Academy Wars: Episode II "The New Order" Official Battle Thread Sequal [Archive]

Darklighter

07-23-2002, 05:52 PM

This is just a short introduction to the new Academy. People can feel free to add more to it in their stories.

It had been nearly a year since the incident. Since Divine Spirit had driven the Academy students and Masters out of their home. He had been a student once, but his link to the darkside would not be suppressed. Divine was now Emperor of an enourmous military force, consisting of officers, clonetroopers and the dreaded Dark Jedi and Sith, trained under his forceful guidance in his Sith Academy.

Darklighter awoke suddenly. The sun shone brightly now through the large pane windows which spread about one wall of his quarters. The Admiral raised into the early morning light, changing into his official uniform as he walked out and descended the stairs down into the lower regions of the building.

Thedonias was a more desert-like planet than the previous one they had inhabited. It had less vegitation, the landscape rocky, a yellow and sandy wilderness littered with a few forestry patches. It was however very secluded, far out of the Emperor's reach. They had come along way from their home.

"How are the repairs coming along" Darklighter asked Darth Knight, as he entered the hanger bay down the steep metal steps.

"Very good Admiral" Darth Knight replied, as he slid out from under one of the battered speeders. "They gave us quite a shock, huh Sir?" Darklighter nodded, a smile glimmered on his pale young face. Their run-ins with bounty hunters had been endless since their dramatic escape a year back. Only hours before, a pair of hunters aboard armed air crafts had ambushed Ice Squadron on a routine scout mission. Little did they know taking on the fully piloted famous Ice Squadron was a bad idea.

"You sure showed them Knight" they smiled and laughed as he proceeded to the outside of the hanger bay. The Academy had been craftilly built into the side of a huge hilly mountain, covered in sand. The building delved right into the centre of it, and outside a recangular building stretched out a few hundred metres. Below it was a landing platform and the entrance to the hanger, from where Ice and Death Squadron exited and entered the Academy building. It was smaller than the last, but large enough.

A turbo lift ran right through the centre of the mountainous hill upwards, and took you to a large flat area on the top of the mountain. It was here that the council would meet, the circle of seats covered by a large metal structure above.

The betrayal of Reb had been a devastating blow to the Academy's spirit, not so much after a year of sorting things out. If it could happen to Reb, it could happen to any of them, Darklighter had thought painfully. Every moment the students were at danger of power of the Sith.

The supposed death of AB_Legion at the attack sent shockwaves through the Academy. He was one of Darklighter's closest friens, one of the most powerful Jedi in he Academy. Legion never made it onboard a craft, and would have been executed if found by the enemy. It had been a terrible time for them all.

Darklighter walked out onto the landing platform. The sun was high now and burning bright. Pilots and mechanics were running to and fro inside the hanger, sparks from weilds flying, and the teachers instructing padawans on the grassy verges. It is much like before, he thought.

"Sir!" a voice shreiked behind him, as Greedo ran to him. "Admiral...Master Kenobi and the Jedi have not reached the Council on Corruscant. Something terrible has happened!"

The mood changed suddenly. This is not good one bit, he said to himself. Darklighter would have to contact the council himself to solve this matter.

Where could he be? he said again, as Darklighter walked back o his quarters.

To be continued...

As for Legion's death, I will resolve that in the next post;) Have no fear, everything will turn out well...

Agen

07-23-2002, 07:12 PM

Obi wan, Tyrion and Terminator stepped back slowly, all of them knew what they had to do, with a quick glance at each other they swiftly split up, it was 3 assassins to every jedi and 3 freelancing all dressed quite equally. Obi wan jumped over a whinch type rope thing that ahd been shot by a young man and pulled him to him and used him as a guard to the laser bolts, he came out quickly mutilated the msot agressive one with his saber and done the butterfly to kick the other one to knock him ferosciously to the ground. The other 2 weren't doing quite so well with tyrion retreating from the 3, 2 of them woman, it didn't take long for obi-wan to think of force psuhing one of them to give tyrion an advantage but before he could an assassin got on his back and strangled him. Obi wan struggled for breath and backstabbed the assassin. Agen by this time had worked his 3 down to 1 and anger was growing in him with a heavy slash he chopped off an asassin's head and soem white robes fell to the ground with blood smeared on them. Tyrion had taken out his 3 by now and the jedi outnumbered the assasins. They got together and killed the remaining ones.

The 3 jedi looked for dissectional who had jsut dissapeared, by this time they were all worried and didn't know at all what happened to them as the darkside had clouded it.

The jedi were extremely worried and hijacked an air taxi "sorry about that with a ;) " blurted tyrion and Agen took the drivers seat. He speeded at an unhealthy speed through all the ships and and eventually spotted a vehicle speeding underneath them with what lookedl iek dissectional in it gagged and tied up with somesort of weird roep. 2 Bounty hunters were in it and noticed them, they went throguh some tunnels and made it like joy riding through the air of corouscant.

EDIT: As you can see i edited Reb to make him me since he wants to be a bad guy.

Dissectional

07-23-2002, 07:26 PM

dammit lol, i got caught by bounty hunters!

whitedragon

07-23-2002, 07:41 PM

white dragon was in deep meditation concentrateing on where obi-wan and the others could be. when darklighter came to him with the news he immediatly went to find them through the force. the force flowed through him as he tryed to locate his master. dragon suddenly awoke with a start. he knew where they were and he sensed great danger for them. dragon immediately grabed his lightsaber and went to look for his padawan. he found s0ulblihtr in the training room "come on we are leaveing" " where are we going" to corouscant to find obi-wan." dragon dident even talk to darklighter before he took a ship and sped of towards corouscant.

Agen

07-23-2002, 07:57 PM

Heh, i think i'm dead i'm no where to be seen :p :D

whitedragon

07-23-2002, 07:58 PM

Originally posted by Agen_Terminator
Heh, i think i'm dead i'm no where to be seen :p :D
ok whatever you say

some one needs to write how i come in to help the guys out because i have no clue. your not going to leave me out of the fight this time :D

greedo626

07-23-2002, 08:11 PM

whoa guys. I don't read long posts (sorry, I'm just too lay-z). but get to the part where I start kicking a$$:D

whitedragon

07-23-2002, 08:23 PM

Originally posted by greedo626
whoa guys. I don't read long posts (sorry, I'm just too lay-z). but get to the part where I start kicking a$$:D
ill start kicking ass soon

Reb Starblazer

07-23-2002, 10:06 PM

Well, I've got the story compiled, I'd just like Obi's and Divine's email. What format do you guys want this in. Word, wordpad, plain old notepad, what? Also, you guys may want to check out my second last post in the first thread. I think you may have to edit me out of your stories so far. Just read it and you'll see why.
I think I'll try and post a part sometime later, that should help clear some of the impending confusion up.

BTW, a year? That's a frickin' long time man.

whitedragon

07-23-2002, 10:10 PM

white dragon and s0ulblihtr landed their ship on the lower levels. white dragon reached out through the force to locate his fellow jedi. he felt one near by. they ran towards it. both felt rather than heard rappid fire comeing from behind them, they ignited their light sabers. white dragon let instinct take over, both white blades wizzed accross the air deflecting shot after shot, he saw his enemy it was a hover cannon it flew past him but s0ulblihtr destroyed it before it went past. they both ran towards the strongest appirition of the force they could feel it was probly several jedi together. several more hover cannons came out of nowhere and fired at them. s0ulblihtr dodged and destroyed two of them, dragon threw his saber at the others and destroyed them. several bounty hunters came out of buildings, one said "hey you there". dragon used the force and riped a piece of metal out of the building next to him and threw it at the one who spoke. "i am so sick of hearing that" dragon said. :p

Yom

07-23-2002, 10:17 PM

so yom will never appear in this at all, well i see how it is *sinf sinf* well i gess i will go to my box then and cry *walks away*

whitedragon

07-23-2002, 10:23 PM

Originally posted by Yom
so yom will never appear in this at all, well i see how it is *sinf sinf* well i gess i will go to my box then and cry *walks away*
well yom you can write a story of your own like i did

Yom

07-23-2002, 11:04 PM

Originally posted by whitedragon

well yom you can write a story of your own like i did

why do that in the summer i do it in 3 weeks

obi

07-23-2002, 11:07 PM

Originally posted by Yom

why do that in the summer i do it in 3 weeks

Yom, you want to know why you aren't in any of this? Here's the answer:

BECAUSE YOU ARE THE FRAKIN CHEF!

:D

Hey, you wanted to be the chef, so don't go blaming me. :)

BTW Reb, My email address is cpmjdavis@juno.com

Yom

07-23-2002, 11:11 PM

Originally posted by obi-wan13

Yom, you want to know why you aren't in any of this? Here's the answer:

BECAUSE YOU ARE THE FRAKIN CHEF!

:D

Hey, you wanted to be the chef, so don't go blaming me. :)

BTW Reb, My email address is cpmjdavis@juno.com

well i can take that i guss u guys will never eat in this story then oh i will were ever u need me *walks back in to the box and slams the door*

obi

07-23-2002, 11:17 PM

Originally posted by Yom

well i can take that i guss u guys will never eat in this story then oh i will were ever u need me *walks back in to the box and slams the door*

I didn't say don't post your story, feel free to. I was joking, come on now........

Darth Talliusc

07-23-2002, 11:23 PM

wow, i loved the shocker in your post on ep1 Reb, hehe excellent, now you are my sith brethren... so which light jedi do we kill first? j/k well since you're the one compiling the story, if you could just edit out the final part of my last story post (where i come out of hyperspace and sense that something is wrong) and add in that something called Talliusc to the planet? i figure thats a good time for me to meet you for the second time, oh and as for our new alliance i have some spiffy ideas that you may like, ill PM them to you later tonight.

Yom

07-23-2002, 11:23 PM

i will wright one on sunday to were i save the day, cuz i am tierd now and i will only be one for a short wihle tommorw.

