Thread: A third path
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Old 02-05-2006, 03:57 AM   #16
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Darth Sun_Tzu
The Universe is whole.
Reality depends on perspective.
Truth comes from knowing this.
Power comes from knowing that you can stike.
Victory is gained by knowing when to strike.
How about this:
The Universe is whole but can be broken.
Reality depends on perspective.
Knowing this is Truth yet Truth is an illusion.
Power comes from knowing you can strike yet power becomes weakness.
Victory is gained by knowing when to strike yet victory becomes defeat.

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Originally Posted by Darth Sun_Tzu
Resolved to die, one can be killed.
Resolved to live, one can be captured.
Quick to anger, one can be goaded.
Pure and honest, one can be shamed.
Loving the people, one can be aggravated
Resolved to die, one can be killed yet still live.
Resolved to live, one can be captured yet set free.
Quick to anger, one can be goaded and yet be assuaged.
Pure and true, one can be shamed yet be honest.
Filled with Love, one can hate yet show compassion.

Your basis was good. I expanded on it a bit and changed some words around. Maybe it could work for this third group idea you proposed for KOTOR 3. I also think that maybe if you combine both "verses" it could sound really cool. The words may have to be tweaked to flow together better. I am often called a poet and writing verse is a hobby thing.Let me know and maybe I could come up with something else.

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