2002, 02:47 PM
well ya know id love to post another part of my story, but last night when i tried that something odd happened, i was writing up a storm and very tired. after a couple of paragraphs i noticed that the letters had become invisible. i was writing and the little black line that shows you where you are on the reply was moving but no message was coming up, i tried everything but it was all invisible. well anywho im gonna try again today, ill edit this post and add it here.

Dissectional
07-27-2002, 12:52 PM
Hey, I'm back from my 3 day hiatus, thank's to my bro hogging my computer due to his counterstrike addiction (from 10 am till 2 am).
I'm impressed with the way ep2 is going. Can someone enlighten us on my situation (and perhaps include a drmatic lightsaber-swinging badass escape from 15 bounty hunters)? Or I can meet up with one of the Sith Academy's Knights, where my fellow jedi help me out or something. :D

Agen
07-27-2002, 01:10 PM
long term writers block here :o

Darklighter
07-27-2002, 01:24 PM
Welcome back Dissectional:D

Basically, the Jedi have been knocked out of the Academy by the Emperor and Reb joined the Sith. All the good guys have rebuilt a new Academy on a desert-like planet. Obi-wan has been sent to Corruscant with 'important information', and have been ambushed by bounty hunters. Whitedragon left to help them and they are now together as a group.

Thats about it:)

Dath Maximus
07-27-2002, 01:27 PM
hey dont forget i was captured more or less *went to the emperor* by the emperor and im kinda like vader with the machanical parts now. (happened in the first war)

so now im gonna be around all i ask is i fight obi.

Dissectional
07-27-2002, 01:55 PM
*gasp* My master, turn to the dark side? NOOOOOOOO!!!! :eek:

Oh well, time for a new teacher, I guess. Or I could have grown up fast and am now a jedi, that is a long ways away from being able to teach. :D

Maybe we can have a dramatic fight scene between former padawan and former master. HINT HINT!

I just wrote a long ass story on my beginnings, so I have writer's block for now. :dozey:

Dath Maximus
07-27-2002, 02:06 PM
or dissectional
a battle that results in you bringing me back. hint hint

a true test for ones padawan.

Dissectional
07-27-2002, 02:41 PM
OOO good idea master maximus! I'm gonna have to write this one... i enjoy writing about saber battles, especially the short stories of Me vs. Tyrion's psycho Lexx voodoo dolls.

Those bastards are still out to get me... *hears psycho voodoo doll chitter chatter*

NOOO...

Edit- we still have to figure out what happens to me when Obi-wan and the crew come to rescue me after my hideous predicament.

Dath Maximus
07-27-2002, 02:46 PM
sounds good.

remeber when the fight is written i use two lightsabers, both blue

Dissectional
07-27-2002, 02:50 PM
Two blue sabers, got it.

This story is gonna be interesting when i get time to write it. But soon i must depart to have luch with my dying grandpa, and go see GOLDMEMBER! YEAH BABY YEAH!

*puts on crushed velvet suit and male symbol necklace* GROOVY BABY!

Darklighter
07-28-2002, 12:40 PM
The story sounds like its coming along nicely. Everyone's stories are tieing in with others, its really cool. We're getting like a meshwork of plots and things - very nice, wel done:) :thumbsup:

Remember that Episode 2 is still going on here. I will write another part a little later. Just letting you know people are free to write more here if they wish:)

Darth Talliusc
07-29-2002, 12:30 PM
alright, im ready to write, i was thinking i might add on to the bounty hunter on coruscant stuff that was written here earlier, seems that nobody has posted a story part in a while. im a little confused however as to how many jedi are in the battle with the bounty hunters together. if someone could just PM me or leave a post here telling me which jedi are around then i can edit this msg and get rid of the stuff thats written here.

Dath Maximus
07-29-2002, 12:33 PM
ok im not sure about the others but ive become one of the sith with mechanical parts like vader. but the others dont know this. and i will eventually go back to the good.

id write but im working on the prequal thread.

Darklighter
07-29-2002, 10:35 PM
I still need to write my next part. I will do it in a minute - my writer's block is over.
And btw:

Come on guys!:) I thought we were going to keep this going:(

To prove we are I am writing my next part right now...

Reb Starblazer
07-29-2002, 11:23 PM
I have ideas, but it would pretty much require me to be very selfish and write the whole sith side of the story myself. Not to mention that I don't really find the time.
Darn life, interfering with my forum time...

Darklighter
07-30-2002, 12:09 AM
LOL, actually I'm not going to write anything now. Its 4am and I am too tired, but I will tomorrow:)

Darth Talliusc
07-30-2002, 12:52 AM
alright then here goes. pardon my use of jedi's names but i was hoping to continue with the story of obi-wan, dissectional, tyrion, agen_terminator whitedragon and s0ulblihtr. if you wish part of this post changed or deleted please msg me about it.




coruscant:

Darth Talliusc sat alone in his chambers, it was dark in there and the temperature was colder then most humanoid species could stand. Talliusc had taken to meditating alot more often these days, ever since Reb had joined the ranks of the sith Talliusc had been acting differently. Talliusc cared greatly for his master and fellow sith brethren, he would gladly go to rescue any of them if they needed it of him, but Reb was different. for the first time in all of Talliuscs life he had a friend, a single person who did not irritate, confuse or punish Talliusc excessively. Reb was trustworthy, a trait found rarely in the sith. but Talliusc had not seen Reb in some time, the dark emperor had been sending Reb on missions with elements of the 9th fleet recently.
Reb's absence had given Talliusc the time to fortify Coruscant. Much of the past month had been spent training bounty hunters to form an elite counter-insurgence division. combined with Reb's personal assassination division Coruscant would be an impregnable fortress.

and now they would be put to the test. BEEP-BOOP. a message had come in to Talliuscs private monitor, Talliusc read it through twice and sounded the alert. within minutes the best bounty hunters of the galaxy were on their way to confront the jedi that had somehow penetrated the outer security rings of coruscant.

Talliusc robed and gathered his weapons and private speeder, after searching with the force he found a group of four jedi on one of coruscants many skyscrapers. he relayed the coordinates to the assassins Reb had sent. keying in commands on his speeders control board he sent 8 hovercannons to test the jedi's mettle.
one of the jedi charged the cannons while the other three escaped "interesting, this jedi gives willingly his life for his friends" pulling his speeder into a steep drop Talliusc ordered the 6 nearest bounty hunters to help the hovercannons.
Dissectional fought well but was outmatched by the hovercannons and bounty hunters, he took off the heads of four bounty hunters and eliminated all of the hovercannons before Talliusc dropped to the platform. "you cant win jedi, surrender your lightsaber and you may yet live"
"never, foul sithlord, i will not be a hostage to be bartered!" said dissectional injecting as much steel into his words as his throat would allow.
"if thats the way you want it" with a flick of his wrist Talliusc signaled the remaining bounty hunters to cirlce the jedi. and loosed his curve handled doublebladed saber.
"what the?" was all dissectional could manage to say as he looked on at the strange saber.
with perfect timing one bounty hunter chucked a detonation pack at dissectional while the other loosed a volley from his plasma cannon, Talliusc charged. Dissectional pushed the detonation pack back at its thrower with enough force to knock the bounty hunter over the edge of the building into the street far below, turning with his enhanced jedi reflexes he blocked the other hunters blasts and managed to deflect one into the throat of the bounty hunter. the bounty hunter fell backwards dead before he hit the ground. The fury of Talliuscs charge and the distraction of the bounty hunters made it difficult for dissectional to parry or block many of Talliuscs strikes, he settled on dodging as many as he could.
launching strike after strike on the skillful jedi Talliusc used as many dirty tricks as he could, using the force to tangle the circuits in dissectionals lightsaber, tripping him at the knees and throwing him into the wall. dissectional stooped down to the ground unconscious.
"he fought well, a pity it ended so quickly" thought Talliusc as he keyed in the coordinate on his wrist comm to bounty hunters across the plaza, they would come and pick up the jedi and restrain him. Talliusc had more jedi to hunt before the night was done. "Talliusc to ironclaw" said talliusc into his wrist mike. ironclaw was one of the more proficient assassins Reb had sent to Coruscant. "my lord we have a visual on two more jedi, separate from the other group" came back the reply. "you have leave to engage, neutralize them and then continue pursuit of the other jedi. make Reb proud" with that Talliusc switched off the comm, and revved his speeder. It would be interesting to see how Reb's assins did in comparison to Talliuscs bounty hunters.


well what do you think? sorry dissectional about your saber and all but i thought it added a nice touch. oh and you may want to edit your first post in this thread. change Reb's name to agen_terminator. as hes already included himself in that section of the story. i hope one of the light jedi on coruscant will further this story soon. keep this thread going.

edit: and Reb if you could please send me a copy of the episode one story. K_i_zilla@hotmail.com thanks.

Reb Starblazer
07-30-2002, 11:43 AM
Sure. I'm sending it now. There's just a few minor problems though with your story. Nothing wrong with the actual story part, just the continuity wise. Didn't Obi and the others go to Coruscant to the Jedi council? I don't think that there would be a Jedi council there if it was controlled by the Emperor. Possibly, it could be fitted into the story that Coruscant was taken very recently, but when they went to capture the Jedi council, they were gone into hiding. So Obi and the others are heading to the secret hiding base of the Jedi Council, trying to tell them something. Maybe I'll incorporate that into my next story. BTW, didn't I send the Assassin's after Obi and them? :D I like how in your story I've been "sent away" that kinda ties in with my stories and what I'm going to develop.

Darth Talliusc
07-30-2002, 11:59 AM
ah sorry bout that, ill edit my post right away and incorporate you into the bounty hunting stuff.... of course anybody who reads this wont understand what im talking about because it will already be edited hehe excellent. and yeah i dont think dissectional read the ep1 thread all the way through. thats gonna take some editing.... maybe we could change the planet? or at least change it from a mission to the council to something like an intelligence mission..... well at least he was caught for his story incontinuities =)

Darklighter
07-30-2002, 01:18 PM
Previously in my story...


That presence, he said, I know it!. He could see the figure again in the back of his mind. He could see him approaching from behind him. At the right moment, Darklighter unsheathed his lightsaber and swung it around. The figure behind him ducked beneath the saber's blow, and they stood staring at each other. Slowly but surely, the man lifted the hood off his face.

"Good to see you again...old friend." AB_legion stood before him.



They stared at each other. Their gazes peirced their minds and look into each others very soul. Darklighter stood, his lightsaber stretched out towards the face of AB_Leigion, both unmoving, completely still in deepest thought.

The whole of the bar had stopped what they were doing, and turned to face in awe. Some had run outside for fear of getting caught up in the trouble. The Jedi may have been disliked, but these people only feared the Sith more.

Darklighter then looked around at the customers and workers staring at them. He spoke loudly. Everyone heard him.

"Jedi business" he said, "go back to your drinks."

As they began to turn away, so did Legion, and he strolled out of the main door and turned left down an alley. Quickly Darklighter holstered his saber and proceeded to follow him. The night was cold and amp now, the neon lights of the signs and clubs were bright, but the alley he entered was dark and dank. He could hardly see Legion. He then raised his voice to the shadows.

"I thought you were dead" he shouted.

"I was dead" the voice responded as he stepped out of the darkness. "Dead enough to know what pain feels like. You have no idea what I've been through Darklighter" his voice was now coarse and rough, "This war has only just begun...a new threat has emerged. The Emperor is underseeing the development of clones. Clones of the most feared Sith that ever...Khameir Sarin"

Darklighter was so shocked, the truth hit him so hard he couldn't believe it, "Maul? No...it can't be..."

"It can" Legion butted in, "and it is. You needed to be told...you're Academy is in danger" Legion stepped closer, "They will find you m friend, and they will kill you."

"Not far from the truth!" a voice said from behind them. A figuer walked towards them, cloaked, his unusualy large saber hilt in his hand. The two Jedi suddenly realised what it was. The figure lifted back his hood to reveal his black and red tatooed face and horns above his forehead.

"Maul!" Darklighter screamed. The Jedi dropped their cloaks to the floor and unsheathed their sabers. They ignited and prepared fo battle.

The clone ignited the two ends of his saber before leaping high in the air to drop on their position. The Jedi were quick enough to roll to the side out of the way, before sumasulting free of his attack. The clone hit high and low, each Jedi blocking each end of the saber. He swung overhead and Darklighter knocked the saber to the side, and Legion brought his saber up to cut the hilt in half. In absolute rage, the clone swung hard at Legion, knocking him to the floor, just as Darklighter swiped his shoulder, cutting his flesh.

He yelped and clutching his wound began to run off. He hadn't run fifty feet when a shot was fired from above. It struck the clone on the back and he fell to the floor dead. Both Jedi looked up as stormtroop jumped from on top of the building.

"Thought you might need some help" he said.

"Looks like you were right Legion" Darklighter said, as Legion nodded in reply.

"Lets go!" stormtroop ordered, as they walked to the hanger bay a few hundred metres away to board the Academy shuttle craft.

Dath Maximus
07-30-2002, 01:36 PM
when i think it up ill post about how you guys find out whats happend to me.

but im gonna have to wait untill the story is halway through

pivital moment!!!

Reb Starblazer
07-30-2002, 01:55 PM
Well, maybe I'll include you in my next post Dath. I'll just pass by you or something like that. Not really say much about you, just that you're there with the Sith. Sound Good? I'll either edit and paste my next post here, or I'll just make another post.

Dath Maximus
07-30-2002, 02:00 PM
sounds good to me

Reb Starblazer
07-30-2002, 06:58 PM
The shuttle descended slowly towards the planet, as Malice saw the large Imperial Palace growing even larger as he approached. Despite being in the service of the Emperor for a year, this was the first time he had ever been here. The Emperor had called him here, as he had every other Sith Lord, for a meeting. He looked forward to speaking, and also sparring, with Talliusc again however, for he was the only one who had truly accepted him.

“Always an outcast” Malice thought to himself. As a child, he never had friends, he was half Human, half Zabrak, unwanted by both species. Then when his parents died and he was stranded on a unknown planet for 10 years, the closest thing he had to a friend, was the Holo-image of Exar Kun, in the Sith Holocron Malice had learned from. Once Darth Talon found him, he was treated more as a slave than an apprentice. Then, at the Jedi Academy, he never quite fit in either. A Sith, surrounded by Jedi, what could he expect. If it wasn’t for Obi-Wan’s secret help and training, he would have either left long ago, or never went at all. And now, he was amongst his “own kind”, but even here he was different…

The shuttle touched down on the ground, a bit rougher than Malice had expected.
“Stupid clones. They could have least made some special ones with a little bit of piloting skill.” He thought to himself. He then descended the ramp, and walked towards the Palace. Divine Spirit’s reach grew everyday, sector by sector, the galaxy was coming under Sith control. Even Coruscant had fallen, but the Jedi Council had escaped before they could be captured or eliminated. Malice was glad he wasn’t here at that time, the Emperor must have been furious. Every day the Emperor’s armies grew, the number of his minions increasing. “More like his slaves are increasing” Malice thought to himself.

The large doors opened to allow Lord Malice entrance to the Palace, and closed behind him. He walked through the halls, passing officers as he went. He almost bumped into two green, scantily clad, female Twi’lek dancers as they exited Darth Slayne’s, the newest Sith lord, chambers. They gave him a small smile, a bow, and stood aside. “Darth Slayne seems to be enjoying his new position of authority” Malice thought to himself.
He continued walking down the hall, passing an open door. He looked in to see Dath Maximus, lying on a hospital bed. Doctors were crowded around him, adjusting and refining his mechanical implants. This war had not been kind to him…

He finally reached the Emperors chambers, with two red clad Imperial Guards outside the door, wielding Force Pikes. Everyday the Empire grew more and more like that of the one of old. They admitted him, and he strode into the Emperors quarters. All the Sith lords were sitting around a large, cylindrical table. All except Darth Slayne and Darth Talliusc.

“Welcome Darth Malice.” Divine Spirit said to him. “It seems that everyone has now arrived, except for Darth Slayne. Darth Talliusc will not be joining us, as he is on Coruscant, finishing some important business.” Just then Darth Slayne strode into the room, and took his seat. “Well, then, we’re all here now. You have all been called here in order to prepare for the oncoming attack on the Jedi Academy. We now know that it is located on Thedonias. Our capital ships will surround the planet, making it impossible for them to escape this time. We will then send in Clonetroopers and ground vehicles to soften up their defenses Then we will send in our new ultimate weapon. Darth Dominance, if you would.”

Darth Dominance stood up, and made his way to a holo-projector. He then activated it. The image projected above the table showed rows upon rows of cloaked figures, all practicing with crimson double-bladed Lightsabres. “This, is our latest and greatest creation. These are all clones of the one time Sith Lord…” The image zoomed in on one of the figures, and a red face appeared.

“Darth Maul” Malice said in amazement. This looked very bad for the Jedi indeed.

“Yes. As I was saying, the Jedi will be powerless to stop this onslaught of the Dark Side, and will fall before us. “

“How many clones are there?” Asked Darth Slayne

“About two million.” Answered Shadow Angel. Malice fought every urge in his body, trying not to gasp. Two million! The Jedi would be crushed, there was no way they could fight off that many. Every effort he had made in the last year, every punishment he had endured for the sake of the Academy, wasted. For months he had known the Jedi Academy was on Thedonias, but had made every attempt to keep the location hidden from the rest of the Sith. Including sabotaging the crafts of bounty hunters that were heading to that area a short time ago. He had not heard back from them, so he could guess how it went.

“Most of the plans for the attack will be made later, but this is just the outline. You are all dismissed.” Said Divine Spirit, as he rose from his seat. That was when Malice noticed something. Something he should have noticed a long time ago. Or rather, something he should not be seeing now. Hanging around Divine Spirit’s neck, was a Sith Amulet. One of the Sith Amulets of power, made by ancient Sith magic, it would increase a users strength in the Force. Malice had thought he destroyed the last two, when he had defeated Darth Talon. Apparently, he was wrong.

This explained how Divine Spirit was so overwhelmingly powerful with the Force. This also changed everything, called for drastic measures. Malice rose from his seat and began walking out of the room, following the other Sith Lords. He knew what he had to do. Once he got back to the Renegade, he would take his private ship and go searching. He had to find the only thing more powerful than the Amulets of old. However, he didn’t know where to start looking, but worse, he didn’t know if he would survive using it. But, sacrifice’s must be made.

“Darth Dominance, may I speak with you a moment?” Divine Spirit said, as Shadow Angel stopped, and stepped aside, letting the other’s exit through the door.

“What is your bidding my master?” Asked Shadow Angel.

“Contact the Dark Jedi’s. Send out the best trained ones we have. Have them follow and ‘retrieve’ Darth Malice. I want him returned dead, or close to it.” Stated Divine Spirit coldly.

“But, why don’t we just destroy him now. I could do it. He wouldn’t stand a chance against all of us.” Shadow Angel finished.

“No, my young friend. I wish to have him followed. I want to know what he’s up to. Then, he will be destroyed. As for you and the other Lords, you have important work to do, and many plans to make”

“As you wish, my master” Replied Darth Dominance as he and the Emperor stood by the window, watching Darth Malice’s shuttle leave, rising towards space.

Dath Maximus
07-30-2002, 07:16 PM
The Large Door slide open, several doctors gasped as the extremely tall figure walked out. His heart now filled with rage and his mind with lies, Maximus had become a sith. Finding a new strength in the mechanical body he had been given after the sith apparently found him near death.

"I assure you Lord Maximus will be no threat to us," the emperor dryly spoke. "He beleives everything i have told him, he will kill obi wan13 and the others." Maximus now entered the room standing next to the emperor, his black cape drapeing to the floor. "As you can see he is also more formidalbe."

Darth Dominance gave maximus a look of suspicious jealousy. Touching the edge of his lightsaber Darth Bill spoke, "what are we to have him do?"
Clearing his throat Divine Spirit stated his plans. "Since he is a master jedi trained in the arts of the old, he shall hunt them down and get them when they are vulnerable. when they are alone."

to be continued....

whitedragon
07-30-2002, 07:38 PM
hi guys sorry that ive been away for awhile but ill continue

it was a dark and stormy nite...well it was mainly just dark because light dident come through to the lower levels of coruscant. tyrion piloted the speeder with ease through the traffic to get to disserectional. "get above them" obi-wan said. obi-wan activated his lightsaber and cut a hole in the roof then jumped out and landed on top of the other speeder. the bounty hunters looked up in surprise as he started cutting a hole in their speeder. the one not driveing shot holes in the roof. obi-wan almost fell off but white dragon jumped on the speeder as well to catch him. the speeder was going crazy, turning this way and that trying to nock the jedi off but the jedi held on for dear life. the speeder that tyrion was flying came in front and agenterminator started fireing a blaster at the bounty hunter that wasent driveing, and the one that was leveled off because he was so suprised. dragon pulled the dead bounty hunter out of the car, then he pulled the driver out and got into the speeder. dragon stared in shock at the gigantic freighter that was in front of him only afew yards away. "hang on obi-wan" dragon pulled back hard on the piloting stick and hoped that they would make it. they made it by an inch or so clearing the freighter, dragon leveled off and obi-wan crawled inside. "everythings an adventure with you" dragon said "why cant you go someplace less populated to get attacked by the sith."

both speeders went into the higher levels and setteled down in a place close to the chanselors main office. they untied disserectional and started to walk. "why are you even attempting to seek help from the chanselor" dragon said "you know as well as i do that he wouldent dare to go aggenct the sith hes too frightend of them." "i know" obi-wan said "but we must try." they all came to the chanselors office. and walked inside. the secratary asked them their busness when they walked in. "we are jedi." obi-wan said. she looked at them and then motioned them to go inside. the chanselors room was highly decorated with many things from different worlds and the chanselor was decrotive himself. "master kenobi how good it is to see you, i hope..." "we have been invaded by the sith" obi-wan interupted. the chanselors happy expression turned into a very shocked and sad one. "i am sorry but i dont know what it is that you want me to do." "anything, we are in short supply of wepons food and ships. we need anything you can give us." the chanselor paused for a long while "i am sorry master kenobi but we are in short supply ourselves but if you give me the quardinates to your base im sure i can..." "no! we cannot trust anyone with that information." "then i am sorry but i cannot help you." the chanselor looked up at dragon. "you are the one they call white dragon?" "yes i am. why?". "oh no reason just wondering."

after the jedi had left the chanselor punched in a number on a com. system. a voice the could make the blood run cold came on "yes" "my lord he is here" "very good chanselr you will be rewarded soon" "thank you my lord th-" the chanselor put his hands to his throte and tryed to gasp for air but he did this all in vain "keep the change" the voice said.

the all split up when the jedi got out of the chanselors office. dragon went throughan alley and was almost to the speeders when a man in a trench coat came in front of him. dragons heart skiped a beat when he saw who it was "ian redhammer or is it white dragon now." "shadow angel" dragon said with the utmost lothing in his voice" dragon activated his light saber. angel laughed "are you planning to avenge you family well isent that funney. because i came here to avenge my father!." angel activated his curved hilt saber. and both men charged at eachother

whitedragon
07-30-2002, 07:56 PM
has anyone put this whole thing on one page yet.
oh and btw WHERE ARE YOU OBI-WAN

Darklighter
07-30-2002, 07:59 PM
Click the link in my sig to go to our new forums. Its for regular swampers, and we need more members. There is a Academy section with the whole thing. Go sign up please:) Its really cool:D

Darth Talliusc
07-30-2002, 08:16 PM
well it seems that the storylines are proceeding again, just a small note, in Reb's story i wasnt with the sith order, i was on Coruscant (which flows well with my story) but in Maximus' i am listed as WITH the sith, if you could please edit that and change the name to somebody else the story would still make sense.

keep up the good work people.

Dath Maximus
07-30-2002, 10:40 PM
no prob Talliusc i put you ther cause i just read reb's post

Darklighter
07-31-2002, 08:46 AM
I think I will post another part of my story either now or a little later...so watch out for it:)

whitedragon
07-31-2002, 11:13 AM
hey is someon else ever going to post a part of the story if not then ill post the fight between me and shadow angel

Darklighter
07-31-2002, 11:18 AM
That would be cool...I will be writing just a little later...

