Thread: KotOR "0.5"
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Old 11-06-2005, 06:02 AM   #20
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great story, though by sections, do you mean 'chapters' sorry if i sound dumb.
anyway, the concet and story is good, however, like FFWM12 once said, start a new para when a different person speaks, for example check out my fics, i have wriiten them in this format (links in sig) or even FFWM12's fic (link in sig again) same format.

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