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Acrylic
08-24-2002, 04:08 PM
:mad:Ridiculous:mad:
What the hell?
You never look at me?
Why?
Can't you see you never watched me grow up?
You never looked me straight in the eye.
What the hell?
Sometimes you even wished we'd all die.
I don't know anyone who like to yell like u.
Dont you know as a little kid, I was always so blue.
But don't feel bad now, no.
Cuz now I can kick an ass or two for this ****.

-THE END-

(c) AcrylicGuitar

***PS. This is not of true life.... I took bits and peices from the lives of others, for the lives of others inspire me more!***

Darth Eggplant
08-24-2002, 04:32 PM
*snaps his fingers in appreciation
and buys AcrylicGuitar a drink.
It's always so good to see
more poets and poetry
at the Blue Casket.
feel free to visit Pocky World
too skeletal dude.

Isis Kaldara
08-24-2002, 05:14 PM
Oh, great poem man! BTW, You're a cutie! Sorry, had to say that, being female and all...

GendoTheGreat
08-24-2002, 08:03 PM
If I were one of those people who "get" things, I would say that it was somewhat random and confusing, yet strangely compelling. But I'm not, so I'll just say it had feeling.

Darth Eggplant
08-25-2002, 01:20 AM
embrace the flake inside of you Gendo
poetry is just stupid sober ramblings
trying desperately to acheive alcoholica.

Acrylic
08-25-2002, 11:51 AM
Originally posted by Isis Kaldara
Oh, great poem man! BTW, You're a cutie! Sorry, had to say that, being female and all...
:) lol. thanks

Acrylic
08-09-2004, 11:31 PM
What the hell was I thinking when I wrote this? :rolleyes:

VampireNaomi
08-10-2004, 04:57 AM
Well, I don't know... It's a nice poem. I'm more a fan of things that rhyme, but I respect anyone who can create something that doesn't. I don't have that skill.

Thrik
08-10-2004, 10:40 AM
Oh man, this thread totally makes me weep,
As much as it tries, it's the opposite of deep.
It's certainly a case of poetry gone bad,
And for thinking of writing it, the author is clearly mad.
This thread really ought to be forgotten forever,
With all memories of it to be resurfaced never.

VampireNaomi
08-10-2004, 12:06 PM
Wow, Thrik! I never thought you had it in you! ;)

Acrylic
08-10-2004, 01:51 PM
Originally posted by Thrik
Oh man, this thread totally makes me weep,
As much as it tries, it's the opposite of deep.
It's certainly a case of poetry gone bad,
And for thinking of writing it, the author is clearly mad.
This thread really ought to be forgotten forever,
With all memories of it to be resurfaced never.

Trust me. This thread makes me weep too...its too...blah, and evil, and I was listening to Eminem before too. I havent listened to him for like a year and a half, so all is good.