And don't kill his character off yet btw:D lol

whitedragon
07-31-2002, 11:20 AM
Originally posted by Darklighter
That would be cool...I will be writing just a little later...

And don't kill his character off yet btw:D lol
no ofcorce i wont me and him are arch enemys. this will just be one of our many battles where me and him will both escape injured

Darklighter
07-31-2002, 11:28 AM
I know you won't:D

Okay, carry on:)

whitedragon
07-31-2002, 09:48 PM
white dragon and shadow angel charged at eachother with a force so great that even the greatest of jedi would envy. dragon only fought to avenge his wife and child but his enemy sought to kill for revenge of his fathers death. the two warriors lightsabers hit together with a great clash that made their ears ring. both jedi moved faster than any normal eyes could see. they both backed out into the street many witnesses saw the flashes of red and white light and back away as fast as they could. shadow angel brought his light saber down on dragons head and they got into a saber lock. they held it for a long time then suddenly dragon pushed him with the forceand slashed his stomach but angel also took advantage and stabed his saber through dragons leg. they both heard other lightsabers activateing. it was obi-wan and the rest of the jedi. shadow angel started off down the street, not even he was a match for so many jedi masters. white dragon wondered why shadow angel ran down the street with such ease when dragon had cut his stomach.

Yom
08-01-2002, 12:10 AM
sorry this is late for me to add yom in but i am tierd of not seeing him in here and i dont know were every one is so pm me the locals of Darklighter plez so i can put that in thnak you



after the attak on the academy Yom Thyne desided to brake out his old Bounty Hunters Armor and gear. With his Mandalorian armor, with markings on it form may battels and symbuls of comfermed kills, minus the helmet, which was destroyed in a fight with a gang of pirates, he has not used it for not much more then to protect his idenity from those who might escape, witch not many did, and try to put a price on his head. Looking at his old blasters.

He says to him self."Do u even remeber how to use that....It has been to long."

But then he tought about his old employer,Sifo-Dyas. "U are too Weak. U are to Weak to take on Sith. Your skills have been rusted.... So i gess i will have to stick to the clones then, whont I" he said to him self as he picks up a light saber, wich he took of his first kill, and he slips it under his armor and pick up his guns and throws on his robe and walks out the door to find what is left of the fighting forces.

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 12:30 AM
okay im confused what the HELL is going on with the stories and every thing what happened???

Yom
08-01-2002, 01:13 AM
Walking down the coradoors, wearing a robe to hide his Armor and wepons, of the some what empty academy. he looks at the various young padawnas.

Hereing padawns saying,"Man i wish i was with the masters fighting the sith". he fialy comes up to Darklighters room and knocks on his Door.

"Enter" gose The tiersome voice.

Yom Walks in and look to see Admiral Darklighter at his desk looking through his halo pads.

"Hello Admiral Darklighter" Yom says in a deepend Voice

"Why hello Chef How are u today?, what will u be serving us for dinner? Oh plez sit." as he wave towards a chair on the other side of the desk.

Still standing Yom says with discomfort "Well sir, I am not here about the food. There is some thing u should know about me."

"Is there something wrrong Yom?" He askes with deep curiosity

Yom tares off the robe covering the armore, and throws it to the floor. " well sir. i wasnt all ways a chef"

With great shook Darklighter stands up with fear in his eyes. " whaaa..whaaa.. what is going on? I know those markings. I thought it was a legend. "The Jedi hunter" here!?! bu...bu...but why? Are u here to Kill me or Obi-Wan13?"

"No sir i am not to kill you or the jedi or any one eals in the Academy in that fact."

"Then Why are u wearing that?"

"Well Sir i am the one u speak of and I did kill all those Jedi. But now i am done with that." For the next 5 min or so Yom tells Darklighter his whole story.

"So sir. I am here to help. I love thw Academy now and I think it is time that I do somthing more then just cook. In need to Fix What I have broken"

Darklighter walks over to Yom sticks out his hand and put his other hand on his solder. Yome returns the hand shake.

"Welcome to the good side Yom Thyne" said Darklighter as he still shakes his hand happily.

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 01:28 AM
can I post my story since I dont think im in eather of them anywhere :D

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 11:16 AM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
can I post my story since I dont think im in eather of them anywhere :D
i guess you can but me and the guys o coruscant are done basicly

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 11:21 AM
alright yom i knew that you were a fighter than a chef. so not as many cookies and beer huh oh well

Yom
08-01-2002, 11:59 AM
Originally posted by whitedragon
alright yom i knew that you were a fighter than a chef. so not as many cookies and beer huh oh well

well i made a nice big batch of cookies befor i left so help your self and as for the beer we are low so give me a list of what beer u whant and i will get camus to make the beer run

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 01:27 PM
Originally posted by Yom


well i made a nice big batch of cookies befor i left so help your self and as for the beer we are low so give me a list of what beer u whant and i will get camus to make the beer run
hey if you want ill join up with ya after i get back from coruscant

Yom
08-01-2002, 03:33 PM
Originally posted by whitedragon

hey if you want ill join up with ya after i get back from coruscant

ok thats cool

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 04:17 PM
alright guys if no ones goingto post another story im going to continue with mine

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 05:17 PM
i have no idea how to continue yet

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 06:18 PM
you could have me in there in my black mandelorian armor and 2 sabers after getting cased off the planet :D

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 06:29 PM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
you could have me in there in my black mandelorian armor and 2 sabers after getting cased off the planet :D

you could team up with me and yom after i gt back. were gonna kick some sith ass. i dont know how but were gonna do it

Yom
08-01-2002, 06:53 PM
way to dubbel post but any way kit come and join us

Darth Talliusc
08-01-2002, 07:52 PM
its nice that people havent lost interest in these stories yet, i was worried when everybody stopped posting. nice story yom, its a bit hard on the eyes though (yikes) maybe you should break out "ye old spellchecker" eh? no offense but plez?

Yom
08-01-2002, 08:36 PM
Originally posted by Darth Talliusc
its nice that people havent lost interest in these stories yet, i was worried when everybody stopped posting. nice story yom, its a bit hard on the eyes though (yikes) maybe you should break out "ye old spellchecker" eh? no offense but plez?

hey thanx and i edited the 2nd one but the first one i did not yet

i have another story on him in the prequel thread (along time ago (befor the sith academy))

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 08:54 PM
okay :D

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
okay :D
come on one of you guys make the next story about how we team up to do.....something

Yom
08-01-2002, 09:04 PM
ok i will do it

but tell me were your character is and i will wright

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by Yom
ok i will do it

but tell me were your character is and i will wright
ok im white dragon i have long hair, a leather jacket, a dual lightsaber and i sometimes carrey a blaster.

Yom
08-01-2002, 09:11 PM
were is your local and situation

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 09:25 PM
i just got back from coruscant and my nee has been stabed by my arch enemy shadow angel and so my nee would heal in a hour or so sence its not a big deal

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 09:37 PM
now for the history of meee:D

during the attack on the academy I was out on my advanced swoop then on my way back to the academy he got attacked by troops on speeder bikesafter easly defeating them with duel sabers :D he realised that something was wrong so he raced back up to a hill top to see what had happened so he went to his cave ( where he goes to get away from the idiots at the academy :eek: j/k your not idiots) and put the swoop inside an special vehical and and flew off just to get attacked again figuring that they would hunt down any survivers he flew to a planet that he thought was abandoned to find the last of what was thought to be an extinct race the mandelorians who by his surprise took him in and helped him giving him black armor then he left the planet and returned to the academy and walked into darklighters office to find yom and darklighter shaking hands

YOM CAN TAKE IT NOW :D

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 09:39 PM
hey did you get the ual saber from me sence i am the dual saber trainer

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 09:44 PM
by the way what the hells up with your sid kit

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 09:51 PM
ive always had 2 sabers:D :saberr: :jango: :saberg:

now the helmet is black and the sabers are black and white:D

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 09:53 PM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
ive always had 2 sabers:D :saberr: :jango: :saberg:

now the helmet is black and the sabers are black and white:D cool #### man but the helmet dosent go very good

Yom
08-01-2002, 10:10 PM
WHITE CHECK YOUR PMS thank u

the next part of my story will be my nex post

Darklighter
08-01-2002, 10:19 PM
you guys mind if I take over the story after Yom's next post?

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
you guys mind if I take over the story after Yom's next post?
no go ahead i dont mind :D

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 10:33 PM
#### whyd yom get off i thought he was going to write the next part of the story :mad:

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 10:44 PM
hay whitedragon why dont you think the helmet should be black

and when you said sid did you mean sig

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 10:49 PM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
hay whitedragon why dont you think the helmet should be black

and when you said sid did you mean sig
yeah the helmits ok black but i ment that helmets have been done to death.

and yes i did mean sig

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 10:54 PM
Originally posted by whitedragon

yeah the helmits ok black but i ment that helmets have been done to death.

and yes i did mean sig

what do you mean helmets have been done to death

and the reason for my sig is because I like to say realy long ahhhs in the chat room:D

Yom
08-01-2002, 11:14 PM
"Thanx Sir" Yom says some what happily

"no problem yom" he says as ther was a nock at the door "enter"

a man Dressed in black mandelorian armor enter. both Darklighter and Yom draw wepons and point them at the Man.

"NO! NO!DONT SHOOT!" he yells as he takes off his helmet. "it is me Kit-Fisto! i found this armor and i took it"

as both men lower there arms darklighter says "u gave us quite a scare in just a few more seconds and we would of made u bantha food"

"Yes Yes i apologize i did not mean to shock everyone like that"

"well well then. now that i see u both are ready for a fight. u see i just got word that WhiteDragon is wonded and cant get off the planet. and i whant to to sense that u 2 are availbe for this mission and i need u too to take on of camus's transports and get white and get back here. ok u 2 this is Black op and u need to do this fast. Intell says that the sith might make a move soon so we need all the me i can spare here"

"yes sir we under stand how are u going to find him?" askes Kit

"well i have his curnt local and he is nere a arms depo for the clones and it whont be easy getting in and out of there, but i know that the both of u are really steathy"

both Kit and Yom nod slowly.

"well u 2 better get a move on and get threre, may the force be with u"

Both yom and kit walk out the door into the hall way to get to ther shuttel.
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next part in a few

whitedragon
08-01-2002, 11:16 PM
ok yom before you write any further look at your PMs

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 11:48 PM
hay whitedragon I told him to look at them in the chat:D

Darth Talliusc
08-01-2002, 11:51 PM
excellent, kit fisto has joined our list of writers welcome kit fisto (hands him a piece of cake) and not to be a prick or anything but i think its custOdial not custUdial =P. lookin forward to his place in our war.

Kit fisto JK
08-01-2002, 11:57 PM
thanks for the cake and yes I know I miss spelt custodial

Yom
08-02-2002, 12:12 AM
As the 2 of them walk down the hallway they start to chat. "So you are the jedi hunter yom" says kit.

"Yep i was" i am no longet a Bounty Hunter though. now i am just a guy on a black op mission" says Yom. "so who did u kill to get that armor?"

"i dont know who did u u kill for yours?"

the 2 laugh. and continue to the the hanger. hen they get there they Find Camus Sleeping in a chair dressed in his fight suit. Yom walks over and kicks the bottom of his chair. camus wakes witha a jolt. He looka at the 2 men and and says.

"What do u whant? cant u see i was sleeping"

kit stats " well u see we are in a Bla-"

Yom cust him off "we need a ship. we will take the correlion transport. and no questoins asked got it"

"yes sir. i will have my men ready your ship" Camus states. and walks over to the goup of men.

Kit looks a yom and says angerly "Why did u cut me off like that i was talking"

"yes u were and u were about to revial that we were going on a black op mission. the only people that need to know that are me, u, the Admiral, and the guy we are saving. NO ONE EALS! got it!" yom snaps

"yes sir" said kit bitterly

Camus walks back over and says "well the ship is ready for take off. so were u guys heading?"

Kit awnser "no were special."

"well ok then have a good trip and may the force be with u" said camus

Kit says over to Yom " Yom i am doing to take my ship to give u cover i think it would be for afectiv"

"ok that sounds good to me"

they go to there ships and lanch in to the blackness of space.

"Ok Kit we are off to coruscant. when we get there lets keep radio silens untill we are on the ground together. understand?"

"Yeah"

"good here is were we will land"

Both ships fly and go in to hyperspace

Darth Talliusc
08-02-2002, 12:24 AM
any time, but im afraid i must know. why dont you change it if you know its wrong? well anyways, i think its about time for more of my story =) here goes

coruscant:
Darth Talliusc crouched motionlessly on top of one of coruscants many skyscraping buildings, unlike the other almost baloonshaped skyhooks this building was a large rectangle with spikes along the highest floors edge. it had once been a museum of jedi art, where the more artistic jedi displayed their paintings. now it was just another armory in the Emperors capital. the emperor was not in the capital at the moment, he was away holding a convocate of the sith, a convocate that Talliusc had been told not to attend. "no matter" thought Talliusc, "ill get the necessary information from the master, and the full story from Reb when he comes to debrief his assassins". "actually" it occurred to Talliusc, "my spider spy's should still be on station at the grand meeting room. ill simply have to request the transcript through the delta-channel and none of my brethren will know". Talliusc keyed in the requesition through his wrist comm, which relayed the message to his speeder which in turn sent it to an orbiting satellite. the message should be at his suite by the time he returned.

Talliusc had taken to this building more and more recently, its solidity and hard sharp shape set it apart from many of coruscants buildings in this area, it truly stood out among all near it. a fitting place for a man contemplating his destiny. the jedi had escaped him, more importantly he had not been able to rid the galaxy of Obi wan, or that cursed Tyrion. His master would have harsh words and harsher punishments for Talliusc soon, there was no doubt of it. the wind was cool on Talliuscs face and blew his hair back into the depths of his cloak, he had been on this roof ever since he had learned that the jedi escaped him. Memories flooded back to Talliusc, from different times in days past, when life was so much more enchanting. much different from the dismal existence of a sithlord. The darkside was a drug, and Talliusc was addicted, if he needed to kill more jedi to get more of the drug then that is what he would do. there was no alternative. Growing angry at himself for slipping into this cycle he felt the darkside swell up in him, it had to be released soon.
Talliusc strode back to his speeder and drove into the lowest level of coruscant navigable by speeder, parked in an alleyway and initiated the security system. Several blocks down Talliusc saw a group of thugs, 4 rodians 1 quarren 2 gands and a gamorrean. Talliusc could tell by the way they walked that the quarren was the leader. Talliusc walked towards them and he heard one of the rodians laugh to himself "chi panna wee toosje eh hehehe" Talliusc was fluent in many languages, the rodian said that they had more fresh meat for tonight. how wrong he was. as the gang closed in around Talliusc he felt rather then heard one of the rodians swing a durasteel rod at Talliusc skull, using the force he made a shield just milimetres from his cloak and let it absorb the kinetic energy of the strike. "what the? he didnt even flinch" said the gand. "tough guy uh?" said the other gand. as he pulled out a stun stick. he stabbed forward into Talliuscs side, again letting the force fill him Talliusc absorbed the energy storing it.
"your weapon clearly isnt working" replied Talliusc to the assault. finally getting into it the quarren unsheathed a blaster carbine "now give us the goods and we might let you live" smiling to himself Talliusc released all the stored up anger and hatred into a full force explosion.

after the dust cleared Talliusc was on a sort of island in the middle of the road, the ground all around him was several metres lower then it had been and there were charred bones at the bottom, Talliusc studied the bones from his island "mustve been the gammoreans, wouldnt be much left of any of the others" and with a shrug he headed back to his speeder, tonight at least the urge was sated. deactivating the security of his speeder with his wrist watch Talliusc saw something near the driver side door. "heh" chuckled Talliusc "foolish beast tried to take my speeder" pulling back the corpse of the Gran he climbed once more into his speeder and sped home to his suite in the imperial palace.

"lights" said Talliusc as he entered his room. this was a deluxe appartment meant for visiting ambassadors from wealthy planets. it disgusted Talliusc. nothing like his quarters on the Dreadhold. qeuing in his personal code to the computer console he called up the first unread message. "dear god. NO"

edited for spelling and continuity.

Kit fisto JK
08-02-2002, 12:38 AM
what was the message what was the message :D

Darth Talliusc
08-02-2002, 02:31 AM
kit check ur pm's please.

Kit fisto JK
08-02-2002, 02:34 AM
I got the little popup thing :D

Darth Talliusc
08-02-2002, 02:43 AM
ah, thank you muchly. say, where did you get that thing anyways?

Kit fisto JK
08-02-2002, 02:46 AM
what thing???

Darth Talliusc
08-02-2002, 03:04 AM
the little pop-up thing you just mentioned. the one that tells u when u have a PM

Darklighter
08-02-2002, 10:04 AM
Okay guys, lets try to get back to the stories in this thread:D I will post mine as soon as I get up to date on my reading, so it may be a little later:)

Camus
08-02-2002, 04:57 PM
After Yom left the hanger in the Kela Crove Camus started to walk around the hanger over looking the Z-95 training ships when he heard something behind a tool box Camus got closer and over heared someone talking. Camus' started to listen once he heard the voice say, "Yes master the homing becon in on Yoms Corellian freighter." Camus quickly shoved the box back pressing the man upagainst the wall. the voice started to scream.

"What did you do!" Camus screamed at the man

Of course the man said what he was ordered to do. "I put a becon on Yoms ship... They want to take Yom and find out where he is going."

"What is the frequincey?"

"I dont know!"

Several people heard Camus and started to help push the tool box on the man helping camus proswaid the spy. "You dont know you die... You know you might live if your master will allow it." The voice started to scream out numbers. Camus then looked at the chief mechanic. The chief mechanic quickly ran off to Camus' b-wing/e okay take this spy out of here im getting my clone and leaving to help Yom.

Camus ran to the corner of the hanger to a door with a key pad. of course Camus puched in a password and oppend the door to reveal a perfect Camus clone. The glass of the tube that held the clone slid up and out stepped Camus2 the only diffrence between Camus and Camus2 was Camus2 has two black lines on both of his cheeks that run over his cheek bones.

"Good to see you again," said the clone.

"You know I envy you. You get to sit in a tube asleep between missions."

The clone laughed and started to make his way to the b-wing/e. Camus quickly fallowed after his clone. They both walked up to thier slightly customized black skemmed b-wing/e. Camus got into his set as Camus2 got into his. The ground crew waved at Camus and with that simple accnolgement Camus took off.

Mean while

Yom was flying his Corrillian YT-1300 Kela Crove in hyperspace. When suddenly he was pulled out of hyperspace by a Immobilizer 418. Yoms eyes whidden once he saw the Immobilizer 418 and a Victory class star destroyer waiting for him. Yom quickly put it into full throughtle and started to try to manouver around. shortly after being cought suddenly camus' black b-wing/e dropped out of hyperspace blazzing away at the Immobilizer. Camus2's aim was 99% accuat as he shot at the giant gravaty wells. withen minutes the ion cannons had dessabled on gravaty well ennabling the the Kela Crove to manouver alittle bit more. quickly fallowing that the Camus's destroyed the second gravty well. quickly Yom stared a few basic manouvers and distroyed a few ties that stared to come out of the victroy class distroyer. with in 10 minutes of entering the fight the b-wing over whelmmed both distroyers and distroyed the Immobilizer. Once the Immobilizer was distroyed Yom called to Camus, "Would you like to cover my ass alittle more after we leave?" Camus just laughed as both Yom and the Camus's enterd hyperspace on thier way to Coruscant.

Agen
08-02-2002, 05:46 PM
Mr medlomatic will be replying to this soon as whitedragon owuld say :D, i wanna out a twist on the storyline methinks. *goes away thinking for a good idea*

Yom
08-02-2002, 05:59 PM
Kit Drops out of hyperspace and fell that some thing is about go wrong. all of the suden a suadron of tie interceptors drop out od hyperspace coming stait for him.

"oh Crap" he says calmly, "Yom U better get your Arsh here soon" he says a starts to shoot at the flight leader. then he pulls up and then banks to the lef to to get another pass at the ties. he shoots off 4 more shots and hits one of the ties the crossed in to his line of fire. as kit pushes down on the fightstick and finds that he has 6 ties on his 6. "Sh*T i am not going to serive very long like this.

Then out of no were a B-wing Drops out of hyper space. and starts to shoot at the ties on Kit's tail. 4 of then break off and the other 2 were shot due to the suprise.

"This is Camus i am here to help." camus says through the comlink.

"thanx for the help there. but were is Yom" Kit asks as he shoots at tie in front of him. the tie pulls up and turns around to get a head on head pass but be for the tie could get off a shoot kit his him and blows up. kit fly throw the flames.

"he made a quick stop, lets finish these guys off now and talk latter." camus yells through the COm as he is pulling up to shake the Tie that is on his tail. as camus pulls back on the trottel and lets the tie pass him camus 2 shots and geta a direct hit "nice shot there camus 2"

"Thanx camus" as camus2 shoot another shot and hits at a tie that passes in front of him.

Then another Ship comes out of hyper space. its the Kela Crove. as yome takes notise that there is a battle going on. "well boys it is sure nice to see u all agin" he says as he shoots at what is lef to the remaning ties.

well the rest of the ties were no match for the 3 ships so after the battel they head to the next jump point.

"Hey Yom what took so long to get here?" Askes Kit.

"I hade tp stop and get rid of a homing becon" Yom says to kit. "if it was not for Camus and his clone i would of not made it out of there. But the Question is who know that i am aout of retierment?" there was a slight pause. "Camus who was the spy talking to?"

Camus says quckly "i dont know he did not say who he was. Well who could be afread of u coming out of retierment?"

"i gess my former employer but he is long dead. well who ever it is they i know i am coming and it is not good cuz i have not fought with a sith in so long" anoter long silence " ok now in this next jump we are going all together and land and get White and who eals is down there. camus this is the local of the the landing pad and i dont think we will be running in to trubble in the air untill we start to leave so we need to make it fast every one under stand"

"Roger that" camus and his clone gose

"Roger and out" adds kit

"Lets Go!!" yom said as all 3 ships head out in hyper space

*end of part 3*

whitedragon
08-02-2002, 06:20 PM
"who was that" obi-wan said. "just a sith" dragon said. dragon got up with pain shooting through his leg. but by some mirical was able to conceal it from the others. "my ship is down below a few levels my padawan can show you." "what about you" tyrion said. "ill catch up in a day or so. i would like to visit a friend of mine." obi-wan and the others had learned to trust dragon over the years so they all said their goodbyes and went in seperate directions.

if there was anything white dragon was good at it was disguiseing pain. he learned that it would be an advantage in a fight if he dident show pain. the other jedi were some of his greatest friends but he would only face shadow angel alone. dragon stoped in an old run down building and walked inside. the inside was completely diffrent from the outside. it was like a ware house but it was filled full of classic speeders and all sorts of old but expensive stuff. upstairs was a whole floor for living and live this man did. dragon walked into the kitchen . a fat twilek was over the stove cooking something. dragon roughly turned the twilek around and imbraced him in a bone crunching hug. "asa its great to see you" dragon said. asa looked at him and said "what brings you to coruscant." dragon pointed to his nee. "can you patch me up im in a hurry sort of."

after asa had healed dragon he brought out some soup and bread. "what are you doing here" asa said. "jedi busness, you know the normal stuff." dragon said. "and how have you been." asa asked. "same as always." "sorry i asked." dragon bent his leg back and forth, it was as good as new. "i cant thank you enough asa." "dont mention it, youve helped me more times than i can count." dragon got up and put on his jacket "i guess ill see you later asa." "good bye ian shoot i mean dragon." " thats ok i t wont mater much for long."

whitedragon
08-02-2002, 06:22 PM
Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
Mr medlomatic will be replying to this soon as whitedragon owuld say :D,
well you have to admit that that was a good joke after you wrote that good story. good storys are ment to be made fun of

Dissectional
08-03-2002, 01:16 AM
yeah where have i come into play again? i'm wondering so's i don't have to read all those posts :rolleyes:

whitedragon
08-03-2002, 10:29 AM
Originally posted by Dissectional
yeah where have i come into play again? i'm wondering so's i don't have to read all those posts :rolleyes:
well i have a good idea how about each of us go on a seperate mission but in the end we all get brought together to do....something. but we can also team up

Yom
08-03-2002, 07:02 PM
Originally posted by whitedragon

well i have a good idea how about each of us go on a seperate mission but in the end we all get brought together to do....something. but we can also team up


Wha???? am i wrighting some one new in i am lost and i dont know how i am going to cuz i got it all planed out in me head well if i have too i will but get to me ASAP on this plez

whitedragon
08-03-2002, 07:06 PM
Originally posted by Yom



Wha???? am i wrighting some one new in i am lost and i dont know how i am going to cuz i got it all planed out in me head well if i have too i will but get to me ASAP on this plez
na continue with your story. thats why i said we can team up with eachother

Yom
08-03-2002, 11:50 PM
* PART 4 *

Once on the ground safly the 4 men start to head to the point were White Was said to be. now all men are armed and were Robes to hid there identity. the ctizens stare with fear that the four men could be Sith Kinghts here to terrorize the people. but the four men stay silent. but in the ally nere them they see on comming stormTroopers. so they all dash in to the nearest biulding.

the biulding that the whent in to was a old museum of the sith. i had every thing all the history and even a diplay of mandiloian armor. For that the Mandlorins sided with the sith in the sith war.

yom walks up to the cased and pulls out his blaster and breaks it open with the but of the blaster. he reaches in and takes the helmet that was on display and says over to the others "i been meanig to get a new helmet" all the others can do is laugh at the fact that he were selling for the sith. he slips off his hood to his robe and puts on the helmet then throws the hood back on.

