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Old 07-31-2005, 10:32 AM   #247
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When nobody answered him, Jack turned the car on and sped off down the road. He decided to assume that Tara had been taken to the same place they'd been before and sped in that direction. When he got there, they wouldn't let him in... he had no ID on him.

"I'm Jack Robeson," he gasped. "I was with Tara up until Adam kidnapped her."

"And I'm the pope," the guard said. "Robeson's dead. Now, listen. I don't know who you are, but you're not getting in to see Tara Lake, got it?"

"But, I..."

"No."

"But..."

"I said no."

Jack stood there for several seconds, staring at the guard who refused to let him in.

((Would be a great time for Trent to be walking past the main entrance ))


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