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Old 01-26-2005, 06:55 AM   #43
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Originally posted by guybroom
Adam heard the call and ran in, he cocked the gun and walked in. He walked slowly and looked at the walls. Strangly bare for someone like Tara. He wondered as he walked. Then he saw a picture. It was of him and Tara.

((maybe a bit of char control comming up - but i don't think so))

They were working closely together before he took over the system. Tara and him were head of creating the system to interact with your brain. That's how Adam knew how to lock people into the system.

Him and Tara were great frineds until he did something that sparked his anger: Told her his feelings. He loved her and now he loved her still but he hated her too. He wants to kill her, but he would hate it if he did. He wanted to tie her up and shoot out her brains, but he would never do it unless he had to.

when he told her, she rejected him, she was going out with Jack and this sparked his revenge with the system. He got Tara and locked her into the early stages of production and he kept Jack out, he kept him prisoner while watching the prduction being done on the war zone.

Adam locked out Jack's brain waves from the game and played god to the innocent people in the system, while he soon went in to find Tara and find out what she felt. She hated him.

He stood there thinking of this for a few moments and then he shot the picture with the gun.

He ran off to find them.

((That's just fine... I like it.))


Jack grinned. "I know where it goes. We'll be crawling for a while, but it leads into the sewer system. From there, we can go anywhere in the city. My reccomendation would be the airport... to find Troezen."


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