"the cost is clear!" says camus's clone

they all walk out back in to the street and then come up to the biulding were White Dragon could be so they enter the biulding. after entering kit gets on the comlink to find White Dragon the other 3 keep a look out with hands close to there wepons.

after a few minutes of trying to get White on the comlink Kit finaly gets in tuch with him and gets his local. " He is on the 307 floor. they get to the elavaters and they take the long trip up to the 307th floor witch had briges to the other biuldngs surounding it.

but then they deside to stop the floor befor the 307th and let Camus and his clone get off. "so u guys are going to take the stairs up to the net floor and scop things out" Yom asks "well we are going to do the same with the 308Th so that if we need a place to hide we know were to go"

after the doors shut to the elavater both the camus and his clone start to walk down the hall ways scoping things out. then around the corner they here foot steps of storm troopers marching, about to turn the corner. Camus reaches in to the force and hides him and his clone untill they pass them. after they pass the both of them start unleasing hell on the storm troopers from behind. but then to hind a nother squad started to make the corner rushing to the action to stop what ever is making such a ruckes. as both men take cover in the door ways they start to return fire. but then to make things more complicated for the 2 a squad start to tunr the corner behind them.

Camus 2 turns to return fire. both men are so pin down they feel the presure.


* * *

Mean While

* * *


"ok get ready" yom says as he pulls off his robe and trows it to the grownd and pulls out his blasters. and Kit pulls out his saber and and pulls off his robe.

"ok i am ready" he says through his helmet. the doors open and the rush out hid in a door way then they find the hall way clear and that no one is around at all. as they start to sneek through the hall way they find a big room as they enter they see 2 men in black robes standing in the shadows. both robe men step in to the light and throw off the robes and ligh up there light sabers.

"i see we have run in to some mercenaries" one says to the other.

"i deed we have master" the other said

"oh crap! why do i have to kill a sith first thing i get here? Why cant it be a storm trooper? i much rater it be a storm-" Yom gose

Kit cuts him off as he lights up his lightsaber, "Yom! Calm Your self."

"I am calm!" he yells " i got the padawna"

"thanx! i gess i am stuck with the more ugly one" he says as he get in to his ready stance

then yom starts to dash to left and shoot a few shot and the padawna reflects one of then and doges the other> then yom cuts back to the right to get another angle then keep on shooting then he chrges the padawan with great speed and the padawn start to charg as well and then Yom fakes a dive making the padawan go lower and then yom jumps high than flips over the padawn and to shoot him and hit him in the back of the padawna and the lifeless boddy of the sith padawan falls to the floor with a thud.


* * *

Mean While

* * *


Camus and his clone are still finding off the the storm tropers one by one with boddies flying all over at camus 2's end, with every shot of his Concussion launcher. and boddies droping left and right at camus's end due to the fire of his Reapeter.

" I think i clead them all over this way come on!!!" camus yells to his clone " By the way were the hell are we? were did they all come from?" he says as they turn the corner and while passing a window they see Ties Flying around the Biulding. "ok i think this mission as taken a turn for the worse. What do u think?"

"I think so sir. and i think they know we are here" Camus 2 says quickly as he fires a nother shot at the stormies that are fallowing them. "what do u think we should do?"

"I say we get the Hell up stairs, get White and get out of here" then Camus relizes" if they know we are here then that means are way of getting of this rock is now heavaly garded. Crap whats next" he says as mor stormies come out of the door near them. But Camuse is quick to open fire on them.

a few feet later they come to the door to the stairs. they open it and.


* * *

Mean While

* * *

Kit Charges at the sith and starts to attack and defending the fighting dose not go on for long for Kit out wite the Sith by jumping over him and back stabing him.

"well that wasn't to hard now was it yom?" Kit ask yom.

"No, it remids me of a time were i had to take on pirates from Black Sun." he says as he picks up the saber of the lifles padawn, "some people collect Rocks i collect Sabers" he says with a gin and puts the saber under his back armor plate.

"Well lets get out of here and get to White" Kit says while running to the door at the other end of the room. they get to the door and it is to a stair case the gose down to the lower levels. as they do down the stairs they hear Stormies running down down the stairs so they start to run to the next floor and get to white. they whait righ in side the door to so whait and see if they pass. They do and do on down to the level were the Camus and His Clone are.

"we need to find White and fast. and i think they know we are here too" Yom says

Kit adds "at least they are going to camus and camus 2 and not us"

"Good point" Yom says as they walk down the hall quickly and quietly,

then they herd a a sound of a light saber light up and....


* * *

Mean while

* * *

camus opens the door to see a group of Impereal officers. Camus grabs hold of one and put his blaster to one of the officer head and shows him to the stormies who stoped shotting by now in fear of hitting one of there own. bothe the camus's get in to the stair well and tell the officer he is now ther hosige and if he talks he will die.

well the get up to the next floor and and camus shoots the office in the head and then camus 2 starts give him a wierd look "what? he was breathing to hard. it was getting on my nerves" He says as he gos throw the door.

at the end of the hall they see Kit in a ready stans and yom with both guns pointing at a man with a light saber on and in the ready stance.

both Camus and camus 2 break out in to a run tord the 3 men and they slow doen when they see the saber colaps and and yom lower his guns.

"Hey" Camus yells out to all the men "what is going on" he says a s he gets closer to them

"well we found white" Yom says "but now we need to get out of here"

"We!" White snaps "it is more like You need to get out of here. i am staying here'

"No our orders are to bring u back to the academy!" Camus Snaps back

"no i am here to deal with some bissnes" white says calmly

"Intel came in and sith are plaining an attack on the academy agin" Kit said "so wenn need to get back

all 5 of them are standng in a circle yelling at one onther. but Yom Walks be hind white and knocks him over the head with the butt of his blaster. white falls to the ground.

"Well that solves one problem" Yom says as he bends over and picks white up and puts him over his sholders. "ok we need to get out of here now so lets go to the next biulding over and get down from there got it now camus u lead and camus 2 u bring up the rear. ok lets go!!!!"


******************END OF PART 4********************

whitedragon
08-03-2002, 11:58 PM
ok yom i get to do the next part ok.

Yom
08-04-2002, 12:07 AM
Originally posted by whitedragon
ok yom i get to do the next part ok.

ok are u mad i am sorry for knoking you out and all but it is wat i had palaind from the beging because u whanted to satay there and fight shadow angel and i hed to bring u back an all sorry if u whant i will edit it

Darklighter
08-04-2002, 11:57 AM
You guys, can I just ask...WHERE THE HELL IS EVERYBODY?:(

I really want to write something, but everyone has gone somewhere and I don't know where they have gone. White, you said they all said there goodbyes and went their seperate ways. Well, where did each of them go> I want to include Obi, but I don't know where he is either...

Could domeone clear this up for me, please?:(

whitedragon
08-04-2002, 12:20 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
You guys, can I just ask...WHERE THE HELL IS EVERYBODY?:(

I really want to write something, but everyone has gone somewhere and I don't know where they have gone. White, you said they all said there goodbyes and went their seperate ways. Well, where did each of them go> I want to include Obi, but I don't know where he is either...

Could domeone clear this up for me, please?:(
well obi just left coruscant and is on his way back

Darklighter
08-04-2002, 12:40 PM
Okay...sorry for overreacting a bit, I was getting frustrated...thanks for teling me:)

Hope you don't mnd if I include you in my next story Obi?

whitedragon
08-04-2002, 12:51 PM
when white dragon awoke he had a spliting headache. he was in a bed in a dark room. he got up and went outside.yom was in the copilot seat of the bridge and dident have his armor on. "your finnally awake huh its about time." yom got up, dragon walked over to him and punched him in the gut. "dont ever do that to me again" dragon said.

they landed in the acadamy without any trouble. obi-wan walked up to dragon and told him that the sith had some how found the location of the acadamy. and were probly going to attack again. " are we going to evacuate" dragon said. "no" obi-wan said "were going to fight" "permission to scout around the planet" dragon said. "yes do what you can and ill get the troops ready." dragon turned to yom and kit "come on ill need your help" "finnally" kit said.

ok yom its your turn again :rolleyes:

whitedragon
08-04-2002, 12:55 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter
Okay...sorry for overreacting a bit, I was getting frustrated...thanks for teling me:)

Hope you don't mnd if I include you in my next story Obi?
go ahead yeah i dont mind

it will probly take the sith aa month to get to the planet

Camus
08-04-2002, 01:00 PM
When Camus's B-wing dropped out of hyper space they split off from Yom and the others. Camus went off to do a few routen cheaks on a few of there outer posts. but did little did anyone know how much trouble the two Camus could get into so quickly.

Agen
08-04-2002, 03:22 PM
Hmmm.. i will have to read lots of stories again to figure out where everyone is!

Darth Talliusc
08-04-2002, 03:41 PM
previously:

"lights" said Talliusc as he entered his room. this was a deluxe appartment meant for visiting ambassadors from wealthy planets. it disgusted Talliusc. nothing like his quarters on the Dreadhold. qeuing in his personal code to the computer console he called up the first unread message. "dear god. NO"

Coruscant:

Talliusc sat motionless at his computer console staring at the letters on the screen, it was a transcript sent to him by one of his espionage droids. He had been curious as to why he had not been summoned to the convocate of the sith in person, and more confused when he was not told to be present via holocomm. in truth he hadnt known what to expect. and as his master had told him many times before "what you do not know will kill you surer then a lightsaber through the throat". as any good tactician would, Talliusc had provisioned several methods for finding out what would happen at the convocate. While a personal spy might be captured or at least sensed by his master a small cyber-spider would be virtually invisible and very effective.

as Talliusc read over the transcript again in disbelief waves of shock outrage and betrayal fell over his body. the meeting had started out as normal as any convocate of the sith might. Talliusc had been pleased at first to see Darth Malice enter the room and take his place at the table, Darth Slayne was the newest member of the academy and the inner circle of sith. Talliusc felt a glimmer of pride that his brethren had found the jedi academy of Thedonias and curiously enough, a twinge of surprise. he had always assumed that Darth Malice would be the one to locate the academy, he had more skill in that area then many of the sith and a knack for knowing how the jedi thought. Talliusc was also surprised to find out about the siths newest weapon, lord maul. "if the master has 2 million of these warriors then his need for me will lessen" The darth maul clones had been tampered with the same as all of the other clone troopers. slightly more docile and ardently loyal to Divine Spirit. The rest of the meeting was a description of the invasion plan for Thedonias. The sith filtered out of the room, all except Darth Dominance and Divine Spirit. What Talliusc read next shattered his mental coolness. His brethren were going to kill his only friend unless he did something about it. awaking from his shocked state Talliusc gathered his weapons and his robes and started for the door when a new message came in. "lord Talliusc, priority alert code Blue 73! please respond" code blue 73 meant that Jedi had been located on the capital. "Again? these jedi visit here every week almost." thought Talliusc darkly. "i dont have time for this captain, ill send some of the lower Sith to handle it." replied Talliusc. "but my lord! these jedi have been identified as Kit fisto jk and the bounty hunter known as Yom, only a member of the inner circle stands a chance against them!" pleaded the voice once more. Yom had been known across the galaxy as one of the most fearsome bounty hunters ever to walk the trade, he had bagged more then a score of jedi at one point or another. so why was he with these jedi now? "do not interfere with me captain, i have more important matters to deal with" with that Talliusc switched off the comm and started for the door. Once into his private Tie Talliusc ordered two of the more promising lower sith to confront the jedi. whether or not these sith would be able to destroy the jedi didnt matter to Talliusc at the moment, he had a friend to save! In a matter of moments Talliusc's life had been turned upside down. he was now disobeying direct orders to remain on coruscant and interfering with his masters plans. He was now a renegade from the inner circle, but he had an advantage. none of the other Sith knew that he wasnt loyal to them any more and none but other members of the inner circle would dare order him about. He sent warnings to Reb through his private Delta channel, as soon as Reb visited his ship he would know everything and be prepared. but if Reb didnt check his messages soon then they would both probably be dead within 24 hours. at max hyperspace speeds his fighter could be there in little more then 2 hours and Talliusc was pushing it for all it had. before leaving Coruscant he had left command of coruscants defense to the commander of the Dreadhold Talliusc's private stardestroyer. he had almost wanted to take the Dreadhold with him but it was far too slow and far too recognizable. Time was running out and for Reb that meant death.

Yom
08-04-2002, 06:26 PM
@ Darth Talliusc: iam not a jedi i am a bounty hunter that collects sabers he has 16 sabers now


BUT I AM NOT A JEDI!!

whitedragon
08-04-2002, 07:03 PM
hey Talliusc whens the saber battle between you and me going to happen

Yom
08-04-2002, 07:50 PM
Me?? Wha!!!

Reb Starblazer
08-04-2002, 09:23 PM
Malice’s modified TIE Interceptor blasted out of the Renegade’s hangar and took off into space. Time was running out, and he knew that he had to warn the Jedi, no matter what. A small beeping noise notified him of a private message coming in over his Comm channel. He quickly shut down the communications system. He did not wish to hear the Emperor’s voice now, giving him new orders. He was leaving, once again alone. He would head to Thedonias, and warn the Jedi, but first, he had to make a detour. To visit an old friend. He set the co-ordinates into the nav-computer, waited for the course to be set, and then jumped to Hyperspace.

Upon arriving at Nar Shaddaa, he landed his TIE Interceptor at a more remote landing pad. He knew what this place was like, and he did not want anything to happen to his only vessel. Deciding on leaving his Lightsabre behind as it would attract too much unwanted attention, Malice strapped on his two leg holsters, each with a DL-6H in them. He put on a simple civilian garb, and left, to find what he came for. Walking through the crowds, he was reminded of his last visit here, almost 3 years ago. Not long after the death of Darth Talon, he came here, to leave an “item” in safe keeping, and he had come to reclaim it. He entered the “Singing Sith”, a bar for the kind of scum on Nar Shaddaa. It wasn’t very well named, but it was popular. He made his way to the bar, and once there said “Correllian Whiskey. And tell Nassk I wish to speak to him.”

The bartender got him his drink, and then disappeared into the back. A few minutes later, the bartender returned, followed by a tall Trandoshan. The Trandoshan waved Malice to follow him, and they went upstairs to the office.

“I was wondering when you were gonna show up.” Said Nassk, sitting at his desk.

“You knew I’d come back eventually. You do still have it, don’t you?” Malice said, a hint of authority in his voice.

“Yes, yes, of course. You think I’m stupid enough to cross a Sith?” Nassk said, as he gave his best version of a human smile. He then rose from his seat, and walked over to a small safe in the room. He used his key card and opened it, reached inside and then pulled out a small black object. “You know, I never could get this damn thing to work”. Nassk said as he handed it to Malice. It had lit up and hummed to life as soon as it came within five feet of him.

“That’s because it’s a Holo-cron, it’s activated by the Force. Which explains why you could never get it to work.” Malice said as he outstretched his free hand to Nassk. “Thank you.” Nassk took Malice’s hand in his much larger claw, and shook it.

“It was no trouble. The least I could do.” Nassk said as he released Malice’s hand

“Take care Nassk.” Malice said as he put the Holo-cron into one of his pockets, and began walking towards the door.

“I believe there’s an old Jedi saying, goes something like… May the Force be with you.” Nassk said, as Malice stopped, and turned to face him.

“May the Force be with you too Nassk.” Said Malice as he left the office, then made his way out of the bar.

As he was walking back to his Interceptor, he heard shouts, and a scream as he passed an alleyway. He stopped, and used the Force to enhance his senses. He saw a gang of thugs,
a Nikto, a Catharian, a Weequay, and a Rodian. The Catharian and the Nikto had a Blue Twi’lek girl by the arms, while the Rodian yelled at her. Malice sighed to himself. “Always was a sucker for the blue ones…” he said as he began walking down the alley.

“Now, you’re coming back with me. You didn’t really think you would get away now did you?” The Rodian yelled at the blue Twi’lek. “I bought you, you’re mine. Don’t even think about running away again.” He motioned to the Weequay. “Cut off part of a head-tail, that’ll teach her not to do it again. “ The other two continued to hold each of her arms, while the Weequay drew a Vibro-blade and started walking towards the Twi’lek.

“No!” She screamed. “ Please, don’t. I beg you, don’t!”

“You heard the girl.” Malice said as he came closer to the group. “ She said please. Maybe you should think about not treating her so badly, hmmm? She may not want to run away then.”

“Stay out of this you piece of Bantha fodder, if you want to keep your head that is. Well, go on, cut her.” Said the Rodian, as the Weequay had stopped advancing when Malice spoke.

“Leave her be. This is your last warning. Don’t make me hurt you.” Malice said as he kept on walking towards them.

“Seriously now, who do you think you are?”

“Me? I’m just your friendly neighbourhood Sith Lord.” Malice said with a grin.

“Yea, and I’m the frickin’ Emperor. To hell with her, kill him!” The Rodian said. The Nikto and Catharian let go of the Twi’lek, handing her off to the Rodian. The Weequay started walking towards Malice now, Vibro-blade in hand. He took a swipe at Malice, who dodged to the side, then connected with a knee to the Weequay’s midsection. He brought his right elbow down on the back of the Weequay’s neck, sending him unconscious, and out of the fight. The Nikto charged at him, Malice gave him a swift right kick to the stomach, then a left to the stomach, and continued his rotation with a roundhouse to the face. Malice grinned, his Teras Kasi had improved greatly in the last year, thanks to Talliusc’s training. He went into a defensive stance, stuck out his right arm, and then opened and closed his hand in a ‘come here’ motion to the Catharian.


“Here kitty, kitty, kitty.” Malice said. The Catharian rushed at Malice, trying to slash him with his claws. Malice side-stepped, and backed off, avoiding all the potentially deadly strikes. He caught the Catharian’s wrists in his hands, and started bending its arms outwards. He then head butted the feline three times in the nose, then let go of its wrists as it fell to the ground.

“Don’t even move.” The Rodian shouted. Malice saw the Rodian now had a Vibro-blade held to the Twi’lek’s throat. “One false move and she’s dead. Now, you let me go, and we all walk away alive.”

“Oh please…” said Malice as he used the Force to pull the Vibro-blade from the Rodian’s hand, and sent it spiraling down into the depths of Nar Shaddaa. The Rodian just stared at Malice, shocked “Will you just hurry up and leave?” Malice stated firmly.

The Rodian, began to reach for his holstered blaster pistol, but was dead before his hand even got near it. Malice had drawn one of his DL-6H’s and blasted the Rodian right between his large black eyes. The Rodian fell backwards to the ground, smoke rising from his death wound. The blue Twi’lek girl just stared at Malice as he twirled the gun and then replaced it in it's holster. Malice couldn’t get over how much she resembled Kylaa, but she was much younger than her. She couldn’t have been anymore than 13 or 14 standard years old. Malice was quite glad he had killed the Rodian now.

“Why?” She suddenly broke the silence. “What made you decide to help me?” she asked, somewhat frightened.

“Because… because I know what it’s like to be a slave. To have no free will, no hope, no destiny.” Malice said as he slowly approached her. He took a credit chip out of his pocket and tossed it to her. “Here, take this. There should be enough there to get you just about anywhere you want to go. You’re free now, make the most of it.”

She stared down at the credit chip, as tears began to form in her eyes. It was the only time in her short life that anyone had been truly kind to her, and the one was, turned out to be a perfect stranger. “Thank you…” she said as she looked up, but Malice had already disappeared into the shadows.

He was walking back to his Interceptor, going over the events that had just taken place. “So much for unwanted attention” he said to himself with a smile. Once he reached his Interceptor, he took out the Holo-cron, and activated it. After a few moments of searching, he found what he was looking for. Angmar, he needed to go Angmar. But first, he had to go to Thedonias, and speak with the Jedi. He left Nar Shaddaa and set the co-ordinates.




“Sir, we have a TIE Interceptor coming out of Hyperspace.” Said a young officer.

“Did you say ‘A’ TIE Interceptor, as in only one. What in blazes is a single Interceptor coming here for…?” Then it struck Obi-Wan. Reb, it could only be Reb. “Try to reach the Interceptor, tell him to land at point alpha niner, I’ll meet him there.” Obi-Wan said as he left the command center.

He was walking to the landing point, and saw the Interceptor entering the atmosphere. He heard gasps from some of the younger students. “This, is going to attract some attention.” He thought to himself. He made it to the landing pad just as the Interceptor was touching down. A few moments later, he was joined by Tyrion and Darklighter, who were wondering what was going on. The roof hatch opened, and Darth Malice climbed out. He dropped to the ground, and walked over to where the three Jedi were standing. Darklighter’s hand reached for his Lightsabre, but only rested on it. Tyrion on the other hand, ignited his and rushed at Malice. Malice raised his hand and used the Force to push Tyrion to the ground, sliding back to lie next to Obi-Wan’s feet. Tyrion got up and composed himself.

“I have no wish to fight you. Don’t make it come to that. I’ve only come to deliver a message.” Malice said.

“Hello Reb, it’s been a long time.” Said Darklighter, with a hint of anger in his voice.

“Please, don’t call me that. I no longer have the right to that name, I’m Darth Malice now. But yes, it has been a long time. Too long.” Malice said, and then looked around him. The new Academy was beautiful, and Malice saw Masters and Padawans practicing, just like at the old one. “ I guess some things never change” Malice said solemnly.

“Yea, except for maybe the occasional allegiance.” Spat Tyrion. He was there, watched as Reb boarded the shuttle and left with Talliusc. It had hit him pretty hard.

“I grew worried, I didn’t receive the monthly update from you. I wasn’t sure what had happened” Said Obi-Wan, ignoring Tyrion’s last remark.

“Terrible things have happened Obi-Wan. The Emperor is creating another clone army, but this time it's not troopers. He’s created…” Malice said.

“Clones of Darth Maul, yes. We’ve learned about that.” Interrupted Darklighter.

“...Two million clones of the Sith Lord Darth Maul.” Malice finished. All three Jedi did their best to not gasp.

“Two Million!” exclaimed Obi-Wan. “Are you sure?”

“I heard it myself in a briefing, I saw Holo-Images.You must leave Obi-Wan. Save yourself and your students. Leave here, and don’t return. I’ll do what I can to help, but know that you’ll be slaughtered if you stay here.”

“No, we’re not leaving. I’m tired of running. We’ll face Divine Spirit, and defeat him, or die trying.”

“Very well Obi-Wan. You’ve made you decision, I hope you don’t regret it. As I hope I don’t regret mine. It seems that no matter how far we run, we must always eventually turn to face our destiny. Stare death in the eyes old friend. Just don’t blink.” Malice said as he turned and began walking to his Interceptor.

“And what about you? Are you running from your destiny?” Asked Obi-Wan

“No. I’m tired of running too Obi-Wan. I just have to go a little farther before I can turn and face my destiny.” Malice said as he got into the cockpit of his Interceptor.

