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Old 03-06-2006, 03:49 PM   #23
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OK, so after some serious feedback from Machiavelli <THANK YOU MAN!> among other people <thank you RTG, JK707.> I have done alot of reveision to CH 1-3. Some parts are radicially diferent and others exactly the same, but I feel this will be a more solid foundation for the folllowing chapters.

If you have the inclination read the fic again and tell me what you think. PLEASE .
As for now, I'm going to go work on Ch4.


Hope you enjoy!

Fuu


[FIC] A Jedi's Promise

Jae sez: GAL= get a life
Fuu sez: GIG= get a girlfriend
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