Reb Starblazer

07-24-2002, 12:51 AM

It had been a year since the evacuation of the Jedi academy. It had been a year since he had changed allegiances, a year since he had ceased to be Reb Starblazer, and had become Darth Malice. A long year full of “failed” attempts by him to find the secret location of the new Academy, and a year of punishments by his master for his “failures”. He was actually quite surprised he had lived this long. Only he truly knew why he failed on those attempts, but that was a secret he was keeping to himself. For now, he was content to stare out the transparasteel window on the bridge of his own Star Destroyer, the Renegade. The Emperor was a cruel master, but he could also be quite generous. When he felt like it.

“My Lord. The assassins you dispatched have arrived at Coruscant and should be engaging the Jedi now.” Said Admiral Klieg

“Excellent. Good work Admiral. I’ll be in my chambers. Please don’t disturb me before nineteen hundred.” Malice said as he walked off the bridge. He stepped into the turbolift and stated the deck he was going to. Once he reached the deck, he got out and began again. Officers and Clonetroopers alike stepped aside and saluted as he passed. He just ignored them and kept on walking.

The door to his chambers opened as he stepped in front of it, and closed just as quickly once he was inside. He pressed a button, locking it behind him. He stared around his living chambers, which were quite barren. He could easily have as extravagent a room as any world leader, yet he prefered something more simple.He had a small bed, a mat for practicing his Lightsabre skills and Teras Kasi, as well as a Holo-projector which he used to stay in contact with the Emperor and the other Sith Lords.

He removed his cloak, and sat cross-legged on the mat, attempting to meditate. He needed to relax, focus. The assassins would fail, they would be no match for the Jedi. He knew that before he sent them out. He fully expected to receive another “punishment” from the Emperor next time they met in person, but he was willing to accept it. He delved deeper and deeper into the Force, stretching out with it, searching for wisdom, searching for anything.

Then she appeared before him. Just like always, just like every time he tried to mediate. Just like every time he tried to sleep. She seemed to be calling him, calling him to her. But he could not go. He could not let her see what he had become… again. They had both agreed it was best for him to leave, to seek council with Obi-Wan, to try to learn to tame the beast within him. That, was two years ago. He had not seen nor heard from her since. Perhaps it was for the better, that she not see him as he was now. He always wondered how he was doing though. Was she happy? Was she healthy? Was she still alive...? He didn't know, what had became of her, and if she was living a fine life, or if she was living on the streets.

But now, he could give her anything, anything she desired. Being a Sith Lord had its perks after all. He could easily give her a large house on any planet she desired. Her own home, their home. “No. What am I thinking? That’s the Emperor’s influence on me, nothing more. She’d want nothing to do with me now. I don’t deserve her love anymore, not after this. Not after what I’ve done, what I’ve become.” Lord Malice thought to himself.

“Lord Malice. There is an incoming transmission…” Admiral Klieg’s voice said over the Comm.

“I told you I didn’t want to be disturbed until nineteen hundred hours Admiral.” Malice interrupted.

“Yes my Lord. But this is a transmission from the Emperor, so I figured that it might be…”

“Very well Admiral. Patch it through.” Malice interrupted again. Malice got up and walked over to the Holo-projector, and bent to one knee. A very large holo-image of the Emperor’s face appeared over him.

“How goes the progress with the Jedi, Lord Malice?” the Emperor’s voice boomed through the room.

“I have dispatched twelve assassins to Coruscant. How is it that you knew they would attempt to go there? Have you learned of the location of their Academy?” replied Malice.

“Patience, you must have patience. All will be revealed in time. As for my knowledge of their attempt to contact the council, I have my ways, and my sources. Obi-Wan and his pitiful Jedi have avoided us long enough. ” The Emperor’s image faded away into nothing, and Darth Malice was left to contemplate these new events, alone, in a barren room.

Well, there you have it. The first post from the other side in the Episode 2 thread. This is a bit of an explanation as to why I joined with the Sith, what Malice has been haunted with since he turned, and I'm also trying to help push forward the plot a bit. I don't believe there will be many posts here for a while, as we've just finished the first episode, and most of us, me included, are suffering from writer's block. I may come back and try to add to this if I think of anything.

Shadow Angel

07-24-2002, 02:01 AM

Hey, since my posts from Episode I were all out of order and probably didn't get read, I'll quote my reply on the Episode I thread here. Since this is mostly about me and doesn't involve other characters and current events, I think it's still useable, for the most part. Especially my Sith comrades, you should read this.

Man, this sucks. My Net's been out for a few days, and the two posts I did make were placed out of order, and were either ignored, or they sucked. To whoever's compiling, since no one used mine, you don't have to put it in, but it got out of order. My first came after this post:

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Originally posted by Darklighter
"It was foolish of you to come here, Darklighter" as he turned around slowly, the figure was in full view, standing at the entrane through which he had come. "You are only delaying your iminent death." It was Shadow Angel, Darth Dominance, Divine Spirit's sith lord companion. He was tall, his thick, long cloak pitch dark, his hood covering his face.

"You cannot win" he said in a low, foreboding voice that shattered the silence.

"We will see" came Darklighter's response. "You may have power, but you lack the spirit of a Jedi. You cannot foresee your victory while we are still alive, Shadow" his voice now deep, he was circling around shadow, his hand inches away from his saber hilt.

"You speak as if there is still hope left for your kind" he replied menacingly. "We will see if you are right, Admiral" he began to close in on Darklighter, they were both walking to confront each other. "You know you will not win this battle. The darkside is the only way out. Join us Tidus. You know it is the only option."

"The only option if you are weak enough to give in!" he shouted, as the tension mounted Shadow's face was grim and smirkless.

"Fool!!" he quickly drew his lightsaber. In a split second he leapt into the air towards Darklighter, his brandished red saber gleaming with malice. Darklighter was too quick. Before the saber could strike him, his orange-white saber was drawn to block the attack. They locked, Shadow's teeth gritted together, Darklighter's eyes glaring beneath his low brow. Shadow flung himself backwards to land on the ground a few metres away.

He ran at Tidus again, swiping to his left. He parried the attack, and ducked to avoid the next swipe across his head. Darklighter spun, circling in the air just in time to avoid Shadow's deadly upercut. He landed, and they faced each other again. Full of anger, Shadow ran at him, his blade high above his head, ready to strike. This he did not foresee. As he brought hi ssaber down as he ran, Darklighter dodged to the side. Everything moved in slow motion. Shadow ran passed and missed, and Darklighter brought his saber down upon his back.

With a cry he fell. "Curse you, and your Academy!" he yelped. The shuttle was just in time. It cruised overhead, guns ready, firing at Darklighter. he dodged them and dived behind the bunker out of view. Shadow crawled to his feet, and the shuttle ramp lowered.

"We will meet again!" He cried, as he climbed aboard the caft, injured and limping. Darklighter knew this was only the beginning. He would have to face him again, but not yet. Holstering his saber, he climbed aboard the speeder bike, and raced back to his comrades.

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The Shadow Angel's shuttle quickly docked into his Super Star Destroyer in orbit around the planet. As the ramp lowered, the usual procedure of stormtroopers marching in formation around the craft took form, a bit hastily. Admiral Jericho, commander of the SSD Black Phoenix, rushed to greet the Dark Lord. To his shock, Shadow Angel's robes were tattered and torn, and he looked exhausted. As he limped out of the shuttle, Jericho said:

"L-L-Lord Dominance.... back so soon--"
"You may dispense with the pleasantries, Commander. My confrontation with Master Darklighter has turned with unexpected results. Now, if will excuse me, I will retreat to my quarters. I do not wish to be interrupted!"
And with that, Lord Dominance stomped off to his meditation chamber.

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Upon entering, Shadow immediately removed his damaged Sith robes, revealing his buff, built torso, marred only by the immense scar on his back. But most disturbing, there was no blood. In it's place, was a myriad of tristed wires and metal. His arms, from the elow to the fingers, were also metallic, polished in chrome. The Shadow Angel did indeed rise from the ashes.... as a cyborg!
No matter, thought the young Dark Lord. A mere lightsaber wound cannot stop me from my hatred, my quest for vengeance.

My thirst for blood.

<All in good time, my young apprentice.> The Dark Lord raised his head towards the ceiling. "Master?"
<Yes, it is I, Divine Spirit. I have had to retreat from the Jedi forces, but my plans have not yet failed. You will go to my secret cloning laboratories on [censored! I can't tell you! But for story purposes I will call it Volcanic Cloning Planet.] The coordinates will be beamed to you shortly. There, you are to perform an inspection and certify them as ready for battle. You will be most impressed, I assure you.>

"As you wish, my Master." And with that, Lord Dominance rose from his seat. The scar that was once on his back was no more. It had completely healed. He opened a compartment in the wall on his chamber (the closet) and changed.

The cocoon of the chamber opened. What emerged, was a figure of terror, yet also resembling an icon of ultimate coolness. Donned in a leather trenchcoat, the Dark Lord ran his metallic claw fingers through his long, electric blue hair. His equally shiny, metal boots boomed across the polished floor. He approached Admiral Jericho.

--------------- My second........

Space. The final frontier. A red planet, shimmering like a jewel, a deception of the fiery hell within. A black, silent ship jumped out of hyperspace in its orbit. The Sith Infiltrator, ferrying the Dark Lord, the Shadow Angel, sped towards a landing platform marked in the Emperor's special coordinates.

As the ship landed, a pair of blast doors in front of the platform opened, and two black-robed, hooded firgures emerged. The Dark Lord exited his craft, and one of the attendants spoke. "This way, my Lord. We have been expecting your arrival for a long time."

The three entered the facility, and the doors slammed shut behind them. Although he wasn't affected by it, Shadow could sense the searing heat inside. "Exactly why did you choose such a hot and uncomfortable planet as this to develop your weaponry here?"
"Simply because soldiers grow lazy in comfortable climate. They must learn to feel the heat of battle."

"Soldiers? I didn't come here to inspect another batch of stormtroopers--" the attendant quickly interrupted.
"Oh, our new clones are much more than mere stormtroopers, I can assure you." The three entered a turbolift. One attendant pushed a button, and they were off.

Shadow, not being one to ask a lot of questions, instead probed the attendant's mind through the Force. After a few moments, his eyes widened.