“Why leave then? Stay here, fight with us Reb. Where could you possibly need to go now?” pleaded Obi-Wan.

“To become a hero.” Malice said as he closed the cockpit and fired up the engines. Moments later, the Interceptor shot off into the upper atmosphere.

“So he’s made his choice then. Battle to the end, and die well Reb.” said Obi-Wan sadly as he turned and began to leave.

Camus
08-04-2002, 09:29 PM
Wow that was good Reb... :D

Yom
08-04-2002, 10:09 PM
* part (fill part number here) *


After The three of them got there orders. obi pulls Yom to the side to have a quick chat. "i see u gone back to to your old armor. and were did u get the helmet?"

Well sir i thought i help the jedi for once and not kill them off but help them survie aginst the sit and dark jedi." Yom said. "and the helmet i stole it from a sith museum. nothing new i needed it so i took it"

"Well i gess that is ok that u stoll from the Sith, but u need to go and do your mission but i need u to report back to me when u return i need to talk with u more" obi starts to walk off then he turns back " oh yes i forgot may the force be with u"

Yom Replies "as well as u sir." then Yoms turns and runs to ctach up with Kit and white. as they are all ready on there on there Flare-S Swoops and about to take off. Yom jumps on and puts his helmet on " ok i am ready what are we going to do"

"well we are going to head west then up north they are more likely to land a scout crew." White says then takes off then the other 2 take of as well. as they head west they see a Tie Interceptor head in for a landing

"what is going on?" kit yells out

"it has got to be Reb" White yells back

but then they see a transport land over the trees farther west. "well lets check it out" yom yells out to the others.

as they get closer they stop there Swoop bikes and walk the next mile to were the Transport landed as they get closer they here voices of clone troopers "#### man so we are here on a suicide mission that is just great i fell good, yes i am going to die to day"

"Right u are" the three men say as they jump out and shoot the clone trooper, then they dash to the ship were more a wait Yom gos lef and white gos right then they turn in to the clearing were the ship is and sart shooting up the place and then yom runs in to the ship and shoots the piolt that was on the com with someone.

"This is great now they know we are here lets get back to bace" white says quikly and starts to run to his swoop bike as the other 2 do the same they fallow closely behind and jump on there bikes jet in to the hanger at the academy

"you think that reb lead them here?" kit askes

"I dont know but they know were are here" white says


*****End****

C'jais
08-04-2002, 10:10 PM
*cough* fanfic *cough*

Camus
08-04-2002, 10:15 PM
Originally posted by cjais
*cough* fanfic *cough*

~cough~fun~cough~ Well its just a thing for our anti spam Academy... :D

Darth Talliusc
08-04-2002, 11:58 PM
so whats wrong with fanfic? i think its great. sorry bout the confusion yom, ill edit that post for you. keep up the great work.

edit: whitedragon i have a few ideas for our saber battle, not exactly what you think though. hehe excellent, expect a pm in a day or so when ive got my thoughts compiled.

Darth Slayne
08-05-2002, 01:45 AM
Originally posted by cjais
*cough* fanfic *cough*

Don't get me wrong, but...

Easy there mate! This isn't about how good they are at writing its about having fun! I'll have you know that I happen to be quite proud of all the writers here. Why, you ask? Because they have the guts to TRY.

Three chears to all academy members! Both Sith and Jedi!

Darklighter
08-05-2002, 08:35 AM
I will begin my story momentarily. Thank you:D

Darklighter
08-05-2002, 09:17 AM
Darklighter held his head in his hands. What was happening to him, what had happened for so long he could not believe. Reb and his betrayal, Yom's past, it all didn't make any sense.

"Why now?" he said to himself, "Why did I have to know now? I've been through enough haven't I?" He sat in his office, pondering over his thoughts in an endless cycle, trying to gain wisdom from past events.

As he went over his thoughts in his head, he distanced back. Back to his past, what had happened to him so long ago. As he did, the thoughts and memories of one person came back to him. Someone he had almost forgotten. The three words she had said to him, right before it happen...

"I love you..." he missed her. He missed her so much it hurt. A pain deep in his heart, a flame that burned. Talaria had gone, and now like before, he felt sorrow. A tear fell from his eye to the ground, and he closed his eyes to stop them.

On that second Obi-wan walked in through the door, and Darkighter quickly wiped away the tear. He walked up to the desk, but said nothing, as Darklighter slowly lifted his head and their eyes met. He was partly angry at Obi-wan for what had happened.

"I'm sorry..." his voice was low and sorrowful. "I'm sorry I kept it from you. I couldn't let anyone know about Reb. Not even you, my old friend."

"I know..." he replied forgivingly. "Do not worry Master, I understand. Just like you have understood me before." He stood up now to face him, "I was just shocked. Reb is still a Jedi?"

"He was never a Jedi" Obi-wan corrected. "He never could to be, he never turned to our side because he couldn't. But he wants to help us now, as we did before for him."

"And you trust him?" Darklighter's response was blunt.

"I would trust Reb with my life." Darklighter was most surprised with what he said. Reb had been a mystery figure at the Academy since he joined. It's just Darklighter never realised how highly Obi-wan thought of him. At that very second, a call came through on the comlink on Obi-wan's belt.

"Master!" Kordkelly called worriedly. "We need you in the control room right away!" As he finished speaking, the two Jedi ran from the office out into the corridor. As they came to the spiral staircase at the end of the hall, the two jumped over the railing and landed on the basement floor 100 feet below.

There was a door directly in front of them that lead to the control and navigation room. It was compiled with a network of computer sceens and radar scanners.

"What is it?" yelled Obi-wan.

"Maul clones sir." They are advancing on our position. They looked at the radar and saw the truth. Many small cloaked figures, maybe fifty to one hundred moved across the holographic radar map. Obi-wan stood staring at it, his face not worried...just concerned. Perhaps the thought that the Emperor was aware of their position was more troubling. Darklighter turned to speak quietly into his ear.

"This does not look like trouble" he said calmly, "We can take them Master" Obi-wan silently nodded, but made no expression.

"Ready the fleet" Obi-wan ordered. "We are going to battle."

To be continued...

Dissectional
08-05-2002, 09:26 AM
Question: Am I back at the Academy or not? cuz I want to include Myself fighting Maul clones if at all possible. :D

stormtroop
08-05-2002, 09:42 AM
ill be posting my storys soon ive just joined the sith academy

whitedragon
08-05-2002, 10:20 AM
Originally posted by Dissectional
Question: Am I back at the Academy or not? cuz I want to include Myself fighting Maul clones if at all possible. :D
yeah you and the others are back at the acadamy

Dissectional
08-05-2002, 10:25 AM
Dissectional spotted Admiral Kenobi, Yom, and Darklighter sprinting down the hallway. He got the hint and bolted after them. Amidst the hustle and bustle, he managed to figure out what was going on.

"WHAT?! Maul clones?! I'm not going to ask how they managed that. How many of them are there?" Dissectional was quite confused. "We aren't sure, though we suspect that there should be one for everyone in the academy to handle, possibly two." Dissectional sensed a brief glimmer of panic in Obi-wan's mind, but it was quickly dismissed. Yom was looking quite amped and ready to take on whatever faced him. "It's been a while, my saber skills have gotten rusty. Time to see if I still got what it takes, eh?" Yom had a grim smile on his face, as if he sensed something that the others didn't. Darklighter had many things going thrugh his mind, as well as mixed emotions and feelings. "Tidus, are you alright? You seem troubled." Darklighter looked back at Dissectional and detected a feeling of deep concern. "I.. I have many things clouding my mind as of now. I don't know what to feel... Well, now is certainly not the time. We'll have to talk later." Dissectional noticed a tear in Darklighter's eye, but mentioned nothing. He seemed capable of controlling his emotions. General Kenobi was far too busy helping scramble x-wings, snowspeeders, and vehicles to be spoken with. Dissectional hopped into a speeder, locked his helmet into place, and motioned for Greedo to jump in. Greedo, who had been busy recharging his blaster, leapt into the gunner's seat, as the cockpit closed and they flew off.

To be continued...

Yom
08-05-2002, 10:59 AM
as i say once more I AM NOT A JEDI i am a freakin bounty hunter the carries a sbare like a utility knife, if he dose use it it is for backstabing some one

whitedragon
08-05-2002, 11:50 AM
when all three got back to the hanger obi-wan told them the news "maul clones" yom said. "he was one of the most powerful sith knights ever" kit said "are you serious" dragon said. obi-wan noded. dragon smiled "what a chalenge, this will be far different from these reborn weaklings" obi looked strangely at dragon. he would never understand his love of a good battle. "what did you find out" obi asked. "that trator starblazer has found our location we had better put everyone on full alert." obi went over to a loud speaker and reported the message to get defences up and stay alert. obi went back over to dragon. "your orders are to..." they all felt the desterbance in the force, even yom felt something was wrong. they all took out their lightsabers but dident activate them just yet. obi was very quiet "yom, kit you check the living quarters and the cortyard, diserectional you check the top floors, dragon you come with me to the bottom levels. they all casually put their wepons away and walked away.

the lower levels were kind of like the place where obi had fought the origional maul but alot bigger they both split up and searched the entire floor. they both met in the middle of the place which was a large circle with some chairs to sit on for the mechanics. "find anything" obi said "nothing." just then a black shape came out of nowhere and began to fight obi-wan, it was a maul clone. dragon turned around and another was right their. dragon activated his light saber. as he began to charge forward he heard explosions from outside. the battle had begun

Yom
08-05-2002, 11:58 AM
ok that was good white can i have a turn now plezzzzz

stormtroop
08-05-2002, 12:05 PM
The empires grip
As the empire steped from his starship into the death stars hanger.The general was there to greet him with open arms like a brother or something.The empire ignored the genral rushing pass him he ran to the back of the hanger to the lift he could sense the light side here.He reached for his belt suddenly swinging his arm upwards with a red saber in his hand as he was approching the top floor.The light side was becoming even more unbarable the empire maid mara jade was shaking all though see was tring to hide it from her master.I cna sense your felling mara whats wrong with you.you know you cant hide your nerves frome me said the empire.I know master she replied.DINGGGG.Went the lifts bell.Darth vader and mara steeped fromn the lift quick go back int o th lift mara.Vader swung his light saber suddenly in a horzantall block.Smashing a young rebels saber away the empire jumped up in the air it seemed like miles he then came smashing down just missing the rebels side with his saber.So you think you can beat me young rebel.There was no reply well shouted the lord.Suddenly and swiftly vader swang his sword at the rebel while still shouting.The empire went into a frenzy suddenly probally the silence that did it.The empire was swinging and smashing anything in his way the young rebel pushed his hood off and grabbed his saber.The rebel was blocking everyswing as the twos lightsabers collinded toghether buzzing and spiiting everything of there sabers was blowing,everything inside the saber blew
To be contined

obi
08-05-2002, 12:54 PM
Originally posted by stormtroop
The empires grip
As the empire steped from his starship into the death stars hanger.The general was there to greet him with open arms like a brother or something.The empire ignored the genral rushing pass him he ran to the back of the hanger to the lift he could sense the light side here.He reached for his belt suddenly swinging his arm upwards with a red saber in his hand as he was approching the top floor.The light side was becoming even more unbarable the empire maid mara jade was shaking all though see was tring to hide it from her master.I cna sense your felling mara whats wrong with you.you know you cant hide your nerves frome me said the empire.I know master she replied.DINGGGG.Went the lifts bell.Darth vader and mara steeped fromn the lift quick go back int o th lift mara.Vader swung his light saber suddenly in a horzantall block.Smashing a young rebels saber away the empire jumped up in the air it seemed like miles he then came smashing down just missing the rebels side with his saber.So you think you can beat me young rebel.There was no reply well shouted the lord.Suddenly and swiftly vader swang his sword at the rebel while still shouting.The empire went into a frenzy suddenly probally the silence that did it.The empire was swinging and smashing anything in his way the young rebel pushed his hood off and grabbed his saber.The rebel was blocking everyswing as the twos lightsabers collinded toghether buzzing and spiiting everything of there sabers was blowing,everything inside the saber blew
To be contined

Wrong thread dude. ;)

Reb Starblazer
08-05-2002, 02:05 PM
Well, it looks as if I'm going to have to post here again soon, show my way of lowering the number of Maul clones;) Don't worry, there'll still be plenty left for you guys to take care of, but I'm just gonna drop the number down from 2 million. As for how, you'll see:D I'll probably post it here later tonight. I warn you though, it'll be a long and sad one, as it's going to be my last...

Darklighter
08-05-2002, 02:15 PM
Hey guys:)

I had to rush my last post cos I had to go out quick. I'm gonna go back and put in more detail.

I just felt like something needed to happen quickly. I'm sorry if its a bit much...but this is only going to be a small attack, not many clones. We are going to wipe them out pretty easy, just the fear that the emperors knowing of the Academy's location will be the main concern. The story will still go on. I just wanted a little action:D Tell me if its not okay please:(

- an idea Reb, the Emperor could have followed you to the planet with the clones?...just an idea...

Darth Talliusc
08-05-2002, 03:30 PM
Talliuscs personal fighter craft exited hyperspace in a mass of vessels. "the emperors readied most of the imperial fleet for this battle" Talliusc could tell that the real attack would be a few days away at least but that didnt shake his sense of urgency. Reb hadnt responded to Talliuscs messages and this worried him. within seconds of reversion to realspace Talliusc was hailed by a traffic controller "unidentified starfighter state your designation, port of call and business" the voice droned as if he didnt really care. "i am.... a messenger from lord Talliusc to Darth Malice, it is imperative that i speak with him. im just in from Coruscant" Talliusc hoped that the traffic controller would buy it. there was no reply for almost 2 minutes and Talliusc was getting worried when a new voice came through the comm "Lord Talliusc, i told you to remain on Coruscant you have no business here. return to the capital, i will send for you when the attack begins" Talliuscs mind reeled, that voice had been the dark emperors but how had he known?... the force is strong in him. "master, i apologize for leaving Coruscant but i cannot let you destroy lord malice!" Talliuscs voice trembled with fear of his master, but this had to be done! "Lord malice? what are you talking about Talliusc?" replied the dark emperor, there was something strange about his voice. "I know everything Divine and i will not let you kill him!" Talliusc prepped his vessel for the battle that would inevitably come. "Lord malice has been working for the jedi for some time now lord Talliusc and you should remember that you work for ME! he doesnt care about you or the sith. Lord malice will be dealt with in time, i have word that hes just visited the Jedi academy on Thedonias, would a true sith cooperate with the enemy?" Talliuscs mind threatened to close in on itself. How could Reb work with the jedi? why would he turn his back on the sith? everything in Talliuscs mind came crashing down to the point where he almost lost his sanity. Talliusc reached over and shut off the comm. "i must help Reb at all costs, I owe him my life." with those words spoken softly to himself Talliuscs mind became suddenly aware of his masters pointless cruelty, as if a dark haze had left his body and he was himself again. Talliusc couldnt believe the sensation rushing through him, it was almost.... peaceful. It wasnt long before a squadron of tie defenders were upon him. the commander of the squadron hailed him "i dont want to have to do this Sir, but i have my orders. surrender or die!" came the voice of the commander. "allow me to leave peacefully and ill not fire a shot. try to prevent me from going my way and ill burn you down. i dont have time for this!" came back Talliuscs reply. The commander said nothing more but fired his lasers into Talliuscs aft shields. setting the navicomputer to auto track he plotted the coordinates for Thedonias, all the while dancing around the incoming fire. it would take several minutes to plot the most efficient course and Talliusc had 12 fighters on his tail. Talliusc tried to steer clear of most of the big ships as they would inevitably launch more fighters to assist this squadron but that tactic was proving too hazardous for Talliuscs health. throttling down and putting his ship in a hard flat turn Talliusc shot off towards the super star destroyer FleshRender. dodging around turbolasers and shield domes Talliusc tried desperately to shake his pursuit. He ducked through the shield aperature near the bridge and was pleased to see one defender bank into the wall bounce off and crash into his wingman. "two down, and only 1 minutes until im out of here" These pilots were good, but they were clones and that gave Talliusc an advantage. Reaching out with his mind Talliusc gave the fighters the impression that there was no ship they were chasing. it would have been easier just to make them crash into each other but somehow Talliusc didnt want to kill them. Flipping his comm back on as he rushed for hyperspace Talliusc quipped "Divine spirit, consider this my resignation!" and with that Talliusc was gone, bound for Thedonias where nobody knew him as a friend and he would surely die. alone and friendless.... accept for Reb, I have to find him!



thought it was over didnt you? mwhaahha!

Thedonias:

Talliuscs fighter careened out of hyperspace so close to the enemy held world that he could make out the planets mountains. "hmm, they arent firing at me or responding to my hails. have they evacuated already?" then Talliusc saw them, Divine Spirit had already launched a softening up attack. and from the looks of it the jedi had their hands full. Carefully Talliusc set his fighter down practically on the academy grounds. "this is suicide and i wont accomplish anything, but i must try. for Reb's sake" Running full out Talliusc made the academy grounds within 5 minutes and could feel the force battle taking place all over. one of the most intense spikes of power came from the lower levels. "whoevers down there is important and i have to help" wondering once again what he was doing and whether he had any allies on this planet Talliusc charged. He made his way down a set of stairs into the lower levels of the academy where he saw one of the most intense lightsaber fights of his life. the Jedi Whitedragon was engaged with a darth maul clone. and more clones were coming up from behind. Talliusc also saw obi-wan13 fighting off a darth maul and marveled at his skill with a lightsaber. Whitedragon parried the first mauls saber sweep and jutted his own Saber through the clones throat ending the battle instantly, barely pausing for a breath Whitedragon charged the next group of 3 clones. Whitedragon was good but taking on three of these clones was a suicide note. Talliusc charged forward igniting his saber and screamed with a feral fury. Whitedragon saw him and readied to fight defensively against four competitors, the thought never occured to whitedragon that Talliusc was here to help. Leaping clear over Whitedragons head Talliusc landed behind the third clone. These clones had been trained to recognize Talliusc as an ally and not attack, that was their downfall. As soon as he had one foot on the ground Talliusc was striking. one maul fell to the ground before he knew that a saber had been swung and the second didnt have much time to realize what was going on before he fell from a blow to the neck. the third clone was so startled that Whitedragon clipped his head clean from his shoulders before maul had a chance to defend himself. "what is your game sithlord?" spat whitedragon. "i am here looking for Reb starblazer. please i do not wish to fight you." came back Talliusc reply. "Lying sith, ill have your head for even speaking Rebs name" with that Whitedragon charged Talliusc and Talliusc had never had to fight so hard for his life in all the war. Dodging more then parrying Talliusc near lost his head more then once. but all of a sudden Whitedragon was launched backwards and slammed into the wall. Talliusc looked beyond Whitedragon to see obi-wan13 with his hand raised. "dragon stop, lets hear what he has to say" came the jedi leaders voice. "last person i ever thought would be saving my ass" replied Talliusc as he straightened up. "i dont trust you sithlord but i will hear you out"
"very well, Divine spirit will be launching the full invasion within days and 2 million maul clones will be at the head. i suggest you begin making preparations for them"
"we already knew that, what makes you think we should trust you" came obi-wans reply.
"because all i want is to help my friend. Reb doesnt know it but the sith are trying to kill him. i need to help him. i owe him my life" Talliusc was startled to see himself revealing this much to his enemy. but somehow obi-wan13 didnt seem like an enemy anymore.
"Reb, was here but he is gone now and we dont know where. im sorry but i cannot allow you to leave here. we will place you in the cellblock but you will not be harmed as long as you cooperate. that is the best that i can offer."
dropping his lightsaber to the ground Talliusc raised his hands and pressed the together. "very well, i will sit in your cellblock and await judgement. you are my enemy no longer"
whitedragon finally composed himself and stood up. "you're pretty handy with a saber Talliusc, for a sithlord."
Talliusc almost smiled at that jibe, it felt so different here.

later that day on thedonias.

obi-wan13 walked into the cell where Talliusc sat. "i have spoken to my advisors and we have agreed that you are too dangerous to be allowed free reign here. we have however decided to allow you prove yourself no longer Divine Spirits servant. you will tell us all that you can of Divines army and weaknesses and in turn we will provide you with food and drink. i must warn you that many of the jedi who have faced you before wish to see you dead. they blame you personally for Reb's betrayal. but i see that you count him a friend. we will do all that we can to help him but we cannot allow you to go.
"i understand" was all Talliusc said. Obi-wan13 started to walk to the door and Talliusc felt compelled to say more "and... im sorry." Obi-wan13 looked back at Talliusc and saw the genuine sorrow in Talliuscs eyes. "im sorry too" and with that Obi left the room. and Talliusc was alone with his thoughts once more.

well what does everybody think? see what i mean about you not expecting that whitedragon? and as usual if anybody has a problem with my story please PM or post here your complaints and ill do what i can to edit it. thank you for reading it and please tell me what you think.

Yom
08-05-2002, 04:00 PM
"Kit i need to get to the kitchen, so come with me, it is on the way to the cortyared" yom says as they turn the corrner in the empty coradors.

"why? this is no time for food" Kit snaps at yom.

"I know that is why i am getting something eals". he says as he runs in to the kitchen and over to the walk in frezzer. "In here" he walks in to the back and opens a panel. and pusses a few buttons. then a whole new door opens to a lil armory.

"wha? when did u have this put in" kit asks shock

"Well, when i first cam here i had it put in. just incase something like this happend" he says as he pulls down a Missile Lancher and throws it on his shoulder and a beld of Theral Detonators and gives it to Kit and then grabs him one, and a FC-1 "well grab what u whant and lets get back to work"

"ok i will take this" he says as he pulls down a Repeater mounted with a concussion launcher "lets get to work"

they walk out of the frezzer and out to the court yard were they can here Ship flying over "that is not good thing to see, they must be here" just as Kit says that an explosen god off on the eastern cortyard wall as both men take cover and take out there weapons. they perpar for a battel.

whitedragon
08-05-2002, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by Yom
[Ba Missile Lancher and throws it on his shoulder and a beld of Theral Detonators and gives it to Kit and then grabs him one, and a FC-1 "well grab what u whant and lets get back to work"

"ok i will take this" he says as he pulls down a Repeater mounted with a concussion launcher "lets get to work"

[/B]
thats some heavy stuff. just dont blow up the acadamy :D

Yom
08-05-2002, 04:34 PM
as the wall fell in. 3 Darth Maul clones walked in with sabers in hands. Yom and Kit both stood up and drew arms "i thought these were going to be clone troopers" yome said as he dros his fC- and missiel launcher, and pulls out his blasers. while kit drops his Reapeter and pulls out his 2 sabers and lights them up

"This is not going to be easy" kit says to him self as he gets in his ready stance. "i will take 1 and 2 and u take 3" then he brook out in to a charg at 2 of the clones as Yom Dashes stait to his clone shotting and the clone rflecting each blast back at yom but yom is zig zaging making it hard for the clone to hit as he starts to run back at the clone the clone force pushes yom to the side and then charges at yom but yom is quick to get up fall over agine due to another force push then the clone was on top of him with his foot on his yom's chest and

"it is time for u to meat your maker weak one" the Clone mutterd yom yom reached up the back of his aromor and grabes his saber and says

"no! it is time for u to DIE!!" then he puls it out lights it and cut the clon's leg off and gets to his feet then stabe to clone in the head "therenow that take car of that >

but mean while Kit is carging at the 2 sith attaking and defending. he pushes one clone to take some time to kill of one and then gos back to the other that was allread back on his feet in a ready stancs then as the 2 fight they go in to a saber lock and kit is starting to lose then the sith fals to the gound then ther was Yom standing ther with his blaster "i though i llend u a hand"

"well thank but next time u take on 2 and see how it feels" kit mutters whial he is out of breath. "lets go we nee to get back to obi"

then the 2 pick up there stuff and go

C'jais
08-05-2002, 04:36 PM
Originally posted by Darth Slayne


Don't get me wrong, but...

Easy there mate! This isn't about how good they are at writing its about having fun! I'll have you know that I happen to be quite proud of all the writers here. Why, you ask? Because they have the guts to TRY.

Three chears to all academy members! Both Sith and Jedi!

