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xX-Ender-Xx
10-05-2002, 01:51 PM
Please use this same format:

Name: Caolin
Race: Mandalorian
Special Powers (optional): Jedi Force powers.
Weapons/Supplies: Jetpack, Standard Lazer Weapon, Sniper RX3, Poison Darts.
Accomplace: Caolin goes solo.

Born on the planet of Uinbawk. He was abandoned by his parents and was forced to live life alone. He met an old man. This old guy was no ordinary person, for he was once before a bounty hunter. Caolin has hated jedi all his life so he was interested in this man. He asked to be taught and the old man accepted. Years of training made him what he is today; The best bounty hunter in the galaxy.

I know this should probly be in the RPG section but I was bored and wanted to see what you guys can come up with. So try it out.

wassup
10-05-2002, 06:45 PM
Name: Darth Balar

Race: Unknown

Special Powers: Force Fire (think Force Lightning but with fire shooting out of hands)

Weapons/Supplies: Quad-saber (2 double lightsabers, one in each hand)

Accomplice: None

After the defeat of Desann by the fabled Jedi Knight Kyle Katern, the Imperial Remnant continued its Force-imbueing experiments it started on Kejim (first levels of JKII:JO). Tavion, who fled after her defeat at the hands of Kyle, journeyed to the unknown planet that the Imperial Remnant were doing their hidden experiments on. Soon, they were successful in imbueing an unknown humanoid with incredicle Force powers. Rumors are this unknown being has a midi-chlorian count of 100,000. Tavion took him to the legendary Valley of the Jedi, where the Sith spirits from a battle long forgotten were still trapped. The black warriorstepped into the glowing light that Kyle had stepped into not so long ago to regain his Force powers. Suddenly, the ground began to shake and the earth began to tremble. Dark spirits, by the thousands, began to circle at tremendous speeds around the dark warrior. Fire leapt from the cracks and lava lunged from beneath the planet. The spirits shot into the dark being, imbueing him with tremendous dark powers. Then, as suddenly as it had began, the dark figure dropped to the ground, motionless. Tavion lay dead in a bloody heap of rocks and dust. The dark being began to stir, and slowly got back on his feet. He spoke, in a dark, cold voice:"I am fire, I am flame, I am the burning Darth Balar!" And thus the Sith were reborn...

JediNyt
10-05-2002, 07:56 PM
Wow its gonna take several Jedi together to take that ****er down.:yelhelp:

Darth Vader 421
10-06-2002, 07:59 AM
Name: Sith Master Darth Malice.

Race: Unknown.

Special Powers: Force Lightning, Force Destruction, Force Grip.

Weapon/Supplies: Hypersaber.

Accomplice: Sith Apprentice Darth Arkan (uses double-bladed lightsaber and Force Push).

Raised by his Sith Master, Darth Bane, Darth Malice is the first Sith to take part in the "only two" rule. Using methods of stealth, Malice rose to the post of Sith Master when Bane passed away from very-old-age. A much more agressive Sith Lord, Malice chose an apprentice and decided to take matters into his own hands. Striking out against the Jedi, Malice killed several specific targets, one of which wounded him severely, cutting the front of his face away. Darth Arkan, finding him master, rebuilt him using cybernetic technology. Using state-of-the-art sensor systems, visual aids and speach replacers, Darth Malice could see all life-forms within a massive radius, being able to see attacks coming. Also, using a special eye-piece created by Darth Arkan, who was a master of technology, allowed the Dark Lord to see through walls, people and craft, seeking out Jedi who hid in fear.
Creating his own weapon, Malice created the Hypersaber, a very special variation of the lightsaber. Using a mastery of magnetic fields, the Hypersaber had the ability to de-activate any lightsaber blade it touched, leaving a Jedi defenceless. Also, the Hypersaber was super-powerful, increased by several different crystals and a focus on the Dark Side from Malice himself.
Finally meeting his death, Darth Malice foolishly attacked a Jedi Master named Namar, who was the great-grandfather of present Jedi Master Yoda, and was killed by the powerful Jedi Master. Darth Arkan, finding him master's Hypersaber, continued on the Sith Order, finding himself an apprentice and learning from Darth Malice: lying in wait and allowing the Jedi to prosper.

