OK, so after some serious feedback from Machiavelli <THANK YOU MAN!> among other people <thank you RTG, JK707.> I have done alot of reveision to CH 1-3. Some parts are radicially diferent and others exactly the same, but I feel this will be a more solid foundation for the folllowing chapters.
If you have the inclination read the fic again and tell me what you think. PLEASE
As for now, I'm going to go work on Ch4.
Hope you enjoy!