Hey hey, I didn't get you wrong matey, but I think I need to be more clear this time....

I have no problem with your thread/story and I encourage this sort of creativity....

It's just.... It's just that I have.... *Issues*, with fanfic in general. Trust me, I've been there myself, and hopefully you and the rest of you guys aren't including any guys from the SW-storyline (haven't read the whole thing though...).

*lol* - look at grumpy old me now! Anyway, get on with your story and ignore me for now... I'll go out and hunt the truly dangerous fanfic writers myself....

whitedragon
08-05-2002, 04:41 PM
great job talliusc

Yom
08-05-2002, 05:39 PM
Your Turn Mr. White Sir.

Kit fisto JK
08-05-2002, 06:41 PM
Yom and kit ran to the main building to get to obi dodging explosions all the way there. when they got to the main building they saw a maul clone with 2 clone troopers sitting there waiting for them "you ge...."Yom started but was cut off by kit " I know " they charged the 3 yom pulled out kits repeater and quickly took down the two clones "yom go ahead Ill catch up when im done here "kit said while in a saber lock with the maul clone "right"yom replied and headed off to the lower levelsthe fight with kit and the clone didnt last much longer when finaly kit cut the maul in 2 and started to head in the direction of the lower levels.

when kit found the 3 standing there next to 2 dead mauls "obi dragon the battles going on up the...."kit was saying when all the suden 4 duel sabers ignited around them "um let me take that back it is now down here"kit said when the 4 started to attack them. and yom not being a jedi jumped out of the way trying to take them out from a distance when he heard the elivator start up he turned around to see a dozen clone troopers come out "****"he said firing at them with every thing when 2 more maul clones came out from behind and went to battle the jedi after taking out the clone troopers he turned around and there where 4 mauls still there so he started to fire again when he heard the elivator going again "now what" he turned around and saw dissectional and another padawan come out and start running into battle after about 3 min with the aditional help all the clones where dead.

now someone elses turn :D

Dath Maximus
08-05-2002, 06:47 PM
i just got back from a tortures day of agony at band camp and am too tired to write, so if anyone wants they can write how i am leading the clones of maul into battle.

go me....oww.

Yom
08-05-2002, 10:46 PM
As the 6 stand there in there ready stance and ready for the next wave. If there is going to be a next wave. But then Obi gets a com signal “sir. We have reports say the Camus and his clone have been shot down over near the mountains….”

Yom says “damn it” and runs to the hanger bay to help his friend

“No, Yom” obi Yells

Then White tells “let him go, let him do what he can, let him get us some intel” then obi stops and starts to talk to the others.

Yom Runs though the corridors to get to the hanger bay so that he can go help his friend he get on his Swoop bike and rides off to were Camus landed “I am coming buddy don’t worry” he says to him self ass he steps on the throttle. As he gets closer the sun starts to fall and black ness is a pond but then storms start to roll in and it rains, and it rains hard, by the time he is 500 yard away from the crash but he can hardly see in front of him . but he can make out 2 men on there knees with there hands behind there back and clone troopers surrounding them with there gun pointed at the two men.


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Mean While

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Camus and his clone sit there on ther knees with here hands behind there back at gunpoint. And a officer standing asking questions “what are the Defenses like to the academy?”

“I won’t tell u. They will be here soon to kill u” Camus said

“how about” the officers shoots to shots in to Camus 2 head “tell me now are u will look like him”

“Nooooooo! Never” Camus cries out “ I will never tell u! damn u!”

as the officer raises his gun and 2 blaster bolts go right to his head and he flies 4 feet to his left and then to the ground.. and there are more blasters shots every were, like a storm of blaster fire. Then it was calm nothing. By now Camus was in the mud in a ball hoping he would not get hit and then he herd.

“It is all right Camus u should be fine now” then he realized it was Yom

“Thank the force u came” Camus said “ but u did not come in time to save him”

“ I came over the hill I saw him get shot. I am sorry there was nothing I could do,” he says as he unties his hand then there was a crash of lightning fallowed by the roar of thunder. Then the 2 men get what they can and stand in the mud with the down pore of rain.

Darth Slayne
08-05-2002, 11:41 PM
Originally posted by Darklighter

- an idea Reb, the Emperor could have followed you to the planet with the clones?...just an idea...

That or Darth Slayne could track Reb down. After all, espionage and surveillance are his specialty. Only a suggestion...;)

P.S. Sorry Cjais, I didn't intend to jump down your throat if thats what you think I was up to. Its just that you weren't too clear in your first post and it looked like you were poking fun. Message recieved and understood. Peace. :)

Yom
08-06-2002, 05:47 PM
ok guys and gals lets not let this tread die we must keep up the good work w must finish the story and...and...and...BUMP

Darth Talliusc
08-06-2002, 09:53 PM
i dont think its my place to wright next, maybe divine spirit or obi-wan13. hey maybe Reb would like a run at it again? come on people this is too interesting to die, keep the stories coming grrrr.

whitedragon
08-06-2002, 10:36 PM
hi guys sorry i havent been on all day. i just bought JKI from a friend and ive been playing it all day :D

Yom
08-06-2002, 10:57 PM
it is ok white it has been down any way all day

Reb Starblazer
08-06-2002, 11:49 PM
Malice’s Interceptor blasted out of Hyperspace above the planet Angmar. He set the craft down near his destination, then got out. He looked up at the darkening sky, fully expecting it to rain soon, then started walking soon reaching a large crater. He stood on the edge, and stared down, seeing the grand temple at the bottom. “This is it” he thought to himself. “No more running from destiny”. He jumped off the edge, and used the Force and his cape to slow his descent. He touched down at the bottom of the crater, and walked slowly towards the Ancient Sith Temple. While this was a temple that no one really wanted to enter, he was sure that it would still be well protected.

He entered, and looked around in the pale light in the temple. The Dark side emanated strongly from here, and for good reason. This was the resting place of The Ring of the Sith, an ancient and dangerous artifact, even more powerful than the Sith Amulets. Created long ago, it was designed to give the wielder unimaginable power in the Dark side of the Force. However, it worked too well. This temple was built in the crater that was made when the creator of the Ring first wore it. His body could not withstand the massive amount of dark energy coursing through him, and the resulting explosion of Dark side energy destroyed him, and carved this crater. The temple had been built here in warning, and the ring was placed inside, for no one was foolish enough to use it again. That, was 2000 years ago, and the ring had lain dormant. Until now.

Malice walked deeper and deeper into the temple, letting the Force guide him towards the Ring. It had a unique Dark Side presence, but it wasn’t overwhelming. This worked well for him. It would be masked by his own presence when he gained possession of it. He only wished that finding his way out of the temple would be as easy as finding his way to the Ring. He came to a large, open room. There were many torches lighting this room, burning for millennia, fueled by Dark Side magic. At the end of the room, on a pedestal, was the Ring of the Sith. He began walking towards the ring, when he suddenly stopped. Something wasn’t quite right. Sith temples were normally well protected, but he hadn’t encountered any resistance yet. However every fiber of his being told him something was wrong, and something very, very bad was about to happen.

The growl was quite loud, and echoed off the walls of the large room. Malice turned around, to see ten Vornskr’s, saliva dripping from their mouths, staring straight at him. For some reason though, this didn’t scare him. The fact that the Vornskrs were slowly backing away is what scared him, for he knew that they weren’t afraid of him. He then heard a loud ‘thud’, followed by another, and another. The Vornskrs turned and ran off into the shadows. Malice then turned around, and saw what it was they were afraid of.

“Oh Sith…” Malice spoke as the large Rancor emerged from a darkened passageway. It let out a deafening roar, and then began to advance towards Malice. “I’ve got a bad feeling about this…” Malice said, igniting his Lightsabres. He rolled to the side as one of the Rancor’s massive hands swiped at him. He took a swing with one of his Lightsabres, and caught one of its claws. The creature howled in pain, and then tried to step on him. Malice jumped back and took a swing at its arm, cutting it off. The creature howled and swatted at him with it’s remaining arm, this time catching him. He was sent flying through the air crashing into a support pillar. He slowly got to his feet, as the Rancor charged towards him. He dived to the side, and watched the monster crash into the stone pillar, breaking it in two. He re-ignited his Lightsabres, and threw one at the Rancor’s leg, severing it from its body. It fell on its side, and began crawling towards Malice. He backed off, knowing full well that even in this condition, the Rancor could still kill him. The only time a Rancor wasn’t dangerous, was when it was dead.

He ran towards the pedestal, and snatched the Ring. He stood, staring at it in his hands. It took every ounce of his willpower to not put it on, the sheer power of the Dark side called out to him. He put the ring into a secret pocket of his pants, and then turned. He saw glowing red eyes in every darkened corner of the room, and the Rancor crawling closer and closer towards him. He ran, then used the Force to jump over the Rancor, while pulling his thrown Lightsabre from the ground to him. He continued to run for the exit of the room, and saw Vornskr’s begin to slowly walk out of the shadows. They kept walking, totally ignoring Malice, and heading for the fallen Rancor. The canine-like creatures hated Force users, and normally went out of their way to kill them, so for them to ignore him and head straight for the Rancor, they must have been very hungry. Or very angry. Rancors, being so large, needed a lot of food, and Malice could only imagine what it had been living on. He continued to run, making his way to the exit of the temple, all the while hearing the Rancor’s tortured howls as it became the Vornskr’s next meal.

He finally exited the temple, to find himself in a downpour of rain. The sky opened up as bursts of lightning crackled through the air, and thunder boomed. He heard yelps and growls of Vornskrs, not far behind him. Apparently they weren’t satisfied with their last meal, and were looking for dessert. Malice ran full out for the slope of the crater, and leaped, using the Force to propel him halfway up the crater walls. He then jumped again, and made it even farther, digging his hands and feet into the rain soaked terrain, trying to not fall back down into the jaws of death nipping at his heels. The Vornskrs, charged up the crater wall, howling and snarling, desperately trying to get a taste of Force sensitive flesh. Malice took one last leap, and gripped the top edge of the crater with one hand, then looked down, to see that his last jump had set the loose soil free, and it tumbled down, landing on the Vornskrs, sending them back to the base of the crater. He gripped the edge with his other hand, and pulled himself up, and looked back down at the Vornskrs. He was safe for now. He turned around and started walking back towards his ship only to see another disturbing sight.

In front of him were six dark figures, all gripping Lightsabres. “Must be my lucky day…” Malice said to himself.

“Darth Malice I presume. How rude of you to keep us waiting in the rain for you.” One of the figures said.

“Sorry, manners were never my strong point.” Malice said as he pushed his rain drenched hair out of his face.

“Ah, defiant to the last. My master would prefer you be taken alive. Well, barely alive, but I think I’ll enjoy killing you too much.”

“We’ll see who’s dead and who’s still standing by the end of this.” Said Malice, as he connected his two Lightsabres, and then ignited each end. The six figures ignited each of their red Lightsabres. “ You wanna kill me? Come and try! ” Malice said as he stood his ground staring at the figures. Two of the Dark Jedi charged at him, and he blocked each of their attacks with an end of his Lightsabre. He twisted his Lightsabre, which pushed the attackers Lightsabres back. One tried to attack him from behind, so he shifted his body, and blocked. He spun, in the opposite direction, and sliced the Dark Jedi in half across the midsection. “One down, five to go” Malice thought. He blocked another attack, and another, jumping, spinning, dodging, all while trying to attack and defend at the same time. He blocked two attacks, but one from another Dark Jedi just caught him across the right shoulder. He pushed off these two, and then swung at the one who had just injured him. The Dark Jedi blocked his attack, and another one attacked Malice. He moved his Lightsabre to block, but not before the tip of the attackers Lightsabre singed his lower left leg.

“What’s the matter Starblazer?” the same voice said mockingly. “Did that hurt? Can’t handle a few Dark Jedi? Don’t worry, it’ll all be over soon, and then you’ll have failed your friends completely. Oh, you didn’t know… we’ve been following you since Nar Shaddaa, you lead us straight to the Jedi Academy. The Emperor only believed they were on Thedonias, but once we followed you there, we were sure that was their location. Your attempts to save your friends, is what has ultimately sealed their fates. Give it up Starblazer, I promise your death won’t hurt…much.”

Anger swelled in Malice, and he attacked with a new fury. He was no longer on the defensive, now he was the aggressor. He struck and struck, defended when necessary, and not even noticing when a Lightsabre blow glanced of an arm or leg. Another Dark Jedi fell from the wrath of Malice’s Lightsabre, and another. There were just two left now. One raised his Lightsabre over his head and charged at Malice. Malice used the Force to push the running Dark Jedi backwards. He flew through the air, and was impaled on the final Dark Jedi’s ignited Lightsabre. He then fell to the ground, the blade slicing him in two.

“ I guess you’re next” Malice said as he stood there, his Lightsabre ignited, hissing and crackling as rain drops fell on the beam. Malice was drenched from the rain, slashes in his clothing, burns on his arms and legs, but he wasn’t finished yet. “ Let’s see how well you do without your friends.” The Dark Jedi ran at Malice, and attacked. Block to parry, attack, block, a continuous cycle, and every movement was life or death. Malice then saw his opening, and he took it. He parried and then spun on his heel. The blade of the Lightsabre severed the neck of the final Dark Jedi, sending his head tumbling through the air. “I hope that didn’t hurt…much” Malice said while extinguishing his Lightsabre blades. Still, something didn’t feel right. There was another presence here, a darker one…

Then everything went black for Malice as Darth Slayne struck him in base of the neck with the bottom of his Lightsabre. “The Emperor said he wanted him alive if possible, but you had to try and get some glory.” Slayne said to the decapitated body. “Well, at least you distracted him long enough for me to sneak up on him.” Darth Slayne then picked up Malice’s unconscious body and slung him over his shoulder. He took Malice’s Lightsabre and clipped it onto another spot on his own belt. He wouldn’t be needing it again. Slayne turned and walked to the waiting Stygian Wraith.




Malice awoke in a cell, with a pounding headache. He looked around, and ascertained his position. He knew he was on an Imperial ship, probably a Star Destroyer, but he wasn’t sure which one. He stood up, and walked to the cell door. There wasn’t even a guard around. He sat down on the bench and took off his right boot. He stretched out with the Force and used it to activate the hidden button inside the boot. The sole of the boot fell off, and inside the hollow chamber was a Lightsabre. “I knew that would come in handy sometime” Malice said as he smiled to himself. He replaced the sole, and then put the boot back on. He ignited his Lightsabre, and an orange blade sprang out. He slashed through the cell door, turned off his blade and exited his prison. He walked over to a computer terminal, and accessed some files. He was on the FleshRender, the Emperor’s personal Super Star Destroyer. He checked in the secret pocket, and yes, the ring was still there. This was his chance. He had planned on confronting the Emperor, but couldn’t think of an excuse to go to, or an easy way to sneak aboard, the FleshRender. This couldn’t have worked out better if he had planned it. He would make his way to the Emperors throne room on this ship, but first, he had to find the weapons locker, and a Holo-projector…



“ The small number of clones that we sent down to the planet performed most excellently Master” Darth Dominance said to the Emperor. “When we send down our full strike force, the Jedi will be overwhelmed. They will be no match for them, and they shall fall.”

“Good, good. Lord Slayne, what of Starblazer?”

“I placed him in a holding cell. He should be unconscious for another while yet master. I took his Lightsabre, that was the only weapon he had on him.”

“Excellent. Bring him here. He will stand by my side and watch as his friends are destroyed. He will feel the wrath of the Dark Side, and he will join us… or he will die.” Divine Spirit said as an evil smile spread across his face.

“Yes master.” Darth Slayne said as he bowed. He then turned and began walking towards the door. As the soon as the door opened, Darth Slayne was knocked backwards. Standing in the doorway was Darth Malice, his leg still in the air from side kicking Slayne. Malice then walked in, past Slayne as he was getting up. All the Sith lords were in the throne room, and each ignited their Lightsabre.

“No, put away your weapons. I shall handle this personally.” Divine Spirit said rising from his throne. Each Sith extinguished their Lightsabre and replaced it on their belts. Divine Spirit began walking towards Malice, his hand reaching for his Lightsabre. “I’ve suspected your treachery since the beginning Starblazer. And it seems to have spread. Lord Talliusc appears to have sided with the Jedi. The poor fool. He will be destroyed, as will you and your friends.”

Talliusc had left? He was now with the Jedi. That was excellent, Malice thought to himself. At least he’ll survive this.
“Not if I can help it. I’ve come here to finish this Divine, right here, and right now. Only one of us walks away.” Said Malice as he and the Emperor circled each other, glaring.

So, you’ve come to face me have you? You’re brave boy, I’ll give you that. But ultimately foolish. Of all the time that you’ve spent with us, you have yet to see the full extent of my power”

“And you have yet to see mine.” Said Malice as he unhooked his Lightsabre from his belt.

“What a pity. You had such potential Starblazer, it’s such a waste for you to throw it all away for a group of fools that will never truly accept you. You’re a Sith, like me. Like all of us. Join us Starblazer, give yourself fully to the ways of the Sith, become one of my allies.”

“Ally? You mean cower in front of you and lick your boots? Stand idly by and watch as you massacre the Jedi and enslave the galaxy? No thanks. I’d much rather die on my feet than live on my knees.” Malice said while igniting his orange Lightsabre.

“Then die you shall Starblazer.” Yelled the Emperor as he ignited his crimson blade and swung at Malice, who blocked the attempt. Malice counter attacked, which was met with a parry, followed by a block. The two Sith battled each other back and forth for what seemed like an eternity, but was actually only a few minutes. Neither gained ground, neither was willing to lose it. Suddenly, Divine Spirit parried with all his strength, and flicked his wrists, knocking the Lightsabre from Malice’s hand. He then swung down and severed Malice’s right leg, below the kneecap. Malice wouldn’t acknowledge the pain though, he wouldn’t give the Emperor the pleasure. Divine Spirit then used the Force to throw Malice backwards into a wall. As he lay on the ground, the Emperor threw Malice across the room into another wall, and then another, and another. Malice landed on the floor, bruised and bleeding as the Emperor slowly walked up to him, and then leaned down just inches in front of Malice’s face.

“You’re no match for me you fool, my power is far beyond yours. You will now meet your end, as will your friends. Any final words Starblazer?” Divine Spirit said as he stood and readied his Lightsabre for the killing blow.

“Yea…” said Malice as he reached behind his back and pulled out a remote detonator.
“See you in hell” Malice pressed the button on the detonator and the ship rocked with explosions.

“How could this have happened?” The Emperor, lying on the floor, yelled at Darth Slayne.

“I don’t know sir, I locked him in that cell myself.” Slayne answered, while getting to his feet. Malice grabbed onto a piece of machinery and pulled himself up. He steadied himself on his remaining leg, wiped the blood from his mouth and started to laugh.

“Yes, but I escaped. I went to the weapons locker and grabbed some remote mines. Seeing as you don’t often inform your slaves of what's going on, they found nothing strange about me walking around the engineering section, and tossing the occasional mine around when they weren’t looking. Face it Divine, that’s the trouble with clones. They may be loyal, they may be easily expendable, but they just aren’t very smart” Malice said once he stopped laughing. But something wasn’t right. The Super Star Destroyer should have exploded by now however. The chain reaction hadn’t occurred. That was when a voice came over the Comm.

“Warning, drive system failure. Planetary collision in 220 seconds.” Malice knew what this could mean, and he slipped the Sith Ring onto the ring finger of his left hand. He looked down sadly at it, for this is where his wedding band should have been placed long ago. Malice could feel the Dark side energy begin to course through his very being, and he knew what was to come next.

An evil grin crossed the Emperor’s face. “How simply ironic. In your attempts to destroy me, you’ve doomed your friends. This ship will fall right on top of your precious academy, wiping out all the Jedi in one quick strike. I couldn’t have planned it better myself. Why, what’s a ship worth compared to annihilating the Jedi?” The Emperor laughed evilly. “Come, to the shuttle bay. Let’s leave Starblazer to go down with the ship. I don’t think he’ll be going anywhere.” The Emperor said as he left the room, all the Sith Lords following him.

“Planetary collision in 140 seconds.” Echoed over the Comm.

“With this ring, I’m the most powerful being in the galaxy. Even the Emperor would bow before me. I should just leave, forget these foolish Jedi, and claim my place as this galaxy’s God.” Malice thought to himself. Then he realized the kind of thoughts he was having, he was under the influence of the Dark Side. No, he would not be like the others, he would not be like his master Darth Talon, power hungry and evil. He would take the ultimate power of the Dark Side, and use it to save the light. The irony of the situation was not lost on Malice, as he grinned, and intensified the Dark energy within him, using it to levitate himself. He built up more and more energy, watched as the bolts shot into the floor below him, spreading into the ship. If he could focus all the energy quickly enough, he may even be able to take all the Sith to hell with him, like he originally planned. If not, he’d have to settle for killing a million Maul clones. One way or the other, he was not going out alone.

“Planetary collision in 90 seconds.” The Comm echoed again.

“This is it” Malice thought to himself. “No more running. I’m sorry Kylaa, but this must be done..." Malice said aloud. "For the Academy!" He yelled as the energy became stronger and stronger, as his words echoed throughout the falling ship.





“By the Force! Everyone, get to your ships! Evacuate, evacuate!” Obi-Wan yelled while staring at the night sky. He had seen the large explosion rock the aft end of the Super Star Destroyer, and watched as it had begun its descent towards the planet. The Emperor’s first wave of clones had been easily dispatched, and the Jedi had returned to the academy in order to prepare for the next attack. But he hadn’t expected this. Obi-Wan began running towards the space craft bay, not wanting to be caught on the ground when that Super Star Destroyer touched down. Obi-Wan had made it to just outside the hangar when he looked up again at the sky. The FleshRender’s hull was glowing red, but it couldn’t have already entered the atmosphere. Obi-Wan looked harder, this was a different kind of glow. It almost looked as if sparks and streaks of energy were moving around the gigantic vessel. This was not natural, and all of Obi-Wan’s Force abilities were not needed to tell him that. There was something else at work, and Obi-Wan could feel a tremendous Dark Side presence. He’d never felt such power in his entire life. Was it the Emperor? The energy intensified, and the ship glowed an even deeper red. Then suddenly, the huge ship exploded long before it made it near the planet. Obi-Wan felt a large disturbance in the Force and an overwhelming feeling of pain, suffering, and death struck him. The Dark Side presence he had felt before was now gone. A loud cheer spread over the Academy grounds and Obi-Wan sighed in relief. The crisis had been averted, but how and why, that was what worried him.

“Master Obi-Wan.” Said Darklighter over Obi-Wan’s Comm unit. “We’ve received a holo-message. It came from the Super Star Destroyer, before it exploded.”

“I’ll be there in a moment.” Obi-Wan said, then turned and started his jog towards the command centre.

Upon entering, he saw the higher ranking officers all crowded around. “It’s addressed to you sir, we didn’t want to play it without you here.” Said Darklighter, as he activated the Holo-message. A blue image formed and then took shape.

“Reb…” Said Obi-Wan

“Greetings Master Kenobi. By the time you receive this message, I expect that I’ll be dead. I plan to confront Divine Spirit, and hopefully defeat him.” The hologram said as Obi Wan tried to hide his surprise. “If this happens, I’ll claim the title of Emperor, and dissolve the Galactic Empire, once and for all. Should this fail, I have planted remote mines in the engineering section of an above Super Star Destroyer, in hope that it will cause a chain reaction, destroying it and all the Sith on it, myself included. There are also approximately 1 million Maul clones on this vessel, which would also be destroyed. Should this plan fail, I have the Ring of the Sith, which I could use to become even more powerful than the Emperor himself. This is my last resort, and I shall only use it if it becomes absolutely necessary. Absolute power corrupts absolutely, and we don’t need another Divine Spirit running around do we? These are my plans and fail safes. You always told me to plan for the worst and hope for the best Obi-Wan.” Obi-Wan tried to hide his smile at his friends attempt at humor despite the seriousness of the situation.

