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Darth NeoVenom 12-21-2004 04:24 AM

Rise of the Federation Discussion Thread
I've decided to delete the old RPG so that confusion doesn't occur. Sorry for the lost of posts people (Damn username glow dissappeared :lol: ).'z what the story is going to be about...

"Rise of the Federation

For many years, many people thought that the
Trade Federation no longer exists. Others have
heard rumors that the federation still exists, but
in reality those rumors are true. On Roventa, a
planet not far from Corusant, many Trade Federation
factories are well hidden from the New Republic
and from the public. Both the New Republic and
the Jedi Academy have agreed to send out people
to investigate whether or not the Trade Federation
really exist........"

If anyone has any suggestions to improve it, let me know. Also, when the RPG does start please post all Out of Character comments here. Thankz. People who join can be a bounty hunter, Jedi...any occupation, except Sith. Darth NeoVenom, my character is a Sith Lord. If you want to be his apprentice, let me know. I'm also going to be a Jedi Knight that goes by the name of Zan-Cool Corizen. I think it would be better if people who chose to be a Jedi are Jedi Knights. I would allow at least 3 Jedi Masters.

Here are my characters...

Name : Zoden Xero
Alias: Darth NeoVenom
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Homeworld: Coruscant
Affiliation: Sith

Appearance: 5'11, average weight, light brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin.

Attire: Very similar to what Darth Maul wears and a black Sith robe.

Weapons: Red Double-Bladed Lightsaber and a Red Single-Bladed Lightsaber

Bio: When Zoden was a young boy, he was brought forth to be trained in a Jedi Academy on Yavin. As he grew older, he became a master in using the force. When Zoden became a Jedi Master, he was sent on a mission to investigate strange activity on a planet called Roventa. When he arrived there, he was joined with some rebels and a elite group of people called the "Firebirds". During his journey on Roventa, he found out that the Trade Federation existed on this planet and the the Firebirds were along side with the Trade Federation. The leader of the Firebirds has acknowledged that Zoden and the rebels are starting to "...know too much..." and ordered his crew to kill Zoden and the rebels when they reached the ships. Before reaching the ships, Zoden killed all the members of the Firebirds. He thought to himself after the slaughter he did that he had all this power and needed no one to help him. The rebels were shocked at the action in which Zoden has taken and took out their guns. Before they even had a chance pull the trigger at Zoden, Zoden killed all the rebels and left the planet in search to have more power. Now Zoden Xero is a Sith that goes by the name Darth NeoVenom. He paints black markings underneath both his eyes showing his dedication to the Dark Side. He is capable of using force abilities from both the Light and Dark Side of the force since he is a fallen Jedi master.


Name: Zan-Cool Corizen
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Homeworld: Coruscant
Affiliation: Jedi

Appearance: 5'10, medium weight, black hair, blue eyes, light skin

Attire: Very similar to the attire that Obi-Wan Kenobi has in Star Wars: Episode 1, but instead of being tan, it's blue-greenish and a dark blue Jedi robe.

Weapons: A blue Single-Bladed Lightsaber and a yellow Single-Bladed Lightsaber craft by his father.

Bio: Born and raised on Coruscant, Zan-Cool was send to the Jedi Academy on Yavin 4 by his parents, who are both Jedi. There, he learned how to control and use the force. Now, Zan-Cool Corizen is a Jedi Knight and is in hope of some day to become a Jedi master. He has force abilities of the Light Side of the force. The force ability in which he is extremely good in is Force Speed.


If you decide to join, please stay in the RPG. :) Thankz.

One of my old RPG was going fine with only 3 people. Me and two other people. When a certain amount of people join...I'll make the new thread.

weiderudare 12-21-2004 04:31 AM

Just wanna know if I can use a ex-jedi(loads of them...) at the name of Zamar..his bio is in the "Beginning of the Empire" discussion thread.
If not, i can easily make someone strange up:p

Darth NeoVenom 12-21-2004 04:35 AM

I'll check it out. I think fallen Jedi are not considered Sith, but I'll check him out. It would be easy to copy and paste his bio here. :D

weiderudare 12-21-2004 04:49 AM

Name:Zamar (Alin)Retylinga
Age:36(Looks 40ish)
Armour/Clothes:Ragged, dirty clothes, turban to cover his face
Appearance: 6'1 feet, Zamar stands out of the crowd not only because of his height, but because of the weary, painful look always placed on his face. Thick, untidy darkbrown hair, brown eyes, nearly black, some people would call him handsome if it werent for the fact he was so dirty and, yes, weary
He uses an emerald-green lightsaber if he finds no other way out of the situation.
Bio:Zamar grew up on Tatooine, and was after a local argument, enslaved and used in an experiment to elongate peoples lives. Thanks to his strong connection to the force, he survived it, but it wiped out his memory.
After having been used as an assassin for years, a jedi found him during a mission, and eager to train Zamar, dug into his mind to find the memories from his youth.
Tragic memories, and a life without goals or hopes. Depressed beyond reason.
He was even so trained, since the galaxy needed jedi's, and his potential was vast.
But in the end, Zamar left the path of the jedi as soon as he could, and settled down as a tailor.

