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MtBlanc 01-11-2002 02:26 AM

New Material
Our understated existence
Relies on faith.
The collapse of life:
A fault in belief.

No beacon can pierce
The darkness,
Our existence.
The valleys,
The mountains:
Our struggle is
Our existence.

The black does not mask,
but only perceives.
It is the medium of pain,
It is life.

Yay, 30 second poems are fun.

Metallus 01-11-2002 02:32 AM

*snap snap*

Thanks for the submission. May I pry as to what it's about? What inspired you to write it?

MtBlanc 01-11-2002 02:35 AM

I was inspired to write it because you were complaining about the lack of content.

As for what it's about: I think it's blatantly obvious. Come on Met. ;)

Actually, harshness of life, importance of faith, you know: hackneyed stuff. What else am I to think of in 30 seconds?

Metallus 01-11-2002 02:37 AM

Heh, I have an idea about what it's about. Is there anything else you want to share about it?

Contrary to popular theory, I don't like to hear myself talk all the time.

MtBlanc 01-11-2002 02:42 AM

Not really, except there's an emphasis on blind faith. If you'd like to give your idea a go, I'd be interested to hear if what you think is what I was thinking.

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