“As I’m already dead, I have something to ask of you Obi. Please, give the locket to Kylaa if you ever see her again. Tell her, that I’ve told her I loved her more times than I can count, but I’ve never once told her that I’m sorry. So please, tell her that I’m sorry Obi-Wan. Tell her what I’ve done, and try to explain to her why I did it. And don’t gloss it over Obi, I know you too well. Tell her and anyone else who asks my story. Tell it true, my sins and all, and let me judged accordingly. I told you that I was willing to pay for my crimes Obi-Wan, and my debt will be paid in blood. But don’t mourn me, as I am no greater than anyone else who has died for the Academy. There is nothing you can do to save me, or to stop me. We all have our paths to follow, mine was just a shorter one than yours. Remember what you told me Obi-Wan, a part of your Jedi Code, 'There is no death, there is the Force'. I’ll see you on the other side my friend.” The Hologram stood at attention, and then gave a salute. “ Mission accomplished sir. Lieutenant Starblazer… over and out.” With that, the hologram faded away into nothing.


“He’s… he’s gone.” Darklighter said. “That’s what that explosion was?”

“Yes, I’m afraid so. I felt an enormous Dark side presence. It could only have been Reb wearing the ring. He must have focused all of his energy inwards, destroying himself and the ship. I also felt the deaths of the clones, but I fear that Divine Spirit and the others escaped.“ Obi-Wan said, shaken back to reality by Darklighter’s question.

“Well, at least we finally know whose side he was on.” Tyrion said sadly.

“He lived the life of a Sith, but died the death of a Jedi. Giving his life in the protection of others. May you find the peace in death that you searced for in life my friend.” Obi-Wan said, bowing his head. Everyone filed out of the room, leaving only Darklighter and Obi-wan.

“It’s such a shame. He went up there, ready to give his life in order to end this war, and yet, the Emperor and all the Sith are still alive. Why did he do it? Reb ended up dieing for nothing, his sacrifice was meaningless.” Darklighter said quietly. He had not known Reb very long or very well, but he had grown to trust and respect him.

Obi-Wan sat in a chair, staring at the locket that once belonged to his friend. He thought back to the day the holo-image of the three of them had been taken. He thought of the past year of war, and the days that were to come. Then finally, after a few moments of silence, he spoke.

“No my young friend. No one dies for nothing, and no sacrifice is meaningless as long you die for what you believe in. There was close to a million clones on that Super Star Destroyer. That could very well be the deciding factor in this war. Reb was not the first to die for our cause, nor will he be the last. But he’ll live on, with all of us, as long as you remember who he was, and what he died for. Reb had said he intended on paying for his crimes with his life, and that was his choice. However, Reb’s debt was paid long ago.” Obi-Wan said, and a broad smile crossed his face as he remembered his fallen friend. “That was just his way of leaving a tip.”

Darth Slayne
08-07-2002, 01:37 AM
Nice work Reb. I have a question or two, be sure to check your PM's. I'm currently trying to compile all of the stories here so I can make some sense of where most of the characters are at this point in time.

Darth Slayne
08-07-2002, 02:20 AM
Ooh......Heck! Eh, disregard that PM Reb (exept the shuttle part). Hadn't realised you were writing at the time...

Reb Starblazer
08-07-2002, 02:27 AM
Heh that's alright. I haven't gotten it yet though, so that's strange...
Anyways, I've managed to clear up the whole "2 million clones" thing. I must say, it was a wonderful idea on Shadow Angel's part, so I didn't want to see it go to waste. I figured I'd just round the clones down to an even million, even if it was a roundabout way of doing so:D

Darth Slayne
08-07-2002, 02:35 AM
In case you are unable to read that PM (Reb), I will just say that Darth Slayne would have used the Stygian Wraith as opposed to a shuttle. I'ts an insecurity thing...;)

Darth Slayne
08-07-2002, 09:18 AM
All right! My first storie for this thread. *big intake of air*



The battered Stygian Wraith hurtled through space like a wounded wamp rat. She had been unfortunate to have gotten caught in the blast radius as the dying Super Star Destroyer, FleshRender, exploded within Thedonias’ atmosphere. The battle had taken a turn for the worse, and all around X-wings, A-wings and the occasional B-wing battled a multitude of Tie fighters in a dazzling display of blaster fire. Darth Slayne had done all he could to see to it that the Emperor had made it safely into hyperspace. Many a brave pilot died never knowing that a ghostly black ship had gotten in on their six o’clock. The Stygian Wraith’s automated turrets had fired almost continually since entering the battle, spewing out red blaster bolts as fast as any hand held repeater rifle. But the damage from the capital ship’s dramatic demise had taken its toll on Slayne’s stricken vessel, and now she plummeted toward the desert planet’s atmosphere.
Darth Slayne fought the controls as he looked once again at the screen displaying the ships status:
Hull structure…………………………80%
Deflector shield integrity……………..20%
Automated turrets…………………….90%
Hyper drive……………………….Off Line
Lateral thrusters…………………..Off Line
Port engine……………………………10%
Starboard engine……………………...60%
Repulser lifts………………………….35%
Primary sensors……………………….95%
Scrambling system………………..Nominal
Automated repair systems………...Nominal
Remote piloting systems………….Nominal

The list went on, and it looked bad. With the damage his ship had sustained, there was no way he was going to reach a safe distance in order to power down and wait for the auto-repair systems to bring the hyper drive back on line. To top it all off the Jedi had deployed the main bulk of their fleet and were systematically destroying the Emperor’s scattered forces. His only other option was to ditch the Wraith on the planet surface and give her some time to lick her wounds. Unfortunately he would have to land in the very heart of enemy held territory.
The Stygian Wraith shook violently as she was buffeted by the atmospheric conditions of Thedonias, making it near on impossible for Slayne to maintain control of his downward plight. Then just when he was beginning to think he would spin out of control, his faithful ship broke through to calmer skies, and it almost seemed as though the Wraith had sighed with relief.
Darth Slayne looked out at the night darkened desert expanse before him, and hoped that there weren’t any obstructions on the sandy floor to prevent his forced landing. He reached out with the force and scanned the night-shrouded terrain, and when he had found a sufficiently clear area, he struggled with his beloved ships controls until it touched down with enough force to throw him from his seat. After regaining his composure, he powered down all systems save for the scrambling device and the auto-repair equipment. He knew that come daylight, his ship would stand out in the desert like a banther among a group of Jawas. But it would not take that long for the hyper drive to repair, so he need only hide until then. Proper repairs would have to wait.
Seeing that there was little else he could do, Slayne left the cockpit and made for his private cabin. Along the way he passed various little droids that were hard at work making repairs to one system or another, but he payed scant attention to the them for the most part. Once in his cabin, he sat upon the floor and meditated upon recent events. Until now he had served his master, Darth Kaan well. He remembered his initial shock at hearing the man’s name for the first time, thinking for just a brief moment that the Emperor had resurrected the Dark lord of the Sith from ages past. But this new Lord Kaan was not the legendary leader of the Sith armies that fell on the sacred plains of Russan, over two thousand years ago. The only similarity they shared was in name only. Yes, he had served his master well. He had tracked the traitorous Darth Malice down. Had followed the fool to this very planet. It was he, Darth Slayne, that had confirmed the hidden location of the Jedi academy. The Emperor and Master Kaan were well pleased with his success, and even more pleased when he had brought the traitor in for justice. Darth Slayne frowned. He could not have known that the venomous Lord Malice would prove to be the undoing of this most crucial attack. But that was over with now, and the traitor had died aboard the FleshRender when it exploded. Slayne made an oath with himself. He swore that he would take no chances should he be required to capture another Jedi. Already some dark solutions were presenting themselves.
And then he felt it; a familiar presence. Slayne reached out with the force, probing, searching, scrutinising, until he found it. It was Lord Talliusc. He was being held prisoner within the confines of the Jedi academy. Slayne cursed. So much for remaining hidden, the Emperor would not be pleased if he learned that he, Darth Slayne, had left a Sith Master to the mercy of the foul Jedi. Angry now, he rose to his feet and left his cabin, making for the cargo bay at the rear of the ship. Once there, he mounted his Sith speeder bike and blasted out into the cold night air the moment the bay door had opened. Coming to an abrupt halt, he turned to face the Stygian Wraith just as the cargo bay door resealed itself, and summoned the power of the Force. Within a few short moments his prized ship was buried under a mountain of sand, hidden from view with the naked eye, and safe from the probing scans of technology. Once more he hit the accelerator and speed off into the desert, letting the force be his guide.
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Darklighter looked up at the night sky and shivered due to the cold of the desert night. It would be dawn in a few hours, and still the debris from the Super Star Destroyer fell from space, causing thousands of tiny streaks of light to plunge through the atmosphere. It reminded him of a beautiful display of falling stars he had seen once when he was a boy. Of course, everyone knew that they were only meteor showers, but he preferred the more romantic term for them; falling stars. But now he looked up and wondered, for tonight there was nothing romantic about the display. That beauty was stolen by the fact that a great deal of lives had been lost. One life in particular. Fallen stars more like, he found himself thinking. Once more he shivered, and then he changed his mind. Perhaps there was romance in the display after all. Reb Starblazer had given his life to save the very people that counted him among the enemy, nothing could have been more noble.
He closed his eyes and sent his will flowing into the serenity that was the force. “Farewell Reb Starblazer.” He whispered. “Jedi Knight and martyr to all that is good.”
But if he expected a reply, it never came. Darklighter reluctantly withdrew his questing mind, and when he did so, a vision came to him unannounced…

…Darklighter stared into the red-yellow eyes of the man who had just killed him. He never could have imagined the shear pain he felt now, as the crimson red saber burned deep within his chest…
…and then a small green figure stood before him and spoke. “Always in motion, is the future.”…

And then the image passed and Darklighter could hear the lingering sound of a woman’s voice. “Beware good Jedi…for even now, he comes…..”
For a long while he stood there in stunned disbelief. What had the vision meant? Would he die, another victim of this war? And just what did the pointy eared creature mean when he stated that the future was always in motion? He almost jumped out of his skin when a hand gently rested on his shoulder. He spun to face his friend, Obi Wan13, and noted the look on his face.
“You felt it too, didn’t you?” Darklighter asked.
“I did indeed my friend.” Obi wan replied.
“But what does it mean? Who is this person that comes even now?”
“It’s the same presence I felt back when we were based on the forest planet.” Obi Wan said. “The one that discovered us and fled.”
“Then we must stop him.” Darklighter mused. “My feelings tell me that that’s what the woman was trying to say. I wonder who she was.”
Obi Wan stood for a moment in thought. “I feel certain that she was once a Jedi. She had all the hallmarks of one. We should do as she warned. Assemble a task force my friend and lets go see what we can find.”
“At once.” With that, Darklighter turned and headed back into the hidden academy.

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The cloud of dust dissipated and Darth Slayne stood in the warm desert dawn, his macro binoculars raised to his eyes. Briefly he scanned the horizon in search of the academy’s hidden entrance, but he couldn’t find any evidence of its existence. The force had guided him this far, and he knew that he was close, but there was something else. Something did not feel right. Funny, he found himself wondering. Did he not get this same feeling from the traitor Malice right before he sprung his trap? Instantly Slayne dropped the binoculars and ignited his lightsabers, crouching into a ready stance. But the trap was already sprung as figures leapt up from out of the very sand to encircle him. The snap-hiss of a multitude of sabers told him he was in some very deep bantha poodo. He knew that he was vastly outmatched so he stood there and seethed at the one Jedi that stepped forward, a light blue saber in his grasp.
“I wouldn’t try anything if I were you.” Obi Wan said calmly. “You may as well give it up, you’ve lost this encounter.”
Slayne stared with absolute hatred at the man, but disengaged his sabers and dropped them into the sand. One of the Jedi, armed with a white saber, pulled the lifeless hilts with the force, skilfully catching them one at a time before securing them to his belt.
“That’s more like it.” Obi wan said with a grin. “You see, even a Sith can be reasonable when he wants to.”
“You will die for this.” Slayne Spat, then looked directly at Darklighter. “I have foreseen it!”
“Why do they always say that?” Obi Wan asked nobody in particular. Then his face turned deadly serious. “Name! Rank!”
“Darth Slayne.” The sith answered with a bored tone. “Apprentice in the Sith academy.”
“You’re a little out of your league here, apprentice.” Obi Wan used that last word as a barb. “How did you get here and what is your purpose!”
“I caught a ride on a half drunk Mynoch, so I could sell Jedi scout tid-bits to unsuspecting home owners!”
“I see.” Obi Wan said flatly “So, its the funny man routine is it? Cuff him men, and lets bring him in for questioning.”
A pair of binders were placed roughly about his wrists and he was rudely shoved toward the hidden transport that lay buried no too far away. Slayne noted that one of the Jedi had confiscated his Sith speeder a moment before he was bundled unceremoniously into the transport.
Not too long after he was placed in a holding cell deep within the academy. He could sense Lord Talliusc nearby and reached out to him with the force. What he felt from the man was strange…


EDIT: After all that I think next story should be from the Jedi perspective(Really, you don't say...). :pout1: Darklighter, about what I wrote concerning your character. Worry not, all will be made clear much later on. I will speak with you about this when the time comes. :angel:

Darth Talliusc
08-07-2002, 01:58 PM
WOW, thats the only word that comes close to describing the story swarm of the recent day or two. I've thought up some directions that Talliuscs story could take but i agree with Slayne that the next part of the story should be from the jedi perspective so i will wait. and excellent story Slayne, very nice attention to detail. it was truly a pleasure to read (especially the part where you mentioned me and the SSD that i named fleshrender) im hoping that obi-wan13 will make an addition to this thread sometime soon, hes been rather quit of late. well keep up the stories everyone.

Camus
08-07-2002, 02:04 PM
Camus picked up his dead clone and walked to his ship. He put his clone into his seat and grabed both the guns. Camus held a reapeter in one hand and a concution rifle in the other hand. The two men walked over to the swoop as the rain pord down on them really hard and fast. Camus looked at the bike. "The converter is wet. This thing wont work tell its dry." Right then Camus turned around and shot a concution blast right at the bwing blowing what was left away. "If they had cheaked the records on that they wouldnt have need to intaraget me and my clone. Im just doing the final honors of my clone and distroying what little info they could have used." Camus then stripped the genorator from the swoop.

"What are you doing now?"

"Im getting us some supplies. We have along walk a head of us."

"Oh" Yom stood there with a wierd look on his face. "Okay."

Camus got every thing he needed and slung what he could over his back. Camus then started to march on to the academy. For 2 days the men walked to get back. Finally after walking so far they saw something. They saw a landing camp filled with clones getting ready to attack the Academy. Camus quickly cheaked the condition of his concution rifle. He then slowly started to get ready to sneak attack the clone troopers when he saw a few Maul clones walking around ammongst them. Camus then pulled back and looked at Yom. "Are you ready to fight some sith?"

"Not really why?"

"Oh nothing really I just saw a couple Maul clones walking around in there."

"Okay. I guess ill use my missle launcher."

"Yeah. They may be able to block blasts but they wont be able to doudge explotions."

Camus pulled his concution rifle and shot right into the middle of the clones. Yom followed threw with a missle right to officerers tent. Camus picked up his repeater and fired at all the close troopers and shot concutions into the large groups. Yom fired missles all over the place where Mauls would be. With in minutes only 2 Maul clones was left and all the ammo for the concutions and missles were gone. Camus dropped his guns and removed his last resort weapon his saber. Camus ran up to one of the mauls and egnited his saber. Camus swung his sword to attack the the clone. but the clone egnited his saber just intime to block the attack. Camus and the clone fought fast and hard. Finally the clone nocked the saber out of camus hands. Camus did a cartwheel over to dead Maul bodies and picked up there dualsabers. Camus landed and egnighted all 4 blades. The maul clone activated his Dualsaber and chaged Camus.

Yom walked up to the second clone really slowly. The clone opened his mouth and tilted his head watching Yoms evermovement. Yom reached down and pulled a thermal detonatior from his belt. Yom set the timer to 10 seconds. The clone watched this with an inrested look but kept his mouth open. Yom tosed the detonatior strait up into the air. the clone watched the detonatior and not Yom. Yom jumped up and did around house kick with perfect timing as the thermal came right back down hit Yoms foot just right sending the thermal right into the clones mouth. with only 2 seconds left the clone started to claw at his face but was to late the detonatior exploted senind mauls teeth into his brain. Yom looked over at Camus to see a really fast spinning battle with 6 blades and sparks flying all over the place. Both camus and the clone moved really fast as the sparks and lights just seemed to only allow a few seconds worth of viewing. Yom grabbed his saber just about to enter the fight but relized with out some training of the living force one of those blades would cut him in half in seconds. Yom just stood there watching the fight go on and on with out being able to help.

Camus screamed as he faught the power of the darkside was starting to over whelm him as he tried to keep up the pace with the Sith. He knew Yom couldnt help. but Camus need help or else he would lose this fight. Camus slowly started to lose focus on the force and he was starting to slow down tramendusly. After several good swings Camus locked sabers witht he sith. Camus having 4 blades and the Sith only having two. Camus slipped the bottem of the right dualsaber up into the mauls privat area. The sith fell down and took the final blow. Camus deactivated the sabers and fell to the ground.

Yom stod there looking at Camus. "Camus, That was a cheap shot and if Obi finds out about that your in deep."

"If I didnt I would have lost the dual." Camus stood up slowly. Camus then looked at the two sabers. "I think I might keep these as a trophy for this long hard battle."

"I dont blame you. Lets get back to the academy the invation can start any time now." Yom grabbed one of the officer speeder bikes and looked at Camus. "Are you going to borrow a ride with out ententions of returning to?"

"Thats stealing."

"So they are dead how many of them are going to be using it?"

"Good point." Camus walked over to another speeder bike and got onto it. and both of them left for the Academy.

Darth Slayne
08-08-2002, 08:33 AM
What's all this then? Tsk, tsk :tsk: I found this thread sitting contently on page TWO!! :mad: I'm sorry but pride dictates that it deserves better than that, so I must bump.

I know you guy's have some ideas floating around someplace, c'mon, the keyboard is well within reach....into it! :D

Camus
08-08-2002, 10:19 AM
Originally posted by Darth Slayne
What's all this then? Tsk, tsk :tsk: I found this thread sitting contently on page TWO!! :mad: I'm sorry but pride dictates that it deserves better than that, so I must bump.

I know you guy's have some ideas floating around someplace, c'mon, the keyboard is well within reach....into it! :D


:D I know my post on this thing are not long and very few but thats because Im bussy getting ready for family to come down for the weekend... :S

Darth Talliusc
08-08-2002, 01:05 PM
a few of the story makers havent posted in a long time (divine spirit is allowed because he wasnt at a comp, but people obi-wan13 shame shame). i dont think Reb will posting for a while... due to his.... ya know... death. hey how about darklighter posts something =), or maybe whitedragon

Darklighter
08-08-2002, 01:24 PM
Ohhhh:(there's so many stories to read...

I will write something, though I don't have time now...a little bit later, I promise I will:)

whitedragon
08-08-2002, 04:41 PM
hi guys i have a idea. lets make this story more than 3 episodes :D

whitedragon
08-08-2002, 05:15 PM
one ring to rule them all huh reb :rolleyes: :D nice story :thumbsup:

so let me get this straight reb has just blown the planet up and the jedi have evacuated?

Yom
08-08-2002, 05:35 PM
yes lets make this more then 3 ep. and the jedi are staying to fight and all reb do run a SSD in to the planet and the onther thing is that he evend the 2 mill clones to a 1 mill clones

Reb Starblazer
08-08-2002, 05:48 PM
Pfft, how's that for gratitude. I was there, ready to give my life to save the Jedi, and they accuse me of trying to blow up the planet :(
Heh, j/k :D

Anyway, in case anyone didn't quite understand it, here's what happened. I set explosives to blow up the SSD, hoping to take out all the Sith in one shot. That backfired and the SSD started falling towards Thedonias(like the Executor hitting the Death Star in ROTJ). I couldn't let that happen, so I used the Ring of the Sith to channel a massive amount of Dark Side energy, thus destroying myself;), the SSD before it hit the planet, and about a million clones.

BTW Whitedragon, I figured someone would make that comparison eventually.:D I chose a ring because I needed something that was small enough to hide on my person, and something that wouldn't sound too stupid. Heh, Go Necklace of the Sith ...no, how about Bracelet of the Sith ... umm, Cursed Boots of the Sith? See why I picked a ring :D

whitedragon
08-08-2002, 06:41 PM
awwww you died reb:( i feel bad now about calling you a blasted trator. ok my turn to write.......just a second

whitedragon
08-08-2002, 07:15 PM
whitedragon looked up into the sky he saw the gigantic explosion and knew what had happened to the trator reb starblazer. "be at peace nobel starblazer. i forgive you" . he heard the yelling as the maul clones were running toward the acadamy gates and something inside him awoke, a power of emotions not negitive but positive emotions, the love of his friends and what they stood for, he felt himself grow stronger with these emotions and the force was all around him giving him strength. the would fight, all the jedi. they wouldent let the emperor drive them away again. dragon activated his light saber and waited.

ok someone elses turn :D

Darklighter
08-08-2002, 07:52 PM
I'm really sorry I haven't joined in much in this Episode...I've been really busy with stuff, and everybody is writing stuff at once it's kind of confusing me:(lol...I'm sure all the stories are brilliant. I will go back now and read everything I haven't, and if there is anything I can add to the chapter I will.

Thanks everyone for joining in and making this great:)

And whitedragon, we should keep going with this until we've had enough:Dlol...if there is more to write afterwards we will write it. Do not fret, the Academy Wars will stay alive:)

Darklighter
08-08-2002, 09:21 PM
Here we go, my story...

whitedragon
08-08-2002, 09:43 PM
hey shadow angel dident die in the SSD did he:confused:

Dath Maximus
08-08-2002, 10:19 PM
ok its been a while since i last posted so here goes


Lord Maximus stood at the entrance to the second jedi academy. Scanning the area with his eyes he noted every weakness. "you there." he commanded one of the clones, "take your company and storm the base. I want prisoners alive." Before him 600 clones began to enter the base. He had been lucky to get off the star destroyer before it had blown. He wouldnt fail this mission. Igniteing his lightsabers, Maximus proceded towards the entrance.

Darklighter
08-08-2002, 10:26 PM
Darklighter strode out onto the balcony from his quarters. The firy red glow of the sun emanated from the mountains around the desert plane scape, the sea of sand lit with a gleaming glow of orange and yellow. The colours were getting darker, and the sun was descending beyond the horizan, the last sense of pulsing heat fading. The night would come soon.

He was troubled so much he could no longer sense hope. The Emperor had escaped once again, once again the Sith remained alive and well. He hadn't known Reb for long, they had never been close, but what Darklighter had felt before the explosion was unbelievable. A gleam of pure good had shone from Reb at that moment. He hadn't died for nothing after all, he now realised that. He had died for those he cared about so much. Despite everything in his past, in that last moment of his life, Reb was a Jedi.

Darklighter tried to make sense of it, of what he should do now. He could not see the wisdom in it all. He could not see what would happen.

But something happened then that he could not ignore. The voice came again in the back of his mind, echoing throughout his very soul. The voice he had once know.

"Do not give in..." the voice was gentle and soft, it soothed his heart but troubled his thoughts, "...do not give up. There is hope left Tidus..." then the voice paused, before saying those words that had haunted him. That had haunted him ever since that incident, 10 long years ago.

"I love you..." he shivered and shuddered at the thought. It was too painful. He thought he knew the truth now, and could help it no longer.

"She is alive!" he said anxiously, "I will find you Taliara. I promise." Without hesitation he actually did it. He strode out of his quarters and made his way down the spiral steps towards the hanger. He was confused, no thought made any sense or meaning anymore, but he was determined.

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Obi-wan stood above the hanger, leaning far over the railing, staring into the distance. The falling firy parts that remained of the destroyed FleshRender had almost receded, save a few red glowing stary objects with glowing flame-lit tails that illuminated the dark night sky.

"Anything but beautiful" he chuckled to himself. As he laughed silently though he as deadly shocked at the site he saw beneath him. He felt it in the force. The pain, the anguish he had felt before. He knew who it was without even looking.

"Darklighter!" he said to himself, and proceeded to call down at him.

"Darklighter!!" he called again, but he payed no attention. Obi-wan leapt high from the balcony, landing on his two feet 50 metres away from him.

"What the blazes are you doing?" he called. Darklighter stopped, but did not turn around.