The turbolift stopped, and opened to reveal a catwalk reaching across the chasm of a volcano! Below were several platforms floating above the lava. On it, were thousands of hodded figures sparring against each other with double-bladed lightsabers.

Once again, the attendant spoke. "Many years ago, the great Darth Sidious built a clone army using a template of a bounty hunter. Although they made excellent soldiers, they still could not meet the Emperor's incrasing demands. We have remedied this problem by using the DNA of one of Sidious' strongest, most loyal apprentices, Khameir Sarin... but you might know him better as DARTH MAUL.

Indeed, my Master was wise to make this decision. "Before I make my final report, I would like to test out one of these clones personally." The attendant was a bit reluctant. "As you wish, my Lord, but I must warn you. You may not survive the test run. We've made certain enhance--"
"Just do it." And the attendant left Shadow at the catwalk.

Minutes later, the door at the other end opened to reveal a clone. The Maul clone removed his hood and cloak, then drew his double-bladed lightsaber and ignited each blade, one by one. Shadow ignited his own curved saber, it's purple blade, an untraditional color for both the Jedi and the Sith, glowing across his face. The clone immdeiately charged at Shadow and twirled his blade at him, but the Dark Lord easily blocked. The other side of the clone's staff immediately rushed to Shadow's face, but his keen sense of the Force acted as an alarm, aiding to block and parry each incoming strike. The sabers locked, and Shadow was surprised at the clone's strength as his blade kept coming closer to his face. However, the Dark Lord's mechanical strength in his arm kicked in and pushed the clone back off balance. A quick Force Pull brought him closer before Shadow brought his blade down on the clone's neck and decapitated him.

The attendant rushed back in. Shadow put away his saber, turned to face him, and said, "39 seconds. Most impressive. The Jedi will be overwhelmed by this elite fighting force. How many of these soldiers are prepared?"
"Two million, sir." Shadow grinned.

"Excellent. I want them sent to the Jedi Academy battleground at 0600 Coruscant time. Meanwhile, I have a personal agenda to follow. There will be no one to stop us this time!"

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And that's all. Since I made an entire army of Darth Maul clones, maybe that was a little over the top? I dunno. Maybe you guys could use the general idea in the next episode (I haven't read it yet.)

There ya go. Feedback would be nice.

Darklighter

07-24-2002, 06:25 AM

That was very good Shadow, and welcome back!:) The whole layout of the post was a litle confusing (lol) but thats fine. The Darth Maul clone thing is a great idea. Maybe not two milllion...a little over the top?:( You could edit it down to a much smaller number that would suffice, if its not too much trouble.

However, good news for you, I have just had a great idea of how I can incorporate your story into Episode 2. You guys, we wnat to start this off kinda slow right now - no really really big things happening just yet please - I want this to last a little longer than the first:)

My first post was a little introduction to the Academy, not very exciting. My next one is gonna be a little more action packed:D Bare with me please, for I am writing now......

edit - I have just edited my last post to incorporate Reb's betrayal story (how dare you turn against us Reb;) lol). Hope thats okay, just so there is a little continuity. Anyway, back to the story.....

edit edit - I have put a little aboot another character, namely Legion, in my last post so there will be some link with my next story. Anway, back to writing again...

Darklighter

07-24-2002, 07:25 AM

This is also a very long post. It gets good, so do not give up on it too soon please:(

Whiedragon had left in a hurry. The whereabouts of Obi-wan had been revealved. He was on Corruscant, that much was certain. At least he has made it, Darklighter thought to himself. The sun was now going down, and teachers were finishing their sparring matches and lessons with their students. The dark was coming fast, and Darklighter walked quickly through the hanger bay towards the turbo lift. he needed to gain focus on the sitiuation, retrieve hope of wisdom from their actions.

"Report Sir!" KordKelly's voice came from behind him, and Darklighter turned around reluctantly. He knew what he was going to say. "Still no word of Obi-wan's presence." Darklighter's head fell, and he stared into space. "However" Kord continued, "Whitedragon has landed on Corruscant, and has begun his search."

"Very good" his tone was sarcastic, and he glared at Kelly for a few seconds before turning around again.

"Very good Ensign. Dismissed" Darklighter answered as Kelly scuttled away to the hanger doors. This was an unfortunate business, his Master nowhere to be seen and he felt a disturbance in the force. He needed guidance.

Darklighter proceeded once again towards th turbo lift. Its shape was cylindrical, made of glass. He entered and the lift projected towards the top of the sandy mountain. It grinded to a halt, and he stepped out onto the platform. The heat from the sun was pulsing now more than ever. It was hot and humid, even at this time of the day. The seats for the Jedi council were set around in a circle, for the elite members of the Academy. His seat was next to Obi-wan's.

Outside of the ring of seats were meditation platforms, and he sat cross-legged on one. His eyes were closed, and he was soon in deep concentration, peering into the very being of the force. It flowed through him, a warm sensation unlike any other. His thoughts began to speak to them.

"Tell me what I must do..." his mind echoed the words, and soon it answered him.

"You will go to the moon of Oradian. An old friend will be waiting..." and wit that, the vision ended. Before it did however, Darklighter saw a hooded man, cloaked, his face covered.

"What could it mean?" he asked himself, as he preoceeded back to the docking bay. He would have to leave tonight. There was no reason to wait on these matters for long. From the turbo lift, he placed rugged old garments over his uniform, and jumped onto a speeder. He headed for the nearest space port, the city of Mas Eilsa. Sneaking aboard a public transport to the moon was the only hope now. He had to be discreet, for the Jedi would not be safe to reveal themselves now.

He arrived at the port just before dark. The ship was not large, only a small shuttle, large enough to carry a hundred passenger refuges. He climbed on board, and it took off with a shudder, and slowly proceeded into orbit.

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The moon Oradian was only a few light years away. It was a smugglers moon, full of cities littered with sky-high scapers. The dealers would look for business in the many bars and night-clubs. The Jedi were not liked now, so Darklighter had to keep his identity anonymous.

As soon as he stepped off the passenger ship, he felt it. He had an overwhelming sense of deja vu, the feeling in the force was oddly familiar. It drew him immediately towards a bar, but as he walked towards it, the signs in multicolour lights, a man stopped by him and grabbed his arm.

"Give me all of your money!" he yelled in a forced whisper. Darklighter dealt with this kind of people all of the time. He turned to face him and waved his hand.

"You don't want my money. You should make some for yourself" his voice was clam and soothing. A blank look came over the man's face.

"I am sorry Sir" he said now apologetically, " I will not bother you again" and with that he walked off, and Darklighter slowly continued towards the bar. As he walked inside, he could see it was dark, music was playing, smoke was everywhere. He spotted female alien dancers pacing around the area, and Darklighter payed no notice to the distractions and walked up to the bar.

"Correlian ale...in a clean glass" the bartender glared at him, and turned to get his drink, slamming it down on the table. Darklighter payed no attention, and sat drinking, unnoticably deeply mediating. Then he felt it. Time semed to slow down. He could feel it in the force again. That presence, he said, I know it!. He could see the figure again in the back of his mind. He could see him approaching from behind him. At the right moment, Darklighter unsheathed his lightsaber and swung it around. The figure behind him ducked beneath the saber's blow, and they stood staring at each other. Slowly but surely, the man lifted the hood off his face.

"Good to see you again...old friend." AB_legion stood before him.

To be continued...

Hope you guys liked it. If I'm going to be in anyone's stories, just remember I am gone for now. I will finish my little story in a while.

Divine Spirit

07-24-2002, 08:19 AM

Just letting you know that im going on holiday tomorrow so i wont be logging in until Monday 5th of August. This means i wont be able to participate in this thread until that date :(

Feel free to do whatever you like with my characters, as long as its not too stupid. And obi-wan13, you can go ahead with the special storyline if you want (the one i mentioned in a pm) ;)

Reb Starblazer

07-24-2002, 09:54 AM

Sorry you have to go Divine. Maybe the Dark Emperor(heh, your using the name I called you) won't be a major player in this, kinda like in ESB. You see him, but he doesn't really do much;) Special storyline eh? Sounds interesting. I've got a few plans up my sleeve as well. It's cool that you included me in your post Darklighter, just remember that it wasn't exactly hard for me to turn. I was over halfway there already, I was always a Dark Sider. As for why... I had only one chance left to join them, so I took it while I could. It was our only chance. I've got little hints in my post about my intentions and how I've been "furthering"(maybe furthering isn't the right word:D) the Emperor's search for you. I'm probably just gonna develop the search for the Jedi in my posts, and maybe a few other things,but not much action wise. Maybe this one should have little bits of action, spread along different people and planets, and lead up to one grand finale. Little bits of action, plenty of story:D

Agen

07-24-2002, 11:56 AM

I think i'll replace reb with me then since he decided to fall to the darkside :D Eventually a reason for my being.

Darth Talliusc

07-24-2002, 12:10 PM

my master is gone *sniff *sniff, now i get to sit in the BIG CHAIR!!! oh wait, they're gonna let shadow have it, nuts.
ive written up a story or four to play in with this new episode, but i need Reb's input first, CHECK YOU PM PLEASE! whatever happens ill post my next installment right here so stay tuned

whitedragon

07-24-2002, 12:27 PM

every tom, dick and harry with a blaster came out of every building and alley near the two jedi. the emperor put quite a bounty on their heads, 100,000,000 for each jedi they brought in. s0ulblihtr and white dragon twirled their lightsabers around deflecting shot after shot of blaster fire. "we dont have time for this" s0ulblihtr said. their was a brief pause from the bounty hunters and then they all ran down the street after somethin invisable. "nice illusion my young padawan" dragon said. "thank you master but where do we go from here". "up". dragon walked into an alley, he jumped up kicked off one wall then kicked off the oppisite one and repeated this untill he was at the top, his padawan did the same. they were right below rush hour traffic, speeders flew just afew yards above their heads. "what now" s0ulblihtr said. "we stick out our thumbs" dragon said. draogon jumped into the air and landed on a speeder. two rodians looked up at him and started yelling. dragon jump to the speeder in front of him being careful to time his jump, one slip and it was a long way to the bottom. he jumped to the next one and almost dident make it because he heard honking behind him. it was obi-wan and tyrion "hop in" obi-wan said. dragon opened the door and climbed in. "hello master" s0ulblihtr was sitting right next to him. obi-wan turned around "bounty hunters have dissectional, hes right below us". tyrion pitched the speeder down to where dissectional was and both speeders flew off into the lower levels.

