Ok, now I step in and say that my major was Art (ubtil recently) so I am free to say your being way to harsh, there are an awful lot of excellent elements contained within this image. Just the line work on the spirally tower thing alone is done very well.
What medium did you use? The back kinda looks like watercolor, but I suppose it could just be marker too.
Just because people think what I say don't make sense, doesn't mean I don't like popsicles.