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Old 05-17-2006, 12:38 AM   #12
Jae Onasi
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Cool chapters.
I'd like to see more battle scene descriptions--what are the death-defying fighter stunts? What do they look and feel like?
Saw that you took a page from Fa Mulan. It's a good story (and animated movie), and works with the other Japanese inspired details, and as always I enjoy all the cultural descriptions.
Poor Obi-wan--is he ever going to figure it all out?

From MST3K's spoof of "Hercules Unchained"--heard as Roman medic soldiers carry off an unconscious Greek Hercules on a 1950's Army green canvas stretcher: "Hi, we're IX-I-I. Did somebody dial IX-I-I?"

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