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Old 03-03-2006, 02:31 PM   #8
Renegade Puma
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Great story so far Mach. But kind of a funny thing, I found a spelling mistake in our critic's writings.

“Lies!” Sogor picked up the dagger flinging it toward the stone wall. By chance it his point first.

Didn't you mean "By chance it HIT point first."

Anyway, keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.


Some other really awesome Fanfics: Hidden shades of grey By JasraLantill, The Adventures of Jolee Bindo By Jae Onasi[/size]
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