There, just give me a go or boo

Darth NeoVenom 12-21-2004 04:51 AM

Sounds interesting... It'z a (drum-roll).......:thmbup1: Alright, a little bit more on the RPG. All of the droids have improved armor. Destroyer Droids are equiped with armor that can resist the Force and can generate shields that could deflect blaster bolts and vibro blades. Improved Destroyer Droids (Elite Droids) can generate shields that can absord just about anything except a lightsaber and obviously a bomb dropped by a ship. Regular and Super battle droids are equip with stronger fire power.

Writer 12-21-2004 07:07 AM

((As promised, here I am;) ))

Name: Alyssa Renolin Solo
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Homeworld: Yavin IV
Affiliation: Jedi

Appearance: 5' 5", 125 pounds, blonde hair, blue eyes, light skin

Attire: Unlike most Jedi, Alyssa does not wear robes. Her clothing is a mixture of black and dark gray and does not restrict any movement.

Weapons: A single burnt orange lightsaber that she built. A single green saber that once belonged to her father. It was taken and given to a clone of Alyssa, but she has since retaken it.

Bio: When she was 15, Alyssa Renolin's parents were killed in what was thought to be an airbus accident on Coruscant. The same day, her brother, Rical was pushed off the lower observation deck of the building they lived in. This left Alyssa entirely alone in the galaxy. She had no family or friends.

That day was a full one for Alyssa. She was kidnapped when she went to the lower observation deck to explore, hoping she might find some explanation to her brother's death. When she awoke, she found that certain things had been done to her.

Her aging had been slowed down extremely and she had the ability to speed herself up to the point in which everything and everyone else appeared to be standing still or moving very slowly. Using these abilities, she escaped from the building she was in and by accident fell into an air taxi.

((This is where the 'Solo' comes in...))

Cheif of State Leia Organa Solo and her husband Han Solo were in the taxi. At first, Han drew his blaster, thinking some crazy kid was attempting to kill his wife, but the misunderstanding was corrected and they took Alyssa back to her home. From there, she was taken to an orphanage, but Leia never forgot her.

During her time in the orphanage, Alyssa was allowed an hour each day to return to her parents' home and go other places, searching for the truth about her parents. During one of these times, she had a brief encounter with Luke Skywalker, who was visiting Leia at the time. He sensed how strong the Force was in her and attempted to follow. She ran from him, thinking he was one of the ones who captured her before.

After eluding Luke, Alyssa discovered that the crash taking the lives of her parents was not an accident. It was planned by the same men who killed her brother and took her captive. They were building an army of Force sensitive children. That day, Alyssa returned to the orphanage much later than her allotted hour and found that somebody was there to adopt her.

It was Han and Leia. Because of her age, they wanted to be sure she wanted them to adopt her. She agreed and they told her that, if she wanted to, she could stay in her old home. She refused this offer, but requested that she might go there whenever she pleased.

Alyssa Renolin Solo lived with Han and Leia until she was sixteen years old. Then, Luke came for another visit. After his visit, Alyssa left Coruscant to be trained as a Jedi by Luke Skywalker. Thus, she followed in the footsteps of her birthparents.

((I know it's long, but a lot of story had to be covered in a little time;) ))

The current story takes place after Alyssa has turned 19. She trained quickly and is now a Jedi Knight.

Darth NeoVenom 12-21-2004 07:34 AM

Glad u can join us wildjedi. :D

Writer 12-21-2004 07:35 AM

Ya, well y'all know I'm one of the best RPers on this place:p

(In other words, I'm glad to be here... :D

Curt-Man 12-21-2004 07:36 AM

Name : Rustic Royal
Alias: Royalty
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Homeworld: Nar Shadaa
Affiliation: Jedi

Appearance: has a 'soft-looking' face with a scar that goes form a bit past his eyebrow down over his eye to a bit past his cheekbone, has blue eyes and dark blonde hair. a medium build with a somehwat musclulaire body

Attire: what mace windu wore.