Sarlacc Food
10-06-2002, 04:06 PM
Originally posted by xX-Ender-Xx
Please use this same format:

Name: Caolin
Race: Mandalorian
Special Powers (optional): Jedi Force powers.
Weapons/Supplies: Jetpack, Standard Lazer Weapon, Sniper RX3, Poison Darts.
Accomplace: Caolin goes solo.

Born on the planet of Uinbawk. He was abandoned by his parents and was forced to live life alone. He met an old man. This old guy was no ordinary person, for he was once before a bounty hunter. Caolin has hated jedi all his life so he was interested in this man. He asked to be taught and the old man accepted. Years of training made him what he is today; The best bounty hunter in the galaxy.

I know this should probly be in the RPG section but I was bored and wanted to see what you guys can come up with. So try it out.


eh... mandalorian aint a race... its just humans...

xX-Ender-Xx
10-07-2002, 01:36 AM
Originally posted by Nuron Serott



eh... mandalorian aint a race... its just humans...

Oops, then how bout race unknown :D

Dang wassup, you tryin to make the ulimate jedi or something? Those are some good thoughts.

AgentSmith
10-07-2002, 08:13 AM
Nice efforts guys! :)

But one thing I will say out of honesty and not malice in any way is what struck me about each character is their lack of -even SW universe related- realism.

Like several qualitative lesser SW EU books where it seemingly is a race to have 'the biggest and most bad-ass superweapon that would surely beat the puny deathstar' you guys each created characters that feel rather unrealistic. Feels to me like you wanted to present your own superhero or supervillan that is so powerful he truly is unstopable and will win over anything and anyone. I don't mean that badly you know, but it sounds so easy you know, not like a flesh and blood 3D character. :(

Darth Vader 421
10-07-2002, 12:11 PM
Sure, I gave Darth Malice the dreaded "Hypersaber", but he was defeated by a Jedi Knight! I didn't try to make Malice the most powerful, the best and indestructable: OK, I gave him a new weapon, but is that so bad? I moaned when I saw Darth Maul use a double-bladed lightsaber in Episode I, saying "They are trying to beat Vader, making Maul an unbeatable super-character.", but it turned out fine in the end, and Maul's character was great. I wasn't trying to be the best... I just find single-bladed, bog-standard, straight-forward lightsabers a tiny bit boring after watching so many characters use them: Maul and Dooku have got the best ideas.

However, the thought of a lightsaber which de-activated other blades is a bit far-fetched... I will admit that...

Darth Vader 421
10-07-2002, 12:14 PM
Oh, and Nuron Serott:

Mandalorians are a race from the planet Mandalore. They created huge armies of soldiers outfitted with similar armour to Jango Fett, but were wiped out in a drastic civil war. Jango is one of the last remaining Mandalorian soldiers.

I got this from an Episode II book. Enough said, I think...

Darth Kaan
10-07-2002, 01:02 PM
The Mandalorians attacked the sith fleet in the Empress Teta system and in a standoff, Ulic Qel Droma challenged Lord Mandalore (leader of the Mandalorian's ) to a duel. The agreement between them was that the losers army was to serve the victors.

Ulic won and the mandalorians became a part of the already vast Sith army. This happened long before EPII.

xX-Ender-Xx
10-07-2002, 07:23 PM
Originally posted by Darth Vader 421
Oh, and Nuron Serott:

Mandalorians are a race from the planet Mandalore. They created huge armies of soldiers outfitted with similar armour to Jango Fett, but were wiped out in a drastic civil war. Jango is one of the last remaining Mandalorian soldiers.

I got this from an Episode II book. Enough said, I think...

Thanks for backing up my character Darth. :D

Oh, and Agent Smith. I'm not trying to be mean, but why don't YOU try creating a character?

wassup
10-07-2002, 11:09 PM
Originally posted by AgentSmith
Nice efforts guys! :)

But one thing I will say out of honesty and not malice in any way is what struck me about each character is their lack of -even SW universe related- realism.

Like several qualitative lesser SW EU books where it seemingly is a race to have 'the biggest and most bad-ass superweapon that would surely beat the puny deathstar' you guys each created characters that feel rather unrealistic. Feels to me like you wanted to present your own superhero or supervillan that is so powerful he truly is unstopable and will win over anything and anyone. I don't mean that badly you know, but it sounds so easy you know, not like a flesh and blood 3D character. :(

i was just trying to make a explanation to the beginnings of JKII:JO single player where we see the imperials doing Force experiments. Yes my character sounds like the ultimate Sith warriot/villian, but I think I will have Kyle kill him off or Kyle and Luke together in an epic battle kill him...