Darklighter

07-24-2002, 12:28 PM

Guys, if you can, be good enough to try and stick to the previous stories...no pressure, it would just be nice to have some continuity that worked, ya know?:) Plus, if you are going to post a story, give us a warning first so people can wait.

P.S. Thanks Reb for the first Episode:) and yeah, i do have word:D lol

Thanks again!

edit - nice story there Dragon, good work...:thmbup1:

Shadow Angel

07-24-2002, 05:43 PM

Originally posted by Darklighter
Guys, if you can, be good enough to try and stick to the previous stories...no pressure, it would just be nice to have some continuity that worked, ya know?

Haha, reminds me of some EU continuity. (No offense, but it's true! A lot of it doesn't connect.)

Agen

07-24-2002, 06:21 PM

Yeh, please keep it connected, we want this to be as good as episode 1.

whitedragon

07-24-2002, 07:12 PM

did i not connect something:confused:

Darklighter

07-24-2002, 08:27 PM

No, you did nothing wrong. I wrote my post just as you were wriing your story, so mine afterwards looked like I was commenting on yours...but I wasn't, thats whu i edited my post quite to say you'd done a good job...just a minor misunderstanding:)

whitedragon

07-24-2002, 08:29 PM

Originally posted by Darklighter
No, you did nothing wrong. I wrote my post just as you were wriing your story, so mine afterwards looked like I was commenting on yours...but I wasn't, thats whu i edited my post quite to say you'd done a good job...just a minor misunderstanding:)
ok and thanks

Darklighter

07-25-2002, 02:14 PM

Does anyone want to carry on with this who hasn't written for a while? It would be cool just to keep it going for ages like the last:) ...anyone...:( ...hello?

Darklighter

07-25-2002, 09:06 PM

*bump*

Just keeping this up there on the page. Isn't anybody from the Academy going to write anything more? I will, but I wrote last. I'll leave t for a bit to see:(

Dath Maximus

07-25-2002, 09:44 PM

Im back!!!

well it looks like youve started again

this time someone include me.

i tried last time but i got killed or something.

frozen perhaps.

ohh well

Reb Starblazer

07-25-2002, 11:38 PM

I'd post something, but I'm gonna wait for another Sith, like Shadow Angel or Darth Talliusc, etc post, because I was the last Dark one to post on here. I don't want to tell the entire story from the perspective of the dark side(hmm, or do I...:D)

Shadow Angel

07-26-2002, 01:22 AM

Like Reb, I also have a wife in my past. I'm debating on wether to write it here or in the "A long time ago..." thread. I've developed a fairly good past for my character. Hmm........

Darklighter

07-26-2002, 08:05 AM

Any other Sith guys want to write a new story for Ep2? ou can Shadow if ya want...there's Talliusc and Kaan as well and Reb...Divine has left for a while though, so anyone please geel free to write:)

Darth Talliusc

07-26-2002, 01:47 PM

well ya know id love to post another part of my story, but last night when i tried that something odd happened, i was writing up a storm and very tired. after a couple of paragraphs i noticed that the letters had become invisible. i was writing and the little black line that shows you where you are on the reply was moving but no message was coming up, i tried everything but it was all invisible. well anywho im gonna try again today, ill edit this post and add it here.

Dissectional

07-27-2002, 11:52 AM

Hey, I'm back from my 3 day hiatus, thank's to my bro hogging my computer due to his counterstrike addiction (from 10 am till 2 am).
I'm impressed with the way ep2 is going. Can someone enlighten us on my situation (and perhaps include a drmatic lightsaber-swinging badass escape from 15 bounty hunters)? Or I can meet up with one of the Sith Academy's Knights, where my fellow jedi help me out or something. :D

Agen

07-27-2002, 12:10 PM

long term writers block here :o

Darklighter

07-27-2002, 12:24 PM

Welcome back Dissectional:D

Basically, the Jedi have been knocked out of the Academy by the Emperor and Reb joined the Sith. All the good guys have rebuilt a new Academy on a desert-like planet. Obi-wan has been sent to Corruscant with 'important information', and have been ambushed by bounty hunters. Whitedragon left to help them and they are now together as a group.

Thats about it:)

Dath Maximus

07-27-2002, 12:27 PM

hey dont forget i was captured more or less *went to the emperor* by the emperor and im kinda like vader with the machanical parts now. (happened in the first war)

so now im gonna be around all i ask is i fight obi.

Dissectional

07-27-2002, 12:55 PM

*gasp* My master, turn to the dark side? NOOOOOOOO!!!! :eek:

Oh well, time for a new teacher, I guess. Or I could have grown up fast and am now a jedi, that is a long ways away from being able to teach. :D

Maybe we can have a dramatic fight scene between former padawan and former master. HINT HINT!

I just wrote a long ass story on my beginnings, so I have writer's block for now. :dozey:

Dath Maximus

07-27-2002, 01:06 PM

or dissectional
a battle that results in you bringing me back. hint hint

a true test for ones padawan.

Dissectional

07-27-2002, 01:41 PM

OOO good idea master maximus! I'm gonna have to write this one... i enjoy writing about saber battles, especially the short stories of Me vs. Tyrion's psycho Lexx voodoo dolls.

Those bastards are still out to get me... *hears psycho voodoo doll chitter chatter*

NOOO...

Edit- we still have to figure out what happens to me when Obi-wan and the crew come to rescue me after my hideous predicament.

Dath Maximus

07-27-2002, 01:46 PM

sounds good.

remeber when the fight is written i use two lightsabers, both blue

Dissectional

07-27-2002, 01:50 PM

Two blue sabers, got it.

This story is gonna be interesting when i get time to write it. But soon i must depart to have luch with my dying grandpa, and go see GOLDMEMBER! YEAH BABY YEAH!

*puts on crushed velvet suit and male symbol necklace* GROOVY BABY!

Darklighter

07-28-2002, 11:40 AM

The story sounds like its coming along nicely. Everyone's stories are tieing in with others, its really cool. We're getting like a meshwork of plots and things - very nice, wel done:) :thumbsup:

Remember that Episode 2 is still going on here. I will write another part a little later. Just letting you know people are free to write more here if they wish:)

Darth Talliusc

07-29-2002, 11:30 AM

alright, im ready to write, i was thinking i might add on to the bounty hunter on coruscant stuff that was written here earlier, seems that nobody has posted a story part in a while. im a little confused however as to how many jedi are in the battle with the bounty hunters together. if someone could just PM me or leave a post here telling me which jedi are around then i can edit this msg and get rid of the stuff thats written here.

Dath Maximus

07-29-2002, 11:33 AM

ok im not sure about the others but ive become one of the sith with mechanical parts like vader. but the others dont know this. and i will eventually go back to the good.

id write but im working on the prequal thread.

Darklighter

07-29-2002, 09:35 PM

I still need to write my next part. I will do it in a minute - my writer's block is over.
And btw:

Come on guys!:) I thought we were going to keep this going:(

To prove we are I am writing my next part right now...

Reb Starblazer

07-29-2002, 10:23 PM

I have ideas, but it would pretty much require me to be very selfish and write the whole sith side of the story myself. Not to mention that I don't really find the time.
Darn life, interfering with my forum time...

Darklighter

07-29-2002, 11:09 PM

LOL, actually I'm not going to write anything now. Its 4am and I am too tired, but I will tomorrow:)

Darth Talliusc

07-29-2002, 11:52 PM

alright then here goes. pardon my use of jedi's names but i was hoping to continue with the story of obi-wan, dissectional, tyrion, agen_terminator whitedragon and s0ulblihtr. if you wish part of this post changed or deleted please msg me about it.

coruscant:

Darth Talliusc sat alone in his chambers, it was dark in there and the temperature was colder then most humanoid species could stand. Talliusc had taken to meditating alot more often these days, ever since Reb had joined the ranks of the sith Talliusc had been acting differently. Talliusc cared greatly for his master and fellow sith brethren, he would gladly go to rescue any of them if they needed it of him, but Reb was different. for the first time in all of Talliuscs life he had a friend, a single person who did not irritate, confuse or punish Talliusc excessively. Reb was trustworthy, a trait found rarely in the sith. but Talliusc had not seen Reb in some time, the dark emperor had been sending Reb on missions with elements of the 9th fleet recently.
Reb's absence had given Talliusc the time to fortify Coruscant. Much of the past month had been spent training bounty hunters to form an elite counter-insurgence division. combined with Reb's personal assassination division Coruscant would be an impregnable fortress.

and now they would be put to the test. BEEP-BOOP. a message had come in to Talliuscs private monitor, Talliusc read it through twice and sounded the alert. within minutes the best bounty hunters of the galaxy were on their way to confront the jedi that had somehow penetrated the outer security rings of coruscant.

