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Old 02-08-2006, 12:51 AM   #21
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@ Darth Sun_Tzu
Originally Posted by Darth Sun_Tzu
Quick to anger, one can be goaded.
Pure and honest, one can be shamed.
I've thought about these two lines some more and I came up with this. It is still giving the same idea but I want to run it by you:

Quick to anger, one can be calmed
Honest and true, one can fall

What do you think?

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