Great job Mach. I am really, really into this story. I can't wait to see how it all ends. I loved these lines by the way.
“I don’t know. Maybe Hawk or falcon. Something fast! Or maybe Millennium since I‘m going to spend that long for you guys to finish all of the telemetry adjustments.”
“Telemetry is set and rolling.”
“About time!” Darshan took the control wheel in his hands. He snorted to himself. Han! It sounds like someone who can’t spell hand. You’ll never see a Solo with that name.
Very funny, I like your sense of humor there.
Can't wait for the next chapter!