Weapons: single silver lightsaber and
Bio:grew up ina bad home, mom was a cantina dancer, dad was a salt addict, a bad sabacc player and abusive, brother died in a bar fight and sister had been sold into slavery. one day a visiting jedi stumbled apon Rustic, noticed his force sensitivity, asked his parents if he could take him, his dad didn't care nor did his mom, so from then on Rustic took on the life of a Jedi.

weiderudare 12-21-2004 07:37 AM

Wow, you're also the most modest one we can see:p

Writer 12-21-2004 07:38 AM

If you be speaking to me, shaddup, for I have no needs for such comments:p

Darth NeoVenom 12-21-2004 09:32 AM

You all think we should start the RPG? I think we can do it with four people. Not much confusion will occur. :lol: Oh yeah, one more thing is that everyone can only control one character. People who play as Jedi Padawans can also roleplay as their masters. Make battle scenes realistic and end the action in a way so I could decide what happens. Battle droids can be taken out easily. Super Battle Droids, Destroyer Droids, and Elite Destroyer Droids are difficult to take out. Only people who are involved with the Federation know about the Elite Destroyer Droids. Tell me when all of you are ready. I guess I'll include Darth Chaos, Darth NeoVenom's apprentice. I'll put a picture up of him, cuz it'z kinda hard to describe how he lookz. :lol:

weiderudare 12-21-2004 10:07 AM

I'm ready to go..Even though Zamar is as antihero you can get...:p

Darth NeoVenom 12-21-2004 10:12 AM

Careful how your character acts...:lol:

weiderudare 12-21-2004 10:42 AM

Im more afraid of the way he doesn't act:p

Darth NeoVenom 12-23-2004 04:41 AM

RPG is up. In the first couple of posts, we all can meet up with each other.

Writer 12-23-2004 09:36 AM

Within the first little bit of the RPG, I'm adding a supporting character... Cat, Alyssa's pet. He's big and doesn't like many people, but if Alyssa tells him to leave you alone, he will. Don't worry, she'll tell him to leave you alone:p

weiderudare 12-23-2004 04:52 PM

Well, seems to be going on okay this far...
And I'm not that bad RPer, am I?:p

Cyborgninja 12-23-2004 05:23 PM

race-you should know
Home world-macoular 5
attire-manadolore armor

Darth NeoVenom 12-24-2004 05:25 AM

Welcome to the RPG Cyborgninja. Oh yeah, one more rule people, let everyone post at least once before you post again. This way no one is left behind. :D Today I won't be able to go online cuz I'm heading to a Christmas party at my cousin's house, but tomorrow I'll be able to go online. Thankz for understanding. :)

Darth NeoVenom 12-29-2004 04:31 AM

Sorry for the delay in replying in the RPG. :indif: I was busy in th past couple of dayz.

Darth NeoVenom 01-06-2005 05:08 AM

Here'z the pic of Darth Chaos, Darth NeoVenom's apprentice. :D

Jedi Malastar 01-06-2005 07:44 PM

Hey you guys care if I join, I am really interested in this thread, perhaps more than any other thread. But I was thinking of being on the bad guy side, not a jedi or sith but helping the new trade federation. I also had the idea of bringing back the Czerka Corporation into the mix. They could supply new powerful weapons to the Trade Federation. If you think thats a good idea then my guy will introduce them later in the story.

Name: Bok Trandall
Species: Clawdite or Changling((think Zam Wessel))
Gender: Male
Age: 45
Appearence: In neutral form he just wears a grey looking jumsuit. They have green skin and a skeletal looking face, if you remember from episode two. Ok to start off with he will be in Neimodian form. The one Neovenom was talking to.
Bio: Has been resurfacing an ancient defunct corporation his whole life. Czerka.
Items: His most prized and valuable possesion is his belt. The beltbuckle has a large black pearl. But inside this pearl is a Yslarmi slug. It is kept in suspended animation in the pearl, still alive and stil functional. So force users cannot use the force near him.

I did the Yslarmi belt cuz him being a shapeshifter would be useless with all these jedi anyway.

Darth NeoVenom 01-07-2005 02:56 AM

Yeah, you can join. :) And I like your idea Jedi Malastar. I'm assuming that Darth NeoVenom will know that he's a Clawdite, right?

Jedi Malastar 01-07-2005 12:57 PM

Yah I guess he should know, except nobody else, even his apprentice.