"I have to go" he replied forcefully, "I have to do this" his voice now became solemn.

"What are you talking about?" right then Obi-wan felt what Darklighter was feeling, and thinking, her voice inside him.

"Taliara?...it can't be" Darklighter turned around to face Obi-wan to reply.

"I have to find her...I miss her so much" his voice became whimpered and sad, his eyes staring innocently into Obi-wan's. Obi-wan began to walk up to him, shaking his head.

"You can't" he started, "you can't go chasing after lost dreams." Darklighter's eyes narrowed and he started to turn around and Obi-wan followed quickly.

"I have to go to her...she needs me" his eyes watered at the thought. He was completely delusional. Obi-wan ran up to him and grabbed his shoulder to swing him round hard and stared angrily into Darklighter's face as he shouted.

"She's dead!" he looked into Obi-wan's eyes, the tears streaming from his eyes. They rolled from his cheek to the ground, and the two men stared at one another. "Let it go Tidus...just let it go. I won't let you go again. You won't come back. Ever."

There was a long silence before Darklighter spoke once again.

"Why did it have to turn out like this?" he sobbed, "Why did she have to die?" he collapsed helplessly to his knees and wept sorrowfully. Obi-wan leant down and rested his hand on his shoulder.

"We all have our part to play. Some moreso than others. Taliara played her part. She is at peace. Let it go Tidus." He looked up now, tears streaming from his eyes across his face. All he did was bow his head, and Obi-wan sat by him. They must have sat for ten minutes, unmoving.

"We have a duty, Admiral Darklighter" he spoke proudly, "I can't do this without you, old friend." He looked up again, and they both smiled. Suddenly they both felt a disturbance. It was strong within them.

"Whitedragon!" Obi-wan shouted, and they both ran to the main front gate.

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The ten or so Maul clones walked up slowly towards Whitedragon. He ignited his saber and charged at the first to his left. He threw the shots below and above, and spun round to knock its head clean off, before swiping low to defeat another. he spun round and hurtled his saber through another clone's chest. He began fighting another, as he parried and dodge the attacks. However another clone had knocked him to the gound with his saber hilt, and as he was just about to strike White off guard, Darklighter lept to block it. He threw the clone back before leaping high into the air and plummeting the saber into its chest. Obi-wan now appeared and helped him to his feet.

"What are you doing here?" he joked to them.

"Just thought you might need a hand" Obi-wan replied. They both smiled and began to fight off the remaining clones. The last one standing run and swiped towards Obi-wan.

"Watch out!" Whitedragon called, and Obi-wan ducked out of the way as Darklighter ran in and stabbed the clone heavily in the back. It dropped to the ground dead.

"Do you think there will be more?" White asked.

"I don't know. I don't know anything anymore, I have no answers" Obi-wan replied. Darklighter had not spoken a word, and he stared down at the clone without an expression on his face. Whitedragon and Obi-wan continued into the Academy, and after some time, darklighter slowly followed.

whitedragon
08-08-2002, 10:28 PM
dragon felt full peace as the maul clones piled through the door. he used his newfound strength to kill one clone after another as they went through the doors. after along time he and the other jedi were pushing them back through the doors. all the jedi had learned mauls attack pattern so far but they only killed a small fraction of the million clones. but still they would not retreat. even if it cost them their lives they would not retreat.

ok someone take over now

Darth Talliusc
08-08-2002, 11:15 PM
excellent stories, gotta love em, you're gonna be sorry you died reb, wont be much appearances from you for a while i think (or will there be?). anywho my story will follow this post directly so stay tuned within the hour.

Dath Maximus
08-08-2002, 11:18 PM
and rember all ye posters im leading the clones into battle, but that doesnt mean you can kill me

good night!

Kit fisto JK
08-08-2002, 11:59 PM
dath maximus is sitting down in the middle of a camp and has a heart attack:D so one less person to wory about:D

Darth Talliusc
08-09-2002, 12:05 AM
Planet Thedonias:

Darth Talliusc sat alone in his cell, he had been brought food a few times by an unknown jedi apprentice. the man seemed nice enough but Talliusc knew that he wasnt liked here. He had no friends here, none anywhere for that matter. Obi-wan13 had told Talliusc of Reb's couragous death. Since then various battles had been fought around the grounds but none had yet penetrated the innermost defenses of this section of the academy. Talliusc stretched out with his feelings, there were many sith here, and jedi as well. The dark side was hard to see, but Talliusc had learned its tricks and not many sithlords could hide from him. Least of all these Darth Maul clones, they were fighters not spies. Talliusc nodded off to sleep but wasnt down long before he felt it, a gigantic tremor in the force. Dath Maximus was nearby, Talliusc knew that the jedi would be hardpressed to defeat such a warrior, and he wasnt alone. Talliusc reached instinctively for his lightsaber, but it wasnt there. "Blast" was all he could mutter, he wouldnt be able to be of any help whatsoever. but who did he want to help? these jedi were certainly not his friends, but were they his enemies? Dath Maximus had never been close to Talliusc but he didnt want to get caught in a saberbattle with the man either.
Talliusc paced his cell, he didnt know what to do! since he left his masters care he hadnt known what was right anymore. He longed for the drug of his masters orders, yet was repelled by the very thought at the same time.
it was less then fifteen minutes later that Obi-wan13 strode into the cellblock. "Talliusc, your brethren have stormed our compound, Rebs destruction of the fleshrender apparently didnt get them all."
"why are you telling me this?" asked Talliusc.
"because, We need as much help as we can get"
What? Talliuscs mind reeled, was this jedi actually asking HIS aid? this was most shocking indeed.
"i can tell that you didnt expect that" said obi-wan.
"you would trust me amidst my once allies?" asked Talliusc, still very shocked.
"i do not trust you if thats what you are asking, but Reb did, and that counts for something."
Talliusc didnt respond to that, how could he? he didnt even know what he wanted to do with himself now. the jedi needed as much help as they could get, but did Talliusc need to help them?
"what will become of me after the battle?" asked Talliusc.
"you assume we will win? if we do we will allow you to choose, provided you dont make your choice before the battle has ended"
"i will fight alongside you" said Talliusc, even as he spoke the words he felt a part of him die, and a new part being born. It was almost as if with those single words Talliuscs life had changed. "and when the smoke clears i will accept judgement from your academy, you have my word"
Ob-wan13 said nothing, but after a short moment he handed Talliusc his S shaped dualbladed saber. "interesting design, i should think it may be of use against these Maul clones"

10 minutes later, on the outskirts of the fortress:

"Here i must leave you, im afraid that i can conceal myself far better then you jedi can in the eyes of my old compatriots" said Talliusc, and it was true. very few sith could detect Talliusc when he didnt mean to be found. the jedi on the other hand were far less capable of hiding from some of his brethren. Sithlords like Dath Maximus had trained so intently on hunting jedi that they had an extra sense for the lgihtside of the force.
"very well, our faith goes with you" said Obi-wan13. "and Talliusc, may the force be with you"
After Talliusc left Whitedragon let loose his reasons for not letting the sithlord escape them. "he cannot be trusted, this is another of Divine Spirits dark plots i tell you"
"if it is then we shall know of it soon enough, i have made my decision now and you will respect it my old friend"
"very well, but i will keep watch on him when he returns"

Talliusc was glad to be free of the jedi, he knew that many of them would never like him. and that suited Talliusc just fine. Creeping along a garden range Talliusc spotted two maul clones heading his direction. they were probably just a reconnaissance group sent forth to check the academy for weaknesses, this was Dath Maximus' style. Dath was a great battle commander and would make very few mistakes if any, but Talliusc had worked with the man before and knew a few ways to exploit his old allies stratagems. Talliusc followed the clones for a short distance when a twig broke underneath his feet, "damn it all to hell" he thought furiously and tried to cover himself but the clones were faster and ignited their sabers before Talliusc could conceal himself. "always the hard way" thought Talliusc to himself as he too ignited his twin saber. The clones circled around Talliusc left and right,one would step forward and monitor Talliusc response and retreat again, they were trying to discern the best mode of attack to employ. Talliusc would not play their game. Bellowing a warchallenge Talliusc charged one of the maul clones and was rewarded with surprise in the dark siths eyes. Striking as often backwards as forwards Talliusc whirled like a tornado between the two warriors. spinning deftly and making every strike count Talliusc slowly moved the battle against one of the rockwalls of the academy. Leaping high over his adversary Talliusc springboarded off the wall and came down cutting in an overhead flip. he was perfectly upside down above the second maul when he cut off the clones head. coming down in a perfect defense stance Talliusc dared the other clone to attack. The second clone was more wary of Talliusc and measured his strikes precisely but slipped up when cutting for Talliuscs left shoulder, he had swung too far and Talliusc had dodged inside the swing. Bringing the other end of his saber up he ridded the second clone of his left arm and continued the flowing motion up and cut off the top of the siths head. breathing deeply Talliusc raadioed into the jedi monitoring station "two more in sector beta 7. they're down now and im continuing my patrol along the garden side wall"

Yom
08-09-2002, 12:52 AM
As both camus and yom ride in to the hanger bay they notice that red lights are flashing and none of the ships have left except the ones that have gone to give air support. then Camus make a coment "well i see that Obi has desided to stay and fight."

"we need to find him and the others" he says as he looks at the door the gose to the acdemy "wait a giffy" then the dors blast open and 2 dozen Clone Trooper rush in shooting at camus and yom.

both men run for cover and get ready for the fire fight. Yom dashes behind some crates and Camus gets behind some stacked barrels. Yom Grabs 2 thremals and sets then for 5 sec. and throws them at the fule canister at the other end of the hanger the canisters erupt into flame engulfing the 9 trooper hideing behind them.

Then camus reaches for his reapeter and shoots off a storm of bolts at the remander of troopers. and them Yom dose the same finaly the troopers all are killed off. by this time Yom is out of ammo and is now working with his 2 blasters.

"ok lets find obi and get a game plan on how to take care of the local sith problem" Yom blurts out

Then both men run out the door leading in to the hallway and then they run in to a lil problem. Sith...2 of them. Camus light up his sabers and fights them as Yom runs off to find the other and gets in to a lil truble with a dozen or so Troopers patroling the halls looking for people to take prisoner. as yom hides in the sadows in a doorway he grabs for a thermal as they and then sets it for 5 sec. and then drops and runs down the hall to evoid the blast. as he continus to run he finds out that he was lukey to get all the troopers back there. then he turns in to the cortyard to see darklighter, White Dragon, and Obi Wan 13 fighting 9 Mual Clones but one is not fighting he is gust standing there wathing every move White makes Studing him then Yom slowly sneeks up with blaster and knife in hand. as he moves ever so slowly the Clone breaks his concertrtion and turns around to see Yom ther inchs away. Befor the clone could do any thing Yom shots the clone in the chest and then in the head. then he puts his knife away and puls his blaster back out.

then camus runs up to join in the fight. but all yom can do is stand there and watch and wait.



ok there can some one eals write now plez

Kit fisto JK
08-09-2002, 01:11 AM
um ya just a simple question where the **** am I :mad:

Yom
08-09-2002, 11:30 AM
*cough*bump*cough* man sorry i think i am cathing a could or somthing *cough*bump*cough*

stormtroop
08-09-2002, 12:04 PM
when i finally get my net connection ill be posting my storys

whitedragon
08-09-2002, 12:32 PM
great storys guys and welcome to our side Talliusc though i still will keep an eye on you :rolleyes:

Camus
08-09-2002, 12:43 PM
...


:S Um... Im lost... :S

Yom
08-09-2002, 12:51 PM
Originally posted by Camus
...


:S Um... Im lost... :S

how can u be i wrote a story and at the end i think ma obs u darkilghter and White are all together and plus i thought u were with your fam this weekend

whitedragon
08-09-2002, 12:51 PM
ill post next so just hang on

Camus
08-09-2002, 01:02 PM
Originally posted by Yom


how can u be i wrote a story and at the end i think ma obs u darkilghter and White are all together and plus i thought u were with your fam this weekend


Im talking about everyone else though... :S Im lost in the reast of it... :S

whitedragon
08-09-2002, 01:09 PM
as dragon fought the maul clones he felt a presence in the acadamy. he knew this presence well. "shadow angel" dragon said silently then he yelled it "SHADOW ANGEL". he heard a laugh behind him and he turned around. there was the reason his family was dead, the reason he became a jedi, the reason he joined the acadamy and the reason he was in this war. dragon felt some of the positive energy leak out of him as he saw this mans face. shadow angel of corce had a reason to fight dragon too. dragon killed his father and dragon knew what it was like to louse a father, that was the only reason why dragon dident hate this man. dragon went into a fighting stance. he felt that shadow angel had grown stronger just like dragon had grown stronger. they stood faceing eachother, they were the exact oppisite but they still had one thing in common, they both had no family. with that thought in mind they both charged at eachother.

Yom
08-09-2002, 01:13 PM
ok this s a bref overveiw for the lost ones out there *looks at camus*

Dath just lead 600 Mauls in to the academy >Darklighter and Obi are fighing clones with help by White and Camus and Yom is wathing close by with lil helf to offer Tyrion is off some were fighting and the others well Reb is dead and the other Sith masters have gotten to safty away for the SSD but could be on the planet Who knows for sure and we this is not going to be an easy fight

Camus
08-09-2002, 01:22 PM
Originally posted by Yom
ok this s a bref overveiw for the lost ones out there *looks at camus*

Dath just lead 600 Mauls in to the academy >Darklighter and Obi are fighing clones with help by White and Camus and Yom is wathing close by with lil helf to offer Tyrion is off some were fighting and the others well Reb is dead and the other Sith masters have gotten to safty away for the SSD but could be on the planet Who knows for sure and we this is not going to be an easy fight



Thank you... :D

Kit fisto JK
08-09-2002, 03:45 PM
um ya where the hell am I at this point:confused:

Camus
08-09-2002, 04:32 PM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
um ya where the hell am I at this point:confused:


I dont know... Your somewhere in the academy doing your own thing...

Kit fisto JK
08-09-2002, 04:36 PM
um well okaly dokaly as long as im not dead:D

Camus
08-09-2002, 04:40 PM
Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
um well okaly dokaly as long as im not dead:D



Your not dead untell I say your dead... ~kit falls over dead~ Um okay... nvm... j/k :D No I dont think your character would die so easily... I think hes in a corner wetting his self in the academy though... j/k... :D Hes in the academy doing what ever you want...

Kit fisto JK
08-09-2002, 05:06 PM
kit decides that all these clones are to easy so he starts killing thim with his mop:D

Darth Talliusc
08-09-2002, 05:39 PM
if any of the lightjedi wanna include me in there stories then im somewhere around the academy hunting darth maul clones.



Slayne im very curious as to the next part of your saga, please post it soon.

whitedragon
08-09-2002, 06:08 PM
well im fighting my nemisis so dont include me in the story unless you describing the fight scene.:D

Dath Maximus
08-09-2002, 09:12 PM
anyone can use my character as long as i dont die or kill anyone, and make it good.


Ill post later on after some more posts are made

Darth Slayne
08-10-2002, 10:56 AM
I will be writing another section presently. I will post it next time I'm online. I tend to write them while offline, so bear with me for a while fellas. :)

obi
08-10-2002, 11:40 AM
I've already said that I will not be writing anymore in the academy wars.

I will be the "George Lucas" of the academy wars. He wrote his stuff for star wars, and sat back to let other writers write the EU. Well, that's what I'm doing. :)

Darth Slayne
08-10-2002, 11:50 AM
Its a shame to hear (read) that, Obi Wan13. :( I just hope nobody nuffs your charater up too badly. I'll do my best not to. ;)

Camus
08-10-2002, 11:54 AM
So your going to let everyone else take hold of this???

obi
08-10-2002, 11:55 AM
Originally posted by Camus
So your going to let everyone else take hold of this???

Thats about the just of it.

I may have more surprises later though.......

:D

Darth Slayne
08-11-2002, 10:52 AM
This ones a little longer than usual, so I'd like to take the time to say sorry to those of you who might not like to read long posts.


The soft light that illuminated the small prison cell seemed almost to flee from the dark presence that occupied the otherwise empty chamber. It was as though the purifying touch of light had shunned the deeply malevolent creature that sat upon the makeshift bench, his wrists firmly secured with a pair of binders. Yet it was merely a trick of the eye, an illusion that played only on the minds of those steeped in superstition.
It had been a full standard day since Darth Slayne had been imprisoned deep within the Jedi academy. His sensitivity to the force told him that even now Thedonias’ sun had well and truly sunk beneath the desert horizon. But without his wrist computer he could not be certain as to the precise time index. Not that such trivial things mattered to him as he absentmindedly stared at the dull metal walls of his cell.

Earlier that day, he had received a visit from the leader of the academy, Obi Wan13. The man had tried at length to question him as to the strengths and weaknesses of the Sith academy. Had tried to glean some knowledge as to what the Emperor was planning. But Slayne had remained steadfastly tight lipped, and had kept his thoughts on such matters well shrouded, even though he was not privy to the Emperor’s most secret plans. Yet this Obi Wan was a shrewd man, and had changed his line of questioning to a topic that Slayne could not possibly have predicted.

“Tell me, Apprentice Slayne.” Obi wan had asked quite suddenly. “Who was this woman called Niah?”

Slayne had instantly formed a barrier around these memories, but not quick enough to have blocked Obi Wan’s probing mind. The look that crossed the Jedi’s features was unmistakable. He was looking at a man who was irrevocably lost. So deeply torn with hate, so twisted by bitterness and sorrow that he was beyond any hope of salvation. He was looking at a man who had been so tainted with the dark side of the Force, that his red-yellow eyes had long ago lost their natural colour. Yet Obi Wan could not bring himself to believe anyone could be so devoid of hope. He had attempted to reason with Slayne. To at least put some small seed of hope within his heart, but he had failed. All he had received was an almost crippling wave of fury that held a terrible promise of death. Slayne had felt the pity in the man, and something else. Obi Wan had been shocked at how much blood he could sense on the hands of a man that could not be much older than twenty.

An explosion somewhere inside the academy forced Darth Slayne to return to the present. Curious, he closed his eyes and used his ability with the force to seek out the source of the sound. What he found brought a malicious smile to his lips. Quite a number of the Emperor’s Maul clones had survived the destruction of the FleshRender and were even now attacking the academy. He could not have hoped for a better chance to make good his escape. Slayne changed the focus of his will and soon the binders around his wrists fell clattering to the floor. Again he refocused his mind, only this time it was on an object far more complicated than a simple pair of binders. Not many Jedi attempted what he was concentrating on now. Perhaps it was because he had a deeper insight into some aspects of the force, or it may have been that most Jedi never really considered it something that they could do. But Slayne was of the old school of Jedi teachings, and he knew it could be done. He had done this countless times before. Through the force, his mind travelled along the edge of the energy barrier that prevented him from leaving his cell. He searched and probed until he found what he was looking for; the deactivation mechanism. Another Jedi would have just simply ripped the wall apart to destroy it, and would have promptly set of the alarm. Not Slayne, he was a little more cautious than that. With a quick jolt of the force, he succeeded in tricking the device into thinking an authorised person had entered the correct code. Slayne opened his eyes once more and stepped quietly out of his cell.

So far the coast was clear. He could sense no guards in the hallways, but he didn’t need the force to tell him that there would be at least four men on duty at the detention block’s check point. He would take care of them easily enough, what concerned him right now was finding Lord Talliusc. Briefly he scoured the area with his Sith abilities but found nothing. With a frown, Slayne probed deeper. Still nothing. Then he recalled the strange feelings that emanated from the Sith Master earlier that morning and his frown turned into a sneer.

“He wouldn’t dare!” Slayne hissed quietly to himself. They were the same feelings he had gotten from Darth Malice on the day he met him, nearly a year ago. They were the feelings of a man on the verge of treachery. The Emperor would not be pleased to find that yet another of his servants had betrayed him. And one so highly placed in the order at that!

Fury raged through him as he approached the checkpoint. For just a second the guards looked at him in shock, transfixed by the look of murder in the Sith Lord’s eyes. But that moment had cost them dearly. Slayne mustered every ounce of his dark power and threw the stunned men clean across the room before they could even reach for their blasters. One of the unfortunate men hit the metal wall headfirst and there was a sickening crunch of bone as his neck was instantly shattered, while another was knocked unconscious. The two remaining men struggled to regain their footing and managed to draw their weapons, but Slayne once again used his art to pull the blasters out of their hands. The furious Sith caught one in each hand, aimed and fired at both of the guards before they even knew what hit them. One more shot and the unconscious guard joined his companions in death.
Galled at having to resort to such clumsy weaponry, Slayne threw the blasters to the floor in disgust, and strode toward the control panel. Flicking a few switches, it didn’t take him long to find what he was looking for. His equipment was held in a storage locker within this very room. On an impulse, he decided to check the data banks list of recent prisoners. What he found confirmed his suspicions. Darth Talliusc had been released from prison on the condition that he help with the academies defence. No, the Emperor would not be pleased. Thoughts of killing this new traitor raged through his mind as he walked over to the locker and retrieved his gear. He had only just put his wrist computer back on when a door behind him opened with a slight hiss. Darth Slayne turned slowly to face the person that had just entered the room.

It was the young padawan who had been assigned the task of serving meals to the prisoners. There was a momentary look of surprise on the young mans face, but his Jedi training had at least taught him to react quickly. Dropping the trays of food, the boy reached for his lightsaber and activated the blue energy blade.

“Hold it right where you are!” The young man shouted even as he stepped toward the control panel. Slayne could sense that he was attempting to reach the alarm.
“Run along now little man,” Slayne sneered while making a show of reaching for his own sabers, “before you wind up getting hurt!”
But the boy was fiercely loyal to his academy and made a desperate lunge for the alarm. Slayne sprang into action, and the boy only managed to block one blade before the second one sliced him in two.
“Foolish boy.” The Sith Lord commented dryly as he deactivated his sabers.
Darth Slayne moved toward the door the boy had come through, and just before he did so, a familiar voice sounded from the still active monitoring system.
“Two more in sector beta seven. They’re down now and I’m continuing my patrol along the garden side wall.”
Again the Sith Lord smiled…

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Talliusc moved silently through the deceptively peaceful looking garden. Something in him had changed but he could not determine if it was for the best. He was unsure of the wisdom of his current actions. Yet carry out his promise to Obi Wan he did. He was a man of honour, even if most of the Jedi would never know that or care. The Jedi would win this particular battle, Malice had seen to that, and it was for his memory that he fought alongside his former enemies. But what would become of him when the battle was over? Surely the Jedi would not trust him enough to allow him to join their ranks, they would be foolish to let something like that happen. And even if he was spared, what would become of Darth Slayne?

Lord Talliusc had sensed the apprentices capture. But did it really matter to him what became of the man? After all, it was this same apprentice that had confirmed the location of the Jedi academy. And it was Slayne who had captured Lord Malice, and ultimately this had lead to the half Zabrak’s death. Would the only man he considered to be a friend still be alive had it not been for this cunning apprentice? Talliusc found himself wishing that he had acted sooner. But it was all too late now.

Suddenly he felt a disturbance in the force, a dark one at that. Someone was trying to locate him, he could feel it. Talliusc strengthened his veil of concealment. He would have none of that. Before he could determine who it was, Talliusc was interrupted as another Maul clone headed straight for him, and he ignited his double saber. Again Darth Talliusc would fight…

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Darth Slayne used the shadows to his advantage, as he watched the various skirmishes unfold before him. He had made it to the hangar so far without being detected. Here and there, the Jedi battled with Maul clones and clone troopers alike, but this was of no moment to Slayne. He too could sense that the battle would not fair too well for the Sith this time round. But he was determined not to leave this place empty handed. He made sure that he was well shrouded with the concealing effects of the dark side, as he stealthily made his way toward a control panel behind a stack of shipping crates. Once there, he jacked his wrist computer into the security access socket, and jabbed at a few buttons on the small unit. A few seconds later he was content to see that the handy little device had sliced through the security codes and was even now downloading the academies schematics and defensive layout. If he failed in his attempt to bring Darth Talliusc back to the Emperor, he would at least have this invaluable data to fall back on.

