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Old 04-15-2006, 12:39 AM   #89
Jae Onasi
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Originally Posted by cutmeister
And I have to assume that Suli Corona doesn't have much experience with monks of the Jedi Order as his lackeys did such a poor job at disarming Breia. Seems like her captors made quite an oversight when they didn't discover the darts Breia had concealed on her person. Too bad for them, heh-heh-heh.

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I agree, a great story. I can't wait to see the level of destruction the boys create....

Breia could have concealed the darts as hair pins or something equally innocuous appearing. Even chopsticks can be used as a weapon.


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