Talliusc robed and gathered his weapons and private speeder, after searching with the force he found a group of four jedi on one of coruscants many skyscrapers. he relayed the coordinates to the assassins Reb had sent. keying in commands on his speeders control board he sent 8 hovercannons to test the jedi's mettle.
one of the jedi charged the cannons while the other three escaped "interesting, this jedi gives willingly his life for his friends" pulling his speeder into a steep drop Talliusc ordered the 6 nearest bounty hunters to help the hovercannons.
Dissectional fought well but was outmatched by the hovercannons and bounty hunters, he took off the heads of four bounty hunters and eliminated all of the hovercannons before Talliusc dropped to the platform. "you cant win jedi, surrender your lightsaber and you may yet live"
"never, foul sithlord, i will not be a hostage to be bartered!" said dissectional injecting as much steel into his words as his throat would allow.
"if thats the way you want it" with a flick of his wrist Talliusc signaled the remaining bounty hunters to cirlce the jedi. and loosed his curve handled doublebladed saber.
"what the?" was all dissectional could manage to say as he looked on at the strange saber.
with perfect timing one bounty hunter chucked a detonation pack at dissectional while the other loosed a volley from his plasma cannon, Talliusc charged. Dissectional pushed the detonation pack back at its thrower with enough force to knock the bounty hunter over the edge of the building into the street far below, turning with his enhanced jedi reflexes he blocked the other hunters blasts and managed to deflect one into the throat of the bounty hunter. the bounty hunter fell backwards dead before he hit the ground. The fury of Talliuscs charge and the distraction of the bounty hunters made it difficult for dissectional to parry or block many of Talliuscs strikes, he settled on dodging as many as he could.
launching strike after strike on the skillful jedi Talliusc used as many dirty tricks as he could, using the force to tangle the circuits in dissectionals lightsaber, tripping him at the knees and throwing him into the wall. dissectional stooped down to the ground unconscious.
"he fought well, a pity it ended so quickly" thought Talliusc as he keyed in the coordinate on his wrist comm to bounty hunters across the plaza, they would come and pick up the jedi and restrain him. Talliusc had more jedi to hunt before the night was done. "Talliusc to ironclaw" said talliusc into his wrist mike. ironclaw was one of the more proficient assassins Reb had sent to Coruscant. "my lord we have a visual on two more jedi, separate from the other group" came back the reply. "you have leave to engage, neutralize them and then continue pursuit of the other jedi. make Reb proud" with that Talliusc switched off the comm, and revved his speeder. It would be interesting to see how Reb's assins did in comparison to Talliuscs bounty hunters.

well what do you think? sorry dissectional about your saber and all but i thought it added a nice touch. oh and you may want to edit your first post in this thread. change Reb's name to agen_terminator. as hes already included himself in that section of the story. i hope one of the light jedi on coruscant will further this story soon. keep this thread going.

edit: and Reb if you could please send me a copy of the episode one story. K_i_zilla@hotmail.com thanks.

Reb Starblazer

07-30-2002, 10:43 AM

Sure. I'm sending it now. There's just a few minor problems though with your story. Nothing wrong with the actual story part, just the continuity wise. Didn't Obi and the others go to Coruscant to the Jedi council? I don't think that there would be a Jedi council there if it was controlled by the Emperor. Possibly, it could be fitted into the story that Coruscant was taken very recently, but when they went to capture the Jedi council, they were gone into hiding. So Obi and the others are heading to the secret hiding base of the Jedi Council, trying to tell them something. Maybe I'll incorporate that into my next story. BTW, didn't I send the Assassin's after Obi and them? :D I like how in your story I've been "sent away" that kinda ties in with my stories and what I'm going to develop.

Darth Talliusc

07-30-2002, 10:59 AM

ah sorry bout that, ill edit my post right away and incorporate you into the bounty hunting stuff.... of course anybody who reads this wont understand what im talking about because it will already be edited hehe excellent. and yeah i dont think dissectional read the ep1 thread all the way through. thats gonna take some editing.... maybe we could change the planet? or at least change it from a mission to the council to something like an intelligence mission..... well at least he was caught for his story incontinuities =)

Darklighter

07-30-2002, 12:18 PM

Previously in my story...

That presence, he said, I know it!. He could see the figure again in the back of his mind. He could see him approaching from behind him. At the right moment, Darklighter unsheathed his lightsaber and swung it around. The figure behind him ducked beneath the saber's blow, and they stood staring at each other. Slowly but surely, the man lifted the hood off his face.

"Good to see you again...old friend." AB_legion stood before him.

They stared at each other. Their gazes peirced their minds and look into each others very soul. Darklighter stood, his lightsaber stretched out towards the face of AB_Leigion, both unmoving, completely still in deepest thought.

The whole of the bar had stopped what they were doing, and turned to face in awe. Some had run outside for fear of getting caught up in the trouble. The Jedi may have been disliked, but these people only feared the Sith more.

Darklighter then looked around at the customers and workers staring at them. He spoke loudly. Everyone heard him.

"Jedi business" he said, "go back to your drinks."

As they began to turn away, so did Legion, and he strolled out of the main door and turned left down an alley. Quickly Darklighter holstered his saber and proceeded to follow him. The night was cold and amp now, the neon lights of the signs and clubs were bright, but the alley he entered was dark and dank. He could hardly see Legion. He then raised his voice to the shadows.

"I thought you were dead" he shouted.

"I was dead" the voice responded as he stepped out of the darkness. "Dead enough to know what pain feels like. You have no idea what I've been through Darklighter" his voice was now coarse and rough, "This war has only just begun...a new threat has emerged. The Emperor is underseeing the development of clones. Clones of the most feared Sith that ever...Khameir Sarin"

Darklighter was so shocked, the truth hit him so hard he couldn't believe it, "Maul? No...it can't be..."

"It can" Legion butted in, "and it is. You needed to be told...you're Academy is in danger" Legion stepped closer, "They will find you m friend, and they will kill you."

"Not far from the truth!" a voice said from behind them. A figuer walked towards them, cloaked, his unusualy large saber hilt in his hand. The two Jedi suddenly realised what it was. The figure lifted back his hood to reveal his black and red tatooed face and horns above his forehead.

"Maul!" Darklighter screamed. The Jedi dropped their cloaks to the floor and unsheathed their sabers. They ignited and prepared fo battle.

The clone ignited the two ends of his saber before leaping high in the air to drop on their position. The Jedi were quick enough to roll to the side out of the way, before sumasulting free of his attack. The clone hit high and low, each Jedi blocking each end of the saber. He swung overhead and Darklighter knocked the saber to the side, and Legion brought his saber up to cut the hilt in half. In absolute rage, the clone swung hard at Legion, knocking him to the floor, just as Darklighter swiped his shoulder, cutting his flesh.

He yelped and clutching his wound began to run off. He hadn't run fifty feet when a shot was fired from above. It struck the clone on the back and he fell to the floor dead. Both Jedi looked up as stormtroop jumped from on top of the building.

"Thought you might need some help" he said.

"Looks like you were right Legion" Darklighter said, as Legion nodded in reply.

"Lets go!" stormtroop ordered, as they walked to the hanger bay a few hundred metres away to board the Academy shuttle craft.

Dath Maximus

07-30-2002, 12:36 PM

when i think it up ill post about how you guys find out whats happend to me.

but im gonna have to wait untill the story is halway through

pivital moment!!!

Reb Starblazer

07-30-2002, 12:55 PM

Well, maybe I'll include you in my next post Dath. I'll just pass by you or something like that. Not really say much about you, just that you're there with the Sith. Sound Good? I'll either edit and paste my next post here, or I'll just make another post.

Dath Maximus

07-30-2002, 01:00 PM

sounds good to me

Reb Starblazer

07-30-2002, 05:58 PM

The shuttle descended slowly towards the planet, as Malice saw the large Imperial Palace growing even larger as he approached. Despite being in the service of the Emperor for a year, this was the first time he had ever been here. The Emperor had called him here, as he had every other Sith Lord, for a meeting. He looked forward to speaking, and also sparring, with Talliusc again however, for he was the only one who had truly accepted him.

“Always an outcast” Malice thought to himself. As a child, he never had friends, he was half Human, half Zabrak, unwanted by both species. Then when his parents died and he was stranded on a unknown planet for 10 years, the closest thing he had to a friend, was the Holo-image of Exar Kun, in the Sith Holocron Malice had learned from. Once Darth Talon found him, he was treated more as a slave than an apprentice. Then, at the Jedi Academy, he never quite fit in either. A Sith, surrounded by Jedi, what could he expect. If it wasn’t for Obi-Wan’s secret help and training, he would have either left long ago, or never went at all. And now, he was amongst his “own kind”, but even here he was different…

The shuttle touched down on the ground, a bit rougher than Malice had expected.
“Stupid clones. They could have least made some special ones with a little bit of piloting skill.” He thought to himself. He then descended the ramp, and walked towards the Palace. Divine Spirit’s reach grew everyday, sector by sector, the galaxy was coming under Sith control. Even Coruscant had fallen, but the Jedi Council had escaped before they could be captured or eliminated. Malice was glad he wasn’t here at that time, the Emperor must have been furious. Every day the Emperor’s armies grew, the number of his minions increasing. “More like his slaves are increasing” Malice thought to himself.

The large doors opened to allow Lord Malice entrance to the Palace, and closed behind him. He walked through the halls, passing officers as he went. He almost bumped into two green, scantily clad, female Twi’lek dancers as they exited Darth Slayne’s, the newest Sith lord, chambers. They gave him a small smile, a bow, and stood aside. “Darth Slayne seems to be enjoying his new position of authority” Malice thought to himself.
He continued walking down the hall, passing an open door. He looked in to see Dath Maximus, lying on a hospital bed. Doctors were crowded around him, adjusting and refining his mechanical implants. This war had not been kind to him…

He finally reached the Emperors chambers, with two red clad Imperial Guards outside the door, wielding Force Pikes. Everyday the Empire grew more and more like that of the one of old. They admitted him, and he strode into the Emperors quarters. All the Sith lords were sitting around a large, cylindrical table. All except Darth Slayne and Darth Talliusc.

“Welcome Darth Malice.” Divine Spirit said to him. “It seems that everyone has now arrived, except for Darth Slayne. Darth Talliusc will not be joining us, as he is on Coruscant, finishing some important business.” Just then Darth Slayne strode into the room, and took his seat. “Well, then, we’re all here now. You have all been called here in order to prepare for the oncoming attack on the Jedi Academy. We now know that it is located on Thedonias. Our capital ships will surround the planet, making it impossible for them to escape this time. We will then send in Clonetroopers and ground vehicles to soften up their defenses Then we will send in our new ultimate weapon. Darth Dominance, if you would.”

Darth Dominance stood up, and made his way to a holo-projector. He then activated it. The image projected above the table showed rows upon rows of cloaked figures, all practicing with crimson double-bladed Lightsabres. “This, is our latest and greatest creation. These are all clones of the one time Sith Lord…” The image zoomed in on one of the figures, and a red face appeared.

