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Old 10-06-2005, 04:28 PM   #15
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Yeah, it was pretty good. Though next time I suggest that you pick one format or the other. Here, you would probably have been better off with just the Freeverse, instead of rhyming only every other verse or so. But, yeah it was good!! A cookie for you (lol)

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