P.S. This would be a nice follow-up/expansion pack to JO in that it would explain the mysterious Force experiments by the Remnant IMHO...then again I'm just crazy...:monkey4:

Darth Vader 421
10-08-2002, 10:07 AM
I think AgentSmith is a bit pissed off, because he can't think of any great character/weapon to beat us (or any existing character/weapon)! Only joking, AgentSmith...

Darth Kaan, no offense, but the Tales of the Jedi books are EU, and I hate EU! I was going by canon, by what was written in the films. But... a nice story, nontheless.

Sarlacc Food
10-09-2002, 06:15 AM
Originally posted by Darth Vader 421
Oh, and Nuron Serott:

Mandalorians are a race from the planet Mandalore. They created huge armies of soldiers outfitted with similar armour to Jango Fett, but were wiped out in a drastic civil war. Jango is one of the last remaining Mandalorian soldiers.

I got this from an Episode II book. Enough said, I think...
WAAAAGH! they arent a race!!! they are a group of bounty hunters... & they are humans!
(i know all about them, man) thrust me

AgentSmith
10-09-2002, 08:13 AM
Originally posted by Darth Vader 421
I think AgentSmith is a bit pissed off, because he can't think of any great character/weapon to beat us (or any existing character/weapon)!

Gee and I tried to be nice about it. :( *Sigh*

I'll be blunt then with you guys and when I read the character posts by xX-Ender-Xx, wassup and Darth Vader 421 I got the impression -mind the language here, I got the 'impression', so that means I might be totally misinterpreting you guys- that you were each trying to outdo the other in some kind of contest in who has the 'biggest most bad ass powerful character'.

Almost like you'd see arguments between peaople the genre of e.g. "Superman is so much more tougher than Spiderman!", "Nah-uh, the Punisher kicks them all."

I didn't mean any harm or insult. If you took any offense I'm sorry ok? :(

Darth Vader 421
10-09-2002, 10:07 AM
Maybe I should have underlined "only joking" in my last post... I was only joking, AgentSmith, and I'm sorry if you got the wrong end of the lightsaber.

Mandalorians are a race, take it from me. I thought I knew everything about Count Dooku before someone told me his first name...

xX-Ender-Xx
10-09-2002, 10:55 PM
you guys are so forgiving :rolleyes: hehe
dang, someone needs to tell me....is Mandalorian a race or not?

Darth Vader 421
10-14-2002, 02:12 PM
MANDALORIANS ARE A RACE OF ARMOUR-CLAD WARRIORS FROM THE PLANET MANDALORE, A DISTANT WORLD DEEP INSIDE THE OUTER RIM TERRATORIES. USING THEIR IMMENSE SKILL, POWER AND WEAPONARY, THEY JOINED ULIC-QEL DROMA IN A MASSIVE BATTLE AGINST THE REPUBLIC, BUT WERE ALL KILLED OR LOST ON A BRUTAL, HARSH UNHAITABLE WORLD. THE FEW SURVIVING MANDALORIANS (AND I MEAN ABOUT THREE) CONTINUED THE RACE IN HIDING UNTIL THE TIME WAS RIGHT TO STRETCH OUT INTO THE GALAXY AGAIN, WHEN TIME HAD FORGOTTEN THEIR DEFEAT. JANGO FETT IS THE LATEST MANDALORIAN TO LEAVE THE OTHERS, BECOMING A FEARSOME BOUNTY HUNTER AND SKILLED WARRIOR.

The rest is common knowledge.

ET Warrior
10-15-2002, 01:24 AM
Name: Tron Koon
Race: Kel Dor
Jedi Powers
Weapon: Lightsaber

Tron Koon is the grandson of the legendary Jedi Master Plo Koon. After the fall of the Empire, Tron emerged from his hiding place on the planet Dorsin, where he was tutored in the ways of the force by his grandfather. He became a loyal guardian of peace and order in the galaxy until the end of his days.

