It always feels SO nice when someone gives me positive feedback. As for the perspective, I got the Idea from "The Mists of Avalon". For those who havent read it, the novel has three book each written from the perspective of a diffrent woman <3 generations, all related to each other but with diffrent personalities.> Marion Zimmer Bradley handled this exceedingly well, and so I thoulght I would try my hand @ it. I can definitely say that its challenging writing from two diffrent veiwpoints < I've had some trouble writing from the male perspective.> nonetheless I try to make the transition as smooth as possible.
Ive started on Ch 4. The going is kinda slow, but at least I'm starting to put together the totality of it in my mind.
Thanks for the feedback JaeOnasi. If anyone else has comments or suggestions for improvement, PLEASE speak up!
Hey Machiavelli, how about another reveiw?