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Old 02-23-2005, 11:57 AM   #104
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Originally posted by Curt-Man
Karten saw the jedi enter a building complex, so Karten waited outside in the shadows for them to come out. and so he waited...

after a while they came out, Karten started stalking them once again...

((Maybe edit it to say you barely recognized them... they have changed quite a bit... you recognized the Jedi by their clothes and Zamar by his hair and face.))

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