Darth NeoVenom 01-07-2005 03:56 PM

I noticed that you said that Bok noticed that some of the old blaster were being handed to the new and improved battle droids, Jedi Malastar. A quick reference to all, in my third post on this thread, I stated that all droids are equiped with stronger fire power, which means that they have improved blasters. I'm just clarifing things up. (And no...I did not edit it in) :D

Writer 01-10-2005 06:38 AM

Hey NeoVenom... would it be alright with you if I include Alyssa's former master in this? She's a rather interesting character... the fighter Alyssa's using once belonged to her and it might be sort of interesting to slowly reveal the master's past. Maybe include references to some sort of confrontation she and your 'bad' character had once.

Darth NeoVenom 01-10-2005 08:36 AM

Yeah...sure. :D

Writer 01-10-2005 03:48 PM

Name: Riebe Sothe
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: Unknown (appears to be in her early twenties)
Homeworld: Yavin IV
Affiliation: Jedi

Appearance: 5' 2", 115 pounds, black hair, bluish gray eyes, light skin.

Bio: Very little is known about Riebe Sothe. Not even Luke Skywalker knows of her past. When he is asked about her, he merely says, "What can I say? I know very little of her, just that she is older than I... perhaps even much older."

Riebe has been living with the Jedi since Skywalker created the Jedi Academy, but he became acquainted with her when fleeing Tatooine in the company of Ben Kenobi and Han Solo. Kenobi seemed to know more about Riebe than he would admit. Even after his death, Obi-Wan would only tell Luke, "It is for her to tell when she wishes. Treat her well... she is not one you want for an enemy."

Luke took his old mentor's advice and asked Riebe to become an instructor at the Jedi Academy. She agreed and began training her first student, Alyssa Renolin Solo. The two were inseperable from the start and remained so until Alyssa's training was complete. At this time, Riebe gave her personal fighter ship to Alyssa and left Yavin IV in one of the Academy's shuttles. She has been seen only rarely since.

Riebe Sothe is a small woman, but not to be taken lightly. She is very powerful and knows both sides of the Force like the back of her small hand. She has found everyday ways to use the Dark Side powers as well as damaging ways to use Light Side powers.

"Force lightning," she says, "when properly used can do anything from killing to welding to... well, toasting bread! Such power is not always to be used for evil."

She is currently on Coruscant, though not for the same reasons as the other Jedi. She, like many others, is trying to rediscover her past... before what she calls 'the disruption'.

Darth NeoVenom 01-16-2005 03:50 AM

The rpg seems to be progressing fine. The reason I don't post frequently is because I'm waiting for other people to post. I don't want anyone falling behind. :D

weiderudare 01-16-2005 04:02 AM

Well, I come here like all the time on weekends, and at least once a day on weekdays, so I post when I see I can contribute to the thread.. Right now Zamar still want to find the starport, but Mor won't let him go..

Jedi Malastar 01-18-2005 04:47 PM

Curt Man's last post said that he was going to meet with a battle droid. This seemed kinda weird to me cuz it was all spontaneous. I kinda think that the trade federation would want to be kinda discrete about things so I really dont think they would send a battle droid to meet with a jedi. So I'm kinda at a stalemate right now.

Darth NeoVenom 01-18-2005 05:42 PM

That did kinda puzzle will rustic pull that off, Curt-Man?

Darth NeoVenom 01-29-2005 01:39 PM

Curt-Man, I don't know if Jedi could deflect blaster shots with the Force.

Curt-Man 01-29-2005 03:31 PM

point a. the battle droids were stolen

point b. obi wan deflected bolst wiht the force, darth vader did it as well, why can't rustic?

Jedi Malastar 01-29-2005 04:20 PM

Yah I think Jedi's can deflect blaster bolts with the force. They just have to be really good. And I think Darth Vader more so took the blaster bolts like a man with his machine hands than deflected them.

Darth NeoVenom 01-29-2005 08:00 PM

Yeah...I think Darth Vadar blocked the blaster shots with his armor hand. Also, I don't recall Obi-Wan deflecting any blaster shots.

Curt-Man 01-30-2005 11:53 AM

in the clone wars cartoon, when he was facing that cyborg/robot thing and it shot a flurry of laser bolts at him and obi delfected them wiht the force, since he was only wearing gloves.

Jedi Malastar 02-01-2005 03:59 PM

Ok so is the trade federation trying to keep this a secret or not. Because if it was me I would want to keep it secret. Because the republic wouldn't stand around for long if they knew about them.

Darth NeoVenom 02-02-2005 04:08 AM

Yeah...but you know how Sith are, some of them act first. The people in the arena don't know the Trade Federation exists. They think it's part of the show. :D

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