You_Will_Die
10-15-2002, 04:16 AM
All these characters sound really good, but I must agree with whoever said you are all trying to beat each other at creating a "super-character" (apart from your attempt, ET Warrior, that was a bit pathetic). If people at LucasFilm did that when creating new characters like Count Dooku and Jango Fett, Episode II would have been a tacky cash-in on the Star Wars universe. Sorry, Darth Vader 421, but your account of mandalorians coming from mandalore is wrong, too... what a great start to all this (my first post).

ET Warrior
10-16-2002, 01:07 AM
I'm so mistrustful of all folks with less than 10 posts these days....constantly worrying am I that they are simply newer versions of Holo-Sid......hmmmmmm well anywho, my attempt was not to create a super character....i created a cool background bad ass kel dor jedi :D

Qui-Gon Jinn 64
10-17-2002, 03:46 PM
Although my post count is drastically low, I can assure you that this is the first time I have ever entered this forum!

I think the key is to create a character who, by all means, is better, badder and all round more powerful than the last. After all, we would not have Darth Maul, Mace Windu or the Death Star Two (not a character, but you get the drift). Amazingly, I prefer Maul to Vader, Mace to other Jedi Knights, and I think that all the made-up characters in here sound great. Well done!

Qui-Gon Jinn still rules, however, and there should be some way to bring him back in Episode III!

Kyle_KatarnJedi
10-19-2002, 11:09 PM
Name: Coleus Torant
Species: Humanoid
Age: 215
Sex: Male
Affiliation: Jedi
Ocupation: Jedi Master/Council Member


History: Coleus was a young man when he was dicovered by Mace Windu. He was very strong in the force. He was later commisioned as a Jedi Master, not long after his long time freind Qui Gon Jin was killed by Darth Maul. Coleus became very good freinds with Obi Wan Kenobi. After the Death of Mace Windu by (Anakin Skywalker ;)) Darth Vader. Coleus was promoted to the Jedi council. He Lost his Left eye in a battle with Darth Vader. He along with Yoda, Obi Wan and others went into hiding. However, He never let his force powers dwindle. He Meditated every day. When Ben Kenobi was killed By his former padawan. Coleus came out of hiding and began to train some of his own Jedi's. He later joined Luke at the Jedi Acadamey on Yavin 4. He was at the temple during the Attack on the Jedi acadmey by Desann. He later found out that his former padawan (Jo-Kar) had sucumbed to the dark side to become Darth Vokor. He is currently a Member of the New Jedi Council. He is also the only surving Jedi to live and see the Old Republic fade away, the Rise and fall of the Empire, and the Birth of the New Republic.

Pic (http://www.asthedeer.org/Pics/Coleus/shot0050.jpg)

Name: Darth Vokor
Former Name: Lord Jo-Kar of Gallant 6
Status: Alive
Age: 110
Sex: Male
Occupation: Dark Lord of the Sith!
Former Occupation: Jedi Knight
Location: Castle Home on Gallant 6

Darth Vokor was Orinaly a Jedi Knight named Jo-Kar. He was
a Jedi the same time as Anakin Skywalker. He befreinded Anakin, until the Battle of Genosis when his younger Brother To-Mar was killed by Darth Tyrannis. He later found out (while still a Jedi) that Anakin (now Darth Vader) had Killed his only other living reletive. His Mother, in a Raid on a Jedi Outpost. Both of these Events eventually led to his falling to the Dark Side. The Jedi council saw it fit to releve Lord Jo-Kar from being a Jedi Knight. He then returned to his home on Gallant 6. There he stayed for many years. Then a Dark Jedi Named Desann Offerd Jo-Kar the Great
priviage of Killing Anakin's Son Luke Skywalker. Jo-Kar Jouryed to
The Valley of the Jedi with Desann. After Desann's and Tavion's Death by Kyle Katarn. Jo-Kar Became Darth Vokor. And Sweared to Kill Kyle and Luke Skywalker.

Jedi_Monk
10-20-2002, 04:53 PM
Alright... I think it's about time for me to join in on this.

Name: No-No Gi
Species: Myrkian
Age: 400
Sex: Female
Affiliation: Jedi Order
Ocupation: Jedi Master

http://members.aol.com/dannilalfletch/NoNoGi.jpg

Allow me to present... Jedi Master No-No Gi. Though she appears to be no more than an eight-year-old humanoid, she is in fact four hundred years of age--the only evidense of her age is her voice and wisdom. Because of her stature and appearance children find her unintimidating, so that, like Master Yoda, she trains Younglings at the Jedi Temple. But when called for to go into battle, she is a feirce fighter, using both telepathy and her amazing skills with the lightsaber.