“Darth Maul” Malice said in amazement. This looked very bad for the Jedi indeed.

“Yes. As I was saying, the Jedi will be powerless to stop this onslaught of the Dark Side, and will fall before us. “

“How many clones are there?” Asked Darth Slayne

“About two million.” Answered Shadow Angel. Malice fought every urge in his body, trying not to gasp. Two million! The Jedi would be crushed, there was no way they could fight off that many. Every effort he had made in the last year, every punishment he had endured for the sake of the Academy, wasted. For months he had known the Jedi Academy was on Thedonias, but had made every attempt to keep the location hidden from the rest of the Sith. Including sabotaging the crafts of bounty hunters that were heading to that area a short time ago. He had not heard back from them, so he could guess how it went.

“Most of the plans for the attack will be made later, but this is just the outline. You are all dismissed.” Said Divine Spirit, as he rose from his seat. That was when Malice noticed something. Something he should have noticed a long time ago. Or rather, something he should not be seeing now. Hanging around Divine Spirit’s neck, was a Sith Amulet. One of the Sith Amulets of power, made by ancient Sith magic, it would increase a users strength in the Force. Malice had thought he destroyed the last two, when he had defeated Darth Talon. Apparently, he was wrong.

This explained how Divine Spirit was so overwhelmingly powerful with the Force. This also changed everything, called for drastic measures. Malice rose from his seat and began walking out of the room, following the other Sith Lords. He knew what he had to do. Once he got back to the Renegade, he would take his private ship and go searching. He had to find the only thing more powerful than the Amulets of old. However, he didn’t know where to start looking, but worse, he didn’t know if he would survive using it. But, sacrifice’s must be made.

“Darth Dominance, may I speak with you a moment?” Divine Spirit said, as Shadow Angel stopped, and stepped aside, letting the other’s exit through the door.

“What is your bidding my master?” Asked Shadow Angel.

“Contact the Dark Jedi’s. Send out the best trained ones we have. Have them follow and ‘retrieve’ Darth Malice. I want him returned dead, or close to it.” Stated Divine Spirit coldly.

“But, why don’t we just destroy him now. I could do it. He wouldn’t stand a chance against all of us.” Shadow Angel finished.

“No, my young friend. I wish to have him followed. I want to know what he’s up to. Then, he will be destroyed. As for you and the other Lords, you have important work to do, and many plans to make”

“As you wish, my master” Replied Darth Dominance as he and the Emperor stood by the window, watching Darth Malice’s shuttle leave, rising towards space.

Dath Maximus

07-30-2002, 06:16 PM

The Large Door slide open, several doctors gasped as the extremely tall figure walked out. His heart now filled with rage and his mind with lies, Maximus had become a sith. Finding a new strength in the mechanical body he had been given after the sith apparently found him near death.

"I assure you Lord Maximus will be no threat to us," the emperor dryly spoke. "He beleives everything i have told him, he will kill obi wan13 and the others." Maximus now entered the room standing next to the emperor, his black cape drapeing to the floor. "As you can see he is also more formidalbe."

Darth Dominance gave maximus a look of suspicious jealousy. Touching the edge of his lightsaber Darth Bill spoke, "what are we to have him do?"
Clearing his throat Divine Spirit stated his plans. "Since he is a master jedi trained in the arts of the old, he shall hunt them down and get them when they are vulnerable. when they are alone."

to be continued....

whitedragon

07-30-2002, 06:38 PM

hi guys sorry that ive been away for awhile but ill continue

it was a dark and stormy nite...well it was mainly just dark because light dident come through to the lower levels of coruscant. tyrion piloted the speeder with ease through the traffic to get to disserectional. "get above them" obi-wan said. obi-wan activated his lightsaber and cut a hole in the roof then jumped out and landed on top of the other speeder. the bounty hunters looked up in surprise as he started cutting a hole in their speeder. the one not driveing shot holes in the roof. obi-wan almost fell off but white dragon jumped on the speeder as well to catch him. the speeder was going crazy, turning this way and that trying to nock the jedi off but the jedi held on for dear life. the speeder that tyrion was flying came in front and agenterminator started fireing a blaster at the bounty hunter that wasent driveing, and the one that was leveled off because he was so suprised. dragon pulled the dead bounty hunter out of the car, then he pulled the driver out and got into the speeder. dragon stared in shock at the gigantic freighter that was in front of him only afew yards away. "hang on obi-wan" dragon pulled back hard on the piloting stick and hoped that they would make it. they made it by an inch or so clearing the freighter, dragon leveled off and obi-wan crawled inside. "everythings an adventure with you" dragon said "why cant you go someplace less populated to get attacked by the sith."

both speeders went into the higher levels and setteled down in a place close to the chanselors main office. they untied disserectional and started to walk. "why are you even attempting to seek help from the chanselor" dragon said "you know as well as i do that he wouldent dare to go aggenct the sith hes too frightend of them." "i know" obi-wan said "but we must try." they all came to the chanselors office. and walked inside. the secratary asked them their busness when they walked in. "we are jedi." obi-wan said. she looked at them and then motioned them to go inside. the chanselors room was highly decorated with many things from different worlds and the chanselor was decrotive himself. "master kenobi how good it is to see you, i hope..." "we have been invaded by the sith" obi-wan interupted. the chanselors happy expression turned into a very shocked and sad one. "i am sorry but i dont know what it is that you want me to do." "anything, we are in short supply of wepons food and ships. we need anything you can give us." the chanselor paused for a long while "i am sorry master kenobi but we are in short supply ourselves but if you give me the quardinates to your base im sure i can..." "no! we cannot trust anyone with that information." "then i am sorry but i cannot help you." the chanselor looked up at dragon. "you are the one they call white dragon?" "yes i am. why?". "oh no reason just wondering."

after the jedi had left the chanselor punched in a number on a com. system. a voice the could make the blood run cold came on "yes" "my lord he is here" "very good chanselr you will be rewarded soon" "thank you my lord th-" the chanselor put his hands to his throte and tryed to gasp for air but he did this all in vain "keep the change" the voice said.

the all split up when the jedi got out of the chanselors office. dragon went throughan alley and was almost to the speeders when a man in a trench coat came in front of him. dragons heart skiped a beat when he saw who it was "ian redhammer or is it white dragon now." "shadow angel" dragon said with the utmost lothing in his voice" dragon activated his light saber. angel laughed "are you planning to avenge you family well isent that funney. because i came here to avenge my father!." angel activated his curved hilt saber. and both men charged at eachother

whitedragon

07-30-2002, 06:56 PM

has anyone put this whole thing on one page yet.
oh and btw WHERE ARE YOU OBI-WAN

Darklighter

07-30-2002, 06:59 PM

Click the link in my sig to go to our new forums. Its for regular swampers, and we need more members. There is a Academy section with the whole thing. Go sign up please:) Its really cool:D

Darth Talliusc

07-30-2002, 07:16 PM

well it seems that the storylines are proceeding again, just a small note, in Reb's story i wasnt with the sith order, i was on Coruscant (which flows well with my story) but in Maximus' i am listed as WITH the sith, if you could please edit that and change the name to somebody else the story would still make sense.

keep up the good work people.

Dath Maximus

07-30-2002, 09:40 PM

no prob Talliusc i put you ther cause i just read reb's post

Darklighter

07-31-2002, 07:46 AM

I think I will post another part of my story either now or a little later...so watch out for it:)

whitedragon

07-31-2002, 10:13 AM

hey is someon else ever going to post a part of the story if not then ill post the fight between me and shadow angel

Darklighter

07-31-2002, 10:18 AM

That would be cool...I will be writing just a little later...

And don't kill his character off yet btw:D lol

whitedragon

07-31-2002, 10:20 AM

Originally posted by Darklighter
That would be cool...I will be writing just a little later...

And don't kill his character off yet btw:D lol
no ofcorce i wont me and him are arch enemys. this will just be one of our many battles where me and him will both escape injured

Darklighter

07-31-2002, 10:28 AM

I know you won't:D

Okay, carry on:)

whitedragon

07-31-2002, 08:48 PM

white dragon and shadow angel charged at eachother with a force so great that even the greatest of jedi would envy. dragon only fought to avenge his wife and child but his enemy sought to kill for revenge of his fathers death. the two warriors lightsabers hit together with a great clash that made their ears ring. both jedi moved faster than any normal eyes could see. they both backed out into the street many witnesses saw the flashes of red and white light and back away as fast as they could. shadow angel brought his light saber down on dragons head and they got into a saber lock. they held it for a long time then suddenly dragon pushed him with the forceand slashed his stomach but angel also took advantage and stabed his saber through dragons leg. they both heard other lightsabers activateing. it was obi-wan and the rest of the jedi. shadow angel started off down the street, not even he was a match for so many jedi masters. white dragon wondered why shadow angel ran down the street with such ease when dragon had cut his stomach.

Yom

07-31-2002, 11:10 PM

sorry this is late for me to add yom in but i am tierd of not seeing him in here and i dont know were every one is so pm me the locals of Darklighter plez so i can put that in thnak you

after the attak on the academy Yom Thyne desided to brake out his old Bounty Hunters Armor and gear. With his Mandalorian armor, with markings on it form may battels and symbuls of comfermed kills, minus the helmet, which was destroyed in a fight with a gang of pirates, he has not used it for not much more then to protect his idenity from those who might escape, witch not many did, and try to put a price on his head. Looking at his old blasters.

He says to him self."Do u even remeber how to use that....It has been to long."

But then he tought about his old employer,Sifo-Dyas. "U are too Weak. U are to Weak to take on Sith. Your skills have been rusted.... So i gess i will have to stick to the clones then, whont I" he said to him self as he picks up a light saber, wich he took of his first kill, and he slips it under his armor and pick up his guns and throws on his robe and walks out the door to find what is left of the fighting forces.

Kit fisto JK

07-31-2002, 11:30 PM

okay im confused what the HELL is going on with the stories and every thing what happened???

