Great Fic so far RC.
You are a very good writer. You are exceptional at writing out the action as well. I have only been a part of these forums for a week now. I am s enjoying it. I would have to say yours is the 2nd best I have read so far. No offense, but forceflight's Fic is off the charts!! Keep it up. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also I started a fic of my own. I have never written a story before. So could you give me some feedback on my first chapter? It is call, The crystal of life.