I created this character for my cousin. I asked her what name she wanted, and she said "I don't know", so, naturally, I first named her "I don't know", then this evolved, in a few seconds, to "No-No Gi". She hasn't been in any of my fan fictions so far, but I'm coming up with a story for her to star in, now. Her species is basically the Star Wars equivilent of an Elf, and the name of her homeworld is derived from Myrkwood Forest in Tolkien's Lord of the Rings trilogy.

http://members.aol.com/dannilalfletch/Jedi_Monk.jpg

xX-Ender-Xx
10-21-2002, 01:40 AM
wow, thats a good pic. jedi monk, let alone a good character creation too.
Well done man.

AgentSmith
10-23-2002, 02:51 PM
Cool characters there. :)

Nicely done Jedi Monk and KyleKatarnJedi. :thumbsup:

wassup
10-24-2002, 02:16 AM
ah ignore this post im testing my updated profile :p

wassup
10-24-2002, 02:21 AM
ah ignore my post again im testing my profile :rolleyes:

Admiral_Ackbar8
11-01-2002, 09:15 PM
Name: Almtir Icke

Race: Mon Calamari

Special Powers: Photographic memory, jedi mind trick, force speed
Weapons/Supplies: The Sqiud (built ship himself design of B-wing), black lightsaber (never uses), jetpack

Accomplice: His droid named QR-10 (assasion driod/bodyguard)

Occupation: Droid Engineer

havent thought of a bio yet but will.

ZBomber
11-02-2002, 08:17 PM
Originally posted by wassup
ah ignore my post again im testing my profile :rolleyes:

:eyeraise:

right.......

Echuu Shen-Jon
05-11-2003, 09:59 AM
Name: Ghent-Krath Xaretes
Race: Human, Male
Clothes: Traditional Jedi clothes
Special powers: Force Powers, specialized in Force jump and Force push
Weapons/Supplies: Lightsabre (green), Datapad, Blaster,
Vehicle: A ship like the Ebon Hawk
Affliation: New Jedi Order
Accomplice: A Jedi called Kalin Oranth

Ghent-Krath, son of Frenikk Xaretes, was born on Manaan, and raised by his mother, Mirall, while his father traveled around in the Galaxy. Ghent often traveled on some of the small routes, his father had. When he was 6, he met a stranger, who recognized the Force within him. The stranger was Luke Skywalker. Ghent left Manaan, and took with Skywalker to his Jedi academy on Yavin 4! He grew up, and became a Jedi Master. When his father died, Ghent inherits his fathers ship. He traveled around with his Padawan Kalin Oranth, and learned her the ways of the Force, while taking on different missions. Ghent married Euqir Ropanwa, and had a child, Frenikk Xaretes, with her!

Ghent's mother was murdered on Naboo. Ghent left his assignment to, his now Jedi accomplice, Kalin, and went to Naboo, to solve the murder. Eventually he found out, that it was a Sith, Darth Lorink. Luke gave him and Kalin the mission to track this Lorink down, and kill him. But it was too late! The Sith had risen...again!

http://thedanishforce.h4f.dk/elric.jpg

boinga1
05-11-2003, 12:17 PM
Why did you go dig this up?

Lynk Former
05-11-2003, 12:21 PM
as long as it's on topic it's fine I guess...

my name Lynk Former is actually a Star Wars character I made up

Echuu Shen-Jon
05-11-2003, 05:56 PM
Sorry, but do people around here get really mad and upset, when you revive good threads?

wassup
05-11-2003, 08:43 PM
I think we like to forget about the times when we had low(er) post counts and/or points. :p

dark jedi 8
05-12-2003, 12:05 AM
or none in some cases.:)

Lynk Former
05-12-2003, 01:31 AM
Originally posted by Lynk Former
as long as it's on topic it's fine I guess...

I would like to refer you all to my last comment

Echuu Shen-Jon
05-12-2003, 06:08 PM
It means, that it stays open?

boinga1
05-17-2003, 05:59 PM
Yes...and just curious, how did you know abut this thread? Seeing as to how neither you nor i was registered then.

Echuu Shen-Jon
05-18-2003, 09:13 AM
I feel over this, when I searched for a completly other thread, which was in XWAlliance :)