A small series of beeps from the wrist computer told him that the job was done, and he looked out from behind the crates to see if he could find a means of escape. Not too far away he spotted Lord Talliusc’s personal fighter craft. That at least told him that he was still within the academy complex. As an afterthought, Slayne decided to access his newly acquired data, seeking the area known as sector beta seven. Once memorised he again scanned the hangar, and was pleased to find his speeder bike within a short distance. Even from his current location, he could see that the bike was slightly damaged. Someone had detonated some nearby fuel tanks recently, and he could only assume that that was the explosion he had heard a short time ago. Never the less, the bike still looked serviceable.

Lord Slayne leapt from his concealment and ran for his speeder. He was forced to ignite one of his sabers as a sudden volley of blaster bolts lanced out toward him. Impossibly fast, the Sith Lord deflected the rapid shots that came from a man encased in what appeared to be mandalorian battle armour. But Slayne had no time to deal with this new threat, and he kicked his speeder to life the moment he mounted it. One blaster bolt hit the rear of the vehicle, causing it veer alarmingly as it took off with tremendous speed. Slayne was quick to correct the bikes attitude as he speed toward the hangar exit.
Yom let out a colourful oath as he watched his target disappear from view…

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The Maul clone slumped to the ground with an agonized groan as Talliusc pulled his oddly shaped double saber from the unfortunate creatures ribcage. Yet another one down. But as he reached toward his comlink he heard the unmistakable whine of a Sith speeder approaching fast. He spun just in time to see the vehicle come to an abrupt halt a few metres away. Even more alarming was the black robed figure that leapt from it and rolled across the ground as if to bowl him over.

Talliusc leapt back just as the dark figure smoothly rolled onto his feet. He didn’t even have time to take a breath before he was forced to deflect a furious barrage of angry red saber strikes. Then both he and his assailant took at step away from each other and paused to study one another. Darth Slayne! He might have known.

“You take an awful risk attacking a Sith Master.” Talliusc fumed. “An apprentice would be wise to know his place.”
“And a Master would be wise not to cross the Emperor.” Slayne replied. He had come to like Talliusc, and he did not want to have to harm him.

The two Sith Lords circled each other, watching and waiting for the slightest provocation. Master against an Apprentice. Then Talliusc whirled his saber overhead and the battle resumed. Saber energy arced in vicious circles, almost impossible for the eye to follow. Slayne dodged, spun, parried and counterattacked, his angry red sabers clashing with the oddly angled blades of his opponent. Talliusc was good, Slayne was forced to admit that. Any other Jedi would have sliced himself to pieces, but the Sith Master had perfected the art of wielding such a dangerous weapon. Once again the pair stepped back to regard on another.
“Master Kaan has trained you well.” Talliusc commented. But he knew that Slayne’s technique was not gained from his master. His attack routine was entirely unique. He had never seen this style before. This apprentice was good; perhaps a little too good. He would be wise to be cautious.

“I have no wish to destroy you Master Talliusc.” Slayne replied calmly. “But I will if I must. You can’t seriously believe these pathetic weaklings will take you in, do you?”
Again the battle resumed. And this time it was Slayne who took the offensive. Talliusc swung his saber to deflect attack after rapid attack. He could not believe how fast this apprentice was, and he soon began to realise that maybe Slayne had already mastered much more than he had previously been letting on. But he did not let that daunt him, instead, it intrigued him. The four saber blades struck repetitively with a violent crack, producing an almost constant hum, as blinding flash after blinding flash cast a strobe-like lighting effect on the surrounding vegetation. Then there was a pause in the furious melee as all four blades locked together, and the two combatants struggled mightily to overpower the other.

Talliusc proved the stronger of the two, as he forced Slayne to stumble backwards. The Sith Master was quick to take advantage of the moment and swung his saber at his opponent. Slayne was incredibly fast even while he was off balance, but he could not stop Talliusc’s blade before it bit deeply into his left leg.
Darth Slayne fell to the soft ground with an anguished cry of pain. He tried instantly to regain his footing, but the treacherous limb simply buckled beneath him, placing him roughly on his backside. Talliusc held his saber at the ready, not quite trusting this turn of events. Slayne had already proven how cunning he could be, and he would be a fool to believe that the apprentice was out of the match this easily.

“I know you seek only to bring me back to the Emperor, Slayne.” Talliusc stated, while catching his breath. “But I made a promise to the leader of this academy. I don’t expect you to understand. But I will return to my master, that much I promise. And I will accept the repercussions of my actions.”
“You have no place here.” Slayne said between gritted teeth. “You belong with us. You are Sith! Don’t give in to the lies of these weak fools, it will only bring you to ruin.”
“You mean the kind of ruin you brought down on Lord Malice?” Talliusc seethed. The loss of his friend was still fresh in his heart.
“No. I tried to warn him of his error almost a year ago, much as I now warn you. But he would not harden his heart against such weak desires, and he paid for it with his worthless life! Do not make the same mistake, master Talliusc!” Yes, Slayne had grown in the past year to like Talliusc, and he feared that this worthy ally would go to waste. He had to try to save him before it was too late.
“You must go Slayne.” Talliusc ordered. He did not feel the desire to kill the wounded Sith Lord before him. “Tell our master that I will return when I have finished here.”
With out waiting for a response, Talliusc turned and left the academy garden…

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Darth Slayne brought his speeder bike to a halt within the cargo bay of the Stygian Wraith. As the bay door closed, he limped toward the ****pit and ran a few pre-flight checks. Repairs had come along nicely and the hyperdrive was back on line. But any major repairs would have to wait until he got back to the Sith academy. Angrily he looked out at the dark desert horizon. He had failed to convince Talliusc to return with him. Slayne did not like to fail. But at least he had the Jedi strongholds detailed schematics safely uploaded into his ships computer system. He had a feeling that the Emperor would be pleased to gain such vital information.

Before long the ghostly outline of the Stygian Wraith screamed through the cold of space on a mission of utmost importance. Its scrambling system was working over time as if afraid to divulge the secret she held within. And then suddenly she picked up an incredible amount of speed an instant before she made the jump into hyperspace…

Darth Talliusc
08-12-2002, 02:48 AM
WOW, darth slayne that story was simply amazing, had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through.... until i got too into reading it and fell of...

well i guess im just saying that im back from my trip, and eager to write another installment in this beautiful war (probably couldve phrased that better). i wish obi-wan13 would write again but i suppose we'll just have to kill him off now (j/k obi). look for my next story tomorrow.

Kit fisto JK
08-12-2002, 03:15 AM
Originally posted by Darth Slayne
This ones a little longer than usual, so I'd like to take the time to say sorry to those of you who might not like to read long posts.


The soft light that illuminated the small prison cell seemed almost to flee from the dark presence that occupied the otherwise empty chamber. It was as though the purifying touch of light had shunned the deeply malevolent creature that sat upon the makeshift bench, his wrists firmly secured with a pair of binders. Yet it was merely a trick of the eye, an illusion that played only on the minds of those steeped in superstition.
It had been a full standard day since Darth Slayne had been imprisoned deep within the Jedi academy. His sensitivity to the force told him that even now Thedonias’ sun had well and truly sunk beneath the desert horizon. But without his wrist computer he could not be certain as to the precise time index. Not that such trivial things mattered to him as he absentmindedly stared at the dull metal walls of his cell.

Earlier that day, he had received a visit from the leader of the academy, Obi Wan13. The man had tried at length to question him as to the strengths and weaknesses of the Sith academy. Had tried to glean some knowledge as to what the Emperor was planning. But Slayne had remained steadfastly tight lipped, and had kept his thoughts on such matters well shrouded, even though he was not privy to the Emperor’s most secret plans. Yet this Obi Wan was a shrewd man, and had changed his line of questioning to a topic that Slayne could not possibly have predicted.

“Tell me, Apprentice Slayne.” Obi wan had asked quite suddenly. “Who was this woman called Niah?”

Slayne had instantly formed a barrier around these memories, but not quick enough to have blocked Obi Wan’s probing mind. The look that crossed the Jedi’s features was unmistakable. He was looking at a man who was irrevocably lost. So deeply torn with hate, so twisted by bitterness and sorrow that he was beyond any hope of salvation. He was looking at a man who had been so tainted with the dark side of the Force, that his red-yellow eyes had long ago lost their natural colour. Yet Obi Wan could not bring himself to believe anyone could be so devoid of hope. He had attempted to reason with Slayne. To at least put some small seed of hope within his heart, but he had failed. All he had received was an almost crippling wave of fury that held a terrible promise of death. Slayne had felt the pity in the man, and something else. Obi Wan had been shocked at how much blood he could sense on the hands of a man that could not be much older than twenty.

An explosion somewhere inside the academy forced Darth Slayne to return to the present. Curious, he closed his eyes and used his ability with the force to seek out the source of the sound. What he found brought a malicious smile to his lips. Quite a number of the Emperor’s Maul clones had survived the destruction of the FleshRender and were even now attacking the academy. He could not have hoped for a better chance to make good his escape. Slayne changed the focus of his will and soon the binders around his wrists fell clattering to the floor. Again he refocused his mind, only this time it was on an object far more complicated than a simple pair of binders. Not many Jedi attempted what he was concentrating on now. Perhaps it was because he had a deeper insight into some aspects of the force, or it may have been that most Jedi never really considered it something that they could do. But Slayne was of the old school of Jedi teachings, and he knew it could be done. He had done this countless times before. Through the force, his mind travelled along the edge of the energy barrier that prevented him from leaving his cell. He searched and probed until he found what he was looking for; the deactivation mechanism. Another Jedi would have just simply ripped the wall apart to destroy it, and would have promptly set of the alarm. Not Slayne, he was a little more cautious than that. With a quick jolt of the force, he succeeded in tricking the device into thinking an authorised person had entered the correct code. Slayne opened his eyes once more and stepped quietly out of his cell.

So far the coast was clear. He could sense no guards in the hallways, but he didn’t need the force to tell him that there would be at least four men on duty at the detention block’s check point. He would take care of them easily enough, what concerned him right now was finding Lord Talliusc. Briefly he scoured the area with his Sith abilities but found nothing. With a frown, Slayne probed deeper. Still nothing. Then he recalled the strange feelings that emanated from the Sith Master earlier that morning and his frown turned into a sneer.

“He wouldn’t dare!” Slayne hissed quietly to himself. They were the same feelings he had gotten from Darth Malice on the day he met him, nearly a year ago. They were the feelings of a man on the verge of treachery. The Emperor would not be pleased to find that yet another of his servants had betrayed him. And one so highly placed in the order at that!

Fury raged through him as he approached the checkpoint. For just a second the guards looked at him in shock, transfixed by the look of murder in the Sith Lord’s eyes. But that moment had cost them dearly. Slayne mustered every ounce of his dark power and threw the stunned men clean across the room before they could even reach for their blasters. One of the unfortunate men hit the metal wall headfirst and there was a sickening crunch of bone as his neck was instantly shattered, while another was knocked unconscious. The two remaining men struggled to regain their footing and managed to draw their weapons, but Slayne once again used his art to pull the blasters out of their hands. The furious Sith caught one in each hand, aimed and fired at both of the guards before they even knew what hit them. One more shot and the unconscious guard joined his companions in death.
Galled at having to resort to such clumsy weaponry, Slayne threw the blasters to the floor in disgust, and strode toward the control panel. Flicking a few switches, it didn’t take him long to find what he was looking for. His equipment was held in a storage locker within this very room. On an impulse, he decided to check the data banks list of recent prisoners. What he found confirmed his suspicions. Darth Talliusc had been released from prison on the condition that he help with the academies defence. No, the Emperor would not be pleased. Thoughts of killing this new traitor raged through his mind as he walked over to the locker and retrieved his gear. He had only just put his wrist computer back on when a door behind him opened with a slight hiss. Darth Slayne turned slowly to face the person that had just entered the room.

It was the young padawan who had been assigned the task of serving meals to the prisoners. There was a momentary look of surprise on the young mans face, but his Jedi training had at least taught him to react quickly. Dropping the trays of food, the boy reached for his lightsaber and activated the blue energy blade.

“Hold it right where you are!” The young man shouted even as he stepped toward the control panel. Slayne could sense that he was attempting to reach the alarm.
“Run along now little man,” Slayne sneered while making a show of reaching for his own sabers, “before you wind up getting hurt!”
But the boy was fiercely loyal to his academy and made a desperate lunge for the alarm. Slayne sprang into action, and the boy only managed to block one blade before the second one sliced him in two.
“Foolish boy.” The Sith Lord commented dryly as he deactivated his sabers.
Darth Slayne moved toward the door the boy had come through, and just before he did so, a familiar voice sounded from the still active monitoring system.
“Two more in sector beta seven. They’re down now and I’m continuing my patrol along the garden side wall.”
Again the Sith Lord smiled…

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Talliusc moved silently through the deceptively peaceful looking garden. Something in him had changed but he could not determine if it was for the best. He was unsure of the wisdom of his current actions. Yet carry out his promise to Obi Wan he did. He was a man of honour, even if most of the Jedi would never know that or care. The Jedi would win this particular battle, Malice had seen to that, and it was for his memory that he fought alongside his former enemies. But what would become of him when the battle was over? Surely the Jedi would not trust him enough to allow him to join their ranks, they would be foolish to let something like that happen. And even if he was spared, what would become of Darth Slayne?

Lord Talliusc had sensed the apprentices capture. But did it really matter to him what became of the man? After all, it was this same apprentice that had confirmed the location of the Jedi academy. And it was Slayne who had captured Lord Malice, and ultimately this had lead to the half Zabrak’s death. Would the only man he considered to be a friend still be alive had it not been for this cunning apprentice? Talliusc found himself wishing that he had acted sooner. But it was all too late now.

Suddenly he felt a disturbance in the force, a dark one at that. Someone was trying to locate him, he could feel it. Talliusc strengthened his veil of concealment. He would have none of that. Before he could determine who it was, Talliusc was interrupted as another Maul clone headed straight for him, and he ignited his double saber. Again Darth Talliusc would fight…

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Darth Slayne used the shadows to his advantage, as he watched the various skirmishes unfold before him. He had made it to the hangar so far without being detected. Here and there, the Jedi battled with Maul clones and clone troopers alike, but this was of no moment to Slayne. He too could sense that the battle would not fair too well for the Sith this time round. But he was determined not to leave this place empty handed. He made sure that he was well shrouded with the concealing effects of the dark side, as he stealthily made his way toward a control panel behind a stack of shipping crates. Once there, he jacked his wrist computer into the security access socket, and jabbed at a few buttons on the small unit. A few seconds later he was content to see that the handy little device had sliced through the security codes and was even now downloading the academies schematics and defensive layout. If he failed in his attempt to bring Darth Talliusc back to the Emperor, he would at least have this invaluable data to fall back on.

A small series of beeps from the wrist computer told him that the job was done, and he looked out from behind the crates to see if he could find a means of escape. Not too far away he spotted Lord Talliusc’s personal fighter craft. That at least told him that he was still within the academy complex. As an afterthought, Slayne decided to access his newly acquired data, seeking the area known as sector beta seven. Once memorised he again scanned the hangar, and was pleased to find his speeder bike within a short distance. Even from his current location, he could see that the bike was slightly damaged. Someone had detonated some nearby fuel tanks recently, and he could only assume that that was the explosion he had heard a short time ago. Never the less, the bike still looked serviceable.

Lord Slayne leapt from his concealment and ran for his speeder. He was forced to ignite one of his sabers as a sudden volley of blaster bolts lanced out toward him. Impossibly fast, the Sith Lord deflected the rapid shots that came from a man encased in what appeared to be mandalorian battle armour. But Slayne had no time to deal with this new threat, and he kicked his speeder to life the moment he mounted it. One blaster bolt hit the rear of the vehicle, causing it veer alarmingly as it took off with tremendous speed. Slayne was quick to correct the bikes attitude as he speed toward the hangar exit.
Yom let out a colourful oath as he watched his target disappear from view…

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The Maul clone slumped to the ground with an agonized groan as Talliusc pulled his oddly shaped double saber from the unfortunate creatures ribcage. Yet another one down. But as he reached toward his comlink he heard the unmistakable whine of a Sith speeder approaching fast. He spun just in time to see the vehicle come to an abrupt halt a few metres away. Even more alarming was the black robed figure that leapt from it and rolled across the ground as if to bowl him over.

Talliusc leapt back just as the dark figure smoothly rolled onto his feet. He didn’t even have time to take a breath before he was forced to deflect a furious barrage of angry red saber strikes. Then both he and his assailant took at step away from each other and paused to study one another. Darth Slayne! He might have known.

“You take an awful risk attacking a Sith Master.” Talliusc fumed. “An apprentice would be wise to know his place.”
“And a Master would be wise not to cross the Emperor.” Slayne replied. He had come to like Talliusc, and he did not want to have to harm him.

The two Sith Lords circled each other, watching and waiting for the slightest provocation. Master against an Apprentice. Then Talliusc whirled his saber overhead and the battle resumed. Saber energy arced in vicious circles, almost impossible for the eye to follow. Slayne dodged, spun, parried and counterattacked, his angry red sabers clashing with the oddly angled blades of his opponent. Talliusc was good, Slayne was forced to admit that. Any other Jedi would have sliced himself to pieces, but the Sith Master had perfected the art of wielding such a dangerous weapon. Once again the pair stepped back to regard on another.
“Master Kaan has trained you well.” Talliusc commented. But he knew that Slayne’s technique was not gained from his master. His attack routine was entirely unique. He had never seen this style before. This apprentice was good; perhaps a little too good. He would be wise to be cautious.

“I have no wish to destroy you Master Talliusc.” Slayne replied calmly. “But I will if I must. You can’t seriously believe these pathetic weaklings will take you in, do you?”
Again the battle resumed. And this time it was Slayne who took the offensive. Talliusc swung his saber to deflect attack after rapid attack. He could not believe how fast this apprentice was, and he soon began to realise that maybe Slayne had already mastered much more than he had previously been letting on. But he did not let that daunt him, instead, it intrigued him. The four saber blades struck repetitively with a violent crack, producing an almost constant hum, as blinding flash after blinding flash cast a strobe-like lighting effect on the surrounding vegetation. Then there was a pause in the furious melee as all four blades locked together, and the two combatants struggled mightily to overpower the other.

Talliusc proved the stronger of the two, as he forced Slayne to stumble backwards. The Sith Master was quick to take advantage of the moment and swung his saber at his opponent. Slayne was incredibly fast even while he was off balance, but he could not stop Talliusc’s blade before it bit deeply into his left leg.
Darth Slayne fell to the soft ground with an anguished cry of pain. He tried instantly to regain his footing, but the treacherous limb simply buckled beneath him, placing him roughly on his backside. Talliusc held his saber at the ready, not quite trusting this turn of events. Slayne had already proven how cunning he could be, and he would be a fool to believe that the apprentice was out of the match this easily.

“I know you seek only to bring me back to the Emperor, Slayne.” Talliusc stated, while catching his breath. “But I made a promise to the leader of this academy. I don’t expect you to understand. But I will return to my master, that much I promise. And I will accept the repercussions of my actions.”
“You have no place here.” Slayne said between gritted teeth. “You belong with us. You are Sith! Don’t give in to the lies of these weak fools, it will only bring you to ruin.”
“You mean the kind of ruin you brought down on Lord Malice?” Talliusc seethed. The loss of his friend was still fresh in his heart.
“No. I tried to warn him of his error almost a year ago, much as I now warn you. But he would not harden his heart against such weak desires, and he paid for it with his worthless life! Do not make the same mistake, master Talliusc!” Yes, Slayne had grown in the past year to like Talliusc, and he feared that this worthy ally would go to waste. He had to try to save him before it was too late.
“You must go Slayne.” Talliusc ordered. He did not feel the desire to kill the wounded Sith Lord before him. “Tell our master that I will return when I have finished here.”
With out waiting for a response, Talliusc turned and left the academy garden…

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Darth Slayne brought his speeder bike to a halt within the cargo bay of the Stygian Wraith. As the bay door closed, he limped toward the ****pit and ran a few pre-flight checks. Repairs had come along nicely and the hyperdrive was back on line. But any major repairs would have to wait until he got back to the Sith academy. Angrily he looked out at the dark desert horizon. He had failed to convince Talliusc to return with him. Slayne did not like to fail. But at least he had the Jedi strongholds detailed schematics safely uploaded into his ships computer system. He had a feeling that the Emperor would be pleased to gain such vital information.

Before long the ghostly outline of the Stygian Wraith screamed through the cold of space on a mission of utmost importance. Its scrambling system was working over time as if afraid to divulge the secret she held within. And then suddenly she picked up an incredible amount of speed an instant before she made the jump into hyperspace…

alls I have to say is HOLY SH!T :scare5:

IM probably not going to be reading it

Darth Slayne
08-12-2002, 09:40 AM
Yeah. *Blush* I talk too much....trust me the original draft was a hell of a lot longer. ;)

Darklighter
08-12-2002, 10:24 AM
Well, its not a bad thing:)You can really really well, and its cool you have a lot to write about. I have had writer's block for a while now...I need to think of something:(lol

Darth Slayne
08-12-2002, 10:43 AM
You'll be fine Darky. :D Writers block is a hard barrier to pass. I should know! I've had a bad dose of it for the past year while trying to write a full on novel. Just cant seem to find the words. :(

Darth Talliusc
08-12-2002, 12:19 PM
Darth Talliusc sat alone on the roof of one of the jedi academy's many stone towers. This one in particular was Talliuscs favourite. it was deceptively tall and had quite a good view of the surrounding area. Talliusc could see no maul clones but he knew they were out there, waiting. Much had happened in the past day or so, too much for Talliusc to understand completely. He had had a run in with Darth Slayne in the garden nearby, and in truth Talliusc had never seen an apprentice fight so well. Talliusc thought that he would be able to get rid of Slayne without even fighting the younger man, but the apprentice had been enraged. Amidst the fighting Slayne brought some points to Talliuscs mind that he could not deny, he never would be accepted here. Obi-wan13 had allowed him to fight the maul clones but what after? if there even WAS an after for this academy. Talliusc had been surprised to find that Slayne actually cared for Talliusc, he had thought only Reb did. Upon returning from that battle Talliusc had told noone of Slaynes escape. Slayne would not be on the planet long enough to be caught anyways. Most jedi stayed away from Talliusc, but he heard what they said of him and thought of him. Talliusc never really had expected the jedi to like him or trust him, but he had hoped that they would learn not to hate him. No, hate was too strong a word for these jedi, they restrained everything in the hopes that they would bring others happiness.

7 hours later Talliusc had decided what he must do.

While the jedi ddint feel comfortable around him, he was allowed into most areas of the academy. Talliusc marched into obi-wan13s office, soon after two guards had lightsabers drawn and pointed at Talliuscs neck. Obi-wan13 looked up from his deepset chair and ordered his guards to stand down. The office was nowhere near as luxurious as some Talliusc had seen in the empire, but suited the jedi master. Guiding Talliusc to a chair at the lounging area Obi-wan13 congratulated Talliusc on the victory over the clones. "you've done quite well Talliusc, but some here dont like you and im afraid they never will. after the fighting stops i will ask you to leave the planet. you will be allowed to go peacefully and i hope that you will" said the jedi master.
"i agree that i do not belong here, but i think it is YOU who should leave the planet first" replied Talliusc.
"perhaps you had best explain that, Thedonias is the jedi's stand."
"yes, and now i believe that all the technical readouts for this academy have reached the dark emperor. this academy like the last one, will fall."
"the jedi cannot, and will not run forever Talliusc. we will triumph or we will die, right here." and with that, the discussion was over. Talliusc had his answer.
Within an hour Talliusc had left the academy and was bound for the unknown regions of the outer galaxy. "i tried to honour you Reb, but i dont know what to do" said Talliusc to the cold lifelessness of hyperspace. Perhaps he could find answers at his destination.



expect more of that in the next day or so. once again great story slayne. hope that we can work ours together more often.

Darth Slayne
08-13-2002, 05:16 PM
That would be cool Talliusc. :thmbup1: I didn't quite know what to do with your character. I was going to bring him back to the Academy, but then I thought I might ruin any plans you had for your character.

BTW, I'd like to see Divine write a story here soon. When he can find the time that is. It just seems a little sad that his character has only been in the background as of late.