Originally Posted by Pottsie
Great Chapter. I like how you described the training. I didn't think the Jedi had a shooting range.
Can you space your Paragraphs. It makes it easier to read.
I don't know for sure if the Jedi have a shooting range either, but it never hurts to be a well-rounded fighter.
I'll try to space the paragraphs--I wrote it on Word before posting it, and some of the formatting didn't transfer, sigh.
Capturing Jolee's personality is a lot of fun. When I play Kotor, I usually pick him up as quickly as possible just to see what he's going to say in any given situation. The scene on Korriban where you have to 'entertain' the Sith students was hysterical--one of the Sith says something along the lines of "do you know how many Sith there are on this planet?" and Jolee exclaims "Twelve-no, wait, thirteen!" I just died laughing at the way it was said, too. The voice actor for Jolee did a fabulous job bringing his character to life.