Yom

08-01-2002, 12:13 AM

Walking down the coradoors, wearing a robe to hide his Armor and wepons, of the some what empty academy. he looks at the various young padawnas.

Hereing padawns saying,"Man i wish i was with the masters fighting the sith". he fialy comes up to Darklighters room and knocks on his Door.

"Enter" gose The tiersome voice.

Yom Walks in and look to see Admiral Darklighter at his desk looking through his halo pads.

"Hello Admiral Darklighter" Yom says in a deepend Voice

"Why hello Chef How are u today?, what will u be serving us for dinner? Oh plez sit." as he wave towards a chair on the other side of the desk.

Still standing Yom says with discomfort "Well sir, I am not here about the food. There is some thing u should know about me."

"Is there something wrrong Yom?" He askes with deep curiosity

Yom tares off the robe covering the armore, and throws it to the floor. " well sir. i wasnt all ways a chef"

With great shook Darklighter stands up with fear in his eyes. " whaaa..whaaa.. what is going on? I know those markings. I thought it was a legend. "The Jedi hunter" here!?! bu...bu...but why? Are u here to Kill me or Obi-Wan13?"

"No sir i am not to kill you or the jedi or any one eals in the Academy in that fact."

"Then Why are u wearing that?"

"Well Sir i am the one u speak of and I did kill all those Jedi. But now i am done with that." For the next 5 min or so Yom tells Darklighter his whole story.

"So sir. I am here to help. I love thw Academy now and I think it is time that I do somthing more then just cook. In need to Fix What I have broken"

Darklighter walks over to Yom sticks out his hand and put his other hand on his solder. Yome returns the hand shake.

"Welcome to the good side Yom Thyne" said Darklighter as he still shakes his hand happily.

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 12:28 AM

can I post my story since I dont think im in eather of them anywhere :D

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 10:16 AM

Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
can I post my story since I dont think im in eather of them anywhere :D
i guess you can but me and the guys o coruscant are done basicly

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 10:21 AM

alright yom i knew that you were a fighter than a chef. so not as many cookies and beer huh oh well

Yom

08-01-2002, 10:59 AM

Originally posted by whitedragon
alright yom i knew that you were a fighter than a chef. so not as many cookies and beer huh oh well

well i made a nice big batch of cookies befor i left so help your self and as for the beer we are low so give me a list of what beer u whant and i will get camus to make the beer run

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 12:27 PM

Originally posted by Yom

well i made a nice big batch of cookies befor i left so help your self and as for the beer we are low so give me a list of what beer u whant and i will get camus to make the beer run
hey if you want ill join up with ya after i get back from coruscant

Yom

08-01-2002, 02:33 PM

Originally posted by whitedragon

hey if you want ill join up with ya after i get back from coruscant

ok thats cool

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 03:17 PM

alright guys if no ones goingto post another story im going to continue with mine

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 04:17 PM

i have no idea how to continue yet

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 05:18 PM

you could have me in there in my black mandelorian armor and 2 sabers after getting cased off the planet :D

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 05:29 PM

Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
you could have me in there in my black mandelorian armor and 2 sabers after getting cased off the planet :D

you could team up with me and yom after i gt back. were gonna kick some sith ass. i dont know how but were gonna do it

Yom

08-01-2002, 05:53 PM

way to dubbel post but any way kit come and join us

Darth Talliusc

08-01-2002, 06:52 PM

its nice that people havent lost interest in these stories yet, i was worried when everybody stopped posting. nice story yom, its a bit hard on the eyes though (yikes) maybe you should break out "ye old spellchecker" eh? no offense but plez?

Yom

08-01-2002, 07:36 PM

Originally posted by Darth Talliusc
its nice that people havent lost interest in these stories yet, i was worried when everybody stopped posting. nice story yom, its a bit hard on the eyes though (yikes) maybe you should break out "ye old spellchecker" eh? no offense but plez?

hey thanx and i edited the 2nd one but the first one i did not yet

i have another story on him in the prequel thread (along time ago (befor the sith academy))

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 07:54 PM

okay :D

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 08:02 PM

Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
okay :D
come on one of you guys make the next story about how we team up to do.....something

Yom

08-01-2002, 08:04 PM

ok i will do it

but tell me were your character is and i will wright

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 08:08 PM

Originally posted by Yom
ok i will do it

but tell me were your character is and i will wright
ok im white dragon i have long hair, a leather jacket, a dual lightsaber and i sometimes carrey a blaster.

Yom

08-01-2002, 08:11 PM

were is your local and situation

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 08:25 PM

i just got back from coruscant and my nee has been stabed by my arch enemy shadow angel and so my nee would heal in a hour or so sence its not a big deal

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 08:37 PM

now for the history of meee:D

during the attack on the academy I was out on my advanced swoop then on my way back to the academy he got attacked by troops on speeder bikesafter easly defeating them with duel sabers :D he realised that something was wrong so he raced back up to a hill top to see what had happened so he went to his cave ( where he goes to get away from the idiots at the academy :eek: j/k your not idiots) and put the swoop inside an special vehical and and flew off just to get attacked again figuring that they would hunt down any survivers he flew to a planet that he thought was abandoned to find the last of what was thought to be an extinct race the mandelorians who by his surprise took him in and helped him giving him black armor then he left the planet and returned to the academy and walked into darklighters office to find yom and darklighter shaking hands

YOM CAN TAKE IT NOW :D

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 08:39 PM

hey did you get the ual saber from me sence i am the dual saber trainer

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 08:44 PM

by the way what the hells up with your sid kit

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 08:51 PM

ive always had 2 sabers:D :saberr: :jango: :saberg:

now the helmet is black and the sabers are black and white:D

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 08:53 PM

Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
ive always had 2 sabers:D :saberr: :jango: :saberg:

now the helmet is black and the sabers are black and white:D cool #### man but the helmet dosent go very good

Yom

08-01-2002, 09:10 PM

WHITE CHECK YOUR PMS thank u

the next part of my story will be my nex post

Darklighter

08-01-2002, 09:19 PM

you guys mind if I take over the story after Yom's next post?

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 09:29 PM

Originally posted by Darklighter
you guys mind if I take over the story after Yom's next post?
no go ahead i dont mind :D

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 09:33 PM

#### whyd yom get off i thought he was going to write the next part of the story :mad:

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 09:44 PM

hay whitedragon why dont you think the helmet should be black

and when you said sid did you mean sig

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 09:49 PM

Originally posted by Kit fisto JK
hay whitedragon why dont you think the helmet should be black

and when you said sid did you mean sig
yeah the helmits ok black but i ment that helmets have been done to death.

and yes i did mean sig

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 09:54 PM

Originally posted by whitedragon

yeah the helmits ok black but i ment that helmets have been done to death.

and yes i did mean sig

what do you mean helmets have been done to death

and the reason for my sig is because I like to say realy long ahhhs in the chat room:D

Yom

08-01-2002, 10:14 PM

"Thanx Sir" Yom says some what happily

"no problem yom" he says as ther was a nock at the door "enter"

a man Dressed in black mandelorian armor enter. both Darklighter and Yom draw wepons and point them at the Man.

"NO! NO!DONT SHOOT!" he yells as he takes off his helmet. "it is me Kit-Fisto! i found this armor and i took it"

as both men lower there arms darklighter says "u gave us quite a scare in just a few more seconds and we would of made u bantha food"

"Yes Yes i apologize i did not mean to shock everyone like that"

"well well then. now that i see u both are ready for a fight. u see i just got word that WhiteDragon is wonded and cant get off the planet. and i whant to to sense that u 2 are availbe for this mission and i need u too to take on of camus's transports and get white and get back here. ok u 2 this is Black op and u need to do this fast. Intell says that the sith might make a move soon so we need all the me i can spare here"

"yes sir we under stand how are u going to find him?" askes Kit

"well i have his curnt local and he is nere a arms depo for the clones and it whont be easy getting in and out of there, but i know that the both of u are really steathy"

both Kit and Yom nod slowly.

"well u 2 better get a move on and get threre, may the force be with u"

Both yom and kit walk out the door into the hall way to get to ther shuttel.
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next part in a few

whitedragon

08-01-2002, 10:16 PM

ok yom before you write any further look at your PMs

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 10:48 PM

hay whitedragon I told him to look at them in the chat:D

Darth Talliusc

08-01-2002, 10:51 PM

excellent, kit fisto has joined our list of writers welcome kit fisto (hands him a piece of cake) and not to be a prick or anything but i think its custOdial not custUdial =P. lookin forward to his place in our war.

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 10:57 PM

thanks for the cake and yes I know I miss spelt custodial

Yom

08-01-2002, 11:12 PM

As the 2 of them walk down the hallway they start to chat. "So you are the jedi hunter yom" says kit.

"Yep i was" i am no longet a Bounty Hunter though. now i am just a guy on a black op mission" says Yom. "so who did u kill to get that armor?"

"i dont know who did u u kill for yours?"

the 2 laugh. and continue to the the hanger. hen they get there they Find Camus Sleeping in a chair dressed in his fight suit. Yom walks over and kicks the bottom of his chair. camus wakes witha a jolt. He looka at the 2 men and and says.

"What do u whant? cant u see i was sleeping"

kit stats " well u see we are in a Bla-"

Yom cust him off "we need a ship. we will take the correlion transport. and no questoins asked got it"

"yes sir. i will have my men ready your ship" Camus states. and walks over to the goup of men.

Kit looks a yom and says angerly "Why did u cut me off like that i was talking"

"yes u were and u were about to revial that we were going on a black op mission. the only people that need to know that are me, u, the Admiral, and the guy we are saving. NO ONE EALS! got it!" yom snaps

"yes sir" said kit bitterly

Camus walks back over and says "well the ship is ready for take off. so were u guys heading?"

Kit awnser "no were special."

"well ok then have a good trip and may the force be with u" said camus

Kit says over to Yom " Yom i am doing to take my ship to give u cover i think it would be for afectiv"

"ok that sounds good to me"

they go to there ships and lanch in to the blackness of space.

"Ok Kit we are off to coruscant. when we get there lets keep radio silens untill we are on the ground together. understand?"

