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Old 12-13-2005, 12:40 AM   #12
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Go back and reread the second section. While i had written it, the dining hall sequence didn't ring true. I figured it out, and fixed it.
You see, just because you HAVE the force, doesn't mean you need it to FIX something

'To argue with those who have renounced the use and authority of reason is as futile as to administer medicine to the dead.' Now who said that?

From the one who brought you;
What we die for...
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