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Old 03-03-2005, 05:41 AM   #263
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"I can't see anything!" Elaina exclaimed, a hint of panic in her voice.

"Keep calm," Tanara said. "Use the Force. Sense what's going on. Tell me, what do you feel?"

"The attacks aren't exactly nearby," Elaina said slowly. "I don't sense anyone coming this way."

"Deactivate the saber," Tanara said, doing the same with hers. "If they can't see our sabers, they can't find us."

"And we can continue sensing them to make sure they don't come close," Elaina said. Tanara nodded.

"Exactly," she said. "If you think about it, this is a perfect training experience for you. See if you can isolate any one attacker. Tell me what you discover."

"Twins," Elaina said slowly. "Two of them are twins."

"Good," Tanara said. "I hadn't expected you to get anything so fast."

"I always was a fast learner," Elaina grinned.


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