"Yeah"

"good here is were we will land"

Both ships fly and go in to hyperspace

Darth Talliusc

08-01-2002, 11:24 PM

any time, but im afraid i must know. why dont you change it if you know its wrong? well anyways, i think its about time for more of my story =) here goes

coruscant:
Darth Talliusc crouched motionlessly on top of one of coruscants many skyscraping buildings, unlike the other almost baloonshaped skyhooks this building was a large rectangle with spikes along the highest floors edge. it had once been a museum of jedi art, where the more artistic jedi displayed their paintings. now it was just another armory in the Emperors capital. the emperor was not in the capital at the moment, he was away holding a convocate of the sith, a convocate that Talliusc had been told not to attend. "no matter" thought Talliusc, "ill get the necessary information from the master, and the full story from Reb when he comes to debrief his assassins". "actually" it occurred to Talliusc, "my spider spy's should still be on station at the grand meeting room. ill simply have to request the transcript through the delta-channel and none of my brethren will know". Talliusc keyed in the requesition through his wrist comm, which relayed the message to his speeder which in turn sent it to an orbiting satellite. the message should be at his suite by the time he returned.

Talliusc had taken to this building more and more recently, its solidity and hard sharp shape set it apart from many of coruscants buildings in this area, it truly stood out among all near it. a fitting place for a man contemplating his destiny. the jedi had escaped him, more importantly he had not been able to rid the galaxy of Obi wan, or that cursed Tyrion. His master would have harsh words and harsher punishments for Talliusc soon, there was no doubt of it. the wind was cool on Talliuscs face and blew his hair back into the depths of his cloak, he had been on this roof ever since he had learned that the jedi escaped him. Memories flooded back to Talliusc, from different times in days past, when life was so much more enchanting. much different from the dismal existence of a sithlord. The darkside was a drug, and Talliusc was addicted, if he needed to kill more jedi to get more of the drug then that is what he would do. there was no alternative. Growing angry at himself for slipping into this cycle he felt the darkside swell up in him, it had to be released soon.
Talliusc strode back to his speeder and drove into the lowest level of coruscant navigable by speeder, parked in an alleyway and initiated the security system. Several blocks down Talliusc saw a group of thugs, 4 rodians 1 quarren 2 gands and a gamorrean. Talliusc could tell by the way they walked that the quarren was the leader. Talliusc walked towards them and he heard one of the rodians laugh to himself "chi panna wee toosje eh hehehe" Talliusc was fluent in many languages, the rodian said that they had more fresh meat for tonight. how wrong he was. as the gang closed in around Talliusc he felt rather then heard one of the rodians swing a durasteel rod at Talliusc skull, using the force he made a shield just milimetres from his cloak and let it absorb the kinetic energy of the strike. "what the? he didnt even flinch" said the gand. "tough guy uh?" said the other gand. as he pulled out a stun stick. he stabbed forward into Talliuscs side, again letting the force fill him Talliusc absorbed the energy storing it.
"your weapon clearly isnt working" replied Talliusc to the assault. finally getting into it the quarren unsheathed a blaster carbine "now give us the goods and we might let you live" smiling to himself Talliusc released all the stored up anger and hatred into a full force explosion.

after the dust cleared Talliusc was on a sort of island in the middle of the road, the ground all around him was several metres lower then it had been and there were charred bones at the bottom, Talliusc studied the bones from his island "mustve been the gammoreans, wouldnt be much left of any of the others" and with a shrug he headed back to his speeder, tonight at least the urge was sated. deactivating the security of his speeder with his wrist watch Talliusc saw something near the driver side door. "heh" chuckled Talliusc "foolish beast tried to take my speeder" pulling back the corpse of the Gran he climbed once more into his speeder and sped home to his suite in the imperial palace.

"lights" said Talliusc as he entered his room. this was a deluxe appartment meant for visiting ambassadors from wealthy planets. it disgusted Talliusc. nothing like his quarters on the Dreadhold. qeuing in his personal code to the computer console he called up the first unread message. "dear god. NO"

edited for spelling and continuity.

Kit fisto JK

08-01-2002, 11:38 PM

what was the message what was the message :D

Darth Talliusc

08-02-2002, 01:31 AM

kit check ur pm's please.

Kit fisto JK

08-02-2002, 01:34 AM

I got the little popup thing :D

Darth Talliusc

08-02-2002, 01:43 AM

ah, thank you muchly. say, where did you get that thing anyways?

Kit fisto JK

08-02-2002, 01:46 AM

what thing???

Darth Talliusc

08-02-2002, 02:04 AM

the little pop-up thing you just mentioned. the one that tells u when u have a PM

Darklighter

08-02-2002, 09:04 AM

Okay guys, lets try to get back to the stories in this thread:D I will post mine as soon as I get up to date on my reading, so it may be a little later:)

Camus

08-02-2002, 03:57 PM

After Yom left the hanger in the Kela Crove Camus started to walk around the hanger over looking the Z-95 training ships when he heard something behind a tool box Camus got closer and over heared someone talking. Camus' started to listen once he heard the voice say, "Yes master the homing becon in on Yoms Corellian freighter." Camus quickly shoved the box back pressing the man upagainst the wall. the voice started to scream.

"What did you do!" Camus screamed at the man

Of course the man said what he was ordered to do. "I put a becon on Yoms ship... They want to take Yom and find out where he is going."

"What is the frequincey?"

"I dont know!"

Several people heard Camus and started to help push the tool box on the man helping camus proswaid the spy. "You dont know you die... You know you might live if your master will allow it." The voice started to scream out numbers. Camus then looked at the chief mechanic. The chief mechanic quickly ran off to Camus' b-wing/e okay take this spy out of here im getting my clone and leaving to help Yom.

Camus ran to the corner of the hanger to a door with a key pad. of course Camus puched in a password and oppend the door to reveal a perfect Camus clone. The glass of the tube that held the clone slid up and out stepped Camus2 the only diffrence between Camus and Camus2 was Camus2 has two black lines on both of his cheeks that run over his cheek bones.

"Good to see you again," said the clone.

"You know I envy you. You get to sit in a tube asleep between missions."

The clone laughed and started to make his way to the b-wing/e. Camus quickly fallowed after his clone. They both walked up to thier slightly customized black skemmed b-wing/e. Camus got into his set as Camus2 got into his. The ground crew waved at Camus and with that simple accnolgement Camus took off.

Mean while

Yom was flying his Corrillian YT-1300 Kela Crove in hyperspace. When suddenly he was pulled out of hyperspace by a Immobilizer 418. Yoms eyes whidden once he saw the Immobilizer 418 and a Victory class star destroyer waiting for him. Yom quickly put it into full throughtle and started to try to manouver around. shortly after being cought suddenly camus' black b-wing/e dropped out of hyperspace blazzing away at the Immobilizer. Camus2's aim was 99% accuat as he shot at the giant gravaty wells. withen minutes the ion cannons had dessabled on gravaty well ennabling the the Kela Crove to manouver alittle bit more. quickly fallowing that the Camus's destroyed the second gravty well. quickly Yom stared a few basic manouvers and distroyed a few ties that stared to come out of the victroy class distroyer. with in 10 minutes of entering the fight the b-wing over whelmmed both distroyers and distroyed the Immobilizer. Once the Immobilizer was distroyed Yom called to Camus, "Would you like to cover my ass alittle more after we leave?" Camus just laughed as both Yom and the Camus's enterd hyperspace on thier way to Coruscant.

Agen

08-02-2002, 04:46 PM

Mr medlomatic will be replying to this soon as whitedragon owuld say :D, i wanna out a twist on the storyline methinks. *goes away thinking for a good idea*

Yom

08-02-2002, 04:59 PM

Kit Drops out of hyperspace and fell that some thing is about go wrong. all of the suden a suadron of tie interceptors drop out od hyperspace coming stait for him.

"oh Crap" he says calmly, "Yom U better get your Arsh here soon" he says a starts to shoot at the flight leader. then he pulls up and then banks to the lef to to get another pass at the ties. he shoots off 4 more shots and hits one of the ties the crossed in to his line of fire. as kit pushes down on the fightstick and finds that he has 6 ties on his 6. "Sh*T i am not going to serive very long like this.

Then out of no were a B-wing Drops out of hyper space. and starts to shoot at the ties on Kit's tail. 4 of then break off and the other 2 were shot due to the suprise.

"This is Camus i am here to help." camus says through the comlink.

"thanx for the help there. but were is Yom" Kit asks as he shoots at tie in front of him. the tie pulls up and turns around to get a head on head pass but be for the tie could get off a shoot kit his him and blows up. kit fly throw the flames.

"he made a quick stop, lets finish these guys off now and talk latter." camus yells through the COm as he is pulling up to shake the Tie that is on his tail. as camus pulls back on the trottel and lets the tie pass him camus 2 shots and geta a direct hit "nice shot there camus 2"

"Thanx camus" as camus2 shoot another shot and hits at a tie that passes in front of him.

Then another Ship comes out of hyper space. its the Kela Crove. as yome takes notise that there is a battle going on. "well boys it is sure nice to see u all agin" he says as he shoots at what is lef to the remaning ties.

well the rest of the ties were no match for the 3 ships so after the battel they head to the next jump point.

"Hey Yom what took so long to get here?" Askes Kit.

"I hade tp stop and get rid of a homing becon" Yom says to kit. "if it was not for Camus and his clone i would of not made it out of there. But the Question is who know that i am aout of retierment?" there was a slight pause. "Camus who was the spy talking to?"

Camus says quckly "i dont know he did not say who he was. Well who could be afread of u coming out of retierment?"

"i gess my former employer but he is long dead. well who ever it is they i know i am coming and it is not good cuz i have not fought with a sith in so long" anoter long silence " ok now in this next jump we are going all together and land and get White and who eals is down there. camus this is the local of the the landing pad and i dont think we will be running in to trubble in the air untill we start to leave so we need to make it fast every one under stand"

"Roger that" camus and his clone gose

"Roger and out" adds kit

"Lets Go!!" yom said as all 3 ships head out in hyper space

*end of part 3*